第一篇：中考英语满分作文写作五大原则
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong.观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1.每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday!详举吃的是什么。2.每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
第二篇：中考满分作文 “五炼”
中考满分作文 “五炼”
如何能在不到 60分钟的时间里写出一篇600字以上的优秀作文来？这是每个临考师生最为关切的问题，笔者通过对全国近年来200多篇中考满分作文的分析，揭密一下这些满分作文是怎样“炼”成的，希望对临近中考的语文老师和同学有一点启发。
一、炼标题 ——芳草满园花满目
俗话说得好“题好文一半”。文章的标题就好比一篇文章的眼睛，通过它，我们可以窥见文章的灵魂。古今中外许多优秀的作家，为了给自己的文章拟一个靓丽标题，直至“为伊销得人憔悴”。近些年来，许多省市的中考作文为了鼓励和培养考生的创新精神，都有让考生自拟题目的要求。毫不夸张地说，题目拟得如何，不但存在着给阅卷老师第一印象的问题，甚至直接影响到阅卷老师对文章的评分。看许多满分作文的拟题方法，的确给人新颖的感觉：
1．套用法
把流行歌曲名、歌词、电视剧名、影片名、诗文名句、成语俗语、名人名言、广告词等直接引用或加以变化后用做标题。如《九百九十九个心愿》套用了歌曲《九百九十九朵玫瑰》，《都是‘耶’们惹的祸》《都是课外书惹的祸》套用了一句流行歌词《都是月亮惹的祸》，还有《我的未来不是梦》、《一切尽在不言中》、《常回家看看》等也都是套用了歌曲名。《笑傲考场》套用了电视剧《笑傲江湖》的片名，《何以解忧，惟有文章》套用了诗句“何以解忧，惟有杜康”，《勿以善小而不为》《学无止境》套用了名言名句，《女大十八变》套用了俗语“女大十八变”，《我的眼里只有你》套用了广告词。
2．移用法
把本来不属于这个范畴的的词语、术语、专用语移用过来。如《关于“交往”条件的实验报告》《交往说明书》，这些标题通俗明了，妥贴自然，让人耳目一新。
3．修辞法
拟题时灵活巧妙地运用拟人、比喻、反复、设问等修辞方法。如《一条海豚的幸福感受》《初三老人和我有个约会》（拟人）、《我是“足球”》《生活好比一桌宴席》（比喻）、《粉身碎骨为考试》（夸张）、《我们需要什么？》《成才全靠父母吗？》《现在？现在！》（设问）、《独眼大将军》（借代），这些标题新颖具体，形象生动，使文章锦上添花。
4．悬念法
拟题时运用造悬念的方法，给读者以充分的联想和想像的空间。如《他盯着女生看》一文，乍一看标题，你会大吃一惊：这男生怎么会这样？！再读文章，你仍会吓一跳：他还是一个班长，真不像话！一直读到文章结尾，你才如梦初醒：原来班长为了给大家画肖像做毕业留念，才盯着女生看的！这样的标题令人悬念顿生，一下子就能抓住读者的心，从而使读者不得不阅读下去。还有《地球上最后一个人》《三人一双眼》《师徒征婚》《我发现枕头里有个世界》等都是运用悬念法拟题的范例。
5．求奇法
拟题时克服思维定势，故意违反常理，求新求奇，达到出其不意的效果。如《真想做个差生》《我爱停电》《世上只有爸爸“狠”》《我的老师记性坏》；可以运用数字或算式，如《1、3、5》（写音乐情怀）、《减负=减副》《1+1=？》等等，这类标题新颖，直观，内涵丰富，能迅速吸引读者的注意力。
6．含蓄优美
有的标题采用散文化的语言或诗的语言，给人以优美之感。如《我也衔过一枚青橄榄》《着一袭美丽的绿袍》《一丝甘醇沁心田》。有些特定的文体和内容，标题不宜过于直白，宜含蓄优美。如《半梦半醒之间》一文，写小作者从睡梦中惊醒，再迷迷糊糊往教室里冲，在走廊上撞着了班主任Miss黄，却不经意得到了她的表扬，简直稀里糊涂，如在梦中。这个标题就拟得相当精彩，精练紧凑，含蓄隽永，令人叫绝！
7．简洁明快
有些内容的文章，标题宜单刀直入，简洁明快。如《要迟到了，快点儿》，简洁明快，一看标题便能想像出小作者慌慌张张上学的情景，这就比《上学记》《害怕迟到》等平淡的标题好得多了。
8．生动幽默
