第一篇：高考英语作文万能句子看完保你高考英语作文满分 不看后悔
十、表示重要、方便、可能
1：It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do sth.对于某人做……是……
2：It plays an important role in our life.十一、采取措施
1：We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施
2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难
3：We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……
4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的困难
十二、显示变化
1：Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多变化
2：Great changes will certainly be produced in the international
communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化
3：It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…
4：The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%
十三、表明事实现状
1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……
2：No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……
3：This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.4:be closely related to ~~（与...息息相关）
十四、进行比较¬
1：Compared with A,B……与A比较，B……
2;I prefer to readrather than watch TV.十五、常用英语谚语¬
1：Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩
2：All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子
3：All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马
4：A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半
5：Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊
6：A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里
7：Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母
9:It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老
10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人
12.Where there is a will there is a way.有志者事竟成批
如何连接
强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case,anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列举 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example, except(for), to illustrate.时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.让步 although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转折 however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand,unfortunately, whereas
原因 for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as a consequence
总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他 mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently,frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case
1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
(英语作文网收集整理)
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例： Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading
extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示坏处
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmfulto us．
例： However，everything dividesinto two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi-sion．
各个题型的全在这儿拉人，你自己看下吧
对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1． 有一些人认为……
2． 另一些人认为……
3． 我的看法……
The topic of ①------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------(理由二).Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）.The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）.For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④
-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)．
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
1． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．
2． 分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that
----------------(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,-----------------(理由一).For example,-------------------(举例说明).Secondly,----------------(理由二).Another case is that---------------(举例说明).Furthermore ,------------------(理由三)．
In my opinion,----------------(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please
remember the say------A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it
解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1． 问题现状
2． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(说明A的现状)．Second,---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解决方法一).For another-------------(解决方法二).Finally,--------------(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m
confident that a bright future is awaiting us because--------------(带来的好处).说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
1． 说明事物现状
2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(A的优点之一).Besides-------------------（A的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------(对前景的预测)．)
议论文的框架
(1)不同观点列举型（选择型）
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to
person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes
without saying that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more
_______, the more ________.实用性写作(申请信)
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in....And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising..../ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.On the one hand,....On the other hand,....I am enclosing my resume for your kind
consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an
interview.I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest
convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,X X X
英语作文模板：现象说明文
Recently ____,what amazes us most is_______,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons explaining____.Themain reason
is_____.What is more________________.Thirdly______________.As a
result_______________.Considering all there,____________.For one thing_______,for
another________
____.In Conclusion____________________.
第二篇：高考英语满分作文
2010范文
范文1
Grasping the knowledge of those youngsters with naïve faces raising their hands high and expecting to inform their teachers of their novel answers from the picture, I could not help envying them, since our childhood was considerably different from theirs.Once we entered the primary school, we were instructed by teachers to keep both our hands on our backs and were forbidden to talk or move hands freely when they were speaking, which led to our uneasiness in class and deprived us of similar smiles on the picture.The divergence, I believe, should be attributed to the different educational system and concept between China and western countries.While they are encouraged to give full play to their creativity and curiosity, not willing to learn and instilled with a large amount of knowledge in order to obtain the admission letters from established universities and companies.Thus we are cultivated into identical “top-students” instead of creative individuals.Therefore, I eventually conclude that the next generation of our nation should be granted with more freedom to fully tap their potential and become all-round people.范文2
As we all can see, the lovely students in the picture are so active that they all put their hands high, hoping to express their own opinions.It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and everyone enjoys it.That’s great, isn’t it?
The picture also reminds me of the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public.Just like me, during my class, our classmates just listened to class, and everyone was watching me!I even prayed that my name would never come to my teacher’s mind.But as time goes by, I grow up, so as my mind.I realized that the situation show in the picture was far better.Children are all curious about everything, and knowledge will only be acquired by an inquiring mind.Those who dare not to speak out will never know anything new.The childhood without asking is not a real childhood.We should also keep the curiosity now, and forever.That will benefit you in the rest of your life.范文3
From the picture, it can be easily seen that four primary students are raising their hands to answer the questions.So happy and excited are they that I see their eagerness for knowledge, which is powerful in all our life.Therefore, unlimited as knowledge is, we should keep our enthusiasm to learn.When it comes to my first day in my primary school, I felt curious about everything.When my teacher asked questions, all of us raised our hands including some to answer them … wonderful moments in my life because although we were little kids, we carried our passion for learning new knowledge, which is beautiful and mysterious in our hearts.We were just like the children in the picture, active and creative.It was at that time that knowledge appealed to me.Just as Bacon wrote in 1597, knowledge is power.I reckon that all of us should keep out enthusiasm to explore in the known and unknown worlds.Time-consuming and painstaking as it might be, nothing can stop a willing and curious heart.Only by living knowledge can we strive to learn.And only by gaining more knowledge can we become powerful, thus achieving our success and living out our values!
