留学文书详略不当重点模糊(工程类)[精选]

第一篇：留学文书详略不当重点模糊(工程类)[精选]

详略不当重点模糊（工程类）

PERSONAL STATEMENT

By Han Liang

本文原作者是个非常优秀的人才，可他不会包装自己。其自述最大的毛病是没有突出重点。在进行任何有意义的修改前，必须把内容完全重新组织，并在相应的段落开头加上有效的topic sentence。

Acclaimed as a prodigy, I entered into one of China's Ivy League universities at 14 and joined the country's topmost scientific research institution as a graduate student at 19.Now an experienced engineer at 26, I would like to scale still higher intellectual heights by undertaking advanced studies that I hope would put me firmly on the cutting edge of scientific development.（读者可以体会一下这样的起始段落有什么好处。）

I have demonstrated a keen mind since my early childhood.For years, I consistently outperformed all of my classmates in such challenging subjects as mathematics, physics and chemistry.I was thus chosen to represent either my school or my city in a variety of provincial and national contests of academic skills, in which I won numerous prizes.This impressive academic record put me on academic acceleration several times.That not only enabled me to finish my primary and secondary education in eight instead of the usual twelve years but also sent me at 14 to a privileged class for the gifted at the Chinese University of Science and Technology, a major cradle of the country's scientific and technological talents.After two years of basic training in the gifted class, I chose electrical engineering as my major and computer software programming as my minor, convinced that expertise in these fields would stand me in good stead in an era of China's rapid economic expansion and technological modernization.As you can see from the transcripts of my undergraduate grades, I excelled in both of these areas.Upon graduation in 1991, I won easy acceptance into the Institute of Electronics under the Chinese Academy of Sciences and became a graduate student at 19, when most Chinese students would be just starting their university education.At this institute, I narrowed my academic interest down and focused it on the area of human and artificial intelligence, where the courses I took were deliberately concentrated.It seemed to me that scientific breakthroughs would next come in this area, which made it both challenging and promising.I learned a whole lot about this area in the course of doing my thesis titled “The Radio Shunting System in Railroad”, for which some experiments were conducted on the basis of principles of artificial intelligence.My solid education paid off in my ability to take on a variety of responsibilities in China's burgeoning software industry.After I obtained my Master's Degree in Engineering in 1994, I first took up a job with a telecommunication company, where I managed a trunk communication system that resembled the cellular wireless system.A year later, I joined a software company to develop CMIS program for China's Post and Telecommunications Ministry.It was a large project, and I made crucial contribution to it by independently developing and finalizing one subsystem, which proved to be a significant success and won me profuse appreciation from users.After the completion of that project, I have been working for the Japan Brother Ltd.in the area of software development.The relative smooth path of my career notwithstanding, I have not had a chance to lead a major project, although I have always finished my part of every project immaculately.In spite of all my achievements, I feel that I have not taken the full advantages of my intellectual capabilities.I now wish to pursue still more advanced studies and thereby obtain an advanced degree so that I can open more doors and shoulder greater responsibilities.I believe I have acquired the necessary theoretical framework and sufficient practical experience for further studies.My ability to teach myself and conduct independent research allows me to attain competence quickly in areas that I may at first know very little about.I never work just to finish an assignment, but instead I always try conscientiously to improve my knowledge and expertise through the work I do.In this fashion, I have become seasoned in such fields as trunking system(telecommunications)and CMIS system(software).This quality should help me as I seek to further upgrade my education, particularly if I have ready access to the seasoned guidance of a strong faculty and the convenience of state-of-the-art research facilities.The University of Idaho is well known for its excellence in the E.E field, complete with an accomplished faculty and modern research resources.These should set a good stage for me to exercise my keen mental power and diligence.If I am accepted, I am confident that I can make quick progress in the E.E field, especially in the areas of artificial intelligence, image processing, wireless communication, neural network and computer networking, which have many characteristics in common and share many important principles.Due to the broad applications of these technologies, I believe the progress we make in these areas will help shape the future of the mankind.I would like to be at the forefront of such progress.As I am broadly grounded in EE and computer science, you may find me qualified or more qualified for advanced studies in areas other than those I have mentioned.If so, I would greatly appreciate it if you could let me know any suggestions that you may have.I wish to assure you that I have the necessary English language skills to complete advanced studies in your Ph.D.program.I generally read or write English without any difficulty.I have, over the years, not only read academic or professional materials in English avidly but also memorized the whole English-Chinese dictionary.There may be room for improvement in my oral English and English listening comprehension.But I am sure my English proficiency is sufficient for me to undertake advanced studies and research.Besides, I believe I can improve my oral English by leaps and bounds once I start to live in an English-speaking environment.All that I need to do is to set my mind free.I plan to return to China after the completion of my Ph.D.studies either to teach at one of the larger Chinese universities or to lead a high-tech corporation.

