第一篇：2014考研英语作文套话总结
常用于开头的短语、句式
1．With the(rapidly)growing popularity of(computers/private cars/Jazz/football /basket ball/golf/tennis/classical music/pianos/American rock'n'roll/disco/frozen food/fast food/coca cola/coffee/telephones/mobile phones/house interior decoration/ horticulture/going abroad to study/traveling/beauty salons/insurance/credit cards/
second job/supermarkets/pets)inChina，the quality of our lives have been considerably changed.2.With the(rapid)growth of(our economy/population/private enterprises/light
industry/housing industry,)many problems such as(water shortages, traffic jams and industrial pollution/waste of energy, lack of professionals and chaotic management)are beginning to surface.3.With the development of(science and technology/market economy,/electronics industry/women liberation movement/high education)more and more people come to realize that...4.Currently, there is a widespread concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/
alcohol abuse/drunk driving/high school dropouts/teenage pregnancy/corruption of civil servants/state owned companies in deficit/unemployment/high criminal rate/high inflation rate/sexual discrimination/smoking/children with a single parent/traffic accidents/fake products/pornography/disregard of public properties/grain production/ environmental pollution/acid rains/wildlife extinction/children abuse/food shortage/ water shortage/excessive use of chemical fertilizers/traffic jam/rapid urbanization/ overpopulation/tax frauds/fire hazards around us/waste of food/waste of energy/ negative influence of western cultures/violence/decrease of farmland).5.Currently, there is a serious concern that(many state owned companies are in deficit.../quite a few Chinese cities face the problems of water shortages, industrial pollution and waste of energy).6.The government is/We are seriously concerned with(overpopulation/high inflation rate/drug abuse.)
7.In the last two decades/In the past tell years, millions of(private
enterprises/supermarkets/beauty salons/fast food restaurants/garages/private schools)have mushroomed all over China.8.In recent years, many Chinese families have owned(cars/telephones/video cameras/computers...)
9.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about...is under way in China.Some people believe that....whereas others argue that...10.There are some reasons for owning(private cars/personal computers).To begin with....Next....Last....There are, on the other hand, many reasons against it.First....Second....Finally....11.There are many advantages and :disadvantages in(owning a car)
12.Now an increasing number of people come to realize that..13.There is no doubt that...14.There are some basic differences between(the large and small enterprises)In the small enterprise you....In the large enterprise you...15.There are various/at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods)to do something.16.Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for two reasons.The first reason is that...The second reason is that...(On the one hand....On the other hand....)
17.The possible solutions of(the energy crisis/water shortages/these social problems)depend an three factors...18.Thetwo major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth/the widespread of fake products)are...19.Different people have different attitudes towards...Some are in favor of...while others are against...20.When it comes to(private cars/trade protection/abortion/human right/
urbanization/market economy/recycling/banning fireworks etc,)most people believe that...;but other people argue that...(二)常用于结尾的短语、句式
(Phrases and Sentences Used to End an Essay)在结尾段中还可以考虑下面的表达方法 如进行预见，提出建议，做出评议，发出号召或指出解
决方法等
1.It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to
2.To conclude, we can see that(the best way/the possible solution)is...3.In short,(shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution)are the major problems to be solved to(increase grain production.)
4.In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make great efforts to....5.In a word, there are three suggestions we must follow, only in this way can we(achieve a great success).6.It is time for us to take an active part in...7.Let us work hand in hand to(solve these social problems.)
