托福英语作文,有这个你就不怕了

第一篇：托福英语作文,有这个你就不怕了

一．写作概况及目的

托福写作(TWE)（Test of Written English)考试设有单独一张试卷，是TOEFL考试的第一项内容，能否顺利完成对考生的写作成绩和后面几部分考试内容的正常或超常发挥有着极其重要的作用。

要求考生在30分钟内，围绕某一个给定的话题写出一篇正规的书面问题的议论文，字数围绕在250——350词左右，其目的是测试考生在规定时间内，正确地运用语法、词汇和组织短篇文章的能力，以判断考生是否有能力适应美国大学、研究生院现行的考试制度。托福写作部分的得分不记入总成绩，但它与托福成绩一起寄到有关大学。在录取新生时，考生的写作成绩是录取与否的关键因素之一，尤其对知名度较高的、奖学金较高的大学更是如此。经常会出现这样的情况，北美的学校更愿意要一个托福600分而作文满分的考生，而不是托福接近满分而TWE只有4 分的人，TWE的重要性是不言而喻的。

二．写作要点

1．TWE要求必须用铅笔写作文，你要自己准备好铅笔和橡皮。橡皮要有韧性，太硬会擦破纸，有错误要擦干净再改；

2．不要自拟题目；

3．写作时字迹不要太大或太小,一行10-12个单词为宜，每行超过14词或少于8词都不合适，这样答卷纸正面写满大约在230词，反面再写一半就有300多个单词了。

4．时间分配：审题，构思，立意3－5分钟；正文写作22－26分钟；检查错误（1－3分钟）5．各段开头要缩格

三．评分标准 六分标准

文章切题即文章要按照题目所规定的要求写，而不能答非所问；阐述充分，即能将问题展开讨论，论据或说明比较充分，文章有说服力；段落组织有序，衔接紧密、过渡自然，有很强的逻辑性；段落内句与句之间的连接顺畅，句式使用恰当、灵活、成熟；用词准确、得体。文章中可有个别语法和拼写错误，但不影响内容表达。通篇文章给人的印象是作者具有较强的写作能力。在修辞、句法、词汇等方面的英语水平达到了一定的高度。五分标准

文章切题；阐述基本充分，在某些细节上有缺陷；段落层次组织有序，衔接紧密、过渡自然、逻辑性强；句间联系顺畅，句式使用恰当，灵活，有少量语法错误；用词基本得体，有少量用词不当和拼写错误。文章给人的总体印象是作者具有较强的写作能力，英语水平不错，但与六分作文相比，文章的错误略多，作者的语言功底略有欠缺。四分标准

文章切题；阐述尚可，展开不够；段落组织有序，衔接紧密，过渡自然，有逻辑性；句间连接基本顺畅，有部分句法错误；用词一般，有时不得体(如“大词”与“小词”随便使用，缺少文体意识），词性区分和拼写等有若干错误。总体印象是文章框架结构与连贯较好，各方面的错误都有一些，英语水平一般化。三分标准

文章切题；段落组织基本合理，有逻辑性，但只存在于语义层次上，语言表层上未能体现；句子框架结构基本成立．但有许多语法错误，句问联系不顺畅，往往是由于不善于使用逻辑连接词，因而显得幼稚、生硬；词汇方面拼写错误多，常有用词不达意的现象。总的印象是英语水平不够、写作能力较差．基本的词、词法、句法等功底有限，修辞与文体知识方面尚未入门，能勉强表达自己，但表达能力受到语言水平的限制。

二分标准

文章切题；阐述没有展开，只是三言两语地回答问题；没有段落层次，组织很乱，长度很短只有一段；句子排列有一定的逻辑关系，能看出各句的基本框架，但结构或语法错误较多；用词不得体，拼写错误多。总的印象是英语水平低，写作能力差、尚未分清口语、笔语及各种文体问的界线。由于文章过短或过乱，问题没有展开讨论，造成语言和内容两个方面都有严重的不足。

一分标准

文章在各方面都有严重错误，文章不像文章，句子不成句子。总的印象是根本没有写作能力．英语水乎太低，够不上二分标准，只能打最低分。

如何在 30 分钟行文的整个过程中保持书面整洁? 四．命题分类与篇章结构

（一）按内容分：

1.学生生活类：在学校是穿校服好还是自由着装，是喜欢自己学还是和他人一起学，是喜欢整节课听老师讲还是部分时间有学生发言等；

2.家庭生活类：家长是否要求孩子做一些力所能及的家务活，父母是最好的老师同意与否，好家长应具备哪些品质；

3.社会生活类：成功归功于努力还是运气，是否同意不可以貌取人这一说法，人们工作是为了赚钱养活自己;4.科技与媒体类：20世纪最值的纪念的一项变革是什么，你认为新世纪将带来哪些变化，电影、电视如何影响人们的行为等

