第一篇:2011考研英语作文(推荐)
很好,2011年考研英语入学考试迫在眉睫,很多同学虽也投入在如火如荼的复习进程中,但总有些许瞎忙摸不着头脑的感觉!尤其对于占总分值30%的作文来说,很多同学更是无从下手,而只能拙劣的选择背诵一些模板,最后到考试时也只能东拉西扯,草草了事,那么最终的得分惨不忍睹也就可想而知了。究其原因,实质还是对于历年考研英语写作真题规律研究不透彻所致。本文力图帮助2011年即将考研的学员在最短的时间内找到方向,拟从以下两方面入手拨开笼罩考研作文之层层迷雾。ok
(一)2011年小作文写作前瞻
纵观往年考研小作文(应用文)命题,个人认为规律性非常明显。大纲规定的应用文类型,也就那么几种,几乎是一年考一种。我们来看看真题:
2004年大纲第一次增加小作文,所考的第一篇作文来自于2005年1月的辞职信。当年这篇作文令很多业界所谓的预测大师们感到非常意外,因为按照常理,大学生写的第一封职业类邮件应该是求职信,考研学子大多数都是应届生,还没学会写求职信就先写辞职信,总感觉不大厚道。结果,不厚道的事情就是发生了,随之而来的就是网上所罗列的大量预测模板彻底失效,甚至当年有人叫嚣绝对不可能考辞职信;
紧接着2006年,考了咨询信,如何向希望工程捐款,此封信考的很常规,只需在考前做过适当准备即可;
2007年,考查的是主动建议信,再次把考生放在了非常主动的地位上,没人问你意见,你自己跳出来对母校的大学图书馆管理提建议。这封邮件再次使网络上以及很多培训机构的预测失效,因为他们为同学们准备的范文多半是类似于你有一个同学,要去美国读书,写信问你到底是读历史还是计算机。实质上,这属于回复建议信,它的文章开头多半是In respond to your question about whether to „ , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主动建议信的开头却截然不同,因为是主动,所以收信人多半会感觉比较突然,因此需要写信人在开头稍作自我介绍,并不是介绍自己的姓名,而是稍微说明下自己主动提建议的初衷是为对方好,首先取得对方的理解,这才是一封主动建议信所必须具备的,基于此,开头往往会设计为,As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人,I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of
so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to
as follows.因此,如果不能准确使用,则后果会很严重,从第一句话就会暴露你根本没有审题,得分也就可想而知;
2008年考察的非常巧妙,杂交了两种类型的邮件:道歉加失物归还。出国旅行,把国外朋友借给你听的CD机一不小心带回国了。这封邮件再次使很多死板的失物招领信或寻物启事信模板无用武之地;
2009年,倡议信,倡议大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋,这封信比较常规;
到了最近一次2010年,很多同学都在惊讶于怎么考了一篇招聘通知,难道邮件时代就此终结?我认为,实则不然。首先,通知和邮件的格式并无实质差别,考研小作文的注意力从来就不应该是放在格式上;其次,2009年上课我反复给大家讲过求职信怎么写,尤其是得分的关键---第二段,你必须说明自己适合这份工作,因此我给大家设计了三大自证理由,英文(证书)水准,著名企业实习经验,适合团队协作的性格等,而学习主动性稍微强一些的同学只要动点脑筋,就会发现其实只要把这三点反过来,变成招聘要求,这篇通知就会迎刃而解。这就是为什么当年考完试当天就有很多同学自信的跟我说考得不错的原因,因为他们愿意思考,临门一脚还得靠大家自己!
