2008年6月大学英语四级考试作文（优秀范文五篇）

第一篇：2008年6月大学英语四级考试作文

新东方学校四级作文教师 李艳华

Among various recipes one enjoys in his or her college life, recreational activities can by no means be ignored.It is numerous activities, such as spoken English competitions, sports events, and clubs and societies of different interests, that help to make campus life colorful and diversified.Facing so many interesting extracurricular activities, we college students have trouble to choose the proper ones.As freshmen, we are confused by all kinds of posters for students’ clubs to recruit new members.There are two opposite views about recreational activities.One says they exert positive influence on a student’s physical and mental development, for they can explore a student’s talent, develop a student's ability in communication, and teach them to be more independent.While, opposite voices can also be heard by asserting that recreational activities waste too much time, and therefore may hinder student from focusing on his or her study.As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm, because I have always been of the impression that as a college student, he or she, besides the academic information, should pick up more practical skills to be better prepared for the career development.Recreational activities do give us a good chance.And, so long as one can arrange the time by reason, activities besides study will definitely provide more benefit for us.Recreational activity

In people’s daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.Such activities are beneficial as well as harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately.On one hand, recreational activities can help us to not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others.On the other hand, if we spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying our working, which in turn may lead to further consequences.As far as I’m concerned, recreational activities should be done within a certain limit so that we can keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities.Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study.Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically;while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives.Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities.At last they are lured away from their study or their work.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them.Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.分析：此次写作题目与昨天我们预测的写作题目之一The Internet重合度非常高，都属于正反论证类，需要考生论述正反两方的观点，并最终表明自己的观点。写作中可用的句型和表达也与The Internet的范文达到高达70%的重合度。具体参加下面的预测范文。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in hinese:

1.有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率

2.还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习

3.你对于网络的看法

The Internet

In the era of information and technology, the Internet has played an improtant role in our society.With the Internet, it's easy to get the information we need, improving the efficiency of our study and work.We can't deny that it is impossible for lots of people to achieve great success in the modern society without the Internet.However, some people think that the Internet has a bad effect on the growth of the teenagers.The teenagers are too young to resist some temptations from the Internet.Some of them indulge themselves in the Internet and at last are lured away from the study.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of the Internet and make the most of it.Meanwhile, we should teach the teenagers how to use the Internet positively, and make the Internet a tool for their healthy development.21st century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities ranging from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones, the latter of which is a great appeal to the young generation.So I’d like to narrow my topic down to online recreational activities.It goes without saying that various activities brought by modern technology have greatly broadened our horizon and brought much excitement to us.With access to the Internet, you can get to know people from any country in the world and you can talk with them, play games with them---a temptation very hard to resist, and even see them via web cam.The disadvantage, however, is that anyone who lacks self-control would very easily get lost and become addicted to the online world, which in turn might seriously affect their life, work and interpersonal relationships.As a college student, I think what really matters is to make better choice and exert more discipline.We’d better take advantage of good online recreational activities to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge.When it comes to those addictive, time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision.Recreational Activities

With the development of living standard, people spend more time on various forms of recreational activities.People can do sports, singing karaoke, go dancing, go to the movies, play video games or online games, or surf the Internet.Recreational activities are good to people’s health, both physically and mentally.Sports and dancing can keep people fit.Singing karaoke, playing video games or online games can satisfy people’s imagination.Surfing the Internet can bring people a lot of information and knowledge.However, recreational activities might be harmful if people are addicted.Spending too much time on recreational activities will seriously influence people’s normal lives, especially work and study.Therefore, people will benefit from recreational activities only if they take part in them properly.此次作文难度适中，沿袭了往年的常考题型—argumentation型，讨论某一主题的利弊。本

次题目recreational activities涵盖面宽，因此考生需要注意把话题缩小到某一个范围，对于大学生而言，对于网络上的娱乐活动可能更有话可说，所以可以把这个很泛的话题限制在网络娱乐活动。而对于网上活动的利弊想必同学们都可以说出一二，好处比如能够开阔眼界、增长知识，弊端就是很容易上瘾，影响学习生活；而个人的看法就是用其精华弃其糟粕，即利用其好处，对不好的地方避而远之。这是个比较容易套用模板的题目，如果同学们在考前熟悉了这种体裁的写作，拿到相对理想的分数应该不是难事。

