如何写雅思写作中的邀请信？

第一篇：如何写雅思写作中的邀请信？

今天上海环球雅思陈斌老师为大家带来的是雅思写作中邀请信的解析。雅思写作中如何写英语邀请信，英文邀请信怎么写比较合适、地道，一直是考生犯愁的事情。下面就一起来看看陈斌老师怎么说吧~

邀请信是在形式上不如请柬那样正规，但也是很考究。形式上大体分为两种:一种为正规的格式(formal correspondence)，亦称请柬;一种是非正式格式(informal correspondence), 即一般的邀请信。

书写时应注意:

邀请信一定要将邀请的时间(年、月、日、钟点)、地点、场合写清楚，不能使接信人存在任何疑虑。

例如:“I’d like you and Bob to come to Luncheon next Friday.”

这句话中所指的是哪个星期五并不明确，所以应加上具体日期, “I’d like you and Bob to come to luncheon next Friday, May the fifth.”

邀请朋友共进午餐 Inviting a friend to informal luncheon

Dear [Zhang Ying]:

Will you come to luncheon on [Friday, May the fifth], at [twelve o’clock]?

My niece [Mary] is visiting us and I think you will enjoy meeting her.She is a charming, very pretty girl „ and very good company![John and Jane] will be here, and perhaps we can [give a dance] after luncheon.Do say you’ll come!

Affectionately yours,Li Ming

亲爱的[张营]:

您能在[5月5日星期五中午12点钟] 来吃午饭吗?

我侄女[玛丽]正在我们家中作客，我想您会乐于见到她的。她是个漂亮而聪明的女孩子，„„同她在一起是很使人高兴的![约翰和简]也到这里来，也许在饭后我们能[开个舞会]，说好，一定得来呀!

第二篇：英语应用文写作汇总--祝贺信及邀请信(中)

祝 贺 信

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1.Introduction 按西方国家的习俗，亲友之间在重大节日要写祝贺信或赠礼物，如圣诞节、新年、婚礼、生日等等。当亲友晋升、考试成功、毕业、乔迁新居、获得工作、新业开张以及获奖等等，也要写祝贺信。

祝贺信要写的及时，得到喜讯后应立即动笔。信中要提到具体的喜事，表达出写信人的喜悦心情，并致以衷心的祝贺。总的来说，这类书信只需寥寥数语，但用词必须亲切有礼，表达出真诚的喜悦。

2.Commonly used Sentences常用句型

1.With very best wishes for a happy New year!2.May you come into a good fortune!3.Wishing you peace, joy and happiness through Christmas and the coming year.4.Best wishes for a happy birthday and a year of good luck, good health and happiness.5.Please accept my gift for your birthday, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.请接受我给你的生日礼物，礼物不在于他本身的价值，而在于它表达了我对你的思念。

6.Best wishes and hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life together.7.May you two always be in love!May happiness increase with age.愿你俩永浴爱河，祝你俩幸福与岁俱增！8.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good heath.谨祝你的新居将为你全家带来鸿运和安康！

9.Congratulations on your success in the national college entrance examination.10.Allow me to offer my heartiest congratulations on your new job.11.I would like to add my congratulations to the many you must be receiving on your promotion.在对你晋升的众多的祝贺中再增加我一份，以表贺意。

12.I am looking forward to your further promotion.13.How happy you must be to have a beautiful new baby girl.14.I wish you many happy returns of the anniversary.May you have long and joyful life.祝你俩享有许多的结婚纪念日。愿你俩白头偕老，生活愉快！15.I am sending along some flowers and fruit with my love and my sincere wish for your speedy recovery.16.How wonderful it is to hear about your baby!May the precious new life you have brought into the world bring you a world of new joys.得知你的小宝宝出生,非常高兴。祝你带给这个世界的新生命给你带来无限的幸福。17.Congratulations on your recent promotion.I know that you will make good in your new job because you thrive on responsibility.祝你荣获提升,你的责任感将为你带来很多的成功!

3.Specimen 样例

Season’s Greetings 祝贺节日 Dear Mr.Hoff, There are many things I’d like to speak of friendship, peace and love.I’d to tell you how much I appreciate knowing you.Perhaps the most meaningful way to say all the things is just to say Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.May Christmas and the New Year be filled with happiness for you and yours.Sincerely yours, David Congratulations on Birthday Dear Franz, Congratulations!From now on, you will be a man.You have reached your 18th birthday!I made this small gift by myself.Please accept it, not for its own value, but for the sake of the thoughts it represents.I feel very sorry that I can’t attend your birthday party.Please believe I am praying for you.May you live a long and joyful life, a life full of all the blessings that this would can bestow.Yours Sincerely, Dunkin Congratulations on Engagement Dear Jeanette, I feel quite pleased when hearing that you and James became engaged yesterday, Congratulations!Your engagement is such happy news.It’s a pleasure to express warm and special wishes for your future happiness.May all your hope and plans turn out the way you want them to.And as you go through life together, may all your dreams come true.yours sincerely, Levins

