大学英语4 U5-U81[优秀范文5篇]

第一篇：大学英语4 U5-U81

Unit 5P.173Ex.9Translation

1.As a result of a downsizing initiative and a major bank merger, my usually well-ordered life became

fraught with changes.由于一次裁员行动和一次重大的银行合并，我一贯有条不紊的生活变得充满了变化。

2.Although I am a rather reticent individual by nature, I made the most of the oral presentations in

class.And soon my confidence level soared.尽管我生性沉默寡言，但我充分利用了课堂上做口头陈述的机会，这是我不久就信心倍增。

3.Much to the amazement of his friends and relatives, the young man gave up his secure future, stepped

out his comfort zone and rejoined the “rat race.”

这位年轻人放弃了稳定的未来，跳出自己的舒适圈，重返激烈的战争，这是他的亲友们都惊叹不已。

4.No matter what life throws our way, having a positive attitude makes room for the future.无论在我们的人生道路上遇到什么坎坷，拥有积极的态度才能为未来打开空间。

5.Of course, having a fulfilling career is a personal goal I long to achieve.However, working towards

materialistic things and personal glorification has never been my first priority

当然，事业有成是我渴望实现的一个个人目标，但为了物质的东西和个人的荣誉而工作却从来不是我优先考虑的东西。

6.Having lost his job, he returned to college and ended up acquiring a diploma.失去了工作之后，他重回大学，并最终获得了一份毕业证书。

Unit 6P.212Ex.10Translation

1.The new agreement is based on the original United Nations proposal.新协议是以原来的联合国建议为基础的。

2.I’ll take this English test even if it takes weeks or months of

preparation.即使要花费数周或数月的时间准备，我也要参加这次英语考试。

3．In order to sell anybody anything is five minutes or less, you have to find common ground on which you and your client can stand together.为了能在5分钟或更少的时间里把任何东西卖给任何人，你必须找到你和你的顾客能站在一起的共同基础。

4.Yes, you must work harder in your studies.But it does not mean that you have to sacrifice your health for better grades

是的，你一定要在学习上更加努力，但这并不意味着你必须牺牲你的健康去得到更好的成绩。

5.We’re not here to talk about what divides us.We’re here to find the things that bind us together.我们到这儿来不是为了谈论使我们产生分歧的东西。我们到这儿来是为了找到把我们结合在一起的东西。

6.In some cases you have to stoop to conquer.But does it mean that you have to sacrifice your integrity?

Certainly not.在这种情况下，你不得不屈尊忍辱以达到目的。但这是否意味着你必须牺牲自己的诚实正直呢？当然不是。

Unit 7P.253Ex.9Translation

1.While attending Columbia, Li Ming became good friends with Wang Ying, a twenty-year-old girl from

Hong Kong.在哥伦比亚大学就读期间，李明于一个来自香港的20岁女孩儿王颖成了好朋友。

2.Encouraged by his instructor, John decided to make medicine his life’s career.在导师的鼓励下，约翰决定把医学作为自己的终生职业。

3.Less than a month after he came to McGill University, Dr.Johnson submitted to the president a detailed

plan for setting up a new laboratory in the biology department.约翰逊博士来到麦吉尔大学后不到一个月，就向校长提交了一份在生物系建立一个新实验室的详尽计划。

4.After receiving the urgent cablegram from his former instructor, Dr.Drew immediately set to work

and organized the “Blood for Britain” campaign.在收到从前的导师发来的急电后，德鲁博士立即开始工作，组织了“为英国鲜血”的运动。

5.At the beginning of the following year, thousands of American soldiers were killed or injured on

the battlefield.在第二年之初，数以千计的美国士兵在战场上阵亡或受伤。

6.In a series of experiments, Dr.Drew discovered that plasma could be given to any patient regardless

of blood type.在在一系列的实验中，德鲁博士发现，不管什么血型的病人都能接受血浆。

Unit 8P.293Ex.10 Translation

1.The restaurant caters to both local people and foreign guests because it provides customers with

all kinds of food to choose from.这家餐馆符合当地人和外宾的口味，因为它为顾客提供各种各样可供选择的食物。

2.In addition to the Monument to the People’s Heroes, there are many other places for sightseeing

at Tiananmen Square.除了人民英雄纪念碑，天安门广场还有许多其他观光场所。

3.The museums in Paris attract a lot of tourists from all over the world, whether they are historians,artists or ordinary people.巴黎的博物馆吸引着许多来自全世界的游客，无论他们是历史学家，艺术家或普通人。