（二）按形式分：

1．对立观点类：给出两个对立观点或者一个观点的对立两方面，要求支持其中一方面。关键句：

Which do you prefer? Which do you think is better? 例如：

1)Some people prefer to live in a small town.Others prefer to live in a big city.Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.1)Some people tend to study a subject in a very intensive way over a short period of time, while others tend to study a subject constantly over a long period of time.What do you think is a better way of learning? Explain why.篇章结构： A.1 引言段: 解释命题 第一种观点有1－2个小优点 3 第一种观点的缺点 3 第二种观点的优点 结论段：自己的观点 B． 第一种不好，第二种好，选第二种 2 第一种的缺点1、2 3 第二种的优点1、2 4 结论段

C.1 第一种观点好，第二种观点好，所以两种都选 2 第一种有1、2种优点，1、2种缺点 3 第二种有1、2种优点，1、2种缺点 第一种的优点可以弥补第二种的不足，第二种可以弥补第一种的不足，两者互补 5 结论段

2．单一观点类：给出一个论点，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。关键句：

Do you agree or disagree with„?

例如：

1）People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or something different.Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your choice.2）Traveling is more important than reading books in order to understand the people and the world.Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons to support your answer.篇章结构： 1 引言段：表明自己的观点：支持/反对 2 理由一 3 理由二 4 理由三 结论：归纳或重申自己的观点

3．自选论述类：给出某个范围，要求自己确定观点并进行论述。例如：

1）Many teachers assign homework to students every day.Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.2）Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish.How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.篇章结构： 1 引言段：明确话题 2 讨论话题第一方面 3 讨论话题第二方面 4 讨论话题第三方面 结论：总结上面提到的几个方面

五 正文写作 引言段introduction：所要论述问题的背景知识，立论句/中心句确定文章讨论范围并揭示文章主题，交代写作目的。

引言段写作手法：

开门见山的提出问题，引起读者兴趣；

引用名人名言，谚语；

陈述话题发生的背景，继而引出自己的立场； 对文章要讨论的话题进行定义。正文段body：围绕主题充分展开进行论证。

要求：每段均包含一个主题句，主题句要概括全段大意，写出该段要讲述的理由，大致1－3行。接着应该有4－8行的细节论述，也就是运用事实，说理，数据，例子等论据来支持论证主题。最后写1－2行的主题再现，也就是说换个表达方式把主题句重述一遍。结论段conclusion：通过严密论证后得出结论。结尾段应使读者对文章住址有一个完整的认识，做到首位呼应。

结论段写作手法：

重述中心思想，再强调一遍立场，做到首位呼应；（此写法最为保险）提出与主题有关的建议或者期望； 引用名人名言。

六．检查阶段

每个句子是否存在语法错误？如主谓一致，动词的时态和语态，定冠词, 名词的单复数, 人称使用, 标点, 拼写;句式是否多样化；

句与句之间是否缺少必要的连词； 是不是存在中式英语的现象。

附件一：名言

A bold attempt is half success.(勇敢的尝试是成功的一半。）

All things are difficult before they are easy.(凡事必先难后易。）What we acquire without sweat we give away without regret.(得之不费力，弃之不可惜。）

Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.（只要有一颗意志坚强的心，没事不成。）Work makes the workman.（勤工出巧匠。）

Constant dropping wears the stone.(滴水穿石。）

Experience is the mother of wisdom.（经验是智慧之母。）Every man is his own worst enemy.(一个人最大的敌人就是他自己。）

Saying and doing are two different things.(说和做是迥然不同的两回事。）Actions speak louder than words.(行动比语言更响亮。）

From small beginnings comes great things.(伟大始于渺小。）Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.（脑中有知识，胜过手中有金钱。）

The voice of one man is the voice of no one.(一个人的声音没有力量。）

A great ship asks for deep waters.（大船要走深水。）

While there is life, there is hope.（有生命便有希望 / 留得青山在 , 哪怕没柴烧）Two heads are better than one.(一人不及二人智;三个臭皮匠 , 胜个过一个诸葛亮。）

附件二：名谚

A chain is no stronger than its weakest link.一着不慎 , 满盘皆输。All is not gold that glitters.闪光的未必都是金子。A child is better unborn than untaught.养不教，父之过。A friend is best found in adversity（逆境，困境）.患难见真情。

