第一篇：全国各省2009年高考英语书面表达满分
全国各省2009年高考英语书面表达满分范文
一、（2009全国卷I、海南、宁夏卷）
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物 2．替房东还书
3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs Wilson, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【参考范文】 Mrs Wilson, I‟m going out shopping, and won‟t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o‟clock this afternoon,Tracycalled, saying that she couldn‟t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Li Hua 【解析】
作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。应注意下面几点：1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给房东（第二人称）写便条；2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用将来时；而要点3中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换，会用到一般过去时，现在时和将来时。3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
【专家简评】 依然保持全国卷I短文写作的老套路：人物李华（自1999年以来，中间除了02年，统统都是李华同学在写信，历时十年，众多效尤者），话题为简单的外语外事活动，形式为写信（邮件或留言），实则依然是短文写作，控制程度较高，体裁以陈述说明为主。
二、（2009.全国卷II）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：
1.简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺； 2.位置：天安门广场南面；
3.交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线； 4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。Dear Sarah.Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuiltQianmen Street.Here is something about it.____________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Sarah, Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuiltQianmen Street.Here is something about it.Qianmen Streetis a famous street of over 600 years old.Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops.As the street is in the center ofBeijing, just to the south ofTian‟anmen Square, it‟s very convenient to get there by bus.You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.Subway Line 2 has a stop there too.Qianmen Streetis a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.I‟m sure you„ll like it.【解析】
本文是书信格式，给出四个要点，属于常规文体，学生只要把四个要点写全，注意上下文，句与句之间的合理过渡即可。
【专家简评】
人物李华，简单的外事活动。体裁属于陈述说明性质。话题是介绍前门大街改建情况。但这个话题对全国卷II考区的考生多少有些歧视。这种歧视可以理解为城乡歧视和信息歧视。因为该考区学生对前门并不熟悉，所幸试题控制很严，只当是翻译了。另外，试题所提供的名词类词汇缺乏考试的实际意义，只是照抄而已，对考生并无挑战。
三、（2009.北京卷）
第一节，情景作文（20分）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs
第二节 开放作文（15分）
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.第一节 情景作文（20分）
一、内容要点：
1、骑车去植树
2、植树
3、安插提示牌
4、照相
二、说明：
内容要点可用不同方式表达 【参考范文】
Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it‟s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【解析】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。题材贴近学生实际，学生只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。
【专家简评】
在全国卷和地方卷中，08年只有北京卷是记叙文，09年又是记叙文。有趣的是，都是“红星中学高三一班的学生李华”。场景设置几无二致，形式更是何其相似乃尔。如果追索源头的话，全国卷NMET时代的连环画看图说故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年书面表达题跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格连环画的形式，多少让人回到了九十年代。一个是红星农场，一个却是红星中学。就话题而言，08北京是春游活动，09北京是植树主题，而NMET1998则是参观活动主题，话题显然高度相关。
第二节 开放作文（15分）【参考范文】
What an interesting picture!A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it‟s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don‟t need to copy others‟ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【解析】
本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。
【专家简评】
北京卷每年的第二篇作文（开放作文）一直都比较新颖，也能引人思考，问题是往往那个思考的关键点（文眼），学生未必能抓住或说未必能清楚地表达出来，尤其是要达到一语破的之妙，在高考那种氛围中，似乎不易。In my opinion, we don‟t need to copy others‟ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.这样的灵智多么需要现场的急智啊！如何让自己的思想收缩在几个简单的句子结构里面，这本身就是智慧。北京卷的短文写作基本形成了自己的风格。近几年一直比较稳定。而2010年的北京随着课改的深入，高考应该会发生一些变化。
四、（2009.天津卷）
61.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；
2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等； 3.预祝比赛圆满成功。注意：
1.词数：不少于100词；
2.可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
3.发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to this year‟s English speech competition.此处不能答题 Thank you!
一、评分原则
1． 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分
2． 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。
3． 词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。
4． 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5． 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。
6． 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；
2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等； 3.预祝比赛圆满成功。【参考范文】
Good afternoon.Ladies and gentlemen.Welcome to this year‟s English speech competition.Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English.While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English.In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules.First, you should finish your speech in five minutes.Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently.Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!Thank you!【解析】
本题属于提纲式作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材内容贴近学生生活，给出要点表述较全，题的难度较小，考生注意一下几点即可：
1、学生在写作时对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要逐条翻译，语言不要太书面化。
2、正确运用关联词，使上下文联系更加密切，逻辑性强。
3、注意要使所写内容和原文所给出的开头、结尾处衔接自然，浑然一体。
【专家简评】
天津卷的一贯风格接近全国卷I。前五年主要涉及与中学生生活学习相关（04，07，08）话题和与外事活动相关话题（05，06）。09年则是与外语学习相关的话题。本题属于标题作文，天津共出现三次标题作文（04：中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱。07：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。体裁属于陈说性质，连续多年都使用陈说性质或陈说+议论性质，08年则是叙事+议论，这说明天津比较偏好陈说性质和议论性质这两类写作文体。