8.It goes without saying that....9.I wont to(be a teacher/do sth)not only because...but also because...10.Who is to say that(you will not be the victim of fake products again and again/ our scientists may not provide a better theory)
第二篇：2014考研英语作文套话总结
常用于开头的短语、句式
1．With the(rapidly)growing popularity of(computers/private cars/Jazz/football/basket ball/golf/tennis/classical music/pianos/American rock'n'roll/disco/frozenfood/fast food/coca cola/coffee/telephones/mobile phones/house interior decoration/horticulture/going abroad to study/traveling/beauty salons/insurance/credit cards/
second job/supermarkets/pets)inChina，the quality of our lives have been considerablychanged.2.With the(rapid)growth of(our economy/population/private enterprises/light
industry/housing industry,)many problems such as(water shortages, traffic jams andindustrial pollution/waste of energy, lack of professionals and chaotic management)arebeginning to surface.3.With the development of(science and technology/market economy,/electronicsindustry/women liberation movement/high education)more and more people come torealize that...4.Currently, there is a widespread concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/
alcohol abuse/drunk driving/high school dropouts/teenage pregnancy/corruption of civilservants/state owned companies in deficit/unemployment/high criminal rate/highinflation rate/sexual discrimination/smoking/children with a single parent/trafficaccidents/fake products/pornography/disregard of public properties/grain production/environmental pollution/acid rains/wildlife extinction/children abuse/food shortage/water shortage/excessive use of chemical fertilizers/traffic jam/rapid urbanization/overpopulation/tax frauds/fire hazards around us/waste of food/waste of energy/negative influence of western cultures/violence/decrease of farmland).5.Currently, there is a serious concern that(many state owned companies are indeficit.../quite a few Chinese cities face the problems of water shortages, industrialpollution and waste of energy).6.The government is/We are seriously concerned with(overpopulation/highinflation rate/drug abuse.)
7.In the last two decades/In the past tell years, millions of(private
enterprises/supermarkets/beauty salons/fast food restaurants/garages/privateschools)have mushroomed all over China.8.In recent years, many Chinese families have owned(cars/telephones/videocameras/computers...)
9.Nowadays, a heated debate/discussion about...is under way in China.Somepeople believe that....whereas others argue that...10.There are some reasons for owning(private cars/personal computers).To beginwith....Next....Last....There are, on the other hand, many reasons against
it.First....Second....Finally....11.There are many advantages and :disadvantages in(owning a car)
12.Now an increasing number of people come to realize that..13.There is no doubt that...14.There are some basic differences between(the large and small enterprises)
In the small enterprise you....In the large enterprise you...15.There are various/at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods)todo something.16.Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for tworeasons.The first reason is that...The second reason is that...(On the one hand....On the other hand....)
17.The possible solutions of(the energy crisis/water shortages/these social
problems)depend an three factors...18.Thetwo major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth/the widespreadof fake products)are...19.Different people have different attitudes towards...Some are in favor of...while others are against...20.When it comes to(private cars/trade protection/abortion/human right/
urbanization/market economy/recycling/banning fireworks etc,)most people believe that...;but other people argue that...(二)常用于结尾的短语、句式
(Phrases and Sentences Used to End an Essay)在结尾段中还可以考虑下面的表达方法 如进行预见，提出建议，做出评议，发出号召或指出解
决方法等
1.It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to
2.To conclude, we can see that(the best way/the possible solution)is...3.In short,(shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and environmentalpollution)are the major problems to be solved to(increase grain production.)
4.In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make greatefforts to....5.In a word, there are three suggestions we must follow, only in this way can we(achieve a great success).6.It is time for us to take an active part in...7.Let us work hand in hand to(solve these social problems.)
