第一篇：雅思写作100单句练习
雅思写作单句练习
第一组 10词内单句
1.Some students earn some extra cash from part-time jobs.学生们可以通过兼职工作赚到一些零用钱。
核心结构：A earn some extra money from B A从B处赚得零用钱 注：extra cash=pocket-money
2.Industrial particulates are mortally detrimental to one’s physique.工业悬浮颗粒对人的身体有致命伤害。
核心结：A be mortally detrimental to B A对B有致命危害
3.Some parents feel hemmed-in by their daily routines.很多父母感觉他们被工作束缚住了。
核心结构：A feel hemmed-in by B A感觉受到B的牵制(束缚)
4.Give-and-take is common in any relationship.付出与给予是人类社会中的一种普遍关系。
核心结构：A be common in any relationship A是人类社会中的一种普遍关系
5.Youngsters are given to making mistakes.年轻人一定会犯错误。
核心结构：A be given to doing A一定会（做）。
6.Scientific developments have been fast and furious.科技发展业已一日千里。
核心结构：A be fast and furious A一日千里。
7.In the abstract, women are more easy-going.从理论上来说，女性更加和蔼。
核心结构：in the abstract 从理论上来说
8.A violent area is always the locus of poverty.一个充斥着暴力的地区总是贫困地区。核心结构：locus 地点
9.It is too moralistic to condemn new lifestyles.谴责新的生活方式未免有些上纲上线。核心结构：
1.it is moralistic to do(做某事)显得上纲上线。2.condemn 谴责
10.The paranormal can be rarely explained.超自然现象很难得到解释。核心结构：
1.A can be rarely explained A很难得到解释。2.paranormal 超自然的/ 超自然事物
11.Retirees are always unprepared for the oncoming boredom.核心结构：退休者对于即将到来的枯燥生活总是毫无准备。1.A be unprepared for B A对于B毫无准备。2.oncoming 即将到来的
12.Massacres are often done by those unprepossessing loners.大屠杀的实行者总是那些不为人所注意的孤独者。核心结构：unprepossessing 不为人所注意（关注）的
13.The suggestion is weighted against average students.这个建议不利于一般学生。
核心结构：A be weighted against B A不利于B 注：A be weighted against B 所表示的“不利结果”是深思熟虑后得出来的。
14.Conservative people are rather wedded to traditions.保守的人总是遵循传统。
核心结构：A be wedded to B A遵循B “遵循”的其它表达方式：follow/ observe/ adhere to/ stick to/ abide by
15.The reason is not valid.这个理由站不住脚。
核心结构：valid 站得住脚的16.The upshot would be win-win.结果将是双赢的。核心结构： 1.upshot 结果
2.win-win 双赢的
17.The criticism is trenchant indeed.这个批评的确是一针见血.核心结构：trenchant 一针见血的
18.Trials and tribulations always lead us to success.历练与苦难总是会引导我们走向成功。核心结构：trials and tribulations 历练与苦难
19.It is nothing but a piece of excuse.这不过是一个借口。
核心结构：A be nothing but B A不过是B而已。
20.Fairness is the keystone of legislation.公平是立法的基础。
核心结构：keystone 基础
21.Dying patients are not loath to end their lives.垂死的病人情愿结束他们的生命。
核心结构：A be not loath to do A情愿（做某事）注：A be loath to do A勉强（做某事）
22.I obsess over those disabled children.我非常关注那些残疾儿童。
核心结构：A obsess over B A关注B “关注”的其它结构：A be preoccupied with B/ A concentrate on B/ A be engrossed in B(通常指对于工作与学业的关注)/ A be dedicated to B（通常翻译为A致力于B）
23.We must bring perpetrators to justice.我们必须将违法者绳之以法。
核心结构：A bring B to justice A将B绳之以法。
24.I cannot tolerate the permissiveness in education.我无法容忍在教育当中出现的纵容行为。核心结构：permissiveness 纵容行为
25.In the face of a plurality of cultures, I feel befuddled.面对各种各样的文化概念，我感觉头晕目眩。核心结构：
1.in the face of 面对
2.a plurality of 各种各样的
3.befuddled 头晕目眩（文气用法，通常指对概念与观点的茫然、不知所措）
26.Torrents of youngsters flood into universities in frenzy.如潮水一般的年轻人疯狂的涌入大学。核心结构：
1.A flood into B A涌入B 2.in frenzy 疯狂的（副词结构）
27.Teachers tend to be magisterial.教师们总会有些专横跋扈。核心结构：
1.A tend to do A倾向于（做）
2.magisterial 专横跋扈的、权威的（反语或幽默说法）
28.When put in public eyes, the problem is magnified.在公众的眼中，问题总会被放大。核心结构：
1.A put B in public eyes A将B置于公众视线当中。
2.magnify 放大（动词）
29.Offstage, celebrities do not behave differently from commoners.在日常生活中，名人与普通人的表现并无不同。
核心结构：offstage 在台下、在日常生活中（副词结构）
注：offstage的原意是演员为上场前的状态。其实，人生也是一场戏。在台上、在公众面前，人总是会尽量表示出自己优雅、博学、幽默的一面（社会属性），虽然很少有人真正具备这些素质。在台下，我们总是会回归自己的真实属性（自然属性）。难怪先古哲学家苏格拉底讲“人类的全部知识都是隐藏人类自身局限性与愚蠢的知识，我们很少能够解释真实的生活。”多么cynical（犬儒主义的、秉持怀疑论的）的一个哲人啊！
30.The rupture between two generations is caused by communication failure.两代人之间的隔阂是有沟通不畅造成的。核心结构：rupture 隔阂
注：rupture的原意是“断裂”。它最早被借用表示抽象关系还是在哲学专著《论道德的谱系》中。记得在4年前，北大的一些文学博士曾经拿周星驰的电影风格说事，讲他的电影是后现代主义风格。他们英文论文中曾有一个句子“His works mark the rupture between industrial and surrealistic works.”（他的作品标志着工业电影与超现实主义电影的断裂）。后来据星星自己讲“我就是想拍电影，没想成什么后现代主义大师。”
31.Much of pressure is self-inflicted.很多的压力都是自己强加的。
核心结构：self-inflicted自己强加的
32.Many of trendsetters were not pioneers in their childhood.很多先驱者在他们的童年期并不是领袖。核心结构：trendsetter先驱者
注：trend本意为趋势，setter可理解为创造者。可谓“时势造英雄、英雄造时势”。
33.Trepidation is usually caused by inferiority complex.恐慌感总是由自卑造成的。核心结构：
1.trepidation 恐慌
2.inferiority complex 自卑感（情结）
注：complex的形容词意为复杂的，名词为情结（心理学词汇）。复杂就是纠结、情结也是纠结。就是没事和自己较劲！
34.It is hard for us to figure out the definition on an infant prodigy.我们很难得出天才儿童的定义。核心结构：
1.figure out 得出
2.infant prodigy 天才儿童
注：中国古代有个名篇叫《伤仲永》，不知大家看过没有？文中的protagonist（主人公）小小年纪就可以写poem（诗），也许还能写acrostics（藏头、尾诗）。我小的时候只勉强写过几首doggerel（打油诗、歪诗）。
35.No measures are infallible.方法没有绝对无误的。
核心结构：infallible 绝对无误的。
36.One’s childhood and adulthood are inextricable.一个人的童年期与成年期是不能分割的。核心结构：inextricable 不能分割的
37.Some youngsters may commit crimes without rhyme or reason.一些年轻人会无缘无故的犯罪。
核心结构：without rhyme or reason无缘无故地（副词结构）
38.Human society develops invariably to a better state.人类社会总是向好的方向发展。核心结构：
1.invariably总是
2.a better state 一个好的状态 注：大家看过The Day After Tomorrow吗？最近几年气候怪异，地球总发脾气。希望大家能够热爱地球，少用纸巾（facial tissue）、多用手绢(handkerchief)。注意环境保护(environmental protection)。否则说不定世界末日(Armageddon)很快就来了。
39.Rampant hackers are proud of attacking PCs skillfully.猖獗的黑客以能够娴熟的攻击个人电脑为骄傲。核心结构：
1.rampant hacker猖獗的黑客 2.A be proud of B A以B为荣
注：很多的网络犯罪(cyber-crimes)不以为耻、反以为荣(see a crime as a pride)。不过，大家还是要小心被“烧香”。
40.In an extended family, sibling rivalry is rather obvious.在一个大家庭中，兄弟姐妹间的对立是很明显的。核心结构：
1.extended family大家庭
2.sibling rivalry 兄弟姐妹间的对立
注：不知大家是生长在大家庭(extended families由三代或三代以上的人所组成的家庭。看过《我爱我家》没有？对！就是这种！太准确了！)还是小家庭(nuclear families由两代人组成的家庭)中？不过肯定不是丁克家庭(Dink，由两个冷酷的上班族所组成的无小孩家庭。)就对了。
41.Many of traditional beliefs are erased by new ones.很多的传统观念因新观念的出现而消失了。核心结构：erase擦除
42.While inveighing against the phenomenon, we must figure out solutions.在抱怨这种现象的时候，我们必须得出解决方法。核心结构：inveigh against 抱怨、批评（有亵渎意味）
43.Some inveterate liars are born and brought up in violent families.很多有撒谎习惯的人都生长在暴力家庭中。核心结构：inveterate liar习惯撒谎的人
注：大家看过皮诺曹（Pinocchio）的故事吗？
44.Modern buildings are always pale in comparison to ancient ones.与传统建筑相比，现代建筑显得那么苍白。核心结构：in comparison to A 与A相比
45.Large rambling buildings are piled in cities.高大的、杂乱的建筑被堆砌在城市当中。核心结构：rambling杂乱的
注：东京和上海没有什么区别。京都和北京有很大区别。小日本对于传统建筑的保护还是很有一套的。
46.A series of ramifications are bound to be found.核心结构：一系列的后果定会接踵而来。1.a series of 一系列的 2.ramification 后果
3.be bound to do 一定会
47.One’s idiosyncrasies always developed from his childhood.一个人的嗜好总是从他的童年期发展而来的。核心结构：idiosyncrasy 嗜好
注：朱军的童年嗜好一定是看悲剧片。他的《艺术人生》就是一个典型。非把嘉宾、观众（电视里、电视外）弄哭。非把美好的回忆弄成悲剧、赚足眼泪！太没教养！导演、策划、主持人一起没教养！
48.One’s socialization may be encumbered by a multitude of factors.一个人融入社会的过程可能会受到很多因素的制约。核心结构：
1.encumber 阻碍
2.a multitude of 很多的
“很多的”其它结构：multifarious/ various/ a variety of / multifarious
49.Violent crimes are especially rambunctious in under-developed areas.在贫困地区，暴力犯罪尤其猖獗。核心结构：rambunctious 猖獗的
注：美国有个纽约（又叫Big Apple），它由曼哈顿（Manhattan）、布鲁克林（Brooklyn）、皇后区（Queens）、布郎克斯（Bronx）和斯塔滕岛（Staten Island）五个区(Five Boroughs)组成。其中的布鲁克林就曾经是一个暴力犯罪rambunctious地区。
50.One’s savoir-faire is of vital importance to his success.对于一个人的成功而言，社会能力至关重要。核心结构：
1.savoir-fair 社会能力
2.A be of vital importance to B A对B至关重要。
第二组 10--20词单句