All covet, all lose.样样垂涎，样样失落。贪多嚼不烂。A good winter brings a good summer.瑞雪兆丰年。All rivers run into the sea.殊途同归。

A small leak will sink a great ship.千里之堤溃于蚁穴。

A baker’s wife may bite of a bun, a brewer’s wife may bite of a tun.近水楼台先得月。

A short cut is often a wrong cut.欲速则不达。

A prophet is not without honor save in his own country.远来的和尚好念经。All feet tread not in one shoe.众口难调。

A uncut gem does not sparkle.玉不琢，不成器。

A young idler, an old beggar.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

A crow is never the whiter for washing herself often.江山易改，本性难移。A little spark may kindle a great fire.星星之火，可以燎原。Beauty is but skin-deep.美丽只是外表罢了。Brevity is the soul of wit.言以简洁为贵。Bread is the staff of life.民以食为天。

Behind the mountains there are people to be found.天外有天，山外有山。Better die standing than live kneeling 宁愿站着死，也不跪着生。Cats hide their claws.知人知面不知心。Diamonds cut diamonds.棋逢对手，将遇良才。Do not teach fish to swim.不要班门弄斧。

Do not have too many irons in the fire.贪多嚼不烂。

Do unto others as you would be done by.己所不欲，勿失于人。

附件三：常用套句

开头：

When it comes to..., some think...There is a public debate today that...A is a common way of..., but is it a wise one? Recently the problem has been brought into focus.提出观点：

Now there is a growing awareness that...It is time we explore the truth of...Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.进一步提出观点：

...but that is only part of the history.Another equally important aspect is...A is but one of the many effects.Another is...Besides, other reasons are...提出假想例子的方式： Suppose that...Just imagine what would be like if...It is reasonable to expect...It is not surprising that...举普通例子：

For example(instance),......such as A,B,C and so on(so forth)A good case in point is...A particular example for this is...引用：

One of the greatest early writers said...“Knowledge is power”, such is the remark of...“......”.That is how sb.comment(criticize/ praise...).“......”.How often we hear such words like there.讲故事

（先说故事主体），this story is not rare...., such dilemma we often meet in daily life...., the story still has a realistic significance.提出原因：

There are many reasons for...Why...., for one thing,...The answer to this problem involves many factors.Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves...The first reason can be obviously seen.Most people would agree that...Some people may neglect that in fact...Others suggest that...Part of the explanation is...进行对比：

The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...Although A enjoys a distinct advantage...Indeed, A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.承上启下：

To understand the truth of..., it is also important to see...A study of...will make this point clear 让步：

Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...I do not deny that A has its own merits.结尾：

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...In summary, it is wiser...In short...

第二篇：最新托福英语作文

最新托福英语作文模板

TOEFL班的托福作文模板，100句常用句型按照托福作文结构组合而成。

作文文套一A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the

disadvantages are more obvious.Such as________________.In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.作文文套二A or B

将原题复述 ___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence-A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点

__________.In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.作文文套三单一命题式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style.In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books.So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.Futhermore,______________.In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.作文文套四agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a

_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them.There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact

that______________解释本段中心___________.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe

that______________.What is more, some students are interested in____________.In a word, ________________.作文文套五A or B

Some people prefer to A.others believe B.When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is

that_____________________.Take___________as example, ______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.Such as

________________________.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider

that______________.(exmaples:___________).From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.作文文套六Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________.MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_______________________.Examples_______________.But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider.Examples.What is more_______________.Examples___________

General speaking, __________.Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.作文文套七A or B

In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B.So it is sagacious to choose A.Among count less factors which influence A.there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered.For exmaple,___________________ Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than

B.For instance,_______________

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important.B________也好_________.In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they

sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A.For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.作文文套八A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in

contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point.This quite different view

is based on the propensity of following points.We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is

____________________.For example, ______________.Also, ________________________.This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.作文文套九A or B

When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that.Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________.This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.作文文套十

____________改写并复述题目____________.There may be by one or two

disadvantages to ___________________;however, I believe that there are far more advantages.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is that______________.For instance, __________________.Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________.For example, ____________.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them.The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________.For exmaple_____________.Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________.For example, _________________.In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to

_____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.作文文套十二A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A.There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary cause is that_______________________.What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.Futhermore, ________________________.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________._______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say

that___________________.作文文套十三A or B

____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point.Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________.Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.In a word, ___________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.作文文套十四A or B

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B.My arguments for this

point are listed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that______________.There is another factor that deserves some words here.In a word, ________________________.While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.作文文套十五agree or disagree

