第一篇:雅思G类小作文备考策略
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雅思考试包括两类:G类(General Training)目前较多适用于移民;学术类(Academic)多用于留学。这篇文章主要介绍一下G类小作文。
不同于A类的图表题或流程提,G类小作文中要求考生根据题目中的问题或者事件写一封私人信件,形式可为非正式、半正式或正式。文章字数不能少于150字。
书信的主要结构,即称呼,主体部分和署名。
称呼----开头段(2句)
主体部分----(8-10句)
信末礼貌语和署名----结尾段(2句)
关于不同的称呼和问候,取决于写作的对象,如谁是接收人、写作人与接收人的关系等。考生应根据写作对象的不同而选择适合的写作形式,以实现写作目的,如写给朋友应用非正式的形式、写给上司应用正式的形式。
虽然语句上有所变化,但是在大体的结构上是不变的。
关于书信的书写内容上,考生需要:
? 咨询和/或提供一般性的事实性信息;
? 表达需求、要求、喜恶等;
? 表达看法或投诉;
? 提出要求、建议等。
因此,我们将它分为八大类:1.投诉行 2.咨询信 3.求助信 4.道歉信 5.建议信/提供信息信 6.邀请信 7.感谢信 8.求职信
最后同学们在完成G类小作文的时候需要注意的几点:1.字数如果达不到最低要求将被扣分。2.文章内容如果偏题或者跑题将被扣分;3.任何抄袭(如抄袭其他来源的内容)的作文将被重扣;4.文章如果不完整、内容相互没有关联将被扣分(如在任何部分使用点句或笔记形式)。
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第二篇:雅思G类小作文及翻译
5.1.2 范例5-1 投诉信
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you to complain about the CD Player which I bought in your store in January.After only two days,things started to go wrong.我正写信给你投诉一月份在你们店里买的CD播放机。仅仅两天后,东西就出问题了。
The first problem was the CD drawer,which opened and closed too quickly.I nearly trapped my fingers in it.The next day,I recorded a CD onto a cassette.Everything worked,but the sound quality was very poor.On the following day,the CD Pause button stopped working太快了。我差点把手指卡进去。第二天,我将一张CD刻录到磁带上。一切都正常,但声音质量很差劲。第二天,CD暂停键停止工作。
Naturally,I returned the player to you for repair.Your assistant said I would have to wait only a
week.After two weeks,the necessary spare parts had still not arrived.Eventually,nine weeks later,I collected the stereo.The CD player worked properly,but there was no improvement in the recording quality.自然而然地,我将播放器还给你们返修。你们的助理说我只需要等一个礼拜。两周后,必要的配件部分仍然未到。最后,九周后,我将音响组装起来。CD播放器工作正常,但刻录质量没有得到改善。I am not satisfied with the equipment nor with the service I have received.I am therefore writing to ask for a full refund.I will return the player to your shop on Monday and I expect to receive a cheque for $250退给我$250。
Yours faithfullyJohns琼斯
(181 words)
范例5-2 道歉信
Dear Mr./Ms.,亲爱的xxx女士/先生,I received your letter yesterday complaining that the central heating system in your new house had not been completed by the date promised.I feel awfully sorry that the problem has been caused by my mistake about the date for completion on referring to our earlier correspondence.我昨天收到关于您新房中央供暖系统到期未完工的投诉。对此我感到非常抱歉,这个问题是由于我参照原来的合同弄错了完工时间。
I mistook your date of completion for next week due to my inattention,so the working team installed the system according to the wrong date.I realize the inconvenience that our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any further delay.I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and the engineers working on the job to be placed on overtime记错成下周,所以工程队根据错误的时间安装系统。我意识到我们的疏忽给您带来的不变,我们会尽可能地加快进程。我已经下令将您的事宜优先处理,工程师们会加班完成工作。
I assure you that these arrangements should see the installation completed by next weekend.I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes意。
The fault is entirely mine and I deeply regret that it happened.(159 words)这个错误完全在我,我对该事深感抱歉。
Yours faithfully,您忠诚的,Johns
Dear Mr.and Mrs.JohnsI have arrived home safely.I am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality to me during my recent stay in your beautiful home.我已安全到家。我写信来感谢近期在你家这段时间对我的款待。During my stay,I was overwhelmed by the enthusiasm expressed by you and your family.We had interesting discussions on my training program.I have found these discussions very informative and useful.I sincerely hope we could have more exchanges like this one later人所展现的热情,我受宠若惊。我们曾经就培训计划有过愉快的讨论。我觉得讨论非常有意义。我真心的希望以后还能像上次一样彼此交换意见。
Moreover,there is one thing I need your help.I left my laptop computer in the bedroom I lived in your home.It is a silver one with the black keyboard.I wonder if you could send it back to me.Enclosed please find a cheque of 25 dollars.I hope it will cover the postage我把笔记本电脑落在你们家卧室了。是银色镶黑色键盘的。能不能请你们将它寄给我。请附上一张25美元的支票。我希望这够支付邮费。
