上海高考英语满分作文汇总

第一篇：上海高考英语满分作文汇总

June 8th

Dear Haiqing，I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can‘t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much.And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.To begin with，beauty is just skin deep.Don‘t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance？ He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance； in the same sense，he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour.So please，just forget about those brand-name things.What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you.As a student，you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest，you look very smart in it.Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things？

Secondly，I know your parents are both average workers.Hard as they work，they don‘t earn much.Despite this，they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand.Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces，how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford，which will surely break their hearts？ Remember，parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps； they don‘t owe us Sony Walkman； nor do they owe us Nike shoes，If you really want those fancy things，you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden.Don’t you think so？

Thirdly，we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive.What‘s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better？ My friend，take my advice，and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.Poverty，sometimes，is a good thing.It can test a person‘s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else.Keep working hard，and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future.Now you may as well focus on your study.Anyway，wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long？

Keep in touch.Yours

Huangping 459 2012 As is vividly described in the picture, the foreign pupils are raising their hands, eager to answer the teacher’s questions.Judging from the smiles on their faces, they must be very happy, relaxed and free.This reminds me of my primary school days, which was totally different from theirs.As far as I can remember, my teachers as well as my parents always told me to keep quiet and sit straight in class, not to do anything without the

teacher’s permission, including smiling and speaking out our viewpoints freely.I did as I was told.Frankly speaking, I’m fond of the atmosphere in western classes.But on the other hand, I still treasure the strict discipline learned when I was young.As a matter of fact, I think it is different cultures that make different classes and also different students.I am glad to see that the education of China is undergoing a significant reform, which aims to reduce students’ learning burden and encourage students to be more imaginative and creative.I firmly believe that in the near future more and more Chinese students will enjoy a free and open classroom atmosphere.192 2.As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way.The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.Compared with the class performance in local China, the difference is quite obvious.We Chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in a careful way.I ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon? Why class performance of Chinese students is quite different from that of foreign students? Possible reasons can be listed as follows.Most important of all, education system in China is the key reason.The first day we become the primary student, our teachers tell us to obey the rules in class.We put our hands back and stay quiet in class.Lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in Chinese class.Teacher is the leading actor or actress and student is always the supporting roles.Gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise questions and give the answers.The second point to be mentioned is that Chinese students hold different attitudes toward study.In our minds, we always think what we should learn instead of how we should learn knowledge in a smart way.We behave us as a passive listener, but foreign student act as a active learner.As a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a fish.Taking what has been discussed above into account, there is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are supposed to be a learner or a quiet listener.193 2009 •

It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from.I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.•

During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge.A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart.This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden.Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn.A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.• The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden.In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative.Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.200 2008 1.A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision.First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation.Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years.Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm for the group dancing competition.155

2.Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reasons for my decision.First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me.Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time.What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner.I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class.In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.151 2007

A Present for Father’s Day

The Father’s Day will come soon.and I want to give my Dad a present.That is a VIP card of a health club.When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher.During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour.From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort.There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart.And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.Time flies and I’m 18 now.As I grow up, Father is getting older.He is now still diving into piles of books.With the health club membership, I hope that he will set aside some time to do more exercise.I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends as well.150 2.It is widely acknowledged that a good present is of great value to a person and even prone to change his or her life.As for me , one of the most impressive presents I have given to my friends is a watch which I have used for three years.The watch was given to Tom, who is one of my best friends.Diligent and warm-hearted as he is , he sometimes has no sense of time, which causes him to be late for many things and leads to some trouble in work.By giving him such a watch, I hope he will pay more attention to punctuality, which may bring him more credibility in life and higher efficiency in both work and study.Besides, he used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the new environment after leaving the old friends in high school, and thus I hope that such a gift will remind him of the good old days we happily spent together and help him to feel better when he misses me.Anyway ,I do wish that Tom will like this present, which hopefully will bring him good luck.192 2006

Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north.The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south.This makes a big difference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family.Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers.Any candidate who chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university.Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only.However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.162 2.Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking.It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter.However, that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted.What counts is the reputation it has.Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.Also, the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted.The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points.So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.135

2005

There is an old English saying that there must be a use for my talent.I have regarded it as my motto for many years.From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another.With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road.He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture.Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood.Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us.The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent.The most important factor is your confidence.If you believe the saying that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed.205