附上该体裁写作的模板，供同学们参考。

3．Argumentation型

1）some, others, I 型

（1）模版一

There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _________(主题).Some people hold the idea that _______________________(观点A).A case in point is that _____________________________(支持观点A的例子).On the other hand, others may have a quite different view.According to them, ______________(观点B).The most typical example is that __________(支持观点B的例子).Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convincing.（2）模版二

___________(主题)is a common occurrence in our lives.The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.Some people tend to ______________ when they are asked _________________(观点A)because _______________________(支持观点A的原因).The most typical example is that ____________________________(支持观点A的例子).However, others argue that ________________________(观点B).They point out that _______________________(重申观点B)for the reason that _______________(支持观点B的原因).As far as I am concerned, I will choose to __________________(你的观点)because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.2）My View 型

（1）模版一

When asked about ______________(主题), some people hold the idea that _________________________(观点A).As far as they are concerned, _________________________(展开观点A).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion, ______________________________(观点B).The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.In the first place, ___________________________(支持观点B的理由1).In the second place, ______________________________(支持观点B的理由2).In the third place, _______________________________(支持观点B的理由3).For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe ____________(重申观点B).（2）模版二

Some people believe that __________________________(观点A).For instance, they hold the idea that ______________________________(支持观点A的例子).And it may bring them _____________________________(A带给他们的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing, _____________________________(我不同意的理由1).For another, _____________________________(我不同意的理由2).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, I agree to the thought that ______________________________(重申自己的观点).3）利弊型

（1）模版一

Nowadays many people prefer __________(主题)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand, ________________(主题的优点1).On the other hand, ___________________(主题的优点2).But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________(主题的缺点1).To make matters worse, __________________________(主题的缺点2).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its

negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________(主题)itself is neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.（2）模版二

With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of ___________(主题现象)is an example of the former / latter one.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, __________________(原因1).Furthermore, ______________________(原因2).Eventually, ________________________________(原因3).Good as ____________(主题现象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that ______________(缺点例子1).In addition, _____________________(缺点例子2).On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate __________(主题现象)and make our life more comfortable.

第二篇：大学英语四级考试作文

大学英语四级考试作文（附范文）1．书信 例1：感谢信

（1）给小何写信感谢他接待你在云南旅游（2）回忆美好的旅行经历（3）邀请小何来你的家乡做客 June 17th , 2006 Dear Xiao He, Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province.I had a fantastic time with you and your family.Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life.When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn‟t be more delighted.And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world.I had never had so delicious food!Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation? Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind.I can assure you another pleasant tour.My family and I cannot wait to see you here.Yours，Li Ming 例2：投诉信

（1）陈述你对学校图书馆的不满（2）列举图书馆存在的问题（3）希望能够得到改进 September, 11 Dear President, I am a sophomore with the Department of Law.My name is Wang Ming.I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library.You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds.It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time.In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye.Some seats in the reading rooms are „permanently reserved vacant seats‟, that is, some students “occupy” some seats they never come to use.What a terrible waste of valuable resource!Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime.And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time.These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation.Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes

Yours sincerely，2．记叙文 例：A Welcome Back Celebration 1.杨玲生病，情绪低落.2.班上同学准备cheer her up.3.举办一场欢迎party.Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend.Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month.She was depressed, sad and downhearted.She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn‟t know how to change and redirect herself.The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day.That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen.She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn‟t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark.She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day.Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise.She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room.Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears.And smile returned to her pretty face.She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her.Life is so wonderful.3．论说文

例：Buying or Borrowing Books?（1）有些人认为书应该借来看（2）有些人认为书应该买来看（3）你的选择？

Buying or Borrowing Books?

