第一篇：50字英语小作文
50字英语小作文
Here are some emergency numbers in China.If there is a fire accident,you should call 119 immediately.For any other emergent incidents,you can reach the police office as soon as you call the number 110.Remember these numbers in heart.Whenever you and somebody else are in danger,be calm down and find a telephone first!
第二篇：寒假英语作文200-300字
寒假生活英语作文一：
I have got a happy winter holiday this year.In this year, I haappy day winter holiday.In the first day, I went back to my hometown with my parents.When I got there, I saw my grandparents.Then we had lunch together.At that time, we not only had dilicious food,we also talk about our wonderful life.We laughed and sang, it was so happy then.After lunch, I got out and found my old friends in the field.They were all taller and stronger than before.We sat down on the ground and talk about funny things.It was so interesting and fun.We also played some funny games.I have never play such a funny game since I leave my hometown for a big city.I was so happy that day.It was the happiest time in my holiday.And it was so funny.寒假生活英语作文二：
January 15th,Sunny
As the winter vacation is drawing near, I have a plan about my vacation.I'm going to do what I want to do.I'm going to study harder in order to get good grades in the following term.After finishing all my homework, I'm going to enjoy myself in the sea of knowledge.Reading must be a good idea.I'm going to keep fit at the same time.I'll get up eary in the morning everyday and play sports.I really love sports.Besides that, Eating a balanced diet is also good for my health.I'm going to help my mom and dad with the housework as well in the vacation.I'll learn to cook.As for travelling, I'm planning to go to Hainan.But whether going there or not will be decided on the weather.During the vacation,I'm going to learn more about history,as I'm really poor on it.So you see, I'll have a terrific vacation!
寒假生活英语作文三：
It was a very busy evening, I was doing my homework at my home.My father was writing a composition in the study room.My mother was interested in Shanghai opera.She was watching a Shanghai opera contest.The apartment was very quiet.Suddenly the light went out.It was a blackout, but I liked it very much.It came and I didn’t have to do my homework.We went to the living room very slowly.After 5 minutes, we all sat in the sofa.It was a lucky, fortunate day.I said that let’s held a concert.My parents agreed with me.I took out some candles and lighted up.We were singing, laughing and talking.We had a really good time.But while I was singing, the light suddenly turned on.Oh, my God.My father went back to his room went on writing.My mother turned on the TV and said to me “Dear, do your homework!” I felt very frustrated.I sat at the desk and thought I hated light.I hoped there would be a blackout the next day.I thought I would enjoy myself more and more.I went into a dream……
Many children are always looking forward to the winter vacation;this is because during the vacation, children needn’t go to school;They can do everything they like, such as playing, watching TV, traveling, or even sleeping all the day and so on.and when winter vacation come on ,it means that spring festival will come on soon.I spent the whole day at home nearly every day, I played with my computer.I played computer games and surfed the internet.during the vacation ,I still stayed in touch with my classmates and my friends.I think I have been a potatoes mouse.During the spring festival, I visited my relatives ,and I got a lot of red bags.Even though my vacation was crazy and exciting, but I really learnt a lot.It was good for relaxing, and I am getting ready for the coming new term now.Good-bye, my winter vacation.寒假生活英语作文四：
I like the winter holiday very much.Though it's very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.I can watch cartoon every day.I needn't go to school frepuently.Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming,I can play all the time.I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game.So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home.We had dinner together.It's so lively that I'am very happy.But I still have to do my homework.During the holiday,I learned a lot.I love the winter holiday.
