2010年12月英语四级考试写作真题及新东方训练

第一篇：2010年12月英语四级考试写作真题及新东方训练

作文：1，目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2，为了让孩子独立，父母应该...how shuould parents help children to be independent? 作者 王菲

There is no denying the fact that independence plays an increasingly important part in our daily life and we can’t help asking such a question: how should parents help children to be independent? To begin with, it is imperative that parents provide opportunities to children and allow them to participate in the social games which contribute to the independence of the children.What’s more, under the excessive care and protection of parents, these children are lack of the ability to overcome the difficulties that abound in their real life.Therefore, it’s a must for parents to cultivate the independence which helps their children easily conquer and frustration and depression.To conclude, it's essential for us to dispose of the problem of children’s independence timely and effectively.Parents should help children develop strong independence and the abilities needed in the future.Only in this way can they be ready to confront any challenges in the society of fierce competition.2010年12月大学英语四级考试 作文范文及解析

How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work, marriage.Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children’s independence thoroughly.For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent.The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood.Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than

themselves in this world.The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator.And only with parent’s trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.今年的作文主题非常贴近考生的生活，给了考生很大的发挥空间，擅长写日常生活细节的学生可以写上三五个句子勾勒父母对于子女的过度关爱，而擅长逻辑思考的学生则可以更多地阐述父母怎样的行为才可以培养子女独立的品格，而过度宠爱正导致了独立精神的消失。

从具体操作的角度来说，对于基础较为薄弱的考生，这次的考试题目是比较容易套用模板的，第一段，把现实状况描述清楚；第二段，写清楚父母亲帮助子女独立的策略；第三段，呼吁父母亲多给自己一些自由。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)沪江考前模板专题里面关于解决问题类作文提到了类似的结构：

In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.----(说明A的现状)．

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).像这样子的模板能够帮助无话可说，或者说英语表达能力比较弱的同学迅速找到思路，只需要填入关键的字词就可以完成作文。

但是对于能够用流畅的英语表达自己的思路的同学来说，写作如果希望取得比较高的分数，则需要注意语言必须尽可能简洁才能够在规定字数以内说清楚自己的论点，而句子的表达要求，也从有话可说，上升到言之有理，甚至上升到语言精致优美，内在逻辑严密的高度了。

第二篇：2011大学英语四级考试写作训练题汇总

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university president.You should write at least 120 words based on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养。

2.学校应该丰富学生的校园生活

【范文】

A Letter to the University President

Dear Sir,I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning our teaching and campus life.As a sophomore from the Math Department, I am quite satisfied with the present condition of my university, but I餯 like to say that there is still some room for improvement.First, I believe that more attention should be paid to the guidance of our study methods.To some extent, university students are capable of studying by themselves, but more often than never, we find ourselves at a loss as to choose good books to read and appropriate topics for our research.It is clear that we need some advice from our teachers.If our teachers can lecture more on “how to learn by yourself” for us, especially for the freshmen, our skills will be further improved.Second, more activities should be conducted to make our campus life more colorful.I餸 sorry to say that the present life on campus is quite boring.Every day we have classes, read in the library, or stay in the dormitory.Life here is routine.We need more meaningful activities organized to enrich our college life and enable us to study more efficiently.I hope you can consider my suggestions.Thank you.Yours sincerely

Li Ming

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Opinion on Campus Lectures.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.大学校园里的讲座丰富多彩

2.听讲座的益处

3.你对在大学校园里听讲座的评论

【范文】

My Opinion on Campus Lectures

In recent years, more and more lectures are being given on campus.They are organized either by the departments or by the students unions with an aim to improve the students quality both mentally and academically.These lectures are usually in series and on different topics, such as arts, life, economy, psychology and world issues.Generally speaking, the advantages of good lectures are various.First they broaden the students knowledge horizon and cultivate interest in different fields.Second, they make the life of the students colorful and enjoyable.With these merits, lectures are just complementary and subordinate to our school work.If students spend too much time attending lectures, their regular study will be affected and disturbed.So, in my opinion, the students should, on the one hand, do their class work and homework well first, on the other hand, set as more time as possible to attend good lectures which are helpful to our life and study.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of thanks.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你过生日时收到了Lucy送来的鲜花，写信向她表示感谢。你的信应包括:

