第一篇：2011年上海高考英语作文解析
2011年上海高考英语作文解析
一、2011年上海高考英语写作中关于联合国基金会组织背景
联合国儿童基金会（United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund, 简称UNICEF），原名联合国国际儿童紧急救助基金会，于1946年12月11日创建，其目的是满足战后欧洲与中国儿童的紧急需求。1950年起，它的工作扩展到满足全球所有发展中国家儿童和母亲的长期需求。1953年，UNICEF成为联合国系统的永久成员，隶属联合国系统，受联合国大会的委托，致力于实现全球各国儿童的生存、发展、受保护和参与的权利。
United Nations Children's Fund was created by the United Nations General Assemblyon December 11, 1946, to provide emergency food and healthcare to children in countries that had been devastated by World War II.In 1953, UNICEF became a permanent part of the United Nations System and its name was shortened from the original United
Nations International Children's Emergency Fund but it has continued to be known by the popular acronym based on this old name.Headquartered in New York City, UNICEF
provides long-term humanitarian and developmental assistance to children and mothers in developing countries.It is one of the members of the United Nations Development Group and its Executive Committee.UNICEF relies on contributions from governments and private donors and UNICEF's total income for 2006 was $2,781,000,000.Governments contribute two thirds of the
organization's resources;private groups and some 6 million individuals contribute the rest through the National Committees.UNICEF's programs emphasize developing
community-level services to promote the health and well-being of children.UNICEF was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize in 1965 and the Prince of Asturias Award of Concord in 2006.二、2011年上海高考英语作文申请信件一些经典句式
本次2011年高考上海英语卷作文体裁是写一封申请信，这里给大家补充一些写申请信常用的句式
（一）开头常用句式
1.Your advertisement made me unable to wait to write this application for the post because I think I have the qualifications you are seeking.2.I am writing to apply for the advertised post of … 3.I would like to apply for admission to your college.4.I would like to further my studies in … department of your honored university.5.I would like to apply for the graduate program of … in your university.6.I would like to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other countries.7.I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in … towards a master’s degree in your university.8.I would like to apply for admission to your graduate school of..（二）结尾常用句式
1.Looking forward to your favorable reply.2.I hope you will kindly send me an application form.3.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.4.I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.5.I would be very grateful if you would consider my application and could send me some information about the scholarship.6.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to your reply.7.I would be grateful if you can grant me an early reply about the result of my application.8.If any scholarships are available, I would appreciate it if you would send me the necessary application forms.9.I hope my academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.（三）其他常用句式
1.I have obtained my BA in … from University.2.I am a senior student now and expect my graduation next summer from … University.3.I major in … and did some research work during my undergraduate years.4．Since graduation I have been working in … which specializes in… 5.Now I am particularly interested in…
6.Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about … 7.I hope to further continue my research on …
8.Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my transcript.9.I am interested in your MA programs in …, and wish to enter this program.My background is as follows: …
（四）求职申请信常用句型
1.In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.2.With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offer myself for the post.3.Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in ~.4.Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ~,I wish to apply for the position referred to.5.In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender my services.6.Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me.I feel I can fill that position.7.Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ next summer？
8.I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~ company 9.I have been in the business for the last ~ years, and worked as the director of the…department.10.I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.11.For the last ~ years, I have been and still am a / an ~.12.I'm ~ years of age, female / male, and have had ~ years' experience in a limited company's ~ office 13.I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.14.If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call in person, on any day and at any time you may appoint.15.Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.16.I trust that you'll give this application your favorable consideration.17.Should you give me a trial, I'll do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.三、2011年上海高考英语作文参考范文 2011上海高考英语题目：
若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。启示：国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。信中请包括：
1． 你个人基本情况 2． 你对申请项目具体设想
3． 项目经费使用情况
这类作文在篇章布局上可以用最常见的“总-分-总”的框架。首先，总起全文，介绍自己并说明得知国际儿童基金将开展扶贫项目，非常想申请此项目。接着，第二段说明自己的想法和具体的方案。这里提供两个方案供大家参考：
1、买文具，日常生活用品。
2、买教科书，或者号召同学募捐旧书，等等。最后，总结全文，表达自己非常热切地想申请到这个扶贫项目。望国际儿童基金能尽早回复。范文一：
Dear Sirs，Hello!I’m Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai.As I’ve always been interested in charity, I’m writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken areas.My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts.In the initial stage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths.Given that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books.The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas.Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers.Lastly, we will set out for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program.As to how to allocate the money, I’d like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!
