第一篇：雅思写作-议论文部分满分分析
雅思写作-议论文写作部分满分范文分析
利用好剑桥系列中的范文，对提高写作的巨大帮助不言而喻。
议论文部分包含两种题型：（1）Discussion/Report（2）Argumentation
Disccusion/Report: 通常是对某一现象的原因，某一问题的解决方案及其影响的分析讨论。这类题目要求考生结合自己的已有知识，生活经验及对社会问题的见解展开充分的理由阐述。题目所占比例不及辩论类题目多。
基本布局：
Introduction-----介绍问题产生的背景(background)
阐述问题的原因（causes/reasons）
Body-----------提出解决方案(solutions)
Conclusion------总结body部分
There are many problems with students’ behavior in many countries.What are the causes and what are your solutions?
para 1Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.话题+概括原因
para 2In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children.These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways.They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please.This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.本段写家庭方面的原因。In terms of 和regardless of 两个很棒的连接词，学会使用 para 3When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline.They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did.似乎可以合并到上一段
para 4Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation.But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children.If they could1
raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.本段提出解决方案，依靠家庭教育。最后一句使用了虚拟语气。
para 5Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.结尾段给出建议，办家长培训班，并且政府也要予以支持。提建议时，同样使用了虚拟语气。Argumentation:通常以do you agree or disagree/discuss both views and give your own opinion.通览剑桥教材给出的范文，采用四段折中式的布局比较讨巧。一方面，从两个方面展开论述，可以有话可说；另一方面，字数也比较容易写够。此外，考官给出的一段评语，也足以可以看出“折中法”很受考官的青睐。
“It is suggested to introduce the topic, examine both sides of the argument and express a clear position.Points should be well-argued and supported with examples.”
不建议考生轻易尝试“一边倒”的布局，风险太大。
基本布局：Introduction-------------------背景话题的引出
自己更倾向的一方观点（1）
Body---------自己不太倾向的一方观点（2）
Conclusion----重申（1）+（2）（借用paraphrase的方法）+可行建议
下面是一篇考官撰写的满分作文，让我们膜拜一下。连接词的使用精准到位，复杂句写的很熟练.学习的目标啊。
剑5-test2-writing task2
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.Para 1It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.(背景介绍)The trend is not
restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer
students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.(背景的阐述)
Para2The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal
resources to draw on.They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.本段写旅行或工作的好处。考官给出了两个分论点：(1)可以开拓眼界(2)让学生更独立，适应以后大学生活的挑战。从本段看出，雅思作文考试完全不同于GRE考试，对深刻性要求没有那么高，归根到底还是看重考生的写作基本功。所有写出reasonable的文章，用地道的词句，就是很大的成功了。
Para3However, there are certainty dangers in taking time off at that important age.Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment.They may think it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course.But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.本段属于让步段，讲旅行或工作后再进大学的坏处。最后一句，值得好好揣摩，作者用词句提出了反驳：“总体来看，这并不太可能发生，因为学历对于找到一份好工作太重要了”。在让步内部先支持再反驳的写法，值得考生借鉴。
para 4My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons.That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why.Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.结尾，考官先重申自己倾向的一方。最后提建议：gap year 一年好，值得推行。
两篇满分范文读下来，感觉如何呢？范文值得我们好好推敲学习，先从范文的模仿开始，逐渐摆脱枷锁束缚，最后到达自如的书写自己的思想和观点。
满分范文给我们的启示：
（1）高分文章一定是非常扣题的文章，必须要有清晰的结构
（2）高分文章一定有不少准确使用的连词，而其本质是比较复杂的逻辑关系
（3）高分文章在每个分论点后面都有1-2句，甚至3句的支持句
（4）高分文章的结尾段一般会重申上文的倾向性，通常在结尾还会给出建议
（5）大胆的写，平时多思考，写出高质量的练笔文章。在考场上才能做到收放自如
第二篇：雅思写作满分
题目： 题目： Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by
wealthy parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文： 范文： Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to
deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination.(58words)点评： 1+ 1 ’ 模式，最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前 面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句： but in fact require closer examination，感觉是在抛砖引玉。
The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when
times get tough in adulthood.Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood.They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility.This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education.(100words)点评： 1 ’ +3 模式，第 1 句是主题句。请注意，从此段的内容来看，这是个让步段(即 分析自己并不赞成的观点)。虽然 4 段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论，但是本人还是喜欢
这样的写作，即主体段的观点还是有侧重的，把让步段放在前面，最后 1 句话引出下一段，这样过度地很自然，而且自己的观点也比较明确！
The basis of this argument is , of course, knowing the value of money, and the idea that children of the poor know this, and those of the wealthy do not.
