2018年中考英语作文修改

第一篇：2018年中考英语作文修改

常考必背典型句子

一、环保

1.It's our duty to protect our environment.2.It is very important to take care of our environment 3.We should not throw litter onto the ground 4.We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees 5.We should plant more flowers and trees.6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin 7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.二、旅游

1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…),it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus，…

3.We enjoyed ourselves.4.We forgot the time.We didn't come back until 5 o'clock.5.We all felt very tired, but we were happy.6.I thought I would never forget this trip.7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.8.We visited a lot of places of interest.9.We had a good time there.10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap.三、比赛

1.Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two.2.All of us went to watch it.3.The match was very exciting.4.In fact, I have never seen such an exciting match before.5.The score was 5-3.Our team scored three goals in the last fifteen minutes.6.Class One won this match.Class Two lost.7.Class One played well.They deserved to win.8.Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance.ur duty to protect o

四、健康

1.It is very important to keep healthy.2.How can we keep healthy? 3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.4.We should eat the food healthily.5.We should do more exercise.6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.8.I decided to see the doctor.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.10.He said :“Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.五、学科

1.My favorite subject is English.2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English.3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful.5.So English is very important and I like English very much.6.We have a lot of fun in the English class.7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class.8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English.9.I like English and try my best to learn it.六、节日

1.In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival.2.It comes in January or February.3.On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner.They have a lot of nice food to eat.4.During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do.5.People visit their relatives and friends.6.They greet each other with a hug and say, “Happy New Year”.7.As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways.七、写人

1.His name is Jack.2.He was born in London in 1982.3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.4.He is 20 years old.5.He comes from England.6.He is a good ping-pong player.7.He is medium build.8.He has short hair.9.He is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us.10.He teaches English very well.11.He works very hard.He works in No.5 Middle School.12.He loves watching football games after work.13.He often helps me with my English.14.At the age of six, he began to play table tennis.八、生活

1.Jim got up very early.2.Jim cleaned the room and do the housework.3.Jim went to shop and did some shopping.4.Jim did some cooking.5.Jim fed the cat.6.Jim sweeps the floor.7.He washes the dishes.8.He has lunch at school.9.It is a busy day.He is very tired.But he feels happy.背诵优秀范文(一)：网购

要求：1.语句流畅，书写规范。2.包含提示内容，并可适当发挥。3.词数80左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。4.文中不能出现人名、地名等真实信息。Advantages 方便（convenient）；24小时营业； 不用排队

Disadvantages

看不见物品；容易受到欺骗（be cheated）；

不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now.Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now.It is a new way of shopping.Many things are offered and wait for your choosing.Convenience is the most important advantage.You can buy anything as you like.You don’t have to queue with other shoppers.Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online.You can’t actually see the real products.So you may be cheated easily.Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.背诵优秀范文(二)：环保

以“Lower Carbon（低碳）, Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。参考词汇：节能灯 energy-saving lamp，用过的 used, 下届 lower grades Lower Carbon, Happier Life It’s our duty to save the environment.On June 5th, I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus.And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day.At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower.Don’t throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades.At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they go shopping.And I will turn off the lights before leaving the room.Lower carbon, happier life.Let’s take actions.背诵优秀范文(三)：健康

健康的身体是我们成就一切事物的根本，没有健康，什么都无从谈起。

I think healthy habits are very important for us.All of us want to be healthy.First, we should get enough sleep during the night.We can go to bed early and get up early.Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food.We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.We should drink a lot of water.We should have healthy eating habits.Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day.If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.If we can do all above, we can live a healthy life.背诵优秀范文(四)：传统文化

【预测题目】

假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。

Dear Mike, How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on.I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses.They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.They decorate their houses with paper cuts.On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals.Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people.People visit their relatives and friends.They wish one another a happy year and good luck.How happy we are.Best wishes!