第三篇：高三英语作文必备字词句
高三英语作文必备字词句
一、作文单词
Writer作者，passage 文章，understand 理解
Offer 提供，disaster 灾难，hit/happen 袭击/发生
Rescue 救援，destroy 毁坏，injure 伤害achievement 成就 Volunteer 志愿者，voluntary 志愿的，percent 本分之
History 历史，area 地区，population人口，hold 举行 Activities活动，purpose 目的，host主办，take up 占 Percentage 百分比，increase 增加，reduce减少 change 变化Exchange交换，community社区，improve 提高，ideal理想
Convenient方便的education 教育 surroundings 环境 confident自信的 Arrange 安排 attract 吸引 ability 能力 accept 接受
Pollution 污染 pollute 污染 behave 行为behaviour行为
Become 变成 healthy健康的 health 健康 succeed成功
Agree 同意 disagree 不同意 important重要的 necessary 必要的 Advertisement 广告 adviser 顾问 affect 影响 support 支持 Agriculture 农业 culture 文化 aim 目标 experience 经历，体验
Importance 重要性 benefits 好处 information 信息 communication交流，通讯 drought 干旱 serous 严重 严肃 chat 聊天
University /college 大学 from 毕业于 athlete 运动员
Gym 体操馆 stadium 体育馆 champion 冠军 enlarge 扩大
Widen 拓宽 publicize/introduce 宣传/介绍 waste 浪费
Encourage 鼓励 pessimistic 悲观的 rule 规则 control 控制
二、短语
Asian games 亚运 donate money to 向捐钱lead to/result in导致 Make contributions to 对作出贡献 sign up 报名 be concerned about 关心 keep the balance of study and relaxation 保持学习和休闲的平衡 follow one’s advice 采纳建议 take me for example 以我为例 Be located in 位于 deal with/ solve problem 解决问题
Apply for a job 申请工作 because of 因为 avoid sth/ doing sth 避免 face the failure bravely 面对失败 follow natural rules 遵循自然规律 communicate with sb 交流 set up confidence 建立自信 Become independent 变得独立 with the help of 在…的帮助下 Give performance 表演 overcome difficulties 克服困难
Traffic accidents 交通事故 allow sb to do sth 允许某人作做某事 Set a good example for us 为我们树立好榜样 protect environment 保护环境 polish out characters 塑造人格 common social problem 普遍社会问题 enrich our knowledge 丰富知识 widen out eyesight 扩大视野 advantages and disadvantages 优点和缺点 try one’s best to do sth 尽力 enrich social experience 丰富社会经验 live a happy life 过幸福生活 make progress in study 学习进步 keep up the pace of society 跟上时代 be thankful to parents 感激父母 make more friends 交朋友 be concerned about 关心 adapt to/ adjust to 适应
Focus on 聚焦于 重视 be addicted to 对…上瘾 be admitted to 被录取到… improve the living level 提高生活水平
In a competitive and challenging society在竞争与挑战社会中 Think highly of 高度评价 start one’s own business 自主创业 Public transportation 公共交通 social insurance system 社保体制 Lack the awareness of environmental protection 缺乏环保意识 Contribute to the economic growth 刺激经济增长
Keep healthy both in mind and body 身心健康
Get on well with others 与他人和睦相处 out of order 混乱 Relax oneself 放松 be satisfied with 对…感到满意
I am writing to complain about a pair of shoes.我写信来投诉一双鞋子的质量问题。
save energy and resources 节约能源和资源
we did a survey among sb on sth在某人中做了一个关于某事的调查 they devote their life to bringing me up致力于，抚养
it is beneficial/good/helpful for us to grow up有利于我们成长 I apologize to him for misunderstanding him由于…向某人道歉 senior three students are living under pressure
高三学生生活在压力下
we should share our sadness and happiness with our parents 分享苦乐
only in this way can we build a harmonious society
只有这样才能建立和谐社会
as for me, I prefer to choose stars as my idols至于我，我更喜欢悬着明星作为我的偶像。
the government should pay more attention to the social problem and take some actions/measures to solve it政府应重视这一社会问题并采取行动/措施来解决它。
he is considered as the hero and is respected and remembered by ordinary people他被当成英雄，受到老百姓的尊敬与纪念。
in order to achieve our goal, we should spare no effort to study为了达到目标，不遗余力
provide free medical care for us 提供免费医疗
smoking does harm to/is bad for/has a bad effect on our health吸烟不利于健康
teamwork plays an important part in our daily life起重要作用 people should take an active/optimistic attitude to the failure对…持积极乐观的态度;乐观面对…
it reminds me of my personal/own experience 这让我想起了自己的经历
from the passage, I learned that...从文章，我知道...there are different opinions about whether...关于是否...有不同的观点
some people hold the opposite opinion that...一些人持相反观点
we spend the weekend in surfing the Internet花时间做某事 the rain stop me from going out阻止某人做某事
the reasons are as following理由如下
every coin has two sides事物是一分为二的with the development of the science and technology/economy/modern society随着...的发展
三、句型
1.It is a pity that…很遗憾
2.As is well-known to all…众所周知
As we know
It is well-known that…
3.There is no doubt…毫无疑问
There is no doubt that parents hope we have a bright future and will not lose our competition in the society.There is no denying the fact that…不可否认事实
There is no denying the fact that some parents arrange everything for their children.It is obvious that…很明显
