第一篇:2011年广东省高考英语作文预测复习11
英语书面表达·要点式(格式与范例)
(1)3月15日,你班全体同学去了一家老人院。回校后,班主任要你写一份材料向校长汇报。汇报材料包括以下内容:
1.时间:早上8:00从学校出发;
2.活动内容:帮老人们洗衣、打扫房间,表演节目等; 3.向老人们赠送了一些礼品;
4.受到了老人们的表扬,下午4:30回校。注意:
1.不能逐条翻译,可以适当增加细节,使短文连贯; 2.词数:100左右;
3.短文的开头已为你写好。
Today, we went to a home for the elderly.____________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案一】
Today, we went to a home for the elderly.We started at 8:00 at school.Half an hour later, we arrived.As soon as we got there, we first gave some gifts to the old men.And then part of us did washing for them, some of us clean the rooms and the yard.After finishing the work, we put on a show.The old men gave us a lot of applause.The old men praised us greatly.So we felt very happy.At 4:30, we left the old men with a big silk banner.How joyful we were!【参考答案二】
Today, we went to a home for the elderly.And we got there by the school bus.No sooner had we arrived than we did the work as we planed.The girl students as well as the boy students did some washing and cleaning.We also took out their beddings in the sun.At last, we had a party.Although we felt tired, we were happy in the heart.At 4:30, we left the yard for school.The old men gave us a lot of applause and a big silk banner in return.
第二篇:2011年广东省高考英语作文预测复习10
高考英语书面表达写作技巧·致辞(指导与范例)
一、写作指导
在一些正式场合接待客人时,主人一般总是要说一些热情友好的话,表示欢迎,使客人感到“宾至如归”,这就叫欢迎致词;当客人在你处逗留
一段时间准备离开时,主人设宴会欢送,宾主欢聚一堂,并致祝愿,这时主人说的一些话就叫欢送致词。做好这类题目关键要注意两点:一是像做其他类型书面表达题一样,把握好提示十分重要。欢迎词,必须交待清楚欢迎谁,客人的主要身份,同时把客人介绍给大家。欢送词则要说清欢送哪一位,该客人什么时候离开,客人在逗留期间进行了哪些活动等。二是要熟练掌握一些习惯表达法,即一些客套话语,做这类题目时就不会感到无从下手。
二、实例与范文(01)
请根据以下内容提示写一篇欢迎词
假定英国客人琼斯(Jones)夫妇将到你校参观访问,他们将把一批图书和电脑作为礼物送给你们。你们将送一幅中国画送给他们。现在要你准备一篇欢迎词(speech),内容包括以下几点:(1)欢迎英国客人来参观我校;(2)感谢他们送的礼物;
(3)简单介绍你们学校的情况:学校有90年的历史,现在有两座教学楼,一座办公楼,一座实验楼,一个图书馆,和一个大运动场。教师工作认真,学生学习努力;(4)欢迎客人在参观后提建议,以改进学校工作。注意:90—120词。
Ladies and gentlemen,teachers and students,I have the honour to make a speech to welcome the respected British guests — Mr Jones and Mrs Jones.Thank you very much for your gifts — a 1ot of books and computers.In return we’ll send you a famous Chinese picture as a present.Our school is a big one.It is 90 years since it was built.Now it has been equipped with two teaching buildings, a laboratory building, a library, and a playground.The teachers are strict in their work and students study hard.After you have been shown around our school, we hope you’ll give us advice on how to improve our work so that we can run our school better.Wish you to have a good time in Our school.Thank you!