Books can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life.There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying.While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure.Many people choose to borrow books.For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money.For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them.And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”

I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling.Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish.Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books.Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.4．口语作文 例：工作总结演讲

1.简述上周五系学生会搞的一次以环保为主题的到某一湖区拾trash的活动。2.上述活动的效果及存在的问题。3.你的建议。My fellow students, Last Friday, the Students‟ Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake.The purpose of this project is to enhance(加强)the environment awareness of general public.Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists.As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job.When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support.But our work still left some to be desired.For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted.For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing.But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning.In this case we can put in more hours.And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection.Thank you.5．图表作文

A： staying at home B: traveling C: doing social investigation D: other ways

From the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations during vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.There are several reasons for the changes.Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off.Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling.Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years.Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited.In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world.In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graduation.From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad.You should write at least

words following the outline given bellow:

1.近几年来越来越多的学生选择留学

2.出现这种现象的原因

3.这种现象可能带来的影响

四级模考参考范文：

Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their education.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more.Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.There are several reasons to cause this change.First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries.They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market.Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs.And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.毕业的问题

1、Studying Abroad or Home

(1)现在有越来越多的人想出国留学。

(2)出国留学与在国内学习的对比。

(3)你的观点。

Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, more?and?more?people want to study abroad.There are students from colleges and universities, from the middle schools, from the primary schools, and people from all walks of life.What difference does it make?between studying abroad and studying home ?

Though many students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher education, I think studying home is preferable.For one thing, you don‟t have to take foreign language tests such as TOEFL and GRE.This can save you a tremendous amount of time, money and effort, allowing much of your energy to be devoted to your academic foals.In addition, if you study home ,you can stay with your family and old friends.Meanwhile , while studying home ,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university , where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time.For these reasons, pursuing one‟s higher education at home is a more realistic and sensible choice.In a word, I prefer to study home.The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance Examination

It can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraduate entrance examination year by year.Compared with before, the rate of the student taking part in the postgraduate entrance examination becomes higher and higher.In the meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising.What are the reasons for this and the possible consequences? On the one hand, there are three reasons for this.First, the job market becomes more and more competitive.As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree.Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graduation from the undergraduate.Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society.On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this.For one thing, most people will be force to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability.For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the individual but also on the society in the long run.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.表达自己对晚交论文一事的歉意。

2.说明未能按时交论文的原因。

3.表示自己将尽快把论文补交上并表示以后将按时交作业。

这是一封道歉信，写的时候要遵循道歉信的一般模式：开篇直奔主题，然后说明原因，最后提出可能的补救措施。第一段，对晚交论文及对此造成的后果表示歉意；第二段，说明理由（可信的理由，而不是随便应付老师的借口）；第三段，表示尽快完成论文。

【范文】A Letter of Apology

Dear Mr.Wang，①I am writing to apologize for my late homework.The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven‟t even started it yet.I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you.I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days.Therefore, I couldn‟t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper.As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.Fortunately I have finally fully recovered.I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future.Sincerely yours，Li Ming

◇第一段思路点评：

表明歉意

◇语言点提示：

① I am writing to apologize(say sorry)for :道歉信的常用开头句式

② assign: 分配，指定，布置

③ due；到期的，预期的

④ I‟m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式

◇第二段思路点评：

解释原因，虽然不是真的给人道歉，但是理由还是要充分的好。

◇语言点提示：

① referential: 用作参考的

◇第三段思路点评：

表明尽快完成论文，并表示以后会按时交论文

◇语言点提示：

① try my best to…..in the future: 道歉信常用结尾

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

Income Gap.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的；

2.有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的

3.收入差距对社会的影响

议论文，根据题目要求文章可分为三点：收入差距的合理性；收入差距的不合理性；对社会的影响。在叙述第一、二点时，可适当地的展开一两个小点。注意各点之间的衔接，以及论证的逻辑。

● 范文●?Income Gap

1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now.Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work.3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long.Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth.Accordingly, they deserve high pay.1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively.They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap.Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich.In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income.There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap.For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction

that they obtain from work.1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap.Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market.When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.◇第一段思路点评：收入差距的合理性

◇语言点提示： There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题 reflect 意为“反映” in one‟s view 意为“在某人看来”（分析观点时常用词组）efficiency 意为“效率”