8.It goes without saying that....9.I wont to(be a teacher/do sth)not only because...but also because...10.Who is to say that(you will not be the victim of fake products again and again/our scientists may not provide a better theory)
第三篇：考研英语作文总结句
1.Any gov which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.任何政府忽略这一
点将付出，巨大的代价
2.Nowdays 当前
3.at the mere mention of 一提到
4.In view of the seriousness of this problem,effective measures should be taken
before things get worse.考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效地措施
5.It is disputable that 无可争辩
6.Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that...7.In fact, ve to admit the face that… 事实上，我们不承认…这个事实
8.We should spare no effort to the …我们应该不余力地
9.This is a matter of ld death-a matter no country can afford to ignore.这是一个关
系国家生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视
10.This view is now beintioned by more and more people.这一观点越来越多的质
疑
11.Despite many obvious antages of …,it is not without its problem.12.Many experts point out that,along with the development of modern society,it is an
inevitable resulr and ts no way to adviod it.许多专家指代社会发展的必然结果，无法避免
13.Keep a favorable pon in… 保势
14.As for me,I’m firmly convinced that 就我而言，我坚定地认为
15.In the first place首先
16.But is it really case？
17.Negative impact 负面响
18.Sth have worsened sth…使…恶化
19.It is suggested that governmeht to make efforts to 建议政府应该努力…
20.In conclusion,we ke into account toblem rationally and place more emphasize
on… 总之，我们应该理智考虑这一问题，重视…
21.Need sth more ever 比任何时候需要
22.Sth have gone bad to worse 每况愈下
23.So precious is te that wn’t affort to waste it.时间如此珍贵，我们不能浪费它
24.There is no one but longs to 人们都希望
25.Around the c迫在眉睫
26.We should bring to people the value of doing sth 我们应该让人们知道…的价
值
27.As a popular goes,”everything has two sides”.28.Moderni program 现代化建设
29.Be linked to …与…有关
30.Quite a相当多
31.No inventis received more praise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明像互联
网一样同时受的赞扬和批评
第四篇：考研英语总结
研英写作常用100句精选
1．随着经济的快速发展with the rapid development of economy
2．人民生活水平的显著提高 / 稳步增长
the remarkable improvement / steady growth of people’s living standard
3．先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4．面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5．人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed / recognized that…
6．社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7．引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern / draw public attention
8．不可否认 It is undeniable that… / There is no denying that…
9．热烈的讨论 / 争论 a heated discussion / debate
10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11．完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12．一些人 …而另外一些人 … Some people… while others…
13.就我而言 / 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally，14．就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on…