五、（2009.四川卷）
假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。
1.页面时的问候方式； 2.对毛病伯回答方式； 3.接收礼物时的回应方式； 4.餐宴礼节。注意：
1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you‟re welcome toChinain July.I hope what‟s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.【参考范文】 Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you‟re welcome toChinain July.The following are some Chinese customs.Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care.Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I‟m over-praised” to show good manners.Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It‟s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away.Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone‟s health or success to show that we‟re warm.Anyhow, different cultures, different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when inRome”, you‟ll enjoy more of your stay here.I hope what‟s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】
本文是一种常规的书信体提纲式作文，要点有四，学生只要把四个要点用恰当的语言，条理的句子，合适的句式，表达完整，注意过渡和复杂句使用即可。
【专家简评】
我一直认为语言学习的过程中应该双向度渗透文化，而不是单纯地从目的语国舶来文化，而且，更应该在学习目的语的过程中就开始将母语文化做对等的交流。惟其如此，才能充分使学生在语言学习中体会文化比较的快感，这个快感也是双向的：一方面来自对异族语言文化的吸纳与接受，一方面来自对母语文化的更深层次的认同感和自豪感。如果仅仅是单向度的获取甚至是“掠取”异族文化或母语文化，而对其中之一进行贬损、排斥，这必然将语言学习引向反面，也必然会使生动有趣的语言学习变得枯燥乏味，同时也必然会使两种语言的学习都产生障碍，由学习观念的障碍演变成为学习行为的障碍。可喜的是，目前国人已有一种共识：要想学好外语，母语必须学好。双语相长，汉英互补，这样就可以大大的提高中国学生学习语言的效率。
六、（2009.安徽卷）
假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。
演讲稿的主要内容应包括：
认为同学们不必为此苦恼；
希望能够体谅父母的苦衷； 建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentleman.Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.Thank you!【参考范文】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there‟s no need to feel too sad.Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we‟re not getting into any trouble.They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same.Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong.My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we‟d like to trust them.If you don‟t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—thy are bound to read it.Thank you!【解析】
本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。
【专家简评】
五年来，安徽基本上都是走的陈说（05）和陈说+议论（06，07，08）的文体路线。09年则来了一个典型的议论性质文体，这是一个很了不起的进步。和天津卷一样，话题场景设置为英语演讲比赛一类的活动。话题非常好，贴近中学生的实际生活。也是中学生十分困惑又十分敏感的一个问题。对于这样的问题，中学生一般都有话可说，也有话能说。往往有这样的情况，有话可说是满肚子的汉语在心中翻滚，可是无法转成英语。而这个话题的最大好处就在于有话能说。不过，本题的控制程度较高，三个观点已经用汉语给出，考生只需将其翻译或形成比较好的适合书面形态的英语即可。有几个问题值得师生们探讨。在这样的控制下，如何使语言表达更加贴切？如何用较高级语汇来表达？如何过渡？如何画龙点睛？如何使文气贯通等等？
七、（2009.山东卷）第二节 写作（满分30分）
假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom 写一封信：
1． 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；
2． 询问Mr, smith 的近况并索要其联系方式； 3． 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意：1.词数120-150； 2．可适当增加细节。【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I am now backChinaand sound.In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was inNew York.Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.However, his email address is not available.So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox? I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.With my best regards!Yours cordially, Li Hua 【解析】
本文仍属于半开放性体裁，与书写体结合给考生发挥的空间，考生按照三个要点的提 示，用合适的句式，句型表达出来即可。
【专家简评】 李华，写信，海外学习背景，回国后的联系。和全国卷I短文写作的基本命题路数一致，是一种小心翼翼的翻版。所给话题第三条“邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化”不失为很好的思路。语言的学习离不开文化，语言的交流更离不开母语文化的输出，学习别国语言并不代表别国的语言优于母语，更不等于别国的文化优于母语文化，只不过各自文化的发展路径不一样，文化的优势结构也不一样，等等。其实，文化的多元性和多样性只能说明我们这个世界丰富多彩，而不能由此得出自家文化不如别国文化的观点。所以，学习语言的目的不外乎两个，一是要“师夷之长技”，也就是要将别国的器物文化、制度文化到思想文化化为己用，使自己的文化更为先进和发达；另一个则是“自立于世界民族之林”，也就是要将自己的独特的灿烂的文化推介出去。所以，分省命题六年来，大家都接受了这样一个观点，那就是不仅要掌握目的语背后的东西，更要关怀母语背后的东西。不仅要关注异族语言与文化的输入，更要关注母语及自家文化的输出。
八、（2009.陕西卷）
假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助, 请根据帖子内容, 写作要点和要求回贴。
写作要点：
1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；
2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。
要求：
1.短文需写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实, 结构完整, 语意连贯。4.书写须清晰、工整。Ks5 【参考范文】 Hi, Grown-up, As a student of your age, I understand your situation.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings.Here are a few suggestions.First, it‟s advisable to talk more with your mom.Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “Grown-up”.It‟s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.【解析】 考生在写作中应该注意如下几点： 1.文体：应用文（电子邮件）。2.主体时态：一般现在时。3.主体人称：第二人称。
4.内容要点：① 问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④我的愿望。亮点句式：
1.The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.2.Here are a few suggestions.3.it‟s advisable to talk more with your mom.4.They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards many things.5.Second, you should learn to do your own things well.【专家简评】
李华，英文网络论坛，这是高考英语写作中第一次出现回帖的形式，尽管回帖和回信、回电子邮件没有本质的差别，但是场景设置显然更加贴近时代了，也更没有写信的形式限制了。因此，质而言之，这种回帖仍然属于短文写作范畴。这个话题是关于成长的困惑和烦恼，即自己认为自己已经成人，但在父母眼中仍然是孩子。这个当然是老话题，无甚新意，但由于这个话题是开放式的，即题中所提供的材料只是起到了引发话题的作用，不像其他卷种那样由于材料丰富使得考生作文只是做一做翻译或接近翻译的工作，而陕西卷却要求考生提出个人思考：“理解母亲”和“解决问题的具体建议”。“理解母亲”起码可以有两个思路：一是可以写出年轻人应该主动接近母亲，积极理解母亲。二是可以写出如何理解母亲的具体方式，比如，开诚布公的谈话，多关心母亲等等。而“解决问题的具体建议”却要求考生放开思维，自己找话说。可能因为众多考生都会有话可说，甚至可能出现千差万别的思路和千差万别的作文，这样可能对有效和公平阅卷会产生一定的不利影响。但是，09陕西卷不仅有个好话题，而且还有个好形式，因为这个展开性话题留给考生的思维空间相对较大。