It is obvious that he is wrong.4.It is …that…强调句
It is my teacher helps me a lot.It is not until…that直到…才
It is not until he told me the truth that I knew I was wrong.5.It is one’s duty to do sth某人又职责做某事
It is the government’s duty to take some actions to solve the social problem.6.Only when… can we …只有。。我们才能。。
Only when everyone realize the importance of it can we solve the social problem and built harmonious society.Only at that time did I realize the importance of study.只有在那时。。
Only in this way can we…只有这样我们才能。。
7.It is necessary for us to take part in many activities and develop teamwork spirit.某人做某事有必要、很重要、方便、普遍、自然
It is necessary for us to take part in many activities and develop teamwork spirit.8.It is high time that…该做某事的时候了
It is high time that we took some actions to protect our environment.9.It is a waste of time doing sth做某事浪费时间
It is no use/good doing sth做某事没用
10.To one’s surprise/happiness/sadness/joy/disappointment…让某人吃惊、高兴、悲伤、高兴、失望的是。。
To our happiness we won the game at last.With the help of my teacher, I overcome my difficulties.11.So…that…如此。。至于
He is so unselfish and warm-hearted that he is always willing to help others.12.No matter who/what…无论。。
No matter what you meet, you should keep optimistic.13.It is a good way for sb to do sth是做某事的好方式
It is helpful/beneficial/good for sb to do sth有利于某人做某事
It is good for students to develop their ability of self-independence and improve social skills of communication.14.Have a chance to do sth有机会做某事
We will have a chance to exchange ideas with students from other schools.15.It is said/reported that…据说
第四篇：高二年级英语作文FreedominmyDream750字（定稿）
写写帮文秘助手(www.xiexiebang.com)之高二年级英语作文：Freedom in my Dream_750字
as the whole world has its boundaries, limits and freedom coexist in our life.i don’t expect complete freedom, which is impossible.i simply have a dream that supports my life.i dream that one day, i could escape from the deep sea of thick schoolbooks and lead my own life.with my favorite fictions, i lie freely on the green grass, smelling the spring, listening to the wind singing, breathing the fresh and cool air and dissolve my soul in nature at last.simple and short enjoyment can bring me great satisfaction.i dream that one day the adults could throw their prejudice of comic and cartoon away.they could keep a lovely heart that can share sorrow and happiness with us while watching cartoon or doing personal things.that’s the real communication of heart to heart.i have the belief that my dreams should come true.i am looking forward to some day coming when i am like a proud eagle, which flies to the blue and vast sky.
第五篇：英语小作文
1、A Happy Day
2、A Little Wish
3、A Pen and a Pencil
4、Fly Kites
5、Four Seasons
6、Have a fun holiday
7、I Like My Village
8、My Bedroom
9、My Best Friend
10、My Best Friends
11、My Dog
12、My Dream
13、My English Teacher
14、My Family 1
15、My Family 2
16、My Family 3
17、My Favourite Sport
18、My Favourite stamp
19、My Good Friend 1 20、My Good Friend 2
21、My Grandfather's Garden
22、My Hometown.23、My Little Cat
24、My Lovely Home
25、My School
26、My Uncle
27、My Winter Holiday
28、Myself
29、Spring
A Happy Day The weather is getting hotter and hotter.The summer holiday is coming.What a happy day!Birds are singing in the trees.Butterflies are dancing in the garden.Children are playing in the park.Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯).Some boys are listening to music.Other boys are reading under the big tree.Some girls are drawing pictures.Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).I like roller-skating(滑旱冰)in the square.And my classmates are playing football.We are very happy!
点评台：这篇文章描写了同学们和自己在假期里快乐的一天，表达了他们对假期的喜爱以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。读后有种很想加入他们当中，与他们分享快乐的愿望。整篇文章用词准确，语言生动，中心明确、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章级别：A。
A Little Wish Look!What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship.The spaceship is as bright as the stars.It can move.I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish.I want to be an astronaut.In space, there are many materials.If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space.I think the scene will be very great.On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth.On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.This is my wish.I hope my wish will come true!