15．有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16．双方的论点 argument on both sides
17．发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…
18．对…必不可少 be indispensable to …
19．正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
20．…也不例外 …be no exception
21．对…产生有利 / 不利的影响 exert positive / negative effects on…
22．利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.23．导致，引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in
24．复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25．责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility / sense of achievement 26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27.开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon / broaden one’s vision
28．学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29．经济 / 心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30．考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account / consideration
31.从另一个角度 from another perspective
32．做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33.对…有益 be beneficial / conducive to…
34．为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35．打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for…
36．综合素质 comprehensive quality
37．无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach
39．致力于 / 投身于 be committed / devoted to…
40.应当承认 Admittedly，41．不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42.满足需求 satisfy / meet the needs of…
43．可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44．宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
45．因特网 the Internet（一定要有冠词，字母 I 大写）
46．方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47．在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48．环保（的）environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49．社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50．科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology 51．对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52．支持前 / 后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former / latteropinion
53．有 / 提供如下理由/ 证据 have / provide the following reasons / evidence
54．在一定程度上 to some extent / degree / in some way
55.理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56.…必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…
57．日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58．眼前利益 immediate interest / short-term interest
59．长远利益.interest in the long run
60．…有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits / advantages and disadvantages
61．扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62．取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.63．对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to
64．交流思想 / 情感 / 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information
65．跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …
66．采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth.67．…的健康发展 the healthy development of …