In developed areas, neither does the number of population decline nor inclines drastically.在发达地区，人口数量既没有答复下降，也没有答复上升。核心结构：drastically 大幅度地
2.The values, lifestyles, and behavioral ways of rich youngsters have chilling echoes of their poor peers’.富裕阶层年人的价值观、生活方式与行为方式与那些来自贫困阶层的同龄人相比与很大的不同。核心结构：A have chilling echoes of B A与B有很大不同。
3.Feeling dispirited with reality, many of youngsters prefer escapism.对于现实感到绝望，很多年轻人现在都选择了逃避主意。核心结构：
1.A feel dispirited with B A对B没有信心。2.A prefer B A 选择B 3.escapism 逃避主义
注：中国的诗歌文学大体上是“失败者文学”。在众多佳篇中，陶渊明的“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”很好的解释了避世主义思想。
4.Choosing to be self-employed and unemployed has become the ways for youngsters to keep away from office politics.选择自由职业或失业已经成为了年轻人远离办公室政治的手段 核心结构：office politics办公室政治
5.In a trainee-led class, students may be dismissive of their teachers’ orders and, therefore, make teaching activities out of order.在一个以受训者为引导的课堂当中，学生们可能会对教师的命令不理不睬，并使得教学活动失去秩序。核心结构：
1.A be dismissive of B A对B不理睬
2.A make B out of order A使得B失去秩序
6.Against sticky Muzak, passengers are becoming drowsy in stuffy compartments and, more ridiculously, never fall asleep successfully.听着索然无味的背景音乐，乘客们在不透气的车厢里变得昏昏欲睡。更荒唐的是，他们从未成功入睡。核心结构：Muzak 背景音乐
7.Public interest in charitable undertaking is in danger of petering out.核心结构：
1.A be in danger of B A处于B的危险之中 2.peter out 消失
8.Food, medical facilities, and teaching staff are always under-resourced in remote areas.在偏远地区，食物、医疗设施以及教学人员总是数量不足。核心结构：under-resourced 供应不足的
9.In face of the deterioration of public morality, we should abnegate ourselves first and any commentaries without actions are superfluous.面对公众道德沦丧现象的时候，我们应该首先自律。任何没有行动的评论都是多余的。核心结构： 1.abnegate自律 2.commentary评论 3.superfluous 多余的
10.While attacking those supine journalists, we must be firstly aware that being loyal to governments is the precondition for them to survive.在攻击那些懒惰的记者的同时，我们必须首先意识到对于政府的忠诚是记者们生存的前提。核心结构：
1.supine journalist懒惰的记者 2.be aware that 意识到
3.A be loyal to B A对B忠诚 4.precondition 前提
注：前提的表达方式: premise/ prerequisite/ precondition
11.After the artistic disciplining like dancing or performing, one’s deportment will become obviously graceful.在学习了类似舞蹈和表演这样的艺术课程后，一个人的气质会明显变得优雅。核心结构：deportment 气质、举止、仪态
12.Frequent edifying conversations can well enlighten children.经常性的启迪性对话可以很好的启蒙儿童。核心结构：edifying 具有启迪性的
13.Dancing against strong rhythm, youngsters are pulsating with excitement in pubs.伴随着强劲的节奏，年轻人们在酒吧里发狂的跳动。核心结构：pulsate跳动
14.In the course of urbanization, thousands acres of farming lands have become factories on the periphery of cities.在城市化过程中，数千顷城市周边的农用地已经成为了工厂。核心结构：
1.urbanization城市化
2.periphery周边的、外围的
15.The aged, especially those from empty-nest families, are in eager need for reassurance.老年人，尤其是那些来自于空巢家庭的老年人，急需安慰 核心结构：
1.empty-nest family空巢家庭
2.A be in eager need for B A急需B 3.reassurance保证、安慰 注：“空巢家庭”对于我们是一个较新的概念，它通常指代无子女家庭。无子女有三种状态，一种是老龄化的DINK家庭，第二种是因为子女外出求学、组建新的家庭、或工作而造成的、最后一种则是由丧子造成的。以目前的情况看，中国未来的空巢家庭会越来越多。也许政府应该鼓励、组织空巢家庭间的聚会以缓解留守老人的孤独感(the sense of loneliness)和空虚感(the sense of emptiness)。
16.The saddest episodes in one’s tormented life really teach a person a lot.在饱受风霜的生活中，最悲惨的生活片断往往会教会一个人很多。核心结构： 1.episode片段
2.tormented受折磨的
17.According to my own experience, one’s success is extraneous to his educational level.根据我的个人经验，一个人的成功往往与他的受教育水平毫不相关。核心结构：A be extraneous to B A与B毫不相关
18.Not pessimistically, violent crimes cannot be exterminated in urban areas as long as social gaps are not bridged.不悲观的来说，只要社会差距不被弥合，城市地区的暴力犯罪就不会被根除。核心结构：
1.pessimistically 悲观地（副词）2.exterminate根除
注：根除的表达方式eradicate/ root out/ exterminate
19.Extramural activities, if well-organized, are decisive for students’ successful socialization.假如组织得当，校外活动对于孩子的社会化进程将起到关键作用。核心结构：extramural activity 校外活动
20.When feeling scandalized by domestic violence, I feel necessary to probe into the root causes to this phenomenon.在对家庭暴力感到极度反感的共识，我感觉有必要深入分析一下这种现象的根本原因。核心结构：
1.A feel scandalized by B A对B感到极度反感 2.A probe into B A深入分析B
21.The measure of educating highly-intelligent children separately may suffocate average students’ aspiration for their successful life.单独教育高智商儿童的方式可能会扼杀普通学生对于成功生活的渴望。核心结构：A suffocate B A使B窒息、A扼杀B
22.Looking into the recent cases of campus massacres, we can find that the attacks were always premeditated.深入研究最近的校园流血事件，我们可以发现最近的一系列袭击都是有预谋的。核心结构：premeditate预谋（动词）
23.Being mentally immature and sociably inexperienced, many of youngsters are easy to be deceived by subterfuges.由于心理上的不成熟和社会经验的缺乏，一些年轻人很容易被假话欺骗。核心结构：
1.mentally immature 心理上不成熟的 2.A be deceived by B A被B蒙骗 3.subterfuge 假话、借口
24.In the vicinity of urban areas, the public facilities like medical and teaching organizations are still short of well-trained professionals.在城市周边地区，医院及教学机构等公众设施仍然缺乏训练有素的专业人才。核心结构：
1.A be in the vicinity of B
A在B的周边 2.A be short of B A缺少B
25.The vicissitudes of communication ways are gradually making the aged marginalized and generation gaps widened.交流方式的变迁正在使得老年人边缘化、代沟加深。核心结构：
1.vicissitude 变迁
2.marginalized 被边缘化的
注：落日余晖下(in the afterglow)，我们总会看到一些老人百无聊赖的(in ennui)坐在小区的某个阴凉处(shady places)、茫然的(blindly)注视着过往的行人(passers-by)。他们不主动与行人交流、也不奢望行人停下来与他们交流，因为主流社会与“被边缘化社会”之间几乎没有交集。
26.Many of youngsters are proud of telling ribald jokes and regard it as a sign of maturity.一些年轻人以讲下流笑话为骄傲，因为他们认为这是一种成熟的象征。核心结构：ribald joke 下流笑话
注：这些孩子也许是受到了他们父辈或父辈朋友的影响。社交酒局还是少带孩子去为好。社会虽然并不干净，但还是得让孩子心灵纯洁一阵儿。
27.The results of campus poll will be skewed since the voters are always well skimmed off and those average ones are excluded on purpose.校园选举的结果总是不公正的，因为投票者总是经过精挑细选的。那些普通学生总是被故意排斥在外。核心结构：
1.campus poll 校园选举 2.skew 歪斜的
3.skim off 优中选优
4.on purpose 故意（副词结构）
28.It is inhuman to tame wild animals and cage them in zoos permanently.驯服野生动物并将他们永久关在动物园力的做法是不人道的。核心结构：
1.It is inhuman to(do)做……是不人道的 2.tame 驯服
3.cage 笼子（名词）、关住（动词）4.permanently 永久性的、终身性的
29.Although in the habit of being obsequious, pets may attack their owners all of a sudden.核心结构：
虽然习惯于献媚，但宠物有可能突然袭击他们的主人。1.A be in the habit of doing A有做……的习惯 2.obsequious 献媚的
3.all of a sudden 忽然地（副词结构、通常置于句尾）
30.The generality of office ladies have had the idea of returning to their families and being house-wives.核心结构：绝大多数的职业女性都曾经有过回归家庭、安心当家庭主妇的想法。1.the generality of 绝大多数的
31.Urbanization, although seeming to be an irreversible result of population growth, is caused by both gentrification and industrialization in fact.城市化现象，虽然看起来是人口增长的必然结果，事实上是由士绅化与工业化所造成的。核心结构：
1.an irreversible result 一个不可逆转（必然）的结果 2.gentrification 士绅化
3.industrialization 工业化
注：最近4年，中国的房地产发展在价格上、区域上、概念炒作上都到达了令人瞠目结舌的地步。城市中心的住宅不断翻新、价格也是一路高歌猛进。有钱阶层占据了城市的心脏位置，以前在这里居住的人可以得到一些补偿费，然后他们搬到了城市的周边地区。那么城市周边地区的人怎么办？往乡村搬！这就是士绅阶层对城市化进程所施加的影响。
32.Driven by envy and vanity, the idea of making money by fair means or foul will naturally germinate in a poor girl’s mind.受到嫉妒心与虚荣心的驱使，不择手段赚钱的想法会很自然的在贫穷女孩的头脑中萌芽。核心结构：
1.A be driven by B A被B驱使 2.envy and vanity 嫉妒心与虚荣心
3.by fair means or foul 不择手段地（副词结构）4.germinate 萌芽
33.The phenomenon of gerontocracy has existed for millennia because the young are accustomed to following the aged.因为年轻人习惯于跟从老年人，所以老年政权现象得以存在了几个世纪的时间。核心结构：
1.gerontocracy 老年政权
2.A be accustomed to(doing)A习惯于做……
