2011年高考英语作文满分技巧-看图作文（共五则范文）

第一篇：2011年高考英语作文满分技巧-看图作文

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写作指导(3)看图作文

看图作文也叫做图画式作文，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。一般性图画式作文都包含六个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、结果。这些要点往往是缺一不可的，否则整篇文章就不完整。

看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。

一、看图作文的考查特点 1．命制思路特点

看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。

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2．能力表现特点

看图作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力，丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。3．语言表达特点

表达准确，过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句，段与段之间的意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。

二、看图作文的写作步骤 1．仔细审题，确定要点 2．紧扣要点，组句成篇 3．表达准确，过渡自然 4．规范书写，检查润色

美国中学生Jeff将要到你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给

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Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好； 2．词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．认真审题，确定人称和时态

通过阅读题目，我们可以确定：此文的体裁是说明文，须用 嘉兴英语教学网 www.xiexiebang.com 收集整理 欢迎使用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．选用句式，连词成句巧成文

根据文章体裁的不同适当补充时间、地点、目的、方式、原因、结果等细节扩展句式；恰当地使用一些具有承上启下作用的过渡性词汇或过渡句；适当调整句子顺序，使文章语言简练、连贯、流畅。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

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games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．认真核查，注意语言的连贯和得体 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等。

(2)查动词。看谓语动词的时态、语态是否正确，主谓是否一致，非谓语动词形式是否正确等。(3)查习语、搭配。看是否符合英语表达习惯。(4)查拼写、词数。看拼写是否有误、词数是否合适。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

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and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章，请你根据题目要求及下面图画的内容提示，为学校的壁报写一篇稿件，谈谈你对交通状况的思考。注意：1.词数不少于120；

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2．应包括图画中的全部内容： 3．标题与开头已为你写好；

4．参考词汇：行人 pedestrian；人行横道 zebra crossing；隔离护栏 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

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【参考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

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ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第二篇：高考英语作文满分技巧-看图作文

写作指导(3)看图作文

看图作文也叫做图画式作文，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。一般性图画式作文都包含六个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、结果。这些要点往往是缺一不可的，否则整篇文章就不完整。

看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。

一、看图作文的考查特点 1．命制思路特点

看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。

2．能力表现特点

看图作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力，丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。3．语言表达特点

表达准确，过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句，段与段之间的意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。

二、看图作文的写作步骤 1．仔细审题，确定要点 2．紧扣要点，组句成篇 3．表达准确，过渡自然 4．规范书写，检查润色

美国中学生Jeff将要到你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给

Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好； 2．词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua 案例分析⊙

1．认真审题，确定人称和时态

通过阅读题目，我们可以确定：此文的体裁是说明文，须用

together by bike

④have lunch at the school dining hall；talk with friends over lunch

⑤finish classes at 4 in the afternoon

⑥join other students in playing ball games or swimming

3．选用句式，连词成句巧成文

根据文章体裁的不同适当补充时间、地点、目的、方式、原因、结果等细节扩展句式；恰当地使用一些具有承上启下作用的过渡性词汇或过渡句；适当调整句子顺序，使文章语言简练、连贯、流畅。

(1)We will provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs and a TV.(2)Our school is quite close to our home.We could go to school together by bike.(3)We will have lunch at the school dining hall.(4)You will like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.(5)Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.(6)You can then join other students in playing ball

games or swimming.(7)We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.4．认真核查，注意语言的连贯和得体 要做到“四查”：

(1)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等。

(2)查动词。看谓语动词的时态、语态是否正确，主谓是否一致，非谓语动词形式是否正确等。(3)查习语、搭配。看是否符合英语表达习惯。(4)查拼写、词数。看拼写是否有误、词数是否合适。

Dear Jeff，My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.While you are here，we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed，a desk，a couple of chairs

and a TV set.You’ll also have your own bathroom.Our school is quite close to our home，so we could go to school together by bike.At noon we’ll have lunch at the school dining hall.I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food and enjoy talking with friends over lunch.Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon.You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming.It’ll be a lot of fun.If you have any questions or requests，please let me know.We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua

你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章，请你根据题目要求及下面图画的内容提示，为学校的壁报写一篇稿件，谈谈你对交通状况的思考。注意：1.词数不少于120；

2．应包括图画中的全部内容： 3．标题与开头已为你写好；

4．参考词汇：行人 pedestrian；人行横道 zebra crossing；隔离护栏 divider。

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

【参考答案】

What’s Wrong with Them?

