高考英语作文满分法宝

第一篇：高考英语作文满分法宝

高考英语作文满分法宝

写作是英语词汇、语法和使用英语诸方面能力的真实反应。高考中的书面表达是一种有控制的写作（controlled writing），或称有指导的作文（guided composition）。随着近年来学生英语水平的提高，高考书面表达的要求也在不断提高。五年前可以得20分的作文，现在连15分也得不上了。因此，考生必须重视书面表达的备考与应试。

一、好作文的具体要求

2011年全国将有20套左右高考试题，书面表达题的测试形式和所占分数也各有不同。但一般的要求是：根据所给情景，写一篇100个单词左右的书面材料；情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、短文等。书面表达的要求是：切中题意；语言准确，得当；条理清楚。

好的作文应达到以下几点（多数省市要求写一篇短文，计分25分）： 1．要点全面、表达准确、语句连贯，符合交际要求。

2．能用书写体熟练清楚地书写，格式、连笔、词距、标点正确。3．书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等无严重错误。4．基本语法和常用句型无严重错误，意思表达清楚。5．恰当使用复杂结构、新颖词汇和顺畅连接。

二、试评学生真实高考作文得分

以下是两篇从高考学生考卷中选取的作文。请你根据参考答案和评分标准，自己给它们评个分数，这对你了解高考作文的具体要求非常有好处。

试题：

（2007年北京试卷）假设你是李华，要给英国笔友Harry写封信，介绍你班两位同学竞选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。（20分）

注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于60。

提示词：竞选班长monitor election

（二）评分标准：

第一档：（18分~20分）。完全完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖了所有内容要点；运用了多样的句式和丰富的词汇；语法或用词方面有个别错误；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。

第二档：（15分~17分）。完全完成了试题规定的任务:覆盖了所有内容要点；运用的句式和词汇能满足要求；语法和用词基本准确；使用了简单的语句间连接成分，所写内容连贯。

第三档：（12分~14分）。基本完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖了内容要点；运用的句式和词汇基本满足任务要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。

第四档：（6分~11分）。未恰当完成试题规定的任务：漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容；所用句式和词汇有限；语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。

第五档：（1分~5分）。未完成试题规定的任务：明显遗漏主要内容；句式单调、词汇贫乏；语法错误较多。

第六档：0分。未能传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。

（三）参考答案： One possible version： How are things going? Last Monday, our class held a monitor election.This was our first election, so everyone was excited.Two of my classmates took part in the race;Liu Dong and Wang Hong.They each gave a speech telling us what they would do when they were elected.Then we voted for the monitor.The result was 28 to 15 in Wang Hong’s favor.Wang Hong became our new monitor.The whole class cheered for her, and she promised to do the best she could for us all.Best wishes, Li Hua

（四）学生的作文：

（1）______分

Last Monday, an exciting monitor election was held in my class.The two candidates are Liu Dong and Wang Hong.In the beginning of the election, each of them gave a speech to us and talked about the future plan.Then the most exciting

moment came.Every student stood up and walked to the election box to cast a vote to his/her ideal monitor.I thought Wang Hong was well qualified for this position.So I wrote down her name and put my note into the box.Several minutes later, the final result came.Compared to Liu Dong’s 15 votes, Wang Hong got 28 votes and became or monitor.We all congratulated to Wang Hong and believed that she would serve our class heart and soul in the future.What about the monitor election in your class? I hope that I will receive your reply soon.（2）______分

Last Monday, we had a monitor election.At the beginning the two candidates, LiuDong and Wang Hong gave us a speech introducing themselves and telling us their plans in the future.Then we had a vote.We wrote down the name of the better one in our mind and put the paper in a box.Then the exciting time came that our teacher counted the number and wrote it on the blackboard.The result was that 28 students who voted Wang Hong, 13 more than the number of students who voted LiuDong, which meaned WangHong was elected as our monitor.Wang is really pretty good.I believe she will be a good monitor.（五）得分与启示