九、（2009.江西卷）
学校即将举行以“Turning a bad mood（心情）into a good one ”为题目的英语作文比赛，请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的记叙文或议论文。
1.好心情的重要性。2.产生坏心情的原因。3.应该如何调整心情。
记叙文 议论文 1.发生的具体事件。2.对你的心情有何影响？ 3.你如何应对？
【参考范文】议论文
Turning a Bad Mood into A Good One It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life.If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world.Most importantly, you will have a optimistic effect on the people around you.We all will live a harmonious and happy life.It is also good for your health.However，sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others or when you fail in doing something.You may have a bad mood.If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possible.As we all know, every thing has its two sides.So you should think more about its bright side.We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by.Remember: Only you can make yourself happy.I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!【解析】
今年依然是开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“Turning a bad mood into a good one”, 并给出了体裁上的选择和内容上的简要提示。话题非常切合学生实际生活，考生只要按照要点去写，注意过渡即可。
【专家简评】
这是第一次在地方卷种中对写作形式（体裁）作出的可选性规定，并分别给出了具体写作内容及写作说明。此举为创新。这个标题作文的命制具备双重可选特征，即既可以通过一个故事的叙述来完成，也可以通过对同主题的议论（重要性、原因与方法）来完成。这是一个典型的标题作文，江西05年获得自主命题权，五年来，基本上为标题作文形式（除05年外），此次尤为特别。可以预见，在今后的全国卷地方卷试题改革中，这种形式将会成为各卷种效仿的对象，甚至可能走得更远。
不过也要指出的是，在本题记叙文要求下的第三条“你如何应对”，笔者认为这样的表述说明文的口气过重，容易误导考生的写作。最好表述为“你是如何应对的”。这样的表述才是叙事性的而不是说明性的了。第二条稍微好一点，不过建议改为“对你的心情产生了什么影响”。总之，那种“如何”，“有何”之类具有说明文性质的表述容易让考生写作时发生体裁“跑偏”现象。
十、（2009.江苏卷）鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪…… 鼠标的便捷性
点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除…… 编辑文本，搜索信息……
收发邮件，选购商品……
点播音乐，下载电影……
如果过分依赖鼠标……（请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
For most people, it‟s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn‟t always help in a positive way.Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.（153 words）
【解析】
本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。
【专家简评】
对于江苏的考生而言，自08年改革以来，整卷分值虽然下降为120分，但短文写作的分值仍然是25分，和绝大多数卷种同题赋分一样。但是，从写作词数要求、写作话题和写作形式（体裁）几个维度来看，江苏卷的写作可以归为比较难的一类。第一，写作词数要达到150左右的卷种，目前只有广东和江苏两地，09年江苏范文词数为153词。第二，六年来，江苏的话题选择有一个明显的特点：时代性比较强。从“江城介绍”（04）、“建设和谐社会”（05），“奥运志愿者的宜与忌”（06），“阳光体育活动”（07），到09年的“鼠标的利弊”等，这个话题选择的路径鲜明地反映出江苏卷对时代的敏感性，问题是这些特色话题又给考生带来了表达上的困难。对于优秀的考生，这种话题可能如鱼得水，而对于中等偏下的考生，这种话题显然有点“尴尬”：想说点什么，但要嘛说不出，要嘛说不好。第三，这个“难”还表现在写作形式上，几年来，江苏卷主要采用的是混合形式的写作：陈说+议论。我分析了一下09年江苏卷给的范文，尽管鼠标的好处部分汉语提示很充分，控制很严，但要想精确表达，也不容易。尤其是题中未列出“不利影响”的部分，考生要想用寥寥三、四句话把这个“不利影响”说明白显然需要功力，这个功力首先是要分析什么才是不利影响，列出个一二三，其次是如何转换成英语，最后才是如何集中而简洁地优化句子结构，使之达意而且有条理。由此看来，江苏卷今年的难度不低，如果再在阅读上加大阅读量，那整卷难度就可想而知了。另外，江苏有命制标题作文的习惯（05，06，08），09年卷虽然没有直接给出标题，也没有要求考生写出标题，但主体性标题已十分明晰。
十一、（2009.湖南卷）
假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：
1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情； 2.介绍你处理该事的方式； 3.谈谈你的感想。注意：
1.词数不少于120个；
2.可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。【参考范文】 Dear Zhang Hua, It‟s three months since I heard from you last time.Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson.On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can.But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class.He stood outside the classroom, silently.I smiled to him and let him came in.After a while, he cried on his desk.Then I walked to him and asked what had happened.He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students.How time flies!Class was over before I realized it.From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them.Do you think so? I‟m looking forward to your reply.Yours truly, Li Hong 【解析】
本文属于半开放性提纲式书信体，要点有三，选材学生熟悉，也是发生在他们身边的故事，学生只要把握准情景和要求，使表达的内容不走题即可。
【专家简评】
湖南卷这是第二次在短文写作中涉及老师（06Mr Moore，09李红）。第一次出现考生假设人是教师——“假设你是某中学新老师李红”。这个假设在历年的高考英语各卷种中都没有出现过，可以理解为考生毕业后的可能，但这个可能只能是大学毕业后的事情了，看来这个未来生活起码还得四年时间。可以划归到第三主题“与考生未来生活相关”。但由于考查的主题仍然是有关学习和课堂之间的事情，总的说来，有话可说，也有话能说，起码可以杜撰一点熟悉的东西。
十二、（2009.湖北卷）: 假设你是华华，与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信，以提高各自的外语水平。最近你收到汤姆的电子邮件（附后），发现有一个成语使用不当。请根据下列要点，用英文回一封电子邮件。
要点: 1．不应使用 “无所不为”，应使用 “无所事事”;2．说明这两个成语的用法;3．给予鼓励。
注意: 1.词数为1叨左右;2.参考释义:无所不为一do all kinds of bad things 无所事事一have nothing to do 3.除以上两个成语外，邮件中不得使用其它汉字或拼音;4.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计人你所写词数），但不得抄入答题卡。
附（汤姆的邮件）: 华华，你好!近几天在忙什么事?有什么有意思的事吗?我们的学校放假了，所以这几天在家无所不为，饱食终日，只好上网发伊妹儿。没意思。我决定找份工作，做个自食其力的人。祝好!汤姆
（以下所给内容不得抄入答题卡）Hi!Tom Nice to read your e-mail today.I noticed you‟ve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.…
Hop you‟ll find a good job soon.Huahua 【参考范文】 Hi!Tom Nice to read your e-mail today.I noticed you‟ve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However, I‟m afraid there is one mistake I‟d like to point out.It is “无所不为”.This idiom means “do all kinds of bad things”.Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that you‟ve got nothing to do these days.In that case, you should use “无所事事”.We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and “无所事事” to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do.Have I made myself clear?
