第一篇：雅思写作常用短语
雅思写作常用短语 To cultivate one’s independenceTo develop a strong sense of responsibilityWe still have a long way to goAll in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology a symbol of society progress environmental protection/environmentally friendly in all aspects of human life convenient and efficient valuable natural resources a reliable source of information unshakable duty be committed/devoted toComprehensive quality lay a solid foundation formake contributions to the society the rapid development of economy
The remarkable improvement/steady growth of people’s living standard advanced science and technology be faced with new opportunities and challenges it is commonly believed/recognized that arouse wide public concern/draw public attention it is undeniable that/there is denying that a controversial issue Reach an absolute consensus onbe supported by sound reasons argument on both sides play an increasingly important role inBe indispensable toadvantages far outweigh the disadvantages lead to/give rise to/contribute to /result incomplicated social phenomenon sense of responsibility/sense of achievement sense of competition and cooperation
widen one’s horizon/broaden one’s vision
Acquire knowledge and skills take many factors into account/consideration from another perspective make joint efforts be beneficial/conducive to
has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones Take the essence and discard the dregs.do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental toexchange ideas/ emotions/ information
keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of … take effective measures to do sth.the healthy development of …
Every coin has its two sides.Views on …vary from person to person.attach great importance to…
social status
focus time and energy on…
expand one’s scope of knowledge
both physically and mentally
be directly / indirectly related to…
believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that relieve stress/ burdengive(top)priority to sth.compared with…/ in comparison with
in contrast / on the contrary.replace/ substitute / take the place ofoffer job opportunitiesmirror of social progress
Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
enhance/ promote mutual understandingmake full use of / take advantage of Shape one’s characterTo become more sociably adaptableTo form a good habit of thriftTo master interpersonal skillBe closely linked/associated withCorporal punishmentWorsen the relationship between..Give proper guidance to sbKeep/ strikea good balance between A and BAt the price ofUndermine the social stability It is no use doing sthDistract one’s attention to do sth
第二篇：雅思写作：教育类短语
雅思写作：教育类短语
1.adapt oneself to the development of使自己适应…的发展 2.scope of knowledge知识面 3.narrow the gap between缩小了…的鸿沟 4.lighten the burden of减轻了…的负担 5.comprehensive knowledge广博的知识 6.distance education远程教育 7.enrich the teaching method丰富教育手段 8.be attractive to somebody对…具有吸引力 9.eye-catching极好的、极快的 10.eye-dazzling极好的、极快的 11.fascinating极好的 12.appealing极好的 13.multimedia teaching多媒体教学 14.solid professional working experience扎实的职业工作经验 15.vocational education职业教育 16.down-to-earth切合实际的 17.stress-related illness与压力有关的疾病 18.enjoy equal rights享有平等权利 19.receive education接受教育 20.thought-provoking引人深思的 21.enlightening予以人启迪的 22.far-reaching深远的 23.never-ending永不停息的 24.perplexing令人困惑的 25.overwhelming压倒一切的 26.the cultural diversity文化的多元性 27.insightful富有洞察力的,有深刻见解的 28.exchange experience交流经验 29.undertake the due obligations承担责任 30.offer a chance of education提供一种教育机会 31.give a big push to the development of education给予教育极大的推动 32.vocational guidance职业指导 33.vocational training职业训练 34.face possible pressure and competition迎接可能的压力和竞争 35.Be easily taken in by容易受到某人或某事的欺骗 36.exam-oriented education应试教育 37.knowledge-intensive知识密集型的 38.education for all-round development全面发展教育 39.have quick and easy access to something更快地接触到…东西 40.Develop Our Creative Mind培养我们创造性思维 41.Fake Diplomas假文凭 42.Embracing the Knowledge Economy Age拥抱知识经济时代
43.Renew Knowledge革新知识
44.People-oriented以人为本的45.compulsory education义务教育
46.keep skills fresh and up-to-date使得技能可以与时俱进
47.widen one’s knowledge拓展知识面
48.enrich one’s social and life experience丰富了社会和生活阅历
49.enlarge one’s view拓展知识面
50.broaden one’s horizons拓展知识面
51.realize the value of life实现生命价值
52.grasp good communication skills掌握良好的交流技能
53.remove misunderstanding and discrimination消除误解和歧视
54.improve cultural integration and globalization促进了文化的融合和文化全球化
55.cultivate a strong sense of responsibility培养了强烈的责任感
56.promote social skills and competence提高了社会能力和竞争力
57.make contribution to society对社会做出贡献
58.quality Education素质教育
59.cross-cultural communication跨文化交流
60.rote learning死记硬背
61.concentrate one’s attention on关注…
62.student-oriented education以学生为主体的教育
63.bias of culture文化偏见
64.cradle of culture文化摇篮
65.mainstream culture主流文化
66.system of education教育体制
67.tap one’s potential挖掘某人的潜能
68.go astray误入歧途
69.commit crimes犯罪
70.Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire.教育不是注满木桶水，而是点燃生命的火ambiguity歧义
71．denotation字面意思
72.connotation暗含意思
73.impractical不切实际的74．intellectual development智力发展
75．interaction交流
76.thinking capacity思考能力
77.universal language世界语
78.linguistic studies语言学研究
79.a means of communication一种交流工具
机械翻译
81.untranslatable不宜翻译的82.develop linguistic skills培养语言技能
83.verbal communication口头交流
84.grammatical rules语法规则 85.context语境 86.core核心 87.translation笔译 88.interpretation口译 89.a complex progress一个复杂过程 90.cream精华 91.cultivate logical thinking培养逻辑思维 92.obscure晦涩的 93.readability朗朗上口 94.an unrealistic dream一个不切实际的梦想 95.comprehensive knowledge全面的知识 96.communicate with others directly, and freely与他人直接自由交流 97.face-to-face communication面对面交流 98.stimulate one’s interest激发了…的兴趣 99.artificial intelligence人工智能
