第一篇:雅思写作考试六大细节问题
(郑 州 无忧 雅思 培训)雅思写作考试的六大细节问题雅思写作考试细节一:标点“独行侠”问题
按英文书写规定,标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注,与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。但是在实际作文中经常发现学生不论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待,即标点前后都空下空格,结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉,影响了文章的美感。有例为证:
First , energy and other natural resources have become more abundant , not less so , since the book ' The Limits to Growth ' was published by a group of scientists.可以看出,标点像独行侠一样出现在句子中,会给人以喧宾夺主的感觉。所以大家平时练习时就要注意正确书写标点。
雅思写作考试细节二:句首单词首字母大小写问题
通常情况下,同学们只要感觉是个句子就都把句首单词首字母大写了,但是在实际写作中情况如何呢?下面我们来看个例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole;others are extremely selective.分号的作用是对关系非常紧密的句子进行分隔,所以后一个句子只是前一个的附属,并不是一个独立的新句子,所以首字母仍然要小写的。这个现象同样适用于冒号、破折号、括号。
雅思写作考试细节三:书写过于随意
每个人都有自己的书写习惯,但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的,所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外,肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集,以免让人看不清单词,影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群,从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大,也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官阅卷障碍。
雅思写作考试细节四:写作格式混乱
英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行,所以会给人以整洁的感觉,也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似,即每一段的开头句缩进,但是段落之间没有空行,所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”,即段首句缩进+段落之间空行,给人以不伦不类的感觉,同学们一定要注意。
雅思写作考试细节五:总结段缺失
很多学生在写作时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段,于是给阅卷者没完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary,无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳,这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰,说服力不强等问题,即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。另外,因为开头结尾段是我们平时练习得比较熟练的部分,所以我们很容易就搞定的,为什么放着拿分的部分不写呢?!
雅思写作考试细节六:分段过多或者过少
大家可以设想一下,当你拿着一篇只有一段的很长的文章时,是不是会有很晕的感觉?!尤其是当我们的写作能力有限,文字表达没有吸引力时,怎么能让考官有耐心看完你的文章呢?再设想一下,当你看的文章分成很多的段落,而你的论证能力有限,费了半天劲也写不出几个句子,会不会每段都给人以流水账的感觉呢?所以,对于考试作文,要想既用形式掩饰内容的不足,又能给考官以好印象,那么请把task1段落划分控制在3-5段,task2控制在4-6段,既能体现段落分配清晰,突出自己要表达的内容,又能避免论证太过分散而中心不明确。
以上就是小编整理的雅思写作细节问题介绍,可以看出在这部分被扣分的点往往都是一些最基本的句型以及语法,虽然在我们考生眼里觉得这些错误都微不足道,但是在实际考试中都是扣分点,最后小编祝大家都能考出雅思好成绩。
第二篇:雅思写作六大注意细节
雅思写作六大注意细节
细节一:标点“独行侠”问题
按英文书写规定,标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注,与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。但是在实际作文中经常发现学生不论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待,即标点前后都空下空格,结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉,影响了文章的美感。有例为证:
First,energy and other natural resources have become more abundant,not less so,since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists.可以看出,标点像独行侠一样出现在句子中,会给人以喧宾夺主的感觉。所以美联英语学习网提醒大家平时练习时就要注意正确书写标点。
细节二:句首单词首字母大小写问题
通常情况下,同学们只要感觉是个句子就都把句首单词首字母大写了,但是在实际写作中情况如何呢?下面我们来看个例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole; others are extremely selective.分号的作用是对关系非常紧密的句子进行分隔,所以后一个句子只是前一个的附属,并不是一个独立的新句子,所以首字母仍然要小写的。这个现象同样适用于冒号、破折号、括号。细节三:书写过于随意
每个人都有自己的书写习惯,但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的,所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外,肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集,以免让人看不清单词,影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群,从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大,也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清,造成考官阅卷障碍。细节四:写作格式混乱
英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行,所以会给人以整洁的感觉,也比较推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似,即每一段的开头句缩进,但是段落之间没有空行,所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”,即段首句缩进+段落之间空行,给人以不伦不类的感觉,同学们一定要注意。
细节五:总结段缺失
很多学生在写作时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段,于是给阅卷者没完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary,无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳,这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰,说服力不强等问题,即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。
另外,因为开头结尾段是我们平时练习得比较熟练的部分,所以我们很容易就搞定的,为什么放着拿分的部分不写呢?