点评中心：文章题材新颖，标新立意，让我们了解到虽然只是一个小小的愿望但却包含了对探索宇宙的好奇及对我们地球家园的热爱，同时也感受到小作者立志成为一名宇航员的伟大理想。最后希望小作者能够再接再励，写出更多、更优秀的小文章，同时也祝愿你梦想成真！
A Pen and a Pencil
I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice, but the pencil is so dirty.One day, the pen met the pencil.The pen said to the pencil:“ What a dirty pencil!” The pencil said :“Yes.I'm dirty.But I can write words.” “I can write words，too.Now,let's see who can write more words.”
They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper, too.After a long time ,the pen hadn't any ink(钢笔水)left(剩下).The pencil became short, but he could still write.At last ,the pencil won.The pencil said :“Ha ha...ha ha...Who won, you or me ?”The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil :“I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good, too.”
点评台：这是一篇很成功的文章。文章不仅立意新颖，更重要的是寓意深刻。同时，也能看出小作者有着丰富的想象力。希望在今后的学习中充分发挥自己的想象，写出更多、更好的文章。文章级别：A。
Fly Kites Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong.My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.My grandfather takes me to the People's Park.We fly my “Rocket”.“The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!” I say.My grandfather looks and says, “Let me try!” “Sure!” So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite.“Follow me, one, two, three, run!” I run with my grandfather quickly.Oh!It's so wonderful!The kite is flying up with the wind.I am so happy and ask my grandfather, “Why can't I fly it up, but you can?” My grandfather says with a smile on his face, “Because you fly the kite against the wind.” “Oh, I see.” I nod my head happily.We play in the park until late.We enjoy ourselves.点评中心：小作者用平实的语言描述了风筝从飞不上天到飞上天的过程，特别生动、形象，同时又结合小作者与爷爷的对话，让人看完以后有种身临其境的感觉，仿佛放风筝的活动历历在目。
Four Seasons
Spring is green.Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout new leaves and turn green.The flowers start to blossom.It is so beautiful and green everywhere.Summer is bright.Can you guess the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining.For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright.How beautiful and bright it is!Autumn is golden.Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground.It is golden everywhere.Winter is white.Why? It's because when winter reaches us, the white snowflakes fly slowly down, so pure and white.The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats.Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming.I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life.点评中心:小作者以“四季”为题目,开篇直接切入四个季节,以阐述四季的不同为主线,分别进行描述.文章用词准确,语言丰富、生动,语法基本正确.希望继续努力,成为未来的作家。
Have a fun holiday!Come to Shenzhen and have a fun holiday.Shenzhen is a new and modern city.The weather here is very pleasant.The trees and grass are green every season.In spring, the weather is warm.You can go hiking.In summer, the weather is hot, but you can go to the beautiful beach.You can swim there.You can make a sandcastle(沙堆城堡), too.In autumn.the weather is cool, but not dry.You can fly kites in the parks.In winter, it's not cold.You don't need to put on more clothes.You can play sports then.There is lots of delicious food here.You can drink morning tea and afternoon tea.You can eat seafood(海鲜), too.In Shenzhen there are many famous places.You can go to the Window of the World.You can go to Happy Valley, too.Don't wait.Come to Shenzhen and have fun, fun and fun!点评中心:通过对深圳四季的描写,给我们展现出了一幅四季如春的美丽画面。在深圳,可以到海边堆沙堡, 可以吃海鲜, 还可以去美丽的世界之窗游玩…… 所有这些都深深地吸引着小读者们,不愧为一篇成功的小作文。
I Like My Village Hello,dear friends!Welcome to my village.It's big and beautiful!I like it very much.Look!There are many houses in the village.They are small.There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses.There is a big forest behind the houses.There are many big trees in it.There are many rivers in front of the houses.The water is clean.There are many fish in the rivers.There are many bridges over the rivers.There are many big trees on the river banks.And there is grass and flowers on it.The grass is green.The flowers are colourful and beautiful.There is a lake in the village.There are many ducks in the lake.The sky is blue.The rivers flow.The air is fresh and clean.My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!