100.help children learn a foreign language in a more vivid and interactive way帮助孩子更生动，互动地学习一门外语
第三篇：雅思作文短语
1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8.不可否认 It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…
9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12.一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…
13.就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally, 14.就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…
18.对…必不可少 be indispensable to …
19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
20.…也不例外 …be no exception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on…
22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27.开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31.从另一个角度 from another perspective
32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33.对…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…
34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…
36.综合素质 comprehensive quality
37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach
39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…
40.应当承认 Admittedly，41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42.满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…
43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources 45.因特网 the Internet(一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)
46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48.环保(的)environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion
53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way
55.理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56.…必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…
57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59.长远利益.interest in the long run
60.…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.63.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to
64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …
66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth.67.…的健康发展 the healthy development of …
68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.No garden without weeds.69.对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person.70.重视 attach great importance to…
71.社会地位 social status
72.把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…
73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75.有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…
76.提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
77.可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that
78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
79.优先考虑/发展… give(top)priority to sth.80.与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with
81.相反 in contrast / on the contrary.82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of
83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85.社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
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大作文的写作最重要，但是小作文也很重要，不能一直放的小作文不看，因为小作文如果写的不流畅，老是思考，不能在20分钟内写完，就会严重影响大作文的质量。写作文一定要知道换说法，一个意思同样的说法最好不要出现第二遍，这当然需要积累不同的句型和短语，比如文章后面给的写好处的句子要记得换着用哦~~~邓徽老师说大作文要得高分，倒装句、插入语、强调句、复合句和同位语至少各用一次！一开始，我每篇作文都五种句型刻意出现一遍，到后来就用的比较熟。
1把《雅思写作机经题源大全 》看了三遍，主要是记了上面的论据。上面的文章按类型分类，可以总结一下某一方面常用的搭配和句型。我的写作邓老师让我把新概念3的文章背背，但我背了两篇就放弃了。不过我把新3上的文章都看了一遍，把觉得好的句子总结在了一个本上，然后背，尤其是快考试那几天每天背一遍，弄得很熟，所以用起来也很熟。大家一定要看啊！！关于模板：我觉得模板还是很有用的，但不是已有书上的模板，大家都知道的那些模板和句型最好少用。因为雅思作文一共五大类，我一般练得都是两边倒的作文，自己有准备一个模板，除了问原因解决类的作文外都可以用同一个模板，所以要练得比较熟，一般写作文都要用自己的模板。不过我考试时候还是碰上了问原因类的作文，所以最好是总结两个模板就万无一失啦~~。当时邓老师让我基本上一天看一篇《经济学人》的文章，总结不会的单词、短语和句型，因为上面的文章都是老外写的，所以文章非常地道，好句子很多~~~ 5 上强化课前看过一遍十天突破雅思写作，觉得还是很不错的，对雅思写作有了比较全面的了解。但是上面的句型和模板最好不要用了~~ 6 关于写作文：我一共写了十篇左右的大作文，小作文要每种至少练一篇吧，快考试前一个星期我用专门的雅思考试写作纸卡时间，大小作文一起一起写，写了4套。我觉得大作文不在于要练的很多，但是要刻意的改进。写完一篇文章后要自己改一遍，把看的出来的语法和单词错误改了，还要看论据合不合理，再把看过的好的句型刻意套进去，然后如果有条件找给邓老师给改改。第一篇作文我写了一个半小时才写完，当时真是把所有能用的上的好句子和词组都尽量往里套。邓老师说第一篇要是半小时之内写完就是混的没好好写。尽快把能用的上的写作资料背熟，这样写作时间自然会减少，小作文必须20分钟搞定，如果你的模板和句子用的熟，大作文也会很流畅。我的雅思考试作文写了满满的2页考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍（真的检查出一个错~哈）。除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个（不用太多），而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。在这里与大家做一下分享。
好句总结： 多用such替换the ,a.例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.（模板的第3段开头）开头句型：（放在文章中间也很好的句子）As a result of constant media attention , A(A指题目话题), once largely ignored,has come to be seen as especially valuable/significant.2(The right of the media to do this)is rarely disputed, but(the way in which it does this)often comes under withering critism.(括号里可以换)3 As our lives are saturated with the flood of(advertisements),no one can avoid being influenced by ads.(ads 错的，不能用简写哦~)4(Bad traffic and increasing pollution)are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe.（in the globe全世界）5 The issue of A is a complex and sensitive one.What lies behind …..?(问原因类)6 After years in the wilderness , the term “ A ” seems posied to make a comeback.(和第一句意思比较像)3 好处句型！Nothing can be compared with sb/sth ~~(新3的哦，推荐)2 A exert a positive impact on ….A can an effective way to(help)……(简单但好用)4 Few things can be more（impressive）than ….that…(新3的哦，推荐)5 play a pivotal role in … benefit from../ profit from…一般 7 promot the development of..8 A is the cornerstone of … 9 remove the barrier for..10 raise one’s awareness of …常用 11 enable sb to do … sb is the ultimate beneficiary（sb是。的最终受益者，社会问题类说人们应该自己也承担责任用）consolidates its status as the..14 get a clear perspective of..15 give a boost to..16 A is an indispensable part of B 17 A is irreplaceable tp B 18 The signigicant of A to B can never be ingored 19 A is the key ingredient to B~~ 20 A made it possibe for sb to… A exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people.(新3的哦，推荐)