好了,分析了这么多,也就是为了预测未来。综上所述,小作文考察的特点主要有:第一,希望把学生放在一个主动的地位上,比如辞职,主动建议等,都把大家放在了主动方,而这恰恰与很多同学平时训练应用文时喜欢把自己放在被动方的思维相悖,也是大家为什么感觉总押不到题的根源。第二,考研的考察方向依旧是以邮件为主,换句话说,只要把邮件写好了,即使考别的应用文类型,那也不怕!因此,经过对2011年考研新大纲的考量,本人有七成把握今年考研会考订购信(或出售信,一正一反,都要会写)和投诉信(或回复投诉信)。
(二)2011年考研英语大作文命题方向前瞻
考研英语大作文的命题范围虽每年千奇百变,但基于中国国情的基本事实和命题规律却从来没有改变过,因此命题的方向把握相对就不是太难的事,具体来说,从宏观角度符合以下两点:
(1)高举和谐社会大旗(Harmonious Society)
从1998年考研英语大作文命题至今,考题基本锁定和谐社会的大旗,反复变换切入点,而命题方式,除了1999年的图表题之外,已经基本锁定在图画题,这个规律已经延续11年未变,具体来看,1998年的诚信(credit)话题,1999年以及2000年连续两年的人与自然和谐共处的话题(nature),2001年爱心话题(love),2002年的世界文化融合话题(culture),2003年的个人、企业独立成长话题(self-independence),2004年的人生奋斗无止境话题(it ends today but starts tomorrow),2005年的抚养老人话题(to respect elders),2006年的偶像崇拜话题(idol worship),2007年的自信话题(confidence),2008年的残疾人合作奋斗自强不息话题(never give up),2009年的网络对于人类交流亲疏远近之影响(interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era)以及2010年再次重现的中西文化大融合话题。从这些历年真题中无不察觉出命题者的良苦用心,即完善人格,关注生活,关心他人,最终实现人与人的和谐,个人自身的和谐以及人与自然的和谐。一旦把握此命题思路,在平时的训练时就能真正做到有的放矢,例如,一些阴暗的,过于政治化的话题,就不会成为应试范围,而尚未考察过的一些和谐话题,例如社会责任(responsibility),乐观心态(optimism)亦或平心做人、脚踏实地(to try to grasp your aspiration step by step)等,就应该在平时适当进行练习,这样在走进考场那一刻才能真正实现胸有成足,写作时的素材才会有信手拈来的感觉。
(2)影射当年热点话题(hot spot)
2008年1月19日下午,正值08年考研第一天,我的手机从当天的研究生入学英语考试结束之时起就一直响到当天晚上21时许,大多数是来自学员和同事的祝贺以及感谢,说我押中了08年的考研大作文题。其实,对于押题这个字眼,我内心从来都是不太感冒的,因为一个好的考研者,英文复习的重心绝对不应该放在押题中,一个好的师者,也不应给学员传达押题这样的信息,而是应该帮助学员实实在在找到方向,真正提高写作水平。但押终归押到了,虽有些许惊诧,但也很欣慰的发现,自己一直以来对于考研命题的思路探析没有出错,起码与命题组的专家们算是有些契合了!其实用心观察的人都会发现,近些年尤其是近5年来考研的命题,除了把握和谐社会这个大方向不变之外,影射当年热点就是另一个最直接有效切中命题的捷径。让我们来看看吧,2003年1月考研,正值中国加入WTO第一年,实为2002年经济界的一个热点话题,因此图画选择了“温室里的花朵经不起风雨”,影射中国企业成长继而引申到个人成长都需要自主独立;2005年1月考研,“养老足球赛”,大家查阅2004年全年BBC评选的中国大事记,把当年命名为中国的“司法聚焦年”,因此赡养父母这个小的切入点影射的实为中国当年的人际全局面貌;2006年1月考研,“偶像崇拜话题”,更是明显不过,2005年全年的超级女声几乎撼动了整个中国娱乐界;2007年1月的“自信话题”,漫画中一个守门员,一个射手,正在面临点球大战前的心理波动,回应的的正是2006年沸腾全球的德国世界杯;再到2008年1月,充分显示了命题者的智慧,中国正式进入奥运年,奥运所体现的一切精神就是永不放弃,自强不息,但如果直接选择一幅漫画就是关于奥运,又太过明显,因此,我当时在2007年5月17号的一次考研讲座现场就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望,即奥运这个热点过于强大,所以不可能避开,那怎么隐藏??所以只能选择打“擦边球”,通过残奥,影射残疾人不屈不挠奋斗之话题,因为每一个观看过哪怕任何一场残疾人运动会的人都会为这个特殊群体的精神所震撼,果不其然,最终的结果如我所料!因此,我们可以大胆的推测,即将到来的11年考研,这个大规律依旧有很大的可能得到延续。
(三)2011年考研英语预测
以下六大话题搜集,是在充分研究2011年全年大事记的前提下,严格遵守以上两大命题思路所作出的预测,具体的范文会陆续在我的元旦押题班中发布,请大家引起足够重视!