There is no one but can resist the charm of knowledge, just like these students.Having an active heart and persevering in learning, the day we succeed will surely come!
范文4
When I first saw the picture, I was deeply moved.In the picture, foreign pupils are having a lesson.Although they have just entered the elementary school, they are quite outgoing and energetic.They all raise their hands and want to take an active part in the lesson.The smile wearing on their faces indicates the confidence in their heart.I am moved by their enthusiastic attitude towards study, school life and even future.However, it reminds me of my personal experience when I was at their age.Since I was a Chinese pupil, I as well as others was required to obey the strict rules of school.We sat quietly or even silently in the classroom and listened to the teacher’s words.There were not many live discussions and the “teacher talking, students listening” was the most common pattern.I am shocked by such astonishing differences between Chinese education and foreign education.However, I gradually realize that the key factor leading to the difference lies in the culture background.Both of them have their advantages and shortcomings.Students like me who belong to Chinese classroom can learn to develop a sense of obeying rules which is essential for us to be good citizens.However less involvement in class may make students less creative.On the other hand, those pupils in the picture enjoy a relatively more open atmosphere and they can express and learn freely and actively.But their sense of obeying rules becomes weak.So, in my opinion, as both coins have two sides, the two kinds of education can learn from each other to come up with a better one.And this can be beneficial to both the development of students and the communication between cultures.范文5
Holding their hands up, smiling confidently to the teacher and being eager to answer the question, nowadays the new primary students seem to consider a class as an excited adventure.Their shinning eyes are like sweet blossoms which remind me of my golden days in the primary school.Compared with their active attitude, I was always so shy that I tried my best to hide my ideas.Praying not to be chosen to answer the question, worrying about the likely embarrassment, I filled my class time with anxiety.However, with time gone without trace or sound, I gradually realize what precious treasures I have lost.I gave up my confidence which was able to lead me to the paradise of success;I missed valuable experience which could lit the ragged road to the future;I also rejected my right to make mistakes as well as to be corrected.As the saying goes, what we must conquer are not rocky mountains but ourselves.Mistakes are not our opponents, instead they equip us with courage, wisdom and lessons.Do not be afraid to face difficulties, bear it in mind that they train us for the better and that only with the belief in ourselves can we embrace the beauty of life!
Thank you, my dear angels.You bring confidence, smiles and positive attitudes towards life back to me.I hope that you can keep smiling to whatever you may face in the future.I hope that I can hold my hand up like you the next time!
第三篇：英语高考满分作文
英语高考满分作文
英语高考满分作文1
Hi Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am willing to help you with your Mandarin. As a native Chinese speaker, I can speak Chinese clearly and fluently, and my teachers think highly of my spoken Chinese. I have taught some foreigners Mandarin, which makes me have much experience in teaching.
As for speaking Mandarin, it’s better to pay much attention to the pronunciation. Besides, you must take notice of the handwriting. And you also should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.
In return l hope you can help me with my spoken English. When I speak English, I often feel a little nervous. Can you give me some advice on how to overcome that?
Looking forward lo hearing from you.
Li Xia
英语高考满分作文2
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. For most people, it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of ing, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.
It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse. A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn't always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing.
Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
英语高考满分作文3
中考英语满分作文：对学生作弊的看法
目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议：1、作弊有害；2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；3、学校应减少考试。
要求：1、字数80-100；2、围绕要点可适当发挥；3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit--cheating in examinations.
参考作文：
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.