I am looking forward to your early visit to China when I will be able to pay back some of the hospitality I received during my memorable stay in your beautiful country.我希望您们能早点来中国,好让我稍微报答在你们国家的美丽之旅期间受到的款待。
With kind personal regardsFaithfully yours, Mary
Dear Sir/Madam,亲爱的先生/小姐,Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the April 10 Student Daily interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am seeking.你们4月10号在学生日报上发布的网络维护工程师这一职位吸引了我,因为你们描述的职位听起来正是我在寻找的。
According to the advertisement,your position requires a good university degree,Bachelor or above in Computer Science or equivalent field and proficiency in Windows NT 4.0 and Linux System.I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements.I will be graduating from XXX University this year with a MSC.My studies have included courses in computer control and management,and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual and SQL Server.根据广告,你们的职位要求有好的大学文凭,学士及以上的电脑科学或者相关专业,并且熟知Windows NT 4.0 和 Linux 操作系统。我觉得我满足这些要求。我今年会从xxx大学毕业拿到MSC学位。我的专业当中包含电脑控制管理课程,并且我用Microsoft Visual 和 SQL Server设计了一个控制模仿系统。
During my education,I have grasped the pinciples of my major subject area and gained practical
skills.Not only have I passed CET-6,but more importantly I can communicate fluently in English.My ability to write and speak English is a good standard.在学期间,我把握了我的专业领域并且获得了实践技巧。我不仅通过了大学六级,而且能用英语流利交流。我的英语口写能力优秀。
I would welcome an opportunity to attend you for an interview.Enclosed is my resume and if there is any additional information you require,please contact me.我希望能得到机会面试。附上我的简历,如果你们需要更多信息,请联系我。
Yours faithfully, 你忠诚的,John琼斯。
范例5-5咨询信
Dear Professor Moss, 亲爱的摩斯教授,I am Sandy,a junior student of the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering.I am writing to inquire about your African Literature and Culture course.我是珊蒂,一名电子计算机工程学院的大三学生。我写信来咨询您的非洲文学文化课程。
Just a few days ago,I found the course when we were asked to choose optional for next semester.The name of African Literature and Culture aroused my great interest.Because of your reputation and my enthusiasm in literature, I hope I could study this course in next semester.Except the name,however,all I know about the course is that it is a two-hour one held on every Thursday afternoon.I want to get more details of the course.First of all,I would like to know the brief outline of the course.Moreover,I wonder if there are some relevant books that you can recommend for me to read before the course.几天前,当我们被要求选修下学期课程时,我看见了这门课。我对非洲文学文化非常感兴趣。由于您的声望和我对文学的热情,我希望下学期能学习这门课程。但是,除了名字,我只知道这门课程每周四下午上课2小时。我想知道更多的细节。首先,我想知道这门课程的大纲。还有,我想您能不能推荐基本参考书让我在开课之前阅读。
I also heard that another course of yours,Chinese Literature,is held every Friday afternoon.If the registration of this course hasn’t closed yet,I will be so glad to participate in your class.我还听说了您的另外一门课,每周五下午上课的中国文学。如果这门课的注册还未关闭,我也很想学习这门课。
Sorry to bother you.Your help will be greatly appreciated.(191 words)打扰您了。承蒙您的帮助。Sincerely yours,您忠诚的,范例5-6
Dear Mr.Clinton,I hope that this unintended letter would not surprise you.I used to study in your school, and this
letter is basically concerned about some courses I had been through.It is too bad some problems
occurred.Otherwise, I was very satisfied with my learning experience there.The management course is generally satisfactory.I have been especially impressed with the books the
lecturer had recommended.However,it has come to my attention that some of your lecturers are so
young that they seem to have deficient experience in the field of management.They should connect
those theories with the real world.I trust that your school can manage to improve this situation.Those
lecturers are undoubtedly aspiring,but I personally suggest that they can undergo more practical
training,and learn more about the application of theories.