1.漫画“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射国际对于中国认识的前后变化。
2.漫画“相互推卸责任”---影射食品安全事件中的社会责任感和道德感缺失。
3.漫画“股市大跌”---影射投机心态不可有,脚踏实地才是出路。
4.漫画“地震中用自己身躯保护学生的好老师”---影射灾难事件中人性的光辉。关于灾难,此命题切入点还有可能为保持乐观心态。
5.漫画“把我整成**明星的样子”---影射整容现象以及山寨现象
附件一:2011年考研英语大作文权威预测一
范文演示:Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二:2011年考研英语大作文权威预测二
重点推荐: the lack of responsibility
范文演示:When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.附件三:2011年考研英语大作文权威预测三
背景介绍:山寨现象
“山寨”一词源于广东话,是“小型、小规模”甚至有点“地下工厂”的意思,其主要特点为仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今,网络上各种各样的东西都有山寨版,山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”,山寨版“鸟巢”,山寨版的《红楼梦》甚至火过新版《红楼梦》。
从2003年开始出现山寨手机到各种山寨产品,“山寨”一词从经济行为逐渐演变为一种社会文化现象。如今“山寨相机”、“山寨电影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等诸多带有模仿性质的“山寨现象”层出不穷,形成了独有的“山寨文化”。
KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”(山寨)
MODEL ESSAY:
As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”
特别提醒:2011年必背小作文三篇
订购及销售信
销售:
Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.订购:
Could you give us some idea about your price?
Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信:
你参加了一个公司的面试,结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无,根本不顾及你的感受,请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。
1,说明来信目的 2,具体阐述投诉理由
3,期待的解决方式
点评:这是一封典型的combination(合体式)作文,它既涉及找工作面试用语,又涉及投诉信,代表了考研应用文命题的典型思路。
MODEL ESSAY:
Dear Sir or Madam,I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours,Li Ming
第二篇:考研英语作文
2014年考研作文万能模板
英语大作文一共分为三种。
积极类,比如文化融合,合作,点一盏心灯等等,都可以用积极类的模板。另一种是消极类的,比如11年的环境污染,温室花朵,过量捕鱼这是一类。还有一类就是中性类,自信啊,网络利与弊啊,这类的。
但是这三种模板的三段谋篇布局是一样一样的。描述图片+解释图片+我们该怎么办。有时候他会让你举一个人物的例子,这就更简单了,都是提前准备好的。别着急,后面都会说到,先说说这第一段。
第一段的话,80%的作文书,第一句准是as vividly+你看到图中的东西,都用烂了的,咱们不用,咱们的宗旨就是与众不同。第一句怎么写,咱们先不说,先说第二句。第二句一般会写,这个东西对我们的生活产生深远的影响。例子,1、正如图片中生动形象的描画了一个文化火锅,里边有莎士比亚、佛bulabula~~(后半句用非限定性定语从句,这个待会讲)。
2、文化对人们的生活产生了深远的影响。所以金翅给出的第一段第2句(一、2用此表示,下同)的表达方法。
Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.多元文化的确对我们的生活产生了深刻的影响,这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。大家想一
想,是不是把多元文化替换成,网络、环境问题、合作、自信都很通顺呢,而且用does强调动词 exert,让人眼前一亮。这样咱们的一、2就完事了。现在说
一、1,先上模板。As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.这句话的亮点在于非限定性定语从句,把两句话合二为一。有同学说了,这不还是as系列的么?这就需要变通啊,句子是死的人是活的呀。咱们的策略是把第一句和第二句调换一下位置,别让老师一看就是as,吐都吐死了。
综上所述第一段前两句是:
一、1:Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.一、2 As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.多元文化对我们的生活产生了深刻的影响,这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。正如这幅图片所描绘的,这里有一个火锅,它包括莎士比亚和佛。是不是感觉“正如”用的有承上启下的作用呢?是不是很传神呢?11年的环境作文中,金翅用的此法,从最后结果来看,分数还是灰常让我满意的。
第一段第三句就很简单了,一般一张pp下边会有一句话或者一个注释,咱来个中译英就行了,前边要加上修饰的模板。
一、3:And below the cartoon,there is a topic which says:the cultural hotpot is both delicious and nutritious.要是没