第一篇得分：19分；第二篇得分：13分。

启示：

1．第一篇得了高分是因为该文内容要点全，符合交际要求、语言地道，有复杂句式，顺畅连接和准确用语。

2．第二篇得了三档的分数是因为该文虽然内容要点齐全，但语言功底不够，句式平庸，只会一般词汇，且有一定语言错误。

3．考生要想得一个高分就一定要注意内容要全，连接要顺畅，句式要有变化，符合交际要求。

三、书面表达应试要领

1．第一步是仔细审题。重点注意内容要点，写作对象和交际目的。

2．要写草稿，实在没时间也要写一个提纲。

3．确定好时态。转述别人观点常用现在时。记叙经常发生的事用一般现在时，描写过去发生的事用过去时。

4．不出现中文，不用汉语拼音。不生造中国式的英语。要用你听过的话来说，用你读过的句子来写。

5．第一句很重要，不要轻易下笔。尾句部分容易出错，要留意。6．为防止遗漏内容要点，可在原题上标出记号。

7．几个必要的连词一定要用，或顺接、或转折、或让步、或比较。

8．写记叙文，注意六个要素：who, where, when, why, how and the result.9．议论文，注意论点与论据一致。还要注意是让你写一方观点还是介绍对立的两种观点。

10．应用文主要是写信或通知，告知活动安排。一般按时间顺序写比较稳妥。11．试卷注意部分给出的参考词汇应尽量用上，不要自作主张忽略不用。

12．词汇的闪光之处即不要重复你在本文中用过的和大家都可能用的。全是简单句得不了好分。要用新颖的词汇传达最通俗的信息。

13．采用多变的句式，如被动句式、定语从句，with加复合宾语以及倒装句等。14．有时候阅读题中的句型可以稍加改造，抄来用在自己的作文中。15．字数一般应稍多于试题的最低要求，但不宜过长，因为言多有失。

16．写完后要检查复核，重点看动词的使用。最好是写完作文后先查查别的题型，因为自己刚写完的东西马上检查常常看不出问题。

四、书面表达提高措施

（一）几个小建议

1．经常写随笔，每日三五句。出点错误也没什么。2．背诵小短文或漂亮句子，多多益善。

3．最好的练习材料就是近几年各地的高考试题。练习时，先看题，自己写，写完后看答案，根据答案，修正自己的作文。但注意不要过多修正，要保持自己作文的原貌，每次只改动3~4个地方即可。4．初学写作多写记叙文。

5．抄写短文，会使自己摆脱中文式的英文，可练习抄写新概念第二册。6．多听、多说、多读对写作的提高至关重要。

（二）背会20个连接词语

1.to tell the truth；2.last but not least；3.on the contrary；4.that is；5.believe it or not； 6.so far as I know；7.in the middle of； 8.next to；9.in addition； 10.in general；11.in short；12.so long as；13.to begin with；14.in case；15.what’s more； 16.as a matter of fact；17.on the other hand；18.as a result； 19.generally speaking； 20.in my opinion

（三）熟练运用30个基础句型

最基本句型5个：

1.主语+谓语 The story happened yesterday.2.主语+谓语+宾语 They study English.3.主语+系动词+表语 They are from London.4.主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语 She made Tom stand there.5.主语+谓语+双宾语 I gave Tom a book.对比议论：

1．我同意这个计划。I am in favor of the plan.2．我们认为这不是个好计划。We don’t think it is a good plan.3．在我看来，它不值得做。It seems to me it is not worth doing.4.学生们的观点不一致。Opinions are divided among the students.5.有人认为它好，而别人认为不好。Some think it is good, while others believe it is poor.图画图表说明：

1．这幅图画描写了我们的学校生活。This is a picture of our school life.2．有一个男孩站在那儿。There is a boy standing there.3．百分之八十的学生喜欢校服。Eighty percent of the students like school uniforms.4．三分之一的学生住得离学校近。One third of the students live near their school.5．自从1990年以来汽车的数量翻了一番。The number of cars has doubled since 1990.地方介绍

1．学校中央有一座教学楼。There is a classroom building in the middle of the school.2．楼的南边有一个游泳池。A swimming pool is to the south of the building.3．楼的后面有许多树。There are many trees behind the building.4．楼的对面是宿舍。Opposite the building is a dorm.5．宿舍的旁边是食堂。Beside the dorm lies the dining hall.人物介绍

1.他和别人很好相处。He can get along well with others easily.2．他被认为是最好的学生之一。He is regarded as one of the best students.3．他闲暇时经常听音乐。He usually listens to music in his spare time.4．他毕业于第八中学。He graduated from No.8 Middle School.5．他曾获英语竞赛第一名。He once got the first place in the English competition.活动安排

1．我们早上7点在校门口集合。We will gather at the school gate at seven in the morning.2．我们将乘公共汽车去。We will go there by bus.3．在那儿的饭店吃午饭。Lunch will be served in the restaurant there.4．我们下午5点才能回到学校。We won’t return to our school until 5:00 p.m.5．我将全程陪同。I will be in your company all the way.叙述事件