4.Apart from my daily work, I need to set aside a few hours each day to write my book on tourism.除了日常工作，我每天都需要留出几小时来写我的旅游专著。

5.The Great Wall is one of the major tourist destinations in Beijing.Its principal attraction lies

in its magnificent scenery and rich historical significance.长城是北京的一个主要旅游目的地。它的主要吸引力在于壮观的景色和丰富的历史意义。

6.I can’t afford the time to go traveling with you.I have to make arrangements for my art exhibition

next week.我没有时间跟你去旅游。你必须为下星期自己的艺术展作安排。

P.179Ex.12Writing

以英语系系主任徐达方的名义为王大雷出具一份工作证明。王大雷于2000年3月1日至2005年12月31日在肖山学院英语系工作，其中2000年3月1日至2001年2月28日为兼职英语教师；2001年3月1日至2003年9月30日为全职英语教师，助教；2003年10月1日至2005年12月31日为讲师。徐达方的联系电话为022-34788765。

P.216Ex.14Writing

写一封辞职信，原因是近来身体一直不佳，无法在公司工作，特辞去现职，并在信中表示保证协助做好交接工作。

第二篇：女装品牌故事uu

VIVA VOCE女装的品牌故事

又是一个慵懒的星期一早晨

拥堵的车上 又一次站着化装

相同的打卡声 提示又要振作作业

又是午后雷阵雨的抑郁

又是一个没有汁的瘦叉烧饭午饭

相同的happy hour 相同的酒吧

又是一个人微醉的打的回家

真的没有另外挑选吗？

芳华只能够这样演绎吗？

莫非只能够挑选汽水的滋味…

莫非只可有庸俗的日子

莫非只可挑选-没有挑选

不…

我挑选Queen乐团的Love of my life作为爱情观

我挑选海浪声让个人安静

我挑选弹吉它舒解烦恼

我挑选viva voce来宣布日子的声响

能够挑选内敛、挑选张狂

能够精约、能够富丽

能够生动、能够安静

能够爱也能够不爱…

Let viva voce be your living voice.

第三篇：UU快餐店营销策划书

UU快餐店营销策划书

一、策划目的开一家迎合陕西理工学院学生的平价营养餐厅。

（一）餐厅名称 餐厅的名称：馍饭情侣

（二）餐厅地理位置

综合陕西理工学院周边的地理环境，决定将“uu快餐店”设立在校东门口，靠近学校的东门不远处，人流量很大，同学们方便就近就餐，这在地理位置上有一定的优势。据我亲身感受，一般学生就餐时都会选择就近的餐厅，而不愿走得太远，而且我们的消费方式主要以快餐送外卖为主，同学们既可以进店消费也可以坐在宿舍等候外卖，所以距离以及周边的配套设施的优势更能吸引较多的消费者。

（三）餐厅布局设计

本餐厅经营面积约为 100平米左右。餐厅的色彩配搭都是随着客厅的，这主要是从空间 感的角度来考虑的，因为目前国内多数的住房设计中，餐厅和客厅都是相通的。对于餐厅单 置的构造，色彩的使用上，宜采用暖色系，因为从色彩心理学上来讲，暖色有利于促进食欲，这也就是为什么很多餐厅采用黄、红系列的原因。

