2011年高考英语作文满分技巧-日记[应用文]（最终版）

第一篇：2011年高考英语作文满分技巧-日记[应用文]（最终版）

写作指导(1)

应用文——日 记

日记是用来叙述一天生活中所发生的事情或用来抒发自己对当天某些事情的感受以及将来的打算的一种应用文体。写好英文日记要注意以下几点：

1．日记的格式：主要指日期、天气情况和正文。日期一般写在正文的左上角，它包括年、月、日和星期几，天气情况一般写在正文的右上角，常用词汇有：sunny，fine，rainy，windy，cloudy，snowy等。2．日记的时态：由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾，故常用一般过去时。在发表议论或感想时，也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。

3．日记的人称：因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历，故应用第一人称，语言尽量口语化，按照事情发生的先后顺序，清楚、准确、连贯地把事情表达出来。

2009年5月3日，你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。

注意：1.日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使日记连贯； 2．词数：100左右。案例分析⊙

本文是一篇看图作文，考查从图中获取信息及写作日记文体的能力。根据题目要求可知写作要点如下：

1． 集合，出发；2.到达；3.参观；4.野餐；5.娱乐；6.告别。

May 3,2009 SundayFine

Today we visited a farm.Early in the morning，we met at the school gate and went there together.The farm workers gave us a warm welcome.Then the head of the farm showed us around.How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine.After a short rest，we had great fun singing and dancing，telling jokes or stories.Two of us even played a game of chess.The time passed quickly.Before we knew it，we had to say goodbye to the workers.写作指导(1)

应用文——日 记

假如某英文杂志将举办“中学生一日行”征文活动，请写一篇英文日记来参与这项活动。包括如下要点：

1．时间：2009年12月10日，星期日；

2．为了能在西湖上泛舟，你和你的同学一大早就赶到了西湖公园；

3．后来在湖边捡到一个精美的背包，内有照相机、护照以及一大笔钱；

4．在警察的帮助下，用了两个半小时你才找到了失主：一位外国朋友(Mr Woodhead)； 5．外国朋友很感激； 6．你的感受。

注意：1.不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．词数：100左右。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考答案】

December 10,2009 SundayFine

The students in our class planned to go outing to the Xihu Park.We got there early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we arrived at the lake，we found a nice bag with a camera，a passport and a lot of money in it.With the help of a policeman we found the owner，Mr Woodhead，a foreign friend after two and a half hours.Seeing his bag，he was very glad and grateful to us.Though we didn’t row boats on the lake，we were very happy to help others.

第二篇：高考英语满分作文技巧

高考英语满分作文技巧

在高考英语试卷中，25分的作文分说多不多，说少不少，但是在作文上拿到高分也可以弥补其他方面丢失的分数，下面来看看高考英语满分作文技巧。高考英语满分作文技巧

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使内容要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，全品高考网确保语言表达的高级性。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

高考英语满分作文评分标准

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2.覆盖所有内容要点。

3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。

5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

高考英语满分作文范文

【真题再现】

II.Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2.说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

【作文范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway, by bus and so on.What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmenttoappreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions.What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security

guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min

第三篇：最新高考英语满分作文(应用文书信)

最新高考英语满分作文汇编（应用文书信）

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：

1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租€€Tent(n.).I'm very happy to receive your letter, and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I'll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua 满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，'引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。Dear Bob, Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there're three rooms in it: a bedroom, a

...kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I'U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob, How are you these days? I'm so glad to know that you'll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I've found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It's just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you'll like it.If not, I'll try to find another place for you.Yours, Li Hua 满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。作文：

...Dear Bob, I'm glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I've found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know.I'll try my best to help you.Yours, Li Hua 满分理由

本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、"not far from''等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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第四篇：高考英语作文满分技巧-看图作文

写作指导(3)看图作文

看图作文也叫做图画式作文，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。一般性图画式作文都包含六个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、结果。这些要点往往是缺一不可的，否则整篇文章就不完整。

看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。

一、看图作文的考查特点 1．命制思路特点

看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。

2．能力表现特点

看图作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力，丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。3．语言表达特点

表达准确，过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句，段与段之间的意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。

二、看图作文的写作步骤 1．仔细审题，确定要点 2．紧扣要点，组句成篇 3．表达准确，过渡自然 4．规范书写，检查润色

美国中学生Jeff将要到你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给

Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好； 2．词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．认真审题，确定人称和时态

通过阅读题目，我们可以确定：此文的体裁是说明文，须用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．选用句式，连词成句巧成文

根据文章体裁的不同适当补充时间、地点、目的、方式、原因、结果等细节扩展句式；恰当地使用一些具有承上启下作用的过渡性词汇或过渡句；适当调整句子顺序，使文章语言简练、连贯、流畅。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．认真核查，注意语言的连贯和得体 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等。

(2)查动词。看谓语动词的时态、语态是否正确，主谓是否一致，非谓语动词形式是否正确等。(3)查习语、搭配。看是否符合英语表达习惯。(4)查拼写、词数。看拼写是否有误、词数是否合适。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章，请你根据题目要求及下面图画的内容提示，为学校的壁报写一篇稿件，谈谈你对交通状况的思考。注意：1.词数不少于120；

2．应包括图画中的全部内容： 3．标题与开头已为你写好；

4．参考词汇：行人 pedestrian；人行横道 zebra crossing；隔离护栏 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

【参考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第五篇：2012年高考英语作文满分技巧-提纲作文

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应试技巧点拨

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使内容要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，全品高考网确保语言表达的高级性。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达

到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

总结：

1.审清主题2.草拟提纲3.要点完整4.卷面整洁

5.避开错误6.控制篇幅7.行文紧凑8.仔细复查

书面表达写作指导---提纲作文

提纲作文是近几年高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。

1．提纲作文的特点

提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。

2．思维空间灵活、开放

为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。

3．提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为：

审题，明确文体形式；

构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；

连句成文，写作完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。

写作范例

某省已经连续两年取消了高考英语听力测试，为此社会各界褒贬不一。假如你叫李明，请根据下面的提示给某报英语专栏写一封信，就考英语听力测试的必要性谈谈你的看法。要点：

1.听、说、读、写中，听是基础。

2．没有听力，英语考试是不全面的。

3．听是获取信息的重要途径。

注意：1.短文中应包括上述三个要点，并适当增加你自己的意见；

2．开头部分和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

3．词数：120～150。

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.___________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

思路点拨

第一步：审题。分析题目和提纲可知，这封书信的体裁应该是议论文。论点是“高考英语听力测试的必要性”，论据包括要点所提供的三点。因文章需要发表自己的意见，故使用第一人称。

第二步：构思。文章应该按照“总——分——总”的结构分为三段。

第一段提出问题(论点)：It is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.第二段分析问题(用论据论证)：

(1)Listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.(2)The English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test.(3)In communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

第三段解决问题(给出结论)：So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.第三步：完稿。根据要点，按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料，力求拼写正确，行文连贯，链接自然，语言规范，词语丰富，句型多样，语法结构准确无误，表达简明扼要，慎用长难句。高分范文

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.I think it is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.As we know，in the study of English，listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.Without listening，we can’t get along well with the others.Furthermore，the English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test in it.It also can’t reflect the overall ability of the students in learning a foreign language.What’s more，in communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

针对性训练

你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：

一、通常方式1．生日聚会2．生日礼物3．生日祝福

二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由

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