Who though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money;someone skilled in earning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor
children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the school of hard knocks.Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.(101words)点评：这段的内容感觉写得不够直接，还是在分析对方观点的漏洞！请注意，前面让步段已 经这么写过了，那么这一段最好是正面地论证自己的观点，这样从内容上来说更 convincing 一点！此外，需要说明的是，大家发现作者的内容还是有一定深度，但是这是 要有一定的英语功底才行的！如果英语功底不行的话，建议内容不要
写太深，因为那样容易 造成考官看不懂你在说什么！
A poor child may believe that one can get along, if not as easily, without wealth.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management;the key to developing this skill is education.点评：最后一段有点像是提出解决这个问题的办法，即 education.它没有像传统的结尾 段那样简单的重申自己的观点。
总结之总结：全文的观点有待揣摩，作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法，即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents.
但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢，还是富人家的孩子呢？！根据文章来看，作者是中 立，他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。In other words，整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中，这种写法经常使用，还是非常实用的，大家可以学习一下。此外，文章中有 很多好词好句，特别是长句，值得模仿一下 七分作文 题目： 题目： Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success.Others argue that happiness depends on completely other factors.Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.
范文： 范文： In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has become a controversial toward it differ widely from person to person.issue.Notions
Some people believe that happiness is related to economic success because only money can make people’s life more enjoyable.When it comes to economic success, the majority of people believe that money means a luxurious life.
To begin with, if someone owns great success on economic, that means he can spend more money on whatever he likes and spend more time on his hobbies.Emotionally, money can buy happiness at least to some extent.That is to say, you can buy things that you like in order to fulfill your needs and vanities
and this makes you feel happier.You can also enjoy the best education and social welfare.Thirdly, economic success implies high social class and status, which can make people feel happy and respectable.(51ielts.com)
Opponents, however, hold the view that happiness does not depend on economic success but completely other factors.First of all, numerous studies show that happy individuals are successful across multiple life domains ,
including marriage, income, work performance and health.The happiness exists not only because economic success makes people happy, but also because positive affect engenders happiness.What’s more, It is indisputable that
there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure, but some of them sill lead a happy life because they keep the happy spirit.Last but not least, mo
money can not buy everything, such as friendship, true love and health.You can buy things corporeal , but you can never spend money to ask for more time.
In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations
.However, if
asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter.I firmly believe that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to other factors which are much more significant.
第三篇：2012年上半年雅思写作议论文题目汇总
雅思写作机经汇总之2012年大作文1 By Avril Law（天津新东方学校国外考试部雅思主讲教师）
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12.01.07
Some people think inviting large foreign companies to set up factories in developing countries is helpful for local economy，while others think that the foreign companies should not be allowed to build their factories in developing countries，instead，local companies should be encouraged in order to develop local economy.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
12.01.12
Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town.Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
12.01.14
Some employers are given increased importance to social skills in addition to good qualifications.Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in jobs?
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12.01.21 Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation.To what extent do you agree or disagree？
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12.02.04
Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society.Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
12.02.09
The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone.Do you agree or disagree?
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12.02.18
Some people think the developments of technology make people’s life more complex, so we should make the life simpler without using technology.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.02.25
Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time on studying, but it is essential to get involved in other activities.To what extent do you agree or disagree?（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
12.03.08
People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives.But few people achieve it.What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?
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12.03.10
It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in the future.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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12.03.17
News media are important in modern society.Why are they so important? Are their influences generally positive or negative?
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12.03.31
In some cultures the old age is highly valued, while in some cultures youth is highly valued.Discuss and give your opinion.（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
12.04.12 Ambition is an important characteristic of people.How important is it for people to make success in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic for success?
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12.04.14
A tendency of news reported in the media about problems and emergencies rather than positive developments is more harmful to the individual and to society.Do you agree or disagree?
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12.04.21
Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.04.28
In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.05.10 Nowadays consumers are faced with the advertisements from competitive companies.To what extent do you agree that consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures should be taken to protect them?
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12.05.12
In most countries,prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime.Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide education for those who violate the law.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.05.19
The increase in food production owes much to fertilizers and better machinery, but some people think that it has a negative impact on human health and community.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.05.26
Some people believe that the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that the money should be used for public health and education.Discuss both views and give your opinion.（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
12.06.09
Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news on the newspaper and watch television news programs.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.06.14
Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by government rather than private companies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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12.06.16
City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?