68．有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.No garden without weeds.69．对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person.70．重视 attach great importance to…
71．社会地位 social status
72．把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…
73．扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74．身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75．有直接 /间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…
76.提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
77.可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief that
78．缓解压力 / 减轻负担 relieve stress / burden
79．优先考虑 / 发展… give(top)priority to sth.80．与…比较 compared with… / in comparison with
81.相反 in contrast / on the contrary.82．代替 replace / substitute / take the place of
83．经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84．提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85.社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86．毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
87．增进相互了解 enhance / promote mutual understanding
88．充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of
89．承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
90．保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91．更多地强调 put more emphasis on…
92．适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
93．实现梦想 realize one’s dream / make one’s dream come true
94.主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:
95.首先 First，Firstly，In the first place, To begin with
96．其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place
97.再次 Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore
98.最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly，99.总而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word，100．我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to go.考研英语作文八类常用高频词汇
第一篇：词汇篇
1、经济：
economic globalization（经济全球化）sustainable development（可持续发展）unfair competition（不正当竞争）
crack down on fake commodities（打假）boom（繁荣）
fierce competition（激烈竞争）credit crisis（信用危机）stabilize prices（稳定物价）
2、文化：
great and profound（博大精深的）integration and interaction（融合交汇）crash（碰撞）
charming（极具魅力的）splendid（壮丽辉煌的）English fever（英语热）
3、环保：
environment-friendly（生态型的，环保的）threat of global warming（全球变暖的威胁）
promote fundamental shifts in the economic system and mode of economic growth（促进经济体制和经济增长方式的转变）
curb environmental pollution/ bring the pollution under control（治理环境污染）develop renewable resources（开发可再生资源）a low-carbon economy（低碳经济）
4、科技：
science and technology（科学技术）web-addiction（沉迷网络）computer crime（电脑犯罪）e-commerce（电子商务）virtual life（虚拟生活）information era（信息时代）cyber romance（网恋）surf the Internet（网上冲浪）
5、就业：
applicant（申请人）
position available/ vacant position（空缺职位）competent（能胜任的）be qualified for（合格的）proficiency（熟练程度）
job arrangement and benefit（工作待遇和福利）promotion(晋升)gender-biased（性别歧视的）appearance-biased（相貌歧视的）
6、大学生活/教育：
cultivate（培养）
further one’s study（深造）quality education（素质教育）foster abilities（培养能力）