细节六:分段过多或者过少
对于考场作文,要想既用形式掩饰内容的不足,为能以最快的速度给考官以好印象,请把task1段落划分控制在3-5段,task2控制在4-6段,这样文章主题明确、论证集中,表达的内容也就溢于言表。
第三篇:雅思写作考试的注意事项
雅思写作考试的七大注意事项
雅思写作是一种综合语言能力的考查,这个能力包括考生对文章结构、内容和语言的把握。除此之外,考生还要注意以下几点:
一,时间安排
雅思写作要求考生在一个小时之内完成一篇至少150个单词的说明文或信件(20分钟)和一篇至少250个单词的议论文(40分钟)。考生需合理安排时间。
疑问:先写Task1还是Task 2?
建议考生先简后难,Task 1尽量控制在20分钟内完成,然后安心写Task 2。所以考生在考前一定要多练多写,掌握时间。
二,字数
雅思写作字数是有下限的,但没有上限,所以很多考生都有疑问,到底多少单词的文章可以拿到高分。当然这没有绝对的限制,但据统计看来,大多数的高分小作文字数都在180左右,而大作文也在280左右。
疑问:字数不够怎么办?
就Task 1 而言,说明该考生对图表的分析能力还有待提高,多练习看图审题构思。如果Task 2字数不够,说明考生思路不开阔,论据无法扩展,考生需增加阅读量,多看和雅思写作话题相近的文章和精读雅思范文来掌握论据扩展方法。
三,标题与格式
雅思的大小作文都不需要题目。雅思写作有两种格式:一是空行不空格式,即文章每段开头顶格写,段与段之间空一行;二是空格不空行,即除首段顶格外,文章每段开头空五个字符,段与段之间不空行。
四,机经
雅思考试是非常系统而且专业的语言水平测试,它有着庞大的题库,有些题目也会重复出现,所以考生可以通过以往考题,即机经充分把握写作题型,话题等,为考生做好充分准备。
疑问:要不要背范文?
背范文对提高考生的英语语言水平有很大帮助,但考生要明确背范文的目的是吸收其中的精华,如观点、语言、结构等,而不是在考生时遇到相同题目全盘照搬,否则被考官发现,将影响最后的得分。
五,评分。
通过第二节我们已经掌握了雅思大小作文的评分标准。大小作文在写作中所占比例大约是6比4。可见Task 2 在最后写作得分中所占比重较大,但也不能忽略Task 1。疑问:卷面不整洁会否扣分?
潦草的字迹和不整洁的卷面将在一定程度上影响考官理解文章内容,影响评卷心情,从而影响得分。
六,时态
图表作文通常会给出特定的时间,考生要根据此时间决定文章的时态。通常情况下有以下三种情况:过去时间用一般过去式,现在时间或没给出时间用一般现在式,预测用一般将来式。议论文根据内容确定时态。
七,学术类文章的一些文体注意事项
让我们通过具体的例子来了解此类文章书写和文体的特点
1.N2O wasn’t produced until 1990, after which, its production grew rapidly.雅思文章为正式文体,所以尽量不要出现缩写,wasn’t 建议写成was not。
2.The bottles are first divided by color into clear, brown and clear ones which are then washed by high-pressurised water.拼写出现问题。在雅思写作中,英式和美式拼写都接受,但我们还是尽量做到两者不混淆。如or 和our, se和 ze。or 和ze 为美式拼写,而our 和se为英式拼写。
3.Nowadays, more and more people have private cars.more and more 词汇过于简单,我们可以用an increasing number of 来替代。
4.Let all of us make great efforts to construct a more civilised China!
此句子喊口号,抒发情感。雅思大作文为议论文,不需要任何形式的情感抒发和口号,所以这句话不适合这样的语言环境。
第四篇:雅思写作考试常用35组句型分析
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一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
Lack of interpersonal skills is one of the most serious defects that we have ever known about today’s college students.缺乏人际交往技能是我们迄今所知的当今大学生的最大缺陷。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句:For parents, nothing is more important than to educate children in a proper way.没有比以一种正确方式教育孩子更重要的事情了。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)
例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting celebrities’ privacy too much.我们再怎么强调保护名人隐私的也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V...(不可否认的...)