（四）餐厅人员

厨师、服务员、收银员、清洁工、采购员、配送员。

（五）餐厅的经营理念

以顾客为本 一切服务看顾客。

我们根据以顾客为本的理念提出一下三点的理念

（1）顾客满意理念：及时了解消费者的需求，不断改进产品和服务质量，最大限量的满足 消费者的需求，从而赢得市场

（2）顾客忠诚理念：通过不断提高顾客的满意程度，在餐厅和消费者形成一种的纽带。

（六）餐厅文化

口号：以人为本，以质为根，以食为天。企业文化核心价值观：健康快乐 追求卓越 企业精神：精诚合作，携手共进

二、市场行业分析

（一）餐饮业的基本特征

（１）生产与消费须同时出现与进行

（２）需求起伏不定

（二）消费者行为分析

（１）消费者一般会选择距离较近的地方用餐

（２）消费者对特定食物的喜爱程度期限较短

（３）消费者的口味较为固定，变化不明显或是变化所需时间较长

（三）餐饮业的竞争分析

从陕西理工学院附近市场

竞争内容看：重点有单纯的价格竞争、产品质量的竞争

从竞争对象看：着重于有店面的铺子和一些小摊位以及卖家的服务态度

（四）市场分析

（1）供给分析

陕西理工学院地处汉中市朝阳路，相比于其他的一些学校，我们学校处在市区边缘，周围相对来说店面比较稀少，娱乐场所并不多。同时学校出于安全考虑并不允许商家在学生公寓楼下开设餐馆，因此大部分餐馆和酒店都聚集在学校东门外小吃街。所以就陕西理工学院这个校区来说，供给非常缺少；但是如果将周围的餐饮店考虑进去，那么供给非常之多。

（2）需求分析

根据调查表你进行适当的需求分析

（五）竞争者分析

学生平时的消费地点

（六）本餐厅 SWOT 分析

优势

本小吃店经营解决了学校食堂饭菜口味单一，买饭排队难等问题，也无流动小摊卫生没有保证的担忧。本小吃店采用自助选择方式、加送外卖的方式，方便快捷，节约时间，应该很容易受到顾客欢迎，并能为部分同学提供勤工俭学岗位。本店周道的服务，方便的订餐，较多的优惠政策等都会吸引更多的客源。本店汇聚各地小吃，价格合理，可以满足不同消费者的需求。本店能够利用学校的暖气，保证大家冬天不再吃饭时挨冻

劣势

由于刚起步，小吃店的规模较小，如就餐的人力资源、服务项目等都比较有限。因为学校假期是固定的，寒暑假期间的客源会骤降，这将会是一个比较难以解决的问题，给快餐店的利润造成影响。

机会

出于地理位置的考虑，公寓外面暂时没有同类小吃店及饭店，所以本店具有较强的竞争优势。我们的主要目标群体是学生，而我们也是学生，更能了解顾客需要什么样的产品和服务。在广告宣传方面更具有专业能力

威胁

学校周围的竞争者较多。学校有关规定的变更将对我们小吃店的经营产生影响。小吃店的服务与产品质量的高低与经营成本又有直接和必然的联系，如此则产品价格必然不会比竞争对手低，虽然总体上价格并不会太高，但相比之下，客户的经济承受能力就成为一大考验了，消费者需求的变化又直接影响到本店的 收益。

第四篇：优秀大学英语作文

Recently I undesignedly read a thought-provoking story,in which the writer vividly told us why tortoise’s shell is not smooth.Apparently it is merely a legend,yet what it reflects is far beyond the story itself.As far as I am concerned ,the tortoise is undoubtedly clever.However ,intelligence alone does not lead to success.And what has become a common sense is that virtue of one’s inner nature actually outweigh his intelligent quotient.We have to admit that the tortoise profits a lot temporarily.But what happens to him in the end? He just fell to the ground and his shell brokeinto pieces.He got a narrow escape from death but this miserably left his fame completely in tatters.Thus we are given to understand that if we desire to win respect from others,initially we are supposed to be trustworthy.Hence the saying,do as you would be done by.Only when we treat others openly and warmheartedly will we be treated in a way we are always longing for.And from another perspective,constantly we are too ready to believe others.With the coming of information age, more and more high-tech products have come into our easier access with some undesirable things accompanying them.As a consequence,cheats and frauds are really prevailing currently.Confronted with such a serious situation,it is high time that we improved self-protecting awareness and think more considerably before we choose to believe others.To sum up,we can’t be too cautious in the ever complex society.The moral of the story is too complicated a topic to be comprehensively covered in the limited space of my article.anyway, different people can benefit tremendously from it in various terms.