relieve the burden on students（减轻学生负担）be occupied with so much schoolwork（忙于功课）place emphasis on（以…为重心）comprehensive（全面的，广泛的）practical capability（实际能力）duck-stuffing（填鸭式）
7、社会现象：
enlightening（富有启发的）
cause alarm and attention（引起了警惕和重视）set good example for（为…树立榜样）dedicate（做贡献）take action（采取行动）
ensure implementing activities（确保执行）vulnerable（易诱惑的，易受影响的）be supposed to（应该）
8、人物特征、情感描写：
strong-minded（坚强的）industrious（勤奋的）promising（有前途的）dynamic（有生气的）responsible（有责任心的）influential（有影响力的）profound（渊博精深的）devoted（忠实的，投入的）warm-hearted（热心的）第二篇：句型 词组搭配
1.随着经济的繁荣 with the booming of the economy 2.随着人民生活水平的显著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard 3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology 4.为我们日常生活增添了情趣 add much spice / flavor to our daily life 5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed that…
6.我同意前者（后者）观点 I give my vote to the former / latter opinion.7.引起了广泛的公众关注 sth.has aroused wide public concern./ sth has drawn great public attention.8.利远远大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.9.开阔眼界 widen one's horizon / broaden one's vision 10.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into consideration 11.从另一个角度 from another perspective 12.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to…
13.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly keen social competition 14.…有其自身的优缺点 … has its own merits and demerits / pros and cons 15.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to / be detrimental to 16.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas / emotions / information 17.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of… 18.…的健康发展 the healthy development of…
19.把时间和精力放在…上 focus one's time and energy on… 20.导致很多问题 give rise to / lead to / spell various problems 21.可以替代think的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion / belief / view that 22.优先考虑/发展… give(top)priority to sth.23.与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with 24.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
36句谚语考研写作
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。3.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race.稳扎稳打无往而不胜。7.A fall into the pit,a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。8.Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。11.More hasty,less speed.欲速则不达。12.It’s never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。13.All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。17.Great minds think alike.英雄所见略同。18.well begun,half done.好的开始等于成功的一半。19.It is hard to please all.众口难调。
20.Out of sight,out of mind.眼不见，心不念。21.Facts speak plainer than words.事实胜于雄辩。22.Call back white and white back.颠倒黑白。23.First things first.凡事有轻重缓急。24.Ill news travels fast.坏事传千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。26.live not to eat,but eat to live.活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。