◇第二段思路点评：收入差距的不合理性

◇语言点提示

1On the other hand：意为“另一点、另一方面”（提出相反观点，与上文衔接）

2risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”

3another point: 提出另一小点

4back up 意为“支持”

◇第三段思路点评：收入差距的影响

◇语言点提示

1As anything has two sides, so…...议论文常用句式 四级作文

第三篇：大学英语四级优秀作文

大学英语四级考试优秀范文

Part 1:2010年12月

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent

①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families.②However ,many parents goso far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college.④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence.In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success.Thus ,⑤what should parents do ?

In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything.⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence.精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。

加分亮点：beyond reproach 无可非议be accompanied by…有……陪同

declare in no uncertain terms 毫不讳言fierce competition 激烈的竞争

essential 至关重要的cling to the belief 坚信

Part 2:2010年6月

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种现象的原因是……

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning.②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible.④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation.⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day.⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling.To change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together.⑧On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English.⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation.Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.精彩点评：

①开门见山，描述现象：很多学生不重视拼写。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 说明该现象造成的结果：拼写错误连篇，文章结构混乱。④本段分析造成上述结果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具体列举不同的原因，层次分明。⑦概括提出解决问题的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …结构，针对上述成因，提出两种对应的解决方案。最后结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。

加分亮点：embarrassing 令人为难的，尴尬的give priorities to 认为优先

Put emphasis on 强调

Part 3：2009年12月

1.建设绿色校园十分重要

2.绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境……

3.为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

Creating a Green Campus

During recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular.②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected

A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students.Meanwhile ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment.Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish.In that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere.Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory results.With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出绿色校园的话题已经引起社会关注。②点名绿色校园的重要意义。③用not only..but also 句型介绍绿色校园的内涵和外延。④半倒装句的运用恰到好处，引出下文要阐述的内容，即社会各界应行动起来，推动绿色校园的建设。⑤和⑥结构连接词in the first place 和furthermore 的运用，使得论述清晰明了。⑦结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。

加分亮点：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意义

Part4:2009年6月

1.越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……

2.有人认为这样做会带来一些问题

3.在我看来…

Free Admissions to Museums?

①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge.By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns.They are right in a sense.③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily.④For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice.The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world.Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums.⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出论点。并说明这样做的目的。②话题一转，阐明这个举措的弊端。③和④运用关联词For one thing …For another…,使文章层次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 衔接文章，引出自己的观点。⑥最后提出希望，总结全文。

加分亮点：get access to 接触in favor of 赞同vivid 生动的 鲜明的Part 5:2008年12月

1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用

2.由此带来的问题

3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags

①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China.No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life.②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?

The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution.It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution.④What „s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health.⑤Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it.From June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited strictly.Consequently, people come to take environment-friendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well.⑥Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own health.精彩点评：①开门见山，提出议论点。②利用转折，承接下文，提出问题。③使用非限制性定语从句，丰富句子结构。④运用递进结构What‟ s worse …,使文章有层次感。⑤利用过渡句衔接文章。⑥使用倒装句，总结全文。

加分亮点：sharp急剧的，大量的give rise to 引起，使发生 in question 正被讨论 Consequently从此，因而

Part 6:2008年6月

1.娱乐活动多种多样

2.娱乐活动可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害

3.作为大学生，我认为…….Recreational Activities

①Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities.②There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students.③As for such a question, different people hold different views.④ Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally.⑤ While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems meanwhile.For example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well.⑥As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm.They do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too.⑦As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for us.精彩点评：①开门见山，摆出事实。②提出讨论的问题：社会对娱乐活动的争论。③模板句引出两种对立观点。④和⑤运用对比结构Some believe that…While…说明不同的观点。⑥用模板句提出自己的观点。⑦给出原因。