目前，许多中学生养成了坏习惯，考试作弊。主要原因有三。首先，学校给学生太多的考试，其中一些是太困难。其次，一些学生不勤奋，不努力学习功课。第三，他们浪费了很多时间玩游戏或上网。所以他们没有足够的时间为考试做准备。最后，学生们这样做他们的老师和家长高兴。在我看来，考试作弊行为对我们的学习有很大的危害。我们学生应该诚实，勤奋，只有这样我们才能提高我们的`学习和进步。此外，我们的教师应该为我们提供较少的考试和更多的时间来研究自己。
英语高考满分作文4
高考满分英语作文开头句
1.Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……)
2.Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此，我们的出这样的结论……)
3.There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.(毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点)
4.All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的`解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)
5.It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)
6.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视)
7.Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……)
8.Only in this way can we ……(只有这样，我们才能……) 5：Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
9.Obviously，if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.(很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险)
10.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会……)
高考满分英语作文结尾句
1.For one thing,…… For another thing，…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……
2.I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如下。
3.The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的办法是……
4.As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言，…… 3;It is obvious that……很显然……
5.It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的，但这并不意味着……
6.It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的，但我们不应忽视……
7.There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……
8.It has the following advantages.它有如下优势
9.It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处
10.It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处
英语高考满分作文5
Dear Dad(Mum),
You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
【翻译】
亲爱的爸爸（妈妈），
你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗？为什么不步行到办公室吗？你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的'选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。
爸爸，请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康！
您的爱子（女）
汤姆（玛丽）
英语高考满分作文6
【全国卷II】
【试题回放】
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：
1.地点：距白山入口处500米;
2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
【名师点评】
本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的'句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利
好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are
very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。
高考英语满分作文范文4
【全国卷】
【试题回放】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：
1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。
例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。
这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。
积累卡片英汉互译
好词
1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育
好句
I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的`感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。
评析：定语从句的使用。
高考英语满分作文范文5
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书
3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的.原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
高考英语满分作文范文6
【试题回放】
实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的'英文演讲稿。
注意：
1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
高考英语满分作文范文7
高考英语满分作文(上海)
描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：
详细描述用餐的情况
简要表述你对这次午餐的感受
这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的`东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found
elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)
一、语法解构
现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang
倒装句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be
不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen
状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.
在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently。
高考英语满分作文范文8
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的'亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Yours,
Li Hua
英语高考满分作文7
As is shown in the picture above, two men react in completely opposite ways when faced with the same event: A bottle fell off on the ground, and the wine inside spilt out. One is smiling, feeling glad that he still has the rest half of the wine while the other is sighing in great desperation saying that “everything screwed up!” The cartoon tells us that being optimistic and being pessimistic are two different attitudes towards life. Faced with a challenge, a pessimistic person may feel gloomy and distressed. He considers himself powerless, and complains about it all day long, refusing even to have a try before giving it up in the end. An optimistic person, however, may adopt an entirely different approach. He may not regard the challenge as something that bad; instead, he takes it as an excellent opportunity to display his abilities and talent. As an old saying goes, “The way you perceive the world will determine your way to cope with it.” In my point of view, though it is natural that we encounter challenges of one kind or another in our life, we should be optimistic whenever we are confronted with challenges. If we are pessimistic, we are destined to fail, ending up accomplishing nothing. But if we approach the challenges in an optimistic way, we may go from victory to victory.
正如图中所示，两人的反应完全相反的方式面对同一个事件：一个瓶子掉在了地上，而里面的酒洒了出来。一个微笑，感觉很高兴，他还有剩下的酒一半，另杰出的绝望的叹息说：“一切都搞砸了！这幅漫画告诉我们，乐观和悲观是对生活的不同态度。面对挑战，悲观的人可能会感到沮丧和苦恼。他认为自己是无能为力的，并且整天抱怨，甚至拒绝在最后一次尝试之前就放弃了。然而，一个乐观的'人可能会采取完全不同的方法。他可能不认为这是一个坏的东西，相反，他把它作为一个极好的机会来展示自己的能力和才华。正如那句老话，“路上你感知世界将确定您的方式来应付它。”在我看来，这是很自然的，我们遇到的挑战一种或另一种，在我们的生活，我们应该乐观时，我们所面临的挑战。如果我们是悲观的，我们注定要失败，最终一事无成。但是，如果我们以乐观的方式接近挑战，我们可以从胜利走向胜利。
英语高考满分作文8
there was a little boy with a bad temper. his father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper, to hammer a nail in the back fence.