点评中心：I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生动、细致的描写方法，勾勒出一幅美丽、和谐的乡村图画。文章在用词方面比较准确，多处采用There be句型。但有些地方可用连词连接，无需再重复使用There be句型。
My Bedroom My name is Mike.I have a comfortable bedroom.There is a desk, a bookshelf and a bed in my bedroom.I do my homework in my bedroom every evening.The desk is in front of the bookshelf.There are many textbooks, English books and story books on the shelf.My bed is near the windows.There are some flowers on the windowsill.The curtain and the sheets of my bedroom are blue.Because my favourite colour is blue, too.Dear friend, do you like my bedroom? 点评中心：My Bedroom针对自己卧室里的几件物品进行了介绍，为同学们展示了一个干净舒适的小天地，值得一提的是文中使用了一些生词，使文章增色不少。在这里建议其他同学学习，努力多掌握些单词，从而写出更加精彩的英语作文。“Very Good!”。
My Best Friend Ma Qi is my best friend.She is a girl.she is ten years old.She has short black hair and big eyes.she likes to sing.Ma Qi and I are in the same class.We always study, draw pictures and play ping-pong together.After the school, we often go to the park.We often play a game of Hide And Seek there.We have a good time.点评台: My Best Friend语言流畅，叙述清楚，描述了自己与好朋友一起学习、生活的快乐时光，如果小作者能够运用已学过的知识再对好朋友的外貌特征和衣着作一番细致地描写的话，相信文章内容就会更加充实。“Good!”。千万不要骄傲呀，还要继续练习写作，使自己能够写出更好的文章。
My Best Friends
Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short, thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong ,but not fat.After class, Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening, Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.点评台：向大家介绍了自己的两个好朋友。语言流畅，用词准确，没有语法错误，字里行间能体会到小作者与两位好朋友之间的深厚友情。另外，从整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英语基础知识掌握得很牢。希望今后的学习中写出更多，更好的文章。文章级别：A。
My Dog Hello, everyone!I am Wang Ze.My English name is Mike.I have a cat and a dog.I like my cat, but I like my dog better than my cat.My dog is two years old.It has two black eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.Its body is white.It is as white as snow.My dog is very lovely.I like my dog very much.点评台：文章My Dog首先向读者问候，并简单介绍了自己，随后通过简略的描写使一只可爱的小狗形象跃然纸上，能够吸引读者的注意力。对于初学者而言，能写出这样的习作确实不容易，值得大家学习。“Good！”，继续加油啊！
My Dream I am a handsome boyl.My name is Mike.I like drawing.My dream is to have a white house with a white wall, a white roof, a white floor.I can draw a red car on the wall, and I can drive the car around the world.I can draw a plane on the roof, and I want to take the plane to the sky.i can draw a sailing-boat on the floor, and I want to take the sailing-boat across the sea.点评台:这篇作文“My Dream”，形式新颖，风格独特，用词得当，语句通顺。此文章充分地体现了小作者丰富的想象力和较强的写作能力，是一篇成功的文章。同时，希望张灿小朋友能坚持练习英文写作，相信你一定会写出更好的英语作文。“Very good!”。
My English Teacher Miss Shan is my English teacher.She has two big eyes.She is thin and short.Her hair is very long.She is very beautiful.Her English is very good.She always play games with us in English class.So her class is very interesting and shi is kind to us.She like us and we like her too.I like my English teacher.How about you? 点评中心: 文章写得比较简单,词语使用准确, 语言朴实无华,字里行间表达了小作者对英语老师的喜爱之情, 但不够具体, 如果能指出老师的爱好、习惯等，文章会更加充实，希望你继续努力,写出更加优秀的文章来。
My Family I have a happy family.There are six people in my family.They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.My name is Yang Yuan.I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5.I like English very much, I read them every morning.I often listen to the English tape.My grandpa is an accountant(会计).He is very busy.My grandma is a farmer.She does the housework.My mother is a farmer, too.She cooks every day.My father is a worker.In the evening he likes watching TV.While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk.My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.All of them love me, and I love them, too.I have a happy family.I love my family.点评中心:这篇文章主要描写了家庭成员的职业，My Family更适合做这篇文章的标题，整篇文章条理清楚，语言简练，用词准确，没有语法错误，可见小作者的英语语言基本功很好，希望杨园同学在今后的学习中继续发扬这个优点，不要骄傲，写出更多的好文章。文章级别:B。
My Family Hello, everyone!Today I am going to talk about my family.My name is Mike.I am in Class 1, Grade 4.l like English very much.I like hamburgers.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.Look, this is my father.He has two brown eyes, a big nose and a small mouth.He is an engineer.He is very handsome.Look, that is my mother.She has two big eyes.She is an engineer too.She is very pretty and kind.My family is not big, but we have many friends.We are happy.I love them very much and they love me too.讲评中心：文章写得比较简炼，词语使用准确，语言生动，字里行间表达了小作者对家人的爱。但不要骄傲，继续努力啊！文章级别：A。
My Family There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a driver.He is 37 years old.He like eating oranges.My mother is a worker.She like eating apples.My name is Mike.I am 9 years old.I am in Class 3, Grade 3.l like eating hamburgers.I am good at English.I study hard every day.点评中心：My Family 语言流畅，描写得当，用平实的语言向读者介绍了家庭中的每一位成员的基本情况，美中不足之处就是缺乏对家人之间和睦关系的描述，使文章略显平淡了一些。“Good！”,还要继续努力啊