27.Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。28.East or west,home is the best.金窝银窝不如自家草窝。29.It’s not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能当饭吃。31.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投。32.The older, the wiser.姜是老的辣。33.Do as Romans do in Rome.入乡随俗。
34.An idle youth,a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。35.AS the tree,so the fruit.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn,to learn is to better live.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。
第五篇：关于套话作文
关于套话作文
“套话”作文有这样几个特点，第一，题材总是选用历史文化(文学)名人；第二，文章结构表现为“穿靴戴帽三段论”，即用三段左右的历史文化名人的事迹为作文主体，再加上一个开头和一个结尾；第三，作文的主题总是局限在一个浅显的平面上而不做深入开拓。也就是说，作文的材料熟烂、结构模式化和主题平面化构成了“套话作文”的三要素。根据我们几年来阅卷的不完全统计，出现在这类“套话”作文中的历史文化名人，以屈原、陶渊明、苏轼为最多，可称为“套话”作文中的“三巨头”。其他常见的还有庄子、项羽、司马迁、嵇康、王维、李白、杜甫、柳宗元、李商隐、陆游、李清照、曹雪芹。不管你出的题涉及爱国主义还是环境保护，关怀底层大众还是建设精神文明，他们都可以用上述这些材料敷衍。当然，我们指出“套话作文”的典型表现，并不意味只要使用了历史文化名人材料就一定是“套话作文”了。阅卷者要根据上述三要素，对作文进行综合判断。
这种“套话作文”的坏作用是显而易见的。第一，它使高考作文遴选考生的区分度受到严重影响，写作能力高的考生与写作能力低的学生得分趋近：
第二，更为严重的是，“套话作文”背后的中学作文教学机制影响一代人的写作能力甚至思维能力的提高。
为了体现高考公平公正的原则，准确引导中学作文教学，我们从去年开始对“套话作文”的打分执行从严的政策。一般情况下，这类“套话作文”最高分不超过50分。如果语言比较流畅，思路清晰，可打在43-44分的基准分左右。表达特别突出的，也可突破50分，但不宜进入一类卷。而表达能力较差的，也可打在40分以下。行走在消逝中（44-45）
光阴似箭，岁月如梭，我们正行走在消逝中，积极、乐观„„ ——题记
“还记得年少时的梦吗？像一朵不凋零的花„„”不知怎的，我每听到这首歌时，总会思绪万千，时间总是那样吝啬，不多给人一分一秒，就那样悄无声息地从人们指尖划过。虽然我们正在这消逝中行走，但不必悲伤，保持好的心态，前方的道路将更明亮、宽敞。
我们行走在消逝中。但童年的记忆一直存留在我们的脑海中。虽然随着年龄的增长和思想的成熟，那些美丽的梦想、单纯的快乐似乎在一步步离我们远去，学习任务的繁重更是让我们无法再像孩时那样无拘无束的玩耍，但是在闲遐之余，慢慢回味童年时和小伙伴一起玩捉迷藏、老鹰捉小鸡„„的游戏时，也能让我们的心在瞬间感到无比轻松、舒畅。或许美好的童年的确已经消逝了，但行走在消逝中的我们仍可以保持那颗纯真的心，让快乐永远伴随我们左右。
社会行走在消逝中。但一颗奉献的心，和谐的人际关系不会随时间消逝。还记得2006感动中国的英雄人物——丛飞吗？他把一生都投入到了慈善事业，他为了捐助贫困山区 的孩子而公义演出400余场，自己却过着检仆的生活。丛飞用舞台构造了课堂，用歌声点亮了希望。他的行动告诉了人们，即使社会正行走在消逝中，处于这个大社会的人们都应保持那份善良，那份助人为乐的精神，我们每一个人都应为构建和谐社会尽自己的一份力量。
国家行走在消逝中。但科技的发达使我国在消逝中进步。时间是在消逝，但我国的科学技术却没有随时间的消逝而退步，相反，它正在突飞猛进。就在我国航天员杨利伟乘载着太空飞船飞上宇宙的一瞬间，标志着我国的科技又进步了，我国千年的“飞天”梦想终于实现了，就在这消逝中，我国却实现了一次跨越，这足以证明了，抱以积极、乐观的心态行走在消逝中，我们终将有所收获，相信我们民族会取得更辉煌的成就。行走在消逝中，既有“流水落花春去也”的惆怅，也有“谁道人生无再少”的旷达„„但不管怎样，请相信，只要我们保持积极、乐观的心态，美好的明天必将在前方不远处等待着我们！
昨夜西风凋碧树
昨夜西风凋碧树，独上高楼、望断天涯路。——题记
一、李白
是谁？是黄沙漫天，北风吹雁中骑驴高歌的歌者么？是以霓为线，以虹为钩的海上钓鳌客么？是遍访青山绿水、且歌且行的游者么？在那个烟花三月的时代，人们对你的期望是歌功颂德，取悦帝王换取高官厚禄；而你，偏偏要独上高楼，在朝要高力士脱靴磨墨，在野要放白鹿于青崖之间。你傲然，“钟鼓馔玉不足贵，但愿长醉不复醒”。于是你注定要孤独，“举杯邀明月，对饮成三人”。
是的，你的执傲使得原来你该有的高官厚禄都消逝了，然而你并没有因为这一消逝而一无所有，相反，当我们回望当朝，站在盛唐中间的不是帝王，而是你！
二、苏东坡
是谁？是拣尽寒枝终不肯栖的寒鸦么？是举杯邀明月的饮者么？是穿越了十年生死痛苦一场的痴汉么？在那个“群星荟萃”的时代，人们对你的期望本是韬光养晦，游戏笔墨罢了，而你却偏偏选择竹枝芒鞋，踏遍天涯路，叹“大江东去，浪滔尽，千古风流人物”，感“人生到处之何似，恰似飞鸿踏雪泥”，你不为“蜗角虚名，蝇头微利”所动容，只愿“青山绿水泛秋浪”而超脱。
三、鲁迅
是谁？是为国民麻木，国家不前的彷徨吗？是为一代又一代有志青年的站起而高呼的呐喊者吗？是为不能为国家多做一件事而悲痛的伤心者吗？在那个医术落后，贫苦的年代，人们对你的期望本是留学深造，在医术上有超高造诣，而你却偏偏放弃美好的前途，执意回国，并弃医从文，为刘和珍君而呐喊，呼“忍看朋辈成新鬼”。你的笔尖直刺向敌人的心脏。是的，你义无反顾使你承受敌人泼来的污水，使你失去了光明前景，然你却在这消逝中得到了尊重，得到了国人的景仰，得到了民族的肯定。
六朝旧事随流水，但烟衰草凝绿。这些行走在消逝中的伟人，在无尽的消逝中得到永生。专家组评价：
这份试卷把“套话作文”的格式做到了极致。而且，里面的大量文字是抄袭的。这样一篇作文，也有人给了49分。经人检举，我们在网上查对后，确定它为大部分抄袭卷，现给分数为22分。印发给诸位老师，作评分的样卷。提醒大家注意辨别。
二、关于真情实感的文章 邻窗靠墙（55分）