the first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. then it gradually dwindled down. he discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence. finally the day came when the boy didn't lose his temper at all. he told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one nail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. the days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone. the father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. he said, “you have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. the fence will never be the same. when you say things in anger, they leave a scar just like this one.
you can put a knife in a man and draw it out. it won't matter how many times you say i'm sorry, the wound is still there. a verbal wound is as bad as a physical one. friends are a very rare jewel, indeed. they make you smile and encourage you to succeed. they lend an ear, they share a word of praise, and they always want to open their hearts to us.
有一个坏脾气的小男孩。他的父亲给了他一袋钉子,告诉他,每次他发脾气,后面栅栏上钉一个钉子。
第一天,男孩就在篱笆上钉了37个钉子。然后它逐渐减少。他发现更容易保持自己的脾气要比往篱笆上钉钉子。终于有一天,男孩没有发脾气。他告诉了父亲,父亲建议男孩现在每天拔出一颗钉子,他能够保持他的脾气。日子一天天过去,小男孩终于能够告诉父亲,所有的钉子都消失了。父亲拉着儿子的手,带他去篱笆那儿。他说,“你做得很好,我的儿子,但看看栅栏的洞。篱笆永远不会是相同的`。当你发脾气的时候,他们留下的伤疤就像这一个。
你可以把在一个男人和一把刀拔出来。它不会不管你说多少次对不起,伤口依然存在。口头的伤口和身体一样糟糕。朋友是一个非常罕见的宝石,的确。
英语高考满分作文9
Should tourists take photos with animals? Koalas in wildlife parks can't fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists' behaviour illegal to protect the animals. When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons.
Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit. If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn't feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself. However, I don't agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals.
Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can't have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time, during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.
游客应该给动物拍照吗？考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。
不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。
原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的'对比拍照与其他人。
其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。
我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。
游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。
它既能满足游客和保护动物。
英语高考满分作文10
【例文】
A teacher just likes a shining
A teacher just likes a shining star to students.Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my life.I happened to be in Miss Fu's class when I began my high school years.At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation were poor.Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to them.For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken English.When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to speak.First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite them.In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise speaking.Little by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before others.Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English contest.Whenever I look at the stars in the sky, I recognize the brightest one----the symbol of Miss Fu in my heart.Miss Fu will always be a shining star in my life!
【译文】
老师只喜欢闪闪发光
老师只喜欢一个耀眼的明星学生。傅小姐，我的英语老师之一，是我生命中的一颗璀璨明星。
我恰好在傅小姐的阶级被当我开始我的高中年。当时，我不敢大声说话公共英语，因为我很害羞，我的发音和语调①较差。怕别人笑，我从来没有把我的手傅小姐回
答的问题在课堂上提出的，即使我已经给他们一些好的答案。一时间，我什至失去了练习英语口语的兴趣。当傅小姐发现了原因，她鼓励我发言。首先，她给我买了一些英语磁带，叫我仔细听取他们的意见，并尝试把它们背出来。在课堂上，我经常问的`问题，并给了很多机会练习speaking.Little一点点，我就敢于说话，而不是害怕别人之前发言英语。傅小姐甜美微笑的时候，她听到了我被选中参加一个重要的英语口语比赛②部分消息。
每当我在看天上的星星，我承认在我心中最亮的一----陆富的象征。傅小姐将永远是我生命中的一颗璀璨明星！
英语高考满分作文11
June 8th
Dear Haiqing,
I hear you are very unhappy these days because your parents can’t afford to buy you some brand-name shoes and garments you like very much. And I write you this letter to share with you what I think about this matter.
To begin with, beauty is just skin deep. Don’t you think it silly to pay so much attention to your appearance? He is a shallow person who judges others by their appearance; in the same sense, he is a shallow person who thinks that a brand-name garment can add to his glamour. So please, just forget about those brand-name things. What really matters is not whether you wear brand-name shoes or garments but whether your clothes fit you. As a student, you have to wear the school uniform on the weekdays and to be honest, you look very smart in it. Then why do you have to bother to buy the expensive brand-name things?