这类标题清新俏皮，诙谐幽默，一看标题便能令人爱不释手。如《“咋呼”妈妈》和《“马屁”爸爸》两文，分别抓住了妈妈爱“吆喝”和爸爸喜欢“拍马屁”的特点拟题，幽默精彩；《大战老妈》一文，写“我”与“死党”约好下午去打篮球，不料老妈非要在家陪“我”写作业不可，因此“我”不得不与老妈巧妙周旋。这个标题生动形象，拉近了读者和文章的距离，收到了良好的效果。
二、炼开头——举头已觉满眼春
古人说 “凤头豹尾”，就是说开头要写得有姿有彩，像凤凰的头那样，有人说： “ 好的开头等于成功的一半 ”，这些都说明了作文开头的重要。精彩的开头能一下子就打动评卷老师的心。由于时间与篇幅的限制，考场作文的开头讲究简洁、生动、优美，我们可以欣赏一下下面这些满分作文的开头：
1．引用式开头
引用名言、诗句、歌词等。如：“书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。”知识犹如浩瀚无垠的大海，哪有水源穷尽的一天？惟有以百折不回的毅力，勇往直前，方能采撷到知识果实（广东考生《学无止境》）——引名句，起点高远。
“月朦胧，鸟朦胧，帘卷海棠红。”
每当我吟诵这句诗，心中便有说不出的陶醉。心也朦胧，眼也朦胧，眼前真个展现出一幅画来。（《陶醉》）——引用写景的词句，意蕴深远。
“常回家看看，回家看看„„”歌声在房间的上空回旋着。东子拿着父亲的信，泪水溢满了脸颊。三年了，东子离开家整整三年了，三年来父亲的一封封信早已将他心中的仇恨化为乌有。东子掩卷而思，思绪又回到了三年前。（《常回家看看》）——从一首流行歌曲引发人物的思考，使思绪回到从前，巧妙交待了故事发生的时间。
2．修辞式开头
（1）巧比喻，形象开阔，如： 像微风拂过竹叶，像碧波轻吻着海岸，像明星装饰着天幕，像冷雨滋润着土地。你的出现仿佛一道闪电划破了凝固的空气。（盐城考生《一丝甘醇沁心田》）
（2）趣比拟，别开生面，如 ：嘿，大家好，我叫“把握”，与自信等人是胞兄胞弟，我们共同支撑着人的大脑活动与精神。你们可不要小瞧我啊，我的存在很重要呢。（河北考生《我叫把握》）
（3）作排比，造势磅礴，如： 盈盈月光，我掬一捧最清的；落落余晖，我拥一缕最暖的；灼灼红叶，我拾一片最热的；萋萋芳华，我摘一束最灿烂的，对人以和，待人以善。（江西考生《待人和善》）
痛苦的时候，你会回家，用眼泪尽情发泄；心烦的时候，你会回家，让家的温暖驱散心中的乌云。家——融进去的是悲伤，化解出来的是快乐；家——接纳的是难过，释放的是开心。
家，真好！（《家，真好》）——运用排比，将“家”的感受毫无遮掩地表达出来，为全文定下基调。
（4）巧设问，引人深思，如： 团团黑黑的硝烟还围绕在你的身边吗？轰隆的飞机还盘旋在你头顶上的那一片天空里吗？哦，伊拉克女孩，你那双纯洁的双眼噙着泪水，你无助的眼神充满了恐惧。你在想什么？（江西考生《今夜星光灿烂》）
亲情是什么？是那份惹人烦的叮嘱唠叨，还是沉默中那期盼的眼神？是彼此惺惺相惜的感动，还是父母丢舍不下的怜爱？
这些都是。亲情如酷暑中的一丝凉风，母亲扇叶轻摇的温情使躁动的心趋于平衡。亲情是暴雨中的一柄伞，父亲被雨淋湿的臂下搂着浑身干爽的孩子，使孩子平静的，是那份信任与依赖。（《珍惜所拥有的亲情》）——运用设问，引起读者的思考。
很多开头常常是多种修辞方法连用，如：
人们自古以来歌颂伟大的母亲，我却更加喜爱我的父亲。母爱仿佛是阳光，温暖，无微不至。而父爱仿佛是无边无际的海洋，宽广、辽阔，似乎能包容一切。（《我的父亲》）——运用对比和比喻的形式点题。
爱心是冬日里的一缕阳光，驱散了凛冽的寒霜；爱心是久旱后的一场甘露，滋润了干裂的心田；爱心是汪洋中的一个航标，指明了新生的希望。（《把爱心带给他人》）——运用比喻、排比手法。
假如我是小鸟，我会记住那出生时的巢穴；假如我是树苗，我无法忘记那滋养我的土地；假如我是河流，那雪域高原便成为我记忆中的烙印；假如„„无论我是什么，以什么方式存在，我可以忘记周围一切，甚至可以抛弃自己，但有一样东西是不可泯灭的——那就是回报。（《回报》）——运用拟人、排比手法。
3．抒情式开头
如： 虽说雁过无痕，岁月无声，而白驹过隙的光阴却在生命的每一个空隙里不着痕迹的流动。流年的浪花总是涤荡在渺远的心际，水波涟漪般徐徐荡开，风中花瓣样轻轻坠落。是什么促使我们的忧伤、快乐、悲痛、幸福化作丝丝雨露„„在静谧的夜里发起一轮轮的攻击？（丽水考生《永恒的情结》）——深抒情，生动感人。
独立小院，月光如水，静静地流泻在我的身边，我感到了心沉水底的清凉，引起了对你的不尽思念！曾记得也是这样一个月色溶溶的夜晚，我把你送上了开往异乡的列车„„
