如何写好英语四级作文

第一篇：如何写好英语四级作文

考生如云，如何在60分的高考作文中拿到56分以上的好成绩?9日下午，来自广州市八区的1100多名高三学生齐聚广州市第六中学，聆听校园达人“堂上作文大家说”，为作文考高分“取经”。

三位专家———华南师范大学教授、广东高考语文评卷作文题负责人陈妙云，羊城晚报编委、花地编辑部主任何龙及广东省特级教师、执信中学语文科组长曾湖仙来到现场，与高三学生切磋了堂上作文的高分秘笈。

三大得分点：

要“深度”“个性”?

“审题”“角度”“语言与结构”

堂上作文要求考生在特定时间和空间里，独立完成符合既定要求的文章。高考作文的主要功能是选拔，所以，评价高考作文与评价日常写作的文章会有所不同。那么，如何拿到56分以上的高分呢?

陈妙云介绍说，一篇“一等文”应包括三个方面：符合题意、中心突出、内容充实、思想健康、感情真挚，这是“内容一等”;符合文体要求、结构严谨、语言流畅、字迹工整，这是“表达一等”;而深刻、丰富、有文采和创意则构成了“发展一等”。一篇作文如果能同时符合这三个“一等”，至少能得50分。

一篇作文的内容能反映学生的审题水平，而作为选拔性的堂上作文，审题最能区分考生的理解与思维水平。陈妙云说，作文题干常常会有提示语，如果考生只用例子去印证提示语，没有写出自己的分析和深刻的感悟，就不可能得高分。“提示语仅仅是启示考生作文思路，但对题意的理解和感悟，还得由考生去进行思考。”

“一篇文章应试的角度，能区分考生的思维与综合能力。”陈妙云强调，角度清晰是高分作文的前提条件，角度分散会造成没有中心论点或在800字这有限的篇幅内无法写深写透。她分析说，一篇800字的作文，只写一个角度更好，如果写两个角度，就等于考生自己把作文的水平降低为400字的作文了，而这往往是那些对作文缺乏自信心的考生逃避难度的“办法”。这“办法”不好，反而压抑了自己

的写作潜能。

“高分作文还需注意文章的语言与结构，这最能考核学生的表达能力。”陈妙云以实例分析了语言水平的差异。她还提醒说，考场作文一般是一写定稿，因此考生“在动笔前，就要构思好，明确中心思想、段落布排、详略分配等，应胸有成竹，不宜边写边想。有些学生在文章快写完了才发现字数不够，于是忙乱找材料凑数，造成‘狗尾续貂’的现象，这最容易被扣结构分。”

昨日的现场会还安排了高考作文的评析环节，陈妙云对8篇广州一模作文“多走一步”评析讲解，而这些例文均是考生常写的议论文、散文和记叙文。陈教授最后强调，作文备考，应着力在“审题”、“角度”、“语言与结构”这三个得分点上提高水平。

要“深度”“个性”?

多领域举例+逆向构思

作文如何才能有“深度”和“个性”?曾参加过高考阅卷的广东省特级教师、执信中学语文科组长曾湖仙介绍说，要想写出高分作文，考生要选择自己擅长的文体题材，并在理解题意、确定基本观点后，迅速搜寻材料库中的个人生活经历和可以论证观点的各种材料，选择足以感人的生活经历写记叙文，或比较新颖的观点、比较新鲜的材料写议论文。

“有的学生为了说明一个问题举了多个例子，但这些例子都是同一个领域的。例如科技领域的爱迪生、爱因斯坦、法拉第或贝尔，这样的作文难以给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。”曾湖仙提醒，高分作文的举例要兼顾多领域，尽量避免使用同一领域或同一性质的多个例子。

除此之外，曾湖仙还认为，考生可以尝试异向、逆向的立意构思，来达到主题思想的突破，他认为这是作文“个性化”的方式之一。以作文题“刚与柔”为例，曾湖仙说，这篇作文可以选择的角度除了刚与柔之间的排斥、制约或相伴的关系外，还有一种相互转化的辩证关系，如“至柔则刚或有柔则刚”，如果用这种辩证关系来立意行文，就可以显示出文章的“个性”。

如何思路多样化?