第三篇:广东省高考英语作文
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)
假设你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国,你们准备为她举办欢送会。请根据以下内容,给她写一封e-mail:
【写作内容】
1.祝贺她顺利通过考试,她的学习进步很大,为她骄傲;
2.感谢她帮助你们学习英语;
3.邀请她参加欢送会,并告知欢送会相关事宜。
1)时间:星期六晚六点;
2)地点:阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club)302房间;
3)路线:在她所住宾馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
*参考词汇:欢送会 farewell party
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容;e-mail的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数。
【评分标准】
句子结构的准确性和复杂度;信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
Dear Jane, Congratulations on your passing all the exams.____________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua
第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In my last semester in university, we must take the graduation exams.The last exam was the English linguistics.Many of my classmates would cheat in exams.I hadn’t done it before.For this, sometimes my friends were surprised and laughed at me.When I felt it very difficult to remember the phonetics form, I finally gave up reviewing it and decided to try to cheat in this exam.I was too lazy to write it down on smaller paper.Therefore I directly cut the phonetics form away from the handouts.At the very beginning of the exam, I was so sad to find that there were 30–point questions about the phonetics form on the exam paper but suddenly I felt lucky because the phonetics form was just hidden in my pocket.I first finished other questions.To be honest, I was very timid and felt so bad to take out the phonetics form from my pocket.I felt so conflicted.I finally pinched the small paper into my left hand.However, I hadn’t opened the left hand to look at the form till the exam was over.I just guessed the remaining questions to finish the exam.Fortunately, I passed the exams with 75 points.But now I feel good for my failed cheating.[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;
2.然后以约120个词对学生考试作弊现象进行议论,内容包括:
(1)学生考试作弊的原因;
(2)你对考试作弊的看法;
(3)你认为学校怎样才能杜绝考试作弊现象。
[写作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
基础写作(共1小题,每小题15分)Dear Jane,Congratulations on your passing all the exams.I am delighted you have really made great progress in your two years of studying in China.We are proud of you and we all appreciate your help with our English.It’s a pity that you have to go back soon, so a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club at 6:00 pm this Saturday evening.We sincerely hope you will come and I’m sure we will have a good time together.By the way, you may take Bus No.332 in front of your hotel and it will take you directly to the club.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.Yours faithfully, Li Hua
读写任务(共1小题,每小题25分)
Being afraid of failing an English exam and influenced by her classmates, the author decided to cheat.She hid some paper in her pocket but gave up cheating finally, which made her feel good.Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among some students.There are various reasons for this.Some students are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.Some want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Others cheat in order to win a scholarship or enter a key school.However, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ habit of study.Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard.Those who never cheat in exams will consider it’s unfair for them, thinking studying hard is no more necessary.In order to get rid of the bad effects, the school authority should take effective measures to help the students know how important honesty is.Meanwhile, a strict discipline for exams should be carried out.Whoever cheats should be severely punished.
第四篇:高考英语作文预测
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3.Though I am occupied with my study(被…占满了时间,…很忙), I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.One of my favourite hobby is reading.Reading has been in my life for many years,since I began to learn characters.It can not only kill the time(打发时间), but also, more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability.When reading, I can learn a lot.Reading Shakespear’s works, I know how Hamlet looks like.Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are.Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.Reading really affect my life.2、Different people, different hobbies.What hobbies do you have?
My hobby is singing.It’s a great hobby!It’s fun and it makes me feel proud.Singing can be used to relieve(解除)my fatigues(疲劳), and can help me improve my accent(腔调).Singing makes me happy when I“m sad.Singing songs can make you clever.I am always singing at home to share each other’s joys and sorrow(悲痛)in our life and to learn many songs.I really enjoy singing.It goes without saying that(毫无疑问)there are many different kinds of hobbies and they can not only(不仅)broaden(拓宽)our minds(智力)but also(而且)add more fun to our life.3、我的爱好(My hobby)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it.Tell the magazine readers.•What exactly your hobby is;
•When and how you became interested in this hobby;
•Why you enjoy your hobby;
•About your hopes and plans for the future.I enjoy reading books very much, because there are lots of interesting things in them.Two years ago, I didn't like reading very much.I had plenty of time, but I spent lots of time on playing with computers.When I was very young, I didn't think reading book was interesting, because I found nothing more interesting than the computer games.I've changed now.I enjoy reading novels, because there're lots of interesting stories.I love to read Harry Potter.That's a good novel.I know that it is one of the best-sellers in England.I'm always lose myself in the interesting stories.I hate the words like ”to be continued“ in a novel.That makes me very sad, because I don't know the end of the story.I also hate the words like ”the end", because I want to read more.Some of my friends think that I'm strange.Maybe you can find the interesting things in a book, so don't waste your time in the computers any more.If you read very much, you抣l get lots of knowledge.护环境的英语作文