Thanks a lot for your concern.I am looking forward to improvement, although I am no longer your student.
Sincerely yours,(192 words)
5-7
Dear Sir/Madam,I am looking for a single-bedroom apartment in London.Please let me know if you have any suitable
vacancies.I would be happy to give you a deposit to hold it.I am about to attend a training course in London during the months of July and August,and St.Atlas
Polytechnic College,the college where I will be studying, is at Queens Street.If possible,I would like to
have an apartment that is within two or three miles of the college.The apartment is preferably spacious,air conditioned with a private bathroom,a telephone line and Internet access.I will appreciate it if it is
quiet,comfortably furnished,because I think it will help me focus on my studies.I am willing to pay up
to £500 a month.
I
would appreciate hearing from you within the next two weeks.My email address is
xiaoyan@xtra.co.cn.Sincerely yours,Johnson Lee
范例5-9
Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to inform you that I lost my shopping bag in your museum and I would like to ask for your help.我写信来通知你们我在你们博物馆丢了书包,我想向你们求助。
I paid a visit to your museum on May 13,2004.When I visited the hall of modern art and history,I left my handbag in the hall because of my carelessness.It is a black leather bag.There are some important things in it,including my passport,ID card,credit card,some checks and US $1,000.But the most important thing is my business address book,which records all my clients’ phone numbers and
appointment agenda in the following two weeks.我2004.3.13号去博物馆参观。当我游览现代艺术历史展厅时,我由于大意将书包落在那里。是个黑皮包。里面有些重要东西,包括我的护照,身份证,一些支票和1000美元。但最重要的是我的通讯录,里面记录着我的所有顾客的电话和接下来两周里我的约会日程。This bag is very important to me.My friends suggested me that I contact your department to seek help,so I write this letter to you anxiously.I hope you and your staff can help me find my lost bag.Your meticulous and warmhearted help will be greatly appreciated.这个包对我来说非常重要。我朋友建议我联系你们寻求帮助。我以我焦急地写信给你们。我希望你和你们员工能帮我找到丢失的包。对此我将感激不尽。