角度多样、避免“穿越体”

作为羊城晚报的编委和知名评论员，何龙写过无数篇针砭时弊的评论文章，对于高考作文，他认为可以尝试多样化的“写作思路”。

何龙认为，多样化的写作思维方式包括多个方面。他以作文题“多走一步”为例说，可以从“意向选择”角度出发，衍生出“走还是不走”的思考;而从“方向选择”角度出发，可以衍生出“多走一步”往哪里走的思维方式;从“倾向选择”则又可以衍生出“多走一步”究竟走多少的思考，此外，他还认为可以从“导向选择”、“趋向选择”、“价值判断”等角度尝试写作。

何龙在列举、分析几例高考零分作文后还提醒说，高分作文应该尽量避免“穿越体”。

何为穿越体?他举例说，有一位考生在作文中写道：“在很小的时候，我听过一个传说：在我国古代的某一天晚上，著名天文学家唐玄宗一边走路一边观察天象，没有留意到脚下一个窨井盖被偷走了，结果掉进下水道，很久以后才被消防队员捞出来。”何龙认为，“这样的‘穿越体’在作文中要慎重使用。”

■达人过招

“在动笔前，就要构思好，明确中心思想、段落布排、详略分配等，应胸有成竹，不宜边写边想。有些学生在文章快写完了才发现字数不够，于是忙乱找材料凑数，造成‘狗尾续貂’的现象，这最容易被扣结构分。”

“有的学生为了说明一个问题举了多个例子，但这些例子都是同一个领域的。例如科技领域的爱迪生、爱因斯坦、法拉第或贝尔，这样的作文难以给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。”

“高分作文应该尽量避免‘穿越体’。何为穿越体?有一位考生在作文中写道：‘在很小的时候，我听过一个传说：在我国古代的某一天晚上，著名天文学家唐玄宗一边走路一边观察天象，没有留意到脚下一个窨井盖被偷走了，结果掉进下水道，很久以后才被消防队员捞出来。’这样的‘穿越体’在作文中要慎重使用。”

■现场问答

议论文写出深度

可尝试三个途径

问：写作文尤其是议论文时，深刻与否直接与高分相关，如何能写出有深度的文章来?

陈妙云：作为议论文，深刻才能得到高分，但怎样深刻没有唯一的答案，我认为有三个途径可以尝试。

首先，角度一定要集中。作文在构思时首先要找好一个切题的角度，用800字来说透一个问题，这是深刻最容易奏效的方法。

其次，联系实际也可以使文章深刻。现在倡导关注社会、关注生活、关注人生，“家事国事天下事事事关心”。试想一下，如果离开生活的实际，依照几个常见的已经准备好的例子拼凑出文章，这样的文章肯定没有竞争优势。

比如，以作文题“多走一步”为例，改革开放到今天，已经没有回头路了，但接下来往哪里走，怎么走，这些就是应该关注现实，但遗憾的是，在送给我阅览的文章中，还没有人想到这个社会上关注的话题。

最后一个使文章“深刻”的方法就是在作文中集中论述“为什么”和“怎么办”。在此之下，想几个分论点都行，但需要注意的是，这些论点间要有内在逻辑关系，必须集中在一个中心论点之下。

问：刚才讲到，审题中，材料可以不被依照，甚至依照材料写文章会成为“没深度的作文”，那怎样才能使作文不偏题呢?