Yours，Li Ming
亮点词组句型归纳:
1.be interested in 对…感兴趣
2.write to someone in the hope that 写信给某人以期（实现某愿望）
3.carry out 履行
4.poverty-stricken 贫困的 5.poverty-relief 扶贫的 6.given 考虑到
7.be on the look-out for 寻找
8.meet more demands 满足更多的需求
9.recruit 招募
10.qualified 有资格的 11.set out for 出发前往
12.in advance 提前
13.allocate 分配 范文二：
Dear Sirs，My name is Li Ming and I’m a student from Mingqi High School.As I have grownup in the city, lending a hand to my rural peer group has always been my dream.I’m writing to apply for the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children
Fund that I have heard about recently.In fact, there are still a large number of school-age children who have no access to good education in the undeveloped regions of our country.So, I sincerely hope that I cando something to make a difference by making full use of your program.If I can get the supporting money, first, I will use some parts of it to buy the textbooks they need.Since the fund is limited, I will try to buy some second-hand reading materials for their
free-time reading.Besides, I have to keep a small sum of money in order to pay the
postal charges.Last but not least, I will feel honored if I can get the fund to start the poverty-reliefprogram in our country and I will try my best to use the fund.I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours, Li Ming 亮点词组句型归纳: 1.lend a hand to 帮助…
2.apply for 申请
3.the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund由国际儿童基金会发起的扶贫项目
4.school-age children 学龄儿童
5.have no access to good education接受不到良好的教育
6.undeveloped region 欠发达地区
7.make a difference 有影响
8.make use of 利用
9.a small sum of money 一小笔钱
10.postal charge 邮费
四、2011年上海英语高考写作与2005年上海春季高考英语写作
2011年上海高考英语卷考察是写一份申请扶贫项目的申请信，翻阅往年高考上海英语试卷，在2005年春季高考中也考察到申请信，但事隔6年，难度系数也陡然上升。其实09年秋季高考也是申请信，但依然以理由型议论文为考核重点（06-10年连续四年考察的都是理由型的议论文）。
下文为05年春季的作文题目以及2篇范文
Directions: write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生（exchange student）征询为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由（包括所具备的条件）。
范文一：
Dear Mr./ Ms，I have heard that our school is seeking for some home stays for exchange students who came from Canada.I guess my family meets the requirements and I would love to apply for it.My house is close to the Central Business District.From my house, one can enjoy agood bird view of our city, as it is on the 42nd floor.What’s more, I will arrange
sightseeing for the exchange students to have a deep impression of our cultural deposits and great development.My father works in a foreign-owned enterprise and my mother is an English teacher.In view of this, our family will have no trouble communicating with them.Besides, we even have a guest room in our house, which allows the exchange student to have his or her own space.In conclusion, I definitely have the confidence of being a wonderful host to the
exchange students.It is a great honor if I get this chance to show them the culture and modernization of our city and to leave them a deep impression of hospitality.Yours，Li Hong 范文二：
Dear Headmaster，I am writing to you in the hope of attaining the opportunity of accommodating exchange students from Canada.I think my family can provide them with decent conditions and my reasons are as follows.Firstly, my family lives in the downtown of Shanghai.Therefore, we have easy access to all kinds of transportations, such as subway, bus, and plane, thereby greatly facilitate the exchange students’ traveling.Secondly, my parents are local Shanghai residents, indicating that they can afford advantageous advices for foreign students on where to go and what to do during their fortnight-stay, thus enabling them to make full use of their sojourn.Last but not least, my family is living in a large detached house, so we have sufficient vacant rooms for them, which I believe is most desired for tired travelers who’ve gone all the way from Canada to China.Therefore, I am confident to provide the exchange students with comfortable living conditions.And I would really appreciate if you could give me the chance.Thank you for reading my application.Yours，Li Hong
第二篇：2013上海高考英语作文参考
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：
1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2.说明你的理由（从便利性、专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）。
Dear exhibition organizers of Shanghai Museum:
My name is Wang Min, a student studying at Shanghai XX High School.I am writing to offer my views on the place where the exhibition should be held.As far as I am concerned, the painting exhibition should without doubt take place in Shanghai Museum instead of the community library.The reasons why I hold that opinion are as follows.First, in terms of convenience, Shanghai Museum is a much better choice for visitors who may not know well about Shanghai.Located near People’s Square, the best-known transportation center and tourist site in Shanghai, it is absolutely easy for anyone to find it.Considering that it is an exhibition of famous paintings that will attract guests from all over the world, the broad streets will serve as another advantage to provide easy access and sufficient parking space.Another advantage that Shanghai Museum has over the community library is that it has considerable experience in organizing such exhibitions.It is quite common for Shanghai Museum to be in charge of a wide range of activities.We should hand a task to a professional rather than an amateur and Shanghai Museum is just the professional who will fulfill the task skillfully.Modest as my reasoning may seem, I believe it makes sense.I hope you will include my views when you make the decision.Thank you!