For more information about my lost thing,please contact me in the following ways:
Mobile phone:XXXXXXXXX Home phone:XXXXXX Office phone:XXXXXX 想知道更多关于失物的信息,请用以下方式联系我:电话xxxxxxx 家庭座机xxxxxxx 办公室电话xxxxxxx
Yours faithfully,Eva
范例5-8
Dear Jacky,I am pleased to invite you to join our little celebration which is currently planned to be held on Feb 23rd.So far we have not yet decided the precise time,but there are a collection of choices about
locations,which I want your suggestions.我很高兴邀请你参加我们的小聚会,暂定于2.23好举行。目前为止还没有确定确切时间,但有一些地址可供选择,我需要你们的建议。
Your earliest response will be highly appreciated,and I will definitely take into consideration all suggestions from you or anybody else being invited. The celebration is mainly concerned with my latest promotion.我会对您的反馈做出及时回应,我会考虑所有人的建议。庆祝会是关于我最近的升迁。Without your thorough support,it is impossible for me to be promoted,as I have been merely working for the company for half a year.Meanwhile,I feel it a precious chance for us,a group of friends,to come together to hold a relaxing talk and have some delicious food.没有你们的支持,我是不可能升职的,因为我才到公司半年。同时,我觉得这是一次珍贵的机会,让大家聚在一起聊天享受美食。Please do not bring anything but yourself if you can come over.If you can add some amusements to the celebration,for example,some jokes,I will be greatly pleased.I am looking forward to your reply,and waiting to meet you.聚会时只要人来就可以。如果您能为聚会助兴,比如讲笑话,我会很欢迎的。我期待您的反馈,希望您能来。
Yours truly,Mary
第三篇:21天上班族雅思G类备考成功经验分享
备考时间:我是7月25日网上报名的,当时想用30天突击复习一下。没想到24日这个考点没有G类的考试,最接近的就是8月17日了。再往后拖我觉得容易懈怠所以咬咬牙报了17号的,总共复习时间是21天。
之前英语水平:我高考英语130分,大一考过四级,大二考过六级,大学期间还获得过省里的大学生英语竞赛二等奖,自己一直对英语很自信。大四自己复习过一年考过GRE,成绩不理想,TOFEL还不错,不过出国读研的梦想就破灭了。毕业后在外企工作,习惯了英语邮件和客户沟通。不过工作中遇到一个考霸,英语居然比我还牛,天天打压我,气得我过去的自信都烟消云散了。
备考书籍:此类备考书我知道基本只用一遍所以在淘宝上买了全套25本的复习教材,运到家差点晕倒,足足有10kg。我觉得时间肯定不够都看一遍了,所以仔细研究挑了其中以下:
1.《剑桥雅思真题》1-9,其中1-3没有G类的阅读和写作,而且题型和难度与后面的有差
距,做了听力之后就果断弃之。4-9每套G类的题目都做过,听力和阅读在做到一半的时候觉得突然成绩有了提升,之后就保持住那个水平,给自己奠定了一些自信。作文有
例文的就写,然后比照抄一遍例文。有的太简单就没有下手。总共写了13篇作文,以