Anyway, I‟m amazed at the progress you‟ve made.Hop you‟ll find a good job soon.Huahua 【解析】
本文题材现实性强，属于较为保守的提纲式作文，考生只要审好题按照要点去表达即可。
【专家简评】
六年来，湖北卷的写信人物比较多样而且有趣：05年是明华给建华写信，07年是李华（也是学生会主席，跟09天津卷一样）写信，08年则改成了一个十分怪异人名——卜曼宜，其谐音极似“不满意”或“not very easy”.而09年摇身一变又改成了华华，看来湖北卷是离不开李华同学的影子了。不过好歹总比卜曼宜好些。
本题和04年全国卷I的写作题类似（外国人学中文，中文歌曲比赛），另外，07年高考语文湖北卷作文题也是以母语为话题的，这三者之间似乎有某种联系。不过，本题对语言本身要求更具体，甚至讨论到了成语的用法。应该说，能讨论这么细致的汉语问题对于中学生学英语而言是一个很大的刺激或促进。而且，毫不夸张地说，跨语言、跨文化的启示意义深蕴其间，对其他各卷种的命题思路不无裨益。
十三、（2009.福建卷）
某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向癸未征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
1.根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯； 2.词数：120左右 I Want to Smile
【参考范文】
There are many advantages of smiling.It can not only make us happy, but also please others.If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return.So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up.They arrange almost everything for me.With their help, I have made great progress.I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile.Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.In a word, let‟s greet every day with a smile.Tomorrow is another day.【解析】
本文为图画式作文，做题的关键是---审题，考生要把握如下几点： 1.文体：说明文。
2.主体时态：一般现在时。3.主体人称：第一人称。
4.内容要点：①微笑的优点；②想对其微笑的人物（父母）；③对父母微笑的理由；④对
自己微笑的理由；⑤总结。
【专家简评】
本题是一个好的标题作文（05福建卷：My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations）。六年来，福建卷基本上使用的是议论性质的写作文体（04陈说，05、06议论，07、08陈说+议论），09年是一个典型的议论性质的文体。话题也非常好，和安徽卷一样，非常适合中学生表达。但从命题的角度看，写作难度较高，因为本题的控制方法不是采用汉语提纲形式，而是采用图文形式，在语言转换上较安徽卷难。从所给范文看，语言难度不高，但思维难度不低。考生得分不易。
十四、（2009.广东卷）
第一节 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况: 时间: 上周末
对象: 眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授
主题: 我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题 基本信息:（1）发生率: 略高于50％（2）人数: 世界第一 专家解读:（1）原因: 很复杂
（2）治疗: 没有哪一种药物能治愈近视（3）建议: 不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动（4）特别提示: 如何握笔也和近视有关 [写作内容] 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容: 1.采访的时间、对象和主题； 2.中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3.专家解读。[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】
Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students‟ short-sightedness.It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the No.1 inthe world, are short-sighted.Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness.He suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises.What‟s more, since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.【解析】
本文题材贴近学生实际生活，这个话题真正的做到“话题来源于学生实际生活”。近视眼是每个校园所必不可少的现象，是学生校园生活得隐形热点。因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说。考生要注意三大要点和表格内容，恰当表达即可。
【专家简评】 本题话题为近视问题，天津卷曾涉及过（07天津卷：How to Protect Our Eyesight）。但角度有不同。广东卷侧重的是问题本身的描述，而天津则是强调的如何保护视力。不过，能有做天津卷的经验，对广东卷也就不会有难的感觉。更何况广东卷所给信息非常充分，对于考生而言，剩下的主要是组织句子了。需要特别指出的是，陈说性质的文体其核心在于陈述和说明（包括介绍），即讲清楚一桩事情。
第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia.All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining.You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off.That‟s right—sleep it off.The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience.Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable.How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? * 考拉即树袋熊 [写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2.然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括:（1）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；（2）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；（3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。[写作要求] 1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【参考范文】
The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos.The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people.Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have.But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed.No having peaceful surroundings to sleep, don‟t you suffer restless and fidgets.No doubt we do and so do the animals.I think it necessary to ban tourists‟ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.【解析】
今年的读写任务让学生就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”展开议论。议论文的写作有助于培养学生正确的价值观，纠正不正确的价值观。今年的读写任务暗中旨在培养学生保护野生动物的观念、把多一点的空间还给动物的观念、与动物和谐共存的观念。
如果考生从“应该禁止游客和动物拍照”这一观点入手的话就迎合了阅读材料，同时也能够受到改卷老师的青睐。
【专家简评】
自2007年广东卷改革以来，写作部分的两个试题在写作要求上均过于详细，控制程度很高。尤其是后者，尽管是阅读后的写作，但要领已经被列出，实际上难度已经大大下降。当然，广东卷这么做的主要目的无外乎便于教师阅卷，收缩考生的思维，不给考生跑题的机会。但是若往深的追问，本题给学生的思维空间并不多，这个值得考虑。三年来，广东卷已经在短文写作上逐渐形成定势。
十五、（2009.辽宁卷）
假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。
要点：
时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00 内容：采摘苹果
报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：带帽子、手套
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已为你写好。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：社区 community 第二节：
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1.时间：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00 2.内容：采摘苹果
3.报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前 4.提示：带帽子、手套 5.欢迎踊跃参加 【参考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we‟ll be back at about 11 o‟clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】
本题命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。第一步：审题
1、看要求：本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好，这样格式应该已经给出，审题的重点放在要点和要求上：要点有五项，注意有三项，但注意的第一项是重要的一项。
2、理思路：调整要点，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，活动的内容，要求、注意事项表达出来；然后再写5和3要点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理。第二步：写作
可以先在草纸上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试最简单的复杂句，如用定语从句、宾语从句等，但句式不易过于复杂，要用一些恰当的连词，使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。
