托福作文随笔20150507

第一篇：托福作文随笔20150507

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

If a person wants to be successful in life, knowledge gained through study is more important than the ability to be creative

The issue of which element is more important for a person’s success, knowledge gained from study or the ability to be creative, has been the subject of dispute for some time.Both of them are essential for one’s success, but I incline to view the later one as more important..First of all, it is not deniable that knowledge gained through study is very important for a beginner in some area, but it is creativity that can help him to be outstanding.In fact, knowledge from study can make a person eligible and qualified to do some kind of work, but it cannot help the person be excellent.As we all know, if an aspiring youth wants to be a surgeon, he must learn a lot of courses in a medical school, which will be a painstaking process for him.Then, in order to reach his goal, he has to pass all the examinations which show that he has learnt enough knowledge about medicine.In the end, he may be eligible to be a doctor, but it is another thing when it comes to whether he can be an excellent or successful surgeon.Moreover, creativity can lead people to come up with new theory and method, which will bring success to us.It is hardly an exaggeration to maintain that creativity is the impetus for evolution of our society.For instance, with the former knowledge of mathematics and physics, and his unique creativity, Isaac Newton discovered the basic laws of the nature.His theory had dominated the world of science for more than two hundred years.The edifice of Newton’s theory collapsed, when Albert Einstein built the foundation of relativity theory.Both of them are viewed as the most successful scientists by people.Hypothesizing that they lacked the ability of creativity, how could we know the laws the nature, and create our modern life.As we all know, not everyone could be as creative as Newton or Einstein, but most of us can try our best to learn the knowledge from study.Most of us can be eligible and qualified to do some work.Maybe we are not so creative, but it cannot deter us from doing our job well, which is another kind of success, at least in my opinion.

第二篇：托福作文

I disagree that people now can better protect the environment than they could in the past.As technology develops, in order to satisfy the increasing population’s demand of natural products, people do harm on environment through creating pollutions, cutting down trees and hunting animals.Although people gradually realize the significance of protecting the environment they are living in, the damages they’ve done is hard to recover.Firstly, the number of pollutions from transportations and factories is growing in a high rate.When time goes by, people become richer and are also able to buy more high-technology products such as cars.Like other products, cars can provide convenience and can help people save their time, so most people want to use them.In this way, factories need to manufacture a great number of products in order to reach the need and make more money although they know that it will truly bring pollutions to the air and water when some machines work.Even if they do try to reduce the pollutions, the environment is still getting worse and worse.Just like the reason why more and more high-technology products are produced, the number of trees that are cut down is also increasing quickly.There are so many things that need trees—napkins, furniture , books and so on that people have to keep cutting down trees.Certainly, people know how significant it is to have trees in the nature, so they grow trees as long as they cut them down and make them in to notebooks.But unfortunately, the speed people grow new trees will never catch up the speed they cut down trees, so the trees could only become less and less.As we all know, trees play a important role in keeping the nature environment balance and absorb the CO2 in the air, so the decrease of trees has a bad influence on the environment.Finally, hunting the animals in the wild will obviously destroy the environment.Although animals in the wild are protected by the government and it is forbidden to hunt or kill them, there are still some people who want to hunt the animals and eat or do research on them.For example, some people in Guangdong like to eat the brain of monkey, and they hunt monkey in the case of law forbid.Such things will influence the food chain and the balance of ecological and then ruin the environment.Although people now have more advanced ways to protect the environment, the harm they do is still hard to restore.So people could not protect the environment better than they did before.