加分亮点：be available for 可供…之用…range from…to…从……到……

Be addicted to 沉溺于，热爱

Part 7:2007年12月

1.各大学为大学生开设了多种多样的选修课

2.学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课

3.以我自己为例……

What Electives to Choose

Nowadays, ①there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose from.These courses make the students‟ college life more colorful.②However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas.③Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be well-prepared in the future job hunting.④Some students just want to extend their interests.⑤ Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is limited.They should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years.⑥Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study.⑦As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life and job.I don‟t care about the scores I have got.I just want to be a man having a sharp and imaginative mind with different knowledge which is beyond my major.⑧So I think the possession of much

more knowledge can make my future life easier and more interesting.精彩点评：①开门见山，说明大学里开设了很多选修课这一事实。②话锋一转，支出大家选择选修课的目的各不相同。③④⑤⑥运用了Some…Some…Still others…的并列平行结构，列举不同学生的做法及目的。另外本段使用了so that, in order that 等结构，使文章结构连贯。⑦用模板句提出自己的观点。⑧再次阐明观点，回应主题。

加分亮点：well-prepared 准备好的sharp 锐利的，敏捷的imaginative 有想象力的Part 8:2007年6月

1.本社团的主要活动内容

2.参加本社团的好处

3.如何加入本社团

Welcome to Our Club

Welcome to our club!① Our “Easy-to-Learn” English club aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways.There will be varieties of colorful activities almost every week in our club, such as② English Talk Show, English Corner, English Lectures, English Songs Competition, etc.If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice.③To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way.④ In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will inevitably make your college life more enjoyable and meaningful.⑤ Last but not the least, you may participate in all the activities at a very low price or even free of charge.If you feel interested in our club, ⑥please don‟t hesitate to join us.You just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as possible.Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us.⑦Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!

精彩点评：①开门见山，支出此社团的宗旨。②列举丰富的活动，说服力强，更能吸引学生加入。③④⑤运用并列平行结构To begin with…In addition… Last but not the least…列举具体的活动。⑥语言口语化，鼓动性强。⑦再次表示“欢迎加入社团”，突出主题。

加分亮点：inevitably 不可避免地participate in 参加free of charge 免费

Part 9:2006年12月

1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会

2.有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会

3.在我看来……

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

①The CCTV Spring Festival Gala is one of China‟s most popular annual television events, watched by millions of people on the eve of the lunar New Year.②However, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to youngsters.③People in increasing numbers choose not to watch the show.They claim that the stereotyped Gala should give way to diverse modern celebrations.④However, some other people are faithful audience of it.They argue that the Evening Gala has ⑤somewhat become a tradition since it was initiated in the 1980s.⑥What‟s more, watching the show is an indispensable part of the festival for them.⑦Though the Gala is no longer popular with young people, I enjoy watching the show with my family.⑧Yet to maintain the interest of the young generation, the organizing committee should develop a program more exciting, more colorful and more entertaining than the previous ones.⑨For example, it‟s a good idea to invite some big names in China‟s film and music industries to perform on the Gala stage.精彩点评“①开门见山，支出春节晚会的影响力。②话锋一转，提出问题。Show使主语表达简介。③和④是分别引出争议双方观点的结构。⑤somewhat起缓和语气的作用。⑥表递进关系。⑦这一句型用于提出自己观点。⑧不定式结构表目的。⑨举例说明。

加分亮点：lose one‟s appeal 失去吸引力 stereotyped 老套的 give way to 让路，让步Initiate 开始indispensable 不可缺少的Part 10:2006年6月

1.有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的科任老师

2.学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素

3.学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题

On Students Selecting Lecturers

①Nowadays students in some universities are entitled to the option on lecturers for some specific courses.This offers students a more flexible and more efficient way of learning.However, there are several factors for students to consider when choosing their ideal lecturers.②On the one hand, the lecturer‟s academic background plays an important role in the decision.An ideal lecturer may give the students much knowledge in his specific field.③On the other hand, the students should take the lecturer‟s character into account.Without good character, a lecturer can‟t set a good example for the students.④What‟s more, ⑤the ideal lecturer is one who has an interesting teaching style and a good reputation among the students.⑥Free choosing of lecturers may bring to the students many advantages, such as encouraging students to take an active part in classes and putting more pressure on lecturers to improve their teaching quality.⑦Nevertheless, it also brings along the terrible fact that some top lecturers will be ignored if they are not able to please the students.To conclude,⑧ further attention should be paid to this matter.精彩点评：①句首开门见山，直述主题。②③④为并列平行结构，列举学生需要考虑的因素。⑤定语从句使句式多变。⑥将“选课“这一动作转换为名词形式。⑦同位语从句使句式多变。⑧运用pay attention to “关注”的被动形式。