Yours Sincerely
Wang Min
第三篇：高考英语作文经典解析（范文）
高考英语作文模板经典解析
高考英语作文模版：对比观点题型
（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1． 有一些人认为……2． 另一些人认为……3． 我的看法……
The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．
高考英语作文模板：阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．2． 分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．
In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.高考英语作文模板：解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1．问题现状2．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).高考英语作文模板：说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
1．说明事物现状2．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）3．你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people preferAbecause it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Ａ的优点之一).Besides-------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测）
高考英语作文模板：议论文的框架
(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一___.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途
径一_.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is _途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..高考英语作文模板：图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is
书写高考英语作文的四步流程
如果你曾经为英语作文日日伤心以泪洗面，如果你曾经面对作文题目苦思冥想头脑里天马行空却不知如何动笔，如果你看到发下来的卷子上英语作文上犯的一些小错误后感到痛心疾首大呼懊恼，那么这套流程对你来说应该有一定参考价值。
第一步，审题。
拿到题目后，手中拿铅笔，手脑眼嘴并用，开始审题。看题目的要求是什么，要点是什么，特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李华，还是随便一个名字？ 要议论文还是记叙文？对分几段写有无要求？等等。诸如此类的硬性要求信息，都最好用铅笔划下来，以免出错，也许你一开始会记得，可随着时间的流逝，你会不会因紧张而遗忘这些信息呢？还是小心为妙。边看最好边张嘴默读，这样就不会遗漏或忽略任何一个字了。
第二步，草稿。
有的同学怕出错，全文都打草稿再誊写，我姑且认为不太可取，毕竟考场时间宝贵，即使我有四十分钟时间写作文也不敢贸然这么做，更何况考场时我们留给作文的时间往往一再被压缩。有的同学不打草稿，我认为更不太可取。一来容易出错，二来边写边想思维不连贯，即使思维连贯也无法审词酌句，展现自己最好的一面，容易后悔。
草稿怎么打？
1.结构就是你打算分几段写，每段都写什么？哪段转哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有谱的。
2.关键词：结构拟定后，迅速在草稿纸上写下自己这篇作文可能用到的一些关键词。包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词。主要是动词和名词。
譬如一省作文题： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情
况：年龄性别学历，个人条件。英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。
关键词就是学历、爱好、擅长、乐于、承诺，和你对这篇作文初步构思时想到的一些词。先把这些词（指词的英文表达）写在纸上。有一些词的拼写，譬如学历，可能你本身就记得不是特别清楚，这时一定要在开始写作文前先把它写下来，以免一会因干扰而遗忘。
可能看到聪明这个关键词时，你最初写下的往往是clever，再仔细想想，你是不是又想到了smart, deligient好多词，挑个漂亮和合适的用吧。再比如转折，你写了but，这会再想想，是不是又有一堆表示转折的词在你脑里打转呢？挑一个吧。千万别用but.3.句式：词写下来了，其实你构建这篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它们盖成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陈述句把它们在头脑中过一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陈述句改成问句？能不能用上一个双重否定句？能不能用一个主语从句套定语从句的长句？能不能用一个插入语？等等。把你高中三年的英语积累展示出来。在草稿纸上同样标注。
三．正式写。
这样的草稿打完后，就要快快写了。注意，英语作文的卷面简直太重要了，一定要把字写整齐，写大。没有把握的词和句子不用。别忘了遵守你最初用铅笔划下的题目的规定。
四．检查。
注意，最最重要的一步来了。尽管很小心，可是我们写英语作文还是会犯下很多错误。单词拼写的，大小写的，等等。这些错误会极大破坏我们在阅卷老师心目中的形象，一定要坚决誓死消灭。即使时间再紧，请务必留下1——2分钟检查作文的时间，消除隐性错误。需要说明的是，英语的开头和结尾是最关键的，尤其是开头。基本上，不跑题，遵守题目要求，一个漂亮的开头，一个还过得去的结尾，2-3个高级词汇，1-2个漂亮的句子，加上整齐的字迹，作文的分就不会低了哦。所以，精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧。
第四篇：上海高考英语满分作文汇总
June 8th
Dear Haiqing，I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can‘t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much.And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.To begin with，beauty is just skin deep.Don‘t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance？ He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance； in the same sense，he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour.So please，just forget about those brand-name things.What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you.As a student，you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest，you look very smart in it.Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things？
Secondly，I know your parents are both average workers.Hard as they work，they don‘t earn much.Despite this，they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand.Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces，how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford，which will surely break their hearts？ Remember，parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps； they don‘t owe us Sony Walkman； nor do they owe us Nike shoes，If you really want those fancy things，you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden.Don’t you think so？
Thirdly，we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive.What‘s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better？ My friend，take my advice，and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.Poverty，sometimes，is a good thing.It can test a person‘s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else.Keep working hard，and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future.Now you may as well focus on your study.Anyway，wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long？
Keep in touch.Yours
Huangping 459 2012 As is vividly described in the picture, the foreign pupils are raising their hands, eager to answer the teacher’s questions.Judging from the smiles on their faces, they must be very happy, relaxed and free.This reminds me of my primary school days, which was totally different from theirs.As far as I can remember, my teachers as well as my parents always told me to keep quiet and sit straight in class, not to do anything without the