第三步：检查
作文写完后，最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗？时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗？标点符号、大小写用对了吗？检查完后再抄写在试卷上，注意卷面的整洁。
【专家简评】
主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关，但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活动，主题空间更为开阔，因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路，可以归类为外事活动。通常，命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出，对考生而言，前者的难度要大于后者。因为要点内容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构，而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题干却能让考生比较容易辨别出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此，对于各命题单位而言，这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度的分布情况加以合理配备使用，以免过难或过易。
十六、（2009.浙江卷）
5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果.打扫.聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。
1.时间.地点.任务.活动； 2.老人们的反应； 3.简短评论。
注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不记词数）。Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly 【参考范文】
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper 【解析】
本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文，选材贴近学生实际，有利于考生的正常发挥，考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。
【专家简评】
09浙江卷的话题和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了无新意。但这并不就说明该卷乏善可陈。若从以考生为本的角度看，该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名，而不是汉语人名，这也算是一个首创。目的只有一个：避免考生出错。其实，遮掩在汉语拼音中的人名也让人看不出这个人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字，因为对于外国人而言，字母人名只是一个符号，他们是无法想象汉字人名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。
浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在题中给出标题，却在文中直接给出标题，不知何意？不知这个对于检测考生的实际能力有何帮助？另外，虽然说的是新闻报道，但实际上是一个典型的叙事性质的短文写作。08年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。09年，除了北京继续考了叙事外，浙江也出现了叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言，其写作难度应该远远低于前五年的写作要求了，应该是福。
十七、（2009.重庆卷）
国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括：
自我简介
写信目录
话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）
推荐的理由
预祝活动成功
注意：
1.词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出
3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息 4.请在答题卡上作答 【参考范文】 Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student fromXinHuaMiddle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】
这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义，符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点：
1.紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”。
2.但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。3.注意分清段落层次，上下文的过渡。
【专家简评】
从写作文体要求看，重庆卷04年要求写记叙文，05年则改成议论文，近四年基本上是陈说性质的文体。就话题而言，近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过，09年的话题是涉外的话题征集，有些特点。六年来，三次短文写作，三次邮件（其中两次电子邮件）。李华同学出现3次（06，07，09）。总的说来，重庆卷一直比较谨慎，命题基本上没有超出全国卷I的范式。
十八、（2009.上海卷）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 【参考范文】 Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。
Yours，Wang Yuehua 【解析】
本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点：
1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关键，过渡要自然；
2.再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。
3.然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。4.在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节
【专家简评】
上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条：题干短，话题一般与学习或学校生活相关，写作形式主要是议论性质，间或插以混合性质，给考生的思维空间大。还有一点，从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质：陈说+议论。话题涉外，且与教育教学课程相关，是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否过于丰富了些？！参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷，你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息，以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。
【总评】
2009年高考英语全国卷地方卷共19套，短文写作共20篇（上海卷和广东卷各2篇，宁•海卷共享全国卷I的短文写作题）。综观2009年高考英语短文写作试题，我们发现最重要的一个特点就是关于地方或传统特色话题，也就是母语文化输出类话题增多（5篇），以前只是在某个年份、某个卷种中有这种话题的点缀，现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题者们已经认识到了母语文化输出的重要性、紧迫性和现实性，这是最令人感到欣慰的。
第二篇：2012高考全国各省满分英语作文
2012高考全国各省满分英语作文
2012河北高考英语满分作文 2012年高考河北卷英语提纲：假如你是李华，假期参加了中美学生夏令营，对美国的中学生有了初步的了解，写一篇英语小作文，字数120，描述你眼中美国中学生的生活1.宽容心强
2.自己动手3.擅长社交4.标新立异。
参考范文：
Hi, this is li hua, in holiday I participated in the sino-us student summer
camp, for American students have a further understanding, most American students
go to school at eight o 'clock in the morning, they usually before school this
time some sports, such as running, playing badminton, in their courses in school
is very wide, and have dabbled in terms of Chinese history teacher special, it
makes me very is proud that our country also really into the world, and the
world also start to listen to China, afternoon when teachers often will take the
students do some practice, because they think that practice is the best teacher.In the United States, teachers should pay more attention to student's character,they think that a person can learn bad, but must have good manner.In this camp,I recognize the sino-us differences, also more students to learn my firm, work
for our country in the future, make the country stronger.FRom Joozone.com.参考翻译：
大家好，我是李华，在假期中我参加了中美学生夏令营，对于美国的中学生有了进一步的了解，美国的中学生早上大都八点去上学，他们通常会在上学前的这段时间做一些运动，例如跑步、打羽毛球等，在学校中他们的课程涉猎非常广泛，并且有专门的老师来讲中国历史，这让我很是自豪，我们的国家也真正融入了世界，世界也开始倾听中国了，下午的时候老师们通常会带学生们做一些实践活动，因为他们认为实践是最好的老师。在美国，老师们更加注重学生的品行，他们认为一个人可以学习不好，但一定要拥有良好的品行。在这次夏令营中，我认识到了中美学生的差异，也更让我坚定要好好学习，将来报效祖国，使祖国更加强大。
2012四川高考英语满分作文 2012四川高考英语提纲：假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1、对英语学习的认识;
2、自己目前的英语水平;
3、自己英语学习存在的主要问题;
4、对英语教学的两点建议。
作文地带提示您注意：
1、词数100左右;
2、信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.-----------
Thank you!