陈妙云：常见的问题是提示语说到什么，考生就去用例子来印证它所说的观点，而不再深入一步，这样的作文才是“没深度的作文”。需要指出的是，提示语是引导学生答题时思路的提示，你可以按照这个思路去发挥，也就是说，提示语是思路开发的提示，而不是感悟的定性，考生还应该沿着提示的思路去写出自己的感悟，如果提示语说什么你就写什么，那就等于放弃

了自己的感悟。

第二篇：英语四级考试作文总结(超好)

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第三篇：四级英语作文

预测主题之第十位：友谊

Friendship is a kind of human relations.It is a human instinct to make friends.When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement.With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy.It implies loyalty, cordiality, sympathy, affection,and readiness to help.No man can make the most of his life without carefully and conscientiously striving to win the right kind of friends as he goes along.Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends.Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.Real friends can share all our sorrows and double all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities.Then we should treat our friends with courtesy, be careful not to interfere unreasonably with them,and not to ridicule their proceedings.We should forgive their failures and do our best to help them.In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to cherish and treasure it by means of words and deeds.Only thus, can we develop real friendship and keep the sacred lamp of friendship burning all our life.预测主题之第九位：压力

As the pace of life continues to increase, we are fast losing the art of relaxation.Once you are in the habit of rushing through life, being on the go from morning till night,it is hard to slow down.But relaxation is essential for a healthy mind and body.Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it.In fact, it is not the bad thing as it is often supposed to be.A certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and give purpose to life.It is only when the stress gets out of control can it lead to poor performance and ill health.The amount of stress a person can withstand depends very much on the individual.Some people are not afraid of stress, and such characters are obviously prime material for managerial responsibilities.Others lose heart at the first signs of unusual difficulties.When exposed to stress, in whatever form, we react both chemically and physically.In fact, we make a choice between “flight or fight”and in more primitive days the choices made the difference between life or death.The crises we meet today are unlikely to be so extreme, but however little the stress, it involves the same response.It is when such a reaction lasts long, through continued exposure to stress, that health becomes endangered.Such serious conditions as high blood pressure and heart diseases have established links with stress.Since we cannot remove stress from our lives(it would be unwise to do so even if we could), we need to find ways to deal with it.预测主题之第八位：节约

As is vividly revealed in the drawing above, water is being wisely utilized in the daily life of a family.The good conduct is indeed praiseworthy and should be popularized in our society.The implied meaning of the drawing can be stated as follows.To begin with, to practise economy is closely related to our daily life.In terms of our clothing, food, sheltering, and transport, much work can be done to save valuable energy and natural resources such as power, water, coal, gas and so on.We, as university students, should take the wise use of paper and second-hand textbooks into consideration.What’s more, the public participation is the foundation of a society in which to practise economy is advocated and treasured.Since social environment is shaped by the general public, the cultivation of economy-practising society depends on the active involvement of every member of our society, be he old or young.In sum, our daily life should be1

permeated with the sense of practising economy and public participation should be encouraged.In my view, necessary measures should be taken so as to practise economy.On the one hand, we should launch a public campaign to help people build up the sense of practicing economy in our routine life.On the other hand, education on how to practise economy must be promoted by relevant government departments and professionals at different levels.Only in this way can we create a real economy-practising society.预测主题之第七位：健康

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That“s why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon,there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.预测主题之第六位：竞争

Competition is a common phenomenon in our social life.We compete when we play games and when we try to do better than others in our study.There is constant competition for academic degrees, jobs, customers, money and so forth.In a sense, competition is one of the motive force to the development of society.In fact, the only way our world reward people is to give laurels to the winners, not to the losers.What is more, by attempting to compete at different activities, we learn to win and lose, gain experience and know our strengths and weaknesses.Competition prepares us for the tough things in life.To go ahead, to acquire possession, we should be competitive.To us, industriousness and ambition are positive values.Whether in games, in study or in business alike, the aim is to win the game, the degree, the trophy(战利品), and the contract.Learning to be competitive is clearly the best preparation for life.预测主题之第五位：纪律

Some people say that the best way to raise children is to them to be independent thinkers.Other people disagree and say that children need to be taught discipline in order to let them successful.In other word, children should either be granted freedom, or be given more discipline.I tend to agree with a policy of firm discipline.The people whose view places emphasis on encouraging children to think freely hope the child will be able to understand and govern the world.The child is considered as an “equal” to the adult.This view has been popular in the western countries, where corporal punishment of children is now illegal.The concept of “rights” for children is part of a wider political movement

that also asserts right for women, animals and environment.Discipline is justified because adults are generally wiser than children.Discipline in childhood fosters(养育)the child for the hardship of his future life.预测主题之第四位：自信