加分亮点：be entitled to 被赋予……option on 在…..方面的选择权 play a role 起作用Take into account 考虑在内

第四篇：大学英语四级优秀作文

范文1

1.现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象

2.保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性

3.作为一个大学生应该怎样做

Attend Your Classes Regularly

Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes.And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over.Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly.First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning.That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study.Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too.Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students.Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on.And some day we’ll benefit from it.点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本预测题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。

范文2

1.宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;

2.一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;

3.如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life.But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members.On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life.Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any.Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you’ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist.Thirdly, you’ll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.范文3

假设你是一名学生志愿者，要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、教学现状以及未来目标等。

A Brief Introduction to the University

Distinguished guests,Welcome to our university.Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account

of the school.Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city’s earliest universities of liberal arts.It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students.In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates active in professions of all walks of life.Since its establishment, the university has always steered itself toward the objective that its students have an overall healthy development.Not only does it provide the students with basic academic courses, but it manages to expose them to the up-to-date knowledge.Besides, students are free to participate in colorful campus activities and social practice, which are intended for broadening their mind and developing their potential talent.Currently, both our faculty and students are making every effort to improve the quality of our education in the direction of a first-rate university.Thank you.范文4

假设你是李明, 你的一个朋友张伟准备到你所在的城市来旅游，但你有事不能接待。写封信给他，解释你不能接待的原因，并说明你所做的安排。

A Letter to a Friend

Dear Zhang Wei,I’m glad to know that you are coming to my city during the summer vacation.However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news.I’m planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit.All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference.More importantly, I’m lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference.I really can’t miss it.I understand that it’ll be your first time to this city and I’m your only friend here.I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport, and you can stay in my room.He is a very nice person and he will show you around the city.Hope you two will get on well and have a nice holiday!Yours,Li Ming

范文5

1． 有人认为大学里应独自生活

2． 另一些认为大学里应与别人同住

3． 你的看法

Living alone or Living with Roommates

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory.Opinions are divided over the matter.Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves.They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own.They can have their own timetable without disturbing others.They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own.With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly enriched.They can learn a lot

from talking to one another.By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging.Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.

第五篇：大学英语四级考试

大学英语四级考试流程

8：50---9：00试音时间

9：00---9：10播放考场指令，发放作文考卷

9：10取下耳机，开始作文考试

9：35发放含有快速阅读的试题册（但9：40才允许开始做）

9：40---9：55做快速阅读

9：55---10：00收答题卡一（即作文和快速阅读）

9：55---10：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试

10：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音

听力结束后完成剩余考项。

11：20全部考试结束。

注释:

1，标准分满分710分=听力248.5＋阅读248.5＋综合测试106.5＋写作106.5。

2，从听力、阅读部分的换算表可以看出，错前两分的时候，标准分扣分严重，1分扣10.5分，错到第3分的时候，标准分扣分有所降低-7分，扣到10分以后，标准分扣分就更低（3分），可见，标准分换算目的是把同学的成绩档次拉开，让特别优秀的同学脱颖而出，要想总分取得630分以上，必须保证很高的正确率，卷面扣的前几分在标准分的权重相当大。这也就解释了为什么考630分以上的同学这么少！据换算，要考630分，阅读和听力部分卷面每部分扣分在3分左右。

3，综合测试的分数权重不大，卷面错1分在标准分中扣的分也相对较少，而且完型填空题量大，得分率不高，在考场上建议大家不要把完型填空耗费掉太多的时间，得不偿失！

4.当你拿到成绩单，上面写着290，那么恭喜你，你的卷面成绩为0分。如果425+，就算顺利通过