小小年纪，孤身一个人在异乡奋斗的你，一切还好吗？（《当我面对“溶溶月色”的时候》）——洋溢着一种浓郁的情感气氛，回忆利于抒情。
晚风吹过河面上最后一波涟漪，夕阳收下它最后一道余晖，秋霜目送去最后一只归雁。我们默默地站着，目光游离在那若即若翕的记忆之门。当许许多多都已逝去，当许许多多都已凋尽，我们起码还可以对自己说：“别伤心，我已体验过那种感觉，虽然只是曾经拥有。”（《曾经拥有》）——“晚风”“夕阳”“秋霜”的描写衬托出此时人物的心情。
4．题记式开头
开头加一段题记，用于揭示主旨或领起全文。如 ：就在蔚蓝变得紫红的那一刹那，也预示着无情的黑夜即将代替这片美丽，但我仍然坚信：无情的黑夜也是慷慨的！——题记（荆州考生《把黎明的美丽带给曾失落的我》
三、炼形式——巧持彩练当空舞
独到的创新设计，能使由“赤橙黄绿青蓝紫”组成的彩绸在空中亮出美不胜收的舞姿；别具一格的表现形式，能使精心包装的中考作文充满灵气和魅力。我们谈作文要创新，许多同学往往只注重作文内容、立意、语言等方面的“出巧”。其实，好的作品更需要漂亮的包装，我们如果少用传统的“三段体”形式，给作文换一套新颖的“外装”，就会带给阅卷老师新与美的视野与享受。看全国满分作文，各种各样的创新形式让人拍案叫绝。
1．日记体式： 围绕一个主题，用清晰的时间概念展示出事件的全过程。日记是一个人心灵的真实反映，所以这种文体，既能吸引读者，增强真实感，写法上还避免了单纯的记叙形式。如：安徽一考生满分作文《体验“女朋友”》就以日记的形式表现了自己与女生交往的一段经历，每则日记着力写好一个小镜头，以此见证他的独特体验。深圳一考生满分作文《留下》则用日记记录下三个时间段亲朋给自己的电话留言，来表现“非典”时期的非常爱意。
2．剧本式： 如眉山一考生满分作文《善良归家》 时间：寒冬的一个早晨 地点：一片茫茫的荒原上 人物：善良、金钱、地位、权力、时光老人
背景：善良被人们扔到了一片寒风呼啸的茫茫荒原上，那儿荒无人烟，只有善良一人在无边无际的荒原中走着。（画外音：善良正急切地想着回家，想着回到人们的心中。）
（突然远处有一辆奔驰轿车从善良身边急驰而过，金钱上，善良似乎看到了回家的希望）
善良：停车！停车！（满怀希望地招着手）
金钱：你是谁呀？为什么在这半路上挡我的车呢？（边说边探出头来）
„„（限于篇幅，后文略）
小作者围绕一个主题，采用短剧的表现形式，用场景揭示事件发生的背景，用舞台提示展示细节，用人物的台词阐述事件的发展情况或表明作者对生活的见解，新颖独特的构思，让人拍手叫好。
3．小标题式： 如同电影拍摄手法，将围绕主题的文章材料进行多方位甚至是随意的抓拍几个镜头，使整个事件由孤立到联系，从片面到全面，形成一个整体。各个镜头用小标题或者序号标列，能给人层次分明，条理清晰的感觉，又能避免单调的过渡。如：河南一考生的满分作文《打造蓝天》就用了三个十分抢眼的小标题：“起风了”、“下雨了”、“云散了”，从表面上看，它们是自然界天气变化的写照，深入文章，你会发现它们更是“我”心理变化的形象表述，通过小标题，文章的情节一气贯通。
4．童话寓言式： 如江西考生的满分作文《一条海豚的幸福感受》中作者用拟人的修辞手法，以童话故事这一表现形式，采用换位思考，站在第一人称的写作角度，写出“我”——一条海豚回归大海时的幸福感受。辽宁考生的《一棵老槐树的自述》、云南考生的《做一片云，真好》、益阳考生的《书国的罢工》、淮安考生的《“鼓励”自传》、安徽考生的《真走访记》等满分作文将“老槐树”、“云”、“书本”、“鼓励”、“真”等形象事物或抽象事物拟人化，采用童话寓言形式，带给人独特的感受。
5．其他形式：诸如书信、故事新编、微型小说、演讲词等形式，作者们围绕文章内容，找到与之相适应的、独具特色的形式，从而让文章以创新之光照亮评卷老师的眼睛。
四、炼语言——语不惊人死不休
孔子说：“言之无文，行而不远。”意即 文章要讲究文采，讲究美，没有文采的文章，就难以传播。同样的道理，中考作文要想获得高分，富有文采的语言表达是必须的。优秀作文语言生动活泼、魅力深厚的奥秘有三：
1．妙用动词、形容词，修饰语，叠字等。如： 夕阳的余晖下，青葱的小草和着微风摇曳身姿，门卫的那只圆滚滚的大白兔乖巧地倚卧在草丛里，痴痴地凝望那片涂了油彩的瑰丽的天空。（陕西考生《拥抱现在》）
2．句式灵活多样，长短变化，整散结合。如： 出了家门便是山，一眼望不到头的大山；出了家门便是河，一眼望不到边的河。这就是我的故乡——养育了我 16载的故乡。（淄博考生《招招手儿，豆角般的月儿》）
