第一篇:高中生英语作文推荐
《高中生英语作文优秀范文:
狭隘的学习要不得》
下图描述的是现在许多学校教育的现状。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述一下其反映的现象,分析该现象的错误所在并对如何纠正错误发表你个人的看法。
注意:
1.仔细品味图中所反映的现象,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
One possible version: From the picture, we can see that many branches of a tree, which stand for different kinds of abilities in school education, have been cut off by a strong saw.Only the smaller branch “study” is reserved.It in fact reflects an educational practice in some schools, where the goal of education is limited to study only.To make room and save time for study, activities for developing students’ organizing ability, communicating ability, practicing ability and so on are all considered unimportant and hence removed.In my personally view, this kind of education is quite unqualified.A good education should focus on one’s overall development.Therefore, necessary measures must be taken to stop this kind of education.On one hand, education authorities must change their evaluation standards to guide schools back into the correct direction.On the other hand, students themselves should be responsible for their own development and seize every opportunity to broaden their abilities.I believe by doing so, things will be better and better.《高中生英语作文优秀范文:网络替代不了亲
情》
下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题,有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点:
1.该漫画告诉了我们什么;2.你对此现象的看法;3.我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。注意:1.表达时要适当发挥想象,不要仅做简单描述。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及本人的相关信息。
参考词汇:漫画caricature。
Modern technology has many advantages.While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems.This caricature describes one of them.One possible version:
Modern technology has many advantages.While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems.This caricature describes one of them.It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent.I think it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable.Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet.In most Chinese families, there is only one child.Obviously, we are the centre of our parents’ attention.Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life.It is understandable that they want to know what’s happening to us, what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies.I think we should let them know us well.For example, we can tell them what’s going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems.In that way, I’m sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.《高考英语满分作文赏析》
作文题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以 ‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you’ll like it.If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
作文:
Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I’ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know.I’ll try my best to help you.Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
作文题目:
假如你是李华,现任你们学校的学生会主席。你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书,号召全校同学行动起来,为环保运动做出自己的努力。同时下周六学校将组织同学 在全市进行环保宣传活动,征召志愿者到校学生会报名。
注意:(1)短文应该包括以上所提供的主要信息,可适当发挥;(2)词数:120左右;(3)倡议书格式以提供,不计入总词数;(4)参考词汇:征召(新人)recruit。May, 2011
Dear brothers and sisters,Oh behalf of the University Students' Union, I, the Chairman of the Union , am earnestly calling for your active participation in our environmental protection campai gn.It is the duty of every global villager;man just can not sustain his glorious c i vilization without a rewarding environment, which will be possible only if man makes considerable efforts to protect the environment.Do you cherish precio us opportunities to volunteer in our joint efforts in environmental protection? Here is a great one not to be missed by any enthusiastic youth;Right next Saturday, our university is to run a publicity campaign to advocate environmental protection across the city.The University Students' Union will be in charge of recruitment of volunteers.Let's join our hands and take action immediately.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