My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is swimming.I often swim in the pool.I swim twice a week.When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happiness.Of course, I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.点评中心:这篇小文章语言精炼、准确,短短几句便勾画出了一幅生动、活泼的画面。
My Favourite stamp I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.Look, there is a chick in this stamp.The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail.Its feathers are yellow and brown.This stamp is very beautiful.I like this stamp very much.Miss Wang点评台集邮不仅可以增长我们的见识，同时也可以陶冶我们的情操。本文的小作者就是一个集邮爱好者，看小作者所描述的小鸡邮票多么可爱呀！感兴趣的小朋友可以试着收集邮票啊！Miss Wang要奖给姚晗小朋友一个“Very Good!”,继续加油啊！
My Good Friend Hello!My name is Maggie.I have a good friend.Her Chinese name is Wang Qi.Her English name is Mary.She likes fruit very much.Her favourite color is blue.She is very beautiful.She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses.She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse.She is very tall.She likes swimming and playing football.She is a good student.We are in the same school and the same class.But we are not in the same row.I like her very much.We always play together.讲评中心：文章比较详尽、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章词语使用准确、语法正确、主题突出，“Good!”，不要骄傲，继续努力啊！
My Good Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Zhang Hong.She is 9 years old.She is a pretty girl.She has long hair and big beautiful eyes.They look like stars.Her favourite colour is pink.Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits.She likes to play badminton very much.Her favourite class is English.She studies very hard.She is a good student.I love her very much.I will learn from her.本文围绕My Good Friend这一主题，运用所学英语知识，针对好朋友的外貌、爱好进行介绍，为读者展示了一个活泼、可爱的小女孩形象。Miss Wang要奖给孟婷婷同学一个“Very Good！”。同时，孟婷婷同学也要继续努力练习英文写作呀！My Grandfather's Garden
My grandfather has a small garden.There are many flowers in it.I think all the flowers are beautiful.My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning.First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers.Then, he waters them.When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy.My sister and I like the garden very much.We often play in it.Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.One day, my brother picked a flower.My grandfather was very angry and sad.He said to my brother, “My child, don't pick the flowers.That's not a good deed(行为).” My brother felt very sorry for that.And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now.I like my grandfather's garden.点评台：向大家描写了爷爷的花园，虽没有太多华丽的词语，但能使读者感受到花园的美丽和花儿的芳香。通过描写爷爷对花园的精心料理以及对弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不仅仅是写爷爷的花园，也从字里行间中看出了小作者对爷爷的敬佩之情。文章条理清楚、意思连贯，没有语法错误，是一篇很成功的文章，希望再接再励！文章级别：A。
My Hometown My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city.It is located(座落)in the southwest(西南)part of Guangdong Province(省).My hometown is famous for Diaolous.Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous(Please look at the picture.).It was built in 1923.The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡垒).It is tall and magnificent(雄伟的).People praise(赞扬)it for “the No.1 Tower” of Kaiping.I like my hometown.点评台：小作者的My Hometown主要描写了家乡著名的碉楼，其中重点向大家介绍了“开平第一楼”--瑞石楼，抒发了自己对家乡的热爱之情。整篇文章语句连贯，没有语法错误。文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者继续发扬这个好习惯，并写出更多的好文章与大家分享。文章级别：A。
My Little Cat Hello!I'm Becky.This is my little cat.I like it very much.Its name is Do Re Mi.It's very beautiful.It's gray.It has triangular(三角形的)ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth.My mother calls it “Little Baby”.When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.It's very fat,but it's nimble(机敏的).One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room.I thought it might find a mouse.It was running after the mouse.They looked like playing hide-and-seek.About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse.I was happy.So I touched it with a smile.“You have done a good job,Little Baby.” I said.Then it jumped up and down and ran away.Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.点评中心:向大家介绍了小猫的外貌，还主要描写了小猫在某一天捉老鼠的情景。整篇文章主次分明，语言简炼、生动，没有语法错误。同时，字里行间能使读者感受到小作者对小猫的喜爱之情。
My Lovely Home I live in a small village named Fengyi.I live in an old building.It was built in 1999.It has three floors.On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom.On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms.One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me.On the third floor, there is an attic.It's my study, it's quiet.I like to study there.When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony.There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy.My parents clean it every day.I can also do some housework.My friends, do you love my home?