3．巧用修辞格增添文采。
（1）善用排比，如： 和善，犹如一股春风，一场春雨，吹拂滋润着荒凉的大地；和善犹如一盆炭火，温暖着每个心灰意冷的生命；和善，是一剂良药，是阴云遮不住的晴空，是一朵馨香的花朵。待人和善，给自己快乐，也带给人们幸福。（江西考生《待人和善》）
（2）妙用比喻，如： 主题音乐跳跃的音律中还透着一丝丝的轻柔，像柔纱抚过面庞，像淡云掠过蓝天，像细雨亲吻大地，令我难以释怀。（甘肃考生《歌声与微笑》）
（3）灵活引用诗句、歌曲、名言、俗语、谚语、歇后语等等，如：
“１”是一个擎天柱，是正直，是不屈不挠的骨气。于是，我们有了“人生自古谁无死，留取丹心照汗青”的凛然正气；有了“我自横刀向天笑，去留肝胆两昆仑”的英勇无畏；有了“有心杀贼，无力回天，死得其所，快哉快哉”的英雄气概。（郑州考生《欣赏数字中的语文》）
“请把我的歌，带回你的家，请把你的微笑留下„„”每当耳边想起这熟悉的旋律，自己就好像遇见多年不见的老朋友一般，感觉格外亲切。（甘肃考生《歌声与微笑》）
（4）回环反复，如： „„在其中辨明了真善美，分清了假丑恶，不亦乐乎。„„在其中体验知识的真谛，科学的美丽，不亦乐乎。„„在其中，我读得更多，想得更多，书使我渐渐成长，不亦乐乎。
早晨起来，品香茗读散文不亦乐乎。中午，倚阳光读小说不亦乐乎。晚上，靠窗边读诗词不亦乐乎。(天津考生《读书是快乐的》)
（5）生动比拟：如“ 随手攥一把肥沃的月色，都会芳馨出孤独与哀愁„„”、“月色在倾听”（安徽考生《成长是一种体验》）
（6）其它修辞格，如夸张、反问、设问、对比、对偶等，只要我们巧妙运用，一定会亮人耳目，怡人心扉。
五、炼书写——粒粒珠玉落银盘
近年来，卷面整洁、写字工整，已经成为中考作文的一项重要评价标准，不少地市的中考在写作要求中，明确说明书写（或卷面和书写）占5分。除了作文要求中有明确的规定外，创造一个清楚整洁的文面，还会增加评卷老师对你的作文的印象分。作文的书写要注意几点：
1、用颜色比较深的（最好用蓝黑钢笔），笔头也比较粗的钢笔、圆珠笔书写；
2、标点使用正确规范；
3、杜绝空格、拼音、错别字；
4、尽量把字写得大一点，撑着格子写。
第三篇：中考满分作文集锦五
写给未来的信 林垒垒
未来的自己： 你好！
时间如流水，转眼已初三。初一刚进教室的情景还历历在目。但那已经是过去，重要的是未来。未来是否灿烂辉煌都掌握在你手里，现在的你是否准备好了呢？
这个年纪的我们有些许的迷惘。其实现在的任务是读书，相信你努力过后，一定会有或多或少的收获。也许你会说周围有太多的诱惑，那你为什么不能像莲花一般出淤泥而不染呢？假若你是一心向着学习，怎会被诱惑呢？
你总抱怨上天对你不公平。其实上天对每一个人都是公平的。你总抱怨自己的努力没有收获。也许你付出的努力太微不足道了吧！在剩下的一年里，要改掉所有的坏习惯。按时完成作业不拖拖拉拉，课余时间别总是想着玩。上课别出神„„太多的陋习，必须要改。否则成功只会离你越来越远。
中考一天一天近了，每过一天都更近中考一步。是否能在中考绽放美丽，就在今后的日子了。过去的都已经过去，历史不可能重改。决定未来的是现在，未来是否发光发热就看现在的决定。
每个人都曾失败过，别因为一点挫折就灰心丧气，失去信心。每一次的失败都会有原因，而这些失败的教训就是以后成功的垫脚石。失败不可怕，可怕的是今后再也没有信心努力。其实没什么大不了的，哪跌倒的在哪爬起来就是了。
分数不是重点，重点是每次考试后的反思。如果你只关心分数，那么你永远也不会进步。每一次的考试都是检验自己，我们应该去找自己哪里不足，然后加以改正。
每天进步一点点，在中考那天则是更大的进步。为自己大喊一声：“加油！”
恭祝 天天进步！
曾经的你 2010 9 4
写给妈妈的一封信
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亲爱的妈妈您好:
首先女儿祝妈妈心想事成，永远平安。
妈妈，您的节日即将来临，三八妇女的节日，也是全国所有妈妈的节日。在这里，我祝全国所有的妈妈，身体健康，节日快乐。