34.Youngsters observe that the marital relationship of their parents is nothing but an empty charade.年轻人发现他们父母之间的婚姻关系不过是一场没有实质内容的猜谜游戏。核心结构：
1.marital relationship 婚姻关系
2.A be nothing but B A不过是B而已
3.an empty charade 一场没有实质内容的猜谜游戏
35.Licenses are inactive in some situations in fact because youngsters’ desire to consume alcohol can hardly be controlled.因为年轻人对于酒精类饮品的消费很难被控制，所以，事实上，禁令在很多情况下是没有作用的。核心结构：A be inactive in B A在B当中是没有作用的
36.Environmental protection did not become a contentious issue until the end of 1980s.直达20世纪80年代末，环境保护问题才成为了一个倍受争议的问题。核心结构：a contentious issue 一个倍受争议的问题
37.The decadence of young offenders is always firstly caused by their families and then society.少年犯的堕落首先是由他们的家庭造成的、然后才是由社会造成的。核心结构：decadence 堕落
38.Most adults are unaware of the social contract they have been subject to since childhood.核心结构：
很多成年人从少年时代起就不知道他们要受制于社会契约。1.A be unaware of B A不知道B 2.A be subject to B A受到B的限制
注：“无规矩不成方圆”就是社会契约的最好概括。
39.The generality of parents tend to constrain their children under the misconception that their children are their properties.由于怀有子女是他们私人财产的错误观念，绝大多数的父母倾向于压制他们的子女。核心结构：
1.A constrain B A压制B 2.under the misconception that…..怀有……的错误观念（THAT后接从句）
40.Although encouraging youngsters to play their roles in social activities, I cannot condone violence under any circumstances.虽然鼓励年轻人在社会活动中扮演他们自己的角色，但是在任何情况下我都不能容忍暴力行为。核心结构：
1.A play a role in B A在B当中扮演角色 2.condone 容忍
3.under any circumstances 在任何情况下
41.In terms of environmental pollution, if enterprises are compared to offenders, governments must be their confederates.就环境污染来说，假如企业被比作主犯，那么政府就是他们的帮凶。核心结构：
1.in terms of 就……而言
2.A be compared to B A被比作B 3.confederate 帮凶
42.I am now frequently astounded by human beings’ cupidity to amass fortune at the cost of conscience.我经常被人类以良心为代价敛财的贪婪心理所震惊。核心结构：
1.A be astounded by B A被B震惊 2.cupidity 贪婪
3.amass fortune 敛财
4.at the cost of 以…..为代价
43.It is apparent that younger and older generations hold diametrically opposing ideas to this phenomenon.很显然年轻人与老年人对于这个现象有截然相反的观点。核心结构：diametrically opposing ideas 截然相反的观点
44.It has always been a human frailty to attack others to avoid being hurt.通过攻击他人以获得自身保护是一个由来已久的人性弱点。核心结构：a human frailty 一个人性的弱点
注：“趋利避害(pursue benefit and avoiding being hurt””是人性的一个核心。不过“害他避害(avoid being hurt by hurting others)”或“害他趋利(pursue benefit by hurt others)”总是不好的。
45.Neglecting or even discriminating the disabled is obviously a shame of our social mechanism.忽略甚至是歧视残疾人很明显是我们社会体制中的一个耻辱 核心结构：mechanism 体制
46.Annually, millions of drug fiends die after overdosing heroine or other forbidden medicines.每年都有数百万瘾君子在吸食了过量的海洛因或其它禁药后死亡。核心结构：overdose 过量吸食
47.Life seems to have lost its savor for those retirees because they frequently feel abandoned by society.由于时常感觉到被社会所遗弃，对于退休者说生活已经没有了味道。核心结构：
1.A lose A’s savor A丢掉了A的味道
2.A feel abandoned by B A感觉被B所遗弃
48.Unable to solve survival difficulties, many of well-educated youngsters may adopt even tougher measures to be revenged on society.由于无法解决生活中的难题，很多受过良好教育的年轻人也许会使用更为极端的方式报复社会。由于无法 核心结构：
1.well-educated 受过良好教育的 2.A be revenged on B A报复B
49.So-called equality between two genders can hardly be balanced in long-run because of the long-established social moral system.由于长期以来存在的社会道德体系，从长期来看，男性与女性之间的所谓平等关系是很难得到平衡的。核心结构：so-called 所谓的
50.The introduction of synthetic materials into our life is, on one hand, reducing the consumption of natural resources and, on the other hand, polluting environment.在一个方面来看，合成材料进入我们的生活后的确减少了自然资源的消耗，但是在另外一个方面看来，合成材料也污染了环境。
核心结构：synthetic materials 合成材料
第二篇：高考单句改错练习
2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练—名词
一、考点规律分析短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用
(13)I was afraid she would have left for family when I got there.(14)He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures.(15)There’s a paper’s factory near our school.单数的地方误用其复数。
二、真题单句归纳(1)We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream.(2)We climb everywhere, not only in America.We have been to Europe many time.(3)There are branch library in many villages.(4)I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon.(5)Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family.(6)They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.(7)We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.(8)…and often watch football match on TV together.(9)Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!(10)She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success.(11)I used to love science class — all of them— biology, chemistry, geography, physics.(12)They did not want me to do any work at family.(13)…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(14)On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.(15)No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to.(16)Their word were a great encouragement to me.(17)You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”(18)…but after class we become stranger at once.(19)You can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet.(20)Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby…(21)She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when…(22)Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.三、模拟单句演练(1)Women live longer than men in most country.(2)The film is very interesting.I have seen it many time.(3)It’s said that all the ticket have been sold out.(4)The children spend a lot of times watching TV.(5)I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday.(6)The flower in the park were all pleasing.(7)As the day went by, she became less anxious.(8)Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country.(9)It’s one of the most interesting book that I’ve ever read.(10)He made his first time visit to China when he was 18.(11)Hearing the news, the woman burst into tear.(12)He hasn’t lived here long, but he has a great many friend here.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练----代词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾语变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。
二、真题单句归纳(1)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.(2)When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook head.(3)We climb everywhere, not only in America.They have been to Europe many times.(4)And I can’t forget the good food you cooked for I.(5)I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon.(6)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(7)And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.(8)Now I can’t watch much television, but a few years ago…(9)Now someone at home reads instead.(10)I’m spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it.(11)The day before the speech contest(比赛)English teacher talked to me.(12)I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works.(13)…in any other words, I am an only child.(14)For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place(15)Then he ate it all, by himself.He never helped other.(16)The three of them were very excited.(17)But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son.(18)According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school.(19)…and tried to translate anything into English.(20)…as I was learning to express me in simple English.(21)One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.(21)At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.(22)And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own(23)If any one of us had any difficulty in our life or study, the other would help him out.(24)What’s more, you have to be friendly with your pupils and take good care of him.三、模拟单句演练(1)Here are some letters for you and he.(2)She loves swimming.It keeps she fit.(3)Here are the cats Auntie brought us.Take good care of it.(4)Everyone here gets up earlier than her does.(5)Here is my dog.It’s name is Petty.(6)He opened mouth as if to say something.试卷
