雅思写作之新旧建筑[5篇材料]

第一篇：雅思写作之新旧建筑

上海环球雅思写作老师为大家带来雅思写作范文之新旧建筑，大家一起看看提高写作水平。

原题再现：

Do you think old buildings should be broken down, and give place for modern buildings.How are the old buildings important in our society?

范文：

With the rapid development of urbanization, many people advocate the demolition of old houses for the benefit of economic and social development.But others argue that we can’t ruin the traditional cultural heritage.Personally, I side with the former opinion.In the first place, the existence of old houses is an obstacle to modern urbanization by damaging the image of the city.If they are replaced with modern skyscrapers, the city will take on a new look.Take the Summer Palace in Beijing for example, Being government has demolished a large number of run-down the Summer Palace and constructed many new housing buildings instead.In the second place, there is a potential danger to people living in old houses or even passers-by.If the houses are old enough to collapse in the end, where does the value of culture or tourism exist? The tourists surely will not travel a long distance to see these so-called “culture heritage” at the risk of their lives.[More:]

In the third place, replacing old houses with buildings can help to solve housing problems.It is well-known that China is a densely-populated country and people in urban areas only have little housing space.Undoubtedly, replacing old houses with new buildings is a good way to solve the problem.As mentioned above, I can draw a conclusion safely: It is irresistible to replace old houses with modern buildings.At the same time, it is necessary for us to restore a limited number of old houses for the sake of conserving traditional culture and attracting tourists.

第二篇：雅思写作之 名人名言

It is never too late to learn.活到老，学到老

Misfortunes tell us what fortune is.不经灾难不知福

Storms make trees take deeper roots.风暴使树木深深扎根。

Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.只要有一颗意志坚强的心，没事不成Work makes the workman.勤工出巧匠

You have to believe in yourself.That's the secret of success.人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀

Money is a good servant and a bad master.金钱是善仆，也是恶主

Happy is the man who is living by his hobby.醉心于某种癖好的人是幸福的。

Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be.对于大多数人来说，他们认定自己有多幸福，就有多幸福

If you don't learn to think when you are young, you may never learn.如果你年轻时就没有学会思考，那么就永远学不会思考

It is no use doing what you like;you have got to like what you do.不能爱哪行才干哪行，要干哪行爱哪行

Work banishes those three great evils : boredom , vice, and poverty.工作撵跑三个魔鬼：无聊、堕落和贫穷

The decline of literature indicates the decline of a nation;the two keep in their downward tendency.文学的衰落表明一个民族的衰落。这两者走下坡路的时间是齐头并进的 Saying and doing are two different things.说和做是迥然不同的两回事

Actions speak louder than words.行动比语言更响亮

From small beginnings comes great things.伟大始于渺小

It takes all sorts to make a world.世界是由各种不同的人所组成的

第三篇：南昌雅思培训之写作

雅思话题作文范文：改善环境质量

以下是南昌中国雅思为大家搜索整理的有关雅思写作范文改善环境质量相关信息介绍，雅思写作多少会涉及一些改善环境质量方面的考题，所以一下雅思写作范文考生可以借鉴里面的短语、句子或思路，给自己的写作找一些思路和灵感。

写作题目

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big company can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the public’s wills and behaviors have critical influence on government’s policies and companies’ strategies.For example, if everyone says “no” to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, governments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the public’s consuming habits.But they also need every citizen’s appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protecting the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.以上即是雅思写作范文改善环境质量话题介绍，大家在备考雅思写作时可以结合以上提到的内容进行练习，俗话说熟能生巧，考生朋友们加油!

第四篇：雅思写作话题之教育类

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分析：雅思写作话题之教育类

教育类

1.教育的内容，功能和作用

母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies.What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?（050312）

解题：只要说明教育的几个主要的组成部分（德智体美劳）及它们在对个人发展和整个社会的发展中起到怎样的作用即可，三个足矣，比如说教育应该包括智力教育：教授理论知识和技能（培养独立思考、创造性思考、分析和解决问题的能力，提高人际交流技巧，社会技能及适应社会的能力）；“劳育”：为今后工作所需的实践技能；“德育”：提高道德标准，性格和正确价值观的培养；“体育”：提高身体素质，培养良好的生活习惯；“美育”：提高文明素质，提升文化素养及培养心理健康等。

子题：老师应该教学生如何判断是非还是学科知识？比起体育和艺术这些学科，学校更应该重视对将来工作来说更重要的学术科目吗？大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？国际新闻应该作为学校的学习科目吗？要不要学历史？小孩儿应该从小学习外语吗？无偿社区服务应该成为高中生的必修课吗？

子题例1：Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace.Others think that the true function of university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake.What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?（剑7 test 4;050528;070113）

解题：本题主要讨论的是大学教育的功能和作用，是应该帮助学生就业，还是教授知识本身。前者的理由：当今社会竞争激烈 fierce or intense social competition，大学教授日后工作所需的实用的知识和技能，能帮助学生获得更多工作机会 more job opportunities，有更好的就业前景better job prospects，提高职场中的竞争力等 gain a competitive advantage。后者理由：学习理论知识及不同课程theoretical knowledge & a wide range of curriculums，打下坚实的理论基础 lay a solid theoretical foundation，思维更开阔 broad-minded, have a broader view of life

本题貌似是观点类“opinion”题目，实质上是讨论类“discuss”，需要同学们讨论题目中提出的这两种观点各自的合理性及其理由，然后在此基础上得出自己的观点。文章可以分为四段。第一段介绍背景信息，引出主题，改写题目中双方观点，说明不同的人对于大学的功能有不同的理解和看法。第二段分析为什么有些人会认为大学应该教学生比较实用的知识和技能，并运用举例、因果、对比等论证方法加以阐述。第三段可以分析为什么有些人认为大学应该传授知识本身。在最后一段，同学们可以提出自己的观点并加以论证。可以认为大学的作用就在于培养用人单位需要的人才；也可以提出大学不同于培训学院，应该传授知识；或者进行分类，认为不同种类的大学有着不同的功能和作用。只要能自圆其说，任选其一即可。

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第五篇：雅思写作

翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。

一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说

盲点1：无话可说

这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。

盲点1击破：四多原则

多看范文；多关注时事，观察生活；多与人交流；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中，分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，如果某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。

盲点2：千言万语

这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。

盲点2击破：词以类记原则

此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲点3：标新立异

这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求与众不同。

盲点3击破：自圆其说原则

雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据

言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。

盲点4：真情流露

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝”之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。

盲点4击破：切中主题原则

这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架，并严格执行。如在写argumentation类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。

二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水

盲点1：天马行空

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或冲突。

盲点1击破：起承转合原则

除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。”的逻辑框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that „(起);because they maintain that „。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact „.。(转);Therefore , I believe „。(合)

盲点2：单句游离

这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，逻辑连词也使用错误。或者是标点不注意。最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却无数次被误解成递进。

盲点2击破：行云流水原则

考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词，力求做到行云流水，常见的逻辑连词有：

因果关系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

举例关系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放

盲点1 ： 遭遇生词

大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。

盲点1击破：同义改写原则

其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则，毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。

盲点2：同义重现

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳，分数自然不高。

盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则

其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲点3：大词连篇

很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。

盲点3击破：整体协调原则

看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现，考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数，真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击，最后只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。

三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致

盲点1：长篇累牍

和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。

盲点1击破：长短结合原则

事实上，如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。

盲点2：短小精悍

和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。

盲点2击破：灵活多变原则

这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability这个简单句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通过插入语的包装我们可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通过如此灵活的加工和包装，你会发现，简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。

总之，掌握了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。（编