有配文字怎么办呢?咱也有办法。用一个感叹句搞定,What a meaningful hotpot!有人说就一个感叹句四个词,后边会不会凑不齐字数呢?前边不是说过了么,文思如尿崩,思如泉涌,不必担心字数。额,最好还是担心一下,字数别写不下了。当时11考场上写到最后一段,结果还剩三行,无奈最后一段草草收尾的。第一段的三句话,咱们就都介绍完了。
第二段一般是要介绍这个PP的深远意义或者产生的原因,写三条。第二段一共五句话,第一句说这个主题很有意义,2~4句阐述意义或者解释原因,第五句一个总结搞定。模板来啦,看官注意啦~~
二、1:The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the positive influence of cultural blending.(用了一个同位语从句,要是消极类的就用negative)
二、2~
二、4分别写三条理由意义,可以用First and foremost,What is more,Last but not least来连接,也可以不用,这个看个人习惯。我不太习惯用连接词,原因有二。一是显得很生硬,二是这三条理由的句式本来就很复杂,再加上First and foremost显得句式灰常的混乱。这个还是看个人习惯。
又有同学会说了,这个理由和意义,我们没话说。这也是我这个帖子最精华的所在,就是传说中华丽丽的万能积极理由,万能消极理由。是金翅从备考四级,六级,考研的过程中,精选又精选的万能句子,所谓万能理由,就是能自圆其说
就行,在四六级和考研中屡试不爽。闲话少叙,直接上句子。万能积极理由(10条):
1、*** can broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization.(***拓宽我们的视野,扩大我们的知识面,丰富我们的精神文明。积极类的王牌理由,适合很多题材,网络,文化,读书,而且用到了罕有的修辞——排比。气势磅礴,大开大合,老师眼前一亮)
2、*** provides us with convenience.(最万能的理由,凡是有优点的,都能给我们提供方便,你就想吧,是不是?)
3、*** meet such kind of need in physical and psycholegical aspests.(满足我们的身心健康,短小精悍)
4、Of all the ingredients of success,*** seems to be the first within our control.(在成功的所有元素中,***看似是我们最能把我的。是个意志品质类的话题,自信,合作都可以拿来直接用,而且相当的华丽)
5、*** win the appreciation of the public.(***赢得了公众的共识,有重要的用处,后边说。)
6、*** is a kind of lubricant for interpersonal relationships.(***是一种人际关系的催化剂。网络、多元文化,爱心,适合很多题材。)
7、stimulate one’s interest and tap one’s potential.(刺激我们的兴趣,激发
我们的潜能)
8、Nothing,except***,can play a more indispensable role in the cultivation of one’s personality.(华丽的句式多变,凑字数的佳句啊)
9、*** is an essential element of success.(没词时救场用的)
10、*** is the immortal theme of harmonious development.(没词时救场用的)
万能消极理由(4条):
1、the goal of achieving a harmonious society may fall through under the negative influence of ***.(超万能,所有的消极的东西,不论是环境污染,网络问题,温室花朵,过分捕鱼,交通拥挤,都会引起社会的不和谐,或许仅仅是在某一小方面。考研作文么,沾边就对,不要太计较细节,老师也没时间细想,放心的用吧。)
2、*** bring great loss to both the individual and the whole society.(***对个人和社会带来损失)
3、*** kill a great mass of time.(浪费大量的时间)
4、It is a epitome of the disharmonious relation between the society and human being in a specific aspect of ***(这是一个人类和社会在***方面不和谐的缩影,五星级的华丽句子,***可以是环境,可以是网络,可以是交通)
有同学又说了,我总看到作文中让举例子。憋了半天写出来一个LiMing怎么怎么样。李明太累了,让他歇一会吧。例子就要用名人的例子,一般让举例子的作文题材,都是意志品质类的文章,像合作,自信什么的。既然是万能例子就要找具有各种优秀品质的人,什么人呢,成功人士。咱们就说两个,比尔盖茨和刘翔。一般有的优秀品质他们都有。怎么把例子变成句子呢?比尔盖茨很自信?要这样写的话,写比尔盖茨和写李明就没有本质的区别了。所以咱们要突出他的特性。Bill Gates,for instance,who is the CEO of Microsoft,won the champion of Forbes’World’s Richest People in 2009.It is ***that makes his company successful.比尔盖茨是09年“福布斯”排行榜的第一名
LiuXiang,for instance,who is a famous athlete,won the champion of the 110-meter-hurdle race of the Athens Olympic Games.It is ***that makes him successful.刘翔雅典奥运会110米栏的冠军。
这两个例子足够把所有的意志品质类的包含进去,可以放心使用。前文交待,第二段一共5句话。