第二篇：2012上海高考满分作文

灵光一现

“天才，百分之一是灵感，百分之九十九是汗水。但那百分之一的灵感是最重要的，甚至比那百分之九十九的汗水都要重要。” ——题记

如果智慧是一朵莲花，那莲花正中一定擎有一支点亮的蜡。荧荧的那一剪光虽微弱暧昧，我也要它骄傲的捧出辉煌。十里平湖，智慧的闪光就仿佛是微风漾起的一道道涟漪;万紫千红，智慧的闪光就好像是那偶尔飞来嗅闻芬芳的彩蝶;晴空万里，智慧的闪光就好似那展翅翱翔啸唳长鸣的云鹤。

残酷的岁月扬起漫天黄沙，将一个个或悲壮或悠然的身影埋没于九尺黄泉，然而，这又怎能湮没在黑暗中闪动的智慧的火焰呢?一草一木一花一叶，万事万物，都在不停地撩拨着我们的情思。情思，是灵感的触发器。灵感，是和我们捉迷藏的玩伴，稍一疏忽，它就化为一缕青烟无影无踪。凡人需要灵感，文人更需要灵感。后者比之于前者，其可贵之处正在于他们多半会紧紧抓住这黑暗中的那一道闪电。

南山之下，遍地金菊，不正是激发出陶潜灵感的产物吗?菊香弥漫，再酌上几杯浊酒，岂不美哉?“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。此中有真意，欲辨已忘言”。此景此情，夫复何求?会稽山阴兰亭，云天朗朗，惠风和畅。诸位文人墨客列坐水滨，流觞饮酌，歌咏唱答，不也是出自内心深处被激发出的那些许情感吗?一篇《兰亭集序》，唱出了“齐彭殇为妄作，一死生为虚诞”的感慨。还有赤壁古战场，不只有多少人去凭吊过。苏东坡、辛弃疾，后来者更是不计其数。赤壁在他们的头顶上架起一道美丽的彩虹，在文坛竖起了一道亮丽的风景线。

我们生而平凡，可是我们依然对自己心灵上闪过的微光视而不见，更不用说伸出手抓住它了。一个落地的苹果成就了牛顿在科学界的丰功伟绩，一只飞翔的鸟儿为莱特兄弟展开了翱翔天穹的机翼。“灵感是一个不喜欢拜访懒汉的客人，”车尔尼雪夫斯基如是说。我们无意中丢弃了属于自己的财富，不正是由于我们的懒惰吗?

风中的余香 那辉煌的盛唐早已过去，但诗歌仍千百年来在人们心间流淌;古希腊的城邦早已覆亡，而那自由民主的星火却依旧蔓延，在更深广的土地上，燃烧了几千年。

犹太王大卫在戒指上刻有一句铭文“一切都会过去”。是的，没有什么可以永存，最宏伟的大厦最终也不过化作历史风尘中的一把碎土，但我们创造过的思想与美，却在它们的载体与躯壳湮灭后，化作历史风沙中的一抹余香，缠绕亘古，永不逝去。

当年左光斗被魏忠贤杀害后，他的喉骨被命令磨成粉，随(后)魏忠贤一饮而下。连喉骨也彻底地碎了，魏忠贤才彻底放心了，如此，你还如何再上书、进言?他却不知，自己饮下的，是一生的恐惧。那东林党人的傲骨不灭，他们的灵魂成为奸恶之人永远的噩梦，也幻化成为历史一曲永恒悲壮的绝响。

是的，一切都不会过去。形式的过去预言着内涵的永存。

而今，在这个身边风景迅速变化的时代里，你是否曾闻到，那风中的余香?古龙曾说，有人的地方就有江湖。而有生活的地方，有人生活的地方就有传承与遗留。有那么多人感慨的无非物质文化遗产的丧失，于是他们迫切地想重建，想发扬光大。如此并没有错，只是有许多的文化，它随着历史的云烟，早已很难在当今世界坐上一把辉煌的交椅。它们的位置，应当成为风中的淡淡香气，人们精神家园的盆景，在无声中滋养与温润我们的感情。那些遗忘是必然的啊，传统的审美，或是略带迷信色彩的习俗，它们其实从未在(我们)身边消散，只是硬性地想换回轰轰烈烈的纪念形式，我们才反会感(觉)[到]，它们逝去的姿态。