1．故事发生在伦敦。The story happened in London.2．起初，他没看见那个人。At first, he didn’t see the man.3．然后，他走到汽车那儿。Then he went over to the bus.4．过了一会儿，他上了小汽车。After a little while, he got on the car.5．最后，他被捕了。In the end, he was arrested.（四）背会20个高考范文例句

写人

1． I'm Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School.2.I’m ready to give help whenever it is needed.3.He is such a learned person that we all admire hem very much.4.I think I'm fit for the job.写地点

1.It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.2.Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain.3.On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building---our library.写事

1． Last night I was preparing for the coming examination when the noise from my neighbor interrupted me.2． Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.3．The time passed quickly.Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.表达理由观点或讨论结果

1.However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well known at home and abroad.2.Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise.3.As we all know, a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well.数据与图表说明

1.As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.2.Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities.3.Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods.写信和写通知

1． I am writing to you about the mobile phone I bought on April 20th.2.If there is anything I can do for you, I will be more than glad to help.3.Thank you very much in advance.4.I look forward to hearing from you soon.（五）背会六篇高考范文

1．对比议论类(05全国I)假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信。

2．数字图表类（04北京）某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。

3．地点介绍(06全国)假定你是李华，应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

4.人物类（06北京）国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平，友爱”夏令营活要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。5．活动安排（08年全国卷Ⅱ）学习中文的各项活动安排。6．记叙文（08年天津卷）记叙乘地铁时遇到的一件事。

（六）避免常见错误

1.My mother work in a school.（works）2.They are worker.(workers)3.My aunt worked hard and he was busy.(she)4.His parents are all from London.(both)5.They get up early yesterday.(got)

（七）掌握地道的英语（括号中的句子更好）

1． My money is very little.（I have little money.）

2． My money is more than yours.（I have more money than you.）3． People in my family are more than those in yours.（There are more people in my family than in yours.）

4． I teach better than he.（I am a better teacher than you.）5． I think the plan is not good.（I don’t think the plan is good.）

（八）学会变换句型

1.I was too excited to go to sleep.I was so excited that I couldn’t go to sleep.(用从句替换)They got married five years ago.They have been married for five years.（用完成时替换）3.He got up early so that he could catch the first bus.He got up early so as to catch the first bus.（用不定式替换）4.Try again and you will succeed.If you try again, you will succeed.（用条件句替换）5.I am sorry I missed the bus.I wish I had caught the bus.（用虚拟语气替换）

第二篇：高考英语满分作文

假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。

比赛时间：7 月18日。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台

注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show Dear Peter, I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18.I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period.I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.If you would like to try, you have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June.If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：

1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee Dear Sir/Madame, I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students.As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return.Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.Yours, Li Hua

假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请—apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam: I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully, Li Hua

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括： 1.地点：距白山入口处500米;2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放;5.欢迎预定。注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;

2、祝贺苏琳生日;

3、感谢工作人员;

4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。注意：

1、词数100左右;

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3、开头语已为你写好。例文：

Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan.I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be three.I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.Yours truly, Li Hua

假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs.Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1.外出购物 2.替房东还书

3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电 注意：

1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs.Wilson, I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.She has already told Susan about this change.Yours, Li Hua

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：

1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua

描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下： 详细描述用餐的情况 简要表述你对这次午餐的感受

这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。范文：

The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework.I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food.Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere.The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food.Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school.Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words

第三篇：高考英语满分作文精选

2011上海高考英语题目：

若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。

启示：

国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。

信中请包括：

1．你个人基本情况

2．你对申请项目具体设想

3．项目经费使用情况

作文1 Dear Sirs，Hello!I’m Li Ming, a student from Mengzi High School of Shanghai.As I’ve always been interested in charity, I’m writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken（贫困的）areas.My poverty-relief（扶贫的）program is divided into three parts.In the initial stage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Moths.Given

（考虑到）that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books.The second stage of my program is to recruit（招募）high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas.Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified（有资格的）teachers.Lastly, we will set out for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program.As to how to allocate(分配)the money, I’d like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!