这篇高考英语满分作文行文流畅,准确把握了题目的要求,语法流畅,用词得当,是一篇值得学习的高中英语作文佳作。
第二篇:高中生英语作文(书信格式及)
书信格式
一般格式
英文书信的构成可分6个部分:
信头(Heading)
收信人姓名及地址(inside Name and Address)
称呼(Salutation)
信文(Body of the letter)
结束语(Complimentary close)
署名(Signature)
(1)信头(Heading)
信头是指发信人的单位名称或地址以及日期。一般情况下发信人只需把自己的地址写(打字,手写均可)在信的右上角,离开信纸的顶头约1英寸,占二三行或四行均可,格式如下:
256 West Nanjing StreetNanchang, Jiangxi ProvinceChina
Sep.3rd, 2000
注意:写地址的次序与中文不同,应先写门牌号码街道,然后城市和国名。
写日期注意下列各点:
① 年份应写全,例如不能用“00”来代替“2000”。
② 月份应写英文名称,除May, June, July外,可用缩写,如:Sep., Oct.。但不要用数字来代替,如7/4/00或7, 4, 00,因为在英国此日期代表7th April, 2000,而在美国则代表4th July, 2000。
③ 日期可用1,2,3,4…11,12…21,22…31等,也可用1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th… 11th, 21st, 22nd, 31st等。
日期的几种写法:
a.July 7, 1998
b.1st October, 1998
c.30 Nov., 1997
d.Sep.3rd, 1999
④ 特别注意英文书信日期应紧着写信人地址下一行,不能像写中文书信那样写在书信签名之后,这是很多学生的常见错误。
(2)收信人姓名及地址(Inside Name and Address)
写信人的地址和日期写好以后,接着就要写收信人的姓名和地址,一般的事务信件或给较生疏的朋友的信件要写,而在给较熟的朋友的信中则可省去。这一项写在日期下一行的左上角。收信人姓名写一行,收信人地址可分两行或三行写,和写信人的地址一样,上下可取齐,也可向右缩进。在姓名前一般要加上称号,称号因人而异。
①对普通男子用Mr.;
②对未婚女子用Miss;
③对已婚女子用Mrs.,对婚姻状况不明确的通常用Ms.(后跟本人姓);
④对教授或博士(医生)用Prof.或Dr.精选范文
Smith StreetManchester England
27th May, 1999
Mr.Jee GreenWest Tenth StreetHawaii U.S.A.(3)称呼(Salutation)
称呼指的是信文开头的那种称呼,如Dear, Mr., uncle,各种称呼因人而异。在称呼后面一般是用逗号,但也有用冒号的。现归纳如下: ① 对父母、兄弟、姐妹等:a.Dear Father,b.My dear Mother,c.Dear Sister,d.Dear Tom, ② 对亲戚:
a.My dear Auntie,b.Dear Cousin,c.My dear Cousin,③ 对朋友、同学:a.My dear friend,b.Dear Mr.Jackson,c.My dear Mr.Jackson,④ 对未婚女子:
a.Dear Miss Luce,b.My dear Miss Luce,⑤ 对一般妇女,不论是否结婚:a.Ms.,b.Dear Madame,c.Dear Ma’am ⑥ 对已婚妇女:
a.Dear Mrs.Helen Jackson,b.My dear Mrs.Helen Jackson,⑦ 对公司、工厂、学校等:a.Dear Sirs, 或Dear Sir,b.Sirs, 或 Sir,(my respectful sir)
c.Gentlemen,(不能使用Dear Gentlemen)(4)信文(Body of the letter)
信文是信件的主体部分,也就是信的内容。正文应在称呼下两行开始。信的开头第一个
字母通常和称呼开头第一个词平齐,也有往后退四个或八个字的。下面介绍一些开头语和结尾语。开头语
① 相当于中文的“敬启者”。a.I beg to inform you that …
b.I beg to take this opportunity to inform you that … c.I have the honor to address you that … d.I write in a hurry to inform you that … e.I have the pleasure to tell you that …
f.I’m very much delighted to inform you that … ② 相当于中文的“接读某月某日来信,一切知悉”。a.I thank you very much for your letter of May 20th … b.Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks.c.It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind letter of May 20th.d.In answer to your kind letter of May 20th, I deeply regret that … e.I have received your kind letter of May 20th.f.Words can’t express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk thismorning.g.Your letter dated May 20th has been received 结尾语
采用三种方法:
① 采用分词短语,句末用逗号,不用句号,例如: a.Waiting for your good news,b.Looking forward to your early reply,c.Hoping to hear from you soon,d.Hoping you are enjoying good health,e.Regretting that I can’t give you a more favorite reply,f.Regretting the trouble I’m causing you, g.Wishing you every success,h.Wishing you a pleasant journey,i.Wishing you a happy New Year,②采用介词短语,句末用逗号,不用句号,例如: a.With best regards,b.With kind regards to your family,c.With best wishes to you and yours,d.With best wishes for your success and happiness,e.With best wishes for your success in your new field of work,f.With best regards and wishing you all success,g.With warmest regards,h.With best regards to you and your family,i.With the season’s greetings,③ 采用完整句子,句末用句号,例如: a.We are waiting for your good news.b.I hope to receive your early reply.c.We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.d.I thank you very much for your services, and wish your continued success.(5)结束语(Complimentary Close)
①结束语的一般写法如下: Yours truly,Truly yours,Sincerely yours,Yours sincerely, ②公函常用: Yours faithfully, Faithfully yours, Yours respectfully,Respectfully yours,③私人书信常用: Sincerely yours,Yours very sincerely, Yours affectionately,Yours ever,④给亲戚朋友的信常用: Love,Love from, All my love,Your(ever)loving son/daughter/cousin, etc.Your affectionate nephew,Yours lovingly,Lovingly yours,(6)署名(Signature)