学习生活总在忙忙碌碌中度过一天又一天。看似单调的生活，却时常充满着乐趣。班级里热闹的事莫过于调换座位。每次调换总能打破班里原有的平静。有时候大组轮换，有时候个别调动，但总会有些人怨声载道，有些人欣喜若狂。
慢慢地我总结出了一个规律：坐在中间两大组的同学总不愿换成邻窗或者靠墙的位置。因为那儿离黑板太远。而每当我被换到邻窗或是靠墙的地方时，我心里总有说不出的快乐。坐在靠窗的位置，光线是最充足的。教室在四楼，楼下有一棵千年古松，枝头一直长到了窗口。我总喜欢伸手去触摸它，当微风拂过，枝叶划过手心时痒痒的感觉很舒服。下课后，教室里乱成一团，而我这儿却十分清静。因为邻窗很少有人会来打挠。我会趴在窗边，闭上双眼，让阳光抚摸。那暖暖的阳光驱散了我身心的疲惫。偶尔会有一只调皮的鸟儿顺着树枝飞进教室。教室里顿时沸腾起来。有些女生吓得躲到了桌子底下。有些爱玩的男生则会用扫帚去打它。可怜的小鸟只得惊慌失措地逃出窗外。我看着它远去的身影，不禁笑了起来。坐在靠墙的位置，虽然少了一些生机与活力。但是墙可了我最大的依靠。累了的时候就靠在墙上，仿佛一切烦恼都消失了。我可以暂时不去思考，只求片刻的安心。雪白的墙上留下了我的身温，是那么亲切与温暖。
邻窗靠墙的日子总在不停地轮换。每当我被换到那儿时，脸上总有藏不住的笑容，同学们都很惊讶，他们怎么会明白我对它们的衷爱呢？
人来到世上是来经历磨难的。我不这么认为。人来到世上是来感受世间的多姿多彩。人的一生总在辛勤的工作，因此人应该学会忙中偷闲。所谓生有所息，物有所止。短暂的休息为的是换来更多的力量再次投入工作。
作为学生的我们，一刻不停地学习让我们精疲力尽。如同一根紧绷的弦，一拨就断。试着让自己放松调到适当的位置，一根有弹性的弦才能够凑出优美悦耳的旋律。
邻窗靠墙的日子是我学习之外的快乐之源。“愿有所息”我对自己说。看了看窗外，一道道明媚的阳光正照射进来打在了雪白的墙上，划出了一段段优美动听的青春乐章。
老南瓜之思（55分）
子在川上曰：“逝者如斯夫，不舍昼夜。”岁月与流水“哗哗哗”的流淌，气势汹汹却又沉郁顿错。
然而记忆里已然发黄的瓜田里，那个我魂牵梦萦的老南瓜依旧不动声色的散发阵阵醇想。儿时，借居三婶家，日子清苦却也无忧，小孩子孙对美味总是连一点招架之力都没的，于是心里最常挂念的便是三婶家瓜田里那个已经发黄的老南瓜。心中暗暗祈盼了好些日子，才终于盼到三婶那句：“去把那瓜摘来吧。”脸上咧开大大的笑意，连应声好都怕耽搁时间，便径直奔向瓜田。
怀抱着瓜，从乡间路上走回来的我，只觉得满心欢喜，倒是老南瓜的样子已经记不清，只记得炖烂后入口的触觉是软滑酥腻，冰甜清香。那甜在心头，香在鼻间的滋味却是永远封存于记忆中了。
然而现在，再也没有吃到看到过老南瓜了。那记忆中的醇香已随时间流逝。
极力想挽留，却挽留不下的便是流逝了吧，流逝出了伤感，流逝出了怅惘。如同“落花有意随流水，流水无意逝落花”的无奈与凄婉。这流逝，怎一个“恸”字了得？！然而，古人又说：“不蹇不流，不止不行。”想来“逝去”并非一个完全消极的名词，在“消逝”之后，延伸出来的将是一个新纪元的生命勃发。因为逢雨漏水的草屋渐渐消逝，才有巍峨城堡的坚不可摧；因为“笃笃”马蹄声的消逝，才有火车轰鸣而过的尖啸；因为野蛮斗争的消逝，才有和谐社会的新貌。垂垂老矣的凤凰浴火涅磐，重生出新一代王者霸气。也许消逝只是一种手段，为进步而生的手段。
消逝与进步，似轮转的日月，携手共舞曼妙的桑巴，而后成就天地宇宙之玄秘。因其玄秘，仁者怅惘，智者旷达。因其玄秘，吾以为倒不若怅惘其所逝，欢欣其所进，全宇宙之造化，全余心之所感。
我依然在路上走着，却已不是乡间路，怀抱的也已不是老南瓜，而是高速运转的笔记本，却依然闻到老南瓜的醇香。
原来，消逝的只是物质，留传的却是情意，而快乐的是悠远的文明。
梦里的明暗忧伤 ——铭记消逝的古老
行走在消逝中，我们不该忘记那些古老，历史应该被铭记，为那一刻绚烂夺目的文明。——题记
梦里，湖边信步。隐约听到你低低的呻吟，吟唱那只属于你的诗篇。我猛然回头，却没有发现灯火阑珊处的你，四处张望，亦不能寻到那一处似铃般的落吟。其实那条古弄，并不长。
其实那片树林，并不大。
其实那口老井，并不深。
只是童年的欢声笑语都和这片自然古朴融在了一起，只是还没有懵懂就已经和这里连成了一体。
只是每天清晨就连庸懒的雏猫都会争着惺忪的睡眼在那条清石板路上蹒跚前行，只是每当夏夜就连吵嚷的蝉儿也会静下心来听那林间的鸟鸣。
只是每当黎明推开那扇敦实的木门就会看到爷爷磨的豆浆，只是每当仲夏总有奶奶的蒲扇轻轻摇着送小孙女进入甜美的梦乡。
于是弄堂也就成了天然的屏障，连接却也隔离着喧闹与静谧。
于是树林也就成了美丽的避风港，如大隐于市的文人墨客，叫人得一处精神的寄托和归宿。
于是，弄堂，树林，井，老屋，人，成了一幅唯美的画面，一个世外的桃源。
在孙女还小的时候，她总以为，这里，会是她一辈子的乐园。而“消逝”，于她，真的太过陌生了。
然而童年，只是懵懂的童年，该面对的，任谁都不能逃避。
爷爷长满老茧的双手和沉重的水桶碰到一起时的苍老第一次让小孙女感到了心疼；奶奶蹒跚的步伐第一次让孙女觉得自己亏欠了他们太多太多。
孙女开始动摇自己的决定。走吧，爷爷奶奶，去住那套不用自己打水磨豆浆的新房子，去住那个不用自己摇蒲扇不用自己去河边洗衣服的新房子。劳累了大半辈子，是该歇歇让我们来照顾你们的时候了。孙女不止一次这样说了。去住那个没有生气鸟笼一样的小盒子吗？爷爷每次都这样反问。
是啊，这里的建筑带着古老的印记见证着时代的沧桑，这里的一切带着最原始的古朴出现在现代文明的路上。离开，让它消逝，又怎么舍得？然而这一次，再倔强也没有用了，拆迁办的通知下来了，它给了这里一个合理的消逝理由——这里，属于旧城改造的势力范围。最后一次，小孙女喝着甘甜的井水，轻轻说一句：再见，我会想你；最后一次，小孙女和每一棵陪她长大的树告别，默默念一句：再见，我会记得你；最后一次，小孙女安静地躺在奶奶的怀里，在蒲扇的轻摇下沉沉地进入了梦乡„„老屋，消逝了；古井，消逝了；老林，消逝了„„小镇上仅存的古老，在文明的行走中，消逝了。逝去的，似梦，但多了几分残酷，文明在消逝中行走，在行走中进步，这是历史的必然，是我们。而我们有理由铭记，那些消逝的古老、单纯与美好；有理由铭记，在那一刻绚烂夺目的文明。谈几点看法：
1.要鼓励指导学生写自己对生活的感受，写自己对社会现象的看法。力求写出自己的与众不同的看法。
2.要帮助学生正确把握写“真情实感”。写“真情实感”主要是要写自己，但不是全部。可以写别人、古人及洋人
3.三段论式的用古人做事例的文章尽量不要写，要写要用新鲜的事例。
4.指导学生作文时不要去背别人的好文章。要学别人的立意、结构、选材、语言等。5.要帮助学生建立自己的作文材料库（事例材料与思想材料）。
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