大作文为主,抄了N篇范文。每次研究人家写的范文都觉得行云流水,无比佩服。看自
己的作品总是觉得不尽人意,但是又觉得无处用力-_-||2.《十天突破雅思写作和口语》喜欢这两本首先是因为书名让我觉得我十天内能看完,看
了之后觉得PAT老师的文风幽默,逻辑清晰,这两本书读起来不费力,有兴趣,感觉有
所提高。后来才知道烤鸭人手一本,早已是大家的心头好,我就不再赘述。其余的词汇啊,真题精解啊,听力啊全部放弃,当时想如果考一次不过我就好好再读一
遍…
复习过程和心得:
我自从交了报考费就开始进入紧张的复习过程中。每天都是学到晚上11点,早晨6:30起床,白天在公司上班也时不时偷偷看两页,在楼下透气都要听一段听力。这对于现在的我来讲简直有点不可理喻---睡眠时间缩短、和时间赛跑,每天都在给自己打分,自己鼓励和寻找问题和解决方法。在这个过程中我一直对自己说,如果你能成功,就是对自己的一个很大的肯定。当然,我很感谢我的家人和领导对我这21天的支持,没有他们我肯定没有这么投入。
【听力部分】我主要靠做真题,在总结中提高自己。起初,40个对30个,后面就可以对35个左右。有时候错的很不值得,没有复数,忘记大写,拼写错误,之后就会格外注意这些问题,避免丢分。起初觉得填空容易错,后来觉得选择容易错。因为填空只要听到了写下来就可以,可是选择要读题,听到的又是需要转述才能选出来的,稍微有点偏差就错了。后来就专门用中间停顿时间去读题,划出每个选项的重点,在听的过程中就集中去理解内容,马上去选,效果还是不错的。还要强调一点,听力是需要一点淡定的,错过了不要纠结马上投入下一题。
【阅读部分】G类的阅读简单得让人脸红,我就不多说了,时间是充分够用的。复习中途发现T/F/NG这个题型有些崩溃,错得觉得没有什么理由,后来在网上找到一个挺好的解题思路(雅思阅读False和Not Given的区别),总算是过了这个坎了。
【写作部分】写信是要发挥一下想象力的,只要在题目的前提下发挥就可以了,所以还是很简单的,这个分一定要拿到。大作文首先要有思路,可以按照PAT的裸奔法去套。然后结构要清晰,段落之间有逻辑关联。段落之间的句子如何组织,句子之间的关系要紧密,可以用PAT的“国力对比顺,不设下限转”来套用。在平时的研究范文和自己写作中有意识地用一些关系去写句子,好好体会。单词就要靠自己了,我觉得不要去刻意追求“大词”,用自己熟悉的词来表达一定会错。
【口语部分】我不得不承认复习的话题启发我思考了很多事情,有的话题没复习雅思永远不会有人问我,我自己更不会去主动思考。比较生疏的题目我会准备一下,明确如果要抽到我要讲什么。然后百度啊,google啊,各种准备。其实也不要被生僻的题目吓到,毕竟概率很小,平时积攒RP是多么的重要啊>_<’
考试当天:考场门口跟登机一样,还要安检,每人只能拿着身份证进去。我一直怀疑墙上没有表怎么看时间,坐下来我发现自己弱爆了—一个投影仪清晰地投出一个硕大的表盘,还有秒针啪啪地走。瞬间觉得自己好小…
我的耳机还是坏的,换了一个之后能正常地用了,还好。听力和阅读很简单,写作的题目是你喜欢和同龄人还是不同年龄人做朋友。这个题目我有好多话讲,好平易近人的话题哦。一阵写,现场根本没时间关注语法,逻辑什么的,怕写错所以写得也挺慢的,时间基本刚刚好,连仔细看2遍的时间都木有。
我想说早晨千万少喝水,中间不让上厕所的啊,我欲哭无泪。4个小时啊,有没有人性啊。口语考试是第二天中午,笔试完我基本就休息了,没有再怎么复习,想想14分钟的内容还能怎么准备啊。我的考官是个中年男人,脸跟门夹过一样窄,戴着眼镜。口音很好,态度也不错,我当天心都快跳出来了,也意识到自己有点凌乱,但他一直点头,弄得我更乱了… 我抽到的话题非常简单,是关于儿时的游戏的。在第三部分他问我儿童和成人游戏有什么区别的时候,我有点不知所云了,就在那时时间到了…所以我到成绩出来对自己的表现都没有底。
成绩出来了: 考完那天我一身轻松,马上把书送给别人了,当然也没忘记说万一没过再还给我„之后就是焦虑的等待。有一次梦见过自己考了4.5分,有一次梦见考得还不错。我考前就说假如我考过我要好好写一个心得给后人分享,因为我之前不这样做的,只看别人的自己不写。我知道听力和阅读绝对没问题的,就想雅思这么科学的考试,没见过口语和写作奇差的,那怎么平衡啊,一直安慰自己。今天中午12点出成绩,我瞬间登录,看到成绩出来了!我之前无数次登录试图早点知道答案,现在出来了我都不敢往下拉。结果是---总分7.5,其中听力7.5,阅读8.5,写作和口语均为6.5分!马上泪奔啊,各种欣喜,这么多天的辛苦总算有一个交代了。各位烤鸭们,祝你们一路顺风,考出自己的水平,有一个崭新的未来!