teacher’s permission, including smiling and speaking out our viewpoints freely.I did as I was told.Frankly speaking, I’m fond of the atmosphere in western classes.But on the other hand, I still treasure the strict discipline learned when I was young.As a matter of fact, I think it is different cultures that make different classes and also different students.I am glad to see that the education of China is undergoing a significant reform, which aims to reduce students’ learning burden and encourage students to be more imaginative and creative.I firmly believe that in the near future more and more Chinese students will enjoy a free and open classroom atmosphere.192 2.As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way.The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.Compared with the class performance in local China, the difference is quite obvious.We Chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in a careful way.I ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon? Why class performance of Chinese students is quite different from that of foreign students? Possible reasons can be listed as follows.Most important of all, education system in China is the key reason.The first day we become the primary student, our teachers tell us to obey the rules in class.We put our hands back and stay quiet in class.Lecture-model teaching is the traditional way in Chinese class.Teacher is the leading actor or actress and student is always the supporting roles.Gradually we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the ability to raise questions and give the answers.The second point to be mentioned is that Chinese students hold different attitudes toward study.In our minds, we always think what we should learn instead of how we should learn knowledge in a smart way.We behave us as a passive listener, but foreign student act as a active learner.As a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a fish.Taking what has been discussed above into account, there is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are supposed to be a learner or a quiet listener.193 2009 •
It is said that a summer camp is to be held by your school and a few courses are available to choose from.I am interested in gardening, in that I believe it features my character and personal benefits.•
During the learning period, I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge.A radical technique I’d like to obtain is to know how to tell difference species of plants and flowers apart.This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden.Furthermore, the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn.A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or reasonable positions will also be a good choice.• The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden.In addition, I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening, missing a chance to have a word with nature, so that knowing the surroundings is imperative.Last but not least, by attending the courses, I will have a meaningful summer vacation, and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life.200 2008 1.A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it.While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision.First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation.Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years.Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm for the group dancing competition.155
2.Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reasons for my decision.First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me.Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time.What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner.I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class.In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition than to dance myself.151 2007
A Present for Father’s Day
The Father’s Day will come soon.and I want to give my Dad a present.That is a VIP card of a health club.When I was a little boy, Dad worked hard as a teacher.During term, Mother and I sometimes accompanied Dad in his office till a late hour.From then on, I understood that Dad worked with great effort.There are still too many precious memories which I’ll cherish in my heart.And I want to give this present to express my thanks to him.Time flies and I’m 18 now.As I grow up, Father is getting older.He is now still diving into piles of books.With the health club membership, I hope that he will set aside some time to do more exercise.I think that he will relax in the health club and make more friends as well.150 2.It is widely acknowledged that a good present is of great value to a person and even prone to change his or her life.As for me , one of the most impressive presents I have given to my friends is a watch which I have used for three years.The watch was given to Tom, who is one of my best friends.Diligent and warm-hearted as he is , he sometimes has no sense of time, which causes him to be late for many things and leads to some trouble in work.By giving him such a watch, I hope he will pay more attention to punctuality, which may bring him more credibility in life and higher efficiency in both work and study.Besides, he used to tell me that he might feel lonely in the new environment after leaving the old friends in high school, and thus I hope that such a gift will remind him of the good old days we happily spent together and help him to feel better when he misses me.Anyway ,I do wish that Tom will like this present, which hopefully will bring him good luck.192 2006