Li Hua
One Possible Version:
Dear Ms Li,I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.My English is just OK and the two main problem in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when
speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.Thank you!
第三篇：高考英语书面表达技巧
高考英语书面表达技巧
通常，英语学习，听、说、读、写、译五项基本技能缺一不可。《普通高中英语课程标准》，对九级语言技能目标英语写作有6点明确的要求。同时列出了写作技能与试题设计的要求和写作评价标准，其测试方式有五种。学生作文主要从内容要点、语言使用效果、结构和连贯性、格式和语域及与目标读者的交流五个方面进行评价。英语书面表达是英语语言基础知识和语法基础知识的综合运用，还要具有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，要求内容清楚、意思连贯、结构完整、逻辑性强、主题突出、用词准确、文体恰当。一般，要文理通畅，非单纯地翻译。要答卷满意，平时确实需要长期的信心的培养，耐心的启发，由易到难，从简单到复杂，循序渐进地坚持内容、语言、语法、表达、结构、逻辑和卷面等进行规范地训练，而且训练有素。现在，不少学生对英语书面表达不予或不够重视。这并非完全意义上的写作，只要求用书面语言基本表达出要表达的东西。一般原则是：不多写、不少写和不错写。现结合存在的问题和多年的教学积累，谈谈高考英语书面表达应注重的五方面。用顺
审准题义，明确情景，看清要求。不少考生写作时，还有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解题的习惯，特别是不注意生词或短语提示，或干脆完全根据所给材料先后顺序逐一翻译。前后不连贯，层次不清晰，逻辑性不强。因此应认真思考材料，找到所要表达的主旨文意及线索，在线索引导下通畅地表达内容，增加可读性。为此，应注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示过度及连接的词汇，使之有较强的感情色彩。用对
对每一个句子都尽可能避免语法错误。通常错处出在：
2.1动词错误
（1）多用。
1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（划线部分改为Five hundred）
2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（划线部分改为coming或去掉comes）
（2）缺失。
1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遗漏处加be）
2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遗漏处加are）
（3）时态错误。
1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（划线部分改为comes）
2）Class start at 8:00 am.（划线部分改为starts）
书面表达可能出现多种时态，但特定时间背景下时态相同。如人事物现状的介绍，应以一般现在时为主；过去的介绍，应以一般过去时为主；日记应以一般过去时为主；通知应以一般现在时为主。千万不要随心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面积失分。
（4）语态错误。由于汉语被动色彩不浓，因此英语表达易受影响，该用而不用，不该用而用be动词。如：
1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遗漏处加been）
2）The matter was happened two years ago.（划线处去掉was）
还有喜欢在动词前面加be动词。如：
3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（划线处去掉am）
4）They are decide that they will study harder.（划线处去掉are）
2.2名词单复数混用
1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（划线处改为800-word）
2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（划线处改为ten-minute或ten minutes''）
2.3冠词错误
冠词属小词，重视不够，影响表达。
1）How do you spell the computer？（划线处去掉the）
2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（划线处去掉the）用准
用准确地道的语言，不能生涩难懂，不合英语表达习惯。常见现象如下：
3.1单词堆砌
写句子，用语不准，而根据汉语句序进行相应的英语单词堆砌而成。如：
1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（错）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）
2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（错）
→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）
另外，不重视掌握单词，写作时碰到生词难句就委婉地去解释，用模糊定义，语言生涩难懂，文意混乱，表达不清。如：
Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（错）
→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）
3.2使用Chinglish
英语作文，受汉语影响，虽语法正确，却不符英语表达习惯。如：
1）Our friends are all over the world.（错）→We have friends all over the world.（正）
2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（错）
→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）
语言转换功在平时。简明扼要，表达清楚，是关键所在。冰冻三尺，非一日之寒。用全
初学写作要简单完整清楚地表达，就要把握两个关系：
4.1完整不一定就句式复杂
一味追求新、奇、特、难，容易出错。如：
1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（错）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）
2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（错）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）
4.2简单也不一定就用省略句
在不可省的地方省略，结构就不完整，句意就不明确。如：
1）He studies very hard and kind.（错）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）
2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（错）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）
另外，考试是根据内容和表达给分的，要点齐全，是直接因素。必须注意要点来源：
标题。有些需要标题，却粗心漏掉不写，造成失分。书写标题应力求简洁明了，有较强概括力和针对性，并注意单词字母大小写。
格式。不少应用文需要正确的格式，如通知的开头，常常要交待通知的对象；日记开头，常常交待时间和天气；信件的左上角必须注明写信人的地址和时间，下一行要顶格写上称呼，正文结束后，要有结束语，并签名。
正文。这是全文要点集中之处，应认真思考材料含义，理清大意，将所有要点逐一落实，并检查有无遗漏。
常识性。原材料不一定反应，但仍然重要，既属内容，又承上启下，增强文章可读性。如写通知结尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；写参观欢迎词开头可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，结尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介绍结束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；写信结尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”
必须注意原则：不多不少。该有的不少，不该有的不写。整洁
文章写好后，应认真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小写及标点符号错误，誊写应尽可能书写工整，布局美观。卷面整洁清爽就会增加得高分机会。
总之，了解、掌握、运用好以上五个方面，就容易得高分。
第四篇：2011福建高考英语书面表达
2010福建高考英语书面表达
写演讲辞
去澳大利亚做演讲——主题是“水资源短缺”
材料提供三点措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的观点
水资源问题：
Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作为一名中学生，你是如何参与环保这项活动？
As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面临水资源危机，请你根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文。1.人们以为淡水是取之不尽的（提示：雨水、河水、井水„„）2.实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增加，工业用水增加，污染„„）3.人类应该怎么办？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor
k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有关环境保护水资源的英语作文5篇
有关环境保护的英语作文：水资源是有限的人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的，实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。
It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water
Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水
水对生物很重要，没有水，地球上就没有生命。所有的动植物都需要水。人
