攻克英语半壁江山 满分作文技巧鉴赏之六 从全国历届英语高考满分作文中获益(2006年)

第一篇：攻克英语半壁江山 满分作文技巧鉴赏之六 从全国历届英语高考满分作文中获益(2006年)

攻克英语半壁江山

满分作文技巧鉴赏之六

从全国历届英语高考满分作文中获益（2006年）

（全国卷I）

【试题回放】

假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请—apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully，Li Hua

[名师点评]

这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

（全国卷II）

【试题回放】

假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

注意：

1、字数100左右

2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯

3、开头语已为你写好 Dear Bob，Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden.The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m.to 7:00p.m.There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject.Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here.You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can.If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.Yours sincerely，Li hua

[名师点评]

本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢?

（安徽卷）

【试题回放】

假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

一本英语词典忘记带回

词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵

词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

邮资自己付

注意：

1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

2、参考词汇：邮资-postage Dear Mr.Brown，I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks.As the exchange student, you make me feel warm.Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home.I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S.I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom.Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.I’m eager to receive your reply.Yours，Li hua

[名师点评]

本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

（重庆卷）

【试题回放】

加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言，文化culture。

假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

你怎样得知David的愿望

你愿意成为他的朋友

你打算如何帮助他

你盼望他的回复

注意：

1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好

2、字数：100词左右

3、在答题卡上作答 Dear David，I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line.You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture.Maybe I’m your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years.Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested.I’ll be looking forward to your reply.I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ，Li hua

[名师点评]

本文的语言非常流畅，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。

佳品传奇.美文欣赏（辑）

第二篇：攻克英语半壁江山 满分作文技巧鉴赏之四 从全国历届英语高考满分作文中获益(2008年)

攻克英语半壁江山

英语满分作文技巧鉴赏之四

从全国历届英语高考满分作文中获益（2008年）

（全国卷）

【试题回放】假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;

2、祝贺苏琳生日;

3、感谢工作人员;

4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：

1、词数100左右;

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3、开头语已为你写好。

例文： Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

评析：定语从句的使用。

（北京卷）

【试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

注意： 词数不少于60.提示词： 游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park.Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day, we set off early in the morning.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We were tired but happy.【名师点评】

本情景作文的内容要点如下：1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。本文覆盖了所有内容要点，较好地完成了试题规定的任务。其中，写作主题突出，详略得当，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文机构紧凑。本文叙述清楚，描写细致，准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，将活动的情形很形象地描述了出来。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1 set off 出发 2.litter n.废弃物 3.respectively adv.分别地

好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.在爬山时，我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。

1.However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.然而，当我们登上山顶，被眼前的一幕惊呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。

评析：细节描写，生动形象。“shock”一词也用得生动传神。

（江苏卷）

【试题回放】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，……

老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，……

同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，……

怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。)

注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.promote v.促进 2.interpersonal adj.人际的3.generation gap.代沟

4.open-minded adj.虚心的

好句1.students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.同学之间应该互相倾听，这样他们可以互相学习和帮助，也会形成友谊。

评析：复杂句的组合，被动句的使用。

2.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。

评析：复合句的使用。

（湖北卷）

【试题回放】假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点：1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信;该产品已售完，无法更换;型号新，无配件，无法维修。2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。

注意：1.词数为100左右;

2.参考词汇：配件—— spare part;

3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。Dear Sir，I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R.China.Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages.Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one.I had no choice but to go to the repairman.To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long.Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.Thank you for your consideration.Sincerely yours，Bu Manyi

【名师点评】

本文内容要点齐全，语言丰富，结构合理，如头两句说明了购买手机后发现故障的情况，中间部分说明了无法维修而必须让公司更换手机的原委，最后明确提出自己的要求，明白流畅，将题目所提出的要点全部表达清楚，较好的完成了任务。全文以一般过去时为基调，结合主动语态与被动语态，并使用了so, but, therefore 等连接词，使文章结构完整严密。固定短语，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的语言显得地道而精炼。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的3.consideration n.体谅

好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.令我失望的是，他说因为在中国是新款手机，所以没有配件来修理。

评析：复杂句的组织;to my disappointment, 常用短语。

佳品传奇.美文欣赏（辑）

第三篇：高考英语满分作文技巧

高考英语满分作文技巧

在高考英语试卷中，25分的作文分说多不多，说少不少，但是在作文上拿到高分也可以弥补其他方面丢失的分数，下面来看看高考英语满分作文技巧。高考英语满分作文技巧

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使内容要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，全品高考网确保语言表达的高级性。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