第五篇：大学英语四级优秀作文

大学英语四级考试优秀范文

Part 1:2010年12月

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent

①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families.②However ,many parents goso far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college.④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence.In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success.Thus ,⑤what should parents do ?

In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything.⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence.精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。

加分亮点：beyond reproach 无可非议be accompanied by…有……陪同

declare in no uncertain terms 毫不讳言fierce competition 激烈的竞争

essential 至关重要的cling to the belief 坚信

Part 2:2010年6月

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种现象的原因是……

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning.②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible.④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation.⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day.⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling.To change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together.⑧On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English.⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation.Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.精彩点评：

①开门见山，描述现象：很多学生不重视拼写。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 说明该现象造成的结果：拼写错误连篇，文章结构混乱。④本段分析造成上述结果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具体列举不同的原因，层次分明。⑦概括提出解决问题的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …结构，针对上述成因，提出两种对应的解决方案。最后结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。

加分亮点：embarrassing 令人为难的，尴尬的give priorities to 认为优先

Put emphasis on 强调

Part 3：2009年12月

1.建设绿色校园十分重要

2.绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境……

3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

Creating a Green Campus

During recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular.②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected

A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students.Meanwhile ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish.In that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory results.With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出绿色校园的话题已经引起社会关注。②点名绿色校园的重要意义。③用not only..but also 句型介绍绿色校园的内涵和外延。④半倒装句的运用恰到好处，引出下文要阐述的内容，即社会各界应行动起来，推动绿色校园的建设。⑤和⑥结构连接词in the first place 和furthermore 的运用，使得论述清晰明了。⑦结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。

加分亮点：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意义

Part4:2009年6月

1.越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……

2.有人认为这样做会带来一些问题

3.在我看来…

Free Admissions to Museums?

①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge.By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns.They are right in a sense.③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily.④For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice.The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world.Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums.⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出论点。并说明这样做的目的。②话题一转，阐明这个举措的弊端。③和④运用关联词For one thing …For another…,使文章层次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 衔接文章，引出自己的观点。⑥最后提出希望，总结全文。

加分亮点：get access to 接触in favor of 赞同vivid 生动的 鲜明的Part 5:2008年12月

1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用

2.由此带来的问题

3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags

①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China.No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life.②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?

The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution.It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution.④What „s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health.⑤Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it.From June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited strictly.Consequently, people come to take environment-friendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well.⑥Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own health.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出议论点。②利用转折，承接下文，提出问题。③使用非限制性定语从句，丰富句子结构。④运用递进结构What‟ s worse …,使文章有层次感。⑤利用过渡句衔接文章。⑥使用倒装句，总结全文。

加分亮点：sharp急剧的，大量的give rise to 引起，使发生 in question 正被讨论 Consequently从此，因而

Part 6:2008年6月

1.娱乐活动多种多样

2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害

3.作为大学生，我认为…….Recreational Activities

①Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities.②There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students.③As for such a question, different people hold different views.④ Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally.⑤ While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile.For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well.⑥As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm.They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too.⑦As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us.精彩点评：①开门见山，摆出事实。②提出讨论的问题：社会对娱乐活动的争论。③模板句引出两种对立观点。④和⑤运用对比结构Some believe that…While…说明不同的观点。⑥用模板句提出自己的观点。⑦给出原因。