二、1已经说过写法了,2~4句从上文的理由中挑3条就行了。但是我们还觉得不够华丽,所以我们把第4句改的更华丽,并且把第5句引出来。23句继续用万能理由没问题。
我们第四句用的一个小技巧就是科学统计法,直接上句子,再讲解。The recent statistic conducted by CASS——Chinese Academy of Social
Science,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports multiculture from 21% to 78%.(根据中国社科院最近的统计数据,过去的十年里有一个飞速的增长——支持多元文化的人从21%增长到了78%)
这句话很讲究,首先引入CASS,字母大写吸引老师的眼球,茫茫多的小写字母中,四个连续的大写,肯定能吸引住老师,恰好这句话又是华丽丽的给力,那么这句话就差不多达到目的了。那个——后边的解释,说实话是凑字数的,要是你的字数太多了,可以把CASS换成CCTV或者China Daily,然后就不用解释了。其次用sharp,很与众不同。再结合witness被动用法,足够让老师震撼。但我们觉得让老师就这样给分不满足,然后用两个数字把老师彻底征服了。根据心理学的统计,0~9十个数字中,7是人们最喜欢的数字(武当七侠,江南七怪,全真七子等等吧,这是题外话),所以咱们自己编的两个数字里尽量要有7。第一个数3*7=21,而且三七二十一是句俗语,应该是个常见的数字,第一个数用暗7。第二个数用明7,而且8是个人间人见人爱的数字,78这个数就出来了。积极类的数字可以随便编,消极类的数字要谨慎点编,别太离谱了。此时老师已经顺利落入咱们预先设计的圈套中,如果不给15+,他会感觉这次判卷生涯不完美的。闲话少说,咱们继续。
第四句出来了,怎么接第五句呢?前文说这个数字增长得很快。如果是好的东西增长的很快,比如支持文化融合的人越来越多了,那么后边接万能积极理由5:
That is to say,multiculture win the appreciation of the public.如果是坏的东西越来越多了,比如污染面积从**%增长到**%That is to say,This problem is getting worse and worse.有同学觉得这句话没说完,变得越来越严重了,然后呢?这就正好引出咱们的第三段,建议措施段。
第三段很简单了,基本上全是模板上去就行了,但是要华丽丽的模板,拒绝千篇一律的垃圾模板。对于积极类的,我们要怎么让他做得更好;消极类的,我们怎么改变这一现状。
It is high time that we+动词的过去式,是一个虚拟语气的结构,千万要注意。
积极类:强调好的东西对我们的重要。
It is high time that we highlighted the significance of ***(如multiculture)and cultivated the citizens’awareness that ***(如multiculture)is essential to us.消极类:因为前文说的坏的东西增长的很快,所以接下来我们就要控制这种增长的趋势。然后就政府和个人两个方面来说明做法。
It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend.As far as
the government is concerned,it should set down corresponding legislations and regulations.As for us,we should arouse the awareness of public towards ***(如Interenet).中性类的最后一段,在消极类的基础上加一句话。说明这个东西本身没有好坏之分,我们需要掌握一个度,比如还是网络问题。句子如下:
I cherish a belief that *** themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from *** as long as we take a good control over them.不要觉得good bad这样的小学词汇就不屑于用,咱们都华丽了三段了,也要缓解一下老师激动兴奋的情绪,肥肉吃多了还嫌腻呢~~哈哈~~
这样最后一段就差不多完事了,但是最好再来一个完美的总结。三种类型都通用的总结,如下:
Only by enforcing these measures into practice, can our society be more harmonious ,our economy be more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising perspective.(只有我们把这些措施付诸实施,社会才能更加和谐,经济才能更加繁荣,我们作为个人才能拥抱一个更加有希望的未来。气势磅礴的排比句,给你的作文画上一个圆满的句号)
到此为止,咱们的大作文就说的差不多了,应该是能把所有的情况都涵盖进去了。这篇模板不算万能理由一共132个词,距离最低160字数只差28个字,随便
挑两个万能理由写上去就ok了。所以说不要怕写英语作文。其实作文还要慢慢练的,最重要的是总结自己的模板,结合真题或者模拟题来不断地来默写模板,要对模板做到了然于胸,知道每句话要说什么内容。(金翅掠影)
第三篇:考研英语作文
热点:就业压力
题目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象
2.产生这种现象的原因(如大学生追求的目标过高,专业不对口等)
3.如何解决这一问题(改变就业观念,大学生再培训等)
参考范文:
College Students’ Job Hunting
In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job.It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play.Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?