1.表达感谢之意

2.提出回报对方

3.期待对方做客

【范文】

Dear Lucy,I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your beautiful flowers.I? like you to know how much your flowers meant to me.You have a positive genius for selecting the right gift.I not only enjoyed your flowers, but also the delicate vase.I shall ever remember this gift as one of the most precious things in my life.I will not be very busy the following days.I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating.Would you kindly let me know what time you are at convenience?

I will feel very happy if you have time to make me a call.How nice it would be to see you again and I am looking forward to seeing you next time!

I repeat my thanks again for your lovely flowers.Please give my kind regards to your family.Yours truly,Huck

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter on the issue of employment for gradutes.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.就业的形势越来越严峻，东西部人才供需并不均衡。

2.你认为是否应在西部就业及其原因

【范文】

The Issue of Employment for Gradutes

As we all know, the situation of employment graduate is urgent nowadays.Employment becomes a major social issue in our country.More and more people pay great attention to it.This issue result from two aspects.First many undergraduates are finding jobs.They hope to get a job with high salary and other pensions.So the government and the society face great pressure.More job opportunities are needed to create for them.On the other hand, there are many vacancies of jobs in the west.So there comes an imbalance between the supply and demand in the east and the west.Few people want to seek jobs in the west.They prefer to live in the major cities, such as Beijing , shanghai and other developped areas.To solve this issue, it is a better choice to encourage people to seek jobs in the west.This also help to develop local economy and offer a brandew chance for graduates.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a publishing house on food safety.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

假设你的同学因食用从某超市买回的食品而食物中毒，后经治疗康复。请给报社写一封信，描述他(们)的中毒与脱险经过，呼吁社会各界重视食品安全。

【范文】

A Letter to a Publishing House on Food Safety

June 15th, 2006

Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for taking time to read this letter.As the problem of food safety has been becoming worse and worse nowadays, I am obliged to write to you.Several days ago, one of my classmates came back from supermarket with a large bag of food.Because of having found a new style of tinned?ish in the food store, she was very glad.Several other roommates were invited to enjoy the “mouth?atering chicken”.Unfortunately, after finishing the food, all of my three friends had stomachaches and vomited, their faces having become paler and paler.Due to sensitivity to that kind of tinned food, I escaped that suffer.At that time, my mind went blank.I dialed the emergency number with my trembling hand, therefore they were quickly sent to hospital.The doctor said they were lucky to be out of danger because they did not eat too much of that rotten fish and were hospitalized on time.This is the matter that happened around me which made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem.I sincerely hope that the whole society could attach much importance to this issue.Thanks!

Yours,Julie

第三篇：新东方：大学英语四级考试写作必备佳句

新东方：大学英语四级考试写作必备佳句

1.Parents are firmly convinced that, to send their child to kindergartens or nursery schools will have an unfavorable influence on the growth of children.父母们坚定地相信把孩子送到幼儿园对他们的成长不利。

2.However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at home.然而，这一想法正遭受越来越多的专家的质疑，他们指出，孩子总是呆在家里，和父母在一起，是不健康的

3.Although parent would be able to devote much more time and energy to their children, it must be admitted that, parent has less experience and knowledge about how to educate and supervise children, when compared with professional teachers working in kindergartens or nursery schools

尽管父母能在他们孩子身上投入更多时间和精力，但是必须承认，与工作在幼儿园的专职教师相比，他们在如何管理教育孩子方面缺乏知识和经验

4.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents‘ desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages

通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的，但是这样做的缺点远大于优点

5.Parents should be encouraged to send their children to nursery schools, which will bring about profound impacts on children and families, and even the society as a whole.应该鼓励父母将他们的孩子送到幼儿园，这将对孩子，家庭，甚至整个社会产生深远的影响

6.Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects.They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities.Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.只要一提起艺术和文化项目，一些政府领导就会兴奋不已，他们滔滔不绝地说着美丽的公园，城市中心漂亮的雕塑，还有满是稀世珍宝的艺术展览馆。他们认为在经济发展中，没有什么比这些艺术项目更重要了

7.But is it really the case? The information I‘ve collected over last few years leads me to believe that artistic and cultural projects may be less useful than many governments think.In fact, basic infrastructure projects are playing extremely important role and should be given priority

这是真的吗?这些年我收集的信息让我相信这些文化、艺术项目并没有许多政府想象的那么重要。事实上，基础设施建设非常重要，应该放在首位

8.Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists, which will bring huge profits to local residents.Some people even equate the build of such projects with the improving of economic construction

那些赞成建设文化艺术项目的人认为文化环境会吸引更多的游客，这将给当地居民带来巨大的利益。一些人甚至把建设文化艺术项目与发展经济建设等同起来

9.Unfortunately, there is very few evidence that big companies are willing to invest a huge sums of money in a place without sufficient basic projects, such as supplies of electricity and water

然而，很少有证据表明大公司愿意把巨额的资金投到一个连水电这些基础设施都不完善的地方去

第四篇：09年12月英语四级真题作文及参考(新东方)

题目：

Create a green campus

1.建设绿色校园十分重要

2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境

3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……

范文：

Create a Green Campus

It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college.Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable.Some of the authorities’ budget should be on how to reduce of the waste.What’s more, we’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life.It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses.本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多新东方学员应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。

第五篇：专业四级考试历年写作真题

专业四级考试历年写作真题(1992-2005)1992

My View on Reading Extensively 1993

My Idea of Becoming a Teaching in the Future 1994

TV: a good thing or a bad thing? 1995

Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.1996

Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school.Now, you have been asked by the Student’s Union to write a passage entitled: The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life 1997

Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students.You either agree or disagree with them: More pressure from academic studies does(does not)good to us 1998

It is now generally accepted that vehicles(cars, trucks, etc.)are a major source of air pollution in cities.Your are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem.One way to solve the problem 1999

We see advertisements on television everyday.Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so.What is your opinion? A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television 2000

College life should be varied and colorful.And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it.However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard.Write an article to the university radio entitled: The importance of extracurricular activities 2001

Travel has become part of our life.And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience: Travel broadens the mind 2002

Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.And they have different ways to stay healthy.For example, some exercise every day;others try to keep a balanced diet.What do you think is the best way to stay healthy? The Best Way to Stay Healthy 2003 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family.So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic:THE IMPORTANCE OF KEEPING A GOOD MOOD 2004 Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other.So, some say that phones will kill letter writing.What is your opinion?WILL PHONES KILL LETTER WRITING? 2005 The students’ Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: MY IDEA OF A UNIVERSITY ARTS FESTIVAL 比较题型 I.比较两个事物A&B优缺点，表明倾向

1996: The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life 2004: WILL PHONES KILL LETTER WRITING?

Beginning: Between the two(AB上义词)……A, and B, I hold that A is a better ……(choice, means, way, access)Body: My belief(statement, view, point of view)that A is a better … is based on the following two reasons.The first reason is that A can(A enables us to do)……(扩展句)While B can only ……(扩展句)The second reason is that A can …… But(Nevertheless, However)B can only ……

Ending: For the reasons mentioned above, we can easily draw the conclusion that A outweigh B(A is superior to B)as an important C.论题+C, some people hold that A …, while others choose B as one important C.In my opinion, A is superior to B.My reasons for the preference for lie in the following aspects.Firstly, A …, while B … Secondly, A can …, but B… From the above two reasons, we can safely come to the conclusion that A outweighs B.II.