3月8日，是个特殊的节日，我们的学校也开展了四个一活动。一个会心的微笑；一句真心的问候；一次倾心的沟通；一次力所能及的家务；作为送给妈妈的礼物，我要把妈妈给的爱，在行动上。要把妈妈给的爱永存在心间。作为激励自己的力量。以前，也许是我没有长大的童心，总是惹得妈妈生气；也许是我的任性，娇气，忘记了妈妈的操劳；也许是我的无知，总觉得妈妈的话忠言逆耳；妈妈，我错了；现如今，女儿已长大。懂得了您的那份操劳，叮咛，关爱和教诲；懂得了您的一个眼神，一个拥抱，一件微不足道的小事，都能让我感觉到你，一个伟大母亲的爱，唯一的一份母爱。
妈妈，您总是早早的起床，把早餐准备，为了上学让我吃好；送我上学时，拥抱一下说，宝贝，上课时可要认真听讲，听老师的话；您总是在送我上学到校门口时，看着我走进学校的大门，直到我走进教室已看不见我的身影；放学时，当我排着队走出大门时，看见你会心的眼神，我知道，（转载自本网http://www.xiexiebang.com，请保留此标记。）那是您
一个母亲对孩子的期盼和等候；妈妈，我更忘不了晚上睡时，您总是轻轻的吻我的额头，还说，宝贝晚安，祝愿我做个好梦；有时，我的无理取闹，忠言逆耳，您总是耐心的给我讲解，和我沟通，直到我懂得什么是对，什么是错，什么是好，什么是坏。怎样学会做人的道理；
妈妈，您还记得小时候的一件事吗/当时天气很冷。晚上当我告诉你我还有七篇日记没写时，你很生气。就连回叔叔家的路上，你还生气的批评我，您跟奶奶和叔叔说，在学校，班主任和语文老师都很喜欢我，因为我的学习成绩一直在班里前列；也因为期末考试的成绩，您和爸爸都觉得为我娇傲；当您说到这里，妈妈，您哭了，您流下了怕我不争气的眼泪；妈妈，当您流泪时，我也很难受，知道自己错了，所以不敢出声。我明白也知道，您是怕我过节的时间，又开始了贪玩的童心，忘记了学习，怕我在班里的成绩会滑下去。妈妈，是我错了，现在我已经长大，懂得你的教诲。报答您的养育之恩。
妈妈，是您给了我人世间最真，最可贵的爱。让我在这个世界里充满了阳光，忘记胆怯和恐惧；也是妈妈您伟大的母爱，让我的生活更加美好甜蜜，温暖幸福。
此刻，我只想对你说，妈妈，我爱你！
您的女儿：淑婷
第四篇：中考英语满分作文
中考英语满分作文
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town.Most of people were farmers.There were few factories.The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes.They had a hard life.Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years.The people have found a lot of ways of making money.Now there are many tall buildings.They are very beautiful.Roads are wide and clean.People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.Many people have cell phones and personal computers.People’s living conditions have improved a lot.Thanks to the government’s efforts.my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.It’s our duty to protect our environment.No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy.We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling.We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields.We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places.We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public.If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better.三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy.To improve the environment means to qualify our life.What should we do to improve our environment ? We should plant more trees.And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields.Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin.Don’t spit in public places.Don’t draw on public walls.It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better.But our environment is becoming worse and worse.It’s very bad for our life.Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce(give off)waste gas.More and more trees are being cut down.There are so much sand on the earth(leaving only sand).We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes.Water in the river is quite dirty.We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities.Now we are in danger.It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well.I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better.五、Make our world more beautiful!
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends., and we should share the world with them.We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home.We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school.It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It is not good to spit in
public places, such as in the library, in the class.We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there.Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.And we should do some cleaning often.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside.I live in a small village.There is a river near it.Lots of trees are around my house.I can see a lot of farms and birds.There is less noise.The air here is cleaner and fresher.There are fewer cars.I read aloud early in the morning.When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky.It’s very quiet.What a nice place I live in!