There are several reasons for this.To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high.All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others.Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough.Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students.The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter
should not merely aim at material gains.They should be down-to–earth in building up their career.Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.热点:城市交通
题目:
Directions: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation(buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition, in which you should write at least 120 words.参考范文:
Urban Transportation
Good transportation is very important to the success of both individuals and a city.Without efficient means of transportation, people will waste a great deal of time going to and from work.This will make them tired and less productive in their jobs.People may rely on either private or public transportation to get them to and from work.If a choice has to be made between spending money on improving the roads for private vehicles or improving public transportation, I would choose the latter for the following reasons.First of all, better public transportation systems, including buses, trains and subways, will encourage more people to use them rather than drive their own cars.This will reduce the total amount of traffic on the roads and make travel quicker for everyone.Second, using public transportation saves energy.A bus which carries 60 people is a far more efficient use of fuel than 60 individual cars driving the same route.And last but not least, greater use of public transportation causes less pollution and will keep the environment cleaner.There are many reasons to support spending money on public transportation.Good transportation systems make a city cleaner, more efficient and more convenient.This improves everyone's quality of life and can make the city more prosperous.Therefore, I support spending money on public transportation systems rather than improving roads.热点:运动与健康
题目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Exercise and Health? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
参考范文:
Exercise and Health
For thousands of years, physical activity has been associated with health.Today, science has confirmed their link, with overwhelming evidence that people who lead active lfestyles are less likely to die early, or to experience major illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes and colon cancer.Exercise benefits every part of the body, including the mind.Exercising causes
the body to produce endorphins, chemicals that lead a person to feel peaceful and happy.Exercise can help some people sleep better.It can also help with mental health issues such as mild depression and self-esteem.Plus, exercise can give people a real sense of accomplishment and pride at having achieved a certain goal.Exercising can help you look better, too.People who exercise burn calories and look more toned than those who don't.In fact, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body at a healthy weight.When you exercise, you burn food calories as fuel.If a person eats more calories than he or she burns, the body stores them away as fat.Exercise can help burn these stored calories.Finally, exercising to maintain a healthy weight also decreases a person's risk of developing certain diseases, including diabetes and high blood pressure.2012年MPACC联考:英译汉重要短语及句型
(1)、、、not so much、、、、、、as(but)、、、与其说……还不如说……
(2)、、、not so much that、、、、、as(but)that、、、、、、与其说……还不如说……
(3)、、、not so much as、、、、、(=not even)甚至于不……,连……也不……
(4)、、、might as well、、、as、、、、、与其说……还不如说……
例1:He is not so much a teacher as a scholar、译文:与其说他是老师,还不如说是学者。(注意翻译时动作的对象)
例2:It wasn't so much his appearance I liked as his personality、译文:与其说我喜欢他的外表,不如说我喜欢他的品格。
例3:It's not so much that I don't want to come but I just haven't got the time、译文:倒不是因为我不想来,而是我根本没有时间。
例4:He didn't so much as say thank you after all we'd done for him、译文:我们为他干了那么多事,他甚至连谢谢都没有说一声。
例5:You might as well throw your money into the sea as lend it to him、译文:与其将钱借给他,还不如把钱丢进大海。(注意翻译时动作的对象)
[注意]:more、、、than、、、1)she is more beautiful than her sister、她比她姐姐漂亮。
2)George is more intelligent than aggressive、与其说乔治言行放肆,不如说他聪颖过人。考试大
以上第1句是more、、、than结构的一般用法,即在两个不同的事物之间就同一方面作比较;而第2句是就同一个人的两个不同方面作比较。因此要译成“与其说……还不如说……”。
more、、、than结构在上述1)2)两句中的用法也适用于less、、、than结构,得出相反的含义:
例如:
1)John is less daring than quick-witted、与其说约翰胆大,不如说他脑子灵活。
2)George was less intelligent than aggressive、与其说乔治聪颖过人,不如说他言行放肆
几个不定代词的固定搭配:
have none of:不参加;不准;不接受
I will have none of your stupid ideas!我才不接受你那愚蠢的想法!