find it impossible to resist the temptation to do ….Needless to say / Indeed ,……（可以放在任一句开头，很好用哦~）23 develop an unshakable faith in … 24 have a reputation of..25 Nothing can catch them for … make a contribution to(也可作写坏处的句子 the city make its own contribution to noise)27 build bridges between 28 特别的
Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健康 optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平eradicate poverty 消除贫困 It’s not A that are important ,but B Satisfy basic(human)needs 满足要求
Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of 消除冲突和紧张 Be fully aware of the consequences The impact of（sporting activities）goes far beyond the bounds of(leisure and recreation.)3 坏处的句型 drive up the crime rate..2 widen the gap between A 3 pose a(direct)threat to … stifle creativity 5 diminish individual’s leisure time… 6 spin out of control 7 cause(creat)tension and conflicts between… exert(have)detrimental/negative/adverse influence（impact）upon/on 9 is markly incompatible with…与。不协调 10 be afflicted with … 11 deprive one of sth 12 sth is the root cause of … 13 be saturated with sth 14 at the expense of ….15 be confronted with sth 16 run contrary to … 17 erode the national identity 18 pose a dilemma for 19 is an vicious circle 20 hamper(scientific)progress 21 there is a yawning gap between 22 pose a devastating problem 23 the reputation is ruined 24 A is a complete failure 25 Things can go wrong on a big scale 26 sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem 27 It is impossible to 28 have(little)difficulties in doing 29pay the price for(fame)30(pollution)is the price we pay for(overpopulated ,over industrialized planet)31 people seem to fail to take into account the fact that ….好句！32 lead to some unfavorable results 33 sacrifice ….for …
There is a major concern over t he world about ….35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions 36This is compounded by the fact that …
the problem of(information overloaded)exacerbated by(the growth …)
The problem , however , is complicated by the existence of dozens of..and by the fact that…..4 解决问题类 小模板：
1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on ….,saying clearly(that..).2Other policies(such as。)can be taken to back up the policy.3 One helpful step is to … ,Another possibility is to improve …., so that ….4 It should be an addtion to the policy work ,not a substitute.5 The more effort put in and wider(the whole school)involvement ,the substantial the results are likely to be.1 give priority to sth 2 shoulder the responsibility to 3 comply with 4 impose restrictions on..5 take …into account /consideration should be increasingly focus on…rather than … what will make the most difference is …..The new study makes this point even more starkly 8 There are ways of dealing with the topic through …, ….and …..Three factors are involved in this change.新概念3+剑桥好句： Apparently,there is a good deal of truth in this idea./There is an element of truth in both agreements 2More importantly/significantly,there is still good evidence that … 3This is compounded by the fact that …由于。的事实，使。变得更糟 4Women,it is obvious, are freer than in the past.插入语 5 has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.6 It’s not A that are important ,but B Providing more parking area, in the long run ,has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world.插
入语 Not only had the poor man been arrested ,but he had been sent to prison ,as well 9 It has been estimated that …据估计 Considering the amount she paid ,he was dear in more ways than one.非谓语 Fearing that she would never see Ratus again 11 use fewer materia resources and ,therefore,be much compatible with protecting the environment 12 avoid squandering money on 避免浪费钱在。上 13 shoulder important responsibilities on major global issues 14These regions are fragile not just in terms of their ecology,but also in terms of the culture of their inhabitants.25 Climate change ,whatever its causes,is a direct threat to their way of life.插入语 Cinema might, for example , have become pimarily a documentay form.for example放中间，好！27 But what happened was that it became ,overwhelmingly, a medium for tekking stories.插入语 28Unfortunately, they are the ones the organisation can least afford to lose.29 There is an abundance of evidence to support the motivational benefits that result from carefully matching people to jobs.an abundance of 大量的，好！Managers, must be sure ,therefore, that employees feel confident that their efforts can lead to performance goals.插入语
31To varying degree, we all have secrets which……
Instead of becoming a doctor , however ,he became a successful writer of detective stories.33 It seemed certain that 34 广告Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste,we are no longer free to choose the things we want ,for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us.35 In time ,it became an accepted fact that …
第四篇：写作万能短语
1Summary:经典句型： A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型： As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计 原理：要想更.经典句型： A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型： As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计 原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型： According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造： Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五更多句型： A recent statistics shows that …写作绝招 结尾万能公式：