(7)Don’t lose your heart.Try again.(8)The Smiths have been married, but have no children of his own.(9)I tell him everything, for he is a good friend of me.(10)He smiled at her and laid her hand on hers.(11)When you are away from home, you should look after you.(12)If you have any question, put up hand.(13)It’s a very important thing.You must think over carefully.(14)I don’t like these;please show me some other.(15)In order to catch the thief, the police did his best.(16)This is the book which you bought it for me ten years ago.(17)I’m very sorry about all the whole thing.(18)When I got up, I found parents were preparing breakfast for me.(19)Yes, money is very important, but it is not anything.(20)At the airport, all his baggage was stolen, but soon he got them back.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-冠词
一、考点规律分析短文改错对冠词的考查主要涉及冠词的误加和漏用，有时也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词的用法区别(包括 a 与 an 的区别)。其中，涉及最多的是，当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时，其前漏用不定冠词；另外，冠词在一些习语中的用法也是一个重要考点。
二、真题单句归纳(1)After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.(2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.(2)Some people read the books or watch television while others have sports.(3)Good health is person’s most valuable possession.(4)Modern people know more about the health, have better food, and live in clearer surroundings.(5)There is public library in every town in Britain.(6)Maybe you could come during a winter holidays.(7)Today I visited the Smiths — my first visit to a American family.(8)Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team.(9)Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another.(10)I’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday.(11)Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.(12)For example, when I was a child, the rain was a mystery(奥秘).(13)We may be one family and live under a same roof.(14)As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(15)My teacher advised me to keep my diary.(16)When I was boy, the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival.(16)On Thursday I will have to decide what I want to do over a weekend.(17)And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of their own and discover an
interest which can even last lifetime.(18)Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.(19)As we all left home at early age,…
(20)My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.三、模拟单句演练(1)Her sister, who is nurse, will marry one of the doctors in the hospital.(2)It was such wonderful dinner that we enjoyed it very much.(3)It was raining hard, so I had to borrow a umbrella.(4)My friend Mary comes from an European country.(5)Mr Smith used to be physics teacher till he turned writer.(6)In small village like this, everybody knows everybody else.(7)Only few of the children can read such books.(8)For long time neither of us spoke to each other.(9)Look, a girl in blue is my cousin.(10)Look!A car has stopped there.A car is beautiful.(11)She asked whether we came from a same city.(12)The mountain was covered with the snow all the year round.(13)You don’t know what wonderful time we’ve had.(14)People made the fun of her because she wore such strange clothes.(15)Soon the plane was out of the sight.(16)Great changes have taken the place in my hometown since 1978.(17)In the word, he is a good student and all of us like him.(18)You say you took the book without his permission.In the other words, you stole it.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-形容词与副词
一、考点规律分析短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用(尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误加more)、形容词与副词的混用(如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名词时误用副词)等，另外，用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词(如 in, down 等)的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as 结构、how 与 what 的混用等也是常考的考点。
二、真题单句归纳(1)After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening.(2)Charles said, “As soon as I see a realy tall building, I want to climb it.(3)Last Sunday, police cars hurry to the taller building in New York.(4)As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.(5)Therefore, there are still some countries where people have shorter lives.(6)People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago.(7)In some places you may borrow many books as you want.(8)I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had.(9)I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting.(10)I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(11)First, let me tell you something more about myself.(12)I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.(13)Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience.(14)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.(15)I think I liked those classes because I felt that they helped me understand what the world works.(16)After learning the basics of the subject,nothing else seemed very practically to me.(17)Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.(18)What things are in other homes, I wonder.(19)For instance, one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning.(20)But he is difference now.(21)The time passes quickly.Evening came down.(22)…although radios can be very noise.(23)…all planned and written by grown-ups to make children want things that they don’t real need.(24)But one of the best players in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball any more.(25)But one of the best players in our team told me just now that he wouldn’t play basketball once more.(26)I would describe myself as shy and quietly.(27)Finding information on the Net is easily.(28)Yes, a concert can be very excited.(30)Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun.(31)She called 119 immediate.(32)However,we seldom felt lonely or helplessly.三、模拟单句演练(1)I’ll try to be more carefully next time.(2)China is much more bigger than the United States.(3)There are few boys than girls in our class.(4)He says that skiing is much exciting than skating.(5)The more money you make, the most you spend.(6)He found someone was following her, so she felt frightening.(7)It was real very dangerous.You might have injured yourself.(8)In fact, we finished the work without any difficult.(9)Look at the asleep boy.How lovely!(10)The fish tastes well;why not have a try?(11)Last week was very rain.I didn’t go out the whole week.(12)The sun rises in the east and sets down in the west.(13)I promise to return back before 10.(14)The book contains much use information.It’s well worth reading.(15)This is quite far the mostly expensive bicycle in the shop.(16)The workers warm welcomed us at their offices.(17)Oh, it’s simply wonderfully to see you here!(18)She is in more health now than she was last year.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-介词