八、How to learn English well
As we know , English has become an international language.It is more popular than any other language in China.English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world.But how to learn it well ? The best way is to use it all the time.If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well.At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully.We should spend enough time in practicing English.If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day.九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone.It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well.I like English very much.I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class.In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary.After class , I do my homework carefully.I watch English movies and listen to English songs.I have booked an English newspaper.It’s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it.I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods.I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day.That’s all.十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it.I was quite worried at that time.Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully.If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help.Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes.In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world.It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand.It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world.It's widely used for business between different countries.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too.It is really a bridge to so much knowledge.English is used by travellers and business people around the world.It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used.That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.English is so useful that we must learn it well.Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class.十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions.They have greatly changed our life.Many people have their ideas and wishes.They want to invent some new things for the world.I am one of them.I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient.Our life will become better and better.Now I am a high school student.I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games.There will be many people to come to China from all over the world.Most of them don’t know Chinese.They want to visit many interesting places in China.I can be one of the guides.I can make much money, too.How happy I will be!So from now on , I must study hard.I am going to learn English every day.I will try my best to make it come true.十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life.It’s very useful.I often search the Internet for some information.I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it.I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet.The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life.I like the internet very much.How about you / Will you have a try ?
十五、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us.Without it, we can’t do work better.We can go shopping without going out of our houses.And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.It can also help a lot with our study.We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible.But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games.It’s bad for our eyes and health.If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine.It's a great invention in many years.It develops very quickly.The smallest computer is as big as a note-book.We call it pocket computer.Computer becomes more and more important in many ways.It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages.It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it.It can give us a lot fun.十七、The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important.We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this.They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes.Some factories even pour waste water into the river.As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.十八、Water
Water is very important for our life.Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash.Water is necessary for all plants.They need water to grow.People can’t live without water.Plants will die without water.It is important to all living things.However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean.At the same time we should save as much water as possible.十九、I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health.I often felt tired when I was studying before.From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning.After class I often go to play basketball with my friends.Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons.So please take exercise as often as possible.二十、Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei.I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000.I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on.I like English best.My favorite sport is football.My hobbies are drawing and computer.I’m very happy to live in a happy family.There are 3 people in my family.My father is a doctor.My mother is a teacher.We love each other very much.二十一、My best friend
My best friend is---He is 15 years old.We are both in the same class.He works very hard.He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons.He is always ready to help others.My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class.His parents are both teachers.They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home.He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong.He likes playing football very much at school.We often play football together and he plays it pretty well.He gets on well with us.Everyone in our class likes him.保护环境及动物
Protecting the Forests
Now in some places of our country, a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland.The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller.Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years.It is really a terrible thing.Where the forests disappear, dust storms will occur occasionally.The weather will get hot and dry.The whole earth will become a big desert.A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere.Life will be difficult for everyone.The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities.Therefore , we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests.We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green ,the water clean, and the sky blue.锻炼或健康饮食
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious.So they often go out of school to buy something which they like to eat.But I’m afraid that it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school，because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.In my opinion，if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside，they should make the food more delicious，and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.自己英语学习的体会
Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class.Don't be afraid of making mistakes.Then try to listen and read more in Chinese.What's more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I'm sure
you will succeed through your hard work.With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter，more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest.While many like to join package tours fro convenience，I prefer to travel on my own.旅游的感受和经历
I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss； and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.
第五篇：中考满分英语作文
中考满分英语作文
1、voluntary labour
你于“五一”前夕----4 月 28 日上午九点钟，与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加一次公益劳动（voluntary labour），全班分成了三组。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。
劳动任务安排
参考词汇： litter 果皮纸屑等废弃物
注意：
1.短文必须写出提示及表格所列出的全部内容。
2.词数 100 左右。
3.日记的格式已为你写好。
参考范文：
April 28th Saturday Fine
It was Saturday，just before May Day.My classmates and I went to the park nearby，we didn't go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.We got there at 9：00.We were divided into three groups and then began working.The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers.The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches.The group I was in got to the Children's Playground and wiped all the equipment clean.We worked very hard.At 11：00，when all the work was finished up，all my classmates met again.Although everyone was in a sweat，yet we felt happy because we had done good job.2、My Chinese Teacher
以“My Chinese Teacher”为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:
1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。
2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。
3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。
參考范文：
My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we＇re getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.3、对作弊现象的建议
目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议：
1、作弊有害；
2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；
3、学校应减少考试。
要求：
1、字数80-100；
2、围绕要点可适当发挥；
3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit--cheating in examinations.參考范文：
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.
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