Yours, Liu Wei

背诵优秀范文(五)：共享单车

提示词：智能手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR code 【背诵范文】

Dear Jim, I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike--mobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone.What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it.It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours, Li Hua

背诵优秀范文(六)：与父母相处

xx+k.Com]提示词语：listen to，mother’s love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile Dear Alice，As a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother’s，you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.If your mother doesn’t take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Yours Han Mei

背诵优秀范文(七)：二胎

xx+k.Com]国家开放二孩政策后，很多同学都面临着即将做哥哥或姐姐的情况。

Dear Peter, I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy in China.The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy, meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children.Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child, which worries me a great deal.Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with, I have to share everything with him or her.Most importantly, what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister, did you have similar problems? What’s your opinion about this? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours Li Hua

背诵优秀范文(八)：减压

xx+k.Com]生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，让大多数中学生在生活和学习上或多或少产生了压力，如何应对压力是大家不可回避的问题。

Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!

第二篇：英语作文修改

A Trip to the Zoo孩子的原稿：

Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo.I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos.That’s a interesting trip.I’ll never forget it.That’smy trip.修改后：

It was a sunny SundayAfter a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus.This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone.Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

As soon as I got there,I was attracted at once.Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily.Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands.How naughty they were!What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers.They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy.Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world.we are family.I t came to my mind immiediatly.Anyway, I had an interesting trip today.It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.My favourite season

孩子的原稿：

There are four seasons in a year.And my favourite season is summer.Although it’s very hot.I still love it.Because I can swim in the sea.And lie in sun.That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer.That’svery intersting.So I love summer.That’s my favourite season.修改后

My favourite season

As is all know , there are four seasons.Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach… How comfortable!More importantlyI can eat delicious Icecream.Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside.And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father.In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness.

第三篇：中考英语作文

作文1：

某英语报社举行“我爱家乡”征文大赛。请你以I love my hometown—Qiandongnan为题，根据下列提示和要求写一篇短文参赛。提示：

1、黔东南位于贵州省东南部，人口约4,469,100。

2、夏天较热，但冬天不太冷。

3、黔东南有许多著名的旅游胜地，如：舞阳河、雷公山、剑河温泉、西江苗寨等。

4、黔东南正在快速的发展，路宽了、水清了、绿地多了，变得越来越美了。要求：

1、词数80词左右。

2、在文中不能出现本人的真实信息。参考词汇：

温泉hot spring 苗寨：Miao village 绿地：grassland

I love my hometown--Qiandongnan

Qiandongnan lies in the southeast of Guizhou Province.It is a beautiful place with a population of 4,469,100.It is very hot in summer but not rather cold in winter.We have many famous places of interest here.Such as Wuyang River, Leigong Mountain, Hot spring in Jianhe, Xijiang Miao village and so on.Qiandongnan is developing very fast.The streets are wide.The water is clean.You can see grassland here and there.It’s becoming more and more beautiful.I love my hometown.Welcome to Qiandongnan.作文2：

近来，黔东南地区出现了H7N9禽流感，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的很大关注。请你以How to keep healthy 为题，写一篇60—80词的短文，说说你的看法和建议。

要求：主要包括以下内容，可以适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

1.体质下降的原因;如：eat too much junk food , have too much homework, …

2.合理的健康建议。如：some useful advice, should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet（饮食平衡), enough sleep…

How to keep healthy

Nowadays students physical fitness is declining(体质下降)year by year.I think there are some reasons.Some students eat too much junk food，some students have too much homework, some students spend too much time before computer，some students seldom take part in activities and exercise.Being in good health is good for study.How to keep healthy？The following are some useful advice First, students should do more exercise.Second, students should eat a balanced diet.Third, students should have enough sleep.Forth, students should eat more fruit and vegetables.The students should be away from junk food and bad habit.Only in this way can the students have strong body.作文3：