1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论 说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！更多过渡短语： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型： Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？ 更多句型： Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作绝招 写作的“七项基本原则”：
一、长 短 句原则 工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主 题 句原则 国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人
造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！天工作日。点击：338
四、短语优先原则 写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！
比如： I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则 原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room 所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
六、多变句式原则
1）加法（**）都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说： I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式： Not only the fur coat is soft, but it
is also warm.其它的短语可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语： despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语： then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分： When to go, Why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一举）如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6）排比（排山倒海句）文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、挑战极限原则 既然十挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如： The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！写作绝招 文章主体段落三大杀手锏：
一、举实例 思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted
every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型： To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、换言之 没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子： I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语： in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
第五篇：雅思写作
翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。
一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说
盲点1：无话可说
这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。
盲点1击破：四多原则
多看范文；多关注时事，观察生活；多与人交流；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中，分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，如果某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。
盲点2：千言万语
这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。
盲点2击破：词以类记原则
此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)
盲点3：标新立异
这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求与众不同。
盲点3击破：自圆其说原则
雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据
言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。
盲点4：真情流露
这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝”之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。
盲点4击破：切中主题原则
这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架，并严格执行。如在写argumentation类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。
二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水
盲点1：天马行空
这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或冲突。
盲点1击破：起承转合原则
除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。”的逻辑框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that „(起);because they maintain that „。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact „.。(转);Therefore , I believe „。(合)
盲点2：单句游离
这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，逻辑连词也使用错误。或者是标点不注意。最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却无数次被误解成递进。
盲点2击破：行云流水原则
考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词，力求做到行云流水，常见的逻辑连词有：
因果关系：
因：As since due to owning to
果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的：thereby
举例关系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。
让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if
三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放
盲点1 ： 遭遇生词
大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。
盲点1击破：同义改写原则
其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。
注意：对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则，毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。
盲点2：同义重现
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳，分数自然不高。
盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则
其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。
盲点3：大词连篇
很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。
盲点3击破：整体协调原则
看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现，考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数，真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击，最后只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。
三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致
盲点1：长篇累牍
和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。
盲点1击破：长短结合原则
事实上，如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。
盲点2：短小精悍
和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。
盲点2击破：灵活多变原则
这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability这个简单句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到：
It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。
通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到：
So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。
通过插入语的包装我们可以得到：
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。
通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到：
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。
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通过如此灵活的加工和包装，你会发现，简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。
总之，掌握了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。（编
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