Yours,Li Ming

亮点词组句型归纳:

1.be interested in 对„感兴趣

2.write to someone in the hope that 写信给某人以期（实现某愿望）

3.carry

out

履

行

be on the look-out for 寻找

5.meet more demands 满足更多的需求

6.set out for 出发前往

7.in advance 提前

作文2 Dear Sirs，My name is Li Ming and I’m a student from Mengzi High School.As I have grown up in the city, lending a hand to my rural peer group has always been my dream.I’m writing to apply for the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund that I have heard about recently.In fact, there are still a large number of school-age children who have no access to good education in the undeveloped regions of our country.So, I sincerely hope that I can do something to make a difference by making full use of your program.If I can get the supporting money, first, I will use some parts of it to buy the textbooks they need.Since the fund is limited, I will try to buy some second-hand reading materials for their free-time reading.Besides, I have to keep a small sum of money in order to pay the postal charges.Last but not least, I will feel honored if I can get the fund to start the poverty-relief program in our country

and I will try my best to use the fund.I’m looking forward to your reply!Li Ming

1.lend a hand to 帮助„

2.apply for 申请

3.the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund由国际儿童基金会发起的扶贫项目

4.school-age children 学龄儿童

5.have no access to good education接受不到良好的教育

6.undeveloped region 欠发达地区

7.make a difference 有影响

8.make use of 利用

9.a small sum of money 一小笔钱

10.postal charge 邮费

作文3 2009年的年广东高考英语满分作文

Should tourists take photos with animals？

Koalas in wildlife parks can„t fall asleep because

Yours，tourists keep disturbing them.The movement is thinking to make the tourists‟ behaviour illegal to protect the animals.When people are visiting wildlife parks，they like to take photographs with animals.Reasons for this are varied.Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons.Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.If I were an animal in the wildlife park，I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn‘t feel happy at all！I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.However，I don‘t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals.Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can’t have a photo with an animal.Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time，during which tourists can take photos with animals.It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

游客应该给动物拍照吗？

考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。

当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。

如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。

但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。

作文4 【全国卷II】

假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组

织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：

1.上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3.晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天

注意：1.词数：100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.参考词汇：安排

arrange

Dear Andy，I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning, some activities at school will be arranged.You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I’ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what our city like with your own eyes is.At night, we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in.I’m sure you’ll enjoy

yourself.I’m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely，Li hue

作文5

假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.英汉/汉英词典新华字典

收词(字)18,000(英语)

20,000(汉语)10,000

价格52元11元

特点大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典

参考词汇:

• 推荐 recommend(V.)

• 英汉/汉英词典 The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary(ECCED)

• 新华字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)

Dear Steve，I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.

I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words.Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word.Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary , and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries.Yours，Li Yue

作文6 鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪„„

鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除„„编辑文本，搜索信息„„

收发邮件，选购商品„„

点播音乐，下载电影„„

如果过分依赖鼠标„„(请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way.Too

much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.作文7 假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。

提出你喜欢的栏目。简要说明理由。栏目—column

Dear Mr.Green，I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express”

gives us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can‟t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully，Li Hue 作文8 2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

1每天锻炼一小时

2健康工作五十年幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三

学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!作文9

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信

Dear Jeff，I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall.I‟m sure you‟ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It‟ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes, Li Hue

作文10 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.词数：100左右：

2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500

yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I‟ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours，Li Hua 作文11 The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want

another one? Just let me know.I’ll try my best to help you.Yours，Li Hua

第四篇：高考英语满分作文

关于选秀节目

Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so forth.This type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and life.There are a couple of reasons behind the tide.To start with, young folks need role models to learn from.So many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these programs.This gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young audiences.Plus, thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase themselves.Therefore, a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these shows.This is a divisive topic.On my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our strains.As senior high school students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of studies.食品安全问题

On the Food Security

Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society.The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily.There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide.First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem.More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend.As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never.Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend.The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again.I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.社会不文明现象

On Uncivilized Behaviors

We cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so forth.All these are bad manners that we should not lose sight of.As an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed of.Uncivilized behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official website.As Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving ourselves.We should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate them.There are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this trend.To name only one: the lack of moral education.The government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily lives.As college students of the new age, we should take the leading role.感恩

On Cultivating the Sense of Gratitude

On college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college students lack the sense of gratitude, one of the countless traditional virtues of this ancient land with a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years.These young adults were not and are not aware of the huge importance of expressing gratitude to those who once helped them, from teachers to parents and so forth.Personally, I deem that the root cause of students without a graceful heart is that they receive an education not valuing the moral sphere.I strongly believe that joint efforts from folks across society are the final remedy for this social headache.As young university students of the new era, we should make our own contributions to this cause.Imagine a world without the sense of gratitude.This kind of world is doomed to failure.Simply put, we should join our hands to heighten our awareness of fostering a graceful heart.Only in this way can we build our society into a harmonious one.My fellow students, I beg you to act from now on.1.低碳生活(话题来源：哥本哈根气候大会)