点评中心：My Lovely Home开篇直接切入本文主题，首先从房子的结构开始介绍，句子简洁、通顺，接着又重点描述了与自己有关的几个房间，语言生动、贴切，最后又抒发了自己对家的热爱。
My School Hello, friends!Welcome to my school.My school is beautiful and very big.There are many rooms in the school building.My classroom is on the sixth floor.There are sixty-nine students in my class.You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk.My seat is near the door.The computer room is on the third floor.There are many computers in it.I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂)is on the first floor.We have lunch there.Look!This is the playground.We often play games on it.There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...I have a good time every day in my school.I like my school very much.点评台：文章向大家描述了他学校的教室，食堂，微机室以及操场，其中重点描写了自己的班级，主次分明，层次清晰，正确地运用了There be句型和一般现在时时态，是一篇很成功的文章，文章级别：A。
My Uncle My uncle is a professor.His name is Chen Hao.He teaches Chinese in a university.He is tall and thin.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes reading.He has a big study at home.It's very bright.There are many books in his study.He often reads and writes in his study.He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much.He is very kind to me, too.He often sends me books.I like him, too.点评中心：本篇小文章描写的是小作者的叔叔，首先从她叔叔的职业、外貌开始描写，接着又描写了她叔叔的爱好--读书与写作。表达了小作者对其叔叔的崇拜与敬仰之情。文章条理清晰，用词准确，无语法错误，是一篇较优秀的文章。
My Winter Holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family.Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think.The sky is blue and the air is clean.You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere.The weather there is great.It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it “Spring City”.Kunming is surrounded(围绕)by beautiful scenery.And one of the most famous views is “The Stone Forest”.It is really scenic(自然风景的).We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.点评中心：寒假虽然已经过去一个多月了，但是在这个假期所发生的事大家是否还都铭记在心呢？作者就把她的这份心情用笔记录了下来。小作者通过在寒假期间去美丽的春城--昆明游玩，抒发了对美好自然风光的热爱。文章生动、形象，用词准确。
Myself Look at this photo.A little boy is climbing a tree.Who is the boy? Guess, please!Yes, it's me.My name is Zhu Shaoyu.I'm ten years old.I'm very naughty and smart.I have big eyes and short black hair.I'm thin and tall.I'm a student.I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City.I'm in Class One, Grade Five.My favourite subject is English.I study English very hard.I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it.Now I can speak English well.I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students.I will study harder in future.My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge.It makes me learn English better.My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious.I like its taste.Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?
点评台：几乎每个人都很了解自己，所以要是介绍自己，可写的内容很多。但小作者并没有平均分配笔墨，而是重点描写了自己的几个“最喜欢”。整篇文章条理清楚、重点突出、语言流畅、用词准确，可以说写得很成功。希望同学们向朱劭宇同学学习，写出一篇篇精彩的文章与大家共同分享。文章级别：A。
Spring I like spring because spring is beautiful.Many flowers are very lovely.Some grass and trees turn green.Look!A little girl is flying a kite with her father.She likes to fly kites.Her father is smiling.It's very warm today.So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky.They're playing together.They look very happy.A breeze is blowing over the land.The sunlight is soft.A clear river is flowing.How beautiful the spring is!点评台:这篇文章篇幅虽短却写出了春天的生机与活力.特别是小作者着重描写了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明确.用词准确、生动,没有语法错误也是这篇文章的另一优点.文章级别:A.29
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