Confidence is power--the power to attract, persuade, influence, and succeed.Imagine what your life would be like if you had an abundance of selfconfidence!Confidence isn”t an inherited trait, it“ s a learned one.This means that you can have an abundance of self-confidence.The very first thing you have to do to create abundant self-confidence is to start thinking with confidence.Pay attention to your internal dialogue, and learn to notice when you allow negativity or doubt to control the course of your thinking.Your environment has a tremendous influence on you.The books you read, the people you spend time with, and the music you listen to all influence the way you think and feel about yourself and the world around you.If you”re in a situation where you"re discouraged, such as an unhealthy relationship or a miserable job, you have to change that situation if you want your self-confidence level to grow.Create an environment that supports you if your desire to have abundant self-confidence.Spend time with confident people.预测主题之第三位：心理

As is apparently betrayed in the bar chart above, at present university students suffer from psychological problems of various kinds, among which spiritual depression, miscellaneous problems, and suicide-committing top the list.What the chart reveals is indeed thought-provoking.The implied meaning of the chart above can be briefly stated as follows.On the one hand, university students are encountering more psychological problems than ever before.The fact can be attributed to many factors.Most university students are overloaded with study and haunted by employment pressure.As young and inexperienced people, they are also facing emotional dilemma and trial of human interrelationship.Besides, some students are in a financial predicament.On the other hand, necessary psychological work for university student is a must for the time being.It is quite shocking that at least forty percent of university students suffer from spiritual depression.The very fact should not be neglected.Effective countermeasures must be taken to reverse the current grim situation.In sum, the psychological problems should be put on our agenda.In my view, great efforts must be made so as to ensure the healthy growth of university students.To begin with, we must have a good understanding the necessity of psychological instruction and guidance among university students.What’s more, government departments at different levels and related organizations should make joint efforts to

第四篇：英语四级作文

It seems to me that the cartoon / drawing is sending a message about ____________（图画内容），which reveals ____________（稍作评价）.In my perspective of view, ____________（表明个人观点）。Apparently, ____________（将个人观点和图片内容相结合，得出观点。）For one thing, ____________（从社会角度论证）.For another thing, ____________（从个人角度说明）.For example, ____________（自己、朋友或他人，只要自己知道或听过的例子）.Last but not least, ____________（从反面角度谈论）.As a result, the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _____________（建议或措施）.Only in this way can we ____________（展望结果）.In conclusion / To my understanding, ____________（再次表明观点或态度）.We should ____________（进一步说明个人的观点）.如果是图标作文,用下面的模版According to the bar chart / pie chart / line graph displays the changes in the number of____________（图表整体趋势）.There was an increase in ____________（图表细节）.At the point of ____________, ____________reaches its peak value of ____________(数据或变化).What has caused these changes? There are mainly three reasons.Firstly, ____________（原因一）.Secondly, ____________（原因二）.The number of ____________ increased over the period.____________ rose by _________ from ________ to ________________.And there were____________.Finally,____________（最后一个原因）.In conclusion / We can safely draw the conclusion that ____________（结论）.Therefore, ____________（进一步谈论更多个人想法）.

第五篇：四级英语作文

We can take a look around with ease,even the moon-cakes are usually placed in many elegant packings.The reason why excessive packing appears so widely is that most of businessmen want to earn more economic gains.As is known to us,it is not necessary to use too many boxes,but some customers believe that the more package it has,the better quality it has,it is this thought that will encourage the trend of excessive packaging.Measures ought to be taken to change the situation.From the point of my view,firstly,laws must be made and implemented to standardize packaging.Besides,education should be launched to let people recognize that packing can’t represent the quality completely!Only in this way will we avoid excessive packing!