第三篇：托福作文

摸班1：

Recently there is a debate over whether high school should require students to wear school uniforms.Some people assert that high school should permit students to decide what to wear in school, while other people believe that students should be only allowed to wear school uniforms in school.As a matter of fact, this is a complex and controversial issue.Different people hold different views due to their different

backgrounds.Accordingly, it is impossible for us to give a universal answer to this question.As far as I am concerned, I agree that students should be asked to wear only school uniforms in school.I will prove my point of view by following discussion...............Certainly, we could not ignore the advantages from wearing what students want in school, such as

makeing them enjoy lives.Taking the practical situation into account that learning knowledge and skills is the most important thing in school, however, we can safely draw the conclusion that school should require students to wear school uniforms in school.黄的大家不要看了，是我写的练习之一，呵呵。但是要强调的是：转折很重要！但是没必要单写一段，我想最后一段用个小转折就OK了，因为我们毕竟主要还是说另外一方面嘛。

摸班2：

It seems, in so many items, very difficult to choose one of the animals to be the most important animal in my country.Because all of them in my country have their special functions and characteristics.But it does not mean that they are the same to me.To be frank, I would choose panda as the most important animal in my country if the practical situation that panda is such an animal that lives only in China is considered.To explain my point of view, I will illustrate it in following three aspects.因为是列举题目，所以最后简单总结一下就OK，2，3句话足够了。

第四篇：如何写托福作文万能逻辑模版

如何写托福作文 万能逻辑“模版”

托福作文的高分评分标准中,有一条是well organized, 那么怎么才能做到well organized? 就是逻辑结构的安排, 一篇逻辑清晰,结构分明的文章,自然是well organized, 无所谓英文还是中文, 精品学习网为大家提供一种思维的模版,帮助同学们确立文章结构,从而做到well organized.之所以称之为模版,是因为这是一种比较固定的模式,可以供同学们直接使用,之所以称之为万能,是因为它提供的是一种思维方式,而不是一种固定的句式或单词,因此,同学们在使用中并不用担心雷同.那么下面就一起体验这种思维的模版吧.好的文章里，两个元素之间的逻辑关系更为常见的是“递进”或者“转折”，而非“并列”。我们看到某一篇文章中出现了“递进”的逻辑关系，就会不由自主地体会到作者有能力进行“深入”思考，当我们看到某一处出现了“转折”的逻辑关系，就会不由自主地体会到作者有能力“从一个以上的角度，甚至是相对的角度”进行思考。这种逻辑关系可能体现在整体架构上，也可能体现在某个很小的细节之处，但，无论如何，都会被读者自觉不自觉地体会到。

试比较一下以下两段话，体会一下各个例子之间的逻辑关系：

a.很多人从事危险活动是因为金钱的驱动。比如，动作电影里的特技演员和探索频道的特聘摄影师。

b.很多人从事危险活动是因为金钱的驱动。比如，动作电影里的特技演员或者抢劫银行的丧心病狂的犯罪分子。也许这样一小处的差异算不上什么，但是如果一篇文章中随处可见此类细微而又“深刻”的差异，那文章质量就全然不同了。（编辑：陈佳）

第五篇：托福作文总结

Integrated Writing: 时间：阅读3分钟，写作20分钟 字数：150以上

题型；基本上是三点反驳

Independent Writing: 重点：结构（层进），逻辑（配合句与句，段与段连贯），（词汇句式多样性，不重复）题型：1 agree or not

A or B

(3 开放性问题what when...)字数：400以上 时间：30分钟

细小东西：1 好东西用在前面较好

不需要题目 字数不够的补救方法：多打空格拆字，in other words, for example 随性写（不拘泥于小节），写个性化内容

***************************************************************************************************** Integrated Writing具体内容

结构：1 分别表达说话者和文章中的观点，写明他们相悖

反驳了什么---contrast说话者、文章---再说一下他们相悖 常用语：1 contradict, differ from,cast doubt on...2 indicate, believe, state, contend, claim, show...3 lecturer, speaker

其他在作业里面

P31最佳例文，P42模板，P43主体部分模板，P44、45开头方式（一句话、两句话）

Independent Writing具体内容 一

段落结构 开头段：引话题（结构暗示）---写中心---联系下文（The reasons for my view go as follows.）主体3段:中心句---解释中心句---例子，数据---解释例子，数据

（3 结尾总结，和首段呼应）

二

几种写法（P65例文，夹带的纸）1 经典 2 contrast 3 factor and analysis（因素分析）4 对象细分 三

例子：亲身经历，见闻，听闻 数据：具体时间，机构（某人言论）