一、考点规律分析短文改错对介词的考查主要涉及在及物动词后接宾语时误加介词和在不及物动词后接宾语时漏加介词、可直接用作状语的副词短语前误加介词、介词与其他词的常用搭配、常用介词的基本用法、习语中的介词用法等。
二、真题单句归纳
(1)Bill insisted in staying near the car.(2)Suddenly we caught sight at a car and some men.(3)When I have free time I go a long walk.(4)When they came down the police were angry to them.(5)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.(6)…and some books, for example, books for history, science, cooking and gardening are also popular.(7)I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.(8)It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station.(9)In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.(10)We practise for three times every week.(11)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.(12)Unfortunately, there are too many people among my family.(13)I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing…(14)Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday.(15)So I’m really sorry thatI won’t be able to come in this time.(16)…but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together.(17)For instance, on one night he played strong and loud music till four o’clock in the morning.(18)I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.(19)His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination.(20)I feel sorry to him.(21)Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(22)On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials…(23)The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese…(24)I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.So I feel unhappy every day.(25)You can find all kinds information in just a few minutes on the Internet.(26)But I have spent lots my money, …(27)…you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’ Club…(28)We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about.三、模拟单句演练(1)We must serve for the people heart and soul.(2)I followed the man for a while, and saw him enter into the bank.(3)Soon the nurse married with my friend Jim.(4)I took a great many of photographs in the mountains.(5)In English class, we often talk each other in English.(6)Don’t talk.What the man says is well worth listening.(7)The chair looks hard, but it is comfortable to sit.(8)She was very kind and insisted lending her car to us.(9)I asked to her what she would be doing on Saturday.(10)Are you glad to be going to back to school?(11)On his way to home, he met one of his old friends Jack.(12)Please close the door at next time you come in.(13)Thousands of people go to the seaside in every year.(14)We can finish the work either this week or in next week.(15)We walked down the stairs instead taking the elevator.(16)We could not have heard them because the noise from the river.(17)Don’t be angry to me for not having written—I was really too busy.(18)I’ve read a lot books about animals.(19)He invited us to dinner, which was very kind for him.(20)I knew that there was no hope on the moment I saw him.(21)Don’t go by plane.It’s a lot of more expensive.(22)Except milk and cheese, we all need vegetables.(23)On my way back, I called at Mr Smith at his office.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-非谓语动词
一、考点规律分析 短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号 to 的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。
二、真题单句归纳(1)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.(2)…rather than go into the forest and getting lost.(3)David pointed to a path which he thought would probably leading to a village.(4)I went back to get David and helped him to stood up.(5)Charles and Linda Mason do all of these things as well as climbed building.(6)Modern people know more about health, have better food, and to live in clearer surroundings.(7)The World Health Organization andother organizations are working improve health all over theworld.(8)…you pay the cost of send a postcard, the librarian will write to you.(9)…and let you to know when the book you want has returned(10)I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays.(11)I had always wanted return to the village after moving away.(12)It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.(13)I look forward to hear from you soon.(14)Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.(15)I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort.(16)I’d like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning.(17)I’ll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it.(18)But then there is always more mysteries look into.(19)After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practical to me.(20)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.(21)He did not want share things with other people.(22)That is, a game of tennis making him very busy.(23)As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(24)But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(25)…children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.(26)…to make children to want things that they don’t really need.(27)Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.(28)Shake her head, she said, “It isn’t a good time to do that, dear.”(29)It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books.(30)I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks.(31)I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.(32)I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls.三、模拟单句演练(1)In those days we were forced work twelve hours a day.(2)It’s very difficult for a foreigner learn Chinese.(3)It was silly of you believe what he said.(4)He was made wash the boss’s car once a day.(5)I’ll let you to know as soon as I hear from her.(6)I waved to her but failed attract her attention.(7)I have already seen the film twice.I don’t want see it any more.(8)What I want know is when all this happened.(9)It was clear that he wanted be alone.(10)Most children are interested in listen to stories.(11)Walk quickly is difficult for an old man.(13)Be careful in cross the street.(14)The film is very interesting.It is worth see twice.(15)Find work is very difficult these days.(16)Most of us students enjoy ask questions in English.(17)Look, some of my classmates are practising speak English over there.(18)Teach a child to sing and dance is very interesting.(19)Learn to speak English is more difficult than to write it.(20)My friend Jim is very good at making things and repair things.(21)He decided to go to the south, find a good job and living there.(22)It was very kind of you to buy us some much fruit and seeing us at the station.(23)Excuse me, would you to tell me the way to the zoo?
