第一篇:中考英语作文的帮助与提高
1.关于学习英语的话题:
复习要点 Learn English 请你以“How to learn English well?”写份演讲稿80字左右.范文:Dear classmates:
We have been learning English for over 6
years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember“Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!
2.卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。
保持健康的重要性
保持健康的方法
保持健康的结论
(你的看法?)
1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯
(你的看法?)
How to stay our health /fit?
范文1: Dear boys and grils :
I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool studentfirst you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Nextkeep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank youbye!
范文2:Dear boys and girls:
I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?Today many teenagers are unhealthybecause they do less exercise eat more junk foodisn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fitwe must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李华,你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。
提示:
70%的学生
30%的学生
应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长
锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳
锻炼能增强体质,保持健康
锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习
锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好
锻炼中可能会受伤
要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear classmates:
I’m Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕环境问题影响着人们的工作学习生活等而我们的工作生活生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3.大气污染严重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。
范文: How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously tod
ay.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is
increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less„etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We should n’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We mus plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.关于“人口问题 POPULATION ”
6.关于中学生使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法(见2008年初中毕业写作专题复习)。范文:略
7.介绍自己的兴趣余爱好(单元四)。
8.春节习俗与计划,如何过2009年的春节,假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。
The spring Festival
Dear Jhon :
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(团聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”
I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friengs.I ’m going to Diseyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessinos do exercise every day help the old and ch
ildren.Wellcom to China.Waiting for your e-mail Yours
Lingling
注意:要求要理解背下,能默写它们!
Happy new year to everyone!
(Mr Yin 2008.12 30)
(从健康饮食,卫生习惯,加强锻炼等方面:以“How to keep healthy ?”写一篇 80 字左右的作文)
Health is very important to people.Our health depends on our eating and living habits.In my opinion the kinds of food that we eat are really important so we should be careful while choosing our food.We should eat neither too much sugar chocolate candy or cakes nor junk food like food from KFC or McDonald.Fresh vegetables fruit some meat rice ad noodles are healthy food.Second we should form good eating habits.Three regular meals a day are necessary.We should only eat when we are hungry.Never eat between meals or eat too much at a time./at a meal.Drinking enough water every day and taking enough exercise are needed too.
第二篇:提高中考英语作文复习
中考英语作文复习:怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文?
一、写作要点:
“一审”即审题。“二写”即列纲。“三连”即连句成文。“四改”即修改润色全文。审题:做到三审:
体裁看清楚题目要求,读懂题目所表达的含义,抓住要点,注意文体是什么 时态、人称如果是日记和故事,宜采用过去时态;介之类的,宜采用现在时态。列纲:做到三思
词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲,考虑所要选用的单词、词组、句型,要能根据自己的英语水平,尽量扬长避短,避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时,就用同(近)义词或同义句代替,不要使用没有把握的词句,并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合,语言要地道。
连句成文
根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的 句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。但要注意句式的灵活运用,长、短句,简单句,复合句要搭配运用。
文章分3段:
综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题; 正文——主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话; 结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。
修改润色全文做到三查
要点、拼写、语法是否连贯:
看全文符不符合题目要求,行文是否流畅,有没有遗漏要点;语法是不是正确,包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词等。
开头用语:
这几年的南宁中考题开头语大都给出,可以略记。但能住最好了。目前请大家先背《决胜新中考作文手册》P18后的描写文和应用文的范文(先读熟,理解其大意,然后再自己默写出来哟!!)。
关于上下文衔接连贯句子用词的问题:
1)表层次
first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly, what is more, last, also, and then, next,besides,At first;at last;in the end…finallythen/next/after that…
On one hand....on the other hand,when/while/as soon as/not… until…
2)表转折;but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of,fortunately,unfortunately,at the same time…
3)表递近: besides,what`s more
4)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, since, owing to, as a result(of),5)例证 for example,such as
6)表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.;be harmful to sb.;do harm to sb.;… affect;have
an effect on sb.;
7)表示喜爱的:love/like/enjoy…;be fond of…;be interested in…;show great interest in…;lose oneself in…;put one’s heart into…;
8)总结 As I see, As for me,As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact ,in a word,in short,.....二、各类作文常用框架(这里仅作参考,同学们可以多背优秀范文)
1、话题作文,演讲采用:总-分-总
It’s adj for us to…..On the one hand,…On the other hand,…
What’s more,…
In a word,/In short,….2、写信,建议用: 总-分-总
I’m adj to hear that you… Here is some advice for you.Firstly,….Secondly,….Finally,….In a word,…If you…, you will…
习作点评 :
请给一家学校杂志写一篇文章,告诉读者你的其中一个爱好的情况: 要点:
1、你的爱好是什么?