类也需要水。
水几乎无处不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空气中也有水。
水，正如你所了解的，有固态、液态和气态。当它是固态时，它可以像砖一样硬；当它是液态时，你可以将它从容器中倒出；当它是气态时，你看不见或感觉不到它。
虽然地球表面70％是水覆盖着，世界上仍有许多地方缺水。所以我们要好好利用地球上的水。
The Importance of Water
As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性
正如我们所了解的，动植物需要水，人类的生产生活也需要水。没有水便没有生命。
随着工农业的迅速发展，水的需要量越来越大。因此，许多地方缺水。而且，许多河流湖泊被工厂排放的污水所污染，鱼不能生存。同时，废水给人们的健康带来极大的危害。
为了保持河流湖泊清洁，防止水污染，我们必须采取措施，阻止各种污染。
环境日英语作文：关于河水污染的感想
根据下列提示写一篇关于河水污染的感想。
1.上星期天，你随父亲去钓鱼，看见河水污染，几乎钓不到鱼。
2.河水被污染的原因。
3.倘若全国各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？
4.环境污染对人类危害极大，我国政府正在努力采取措施与污染作斗争。
5.希望在不久的将来，河水会变干净。
词数 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the water.As we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.环境日英语作文：Water Pollution-水污染
Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季节，天气变得越来越暖和。我和我的同学们进行了一次环城一日游，所到之处景色宜人。但当我看到沿着城区流过的河流时，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。
随着现代工农业的发展，越来越多的污水排进河里，河水被严重污染。河水变得如此的肮脏以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水发出难闻的气味。
我们急切呼吁采取措施改变这种状况。政府应当建立各种设备，例如污水处理厂，并且鼓励科学家们想出更多更好的办法以减少水污染。
水是生命之源，保护水资源十分重要。
My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried
about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”
今年春天，我和我的同学去春游，我们玩得都很高兴。但同时，我也注意到我们城市的水污染变得越来越严重了。
沿途我们看到许多妇女在河边洗衣，河面上漂着垃圾，一家化工厂正将废水排入河中。河中看不到一条鱼，河水也不像从前那样清澈了，水质很差。对此我深感担忧，因为水对于所有生物都非常重要。没有水人类将无法生存。我希望人们能多关注这个问题，特别是政府部门，争取及早解决水污染问题。最后，我想说“保护水就是保护生命。”
第五篇：英语高考书面表达结尾模版
英语高考书面表达结尾模版
结尾万能公式
1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英语实战演练：
十五、（2009.辽宁卷）假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。
要点：
时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00 内容：采摘苹果
报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：带帽子、手套 注意：
1.词数100左右，开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：社区 community 第二节：
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1.时间：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00
2.内容：采摘苹果
3.报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前
4.提示：带帽子、手套
5.欢迎踊跃参加
【参考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本题命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。
第一步：审题
1、看要求：本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好，这样格式应该已经给出，审题的重点放在要点和要求上：要点有五项，注意有三项，但注意的第一项是重要的一项。
2、理思路：调整要点，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，活动的内容，要求、注意事项表达出来；然后再写5和3要点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理。第二步：写作
可以先在草纸上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试最简单的复杂句，如用定语从句、宾语从句等，但句式不易过于复杂，要用一些恰当的连词，使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。第三步：检查
作文写完后，最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗？时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗？标点符号、大小写用对了吗？检查完后再抄写在试卷上，注意卷面的整洁。
【专家简评】
主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关，但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活动，主题空间更为开阔，因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路，可以归类为外事活动。通常，命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出，对考生而言，前者的难度要大于后者。因为要点内容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构，而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题干却能让考生比较容易辨别出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此，对于各命题单位而言，这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度的分布情况加以合理配备使用，以免过难或过易。
十六、（2009.浙江卷）
5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿者活动（送水果.打扫.聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。
1.时间.地点.任务.活动；
2.老人们的反应；
3.简短评论。
注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不记词数）。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【参考范文】
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
【解析】
本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文，选材贴近学生实际，有利于考生的正常发挥，考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。
【专家简评】
09浙江卷的话题和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了无新意。但这并不就说明该卷乏善可陈。若从以考生为本的角度看，该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名，而不是汉语人名，这也算是一个首创。目的只有一个：避免考生出错。其实，遮掩在汉语拼音中的人名也让人看不出这个人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字，因为对于外国人而言，字母人名只是一个符号，他们是无法想象汉字人名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。
浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在题中给出标题，却在文中直接给出标题，不知何意？不知这个对于检测考生的实际能力有何帮助？另外，虽然说的是新闻报道，但实际上是一个典型的叙事性质的短文写作。08年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。09年，除了北京继续考了叙事外，浙江也出现了叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言，其写作难度应该远远低于前五年的写作要求了，应该是福。
十七、（2009.重庆卷）
国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。
内容包括： 自我简介 写信目录
话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）推荐的理由 预祝活动成功 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息 4.请在答题卡上作答
【参考范文】
Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】
这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义，符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点：
1.紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”。
2.但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。3.注意分清段落层次，上下文的过渡。
【专家简评】
从写作文体要求看，重庆卷04年要求写记叙文，05年则改成议论文，近四年基本上是陈说性质的文体。就话题而言，近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过，09年的话题是涉外的话题征集，有些特点。六年来，三次短文写作，三次邮件（其中两次电子邮件）。李华同学出现3次（06，07，09）。总的说来，重庆卷一直比较谨慎，命题基本上没有超出全国卷I的范式。