Wedding Congratulations Dear Jackson, Your wedding card brings to me the happy news of your marriage.I congratulate you and trust that your marriage will be a source of blessing and happiness to you both.Please accept this little present with my congratulations upon your happy wedding.Yours Sincerely, Newby

Congratulations for Changing Residence Dear Li Fang, Congratulate you on your moving into your new residence.You’ve finally got such a nice new house that you’ve always been hoping for.I hope your new dwelling will bring you and your family loads of fortune and good health.Wish you plenty of prosperity and good luck in your new house.Yours truly, Ma Ying Congratulations on Passing University Examination Dear Li Ping, We are very happy to learn that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year and have been admitted into Hunan University with honor.Allow us to offer our most sincere congratulations on this happy occasion.Wish you greater achievement in your college education.Yours Sincerely, Wang Liang

邀 请 信

1.Introduction 邀请信在日常生活和外事活动中使用广泛，一般分为两种：一种为正式邀请（invitation card）；因为其结构非一般信函，在此不作讲述。本章只讲非正式请帖，即邀请信(letters of invitation)。

邀请信形式上不如请帖那样正规，但也很考究。书写时应注意一下两点：（1）邀请信一定要将邀请的时间（年、月、日、钟点）、地点、场合写清楚，不能让收信人有任何的疑虑。例如 “ I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Monday” 这句话中指的是哪个星期并不明确，所以要加上具体日期，“I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Monday, May the fifth at 6 o’clock.P.m., at the Locus Hotel”。

（2）邀请信的特点是简短热情，形式较为灵活，一般为两小段，将意思表达清楚即可。在盛大的场合，请帖应提前三星期发出，一般场合书写邀请信，应在预定时间的前几天发出，一边收信人及早考虑和安排。收到请帖或信后，通常应立即答复，表明接受谢绝，以示礼貌。

2.Commonly Used Sentences 1)I’d like you to come to our dinner this evening.2)Request the pleasure of … 恭请…

3)The favor of a reply is requested.敬赐复函。

4)May I have the honor of your company at dinner? 敬备菲酌，恭请光临。5)Thank you for inviting us to dinner.6)We are delighted to accept your invitation.7)I wish I could be there, but I expect to be away on vacation at that time.8)Please reply to Thirty-five Park Avenue.9)We’ll be awaiting your arrival on the twelfth.10)I hope you are not too busy to come期望你在百忙中光临。11)I’m looking forward to seeing you.12)We thought it would be pleasant to have some of our friends to celebrate it.13)The reception will be held in …, on…招待会定于……在……举行。14)We sincerely hope you can attend.15)We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion.为此我们决定举行一次晚会。

16)Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come and tell me when you will be able to do so.如能来的话，早日告我，何时为宜。17)Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.是否参加，请早日告之。

3.Specimen例文

1.Invitation to a Formal Dinner（宴会）1)A letter of invitation Dear Mrs.Benton, John and I would be very happy if you and Mr.Benton could come to dinner with us on Monday, May the second at six o’clock.We do hope you can Join us.Sincerely yours Ellen Smith

2)A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Mrs.Smith, Thank you for inviting us to dinner on Monday, May the second.We are delighted to accept your invitation.Sincerely yours, Lucie Benton

3)A letter of Declining an Invitation Dear Mrs.Smith, Thank you for inviting us to dinner on Monday, May the second.I wish I could be there, but I regret to inform you that owing to being away on vacation, we shall not be able to come.Sincerely yours, Lucie Benton

2.Invitation to a Wedding Dear Aunt Kate, David and I are to be married at the Community Church(区教堂)on Thursday, June the twelfth, at noon.We want you come to the ceremony, and also to the wedding breakfast(喜宴)afterward at home.We’ll be awaiting your arrival, Aunt Kate, on the twelfth!With love Helen

3.Invitation to a Dance Dear Martha, Next Friday October the first is our national Day, and we thought it would be pleasant to have some of our friends here to celebrate it.Will you and Tom come? We’ll have dancing from seven until twelve.We are all looking forward to seeing you.Students of International business School 4.Invitation to a Reception(招待会）Dear Mr.Hobson, It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at a reception in honor of the Chinese delegation（中国代表团）.The reception will be held in the City Hall, on Tuesday, October the fourth.Cocktails(鸡尾酒会）will be served promptly at six to be followed by dinner at eight.We sincerely hope you can attend.Let us know as soon as possible if you can come.Sincerely Li He