并且一切都能，都值得成为那风中的余香。逝与留的辩证正是自然与历史最智慧的斟酌。当表面随着风沙渐渐融化，那内核也正缓缓显露它的精华。时光逝留的沙漏，更能让我们看清一样事物它真正的价值。大西北的敦煌，曾经的飞天完整而清晰，但对画上它的人，它只是壁画;如今的它虽干涸百孔，却更能承担历史的厚重，真正的杰作，必是经过历史风霜的淘洗，然后逝去了一些，却更余留了真和美。

我们这个时代，是否想让后世回望的时候能找寻到如此一些不灭的精魂?那就让文学的泡沫，让市场的包装淡去些吧，它们，只会在风中逸散。

一直难忘的一次画展，是新兴的画家自办的，朋友看到一幅画问我，那究竟是传统画风还是后现代的?我看着那幅画，很温暖。

那一刻，我仿佛闻到了风中的余香。

昆明湖

靠岸的湖水很浅，绿如春草荡漾，蝌蚪状的小鱼，缓缓游动。

鸳鸯在远处，一只色深，一只羽淡，随波起起伏伏。再远处，是弱柳扶风的西堤，是失于阴霾的楼阁，更远处，是水墨轮廓的群山。

孱弱夕阳，播下他仅剩的金色谷种，这是与黑夜的最后一搏，他还想要收割什么？

满湖的碎金都放荡的摇晃起来，它们要破水而出，要发芽，要开花，要结果。湖水放任它们争着闹着，耀人眼，谁敢说不美？但柳叶落了，花也落，花是闲花，才懂得水自有情，并不附着谁的光华。

所以，满湖的白日繁星，都摇不出丰收的铃音。黄昏还是走了暗道，夕阳注定要输。湖水何曾想过要孕育什么？月光千年，也只能映一轮苍白的脸，一打捞，就破碎，谁也不能从中攫取一丝水意。

余晖终散尽，昆明湖的水面，浩浩渺渺，从眼底无边无际的延展开去，似一副天地的画卷，辽阔从容，在这快要闭园的静谧时刻，这无人而至的偏僻死角。

忽的，就不敢举目四眺了。

留声机

十二岁的时候，我第一次去她家，在电话机旁翻到一个小本子。上面歪歪斜斜写着一个奇怪人名——黄家驹。

他是个死去了的人。她细细为我讲解彼时还红的那个乐团，语气却无法平静。她才十二岁，爱着的男人死掉了，爱着的歌却日复一日在耳边回响。我凝视她，只一瞬，我想大人们不可能理解，一个小孩子热热闹闹的追星，其实是如此孤独和炽热，类似自焚。

有一个与她同名的小女生，疯狂喜欢平民天后徐怀钰，经常打进电台节目要点播徐怀钰的歌。我遇见她，总要笑上她一回，好像那个小女生，就是她的变身一般。她也笑，似乎有点宠溺的味道。

那时我们正读初中，在一个班，班上的人多多少少都与音乐有关。我仍旧听黄安，不屑四大天王，对粤语歌全无好感，因为听不懂歌词。她后来不再努力向我推荐beyond，不知是不是喜欢上张信哲的缘故。

去省城参加合唱比赛的时候，我听了张信哲的歌。他唱得五脏俱裂，痛彻心扉，但他看上去却是温温柔柔的样子。多年以后，我谈起他的同性恋传闻，笑得没心没肺，似乎很想证明，这才是人生的真相，现实总是反讽，而怎样的爱痛，都不会伤了继续生活下去的决心。

初二那次出行，我哼了很久的“不做你的爱人，不流一滴眼泪”。

我果真没能成为他的爱人。清晨的冷涩空气中，大水漫过的校园满是潮湿的草木之气，昨夜的高价蜡烛已成灰烬飘散在风里，我喜欢的男孩就站在斜前方，他的蓝灰格子衬衣犹新不染尘埃，似乎穿越记忆轻而易举。我的确没有流一滴眼泪，年少的喜欢，才是真正的欢喜，忐忑揣摩已是极致，哪顾得上哭。泪水在眼眶打了个转又回到心里，说出口的戏言被人听到也只是装傻，我果真没能成为他的爱人，这原因已与爱不爱无关，长大才明白，爱实在是爱情中，最小的那个因素，它其实什么都不能逾越。

她继续喜欢着张信哲，继续淡忘着张信哲。

爱一个人，与忘一个人，竟然是同步发生的。这真理不能不让我惊奇。

昆明湖

靠在古老的墙壁上，听水声，甚过世间任何音乐。

鸟鸣太躁，松风太萧索，日月星辰，又偏偏默默无语。只有水声，似流云万端，掠过天际，倾入山谷，又攀上绝壁，纵身一跃，于虚空中开出剔透雪莲，你想要摘，伸臂一探，只得了满手泡影，如雾如电。