Secondly, I know your parents are both average workers. Hard as they work, they don’t earn much. Despite this, they do their best to give you a lot of things on demand. Look at the callus on their hands and wrinkles on their faces, how can you have the heart to ask for more than they can afford, which will surely break their hearts? Remember, parents don’t owe us expensive summer camps; they don’t owe us Sony Walkman; nor do they owe us Nike shoes, If you really want those fancy things, you should take a part-time job to contribute to their purchase rather than ask your parents for money to add to their already heavy burden. Don’t you think so?
Thirdly, we have such a wide variety of things available these days which are both nice and inexpensive. What’s the point of paying much more for those brand-name things that are not much better? My friend, take my advice, and you’ll be a wiser consumer as well as a more considerate child to your parents.
Poverty, sometimes, is a good thing. It can test a person’s character and it makes a man out of a boy faster than anything else. Keep working hard, and you are bound to be able to afford those things in the near future. Now you may as well focus on your study. Anyway, wouldn’t it be funny for a would-be achiever to be so preoccupied with brand-name things all day long?
Keep in touch.
Yours
Huangping
6月8日
亲爱的海青,
我听说你现在很不高兴因为你的父母买不起你一些名牌鞋和你非常喜欢的衣服。我给你写这封信与你分享我的想法。
首先,美丽只是表面的。你不觉得这么多关注你的外表很愚蠢吗?他一个肤浅的人通过他们的外表来判断他人;在同样的意义上,他是一个肤浅的人认为名牌衣服可以添加到他的魅力。所以,请忘记那些名牌的东西。真正重要的不在于你穿名牌鞋子或衣服但你的衣服是否适合你。作为一名学生,你必须穿校服在工作日,老实说,你看起来非常聪明。然后你为什么要费心去买昂贵的名牌的东西?
其次,我知道你的父母都是普通工人。他们努力工作,也挣不了多少钱。尽管如此,他们尽自己最大的努力给你很多东西。看看愈伤组织手上和脸上的皱纹,你怎么能忍心要求超出他们的承受能力,这肯定会打破他们的心?记住,父母不欠我们昂贵的夏令营,他们不欠我们索尼随身听;他们也不欠我们耐克的鞋子,如果你真正想要的那些花哨的东西,你应该采取兼职工作有助于他们的购买,而不是向你的父母要钱增加了沉重的负担。难道你不这样认为吗?
第三,我们有各种各样的东西可用这些天既好又便宜的。有什么意义的付出更多的那些名牌的东西不是更好吗?我的朋友,听我的劝告,你会是一个明智的`消费者,以及一个更体贴的孩子你的父母。
贫困,有时候,是一件好事。它可以测试一个人的性格,速度比什么都快。继续努力,你一定会在不久的将来能够买得起这些东西。现在你可以专注于你的学习。无论如何,一个潜在成功者，整天专注于名牌的东西不是很有趣的呢
保持联系。
你的
黄平
英语高考满分作文12
我们是中学生，我们都忙于功课。所以有些人认为我们应该把更多的精力放在研究。如果我们的志愿者去帮助别人，这是浪费时间。但我认为志愿服务是伟大的。我不仅觉得帮助别人还得花时间做我喜欢做的好。从志愿服务，我学到了很多东西，我从来没有在课堂上学到的.。所以如果我有机会，我想去老人家，帮他们打扫。我还想帮助生病的孩子住院。我爱孩子，我希望将我的爱通过住院好用。总之，我想帮助需要帮助的人。如果人人都献出一点，世界将更加丰富多彩。
英语高考满分作文13
生日宴会 Birthday party
Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to go but I can't. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming math exam. I'm very sorry but I can't go to your party. Thank you for asking me. I hope you can have a good time. From Wei Hong
亲爱的汤姆，谢谢你邀请我参加你的生日聚会。我很想去，但我不能。我的父母出差了。他们下个月要回来了。现在我不得不照顾我的奶奶，因为她在床上生病了。我还需要学习我即将到来的`数学考试。我很抱歉，但我不能去你的聚会。谢谢你问我。我希望你能有一个好时机。从韦宏
英语高考满分作文14
English reading
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：
1. 参加英语角的益处;
2. 坚持写英语日记的.作用;
3. 英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。
注意：1. 词数：120-150;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I take an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.