5.Invitation to an Export Commodities fair(出口商品交易会)Dear Sirs, This is to advise that we are going to hold an Export Commodities fair in Shanghai from May 1st to May 15th,1999.A great variety of samples(品种繁多的样品), newly designed by our manufacturers, will be on exhibition.We take pleasure in inviting you to the Fair.Please cable（电告）the date of your arrival, enabling us to make the necessary preparations.Yours faithfully

6.Invitation to an Anniversary Celebration of the founding of a School(校庆)Dear prof.Smith, On Monday, September the tenth all the faculty members of Hu Nan University will celebrate the Seventieth Anniversary of the School Founding.We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion.The place is Teachers’ Reception Hall(教师会客厅), and the time is Friday evening, September the tenth, at six o’clock.Come and bring your wife or other guest.We look forward to seeing you.In order to make proper reservations, will you send your acceptance to the attention of Professor Chen no later than a week before that day.(为了便于安排，务请您与宴会举行一周以前将您的接受邀请的回执寄到陈教授处。)

Cordially,（您真诚的)Wang Hua

7.Invitation to Giving Lectures(邀请来校讲学)1)A letter of invitation Dear Prof.Green, I was told by our mutual friend Mr.Wilson that you would visit China next month this year.May I take the opportunity to invite you to come to our college to give the students of our English Department some lectures on “Modern American Literature”? Please let me know as soon as possible if you can come and tell me when you will be able to do so.With warm personal regards, I am,(我个人谨向您致以热烈的问候。)Your sincerely, Yan Hai

2）A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Prof.Yang, I accept with pleasure your kind invitation to come to your college and give some lectures on “Modern American Literature” to the students of your English Department.I shall arrive at Changsha on 12th October, and will stay at your college for two weeks, giving lectures 3 times a week.I’m looking forward to meeting you and your students.Best wishes.Yours sincerely, Green

8.Invitation to Attending the Academic conference(学术会议)1)A letter of invitation Dear Professor Parley, It would give us great pleasure to have your presence at a meeting of English language teaching scheduled for September the sixth,1998 at the English Department of Beijing University.Your thinking on the subject would contribute greatly to the success of the conference.Do let us know if you can make it.Cordially,(您诚挚的)Xia Kai 2）A letter of Accepting an Invitation Dear Professor Xia, Thank you very much for your invitation to join the meeting of English language teaching at Department of Beijing University on September the sixth, 1998.I will be happy to be there at two o’clock that afternoon to take part in the meeting, and look forward to it with pleasure.Cordially, William Parley

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第三篇：写作练习-邀请信

写作练习---如何写邀请信

邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约。邀请信分为正式邀请信和非正式邀请信。非正式邀请用词比较随便；正式邀请信则是向收信人发出正式邀请，用语和格式均比较规范、严谨。

邀请信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：发出邀请；说明邀请对方做什么事；说明活动时间和地点；表达期待或感谢之情。一 文章结构

1.（自我介绍）活动名称+发出邀请

2.活动具体内容和安排

3.参加活动能给受邀人（邀请人）带来的好处

4.表明期待以及联系方式 Tips: 信中要说明关于活动的详细信息，包括活动时间、地点、内容，有时需要说明参加活动的人员。语气要热情真挚，但不要强人所难。

二 万能句型

邀请信开头及中间部分常用句式

The...will be held on....The activity is in honor of....You can also bring...together with you.May I have the honor of your accompany at dinner? We sincerely/ faithfully hope you can attend...You will be my most respected guest to come to...I wonder if there is any chance for your to come to…

I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to attend...It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you.There are also arrangements for … which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy.邀请信结尾常用句式

I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your decision.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Please let me know soon if you decide to come.I shall be much obliged by a reply at your convenience.I would feel honored if you could come to...I am looking forward to your participation in...I really hope you can make it.We sincerely hope that you can make it.We would be honored to have you there with us.We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.The honor of your presence is requested.三 模板

示例一：

Dear________，There will a ________________(内容)at/in________________(地点)on___________(时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间).This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排).At around______(时间)_________________(另一个安排)

I really hope you can make it before ____________(通知你的最后期限)

Yours sincerely

Li Ming 示例二：

Dear_____________ ，①_____________(开门见山提出事件/活动、地点、时间).②It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.③During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.④First, ___________(要举行的活动内容一).⑤Second, ________(要举行的活动内容二).⑥I know/believe that you will be very interested in_____________.⑦For one thing, _____________(受邀请人参加的理由一).⑧For another, _____________(受邀请人参加的理由二).⑨The conference/party would not be complete without you!