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of “Low-carbon Life”.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below：

1、低碳生活方式受到人们的欢迎

2、低碳生活的意义

3、我们应该„„

Recently, low-carbon becomes a high-frequency and fashionable word which gets the greatest concern in the world.Low-carbon life means a kind of lifestyle in which people do their best to reduce energy consumption and carbon greenhouse gas emissions.It is of vital importance for the whole world to practice the low-carbon lifestyle.Firstly, our natural resources and energy are limited;therefore, it is absolutely necessary for us to save and protect them.Secondly, in order to protect our environment from serious greenhouse effect, we need a low-carbon emission.It is low-carbon life that enables our next generations to live a better and superior life.What we should bear in mind is that the earth is common home.Thus, every one is well advised to practice this lifestyle and there are several ways for us to do this.Firstly, every one is expected to cultivate their awareness of saving energy.Then, we are also hoped to help our families and friends to live a low-carbon life.Only by doing so can we hope to create a world where all humans enjoy a clean and tidy environment.(185words)

2.与前文相关主题

Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China

1． 中国的污染的现状

2． 造成污染的原因

3． 解决的办法

It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest pollution index in the world.This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control.Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers;a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets;the widespread use of plastic bags etc.To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution.Industries that release wastes without permission should be heavily fined.Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they release into the air.And the use of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned.What’s more, the media should play an important role in implanting a sense of environmental consciousness into people’s mind.If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and lovelier world for us and for the coming generation.世博主题：Better City, Better Life(太长，用时需改短)

Nowadays, with the fast development of economy of the world, many cities become bigger and bigger and many modern cities are appearing.Thus, we face the complex problem: Urbanization.Urbanization has been a subject of heated discussion for a long time.Some people are in favor, while others are opposed.In my opinion, urbanization benefits human beings rather than do harm to them.Two reasons may account for my conclusion.Firstly, urbanization enriches our life.We can imagine what will happen without convenient traffic system, without big department stores, without KTVs and many other entertainments? To some extent, it is impossible for human beings to live in this world.Urbanization make it possible for us to enjoy our life more than before, Also, urbanization quicken the pace of science, especially in the communication field, in the early time, if we want to connect with our family members or friends, the only way we can choose is writing letters.But urbanization changed this situation, we can talk with the friends in the foreign countries with our any difficulties through the Internet, we gain whatever information we need on the internet.These conveniences are brought by the urbanization.Secondly, urbanization also raise our country economy.As we all know, the policy of Reform and Opening give our country a golden opportunity to develop our economy, we have a direct feeling about the dramatic increasing of our living standard, many productions that we cannot afford in the past time can be owned in today.This phenomenon proves that urbanization benefits our life basically.With the fast step of urbanization, many job opportunities are supplied in the occupation market which makes many rural migrant workers get a solid work in the urban area.They also contribute to the economic development in the urban area.These prosperities are definitely brought by the urbanization.I live in Shanghai, and it is a typical big city in China.I found that we also have many negative sides of urbanization.For instance, we can talk to the friends thousands miles away, but we don’t know our neighbors in the high-rises;many migrant workers do not enjoy the same profits and rights as the permanent unban residents and this will make their living without and insurance system.But we don’t need to be so pessimistic of the situation at hand.It is evident that the advantages of urbanization outweigh the disadvantages.What we should do is to remain the positive side , meanwhile to conquer the negative side.Our government will also introduce many effective policies to narrow this contradictory.So we have enough reasons to believe the situation will become better and better so that we can reach our aim ”better city, better life ”!

4.校园安全问题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)

1)近年来发生在校园的意外事件不断增加，校园安全问题备受关注

2)对此我们应该采取哪些措施

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求阐述目前校园里出现的一种问题，提纲第2点要求提供解决办法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：阐述“目前校园意外事件不断出现”这一问题，校园安全问题备受关注的现状；我们应当采取哪些措施来应对；总结全文。

Campus Security

Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously.Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away.A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying.In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?