第二篇：留学文书(essay)写作模版及重点句型

留学文书（essay）写作模版及重点句型

针对MBA申请中的重点ESSAY文章做的文书用语模板总结。在我两个月前的奖学金申请经验的用语栏目的改进版本。回纳于Business Week, EEC等会员区的美国和加国的顶级商学院录取者的申请文书。涵盖了商学院最常见的重点论题。希看本文可以帮助。

非英语母语的申请者也写出动人流畅的申请文书, 展现自己光辉的一面。在商学院奖学金的申请道路上和大家共勉。

目录

1.职业规划与攻读MBA的动机

1.1 Career Goal and Why MBA

1.2 Plans after Degree

1.3 Why our School

2.职业背景与职业素质

2.1 Professional Background

2.2 Academic Background

2.3 Leadership

2.4 Teamwork and Communication

2.5 Challenges and Lessons Learned

3.学习计划与对MBA Program的贡献

3.1 Study Plans in the Program

3.2 Contribution to Classroom

3.3 Diversity and Other Qualifications

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1.职业规划与选择MBA的原因

1.1 Career Goal and Why MBA

This ______ reveals that while I have a strong background with respect to

leadership and management skill sets, I do not have a ______

knowledge

base in the field of ______.My past successes

have been that result of effective employment of my ______ expertise in ______

and my leadership, management and team building skills.From a ______ expertise or functional knowledge point of view, these experiences

and successes have little or no relation to neither ______ nor ______management.This is a significant problem if I am to realize my career goals.Now that I have identified the major roadblock to realizing my career goals

what do I do next?

I have developed a strong knowledge in the ______ and ______ through my

education and my work experience as a ______.Through this experience, I have also acquired excellent problem solving,integrative, interpersonal, and communication skills.I believe that at this point in my life, these skills will allow me to realise

the maximum educational benefit from the ______ MBA.This combination of scientific experience and business training will help me to

make an informed and influential contribution to ______.I recognize the need to improve in many areas, especially as my responsibilities

require me to combine my both of my ______ and ______ skills and

[interact with functional organizations outside of technical and engineering

development, such as marketing and finance].As I interact with other functional organizations within ______ ,I realize I can better contribute in a collaborative environment if I have a

more thorough understanding of their needs and how these

organizations run.My primary career goal is to ______.Prior to this I will complete an MBA in order to acquire the additionalknowledge and skills necessary in order to be a

successful entrepreneur and businessman.I have chosen to apply to ______ because the strength and quality of both its

overall MBA program and its ______ concentration will provide the knowledge,skill building and team experiences needed to achieve these goals.The prospect of ______ is one of the key elements that attracted me to pursue a

______ combination/major.I look forward to working with other students from diverse academic backgrounds.Managing ______ for a ______ in the short-term, and starting an ______ company

in the long-term.I know what I need to achieve these goals: an MBA.My ideal position would combine the strategic elements of ______, ______ and

______ with the ______ requirements of a ______ role in a creative industry.A key role requiring a wide knowledge base and one that would stretch me to

develop further.

第三篇：工程测量(测绘类 第二版)重点知识点总结

工程测量学是研究地球空间具体集合体测量和抽象几何体测设的理论、方法和技术得一门应用科学。它主要研究在工程与工业建设、城市与国土开发、水路交通环境工程的减灾救灾等事业中 进行地形和有关信息采集与处理 施工放样设备安装 变形监测与分析预报等方面的理论和技术 以及与之有关的信息管理与使用

工程测量是为了工程建设服务的 由于服务对象众多 所以他所包括的内容非常广泛

按照服务对象拉划分其内容可分为 工业与民用建筑工程测量 矿山工程测量 地质勘探工程测量 隧道

工程测量一般可按工程溅射的规划设计，施工建设和运营三个阶段分为：工程勘测，施工测量。安全监测三个部分

工程测量学的主要内容包括：模拟或数字的地形资料的获取与表达;工程控制测量及数据处理建筑物的施工放样；大型精密设备的安装和调试测量；工业产量过程的质量检测和控制；工程变形与工程相关的各种灾害的监测分析与预报；工程测量专用仪器的研制与应用；工程信息系统的建立与应用等。放羊一般采用方向交会法，距离交会法，方向距离交会法，极坐标法。偏角法 偏距法 报点法等。与高程测量相关的倾斜测量（又称挠度曲线测量）可用于确定被测对象在竖直平面内相对的水平或竖直