作为一个高中生，我认为英语是一个非常重要的学科。为了学好英语，除了英语课之外，我还积极参加英语角和英语课外活动，这对我来说很有好处。
In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I have been keeping on doing it for years and it is helpfl to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make rapid progress. Finally, EnjoyReaing contributes a lot of my improvement. Through the English website, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. What’s more, I can learn a lot, which play an important part in my study process.
在英语角，我遇到了很多朋友，他们和我有着相同的兴趣。此外，有时也有一些外国人愿意加入我们。通过与他们交谈，我的英语口语进步了很多。我还发现有助于保持英语日记。我一直坚持做了多年，这对我的英语有帮助。俗话说，实践是完美的。只有通过实践我们才能快速进步。最后，喜欢阅读贡献我的很多改进。通过英文网站，我可以阅读一些经典的英文文章，诗歌和故事。更重要的是，我可以学到很多，这在我的学习过程中扮演一个重要的部分。
英语高考满分作文15
With the approach of Shanghai World Expo，what has caused the public concern is whether the local government should follow Beijing to take strict measures to restrict the use of private cars during the Olympics to solve the serious traffic problems.
Shanghai experts have voiced different opinions about it，I hold that current traffic situation should be st，as more and more private cars flood into cities，city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking nghai，the host city of the Expo，has been exposed not only to the problem of increasing population，but to the problem of the overcrowded traffic.A second problem is the physical growing number of private cars，whose exhaust sends huge quantities of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere，makes the air of cities unbreathable.
All the action the committee will adopt just reflects the theme of 20xx Shanghai World Expo”Better cities，better lives"。So，what’s your choice?
第四篇：高考满分英语作文
Drunken Driving Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.
Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations
should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past.
第五篇：英语高考满分作文
英语满分作文 Dear Bob,I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here.I’ve already found you a house near our school.I’d like to tell you something about it.You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School.The house is near the school.It is about 25 square metres.In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window.You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it.There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom.The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen.So you may cook by yourself.The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。
作文：Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I’ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know.I’ll try my best to help you.Yours,Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。
60％的同学认为
40％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象
1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrancefee should be charged for parks． Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,Li Hua
Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free.If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly.Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable.Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and
trees.As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays.At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park.After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order.Do you agree with me, dear editor?Yours truly,Li Hua Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees.For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?
My Favourite TV Program(我最喜欢的电视节目)I like the program“Animal World”.First of all, I like animals, especially small animals.Secondly, the host is able to make the program lively and interesting.Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I haven't known before.I gain some knowledge about animal life, such as, different lives of various kinds of animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the importance of animal protection.I want to say that animals are part of nature as we are.They can not be separated from the humans.We must keep nature in balance.Please give your love to animals.Stop killing them.我喜欢“动物世界”这个节目。首先，我喜欢动物，尤其是小动物。第二，主持人把节目办得既生动又有趣。另一方面，通过这个节目，我知道了许多以前不知道的关于动物生活方面的事情，例如不同动物的不同生活习惯，人与动物之间、人与自然之间的关系，还有保护动物的意义。
我想说的是，动物是自然的一部分，它们与人类不可分割，我们必须保持生态平衡。
请把你们的爱给它们吧，不要杀害它们。
“Animal World” is my favorite program.First of all, I like animals,especially small animals.Secondly, the host has the ability to make the program lively and interesting.Thirdly, through this program I know a lot of things that I haven't known before.I gain some knowledge about animal life such as different lives of different animals, the relationship between people and nature, people and animal, and the meaning of animal protection.Now I understand animals are part of nature as we are.They can not be separated from the humans.We must keep nature in balance so that we will have a good life in the future.Let's love animals.Never do any harm to them.“动物世界”是我最喜欢的电视节目。首先，我喜欢动物，尤其是小动物；第二，主持人把节目办得既生动又有趣；第三，通过这个节目，我知道了许多以前不知道的事情，获得了一些动物生活方面的知识。例如，不同动物的不同生活习惯，人与动物之间、人与自然之间的关系，还有保护动物的意义。
现在我懂得了，动物像我们一样是自然的一部分，它们与人类不可分割。我们必须保持生态平衡，才能使我们将来的生活更好。
热爱动物吧，不要再伤害它们。
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