加分亮点：be available for 可供…之用…range from…to…从……到……

Be addicted to 沉溺于，热爱

Part 7:2007年12月

1.各大学为大学生开设了多种多样的选修课

2.学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课

3.以我自己为例……

What Electives to Choose

Nowadays, ①there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from.These courses make the students‟ college life more colorful.②However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas.③Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared in the future job hunting.④Some students just want to extend their interests.⑤ Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is limited.They should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years.⑥Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study.⑦As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life and job.I don‟t care about the scores I have got.I just want to be a man having a sharp and imaginative mind with different knowledge which is beyond my major.⑧So I think the possession of much

more knowledge can make my future life easier and more interesting.精彩点评：①开门见山，说明大学里开设了很多选修课这一事实。②话锋一转，支出大家选择选修课的目的各不相同。③④⑤⑥运用了Some…Some…Still others…的并列平行结构，列举不同学生的做法及目的。另外本段使用了so that, in order that 等结构，使文章结构连贯。⑦用模板句提出自己的观点。⑧再次阐明观点，回应主题。

加分亮点：well-prepared 准备好的sharp 锐利的，敏捷的imaginative 有想象力的Part 8:2007年6月

1.本社团的主要活动内容

2.参加本社团的好处

3.如何加入本社团

Welcome to Our Club

Welcome to our club!① Our “Easy-to-Learn” English club aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways.There will be varieties of colorful activities almost every week in our club, such as② English Talk Show, English Corner, English Lectures, English Songs Competition, etc.If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice.③To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way.④ In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will inevitably make your college life more enjoyable and meaningful.⑤ Last but not the least, you may participate in all the activities at a very low price or even free of charge.If you feel interested in our club, ⑥please don‟t hesitate to join us.You just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as possible.Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us.⑦Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!

精彩点评：①开门见山，支出此社团的宗旨。②列举丰富的活动，说服力强，更能吸引学生加入。③④⑤运用并列平行结构To begin with…In addition… Last but not the least…列举具体的活动。⑥语言口语化，鼓动性强。⑦再次表示“欢迎加入社团”，突出主题。

加分亮点：inevitably 不可避免地participate in 参加free of charge 免费

Part 9:2006年12月

1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会

2.有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会

3.在我看来……

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

①The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of China‟s most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year.②However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.③People in increasing numbers choose not to watch the show.They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern celebrations.④However, some other people are faithful audience of it.They argue that the Evening Gala has ⑤somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s.⑥What‟s more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them.⑦Though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I enjoy watching the show with my family.⑧Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation, the organizing committee should develop a program more exciting, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones.⑨For example, it‟s a good idea to invite some big names in China‟s film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.精彩点评“①开门见山，支出春节晚会的影响力。②话锋一转，提出问题。Show使主语表达简介。③和④是分别引出争议双方观点的结构。⑤somewhat起缓和语气的作用。⑥表递进关系。⑦这一句型用于提出自己观点。⑧不定式结构表目的。⑨举例说明。

加分亮点：lose one‟s appeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的 give way to 让路，让步Initiate 开始indispensable 不可缺少的Part 10:2006年6月

1.有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的科任老师

2.学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素

3.学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题

On Students Selecting Lecturers

①Nowadays students in some universities are entitled to the option on lecturers for some specific courses.This offers students a more flexible and more efficient way of learning.However, there are several factors for students to consider when choosing their ideal lecturers.②On the one hand, the lecturer‟s academic background plays an important role in the decision.An ideal lecturer may give the students much knowledge in his specific field.③On the other hand, the students should take the lecturer‟s character into account.Without good character, a lecturer can‟t set a good example for the students.④What‟s more, ⑤the ideal lecturer is one who has an interesting teaching style and a good reputation among the students.⑥Free choosing of lecturers may bring to the students many advantages, such as encouraging students to take an active part in classes and putting more pressure on lecturers to improve their teaching quality.⑦Nevertheless, it also brings along the terrible fact that some top lecturers will be ignored if they are not able to please the students.To conclude,⑧ further attention should be paid to this matter.精彩点评：①句首开门见山，直述主题。②③④为并列平行结构，列举学生需要考虑的因素。⑤定语从句使句式多变。⑥将“选课“这一动作转换为名词形式。⑦同位语从句使句式多变。⑧运用pay attention to “关注”的被动形式。

加分亮点：be entitled to 被赋予……option on 在…..方面的选择权 play a role 起作用Take into account 考虑在内