Take a look at the road conditions of today.Something must be wrong with today’s people.Quite a few pedestrians and cyclists behave as if there were no traffic rules at all.They cross roads anywhere as they like，even though there are zebra crossings just a few yards away.Some even put themselves at risk taking short cuts by climbing dividers in the middle of roads.Many drivers act like F1 racers on the

highways.They drive at considerable speeds without care.They usually speed through zebra crossings，even when pedestrians are there.When there is a red light at an intersection，pedestrians or cyclists never tend to pause or stop.They all forget where they are.Sometimes there are some crazy people driving on the roads without driving licenses，or worse，drink and drive，which can make the road into a bloody battle field.Why do such things happen? In my opinion，it is just due to their lack of moral duty that people

ignore various traffic rules，road safety，or even the lives of others.This leads to their bad and reckless behavior，which makes the traffic conditions go from bad to worse.It is believed that something should be done to improve the whole situation.Then road safety won’t be a problem and traffic conditions won’t be a bother to us anymore.

第三篇：高考英语满分作文技巧

高考英语满分作文技巧

在高考英语试卷中，25分的作文分说多不多，说少不少，但是在作文上拿到高分也可以弥补其他方面丢失的分数，下面来看看高考英语满分作文技巧。高考英语满分作文技巧

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使内容要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，全品高考网确保语言表达的高级性。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

高考英语满分作文评分标准

1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2.覆盖所有内容要点。

3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。

5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。

高考英语满分作文范文

【真题再现】

II.Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2.说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

【作文范文】

Dear Sir/ Madam,I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries.My reasons are as follows.On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city.Visitors can go there by subway, by bus and so on.What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a more comfortable environmenttoappreciate the famous paintings.On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions.What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security

guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.Yours,Wang Min

第四篇：如何提高英语写作能力(高考满分作文技巧)

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Ⅰ、多积累一些常用的、精彩的词、短语、句子。

1.积累一个词，应该要同时掌握这个词的用法。记单词不能光记它的表面意思，而应深入了解它的适用语境、常用搭配、习惯用法等，这样才算真正掌握了一个词。例如“Actually,no rules of the game states you must do anything”这个句子中，查字典了解到“state”一词意思是“表明、说明”，在这里作及物动词，用法之一是“…state…”。以后在写作中要表达“考试中取得高分表明你学习取得了很大进步”便可翻译成“The high marks of the tests state you've made great progress in your studies”。

2.对一些精彩的句子应摘抄下来，熟读成诵，并有意识地将它们应用到自己的习作中去。这里说的“精彩”，并不是专指那些生僻的、羞涩难懂的句子，而是一些表达方式新颖、生动形象的句子。例如《The Climate & Clothing of theUK》一文中有一句“September may find you eating your lunch on some grassy spot in the sun one day and trying to shelter from the rain under an umbrella that has turned itself inside-这个句子尽管长却不难理解，正是由于其倒装句式的妙用。“In September you may be eating lunch on some grassy spot one day and the may be trying to 这样“单一陈述”型的模式，使自己的文章更有活力。

Ⅱ、恰当运用过渡词

“then、as time goes by、、finally”等，表因果关系的有“as a result、because of、thanks to”等

对于这样一段话l help you 应用连接词“contrary to ”和变换to popular belief,reading the weather forcast carefullyin the 则显得更简洁、更紧凑。可见恰当应用连接词和变换句式可以收到“以少量词表达出丰富意思”的效果。Ⅲ、恰当运用修辞