2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-动词高考英语短文改错考点类析·动词用法
一、考点规律分析此考点归纳的是除动词时态与非谓语动词之外的动词考点，它包括被动语态、情态动词、动词形式的变化、动词用法辨析、动词 be 的误加与漏用等。
二、真题单句归纳(1)He lied down by the side of the path to rest.(2)Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building.、(3)Books may be keep for four weeks.(4)…and let you know when the book you want has returned.(5)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.(6)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.(7)I’d like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about your country.(8)What your favourite sport?(9)I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.(10)I was used to watch it every night.(11)There will an important game next month.(12)Because of so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves.(13)I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day.(14)As we were all left homeat an early age.(15)I often dream of a teacher.(16)Without enough knowledges,you can never learn well.三、模拟单句演练(1)I want to know how long the book can be keep.(2)Don’t worry.Your child is well looking after here.(3)All the invitations must sent out today.(4)You are an expert on this.You might invited to speak at the meeting.(5)The public have a right to know what in the report.(6)What the English for this? Can anyone tell me?(7)He says that he likes singing and that he wants to a singer.(8)He is a nice girl.You’re certain to happy with her.(9)I use to play tennis a lot but I don’t play very often now.(10)He has changed a lot.He is not what he was used to be.(11)It was very cold.The snow lied thick on the ground.(12)There will have an English film in the school hall tonight.(13)After that, the boy decided not to a sailor.(14)After supper, my father would go out for a walk and then come back to see newspapers.(15)Hear to me carefully.What I’m saying is very important.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-主谓一致
一、考点规律分析从广义来说，英语中的一致问题涉及多个方面，如主谓一致、人称的一致、并列结构的前后一致等。由于人称的一致已归入“代词”考点、并列结构的前后一致已分别归入非谓语动词、时态等，所以这里只归纳主谓一致问题。
二、真题单句归纳(1)Bill was standing at the side of the car, talking to two men who was helping him to repair it.(2)Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.(3)Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.(4)But then there is always more mysteries to look into.(5)But not allinformation are good to society.(6)So then, a concert cost so much.I may just listen to music.(7)If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.(8)…youwill probably want to join the Stamp Collectors’ Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.(10)One evening she told me that something happened when their parents was out.三、模拟单句演练(1)Her parents were in Shanghai, and so was his.(2)As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.(3)The police was looking for the murderer everywhere in the city.(4)Writing English and speaking it is different things.(5)It is the parents and their son who wants to buy the bicycle.(6)What he said at the meeting were very important to us.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练--时态
一、考点规律分析动词时态考点主要涉及一般现在时与一般过去的区别，其命题方式通常是在一个一般现在时的背景下误用某个一般过去时；或者反过来，在一个一般过去时的背景下误用某个一般现在时。从所涉及的动词来看，主要涉及be 和 have两个常用动词。有时也涉及其他时态，如一般将来时，现在完成时等，但很少见。
二、真题单句归纳(1)We were driving along a narrow road when the car stop…(2)…and had returned to the car!Bill is standing at the side of the car(3)Two months ago they were back in America.Last Sunday, police cars hurry to the…(4)Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.(5)Also, scientists and doctors had learned how to deal with many diseases.(6)Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them.(7)If the book you will want is out, you may ask for it to be called back for you.(8)I had always wanted to return to the village after moving away and it is really great to see most of my old friends again.(9)They offered me coffee and other drinks.We have a good time talking and laughing together.(10)I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang.(11)My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school football team.(12)I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set.(13)I’d like very much to come but I had an examination on Monday morning.It is a very…(14)I remembered her words and calm down.(15)They did not want me to do any work at home;they want me to devote all my time to…(16)He said he is busy.(17)On the way up I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.(18)But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son.(19)At once I apologizeand controlled myseff at my best till the dinner started.(20)Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once.(21)She stopped to look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house.(22)We were living in a big family.We treat each other as brothers and sisters.(23 I am always young when I was staying with them.三、模拟单句演练(1)Just now Jim tells me his mother was ill.(2)I phone the other students a moment ago.(3)We often played together when we are children.(4)What are you doing when I called you?(5)I see you in the park.You were talking to a pretty girl.(6)She doesn’t hear the doorbell, for she was watching TV.(7)We’ll stay at home playing cards if it will rain tomorrow.(8)Please let me know if you will have any trouble.(9)He hurt his back when he is playing football with his classmates.(10)I’ll write to him when I finished the book.(11)Charles worked hard since leaving school.(12)In fact, I am very thin when I was young.(13)He is kind to me.Although he is very busy, he still came to see me.(14)How long have you been here? How did you like our city?(15)As is known to us all, the earth turned around the sun.(16)I’m interested in English, so I spoke it better than the others do.(17)Don’t worry about it.I promise you I come to help you.(18)Now everything is dear.Even a small piece of bread cost one yuan.(19)Remember to turn off the lights before you will leave.(20)I forget to tell him the news.Shall we telephone him now? 2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练-从句
一、考点规律分析短文改错对从句引导词的考查主要涉及根据句意正确选用引导词、引导词的误加与漏用、将不是从句的东西误认为是从句而误加引导词等。
二、真题单句归纳(1)In the last five years that they’ve climbed churches, high buildings and television towers.(2)Charles said, “As soon I see a really tall building, I want to climb it.(3)Most people can quickly get help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.(4)However, there are still some countries there people have shorter lives.(5)…in other places where you are limited to a certain number, of which some may be novels.(6)…in other places you are limited to a certain number, of that some may be novels.(7)…and whether you pay the cost of sending a postcard, the librarian will write to you.(8)I also enjoyed the evenings when we spent together.(9)I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.(10)…but it didn’t matter that I would win or not.(11)I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf.(12)In one class, I learned it rained.(13)For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put it in a secret place where I couldn’t find.(14)It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.(15)Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me.(16)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.(17)It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.三、模拟单句演练(1)He is the man his car was stolen.(2)That’s the hotel which we were staying last summer.(3)That’s the palace where we visited last summer.(4)I suddenly woke up in mid-night.And it was a long time I got to sleep again.(5)In the past few years when we’ve planted thousands of trees along the river.(6)At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.(7)He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.(8)She stayed in France for 10 years.That’s she spoke French so well.(9)It’s really a beautiful place, where everyone hopes to visit.(10)It cost nothing.Anyone can get it unless he likes it.2013-2014火箭班高考英语短文改错分类训练·并列连词
一、考点规律分析短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及and, but, or, so 等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。严格说来，这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。
二、真题单句归纳(1)We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.(2)I told Mother, Father, Sister, all my friends here what a great time I had.(3)It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it.(4)She was smiling but nodding at me.(5)It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.(6)The food was expensive and the service was good.(7)I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games.(8)My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.(9)So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you…(10)Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(11)I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.三、模拟单句演练(1)Do you want a bath at once, and shall I have mine first?(2)Are you going to clean your car before and after supper?(3)Hurry up, and you’ll be late for school.(4)She never said she was rich, and she was.(5)Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.(6)Everyone asked me to go, but I went
第三篇：雅思写作
翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。
一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说
盲点1：无话可说
这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。
盲点1击破：四多原则
多看范文；多关注时事，观察生活；多与人交流；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中，分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，如果某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。
盲点2：千言万语
这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。
盲点2击破：词以类记原则
此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)
盲点3：标新立异
这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求与众不同。
盲点3击破：自圆其说原则
雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据
言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。
盲点4：真情流露
这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝”之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。
盲点4击破：切中主题原则
这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架，并严格执行。如在写argumentation类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。
二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水
盲点1：天马行空
这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或冲突。
盲点1击破：起承转合原则
除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。”的逻辑框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that „(起);because they maintain that „。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact „.。(转);Therefore , I believe „。(合)
盲点2：单句游离
这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，逻辑连词也使用错误。或者是标点不注意。最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却无数次被误解成递进。
盲点2击破：行云流水原则
考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词，力求做到行云流水，常见的逻辑连词有：
因果关系：
因：As since due to owning to
果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result
表目的：thereby
举例关系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。
让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if
三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放
盲点1 ： 遭遇生词
大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。
盲点1击破：同义改写原则
其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。
注意：对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则，毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。
盲点2：同义重现
如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳，分数自然不高。
盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则
其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。
盲点3：大词连篇
很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。
盲点3击破：整体协调原则
看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现，考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数，真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击，最后只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。
三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致
盲点1：长篇累牍
和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。
盲点1击破：长短结合原则
事实上，如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。
盲点2：短小精悍
和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。
盲点2击破：灵活多变原则
这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability这个简单句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到：
It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。
通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到：
So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。
通过插入语的包装我们可以得到：
Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。
通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到：
Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。
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通过如此灵活的加工和包装，你会发现，简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。
总之，掌握了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。（编
第四篇：雅思写作
雅思写作范文
Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However，some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings？ Should history stand in the way of progress？Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people，tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings，like our native language，forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect，old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance，the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing，Siheyuan，are once seen as the remains of the Old World，and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings，once gone，are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover，old buildings，if planed and preserved properly，could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France，aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast，the new learn from the old，a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However，we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered，the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed，old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time，we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.
