第一篇:2006高考英语满分作文天津卷
天津卷
[作文真题]
假设你是李华,在出国交流学习期间,到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影,但在观影过程中发现了一些问题,请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。
1.因广告过多,影片放映晚点;
2.影片播放音量过大
3.安全出口标识不明,存在安全隐患;
4.适当结尾。
注意:(1)词数:80~120;(2)可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)信的开头已为你写好(不计入词数)。
参考词汇:安全出口exit安全隐患poterltial safety hazard Dear Manager
I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday.I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but
Yours
faithfully,Li Hua
COMPOSITION ONE
Dear Manager,rm an exchange student from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I found some small problems that took away flrom my enjoyment of the film.
First,there were so many advertisements before the film that the actual film staned quite late.During the film itself,I found that the volume was so loud.it made me un. comfortable,and it became difficult to hear the film clearly.
Lastly,I noticed that the exit sign was not at aIl visible,and I feel this puts everyone’s safety at risk by not allowing them to find their way out of the cinema clearly and quickly.Safety should always come first,and I think if you can't correct the other two problems,you should correct this one.
Thank you for your time,and I hope to see more movies in your cinema in the future,and find more comfort and convenience.
Sincerely,Li Hua
COMPOSITION TWO
Dear Manager,I'm an exchange student from China,and recently visited your cinema to see a film.The film itself was great,but it seemed there were a few small problems while the film was underway.Although the problems are not big,I do believe that if you can solve them,you may attract a larger audience.First,I found that there were too many advertisements before the beginning of the film,which delayed the film’s start by a long time.I found these advertisements to be very annoying.Second,the sound in the film was too loud,and it made it very difficult to hear the film clearly.
Third,the EXIT sign was not clearly visible,and I feel this creates a safety hazard for customers.If anything terrible happened,it might be very difficult for your customers to evacuate.
Although I'm only a visitor to your city,I hope you can consider these problems and find a way to solve them.Yours
truly,Li HuaCOMPOSITION THREE
Dear Manager,I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday,1 went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I found a few small problems.
First and most important,the EXIT sign was not clearly visible.I feel that safety should be the most important,and this small problem could cause some serious problems in the case of an accident.
Second,the film was so loud that we could not hear it clearly.It made it difficuIt to fully enjoy the movie,and there were many things I could not understand because of this.Last,there were so many advertisements before the movie started that it kept me waiting for 15 minutes.Is it possible to use less advertising so people don,t become impatient before trying to enjoy the film?
After saying all this,I feel I should also say I enjoyed the experience very much.and I thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
Sincerely,Li Hua COMPOSITON FOUR
Dear Manager,I'm a Chinese exchange student studying at a local school in your city.I recently went to your cinema to view a film,and although the film was great,I found that there were some points I'd like to share,that could use improving.
First.I found that the sound was much too loud to be able to hear the film clearly.Although my understanding of English is very good.I found it difficult to understand the film because of the volume.
Second,the EXIT sign was not visible,and I feel that a small problem could create a very large disaster in the case of an emergency.This would be a very easy problem to solve.
Last,but not least,I found that the amount of advertising before the film started,was just too much.Fifteen minutes is a long amount of time to sit through advertising.and I could feel everyone around becoming very impatient.
With all this in mind.it would take little thought and a few good measures to create a cinema that will attract many more people.With that said.I must tell you that aside from the above,I enjoyed my experience very much.
Thank you,Li Hua COMPOSITION FIVE
To Whom It May Concern:
I'm a new exchange student who recently arrived from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to view a film.and I found the film to be great.Although I enjoyed the film.I found there were a few problems that made me unhappy.
First,the film began quite late because of the number of advertisements before the film had started.Second,the volume was so loud that I couldn’t hear clearly.Tllird,the EXIT sign couldn’t be seen clearly,and may create some hidden danger,that may prevent people from exiting safely.
I hope that you can find some time to try to fix these problems.and I feel that you will attract a much larger audience as a result.