众所周知，恰当的修辞可以使文章更生动形象。我们高中写的大多是记叙文，这就有了比喻、拟人等修辞方法应该发挥作用的地方。有这样一幅图画，上面画的是一块从一个下水渠口飞出的一块西瓜砸中小明（肇事者，是他扔西瓜下下水渠的。但是下水渠里有修理工，他也把西瓜扔了出来。）多数同学描述为“Xiaoming was hit by the piece of water-melon”或“The piece of water-melon hit Xiaoming on his head”。若用上比喻拟人修辞，则可描述为“The piece of water-melon,like a flying bullet,whose target was Xiaoming's head,jumped out of the cloaca（下水道）and hit exactly on its target.”

显而易见后者更生动形象。

总的来说，要提高自己的英语写作能力，必须多精读、泛读，积累精彩的单词、短语、句子，并尽可能地运用到自己的习作中去，多模仿一些原汁原味的文章，这样才能使自己的写作水平跃上一个新台阶。

第五篇：2012年高考英语作文满分技巧-提纲作文

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应试技巧点拨

1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。

2.列题纲使内容要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。

3.勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。

4.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。注意句式的变化，力求在语言表达正确的基础上追求句式变换，全品高考网确保语言表达的高级性。

5.遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。

6.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达

到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。

7.注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚，书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。

8.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。

总结：

1.审清主题2.草拟提纲3.要点完整4.卷面整洁

5.避开错误6.控制篇幅7.行文紧凑8.仔细复查

书面表达写作指导---提纲作文

提纲作文是近几年高考英语书面表达的热点题型。命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式(如书信、报道、通知、日记等)有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强。

1．提纲作文的特点

提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。

2．思维空间灵活、开放

为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。

3．提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为：

审题，明确文体形式；

构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；

连句成文，写作完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。

写作范例

某省已经连续两年取消了高考英语听力测试，为此社会各界褒贬不一。假如你叫李明，请根据下面的提示给某报英语专栏写一封信，就考英语听力测试的必要性谈谈你的看法。要点：

1.听、说、读、写中，听是基础。

2．没有听力，英语考试是不全面的。

3．听是获取信息的重要途径。

注意：1.短文中应包括上述三个要点，并适当增加你自己的意见；

2．开头部分和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

3．词数：120～150。

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.___________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，Li Ming

思路点拨

第一步：审题。分析题目和提纲可知，这封书信的体裁应该是议论文。论点是“高考英语听力测试的必要性”，论据包括要点所提供的三点。因文章需要发表自己的意见，故使用第一人称。

第二步：构思。文章应该按照“总——分——总”的结构分为三段。

第一段提出问题(论点)：It is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.第二段分析问题(用论据论证)：

(1)Listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.(2)The English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test.(3)In communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

第三段解决问题(给出结论)：So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.第三步：完稿。根据要点，按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料，力求拼写正确，行文连贯，链接自然，语言规范，词语丰富，句型多样，语法结构准确无误，表达简明扼要，慎用长难句。高分范文

Dear Editor，With the development of economy，it’s more and more important to have a good command of English.I think it is quite necessary that listening test should be added to the College Entrance Examination.As we know，in the study of English，listening is very important.Listening，speaking，reading and writing are the four basic parts of learning a foreign language.Without listening，we can’t get along well with the others.Furthermore，the English examination itself wouldn’t be complete and perfect if there weren’t listening test in it.It also can’t reflect the overall ability of the students in learning a foreign language.What’s more，in communication with foreigners，if we can’t understand what they say，how can we express ourselves freely?

So we must take advantage of every chance to practise listening to develop our English to meet the needs of our society.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

针对性训练

你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：

一、通常方式1．生日聚会2．生日礼物3．生日祝福

二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由

词数：120～150

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