例句:There is no denying that the practicality of our higher education has gone from bad to worse.不可否认的,我们高等教育的实用性已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句:It is universally acknowledged that it is the doctor’s duty and obligation to heal the wounded and rescue the dying.全世界都知道救死扶伤是医生的天职。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~(毫无疑问的...)
例句:There is no doubt that the Internet is far more convenient and efficient than the written word or other conventional means of conveying meaning.毫无疑问因特网比书面文字更方便、快捷。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)
例句:An advantage of children’s participating in some paid work is that this practice can cultivate their independence, self-determination and sense of responsibility.孩子参加有偿劳动的一个优点是这种实践可以培养小孩的独立性、自主性和责任感。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)
例句:The reason why a large number of customs have altered a great deal is that most of them are connected with some superstitious beliefs, and they cannot fit in this world with highly-developed technology.多数旧风俗习惯都产生了巨大的改变的原因是它们大多与封建迷信有关,与现代社会格格不入。
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)
例句:So pervasive are advertisements that no one can avoid being influenced by them.广告是如此盛行,每个人都难免不受它们的影响。
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1十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~(虽然...)
例句:Lovely as pets are, it is by no means appropriate for city dwellers to keep them in their houses.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然宠物很可爱,但市民在家中饲养是丝毫不妥的。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
The more children are encouraged to get in touch with various aspects of society, the more comprehensive their knowledge will be.越鼓励孩子接触社会的各个方面,他们学习的知识会更全面。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~(借着...,..能够..)
例句:By putting the responsibility into the government’s hand, citizens can enjoy a higher level of assurance in quality.借着将这种职责放在政府手中,市民在质量上能够享有更高程度的保障。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(..使..能够..)
例句:Community service programs enable the government to relieve the strain on its limited budget.社区服务计划有助于减轻政府财政负担。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我们绝对不能...)
例句:On no account can we ignore the significance of education.我们绝对不能忽略教育的重要性。
十五、It is time + S + 过去式(该是...的时候了)
例句:It is time we evaluated the roles that modern technology plays in our life from more balanced and objective perspectives.该是我们从更加公正和客观的角度来评价现代科技在我们的生活中所发挥的作用的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~(...的人...)
例句:Those who think otherwise contend that computers are designed and programmed by human beings to do all the translation work in a comparatively mechanical manner.那些持反对意见的人争论到电脑是由人设计和编程的,因此只能是较机械地进行语言翻译。
十七、There is no one but ~~~(没有人不...)
例句:There is no one but longs to display the best self and impress others.没有人不渴望展现最好的自我以给他人留下深刻印象。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)
例句:Only in a peaceful environment can people lay emphasis on sports events.The Olympic Games is a convincing example because it has been compelled to be cancelled several times in its history due to wars..只有在和平的环境里,人们才有精力去重视体育赛事。奥运会就是一个很有说服力的例子,因为在历史上它由于战争而数次被迫取消。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子(明显的)
It is apparent that + 句子(显然的)
例句:It is conceivable that with the rapid development in society and economy, competition is becoming increasingly fierce and acute.可想而知,随着社会经济的发展,竞争将更加剧烈。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是...的原因)
例句:It costs an astronomical sum of fund to lock up so many criminals and that’s the reason why imprisonment has imposed a great strain on the budget of a nation.把如此多的罪犯关押起来需要耗费大量资金,那就是为什么监禁已经大大增加了国家负担的原因。
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式...(过去...年来,...一直...)