He was offered a job but he said he’d have none of it、他有一个工作机会,但他说他不接受。
none but(=nothing but):只有(=only)
None but the brave deserves the fair、只有英雄才配得上美人。
She chose none but the best、她只选最好的。
She is nothing but a child、她只不过是个孩子。
none other than:(表示惊讶)不是别人,正是……(= no one else but)
It’s none other than Tom!We thought you were in Africa、none the +比较级词+ for:毫不,一点也不
He spent 2 weeks in hospital but he’s none the better for it、他在医院里待了两个星期,但一点也没好转。
My car is none the worse for wear、我的车子一点也没有损耗。
none the wiser:不知情
If we take only one piece of cake, mother will be none the wiser、如果我们只拿一小块蛋糕,母亲是不会知道的。
none too:(在形容词或副词前)不太;一点都不
The service in this restaurant is none too fast、这家旅馆的服务一点效率都没有。anything but:①除---之外什么都(此处的but等于except)②决不(=not at all)I eat anything but(except)fish、除了鱼,我什么都吃。
She is anything but a good cook、她决不是个好厨师。(即:除了好厨师,她什么都是。)
anything of:①(疑问句/条件句)一点点;②(否定句)一点也(没有)
Is he anything of a poet? 他有一点点诗人的样子吗?
I haven’t seen anything of him lately、最近我没有见过他。
第四篇:考研英语作文
As is vividly depicted in the picture,________.________.the most striking feature of the drawing is that____________.(As what it said in the picture)
Clarely,the drawer,through the picture,aims at reavealing to such a opinion that_____.(As it says____).It is generally accepted that nothing is important than to________,________.In addition,there is no doubt that on no account can we ignore the value of_____,_____.More over significantly,so precious is__that we can not afford to let it along,____.what’s more,without__,hardly can we________.For instance,______.Briefly speaking,it effectively clarifies that whatever/wherever/whenever,we should(never)______.Accordingly,as far as I am concerned,it is impetative for us to take some measures to enhance/reverse this situation.What we should do is to bear in mind that____is of great siginificance both our soceity an ourselves For one thing,as a responsible citizens,we are all expected to enhance the awareness that____is vital for young generation,For anther thing,the local and central authorities,in coordination with the press,are obliged to try their best to make it better.Only in this way can we have a promising feature.