Sincerely,Li Hua
[附:天津卷标准样文]
Dear Manager,I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday.1 went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First,the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning.It was rather annoying.Second.t11e sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly bear it.Third,the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly,which presented potential safety hazards.And if something terrible should happen,it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city,I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema.I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua
第二篇:2014年高考英语天津卷满分作文
丝路教育 2014高考英语天津卷满分作文 夏继超
第二节: 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:
(1)表示欢迎
(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气,饮食等)
(3)介绍本班情况
(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊
参考词汇:
交换生exchange student
Dear Chris,I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.I have heard that you are to come to our school as exchange students, and I, on behalf of our class, welcome you warmly and sincerely.Now, I’d like to introduce some details about the weather, food, and our class.The weather in fall is very pleasant.It is neither too hot nor too cold, and neither too dry nor too humid.The temperature here is at about 20 centigrade.Moreover, the food in Tianjin is delicious, including the Eight Great Bowls and The Four Great Stews, and some snacks such as Goubuli, a kind of steamed bun with filling.I am sure you will enjoy them.Our class is a very warm family.There are 60 students in our class, containing 35 boys and 25 girls.You will find it easy to join us since we all want to make friends with you.Then, you needn’t worry about the life here, because the girls and boys in our class are very friendly and helpful.Whenever you get in trouble, they are ready to lend their hands to you.At last, I personally advise you to learn some basic Chinese, in order to communicate with local people and it is much easier for you to get on with teachers and classmates by speaking Chinese.We are looking forward to seeing you.Yours
Li Jin
第三篇:2011年天津卷高考英语满分作文[定稿]
2011年天津卷高考英语满分作文
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华,你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团,你受学校委托,负责安排其在津的一日活动,请根据以下提示,用英语给该团的领队smith先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动计划并简要说明理由,最后征求对方意见!
1,.上午我校学生座谈(谈话如校园生活,文化差异等)
2.中午与我校学生共进午餐(午饭包括饺子,面条等)
3.下午与我校学生游览海河.Dear Mr.Smith.I am LiHua, chairman of the student Union, from Chengguang High school.I’m very happy to tell you our plan of your visit to Tianjin on June 26th as follows.In the morning, your delegation will have an informal discussion with some of us students for a free talk , including our school life ,differences in cultures and customs.During the noontime ,we will have lunch together ,You can enjoy some Chinese food such as Jiaozi and noodles.After lunch ,You will have a break for a while.In the afternoon ,we will show you around the HaiHe River ,I think you will have a good time there.This is our arrangement, If you have any suggestions ,just tell me as soon as possible.2011年重庆卷
某国际动物关爱学会面向全国中学生招募“动物代言人”,希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物为之代言(speak for).加上你是重庆新华中学的学生李华,有意参与该活动,现请你用英文在线填写申请表,内容如下:
1.表示有意参加;
2.说明自己富有爱心,关爱动物;
3.打算为何种动物代言,并说明理由;
4.希望申请成功
I am a student from XinHua School in Chongqing, China.I am greatly interested in becoming one of the spokesmen for animals.I think I’ve got what it takes to be a perfect spokesman for the reason that I am a caring boy with a loving heart.I intend to be a spokesman for pandas.As is known to all.Pandas are not only cute but also friendly ,However ,there are few of them left because of the destruction of their habitat.To make matters worse ,some of them end up in zoos ,leading an unhappy life ,As a big lover of pandas ,I think I should do something for them.I’d be so grateful if you could give me a chance to serve your organization and the precious pandas!
2011年湖北卷
请根据一下提示,结合你校校园生活中的一个事例,就“与人合作”这一话题,用英语写一篇短文。
Working ingroups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group.and it teaches us to be patient and how to
respond to different people.注意:1.无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示
2.除诗歌外,文体不限
3.内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例
4.文中不得透露个人姓名个学校名称
5.次数100左右
In my opinion, in high school, our success is based on cooperating with others.Just as the saying goes: one tree doesn’t make a forest.It happened when I was in Senior One.To enrich our school life ,our chlass decided to put on a short English play.At first ,I was shy and didn’t join in the activity ,But later ,at the encouragement of my fellow classmates ,I took an active part in it.How happily we worked with each other.practicing and enjoying all of it.Finally ,as it turned out ,our performance was successful ,and from this I learned how important it was to work together with others in a group.It is from this moment on that I have learned the importance of teamwork’s spirit.
