马上要英语口试，写了个自我介绍，不知道有没有错误，找人改改..

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马上要英语口试，写了个自我介绍，不知道有没有错误，找人改改.....在线等

Good morning teachers,I am very happy to stand here.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is--, 20 year old, I graduated from Qianxi NO.two high School，In my spare timeI oftenread English story books and listening to English songs.Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E-books to read.I also like the painting，I think painting can improve people's aesthetic taste and character cultivation.Now, my dream is to become an English teacher, for my dreams I'll keep trying

I think this is a very good chance to let me go further on English,so I will do my best to catch the chance.如果没有错误，语气比较僵硬的地方帮忙换换，马上要英语口试，写了个自我介绍，不知道有没有错误，找人改改..。。拜托了。。

满意答案：

你好，首先祝你旗开得胜，我是今年的高考生，英语成绩在145左右（只看来答案，成绩没有下来）。

平时英语是强项，如果你是一个爱学习的好学生，可以加我qq，以后有什么问题我们都可以一起探讨。

下面我帮你改改这篇作文：

Good morning后要加逗号，20 year old中的year要用复数形式，Qianxi NO.two high School改为No.2 High School in Qianxi, and listening 改为and listen，like the painting 改为like painting，people's aesthetic taste 中的taste后加s，自我介绍《马上要英语口试，写了个自我介绍，不知道有没有错误，找人改改..》。错误就是这些，如果说句子的话，（不要生气）不是很好，没有高级句子，高级句型,过渡词语没有用好。

下面，我帮你写写，一定要采纳哦（呵呵）

Good morning，teachers.So hornour to stand here to introduce myself.My name is--, a 20-year-old graduate who graduated from NO.2 High School in Qianxi.In my spare timeI oftenread English books and listen to English songs.meantime, I always surf the Internet and download the E-books to read,by which Ican impaove my English and enrich my life.Besides,I'm fond of painting ,which I thinkcan improve people's aesthetic tastes and character cultivations.Now, my dream is to become an English teacher, for whichI'll keep trying best..Because I take this a very good chance togo further on English,I value this chance so much taht I will do my best to catch the chance.补充：meantime 第一个字母要大写，不好意思。

追问：

你QQ多少啊？谢谢你这么认真，交个朋友吧，嘻嘻。。你也可以加我qq870124978

马上要英语口试，写了个自我介绍，不知道有没有错误，找人改改..

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