2、你的爱好的时间、你是怎么对这个爱好感兴趣的;
3、爱好的原因;
4、未来你的希望和计划。
写作要求:
1.根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
2.条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。3.词数60-80.[学生习作A]
My hobby is read books.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like reading books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books.Books also can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.错点:①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
[点评]:档次5-6分。
①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述问题。③有少量错误。
[学生习作B]
I always felt they weren’t enough.interesting things all over the world.I read books, I can enjoy the beautiful I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the①开门见山、点题。
②真情流露,理由充分。
③文中下划线连词使用得恰当,使文章过渡自然、④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
[点评]:档次9-10分。
①清楚表达写作目的,要点齐全。
②语言表达灵活多样,字里行间流露出真情实感,文章有感染力。
③恰当使用连词和从句,语言流畅,且无错误,是一 篇高质量的作文。
高分突破
①文体:记叙文。
②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。
三、提高写作的方法
1、造句(平时多练习用词造句)
2、摘录好句(平时背范文)、积累名言谚语(能用名言的地方可巧用,给文章增色)附一些谚语:
有关学习的:
A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于晨。
Doing is better than saying.与其挂在嘴上,不如落实在行动上。
Every minute counts.分秒必争。
Easier said than done.说得容易,做得难。
Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。
It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。
Never say die.永不言败。
No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。
Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事,只怕有心人。
Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
有关健康的:
An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,不用请医生。
Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。
Health is better than wealth.健康胜过财富。
Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。
3、句型转换,句式多样性如:
Tom is a student.He is 16 years old.He likes running
Tom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.4.多使用短语如:
I got up quickly.I got up as quickly as possible.He studies English well.He is good at English.He does well in English.5、学会扩写如:
The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.文章连贯、衔接上下文练习:
In my life, I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.she does housework and works hard in the factory.I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.I am ill, she looks after me carefully.I will thank my mother for giving me life.I willthank her for helping me.I love my mother very much.使用衔接词以后看看读起来是不是好很多了???
In my life, I will thank my mother forever.My mother is busy everyday.(But)she does housework and works hard in the factory.(When)I am in trouble, she always encourages me to overcome difficulties.(When)I am ill, she looks after me carefully.(In a word), I will(not only)thank my mother for giving me life,(but also)thank her for helping me.(So)I love my mother very much.四、卷面、书写要注意!!