第五篇：雅思写作
很多人在准备雅思考试的初期都会问几乎相同的问题：“需要多大的词汇量？”“应该背哪本词汇表？”就这些问题，北语雅思的看法如下：
雅思是个能力考试（a proficiency test），与人们所熟悉的 achievement test 不同。
所谓 achievement test，是指那些对学生所学过的知识进行检测的考试。如每学期的期 中、期末考试。一般来说，在这样的考试前，学校都会安排复习，老师也许还会划定复习范围。这些考试都和教学大纲规定的内容和进度等有关。考试的内容一般不超出大纲规定的内容。以英语为例，大纲规定了词汇表，试题中如有超纲词要注明中文定义。所以，每当面临一个新的考试时，考生会很自然地问：看哪几本书？有没有词汇表？
一般来说，proficiency test 与教学进度、内容、教学大纲等无关，自然也与词汇表无关。市面上有“雅思词汇”
七、八本之多，均为出版社为了赚钱，雇人编写的，没有一本具有所谓“权威性”。稍好一些的有例句说明单词的用法，差的只给出中文定义。如果想背词汇，随便买本“托福词汇”、“
四、六级词汇”、甚至某本英汉辞典，效果是一样的。
其实，词汇的最好学习方法是通过大量的阅读来学习，而这种大量的阅读正是雅思考试阅读部分所侧重的。备战一个 proficiency test 时，最好的准备方法就是：考什么，准备什么。考阅读，就通过阅读准备，而不是通过背词汇表准备。
常有考生问：考雅思需要多大的词汇量？很多人把词汇量看成是能力的标志，这又回到 achievement test 和 achievement test 问题上。如果能从知识和能力的方面划分考试的话，对词汇量的测试是知识型的测试。有些考生可以得很高的知识分，但能力欠佳，即所谓“高分低能”。换言之，词汇量不是能力标志。从另一个角度看，词汇量的统计也有问题。以下这些词怎么算：
act, actor, actress, action, active, activity, react, reactive, reaction, counteract, interact, hyperactive 等等，这到底算几个词。
那么该用什么来判断一个人是否达到了挑战雅思的水平呢？很简单，做
一、两套模拟题就可以了。拿体育作比喻，如果你想知道自己跑一百米需要多少秒，最好的办法就是去跑。而不是分析自己的心脏情况、血压、体重等。当你知道自己“吃几碗干饭”，再去做相应的准备，去有针对性地练爆发力、步幅、节奏等。
在作听力和阅读试题时，三分之一的正确率就是一个很好的起点。经过一学期的脱产培训，在考试中获得6段是有可能的。如果起始正确率能达到三分之二，也许不用参加培训，考自己多做几套模拟试题，就可以获得很好的成绩。如果正确率在三分之一以下，那就不应该上雅思培训班，而应该上一个不和任何考试挂
钩的培训班。这样的班更好地解决打基础、提高能力的问题，因为大部分雅思培训班都花很多达到时间琢磨应试技巧，而顾及不到能力的提高。
如何自测口语和写作呢？看一看雅思口语和写作的题目，你自己离议论这些题目还差多远？要想在口语和写作考试中获得有意义的分数（6段），应该能达到“侃”的水平。如论述“大城市面临的交通问题的原因、现状、出路”；“在教育孩子的过程中„惩罚‟的作用”；“很多人感到越来越忙，没有闲暇时间，原因是什么，应该怎么办？”。这几个题目是去出现过的雅思作文真题（task 2）。口语题的难度也相差无几，如“论教育对一个民族的重要性”。
之二
雅思考试与我们所熟悉的许多考试的区别之一是，雅思没有语法和词汇题。于是有人认为不懂语法、不认识几个单词也可以考雅思。考过之后才感叹，难！于是赶紧四处打听“有多大的词汇量才能挑战雅思”。
中国学生的习惯是，所有的考试都可以通过“准备”来通过的。
北语雅思想说的是，proficiency tests 是不能“准备”的，至少是不能以“期末复习、考试”那种形式来准备，更不能靠达到“五千”或是“八千”词汇来准备的。北语雅思的所有教师都考过雅思，有的了两次、三次，可是谁也不知道自己有多大的词汇量。什么人关注“自己”的词汇量呢？英语学习还不入门的学生，英语教学还是新手的教师。
还是那句话，考什么，你就应该能够做什么。比如，留学类的阅读的三篇文章都出自原文报刊，如“New Scientist”，那么考生就应该去看和这类杂志在难度、长度、题材有可比性的文章，通过阅读来学习词汇，而不是去背词汇表。读懂这样的文章靠什么？语法、词汇、背景知识等等，但这些都是次要的，主要的、乃至最重要的是：靠日积月累达到的量。
读有难度、长度的文章比背词汇表痛苦的多。背词汇表可以让人有“feel
good”、“我没闲着”的感觉，因为可以通过“量化”来衡量自己的投入与产出。所以，背词汇表的人多，脚踏实地、靠阅读量来学习的人少。
听听womo于2003-3-17在51ielts.com上怎么说的：“环球说得6000-7000，不过我现在手里有三本雅思单词书，发现他们不仅说雅思该有的单词量不同，就连选录的单词也差很远，背完新东方再看环球的，一堆不会。背完环球再看杨凡的，一堆不会”。
把那些“词汇手册”之类的东西都扔了吧。去读、去听！！！
之三
浅谈雅思词汇
这个问题往往是各位准备考雅思的朋友们非常关心的，说起来也很正常。词汇量本身就是衡量英语水平和考试难度的一个尺度，尤其在雅思考试形式比较特殊，没有考试大纲的情况下，对词汇来年量的需求自然倍受关注。很多朋友张口就问，考雅思要不要背单词？背什么单词书？也有很多朋友给我发邮件来询问这个问题。很久没有写关于英语学习的东西了，最近采访了不少刚考完雅思的同学们，今天正好借这个机会和大家讨论一下。
首先要说明一点，本文里面的观点都是针对起点为词汇量在1，500-2，000的基础不是太好的朋友们。换句话说，如果你的起点更低，连最基本的1，500词汇都没有的话，那么我个人认为你是必须要背单词的，没有多少商量的余地。
那么，具备了1，500-2，000的词汇量，到底要不要背单词呢？应该背什么单词呢？下面我就结合雅思考试的特点，分项展开说明。
首先来看看对词汇要求最简单的口语。有关学好口语需要多少词汇量的问题几乎已经被讨论烂了，比较公认的结论应该是500-800日常词汇足矣。换句话说，如果你具备1，000以上的词汇，但口语仍然不好，那请一定不要把原因归结为词汇量不够，也请一定不要把解决办法定位于背单词。其实，除去因为缺乏练习造成的表达不够流利之外，口语不好的主要问题在于对一些小词掌握的不够到位。比如get，take，make这样的动词，搭配上不同的介词，几乎可以表达所有的日常动作。因此，当你觉得你有意思表达不出来时，先不慌查字典找单词，而应该问问自己，你是不是可以用已经学过的很简单的单词和词组来表达这个意思？所以说，为了提高口语，是没有必要专门背单词的，相反，应该把所知道的简单词汇学好，学精。你知道see是看见，是否知道see off是告别？你知道large是大，又知道at large表示逃亡在外么？再次向口语不好的朋友们推荐《学好17个动词走遍天下》，以后千万别动不动就拿起词汇书来背了。