这就是水声。你想要简单点。好吧，那就简单点，再简单点。

不要说话不要笑，不要拿起照相机一通咔嚓。就靠着墙壁，闭上眼睛，关上耳朵，失却所有感官，所有肉身，你相不相信，光凭一颗心，也可以行到水穷处，坐看云起时？

留声机

明亮宾馆里，我问她现在喜欢哪个明星。她笑说喜欢过的明星太多，不太记得了。然后突然爆出来说，现在喜欢《宫》里面的金正勋。

宾馆里有一面不大的全身镜，她对着练习拉丁，跳得很好看。活动室里，她随一群学生摆好姿势，老师的口令响起来，她的身体也有节奏的扭动起来。

我静静看着，偶尔她舞到回身，我赶忙趁机做一个夸张的笑脸给她，她也嗔怪一笑。突然就觉得温暖，这种相视而笑的默契，不是每个人都懂得珍惜。

我喜欢她的马尾辫，长而匀称，似一位跳舞女子的身材。

她从小就学跳舞，后来开始学钢琴，也慢慢学会波澜不惊的生活。十一点就准时睡觉，每周去跳两次舞，书桌上摊开着与经济学有关的数学书，电脑里干净又清爽，丝毫没有阴郁秘密的样子。

把生活铺展开来，再整整齐齐的叠好。她不说，我也知道，她想认真的找一个人，好好的谈恋爱，然后好好的工作、结婚、生子，赡养父母。一切都是好好的。就像小桔灯里说的那样。

很多气泡一般美丽的梦，在生活的暗流下兀自鼓起又破灭，但这没有关系，水还是自顾自的流，她渐渐变成我喜欢和钦慕的女生，温柔又贤惠，平和又自持。当我不服气的想找一个破绽入侵她内心时，我只想到一件小得不能再小的往事。

十二岁，她带我去滑冰。同去的还有一个男生，我们滑了一圈，她凑过来笑嘻嘻说，那个男生觉得你不错。我的脸立刻一本正经的红了起来，她马上安慰说，没什么，只是说说而已。

她应该比我更早懂得爱的轻重，世事的本质，外屋世界的风雨变幻，所以才能够自然而然的找到一种平衡。只是，她自己，还不知晓，这种平衡多么让人羡慕。更何况，当她是如此善良的时候。

在她那里，我受到的是最隆重却不生分的接待。想来机场接我，携着糯米藕迎我。早晨，她起身了，我还在睡梦中。从学校回来，带牛奶和蝴蝶酥。晚上，提着鲜艳的草莓敲门。手提摆在桌上任我使用，打车吃饭抢着掏腰包。