Of the two universities listed above, I prefer the one in the north.The main reason is that the tuition is only 5,000 RMB for the university a year, compared with 8,000 RMB for the university in the south.This makes a big difference for a family like a mine, because my father is peasant and the only breadwinner in the family.Studying at the northern university can save my father big money.Another reason I take into consideration is the preference policy the northern university offers.Any candidate who chooses to study there may gain an extra 20 points, which greatly raises the possibility of my being admitted to this university.Of course, it doesn't mean that it will be quite easy to pass the entrance exam because this university has limited the number of qualified candidates to 10 only.However, I have been doing quite well in school, so I believe I can pass the entrance exam with flying colors.162 2.Compared with the northern university, the southern one is more to my liking.It is true that in terms of tuition the former is 3,000 RMB cheaper than the latter.However, that's not a problem to me because I can work my way through college once I get admitted.What counts is the reputation it has.Once I enter this school, my future career is guaranteed.Also, the university in the south recruits 20 new students instead of 10, which means that I will stand a better chance of getting admitted.The competition is very keen, though, as you can see because this university doesn't give candidates any extra points.So all I can do now is study hard, pass the tough entrance exam, and qualify as a student of the university of my choice.135
2005
There is an old English saying that there must be a use for my talent.I have regarded it as my motto for many years.From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another.With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road.He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture.Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood.Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us.The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.From this old man, we can see whatever kind of talent you have, you can find your own method to display your talent.The most important factor is your confidence.If you believe the saying that there must be a use for my talent, you will succeed.205
第五篇：上海高考英语作文万能公式
开头万能公式
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那么多，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。
所以不妨试用下面的句型：
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.看起来这个数字文绉绉的，其实都是编造出来的。
更多句型：
A recent survey shows / indicates that …
结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历：领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而易见”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
• To sum up, „
• In conclusion, „
• In brief, „
• In short, …
• In a word, / In a nutshell, …
• All in all, …
更多句型：
• Thus,it can be concluded that„
• Therefore,we can find that…
• So, we can conclude that…
写作的“七项基本原则”
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
• As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.• Although the former is to meet the primary need of my body while the latter is to
satisfy the intellectual need of mind, yet they are in a way quite similar.• 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：
在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；
在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用
先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！
文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（这样做更保险）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully / wellprepared for the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient preparations, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分：第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分：第一点、第二点、第三点
虽然繁琐，可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly/finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally…
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其
一、用短
语会使文章增加亮点。如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自
己不认识的短语，必然会看低你的作文。相反，如果发现亮点------一个
精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个不错的办法！
比如：
I cannot
可以用短语表达：I cannot
I
可以用短语表达：Iit.I am badly in need /want of it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
文章主体段落三大杀手锏
一、举实例
思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式。在任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have tried every possible means in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performances.For instance, to advertise a certain kind of food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.更多句型：
• Let’s take „ as an example.• Let’s take „for example.• For example,„
• For instance,…
• One example is… and another example is…,二、做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的。世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶。文章亦然。只有通过比较，你才会发现两者的相同点(through comparison）和（through contrast）。
下面是一些短语：
相似的比较：
likewise, similarly, be similar to„,in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,nevertheless, by contrast, in contrast to/with„,in comparison to/with„,on the contrary, compared with „
三、换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章再多一些字。
或者文绉绉地说，是让读者更充分地理解你的观点。实际
就是重复、重复、再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字
I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I have lost my heart to you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it.or I am fed up with/ am bored with / am sick of / am tired of / am weary of it.更多短语：in simpler words,/ put it more simply（简单地说）
总之，如果我们经常按照上面的方法练习，加上多多模仿优秀范文，就一定能写出比较好的英语文章。
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