你是黔东南一名初三学生，马上就要毕业了。你的美国笔友Mike准备在暑假来中国看你。现在他想了解一下你家乡的情况。请给他回一封电子邮件介绍你的家乡。

My hometown---Qiandongnan is a beautiful place.It lies in the southeast of Guizhou Province.There are a great many of mountains and clean rivers here.It is neither very hot in summer nor rather cold in winter.We have many famous places of interest here.Such as Wuyang River, Leigong Mountain, Hot spring in Jianhe, Xijiang Miao village and so on.Xijiang Miao village is the largest Miao village in the world.It attracts many tourists come from all over the world every year.The people are honest and enthusiastic(热情好客）there.They can make special delicious food--Fish in Sour Soup, You can taste it and enjoy relax in this lovely place.In a word ,I am proud of my hometown.I wish your arrive and will give you a different experience.作文4：

初中生活快要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下许多难忘的回忆。请你大家讲一个最值得

你回忆的故事：包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后的感想。

How time flies！I have studied in the school for nearly 3 years.I am happy to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three year’s life.One of them impressed me very much.I still remember it.When I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, She had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English, and I’m good at it, I think I’m so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will help others when they are in trouble, I think it is a happy thing to help others.作文:5：

英语在初中学习中十分重要，很多学生在英语学习中都碰到许多困难，而你的困难又是什么呢？请你些一篇文章，说说你会用什么方法提高的英语水平。

How to improve my English? Learning English is very important, But many of us have different trouble in learning English.For me, Reading is the most difficult And I decide to study harder and improve it.First, I will do more reading every day, Read some interesting stories every day.Second, when I come across new words, I will guess the meaning first and then look them up in the dictionary and remember them.Last, I think speaking and listening can help a lot.So I will talk to my teachers in English as much as possible.And I will do more listening before I go to bed every night.With these, I am sure I can improve my English soon.作文：6 假期旅游 Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs（纪念品）,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn（虾）,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.作文7：

健康的生活方式对于我们学生的身体和学习都很重要，请以“Healthy lifestyle”为题结合实际些一篇短文，内容包括：1.列举中学生较普遍的三种不良的生活方式；2.应该注意去改善； 3.中学生应该怎样正确排解压力。

A healthy lifestyle is important for our life and study.But the students have some unhealthy lifestyles.First, they play too many games.It is waste of their time.They should spend more time learning their subjects, Second, they often don’t eat breakfast.They had better eat breakfast every day.Third, they like eating meat and junk food.They should eat more fruits and vegetables.What’s more, some students stay up late.They don’t sleep.It’s bad their health.I n fact, students are often stressed out if they study for a long time.I think they can listen to some music, do sports or take a walk to relax.I hope everyone can have healthy lifestyle.作文8：

学校英语报拟向同学们征集有关“环境保护”的文章，内容包括：1.说一说自行车的三个能促进环保的优点。2.列举你日常生活中保护环境的例子或做法。（至少两个）。3.呼吁大家共同参与环保。

It’s very important for us to protect the environment.I think to ride a good way to protect the environment.First, a bike doesn’t need to use fuel.I t can save energy.Second, a bike is very small.It won’t make the road crowded.It can save the room.Third, the bike doesn’t produce SO2 and CO2 like car.It can make the air fresh.So we can help the earth by riding our bikes to work or school.We can also do many other things in our daily life, too.When we see rubbish, we can pick it up.We can plant more trees to help clean the air.When we leave the room, we must turn off the lights.We can use the water to clean the toilet after washing clothes.Come on, everybody!Protect the earth from now!作文9：感恩

作文10：

如何做一个好孩子 How to be a good child?

Are you a good a child? How can you be a good child? At school, I think you should work hard and learn all the subjects well.Also, you should do some sports keep healthy.You can help your teacher clean the blackboard.Listen to your teacher carefully.Do your homework carefully.At home, you can help your mother do some housework, such as clean the house, wash the clothes and so on.As a good child, you should respect your parents and your grandparents.Don't make them angry.When you go out, tell your parents.Then they will not worry about you.Try these, you will be a very good child.作文11：