接下来我们看看写作。雅思考试作文的批改方式比较特殊，是analytical scoring，而不是象TOEFL采取的global scoring。什么叫global scoring呢？其实它比较象我们中学时的作文评分方式，就是一眼看上去大概是什么水平，属于哪个档次，就给多少分。那么analytical scoring又是怎么回事呢？我们翻译过来叫做“分项评分”。雅思作文评分有三项：内容结构，连贯衔接，语言质量。每一项分别评分，要注意，在给每一项评分时是不受其他两项影响的。也就是说，哪怕你的文章离题万里，只要文字优美，那么语言那一项也是有可能打8分的。三项加起来除以三，就是一篇作文的最终得分。那么这种分项评分到底有什么好处呢？显然是有的，因为英语作为外语，普遍中国学生写作文时语言水平有限，因此如果把握好文章的内容结构，在连贯方面处理得好，完全可以将最终分数提上去。而把握文章的结构，做好连贯衔接，显然与词汇量的大小丝毫扯不上关系吧？退一步讲，如果要提高写作的语言质量，也几乎不取决于词汇量大小。关于这一点，我在《关于写作的一点个人体会》中详细阐述，这里不再废话。
说起听力，我又要提起我反复强调的一个概念：听力词汇量。听力词汇量区别于阅读词汇量，简单地说，就是不看拼写，仅从发音判断就能确定认识的单词，才属于你的听力词汇量。对于听力水平普遍不高的中国考生，可能听力词汇量还不到阅读词汇量的一半。而雅思听力考试显然要求的是更多的听力词汇量，而不是
阅读词汇。从这一点出发，整天抱着词汇书死背，往纸上反复抄写，对提高听力词汇量有百害而无一益。其次，雅思听力作为考察英语国家生存能力的测试，对日常用语考得非常频繁。雅思听力的特色题目就是填空，简答这样需要动手填写单词的题目。而需要填写的单词往往是日常用词。比如有一次考过jackfruit（菠萝蜜），还考过pomelo（釉子），这样的词生活中很常用，可是好象哪本单词书中都不会收录吧？那么，整日抱着单词书背，意义究竟何在？
最后我们来讨论存在争议最大的阅读问题。
雅思考试的阅读文章往往是从报刊杂志上摘下来的，这样就造成大量的专有名词，以及一些不常用的词汇。这样造成了考生在考试时遇到大量不认识的单词，因此带来的结果就是，很多人马上将自己无法答对题的原因归结为不认识单词，将解决办法归纳为背单词。于是背了刘毅的5000和10000，三个月后满怀信心走入考场，发现不认识的单词比上次还多！很多培训机构也很不负责地拿有些考生的成绩来做虚假宣传，说某某词汇量多少，于是阅读多少分耳耳，好象他的成绩就归功于他词汇量一样。那么，问题究竟出在什么地方？
要了解这一点，首先有必要了解一下雅思阅读的出题原则和思路。雅思阅读是考察从文章中获得有效信息的能力，因此充满生词是必然的，问题在于你能否从中读出对你有用的信息。我可以完全负责任的说，雅思阅读从来不出从上下文推断词义的题目，换句话说，雅思阅读中根本就没有考察词汇量的题！！
象summary，short anwser question这样的题目，只需要你从原文中寻找特定的信息，哪怕它是个专有名词，你不认识，没关系，找出来填进去就是了。对于大多数人来说，最难的题当属T/F/NG，这种题怎么考呢？比如，文中讲Tom is taller than Mary。题目中说Tom is as tall as Mary。那么显然，这道题为FALSE。有人说这太简单了，雅思不会考这么简单的，其实这说明你没有意识到T/F/NG题的精髓所在罢了。对于雅思考试来说，无非就是把TOM，MARY这样的词换成谁都不认识的专有名词来吓唬人而已，因为T/F/NG题根本就不考你的词汇量，它考的是你对句意的把握。而能否正确把握句意，取决于你的语法和句子结构分析能力，与词汇量无关。下面举个真实考试的例子大家就明白了。
文中说&& is a poor predictor,%% is little better than &&.题目说%% is a good predictor.（&&和%%表示两个难词）。好，这个题答案是什么呢？是FALSE。为什么呢？很显而易见，这里的专有名词我都没写出来，认不认识肯定对答题不影响，这里题目考察的是对little better than这个语法结构的理解，你必须知道这个结构，才能正确把握句子的意思。那么什么人需要背单词呢？那就是连
poor，little这样的词都不认识的人才需要背，也就是我开头说的那些基础实在太差，词汇量可能只有三位数的人。而对于很多词汇量并不小的人，由于不认识little better than这个结构，照样无法做对题目。
举个简单的例子，无非是想告诉大家，要看清阅读考试的实质，千万不要轻易将做错题的原因归结为词汇不够。其实造成阅读能力有限的原因是多方面的，主要是阅读速度和对句子结构的分析能力。前者必须通过广泛的阅读来锻炼和提高，而后者，说到底是一个英语基本功是否扎实的问题，冰冻三尺非一日之寒，解决语法问题是慢工夫，并不是背背单词就可以提高英语水平的。
说到这里，很多朋友可能会这样问，你写这个是不是就是要大家把手里的单词书全都扔掉？非也。对于很多已经工作的朋友，或者长时间不接触英语的朋友，找一本合适自己的词汇书看看，是尽快恢复的最好办法之一。背单词的关键在精不在多，对于一个单词，并不是看到它知道中文意思就足够的，如果让你造个句子你会不会用？如果在收音机里听到它你能不能分辨出来？这都是衡量对词汇的掌握程度。因此，反复复习，反复再实践中运用刚学到的单词，才是背单词的正道。
本人是机械背单词的强烈反对者，因此从不推荐词汇参考书。如果非要说起来的话，找一本用法详细，注解丰富（最好有英文注解）的四级词汇书，足矣 ：）
PS：这里我想谈谈很多所谓《雅思词汇》这样的书。郑重其事告诉大家，这种书绝大多数都是不科学的。首先，雅思考试没有明确大纲，只要在英语中出现的词汇，都有出现在卷子上的可能，并没有规定哪些词汇才是所谓“雅思词汇”。很多编者宣称他的书是经过多少多少次对真题的统计得出的结论而搞出来的词频，大家千万不要轻易上当。首先，雅思真题保密工作很好，真题不可能在考场外泄露，而考生离开考场是不准带出一张纸。那么这些所谓的“统计者”，从哪里搞来那么多的真题作为统计材料？用脑子把卷子一字不差背下来？呵呵。其次，由于雅思考试的特殊性，每次考题与上次几乎没有关系，也就是说，一次考题中出现什么单词，与它上次出现与否，下次还会不会出现，是完全没有规律可循的。做这种统计本身就是无意义的。希望广大鸭友们在选取参考书的时候一定要睁大眼睛，千万不要被*商蒙蔽。
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