十八、（2009.上海卷）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking）,防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 【参考范文】
Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。
Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】
本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点：
1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关键，过渡要自然；
2.再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。
3.然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。4.在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节
【专家简评】 上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条：题干短，话题一般与学习或学校生活相关，写作形式主要是议论性质，间或插以混合性质，给考生的思维空间大。还有一点，从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质：陈说+议论。话题涉外，且与教育教学课程相关，是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否过于丰富了些？！参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷，你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息，以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。
【总评】
2009年高考英语全国卷地方卷共19套，短文写作共20篇（上海卷和广东卷各2篇，宁·海卷共享全国卷I的短文写作题）。综观2009年高考英语短文写作试题，我们发现最重要的一个特点就是关于地方或传统特色话题，也就是母语文化输出类话题增多（5篇），以前只是在某个年份、某个卷种中有这种话题的点缀，现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题者们已经认识到了母语文化输出的重要性、紧迫性和现实性，这是最令人感到欣慰的。
强化训练
11、（1分）
假设你是你校京剧爱好者协会的成员，在一次同英国中学生代表团的联欢活动中，你协会将出一个京剧节目。在演出前，由你向外国朋友介绍京剧的由来，按以下提示介绍：
1．京剧在中国很受欢迎，历史悠久，有200年历史，在清朝乾隆年间，乾隆对地方剧
有兴趣。
2．1790年，为庆祝乾隆80岁生日，他召集各地方剧团来京为他演出，4个来自安徽
的剧团在庆典后留在北京。
3．1828年，一个湖北剧团来京，在京常与安徽剧团一起演出，两种唱派合在一起，逐
渐形成了一种新剧种，被称为京剧。
4．下面演出开始，希望朋友们喜欢。参考词汇：
地方剧：local opera
乾隆年间：the reign of Qianlong
表演：perform
剧团：troupe
12、（1分）
你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上头痛，医生让你休息两天。你用英语给老师写一个请假条。
13、（1分）
假设你是学生会的负责人，你们要组织一次英语讲座，请用英语写一个通知，把讲座的安排：时间，地点，主讲人，内容，以及注意事项通知大家。
14、（1分）
李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔。因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语，陈小明来信询问学校情况，以下是小华回信的内容。
1．听说你明年来我校学习，我们很高兴。
2．我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校。
3．学校很美，有许多花草树木，两座教学大楼，一座宿舍楼。
4．学校设备优良，有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等。学生除正式课程外，还有许多
选修课，如：油画、打字、烹调等。
5．最重要的是，学校有许多优秀教师，课程有趣，老师既有知识又和蔼，非常愿意帮
助我们，我爱我们的学校，我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。参考词汇：
选修课：elective
体育馆：gym
宿舍楼：dormitory building
15、（1分）
写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。
魏明的美国朋友杰克开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。魏明回信介绍鲁迅：
1．鲁迅是著名的中国作家。他不仅是作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。
2．他的小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片
深刻地揭露了旧社会。毛主席对他有高度评价。他的一些作品还被选入了中学和大
学课本。
3．认为读鲁迅作品对他很有益处。参考词汇：
创始人：Founder
中国文学：Chinese Literature
阿Q正传：The True Story of AH Q
祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice16、（1分）
提示：为引进外资，进一步加快你家乡A城改革开放。你向一位外商介绍你家乡A城。
1．A城是一新开发的经济特区。它是一座具有三十万人口的临海小城。
2．解放前是一个小渔村，以渔业为主，没有工业，只有几所小学。
3．改革开放以来，许多外商到这里投资，经济增长很快，建立了许多大工厂、一个大
港口。港口与国内外许多城市连接。
4．教育有很大的发展，建立了该城第一所大学。已有三千人从该校毕业。我相信，A
城在不久的将来将更加现代化。参考词汇：
投资：invest
经济开发区：an economic-zone
港口：port
17、（1分）
11月11日，你将在家里为你的妹妹15周岁开一个生日晚会，写信给你的外国朋友Peter，邀请他来参加。晚会开始时间是晚上6点，将持续到很晚。告诉Peter每天晚上你都在家，请他给你打个电话告诉你他是否来参加生日晚会，并表达你盼望见到他的心情。
在信的开头告诉Peter你已收到他10月25日的来信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考试未能及时回信。
假设你现在的住址是北京西城区云梯胡同1号楼4门2号。
18、（1分）
给笔友保罗(Paul)的一封信 提示：
1．过了一个很好的寒假，在寒假中与父亲一起回老家河北农村。
2．吃惊于家乡的巨大变化。几乎村里每家都有彩电，许多家盖了新房。有的家还有了
摩托车和小汽车。
3．一位村民自豪地告诉我，他和一部分村民打算参加一个旅游团到国外旅游。
4．我表示羡慕他们，我对父亲说，将来大学毕业要回老家来，父亲也表示说他一退休
就来。
5．你的名字小海。
19、（1分）
张红从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书。写信应聘。以下是张红的简历。
年龄20岁，即将从职业学校毕业。专业：经济管理（business management）。学英语8年，会计算机。在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一，学习成绩在班上优秀。主要是本人喜欢办公室工作，相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机会将十分感谢。
请以张红的名义向公司写信写聘。参考词汇：
职业学校：vocational school
专业：major
20、（1分）
给朋友小林的一封信，谈谈寒假生活。
1．寒假很忙，因为今年七月要参加高考。
2．每天埋头读书，复习每门必修课，做许多练习。
3．学习刻苦，每天学习10小时以上，累时看会儿电视，听音乐，但总不去影剧院。不
得不回绝亲戚朋友的邀请，只在除夕时打电话问候。
4．多希望没有考试，但又不可能，要尽力取得好成绩。考上渴望已久的清华大学。参考词汇：
必修课：required subject
埋头于某事：bury oneself in sth.参考答案：
11、（1分）
Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、（1分）
Dear Mr.Du，I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully，Li Qing
13、（1分）
There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION
14、（1分）
Dear Xiao Ming，I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua
15、（1分）
Dear Jack，I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming
16、（1分）
My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、（1分）
Doorway 4, building 1
Yunti Hu Tong
Xicheng District
Beijing 100037
China
November 4th,1995 Dear peter，Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!
I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves，Zhao Ning
18、（1分）
Dear Paul，How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!
I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?
Here are my best regards to you and your family
Yours Xiao Hai
19、（1分）
Dear Sir：
How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong
20、（1分）Dear Xiao Lin，I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours Wu Qi
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