⑩The party/conference will begin at 时间and we do hope you can come.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

范例：（2015全国卷II）

假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

1.出发及返回时间；

2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

注意：

1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结语已为你写好。

【写作步骤】

一． 根据题目要求以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：

第一段：问候+自我介绍+写信背景(去敬老院)+写信目的(邀请同去)

第二段：主题句+拓展句1(出发及返回时间)+拓展句2(活动，such as……)

第三段：我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你会喜欢这个活动)。感谢你(读我的信)。

请回信(告诉我你的决定)。二． 完成初稿

三． 纠错及润色（重点检查写作要点、时态语态、人称、格式等）四． 定稿、誊抄【参考答案】

Dear Lucy，I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明邀请Lucy去参加的活动和时间等。写作时注意以下几点：

1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：邀请、时间、具体活动。

2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。

3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。

4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。

PracticeI 假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛，希望附近某大学外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

英语演讲比赛

主题：人与自然

时间：6月15日下午2：00-5：00

地点：501教室

参赛选手：10名学生

联系人：李华（电话：44876655）Dear Ms.Smith，I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 on the afternoon of June 15.What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.My telephone number is 44876655.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes，Yours，Li Hua

PracticesII 1.假如你叫李华, 你所在的学校拟在下个月举办美国电影节（American Film Festival)。请你根据以下要点给你的美国朋友Peter 写一封短信，邀请他给学生做一次讲座。信的主要内容包括：

1.讲座目的： 使学生对美国电影有所了解； 2.讲座内容： 简要介绍美国电影业的历史； 3.讲座时间：1小时30分钟左右

注意：1.可适当增加细节，使结构完整；

2.词数150左右。

Dear Peter，Our school is planning to hold an American Film Festival next month．I'm writing to ask you to come and give a talk on American films and filmmaking industry．It will help us understand how the industry has developed into big business as it is today．This understanding should go a long way toward increasing their knowledge of American culture in general．Do you think one and a half hours will be enough?Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements．

I'm looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk．

With best wishes!

Yours，Li Hua

第四篇：雅思写作中如何表达观点

今天上海环球雅思老师窦攀美为大家带来了雅思写作中如何表达观点的讲解。

Expressing Thoughts and Opinions in Task-2 Essays

在雅思议论文中经常被Native Speakers 用来表达看法与立场的英式短语&句型

在准备雅思考试的学习者们往往更加重视对于单个单词(individual words)的积累与使用，但是普遍并不重视对英语短语(phrases), 句型(sentence patterns)和固定搭配(collocations)的掌握与探究。以下短语和句型的表达会给考生的议论文带来两点的一笔。

lHave mixed views on…（人们）各持不同的看法

例句：It has around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.它在雅思考试中的常见反义短语和句型

Reach consensus on …(人们)对某事达成一致意见

例句:It will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.lbe a highly charged issue 是一个引起激辩的话题

Euthanasia(安乐死)is a highly charged issue in many European countries.它在雅思考试中的常见反义短语和句型

be a well-established fact(某事)是为人们所共知的事实

例句:It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.lThe tide of opinion is now running steadily against …目前的观点普遍倾向于反对… 例句: The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.它在雅思考试中的常见近义词短语和句型

The majority of people oppose…多数人反对…

例句:The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.lIt stands to reason that…（某现象）是符合常理的例句：It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticized will grow up to have no self-confidence.它在雅思考试中的常见近义词短语和句型

The concerns that …are well-justified.对于某事的担心是完全合理的例句：The concerns that the new law will curtail NGO activities are well-justified.

第五篇：雅思写作

翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。

一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说

盲点1：无话可说

这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。

盲点1击破：四多原则

多看范文；多关注时事，观察生活；多与人交流；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中，分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，如果某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。

盲点2：千言万语

这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。

盲点2击破：词以类记原则

此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲点3：标新立异

这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求与众不同。

盲点3击破：自圆其说原则

雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据

言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。

盲点4：真情流露

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝”之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。

盲点4击破：切中主题原则

这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架，并严格执行。如在写argumentation类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。

二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水

盲点1：天马行空

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或冲突。

盲点1击破：起承转合原则

除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。”的逻辑框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that „(起);because they maintain that „。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact „.。(转);Therefore , I believe „。(合)

盲点2：单句游离

这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，逻辑连词也使用错误。或者是标点不注意。最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却无数次被误解成递进。

盲点2击破：行云流水原则

考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词，力求做到行云流水，常见的逻辑连词有：

因果关系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

举例关系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放

盲点1 ： 遭遇生词

大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。

盲点1击破：同义改写原则

其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则，毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。

盲点2：同义重现

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳，分数自然不高。

盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则

其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲点3：大词连篇

很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。

盲点3击破：整体协调原则

看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现，考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数，真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击，最后只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。

三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致

盲点1：长篇累牍

和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。

盲点1击破：长短结合原则

事实上，如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。

盲点2：短小精悍

和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。

盲点2击破：灵活多变原则

这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability这个简单句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通过插入语的包装我们可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通过如此灵活的加工和包装，你会发现，简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。

总之，掌握了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。（编