当我请求她帮忙时，一口答应毫无犹豫。

几乎，就想留下来，每周爬一次紫金山，去一次中山陵，在她相机里留下更多的耍宝照片。几乎。

食堂里，话语正酣，她突然说，一直没敢问你，还以为你仍旧为那件事耿耿于怀。

我笑了，当然不是。只是，我也因了同样的理由没能敢问她。

不管她的平衡静好多么令人羡慕，却还是成了一道横梁，隔在我们面前。

我不知道她的感情，是早深藏不露，积成烈火，还是已细水流长，化为无痕。所以，一直没有细问，她和他，究竟是怎样，就分道扬镳了。

她有没有像我一样痛哭流涕过？恋爱时，她只说过，是真的喜欢他的；分开时，她也说过，是真的没有办法在一起。

但她从未说过，疼。

仍旧波澜不惊的生活，也许那些夜灯如豆的疼痛，都被现实的针线，绵绵密密的缝进了早睡的梦里。

也许，是我没有见过。她难过的时候，我在远方，在自己的世界里，我们的母亲就像姐妹一样，如果我们也是姐妹，我怎能留着自己的姐姐独自作战，不闻不问呢？

这一切都没有答案。好多东西都没有答案。比如，寂寞，比如，成长，比如，恣意的快乐。

比如，她本来极爱吃辣，如今，却克制了。我当然知道原因，却无法懂得命运这种安排下隐藏的暗喻。

昆明湖

地里长出小小青笋，如钟乳石冒尖。又有紫色野花，瓣瓣分明。满树白玉兰，一夜之间点亮华彩灯笼，照出春的来路归程，那么清晰，不容置疑。

我没有妄想抓住什么。

昆明湖那么大，那么美，那么丰盈，烟波茫茫，水雾渺渺，似一个人涨潮的泪眼。

你接得住吗？

留声机

最后，她送我走。上一次，她没有能够送。她不喜陌生的热闹场合，饭局渐末，我被几个朋友送往车站。我坐在火车上，听歌，发短信，那时刚过元旦，狂欢的气氛似乎尚未消减。

这一次，她送我走。我们先去常德米粉店吃了牛肉米粉，然后去民航站点坐大巴。她抢着要买票，被我抢先了。

我上了大巴，隔着一排座位和一扇车窗，看她站在温和的阳光里，对我挥手。我凝视她，只一瞬，然后扬起嘴角微笑，她微笑回应，点头，然后轻轻走开，很快被车体掩去，消失不见。

她似乎说过，这一别又不知何时才能见面。是的，每次离开，我都会自问这个问题。

可是，这也是那些没有答案的事情中的一件。

我不再听黄安，甚至都不再听阿游，她也不再听黄家驹和张信哲。大巴开了，我耳边响起的是萧闳仁，他一直唱：“约好一起听这首歌，老了以后”。

我突然觉得自己很老了。

第三篇：2012上海高考满分作文

灵光一现（选段）

天才，百分之一是灵感，百分之九十九是汗水。但那百分之一的灵感是最重要的，甚至比那百分之九十九的汗水都要重要。”——题记

如果智慧是一朵莲花，那莲花正中一定擎有一支点亮的蜡。荧荧的那一剪光虽微弱暧昧，我也要它骄傲的捧出辉煌。十里平湖，智慧的闪光就仿佛是微风漾起的一道道涟漪；万紫千红，智慧的闪光就好像是那偶尔飞来嗅闻芬芳的彩蝶；晴空万里，智慧的闪光就好似那展翅翱翔啸唳长鸣的云鹤。

残酷的岁月扬起漫天黄沙，将一个个或悲壮或悠然的身影埋没于九尺黄泉，然而，这又怎能湮没在黑暗中闪动的智慧的火焰呢？一草一木一花一叶，万事万物，都在不停地撩拨着我们的情思。情思，是灵感的触发器。灵感，是和我们捉迷藏的玩伴，稍一疏忽，它就化为一缕青烟无影无踪。凡人需要灵感，文人更需要灵感。后者比之于前者，其可贵之处正在于他们多半会紧紧抓住这黑暗中的那一道闪电。

南山之下，遍地金菊，不正是激发出陶潜灵感的产物吗？菊香弥漫，再酌上几杯浊酒，岂不美哉？“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山。此中有真意，欲辨已忘言”。此景此情，夫复何求？会稽山阴兰亭，云天朗朗，惠风和畅。诸位文人墨客列坐水滨，流觞饮酌，歌咏唱答，不也是出自内心深处被激发出的那些许情感吗？一篇《兰亭集序》，唱出了“齐彭殇为妄作，一死生为虚诞”的感慨。还有赤壁古战场，不只有多少人去凭吊过。苏东坡、辛弃疾，后来者更是不计其数。赤壁在他们的头顶上架起一道美丽的彩虹，在文坛竖起了一道亮丽的风景线。

我们生而平凡，可是我们依然对自己心灵上闪过的微光视而不见，更不用说伸出手抓住它了。一个落地的苹果成就了牛顿在科学界的丰功伟绩，一只飞翔的鸟儿为莱特兄弟展开了翱翔天穹的机翼。“灵感是一个不喜欢拜访懒汉的客人，”车尔尼雪夫斯基如是说。我

第四篇：2014上海高考满分作文

2014上海高考满分作文：未经沙漠不懂自由

“我想要怒放的生命/就像飞翔在辽阔天空/就像穿行在无边的旷野/拥有挣脱一切的力量……”

心底里，偶尔会涌动起这样的歌声来，沙哑、愤怒、狂放。而我的身体却依旧拘束于繁琐日常事务中，只将“怒放”的声音化为轻言细语，与身边的家人朋友聊聊天，或是哼上几句细柔的歌词。

生命的本质是孤独的。如果将人生看作一次行旅，在最初出发时，我们常常轻狂自信，以为自己可以无拘无束、轻舞飞扬，乘坐最快的航行器，领略最多最美的风景；待到行至中途，几乎无可避免，要经历各种顿挫，从理想的破灭到情爱友谊的背叛，或是亲人的离别、同行者的分道，终有一日，你会猛然发现，自己是置身于荒蛮无边的沙漠之中，前路渺茫，难以辨清哪里才是该去的方向，身上不知何时已背负重重压力、种种责任，疲惫不堪，却已欲退而不能。