On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness.Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately.On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。

In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus.Therefore schools should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound。

第五篇：高考英语满分作文

高考英语满分作文

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.词数：100左右：

2.参考词汇：房租-Tent（n.）。

I'm very happy to receive your letter，and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street，which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there，and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms，one of which is bedroom，the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed，a sofa，a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat，and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish，but I'll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough，write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon！

All the best！

Yours，Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，'引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

Dear Bob，Welcome to China！You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there're three rooms in it： a bedroom，a kitchen，and a bathroom.There is a bed，a sofa，a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last，will you please tell me the

time you arrive？ Then I'U be able to meet you at the airport，see you.Best wishes！

Yours，Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob，How are you these days？

I'm so glad to know that you'll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place

ily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last，will you please tell me the time you arrive？ Then I'U be able to meet you at the airport，see you.Best wishes！

Yours，Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob，How are you these days？

I'm so glad to know that you'll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I've found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It's just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms，a kitchen，a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big，only 25 square metres，I think it is suitable.By the way，the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you'll like it.If not，I'll try to find another place for you.Yours，Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

满分作文鉴赏[1] Ambition is the decision one makes and the resolution with which he carries out that decision.It provides us with the required driving force to accomplish any undertakings in our life.Just as Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer put it, “And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed.” Indeed, once we make up our minds to choose to do something, then our life becomes meaningful and specifically orientated.This notion of life, as far as I observe, is closest to truth and does apply to almost all aspects of life.First things first, ambition renders us a sense of mission.No matter what decision you make you have to be responsible for your choice.Your choice procures you a sense of orientation, or more specially a sense of mission.And only a strong mission may enable one to accomplish greatness.Caesar of the ancient Roman Empire was urged by his ambition “I came, I saw, I conquered.” And became an unrivaled empire builder in the history of Rome.John Milton, stimulated always by his ambition that aimed at writing some “mighty lines” which England would unwillingly forget, had in due time secured his position as the second Shakespeare in the history of English literature.In the second place, ambition can bring one’s potentials to the full.Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating one’s dormant potentials.Without ambition one’s potentials will remain slumbering like a dormant volcano.A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, a Chinese Helen Keller.It was her ambition to be a useful person has turned the almost paralyzed Zhang Haidi into a well-accomplished figure whose achievements would dwarf those of some normal people aim at the sun, though, at worst, they may probably land on the moon.Influential as it is upon us, however, ambition must be channeled in the right direction.If wrongly directed, one’s ambition may bring havoc on him and others.Hitler, whose

ambition was to conquer Europe by whatever evil means, finall

满分作文鉴赏[2] en Keller.It was her ambition to be a useful person has turned the almost paralyzed Zhang Haidi into a well-accomplished figure whose achievements would dwarf those of some normal people aim at the sun, though, at worst, they may probably land on the moon.Influential as it is upon us, however, ambition must be channeled in the right direction.If wrongly directed, one’s ambition may bring havoc on him and others.Hitler, whose ambition was to conquer Europe by whatever evil means, finally turned him into a demon.It was this demon that almost cast Europe into an unfathomable abyss of anguish and suffering.Another case is Macbeth whose ambition was to become the king of Scotland.However, his ambition was materialized by the murder of King Duncan.Consequently, unbearable guilt and psychological agony drove him to his tragic doom.To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves.A poet says: life can be bad;life can be good;life can be dirty;life can be sad,;life can even be painful.In my mind’s eye, a person can make his life beautiful, meaningful and rewarding and stand out as a respectable personage if he is motivated by a well-orientated ambition.高考英语满分作文5篇

满分作文第一篇

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为

40％的同学认为

1．不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资

3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear Editor．

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance

fee should be charged for parks． 高考满分作文1(1号题)Dear editor，I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly，Li Hua 高考英语满分作文第二篇 Dear editor，I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free.If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly.Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable.Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening

workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees.As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays.At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park.After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order.Do you agree with me, dear editor?

Yours truly，Li Hua 高考英语满分作文第三篇 Dear editor，I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees.For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

Yours truly，Li Hua 高考英语满分作文第四篇 Dear editor，I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%.They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment.If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides.If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would.Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%.They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees.The truth lies in the hands of the majority.Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

Yours truly，Li Hua 高考英语满分作文第五篇 Dear editor，I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view.Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure.Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control.Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected.Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees.I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks.Am I right, editor?

Yours truly，Li Hua

2009年高考英语江苏卷满分作文

鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性 对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……

鼠标的便捷性

编辑文本，搜索信息……

点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删收发邮件，选购商品…… 除……

点播音乐，下载电影……

如果过分依赖鼠标……(请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

注意：

1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．

For most people, it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet.A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen.With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games.Just

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn't always help in a positive way.Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth.Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。