例句:For the past decade or so, practical courses, such as computer and business, have gained tremendous popularity on college campuses.过去十年来,实用性课程诸如电脑和商科在大学中普遍盛行。
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。
例句:Since the advent of modern urbanization, people have been confronted with the dilemma whether or not they should demolish old houses and buildings that seem to have spoilt the cityscape.自从现代城市化的进程开始之后,人们一直面临着这样一种两难的境地:他们是否应该拆除那些是否有损市容的旧房屋和建筑物。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(...是值得的。)
例句:It pays to create a fair atmosphere in which both males and females cooperate and compete on an equal footing.创造一个让男女平等合作竞争的良好环境是值得的。
二十四、be based on(以...为基础)
例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遗余力的)
Developed nations should spare no effort to finance their economically disadvantaged counterparts.发达国家应该不遗余力地资助贫国。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事(让...明白...事)
例句:We should bring home to the masses the significance of space research.我们应该让人们明白太空研究的重要性所在。
二十七、be closely related to ~~(与...息息相关)
例句:Expanding population and influx of migrant workers are closely related to the problem.人口激增与外来民工大量涌入与交通问题息息相关。
二十八、There exists the possibility of + Ving(存在...的可能性)
There exists the possibility of wronging an innocent person
有可能冤枉无辜的人。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因为...)
例句: Thanks to coeducation system, benign competition and cooperation between male and female students are rightly encouraged.由于男女共校的教育体制,异性同学间的良性竞争和友好合作精神得到了发扬。三
十、Only...can(只有...才能)
例句:Only in cities can children be well prepared for their future life and keep up with the trend of the world.只有在城市里孩子们才能为他们未来的生活作好准备并与世界趋势同步。
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十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不满意)
例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我们的交通状况令人不满意。
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十二、Have(exert, impose)a great influence on ~~~(对...有很大的影响)例句:Quality of citizens has a great influence on a nation’s prosperity.国民的素质对于国家的繁荣有重大的影响。
三
十三、do good to(对...有益),do harm to(对...有害)
例句:Reading does good to our minds.读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
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十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(对...造成一大威胁)
例句:abortion poses a great threat to both women’s physical and mental health.堕胎对于妇女的身心健康都会造成巨大威胁。
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十五、do one‘s utmost to + V = do one‘s best(尽全力去...)
例句:schools should do their utmost to ensure the students’ sound growth.学校应尽全力去确保学生的健康成长。
第五篇:雅思写作5.5分考试答案
Task 1 Underground Railways Systems
The table shows some details about underground railway systems in six cities, namely, London, Pairs, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.London was the first city that opened underground railways systems in 1863, while Los Angels was the last one in 2001.As for the other four countries, all of them opened the underground railways in 1900s.The route in London is also the largest, approximately 400 kilometers.Those of Pairs, Tokyo and Washington DC are between 100 and 200 kilometers.The lengths of underground railways are short in Kyoto and Los Angeles(11 kilometers and 28 kilometers respectively).Tokyo with 155 kilometers of route has the largest amount of passengers(1927 millions).It is followed by that of Pairs, London and Washington DC.Passengers in Kyoto and Los Angeles are similar, around 50 millions.In conclusion, the underground railway system in London is the oldest and the longest, while that in Tokyo serves the largest number of people.By contrast, Kyoto and Los Angeles have new and small size systems.Task 2 Family relationship is not as close as before.Along with the development of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that families are not as close as before.To my mind, this is one of the side-effects brought about by the modern world.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.Firstly, with social advance, people are now more integrated with the society and thus less dependent on their families.Apart from their families, they can easily get help from their friends in a shorter time than before, and it is much easier to make more friends now as a result of rapid improvement in telecommunications.Secondly, the outside world is becoming more charming and fascinating, and people tend to share more time with their friends, colleagues or business partners in their leisure time instead of their families.Thirdly, in the modern society, social competition is getting increasingly fierce;consequently, people have to devote more time and energy to their career.They also feel the urgent need to broaden their scope and knowledge and upgrade themselves so as not to lag behind others.Since family is the basic unit of a society, this issue should be well taken into consideration.As to how to bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions.First of all, the most important approach is through education.Parents should not only set a good example but also instill into their children from their childhood family concept so that they value family in their whole life.Secondly, all family members should try to squeeze some time for family activities such as a regular family dinner together.Dinner time is indeed a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas, which is quite conducive to a more harmonious family relationship.Furthermore, the government should organize some public activities to promote the time-honored concept of family, to call on people to treasure the basic bonds of human life and give awards to some happy families in recognition of their strive for a better family relationship.In order to enjoy a harmonious family life, our government and ordinary citizens should join hands in the efforts to create an atmosphere in which domestic peace is highly valued.Only in this way can we further ensure the harmony of our whole society.