第四篇:2010高考天津卷满分作文
2010高考天津卷满分作文
阅读下面的文字,按照要求作文。(60分)
世界似画笔下缤纷的色彩,世界如琴弦上跳动的音符;世界因创新而进步,世界缘和谐而温馨;世界可以存在于神奇虚拟的网络,世界更演绎着平凡真实的人生;世界说起来很大,世界其实又很小„„
每个人都有自己的世界,每个人都生活在世界之中。请你结合自己的体验和感悟,以“我生活的世界”为话题,写一篇文章。
要求:(1)自选角度,自拟题目。(2)除诗歌外,文体不限。(3)不少于800字。(4)写出自己的真情实感。(5)不得套作,不得抄袭。
我生活的世界
我是一个盲人,但我的世界却是多姿多彩的。
每天早上起来,母亲都会不厌其烦的为我穿衣,帮我梳头,15年来一直如此。天气晴朗的时候,母亲还会用她那粗糙的手拉着我去河边散步。走在小石子路上,阳光照在我身上暖暖的。我问母亲,阳光是什么颜色的?母亲总会轻柔的抚摸着我的头说,阳光啊,是黄色的,金灿灿的。哦,我知道了。于是,独自在心中立下誓言:我要让我生活的小小世界变成了金黄色的,让每一个生活在这个世界的人都能感受到暖暖的阳光。从此以后,孤独的小朋友身边,有我为他唱儿歌的身影;劳累的父母身边,有我为他们捶背的身影;寂寞的老人身边,有我和他们聊天的身影„。
每天中午坐在屋门前,父亲都会给我讲历史名人。“项羽是中国古代著名将领,历史上说的西楚霸王就是他„„”通过父亲,我的知识面更广了。到12点了,小学生们都放学了,他们经过我家门前,一阵阵谈笑的声传到了我的耳朵。我问父亲,孩子们的谈笑声是什么颜色的?父亲停顿了一下说,红色的,对,就是红色。我有点儿不解,红色?红色什么样的啊?父亲笑了几声说道,红色是充满朝气的颜色,是刚毅的代表,我给你讲的项羽还记得么?我们就能说他是红色的。哦,我明白了。是红色给予了我们快乐的生活;是红色让我们充满活力;是红色让我生活的世界更加美好。
吃完晚饭,傍晚的时候,我会陪着奶奶在河边乘凉,听奶奶和一些老人讨论今天一天他们的世界所发生的一些有趣的事情。因为是盲人,所以我的听觉比较灵敏。耳边隐隐约约会传来细细簌簌的声音,于是问奶奶:“那是什么声音?”奶奶告诉我说“那是清澈的河水拍打石头的响声。”“清澈?那是什么颜色的?是黄的还是红的呢?”“呵呵,都不是的,是蓝色,淡淡的蓝色,就和你穿的衣服一样的颜色。”我的世界里又多了一种颜色。
通过我的亲人、朋友,我的世界才会有那么多的颜色,才会变得五彩缤纷。纯洁的白,热情的红,暖暖的黄,清澈的蓝„„每一种颜色在我的小世界都有属于自己的一个小角落。
“爱是什么颜色?”
“爱没有固定的颜色,每一种颜色中都饱含亲人对你的爱。”
第五篇:2018年高考 “天津卷”满分作文解读
2018年高考 “天津卷”满分作文解读
一、作文命题
阅读下面材料,根据自己的体验和感悟,写一篇文章。
生活中有不同的“器”。器能盛纳万物,美的形制与好的内容相得益彰;器能助人成事,有利器方成匠心之作;有一种“器”叫器量,兼容并包,彰显才识气度;有一种“器”叫国之重器,肩负荣光,成就梦想……
要求:①自选角度,自拟标题; ②文体不限(诗歌除外),文体特征鲜明; ③不少于800字;④不得抄袭,不得套作。
二、文题解读
2018天津卷作文立足于“立德树人”,着眼于大视野,引导学生“认识社会、认识自我、规划人生”;希望莘莘学子能“盛纳万物,内外兼修;有情怀,有大国工匠之器;有器量,兼容并包,进而成为‘国之重器’”,与祖国共命运同发展。作文材料介于新材料作文和话题作文之间,审题难度较小,有很广泛的写作空间。
材料中“生活中有不同的‘器’”开宗明义,告诉我们,器的多样性,实质也就告诉我们可选择内容的多样性。“器能盛纳万物”是从用途上来说,这不禁让人质问:什么样的“器”可盛纳万物呢?这些“物”是实指还是虚指呢?由此可展开思维纵横驰骋。
“美的形制与好的内容相得益彰”是从外形来说的,同样可以让人产生遐想:“美的形制一定与好的内容相得益彰吗?”“不美的形制可与好的内容相得益彰吗?”等问题。当功能与外形结合起来,写作的内容已经十分丰富了。
“器能助人成事”是从功能上来说的,这个“成事”当然也有积极面和消极面。如一柄宝剑,当正义之人以其斩杀妖邪时,是成人之美;当奸佞之徒以其滥杀无辜时,是助纣为虐。如洲际导弹,可谓国之重器,在霸权主义者的手中,是欺凌列国的帮凶;在热爱和平者的手中,是维护一方平安的瑰宝。故“器”本身无好坏之分。
“有一种‘器’叫器量”,这是从内涵上来说的,“器量”越大,胸襟越开阔,反之则逼仄。“器量”大的人可以兼容并包,由此可提及集体,国家;构成个人——集体——国家的递进态势,由此及彼,由个及众,增加文章广度的同时增加文章的厚度。
还有一种“国之重器”专指人,对国家有特殊贡献的人,如歼20总师杨伟、杂交水稻之父袁隆平、青蒿素的创始人屠呦呦等,是当之无愧的国之重器,他们肩负荣光,成就梦想……
据此可以从以下方面立意: ①“利其器”方能“善其事”; ②拥有大器量才能成就大事业;