这样的时候，该怎么办？“人生在世不称意，明朝散发弄扁舟”，究竟只是一种消极逃避。逃不掉的人们，有时会任由迷惘与焦虑的情绪蔓延侵袭，甚至不堪重负，宁愿身体的自戕换取精神的自由解脱。于是，我们的时代，才有那么多抑郁症与自杀的消息，从四面八方传来。

卢梭说：“人人生而自由，但又在无所不在的枷锁之中。”米兰·昆德拉则提醒我们“生命中不能承受”的，不是“重”而是“轻”。如此想来，每一个人原本就是“戴着镣铐的舞蹈者”。束缚我们的，或是名与利，或是理想与责任。是在枷锁中日渐僵化，还是保有灵魂的快乐自由，取决于我们自己的修炼和选择。

我认识一位罕见病患儿的妈妈。与人们想象的相反，在最初的绝望过后，她已很少愁眉苦脸，因为生活已化为一件件具体繁忙的事务，不幸与艰难见得多了，让她更懂得珍惜那一点一滴的收获与快乐。

人生行旅该有很多风景。如果其间有漫漫长路须在沙漠中穿行，一样可以有幕天席地的快乐与放浪形骸的自在。不必汲汲追问命运的不公正安排，不必因负担与束缚而计较生命的自由与不自由。惟其身经沙漠，才懂得与人相处，也才懂得自由的可贵；惟其受困枷锁，生命的怒放才有真正的重量。

第五篇：2013上海高考满分作文

2013上海高考满分作文：什么最重要

15岁以前我是个游击队员，除了吃饭睡觉，余下时间，就在琢磨怎么跟老师和家长进行地雷战、地道战、狙击战。甚至，无数次梦中构思着要发动一场崭新的“西安事变”。

如果，我那个无条件无理由无限制疼爱我的奶奶还活在世上，我就敢请她充作三方会谈的主持人，然后，一张茶几，两把椅子，我手里端着一杯可乐，镇定自若。向对面那个拍着惊堂木的黑脸判官宣读一份和平协议：

一、放弃逼迫你儿子一定要考上名牌大学的不合理要求。

二、解除不允许观看长篇电视剧，尤其是爱情版本，这条严重阻碍我生理心理健康发展的不合理规定。

三、师相互勾结监督监视我人身自由的非法行为。

四、还我电脑，界的美好渴求。

要为这个社会和国家培养出一个栋梁，那么，当那时候，定做的杀威棒。但是我不怕，出家里祖传的狗头铡吗？

可惜这只是梦。不吃饭就要饿死。不

18苏红，英文名只能把希望寄托在学校老师身上，其中，最。当我疯狂爱上老师的那刻，我恍然顿悟，REDHONG，在篮球场上于是在课间休息的原来人生中重要的东西很多，但那都只是一个个的片段，却没有一个永恒的主题。

究竟什么样的东西才是生命中最重要的？当中东发生战争，叙利亚人民认为和平最重要；当非洲闹了饥荒，那些被饿死的孩子认为粮食最重要。当四川发生了地震，建设部门说房子质量是百年大计，桥梁发生了倒塌，有关方面认为反腐倡廉刻不容缓„„

那么，有没有一件事，能够独一无二超越一切，成为这个世界以及所有人一致公认的重中之重呢？仿佛有，仿佛又没有。我后面那个女生认为镜子非常重要，因为她是拿好看当饭吃的，我的同桌男同学认为考上大学更加重要，因为不考上他的爸爸就要把他送到拳击培训班去做义务陪练。而我，此时此刻，中东的战争我是顾不上了，非洲的粮荒也恕我爱莫能助，日本海啸四川地震，全世界水深火热中的同胞请你们坚持90分钟，等我考试完了再去设法解救你们吧！

所以，真正意义上的重要，不是你坐在那里苦思冥想能想得到的，而是随着生存坏境的改变而随之变化的，包括这个世界，美国人认为石油重要，因为它可以从军事工业上掐断全世界的咽喉，中国人认为经济重要，因为13亿中国人民需要吃饱喝好越过越好。当你处于什么位置的时候，你才会知道，这个世界没有一样东西是不重要的，只不过，要看你什么时候需要。