How to protect our environment There are many ways for us to reduce waste ,We can do something in our daily life.First,we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere and draw anything on the wall.Second, we should clean up the classroom carefully everyday.Third,stop littering and put the batteries in special boxes.Finally, we must plant more trees.It can make our world more and more beatiful.I think these are some ways to protect the environment.Good environment depends on everyone in the earth.限塑令”英语作文
关于“限塑令”的高考英语书面表达参考范文两篇: 根据国务院的“限塑令”,自2008年6月1日起,在所有超市、商场实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度。广大市民对于“限塑令”有不同的看法。请针对此话题,根据下表用英语写一篇短文。
绝大多数赞成 少数反对 我的观点及理由
1.减少了塑料袋的使用
2.提高公众的环保意识
3.优化我们赖以生存的生态环境
„„ 1.给购物者带来了不便,如无法把买好的东西搬回家,或没有零钱买商场的环保袋
2.可以通过其他的方式,如研究出分解塑料袋的方法等来保护环境
„„ „„„
要求:1.词数:100—120 2.不要逐条翻译,可以适当发挥,使上下文连贯
3.参考词汇:分解 break up 环保袋 environmentally friendly bags From June1, 2008, shops and supermarkets are forbidden from offering free plastic bags to customers, according to a new law.A nation-wide campaign against plastic bags has been launched.Nowadays, Chinese people use up to three billion plastic bags a day.While being very convenient to shoppers, plastic bags also cause serious white pollution” and waste resources.Though the ban may cause some inconvenience to shoppers, it can help reduce the use of plastic bags when people have to pay for them.Besides, the ban, in away, can promote public awareness of environmental protection.So I think it necessary to forbid shops and supermarkets from offering free plastic bags.When shopping, we can use cloth bags or baskets instead of plastic bags as we used to.环境日英语作文:Water(水)Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out,water may be a solid,or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid,it may be as hard as brick,When itis a liquid,you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas,you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.Protecting the Forests(保护森林)Now in some places of our country,a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland.The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller.Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years.It is really a terrible thing.Where the forests disappear,dust storms will occur occasionally.The weather will get hot and dry.The whole earth will become a big desert.A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere.Life will be difficult for everyone.The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities.Therefore,we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests.We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green,the water clean,and the sky blue.Preserving Natural Resources(保护自然资源)
Thrdugh the changes'in the ways Of making a living in a family over several gen,erations,man has been warned against waste of natural resources and emphasizing the urgent need to preserve these resources.Ever since man appeared on the earth,man's survival has been heavily relied on nature.Almost everything we use in our everyday life comes fromm'notate,ranging from the food we eat,the water we drink,to the wood which is tm'ned into furniture.With the development of technology and population growth,the amount and range of materials used has increased at an alarming rate.However,natural resources are not inexhaustible.Some reserves are already on the brink of exhaustion and there is no hope of replacing them.The widespread water shortage is an example in point.If man continued to squander natural resources with no thought for the future,the later generations would be in danger.It is up to us to take effective measures before the situation gets out of hand.据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信,信的开头和结尾已经给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内。
假如你叫Zhang Fang,是美国中学生Lucy的笔友,你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑,谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,并表达对她的祝愿。Dear Zhang Fang,I have been in this school for two years.My school’s not too bad.But I haven’t got used to it.Some of the teachers are very good,especially my science teachers.They try to make lessons interesting.I like to have their classes and spend much time on it.So I usually get ‘A’ in science exams.But I don’t like having English and history classes.There are too many things to memorize and they’re so boring.Besides,it seems that the teachers can only read again and again.They don’t try to make lessons interesting.Whenever the lessons start,I feel sleepy.I often get ‘C’ in the exams,sometimes ‘D’。
The final exam of this term is coming.What shall I do? Could you give me some advice?
Yours,Lucy
Dear Lucy,I’m very happy to hear from you.Don’t worry too much.Many students have the same problem like you.I think it’s very common for students to dislike memorizing.Here’s my advice.But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think.If you try the following things,you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons.It can make you become interested in what the take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Han Mei
据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。(信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的回信内)。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
75.中学生学习时间长、大力大,专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。为此,不同的同学有不同的放松方式,有的爱看电视,有的听音乐,有的做运动„请你谈谈你通过哪些方式放松自己并说说原因,谈谈你的感受。
提示词语:relax,TV,music,think
The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming.In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little.Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.In order to relax ourselves,we can turn to some of our hobbies,different students have different ways---Some watch TV,some listen to music„ But for me I enjoy taking exercise most.Whenever I feel tired,I always spend an hour(in)walking or jogging in the park.Besides,I also play table tennis with my friends after class.In my opinion,taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies.I think it’s really helpful to both my health and my study.I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed.I wish you all every success in the coming examination!
第五篇:广东省高考英语作文评分标准
广东省高考英语作文评分标准
小作文的批改是看:
1、有没有把题目所提供的信息点都写齐
2、是否按照所规定的用5个句子完成
3、语法的错误
小作文的批改显然不是看关键句的大作文的批改是看:
1、内容要点的概括(这里就要看关键句子了,踩中点子和语法没有什么问题才得分。在内容概括中,我建议你不要超过40字,40字以上也许会扣分)
2、考生所写的内容和所举的例子是否切题)
3、语法是否出现错误
4、是否有闪光点(就是写得特别出众的句子)
你平时的作文大概写多少行字,在高考上面按照平时的习惯写就可以,不用去数字数,一来浪费时间,二来没有这个必要。只要不是通过老师的目测就知道你超出字数的情况下,是不会扣分的老师批改作文的速度虽快,但并不等于他只看关键句。如果你抱着这种想法去写作文的话,是不可取的。毕竟这是作文,而不是主观题,老师不可能在批改作文的时候像按照批改综合科主观题那样,只看关键词然后按点给分。