第四篇:雅思G类小作文书信:投诉信
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雅思G类小作文书信范文:投诉信(2)
本文是雅思G类小作文书信范文:投诉信(2),供大家参考。相对于雅思A类写作而言,雅思G类写作的复习资料较少,希望本文能够为同学们的雅思备考提供帮助。
题目:
You have recently made a purchase from the local department store.However, when you arrived home, you found a faultwith it.Write a letter to the manager, say what the product is, explain the problem and say what you’d like to be done about it.(投诉信)
范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to complain about the recent purchase of a woolensweater from your department store on Philip Street, on August 25, 2007.亲爱的先生、女士:
我写此信是要就我 2007年8月25日从你们在菲利普大街上的商店里购买的一件羊毛衫进行投诉的。
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I recently washed the sweater in cool water, as per the instructions on the label.However, when I removed it from the machine, the garment was stretchedout of shape and no longer fits.我最近按照标签上的说明用冷水洗了这件羊毛衫,然而,当我将它从洗衣机里取出时,这件衣服却变形了,再也不合身了。
I phoned the store last Tuesday(June 21)and spoke to the department manager, a Mr.Morris, who was rather rude on the phone and informed me that I could not get a replacement sweater as it was purchased at a reduced price.I felt really upset, for I have been a loyal customer of your store for many years and until this incident, never have had any complaints.I, therefore, feel disappointed to be treated in such a manner.我上周二(6月21日)打电话到店里,是与一位叫Morris先生的部门经理讲的,他电话里很是无礼,告知我说因为这件衣服是降价购买的,因此不能退换。对此,我深感不满,因为我多年来一直是贵店的忠实顾客,在此事件之前,从来没有过任何投诉。因此,我对受到如此待遇深感失望。
I would, however, be perfectlysatisfied if you would kindly replace the sweater or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.资料来源:教育优选 http://www.xiexiebang.com/
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然而,我的要求并不高。如果你们能够给我退换一件,或者为我办理退费,怎么方便就怎么办,我都会非常满意的。
I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly,Kenny Gao
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第五篇:雅思G类小作文书信:投诉信
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雅思G类小作文书信范文:投诉信(1)
本文是雅思G类小作文书信范文:投诉信(1),供大家参考。相对于雅思A类写作而言,雅思G类写作的复习资料较少,希望本文能够为同学们的雅思备考提供帮助。
题目:
A night club just opened near where you live.You are very unhappy about the situation because it disturbs the peace of the neighborhood.Write a letter to your local government official.Say who you are and explain why you are unhappy and suggest what should be done about it.(投诉信)
范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the horriblesituation I have been faced with recently.亲爱的先生、女士:
我写此信是要就我最近所面对的可怕状况表达我的不满。
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I’m a resident of Rose Park on St.Johnson Street.I had been enjoying my life since I moved here five years ago.However, a nightclub recently opened right across the street from my apartment block has completelychanged everything.我是圣约翰逊大街玫瑰花园的居民。自我五年前搬到这里,我的生活一直很愉快。然而最近开在我们楼对面街道上的一家夜总会却改变了一切。
To begin with, the club itself is very unsightly.It has blackened windows with sexually explicit pictures displayed on the outside, which I find extremely offensive.Also, the noise level during the early hours of the morning is so intense that it has really disturbedmy sleep.Consequently, I find that I am unable to concentrate fully on my job, as I am often too tired.首先,这家夜总会本身就很不堪入目。其窗户搞得黑乎乎的,外面贴着相当淫秽的画,这一点令我感到尤其难以忍受。此外,凌晨时刻的噪音太高,严重影响了我的睡眠,所造成的结果是由于太过疲倦,我无法全力专注于工作。
I work as a surgeon in the local hospital;therefore, I am sure you can see the gravity of my complaint.Indeed, the consequencesof my making any mistake due to my lack of sleep can be very serious indeed.资料来源:教育优选 http://www.xiexiebang.com/
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我是本地医院的外科医生,因此,我相信您能够看到我投诉的严重性。事实上,由于我缺乏睡眠而造成任何错误的后果将是十分严重的。
I understand that, as a member of the local government, you have the power to close the club down.Nevertheless, I know very clearly that people need to make a living and I would not like to be responsible for people losing their jobs.Hence, if you could please ensure that the offensive pictures are removed, and the noise level is kept to a minimumlevel, I would be more than satisfied.我深知,作为当地政府的一员,您有权关闭这家俱乐部。然而,我也很清楚:人们都需要谋生,而我也不愿意对他人失去工作而负任何责任,因此,如果您能确保那些令人难受的画被撤掉、噪音控制在最低水平,我就将十分满意了。
I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Kenny Gao
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