高考英语满分作文评分标准

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2.覆盖所有内容要点。

3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。

5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

高考英语满分作文范文

【真题再现】

II.Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2.说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

【作文范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway, by bus and so on.What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmenttoappreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions.What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security

guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min

第四篇：高考英语作文满分技巧-看图作文

写作指导(3)看图作文

看图作文也叫做图画式作文，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。一般性图画式作文都包含六个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、结果。这些要点往往是缺一不可的，否则整篇文章就不完整。

看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。

一、看图作文的考查特点 1．命制思路特点

看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。

2．能力表现特点

看图作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力，丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。3．语言表达特点

表达准确，过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句，段与段之间的意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。

二、看图作文的写作步骤 1．仔细审题，确定要点 2．紧扣要点，组句成篇 3．表达准确，过渡自然 4．规范书写，检查润色

美国中学生Jeff将要到你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给

Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好； 2．词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．认真审题，确定人称和时态

通过阅读题目，我们可以确定：此文的体裁是说明文，须用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．选用句式，连词成句巧成文

根据文章体裁的不同适当补充时间、地点、目的、方式、原因、结果等细节扩展句式；恰当地使用一些具有承上启下作用的过渡性词汇或过渡句；适当调整句子顺序，使文章语言简练、连贯、流畅。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．认真核查，注意语言的连贯和得体 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等。

(2)查动词。看谓语动词的时态、语态是否正确，主谓是否一致，非谓语动词形式是否正确等。(3)查习语、搭配。看是否符合英语表达习惯。(4)查拼写、词数。看拼写是否有误、词数是否合适。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章，请你根据题目要求及下面图画的内容提示，为学校的壁报写一篇稿件，谈谈你对交通状况的思考。注意：1.词数不少于120；

2．应包括图画中的全部内容： 3．标题与开头已为你写好；

4．参考词汇：行人 pedestrian；人行横道 zebra crossing；隔离护栏 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

【参考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第五篇：全国高考英语满分作文赏析

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一.用词准确;表达地道

【北京卷】

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【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect!况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。二.非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷】

【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60

提示词：郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering.After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷】

【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.What an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles.He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks.He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot.At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles.The man in the picture is trying to copy us.Obviously he is doing it the hard way.Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking.Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。三.复合句为写作增色

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假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

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1、自我介绍;

2、祝贺苏琳生日;

3、感谢工作人员;

4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：

1、词数100左右;

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3、开头语已为你写好。

例文：

Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly，Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

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好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

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一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放;5.欢迎预定。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

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【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【重庆卷】

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据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1.信的格式已为你写好

2.信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3.词数100左右。

4.请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

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好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

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好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

四.结构清晰,句式准确

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2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

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好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

好句2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

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1、这山望着那山高 The grass is always greener on the other hill.人都是这山望着那山高，对自己的状况没有满意的时候。

Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other hill.They never feel satisfied with what they’ve already got.2、上瘾get into one’s blood

说来也怪，很多不好的事往往会使人上瘾。

It’s astoundingly funny that many harmful things usually get into our blood.3、发牢骚 beef 他坐在那里什么事也不干，总是发牢骚，真烦死人。

I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but beefing.4、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱们快点吧，孩子们都等不及了。

Let’s shake the leg.The kids are champing at the bit.5、点头哈腰bow and scrape 从她在老板前点头哈腰地那个模样，你就知道她是个什么人了。

From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she is.6、疯疯癫癫go gaga 对他的话不要太在意了，他总是疯疯癫癫的。

Don’t take what he says so seriously.He’s always going gaga.李老师满分课堂 免费答疑解题热线 0531-86969606 QQ：1044738198 希望更多老师加入到公益教学中

7、说话不算数go back on one’s words 他那个人说话从不算数,我们可不能依靠他。

We cannot account on him.He always goes back on his words.8、废话连篇beat one’s gums 谁喜欢坐在那里听你的废话连篇？

Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?

9、恩将仇报 bite the hand that feeds one 你难道不知道她是个恩将仇报的人？

Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?

10、不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你，我可不忍心把孩子们就在家里没人照看

If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared for.11、勤快an eager beaver 他特别勤快，从来没有闲着的时候。

He’s an eager beaver, never staying idle