下面是署名的例子: ①个人署名:
②公司署名:
Yours truly,W.J.WatsonYours faithfully,Lenovo Computer Company Wang LinSales Manager
第二节:写作
请先阅读下面的电子邮件: Dear Li Hua,I feel very happy to read your e – mail and really appreciate your English, Congratulations to you.Your English has really imposed a lot.Oh, I have some good news to tell you.I’ve got a good chance to practice my Chinese as an exchange student to China.So, here I’d like to ask you for help – which school is the best one for me to attend in China.Tell me, and then I can tell my school to make contact with it.Looking forward to your early reply and hope to meet you in China soon.Yours friendly,Mary
假设你是李华,请你根据下列要点,用英文给玛丽回一封电子邮件,建议她来你所在的学校。理由是:
1.你校每年都接纳交换生;
2.学校条件好,各种设施好,有图书馆,电子阅览室……; 3.课外活动丰富多彩;
4.你校学生英语水平好,易于交流; 5.特别是老师好,教法生动有趣 注意:
1.可根据要求加以必要发挥,但不要逐字翻译; 2.词数为120左右;
3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数),但不得抄入答题卡。参考词汇:设施:facility电子阅览室:electro – reading – room Hi Mary.Li Hua
Hi Mary,Nice to read your e-mail today.It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement;I owe a lot to you for your help.As to which school is the best one for you to stay in, I should recommend my school.The following are the reasons.First, exchange students are welcomed in my school;besides, we have first-class facilities: the labs, modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students, offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends.After-class we have varies of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves.And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates.The teachers are kind and ready to offer help.In their unique ways of teaching, they often make their class lively and interesting.We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class, thus I do believe that you won’t have any difficulty in communicating with us.Isn’t the information above enough for you to make a decision? If you come to my school, I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers.Hope you’ll like my schoolLi Hua
第三篇:高中生出国英语作文
In recent years, there is a noticable phenomenon that increasingly more families have been considering sending their children abroad for further study, but the views about it vary from person to person.As far as I am concerned, if the condition allows, especially psychologically and financially, it’s an alternative worth considering for the high school students and their parents as well.There’re several reasons that support my opinion.First of all, it is widely acknowledged that there’re many top universities abroad, where students can enjoy better facilities, better teaching staff, latest acadamic information and meet other top students around the world.Moreover, staying in another country for years can greatly boarden their horizons.Exposed to the local culture, students can learn different traditions and mindset, thus gaining benefit from the strengths oflocal culture.Last but not least, it’s a great chance for the high school students, most of whom are only child in their respective families, to learn to be independent of their parents, teachers and friends.The entirely unfamiliar environment obliges them to learn to live and communicate with others by theirselves.At first it can be a tough time but soon later the students can become independent in all aspects.It may be a great financial and acadamic burden for the high school students to study abroad, but there is no denying that it surely is rewarding to one’s entire life.
第四篇:高中生的短篇英语作文
高中生的短篇英语作文
I went to summer camp on vacation.On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach.It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming.The water was warm and we had great fun.Then the next day, we went to the mountains.There were many trees and I really enjoyed them.On the last day, we had a great party.We sang and danced happily.We didn't want to leave the friends and the teachers.I hope I can go to summer camp again next year....................