基准线挠度曲线

最小二乘法广泛应用于测量平差

规划设计阶段测量工作主要内容是 测绘地形图和纵横断面图

施工建设阶段测量工作的主要任务是 按照设计要求在实地准确的标定建筑物部分的平面位置和高程位置，作为施工原装的依据。

测量工作的主要包括 竣工测量以及为监视工程安全状况的变化观测与维护 养护等测量工作

由正方形或矩形的网格组成的建筑场地施工控住王 成为建筑方格网 工程测量分为：建筑工程测量 线路测量 桥梁与隧道测量 矿山测量 城市测量和水利工程测量种类

施工测量方案主要测量工作有 施工控制网建立 施工放样

施工放样的主要内容是 放羊的依据的选择

选择放样的方法 计算放样元素

面积决定控制网等级 每公里变形<2.5cm/km 分类 按用途分为测图控制网 施工（测量）控制网 变形监测网 安装（测量）控制网 按网点的性质 一维网 二维网 三维网

按网形分为 三角网 导线网 混合网 方格网

按实测方法分为 测角网 测边网 边角网 GPS网

按左边和基准分为 附合网 独立网 经典自用网 自由网

按其他基准分为 首级网 加密网 特殊网 专用网

工程控制网的作用 是为了工程建设提供工程范围内的统一参考柜架 为各项测量工作提供位置基准 满足工程建设不同对测绘在质量（精度 可靠性），进度（速度）和费用方面的要求 也具有控制全局 提供基准和测量无擦积累的作用

建网步骤 1 确定控制网等级 2 确定不舍网形式 3 确定测量仪器和操作规程4 在图上学点构网 到实地勘探5埋设标石 标志6外业观测7内页数据处理 8提交成果

二等40000133 精度 四等 40000

三等40000

面控制网的不舍应根据总平面设计和施工地区的地形条件来确定

施工控制网的特点

面积小 使用率高 可越级分布 边长较短典韦精度较高 局部精度高

对测图控住网来说 施工平面感控制网具有以下特点

1控制的范围较小 控制点的密度较大 精度要求较高2使用频繁 3受施工干扰大 4控制网的坐标系与施工坐标系一致 5 投影面与工程的平均高度一致 6有时分两段布网 次级网可能比首级网的精度高

建筑方格网角度为90°到180° 不安长相等平行 面积精度高（2km以内）侧脚两边找高差 图形限制，最远点满足精度要求 所有点都满足

工程控制网的基准分为 约束网（具有多余的已知数据）最小约束网（经典自用网 只有必要的已知数据）无约束网（自用网 务必要的已知数据）标石类型

普通标石 深埋式标石 带强制对中装置的观测墩

施工放样的概念 将图纸设计的建筑物 构筑物的平面位置和搞成按计算要求 以一定的精度是的标定作为施工的依据 成为施工放样 误差要求

1混凝土柱 梁 墙的施工放样误差允许为10到30mm 2 对搞成建筑物的轴线的倾角度要求高于1、1000 3钢结构施工总误差

4土石方施工误差允许到达10cm 5对于特殊要求的工程项目 其设计图纸都明确的限差要求

放样的三要

直接法放样 规划法放样 钢尺放样

1放样依据（施工网）（GPS网 三角网 导线网 方格网）

2放样的方法（搞成放样 角度放样 距离放样 坐标法放样 铅垂线放样）3放样数据

高程放样法 水准仪法 全站仪无仪器法

点位放样

1极坐标法 2全站仪坐标法 3距离交会法 4角度交会法（方向交会）5GPS RTK法（直接坐标）

变形监测定义

是堆监视对象或物体进行测量以确定其空间位置i时间得变化特征

件数拨角放样方法和内容

首先在线路平面设计图上 图解求出个交点左边 然后利用坐标泛酸的方法推算出相邻的两个交点的距离和角度αβ 这些为放映数据 根据初测导线点和放样数据即可按照极坐标放样放噶各点 角度 闭合差为30n 相对闭合差为1/2000 简述竖井用钢尺导入搞成的程序和计算表方法

在井口附近设立已知水准点 在井下预埋蛇1到2个水准点 在井下上 下合适位置假设水准仪 在井上下水准点立水准尺 在井架上面先挂钢尺 起重分划 一端关10公斤的中午 要自由悬挂 井上下同时观测 读取水准尺读数 a b 读取钢尺读数m n 井上下读数取温度计算井下高程

HB=HA+a-(m-n)-b

工程控制网 是工程项目的空间位置残卡片框 是针对某项具体工程建设测图或管理需求在一定区域内的平面和高程控制网 有工程建设委托其他测绘单位建立

在施工控制网测设前，应把这些控制点的建筑坐标换算成测量坐标，以便利用测量坐标控制点来测设出这些施工控制网点。

如图5—4所示，两个坐标系的换算可按下式计算：

Yp= Yo′ +Apsinα+ Bpcosα Xp= Xo′+Apcosα-Bpsinα

建筑坐标与测量坐标的换算-2

式中：Xp、Yp为待求的P点在测量坐标系中的坐标

Xo′、Yo′为已知的0′点测量坐标 Ap、Bp 为已知的P点的建筑坐标

Α 为设计已知0′A轴方位角