第五篇:考研英语作文
(二)四段论黄金万能模板举例
What the drawing vividly presents goes far beyond a simple drawing.Instead, it carries important implications: 主旨
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描写图画或图表。Odd and funny as it seems to be, such phenomenon is so
widespread that we can’t afford to ignore them.(第三段贬义):To begin with,主题not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a
frustrating and humiliating life.In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题to contradict with a harmonious society.No better
illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93%
of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.(第三段褒义):First of all, 主题is crucial for every individual.With its seemingly magic power.主题can not only
accelerate better individual’s development ,but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world.Second,those equipped with 主题are always admired and respected, because 主题may endow them with more competence.changes,self-confidence to overcome diffculties and handle problems.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example
mentioned below.According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题
Just as an ancient Chinese philosophic book concludes“, All that is needed for the prevalence of a mislead is that good people
do nothing.” To begin with, schools and mass media should serve as a counterbalance to the upsetting trend, doing their utmost
to develop worthy values and qualities among people and awakening people of they rowing threat of this phenomenon.What is
more/Besides, the administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.Fortunately, due attention has
been paid and effective measures have been encouraged.This is a promising start, although there is still a long way for us to go.(三)三段论黄金负面万能模板举例
(偶像崇拜/过渡捕捞/旅游之余/养老问题/诚信/过渡保护)
Poem is loquacious picture, picture is taciturn poem.-Cicero: Rhetoric.As is shown above, 图画描述, which seems to be
humorous and ridiculous.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that 图画描述.Simple as the cartoon is, the
implication is not only instructive, but thought-provoking on second thoughts as well.It, though, may be obscuring an
unrecognized reality: the serious phenomenon of 主题is facing individuals/ families/
society.A little fire can kindle a forest.–The Bible.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several undesirable effects
have been put forward.To begin with, nothing is more harmful than 主题to contradict with a harmonious society.In addition,no issue is as damaging as 主题to increase social/personal burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.Last but not the least, 主题hinders the social/personal development and progress.The latest was a panel form a certain
international organization, to tell us that the tendency of 主题, which they believe is still in its infancy, effectively began and will
no doubt go further.If we can’t take useful measures, we may not tackle this evil trend, and more serious results with it may
come out unexpectedly.Life, I believe, ask a continuous serious of adjustments to reality.–Robert G Allman:
A Ball to Roll Around.What should
we do to prevent 主题? The most imperative effort is that corresponding laws and relevant regulations be carried out to(curb
and harness this urgent problem/prohibit 主题/severely punished those who shun the responsibility of doing).Only in this way
can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.(四)三段论黄金个人积极模板
(乐观/设立新目标/合作/自信)
Poem is loquacious picture, picture is taciturn poem.-Cicero: Rhetoric.As is shown above, 图画描述, which seems to be
humorous and ridiculous.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that 图画描述.There is no doubt that its
symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration: nothing can be compared with 主题.Generally speaking, there are advantages to advocating the quality of 主题.It is universally acknowledged that 主题is
momentous and fundamental to anyone who undertakes great deeds.Undoubtedly, it is 主题that keep us continually doing
something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and
competition and that offers us the foundation for maintaining success.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the
example mentioned below.According to one of the latest survey conducted by China Academy of Social Science, those who 非
主题are particular susceptible to developing depression and disorders compared with those who are(do)not.Life is not crossing a field.–Boris Pasternak: Hamlet.To be sure, self-realization to 主题is very critical, but it is much more
significant for the authorities to launch the nation-wide campaign to enhance the social atmosphere of 主题.However, it is easier
said than done.Practice is the most important factor.Only by doing 主题can you put your capacities into full play and can you
be the winner in the society.(五)三段论黄金宏观积极模板
(网络/爱心是一盏灯/文化交流/文化火锅)
Poem is loquacious picture, picture is taciturn poem.-Cicero: Rhetoric.As is shown above, 图画描述, which seems to be
humorous and ridiculous.The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that 图画描述.Simple as the cartoon is, the
implication is not only instructive, but thought-provoking on second thoughts as well.It, though, may be obscuring an
unrecognized reality: nothing can be compared with 主题
A little fire can kindle a forest.–The Bible.To account for the 主题, several desirable effects have been put forward.To
begin with, nothing is more crucial than 主题to comply with a harmonious society.In addition, no issue is as efficient as 主题to
diminish social/personal burdens, which is a bright situation we are willing to see.Last but not the least, the development of 主题
underlies the progress of the society and the rapid expansion of our national economy.The latest was a panel form a certain
international organization, to tell us that 63.93% of juveniles who agree with that 主题will live a happy life and even feel hope
about future.Were there no 主题, never should we do(taste)the real happiness of life.Life, I believe, ask a continuous serious of adjustments to reality.–Robert G Allman: A Ball to Roll Around.What should we
do to push forward 主题? The most imperative effort is that the central authority be expected to cooperate regionally in
promoting a situation.Only in this way can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the
uttermost.