第五篇:高中生英语学习方法
哈尔滨一对一天材教育
高中生英语学习的主要困难与解决方法
一、英语的重要性
全球化的时代已经来临,贸易往来,资讯传递,文化交流„„更是任何国家赖以生存的不二法门因此迈向国的科技领先我们,进步且有许多好文章,好的研究丛书都是用英文写成的;为了能进一步探索研究,扩展们我的知识与专业技能,首先必须学好英语,才有办法不假他人之手翻译,而能得到最真实的第一手资料.在全球经济体系中,英文成为重要的沟通语言,要与世界接轨,流利的口语能力势将成为重要的关键.虽然,有多数国人的英文读写能力相当不错,但口语的表达和理解能力对于大多数中国人来说是一件很困难的事.因此,在这个竞争愈趋激烈的市场上,英语口语能力便成为英语教育中非常重的一环.另一方面,作为高中生的我们,在中国的应试教育下,又将英语学习作为最重要的一门科目。三年为正在为英语困要的学生找到方向,为正在英语教学中的老师找到更好的教育方法,正是我们此篇文章的主要目的。
二、高中生英语学习的主要困难
对于高中生的英语学习,我们主要是为了考试而学习英语。而我们的英语试卷,主要分为:听力、单项选择、完形填空、阅读理解、单词拼写、短文改错、作文这几个部分。而每个年级,又有自己不同的问题。
据我们调查,对于高一年级学生来说,短文改错对于他们并不熟悉,初中练得少,并且简单,而上了高中后才发现有许多只是自己并未掌握,做题还很困难。一名高一学生对我们这样说:“以前做的文章一读就知道错误在哪里,而现在,每个句子都需要认真的分析,很费时间。”而我们也发现,做短文改错的时间明显变长了。另一方面,据高一学生反映,完型也变得更加难懂了,生词多了,理解的东西也多了。“以前完型很容易,就一篇文章由故事讲一个小道理。而现在,必须将自生上英语课只是一味的听老师讲,并不去自己理解。
而高三学生更多的问题在于基础太差。高三,主要的任务是复习,基础太差,导致复习的内容听不懂。而面临高考的他们,则越来越担心词汇量的问题。词汇量不够,完型读不懂,阅读不理解,成为他们考试的高分的一大障碍。而对于作文,又不能写出出彩的地方来的高分,只能平平常常的作文,得一个平平常常的分数。“本来以为英语能够给自己提分,现在,还得在这上面费时间!”高三学生对于此很是无奈。
据我们对老师的采访,老师们的意见很一致。认为高中学生学习英语问题主要在于以下几个方面:
1.学习英语动力不足
2.学习方法不得当
3.基础知识不扎实
4.词汇量不足
老师们认为,学生总是不能很好的理解出题人的思想,只是按照自己的意愿来做
天材教育
鉴于学生们有如此多的问题,我们有必要及时去解决问题,帮助学生们更
好的通过考试,走向现代化的社会。而最重要的解决方就在于对症下药,因材施教
1.培养兴趣
“兴趣是最好的老师”,学习英语首先要有兴趣并努力发展这一兴趣。如果
你对英语没有兴趣,那就不会有持续的干劲和动力,英语学习将很难坚持下去。反之,一旦你对英语有了兴趣并努力地发展这一兴趣,那么,你就会不知不觉地去做,带着强烈的欲望去读英语,听英语,说英语,写英语。你就会主动地找人去练英语,找一切可以提高你英语的机会去提高你的英语水平。不知不觉中你的英语就会提高。所以“兴趣”对学好英语有举足轻重的作用。每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好。把自己的兴趣与英语学习结合起来,是英语学习成功的关键条件。如果在学英语的过程中,你能够尽早地尝试使用所学的英语的快感,那么你学习英语的兴趣将日益增加。想要学好英语,就必须树立目标。一旦有了目标,你就会有足够的时间和精力来学好英语。长远的目标应该把学英语同民族的强大、祖国的发展联在一起,同促进世界各国人民之间的交流和理解联在一起。当然,还应该有无数的短期目标。短期目标可以是通过一个英语考试,为了考试而拼命学习英语。
2.增加词汇量