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________.But others have a negative attitude.As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________.My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe

that________________.In a word, _________________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

第三篇：托福作文,英语作文

On Throw-away Society

Currently, our life is infiltrated with various disposable goods, among which throwaway tableware is the most commonly seen.Until now, even disposable cameras, disposable shavers, and disposable lighters have come into existence.These throwaway goods benefit us enormously, bringing convenience to our life.Notwithstanding, they give rise to a series of environmental and social problems.Convenience and sanitation are two most notable features of throwaway goods in our society.These ephemeral goods are widely used in certain places like hospitals, airplanes and fast food industry.Throwaway pinheads and tongue depressors, to some degree, prevent communicable diseases from spreading.Disposable chopsticks and bowls guarantee the efficiency for fast food providers, saving their time of washing.Besides, disposable toilet seat pads are coming into sight, contributing to the public sanitation.From these perspectives, throwaway products seem to be indispensable in our society.Simultaneously, the influx of disposable goods is turning our society into a throw-away society, which brings about severe environmental problems.The production of throwaway commodities consumes large quantities of natural resources, intensifying the diminution of resources.According to a research, China consumes about 45 billion pairs of disposable chopsticks annually, leading to the reduction of forest coverage by over two million square meters every year.Such a waste of resources is huge and only makes up a small section of the total resource-wasting.Our society cannot afford long-term mass consumption of disposable products.Apart from environmental degradation, the fact that we are rumbling into a throw-away society provokes social problems.In respect of producers, “planned obsolescence” was devised, with the goal of making products break down in a relatively short time and urging customers to replace them.If an electric appliance stops working, people are disposed to buy a new one, owning to the expensive repairing expenses and the impatience to waiting for it to be examined and fixed.In addition, technique advances reduce the cost and price of electric items.This trend not only causes more resource-wasting, but stirs up the climate of squandering and fickleness as well.Regarding consumers, people used to have a sentimental attachment to their possessions, but the fast-changing society ruthlessly breaks these bonds.In the past, a television could accompany us for more than twenty years,while nowadays we will renew it in a couple of years.By and large, throw-away society has dim prospects.On the whole, though we have to admit that disposable goods have their advantages, we should put the brakes on the trend of turning into a throw-away society.The usage of throwaway products should be limited in a proper amount to eliminate the problems appearing along with it.

第四篇：有你,这个冬天不再冷

有你，这个冬天不再冷

——读潘广云校长文集《有你更好》

收到潘校长文集《有你更好》时正临近期末，也是寒冬，有你,这个冬天不再冷。素雅的封面，亦印刷体亦手写的书名，装帧精致，未曾打开似乎就闻到了里面散发出的淡淡文字清香，内心为之一爽。

接下来的日子，一到课余空闲，批阅间隙，围坐在暖烘烘的炉子旁，捧一杯热腾腾的香茗，拜读《有你更好》就成为了一种享受了。

窃以为，网络是虚拟世界，“可远观而不可亵玩焉”，所以触网多年，我对“网友”概念模糊，至今也没能邂逅到所谓的“网友”。可潘校笔下的“21位东湖客”，个个有情有义，有才有貌，真羡煞我们潘校。这哪是什么“网友”？这分明是一伙志同道合心有灵犀的朋友，是一群情深意重互相理解的兄弟姐妹，是一个亲密无间其乐融融的大家庭。自愧不如的同时，我其实懂得，潘校在东湖社区那片“沃土”里，一定倾注了他真切的情感（要不，他怎说把一些熟悉的朋友在手上梳理，在心里怀想，有点痛呢？），付出了不为人知的勤劳汗水，至关重要的，还有那横溢的才情，才能虏获、征服、赢取那么多人的尊重，那么多人的喜爱，那么多人的敬佩。自然，也勾引着我时常溜进“广场有鸟”的新浪博客仰望一番，只是不敢留下只字片言。也曾灰头灰脑地向“东湖社区”探过头，只为偷窥一下潘校当年金马铁戈，指点江山时留下的蛛丝马迹。