建议平时作业要书写规范,有可能还可以专门练习书写哟,很多示范学校中考前的最后一个月都练习书法的,显然书写的重要性不能忽略。
第三篇:与帮助他人有关的英语作文
英语范文
作文题:1.为什么帮助别人,什么时候? 2.如何帮助别人?列举3件具体的的事例。如帮助医院里的孩子,清洁街道等等。3.字数80次左右
第四篇:中考英语作文辅导与
初中英语写作:
10字原则:结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。这种结构十分清晰:“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山。第二段:分2-3点说明论点,各论点里举出详细例子。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等要点:因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
开头经典句子
1.不用说…… It goes without saying that …
= It is obvious that ….2.在各种……之中,…… Among various kinds of …, … /= Of all the …, …
3.就我的看法……;我认为……In my opinion, …
= To my mind, ….= As far as I am concerned, …
= I am of the opinion that ….4.随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population, …
随着科技的进步…… With the advance of science and technology, …
5.……是必要的 It is necessary(for sb.)to do / that …
…… 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb.)to do / that …
…… 是适当的 It is proper(for sb.)to do / that …
……是紧急的 It is urgent(for sb.)to do / that …
6.状语从句
A)如果你不……,你就会…… If you don’t..., you’ll...B)如此 ……,以至于…… so … that …
C)每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …, I cannot but feel excited.每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤。Whenever I do …, I cannot but feel sad.每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of …, I cannot but feel nervous.每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with …, I cannot but feel frightened.每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see …, I cannot but feel surprised.7.宾语从句
我认为,…… / 我认为……不 I think / I don’t think that …
我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …
8.Since +过去式, 现在完成式.9.It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
10..… so … that … 如此… 以至于…
… too … to do 太… 而不能…
such … that … 如此… 以至于…
11.not…until… 直到…才…
12.The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
13.It is said that + 句子据说…
It is reported that + 句子据报道…
14.There is no doubt that + 句子毫无疑问…
15.There is no need to do没必要做…
16.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
17.It is my great pleasure to hear from you 很荣幸接到你的来信(回信开头句)
18.It is highly suggested that you should(not)… 我觉得你应该…..19.some people(think, believe)……while others(think, believe)一些人(认为)…而另一些人(认为)
20.…draw public attention/arouse wide public concern 引起广泛关注
(Aroused)a heated discussion 引起热烈的讨论
21.As an old saying goes 正如一句老话说的…
As the proverb goes 正如谚语所说…
22.Views on …vary from person to person 对于…的观点因人而异
23.We ' re often told that......But is this really the case ?
24.People used to......however , things are quite different today.过去,人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
25.some people think that......Others believe that the opposite is true.There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that......一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......26.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。
27.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.28.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______.Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.29.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为
糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second,____.What makes things worse is that______.30.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides,______.31.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.32.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______.To them,_____.33.…已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young andheated debates are right on their way.34…在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it hasbrought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well
35.人类正面临着一个严重的问题…,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.36.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…。很显然…,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that()while.Obviously,______,but why?
37.“如今,人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。
Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that...38.“如同硬币的正反面,...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。
Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to...39.“近来,...的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”
Currently, the issue of...has been brought to public attention.40.“随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
Along with the rapid growth of...,...has become increasingly important in our daily life.41.“由汽车(或xx)引起的空气和噪音污染对我们的健康造成了危害。”
Air pollution and noise pollution caused by automobiles do harm to our health.42.We ' re often told that......But is this really the case ?
我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?
43..People used to......however , things are quite different today.过去,人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
第五篇:初中生如何提高中考英语作文不是个难题
标题:初中生如何提高中考英语作文不是个难题
关键词:如何提高中考英语作文
导读:现在好像有很多同学都对英语作文有恐惧感,不少人都问如何提高中考英语作文才好,其实我认为这个问题是很好解决的。我们下面就为大家提供了一些成语素材,都是要记忆的。
1.大开眼界 open one's eyes;broaden one's horizon;be an eye-opener
2.国泰民安 The country flourishes and people live in peace
3.过犹不及 going too far is as bad as not going far enough;beyond is as wrong as falling short;too much is as bad as too little
4.功夫不负有心人 Everything comes to him who waits.5.好了伤疤忘了疼 once on shore, one prays no more
6.好事不出门恶事传千里 Good news never goes beyond the gate, while bad news spread far and wide.7.和气生财 Harmony brings wealth.8.活到老学到老 One is never too old to learn.9.既往不咎 let bygones be bygones
10.金无足赤人无完人 Gold can't be pure and man can't be perfect.11.金玉满堂 Treasures fill the home.12.脚踏实地 be down-to-earth
13.脚踩两只船 sit on the fence
14.君子之交淡如水 the friendship between gentlemen is as pure as crystal;a hedge between keeps friendship green
15.老生常谈 cut and dried
16.礼尚往来 Courtesy calls for reciprocity.17.留得青山在不怕没柴烧 Where there is life, there is hope.更多学习资料请见美联英语学习网。