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12.06.30
When visiting foreign countries, some people think it is advantageous to learn their cultures and traditions.How do you think people can learn other cultures and traditions? Why do you think some people are interested in learning those traditions and cultures while others not?（Avril总结整理，转载敬请注明http://blog.sina.com.cn/avrildaisy）
第四篇：雅思议论文写作：在家工作的问题
雅思议论文写作范文：在家工作的问题
这类考题出现在，2007-8-25北京、哈尔滨、郑州、天津、长春、上海、杭州、南京、昆明、深圳、福州、南宁、长沙，下面来让我们看一下“雅思议论文写作范文：在家工作的问题”。
雅思写作真题还原
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces ,Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home.Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.Write at least 250 words.题源分析
题目要求我们分析关于“在家工作”的两种不同的观点。一种观点认为在家工作对雇员和其家庭都有好处，另一种却觉得在家工作会把工作中的压力带到家里。实际上，对于这个话题被公众讨论的很多了，是个很熟悉的话题。因此，写起来并不困难。
推荐格式是：
第一段：描述主题，点明要讨论的现象：在家工作的人们越来越多。
第二段：讨论观点一，即在家工作对雇员和其家庭的好处：节省了每天花在交通上的时间、精力和金钱;能够自由安排自己的时间，更好的照顾家人。
第三段：讨论观点二，即在家工作把压力带回了家：。模糊了上下班时间，使压力
持续的时间更长而且影响家人。
第四段：总结全文：在家工作并不适合所有的行业，要看具体情况而定。
其他参考观点：
赞成的理由：
1.提高了员工的工作满意度，减低员工的流失率。
2.节省办公空间和其他办公设备。
反对的理由：
1.不利于个人与其他同事的沟通。
2.使员工获取信息的渠道变得狭窄。
3.不利于公司内部的团队建设。
经典范文欣赏：
Progresses in telecommunication technology enable more and more people to work at home.This emerging working pattern is popular among young people, and it will have profound implications for our work and life.Some have a good round of applause for it, while others worry about its negative effects.Some people say that working at home can bestow numerous benefits upon the workers and their families.First of all, it spares the employee the daily chore of traveling back and forth to and from work, which inevitably save them a lot of time and money Also, it saves employees' energy so that they are able to work more efficiently Secondly, working at home means the employee can arrange his or her time more flexible as long as.they can meet the deadlines of the tasks.Thus, they can dedicate more time to their: spouse and children, which is obviously helpful to strength family ties and salvage dysfunctional marriage.However, other people insist that working at home brings stresses to the home.They think that this working pattern will blur the conventional distinctions between working hours and rest time.In this way, the stress of working tasks may last for an even longer period and it may probably spread to every corner of the home.And all the members in the family will inevitably be influenced by the pressure.Besides, working at home will also generate much trouble to both companies and individuals.All in all, in my opinion, we should view the working pattern dialectically It indeed frees the workers but not everyone or every industry is suitable for it We'd _better not choose it blindly without considering our characteristics and working industry.更多雅思相关资讯请登录：http://www.xiexiebang.com/content_IELTS/
第五篇：雅思写作 分析 结合评分标准
TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Write about the following topic:
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.You should write at least 250 words.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.MODEL ANSWER
The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music.So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players.In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes.Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level.But, as with all questions of nature
versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive.Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good
training and natural talent.Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.雅思写作第一项评分标准是Task Response
1)how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task
2)the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported.3)the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective第二项评分标准是Coherence and Cohesion，它具体包括两个部分：
1)how well the information and ideas are organised and presented, including paragraphing
2)how well the information is linked
语言的衔接包括两个：一个是句子和句子的衔接，另外一个是段和段的衔接。前者连接方法有使用代词，重复关键词，排比句，同意转述和连接词。后者分为三种不同逻辑关系：并列，递进和转折。文章中均有体现。
第三项评分标准是Lexical Resource，它具体包括三个部分：
1)the range of vocabulary used
2)how accurately it is used
3)how appropriate it is for the task
小词：Obviously, However, including, allow, via, while, do, give, extra, as大词：frequent, differentiate, inherit, facility, comparable, exceptional, continuous
词组：are based on, associated with, plenty of, be inherited via, mutually exclusive
地道表达：The relative importance, this extra talent, allow them to excel, nature versus nurture
同义转述：children, a child, a person, individuals, students, any child
第四项评分标准是Grammatical Range and Accuracy ：
1)the range of structures used
2)how accurately they are used
3)how appropriate they are for the task
考官的语言功底深厚，250字尽显语言的风采。句式多变化，具体如下：简单句：they are not mutually exclusive.并列句：Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.复合句：Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level.“There be”句型：there is more to the skill than a learned technique
比较句：In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique长句：The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.
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