记住的单词、短语越多,你学会英语的路途就越短。达到一般的水平,你的词汇量应该在3千到4千的水平。如果你一天背5个单词一年就是1825个单词,相当于初中三年再加高中一年零两个月的词汇量。如果你坚持两年你就能住3650个单词,相当于中学六年包括本科两年的词汇量。结合单词的发音和基本的拼读规则拼写和听说活动,不要怕说错而闭口不言,要配合好老师在课堂教学中使用的现代化设备。利用好课外环境,如广播、电视、英语演讲比赛、英语歌曲、录像带等。在条件许可的情况下,应主动营造听说氛围。课下完成作业后,要选择一套英语录音带来听,它应该是让你在随意中就能轻松听下去的录音带,它不会给你增加太大的压力,但却能让你把教科书上学过的句子、单词、语法得到快速而有效的复习和巩固。更轻松的一种方法是,多听英文歌曲,多看英文电影,并逐步去掉中文字幕
4.复习巩固
英语有句谚语“Repetition is the mother of skills(重复是技能之母)
”。英语这项语言技能,均来自重复。一种事情重复多了,便产生了感觉和深刻的把握。因此,在发展英语技能时,也应该遵循重复原则。英语知识点多,需要大量记忆。很多同学抱怨,说自己的记性差,记了又忘了。经常复习。要合理地安排复习时间。首先要及时复习。遗忘的规律是:前快后慢,先多后少,识记后最初遗忘得较快,以后逐渐减慢。针对这一规律,学习新知识后应及早加以复习。其次在复习中要多尝试回忆,背诵。就是边读边回忆。就像小学生背书一样,读一段,书合起来试用英语创作,而是来复习和巩固已学过的知识,使其成为自己的能力。
我们所总结出的方法只是一小方面,而更过的需要同学们不断的实践,从
而找出适合自己的学习方法。学英语,更主要的在于坚持。持之以恒的不断努
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力,一定能够得到回报。英语,会成为为你提分的一门科目。学好英语,对将来你走向社会,更加有利!
a.题型和分值;
b.高中主要英语语法(高一阶段语法);
c.高中英语课程学宾语从句套强调句,部分倒装,虚拟语气,让步状语从
句,被动语态和时态,固定搭配,表语从句)作文多为话题式展开
体验:73.1 don't knowin the novel that made him burst
into tsars.(what)
我不知道是小说中的什么东西使他突然泪如泉涌。(湖北2012)
78.The soldier was absent from his camp for three days without(ask)
这个士兵没有请假就离开营地三天。(湖北2012)
(You cannot choose what you arc given, but you can choose how you
make use of it.)
高中阶段主要语法:(不按次序,按考查频率列举)2012年湖北高考英语
卷基本都已考到!关系代词)(必修二)
如何玩转高中英语学习?——养成良好的学习习惯!
a.提前做好预习(疏通单词和短语,熟读课文,做好各种标记),课后及
时复习(背诵词汇,背诵课文,高效完成练习)(切忌考前抱佛脚或者因考而学)
b.加强学习的自主性并逐步完善适合自己的学习方法,合理分配学习时
间,有计划有步骤。(切忌过度依赖老师或者被动式学习)(听说读写每天都要得到落实)
c.多反思,多总结,既要有充分地练习更要跳出练习进行归纳和思考。
第一讲:句子成分划分和基本句型结构
1.句子成分划分:
英语的基本成分有六种:主语(subject)、谓语(predicate)、表语
(predicative)、宾语(object)、定语(attribute)和状语(adverbial)
a.主语:句子所谈的对象,可以由名词,代词,数次,动名词,不定式或
者从句构成。
d.宾语:动作的承受者,可以充任宾语的有名词,代词,数词,不定式,动名词和从句等。
复合宾语:宾语(名词或代词)加宾语补足语(名词,形容词,介词短语,分词,不定式)。
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