沉浸在羡慕里还没缓过来，《有你更好》又给我带来了震撼。因是同行，我对潘校文集里写同事、写学生的文字读得认真，读得细致，读得感慨万千。潘校在乡镇、山区学校或任教或任职，交通不便，条件艰苦，我是有着真切身同感受的，潘校多次写到骑着一辆摩托车，风里来雨里去，忙碌中走微醺里回，不是对事业的拳拳挚爱，试问又有多少能坚持，几人又能这样执著，谁又能不为之动容？潘校作为一所学校的负责人，事无巨细，常常奔波于家庭学校两端，不辞劳苦，乐此不彼，不单单让一所学校披冠载誉，更可贵的是不忘用手中生花的妙笔，记录、讴歌、赞扬与学校有着的千丝万缕的各级领导、社会同行、同事学生，读后感《有你,这个冬天不再冷》。单单凭着这份心境，潘校无疑是优秀的，是成功的，里面饱含着是对学校、对社会、对同事、对学生的无比沉重不堪言表的真爱。其实，此刻真的可以配得上“博爱”这个词的。因为我懂的，潘校的爱不止这些，他还深深爱他的家庭，她的妻儿，我忆起当初他家麦子在我班上读书时，事后他说，开学第一堂课，我是偷偷站在走廊外听你上完的，至今我都无地自容。

和潘校交往不多，却仰慕已久。他嗜好读书，我也喜欢；他行走网络，我也溜达；他网购图书，我也好买。这些足以让我成为他的拥趸。他读书，在《中国教育报》、《咸宁日报》、《南鄂晚报》等上发文一篇又一篇；他读书，写季羡林、李写清照、写池莉、写贾平凹、写舒婷、写可以、写倪霞等等，一个又一个；他读书，他写《遥远的救世主》、《亲爱的，坐我一世的情人》、《山间问水》、《少年张冲六章》等的读后感，一则又一则。诚如他所说，是“越读越痛，越爱”。可我呢，一直爱，一直读，却怎么感觉不到痛呢？是缺少阅历岁月时的泰然吧，抑或是缺少繁华落尽后的静谧吧。

立春了，多好。有你真好，《有你更好》，严冬远逝，这个冬季我竟没感到一丝丝寒意，2012年已春意盎然。

第五篇：这个冬天有你真好网络散文

这个季节，该是漫天的黄叶、满树紫荆花开的时候了吗？

深圳这个城市很年轻，到处都是活力四射的年轻人。如天气这般，前一天降温到以为冬阿姨已经不远了，隔一天它却又走了，换了夏天大哥来，那个热气澎湃，就像在吃重庆火锅一样，满头大汗。

很多朋友在朋友圈调侃“深圳第三次入冬失败”、“这个冬天，冷暖自知，呵呵哒。”、“这个周末，我是被热醒的”、有北京的朋友甚至唱起了歌“你在南方的冬季里汗流浃背，我在北方的汗夜里吹着冷气”……

也是矫情得很，这个季节，本该是北风呼呼的冬天，现在却是阳光灿烂，异常温暖。记忆中的那一场晨雨，一阵风，满地落花的场景，还没出现。

城市的气温，真的是比叶良辰还大牌任性呢。

其实，这天气就像人一样，有时候任性，有时候理智。如生活中有一种人，她不管身边的人怎么看待她，她只知道把自己的真实情感表达出来，尽管有人抱怨她的任性。她说，只有洒脱地表达自己，才觉得自己不是一个人。所谓，敢爱敢恨，如是也。

“一个人”，说起这几个字，有些人可能假作镇定的说“一个人过还好”、“一个人也可以好好过”，但其实内心里，是多么想有一个人可以清晨陪你一起醒来，逛街人多时牵着你的手，周末带着你去公园弹弹吉他拍拍照……

说到这里，内心有一股淡淡的忧伤好像飘出来了，你有吗？对于爱情的那种渴望，这个时候已经没法用理性去把它镇压住。我想这与这个挠人思绪的季节无关，也许就是因为你一个人呆久了吧。

你有没有一种感觉，心内好多柔柔的情话，填满在心田，却无人好去诉说……

也许你也并不是没有对象，自己心里是有想要接近的人，但似乎时机还没有成熟，彼此觉得还不可以开始。那暧昧，可以吗？自己心里明白，暧昧可能会带给你一时的快感，但终究不能带你到达G点，所以不是长宜之计，也不是心中所爱。

有时候，人就是一个实实在在的矛盾体。明明有一个人，你开始默默地关注他（她），他在做什么，心中挂念、在意他的一瞥一动，甚至还发挥了双鱼座的无限想象力，胡思乱想，感觉就像是回到了那青涩的十五岁。明明你想要去爱，却又害怕受伤，呦不过自己，就把已经开始悸动的心给锁住了。结果又把自己打回原形，躲在角落里滴泪。

每每这个时候：

你会对自己说，那个会疼惜我的人就在不远处，他会来接我的，他只是暂时迷路了。

你拼命地对自己说，会遇见自己一直在等的那个人，会遇见的，你不会害怕给自己希望后的失望，你只想让自己怀着希望等待。