初三马上就毕业了，你对暑假有什么计划吗？请根据你的计划写一篇文章。

I plan to go to travel alone this summer vacation.I have traveled several times, but gone with my family or friends, never did it alone.I want to do it once, so I can train myself to be stronger and more confident.I told my parents about my plan, they supported me very much, and they thought it is a good opportunity to help me grow up.They also told me many tips of traveling and prepared the package for me.I am grateful that my parents understand me and respect my decision.I won’t let them down.作文12.如何和他人相处融洽

how to get on well with others？

As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others.But how? First of all, we should respect others.Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other.Besides, it’s important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.If we live in the school’s dormitory, we should be careful not to disturb others.Don’t bring friends back to the dormitory in the mid-night after all the roommates are sleeping.Or playing computer games with the music turn up so loud.Such behaviors will hurt the relationships between you and your roommates.

第四篇：中考英语作文

中考英语作文1

上周五，你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会，在班会上同学们踊跃发言：有的想成为老师;有的想成为一名警察;有的想当医生……。请你根据下面表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题，写一篇英语短文，报告这次班会的情况，并谈谈你自己的梦想。

注意：

1、文章中不要出现真实的姓名和校名;内容可适当发挥。

2、词数：70词左右;文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Our Dreams

Last Friday, our class held a class meeting about our dreams. Here is my report.

范文：

Our dreams

Last Friday, our class held a class meeting about our dreams. Here is my report. Liu Wei wants to be a teacher when she grows up. She is going to study education. Li Ming's dream is to be a policeman. He does sports every day. Su Juan wants to be a movie star. She is going to take acting lessons. I want to be… I'm sure our dreams will come true one day.

中考英语作文2

命题作文是依据所给题目，确定中心，选择材料，写出符合题意，内容表达具体、充分的文章。写命题作文通常要注意以下几点：

一、审准题目：

文章的中心要对题目的分析来确定，一定要弄清主题的内涵，确立与文章联系的主题思想，表达不能游离于主题，否则即使内容再精彩，也是跑题作文，得分将会大打折扣，因此，写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目，确立要表现的中心。

二、构思结构：

就是开放思路，启动联想，构想表现形式，勾勒出文章的结构层次，依次写出引言段，主题句，发展段和结尾句，努力使之新颖，别致。

三、选择材料：

这一点很重要，一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料，所选的材料必须典型精要。

四、表达：

就是用最确切明了的语言贯穿材料，表达自己的思想，力争用符合英语语法规则。英语表达习惯，最顺畅自然的词，句，段去表达中心思想，与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。就写作的目的表现形式来看，命题作文分为三种形式：

1、记叙文类；

2、说明文类；

3、议论文类。

中考英语作文3

Dear Wang Ming,

I“m writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What”s more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule:

No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule

No.2 Don“t make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule

No.3 Don”t use others" things without permission. Rule

No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.

中考英语作文4

在中考英语试卷中，最后一项“书面表达”题普遍失分较多，这一方面与学生的基础有关，另一方面与应试的方法和策略也有很大的关系。结合各省市近几年“书面表达”命题特点，我们归纳出如下答题对策。

一、给写作留有充分的时间

在中考英语题中，“书面表达”往往是最后一项，有的学生把最后几分钟用在写作上，匆匆了事，这是很不明智的。学生用在写作上的时间应不少于10分钟，力争不丢分，少丢分。

二、认真审题，先打草稿

写之前一定要认真阅读写作要求，切忌见题就写。中考作文主要有两种类型：“提示作文”和“看图作文”。“提示作文”一般已经给出要点，而“看图作文”则需根据图画及提示在很短的时间内将要点列出。把要点列出后，在草稿纸上写提纲，打草稿，就可以看出大概有多少字。在正式往试卷上写之前，根据题目要求适当增减内容，保持卷面整洁。

三、正确使用标点

学生在初中学习阶段，对标点符号的用法极不重视，因此，考试中明显的标点错误屡有发生，在一定程度上影响学生的成绩。另外，大小写错误也常有发生。有的甚至一篇文章从头到尾没有一个大写字母，再加上标点不正确，让人看了不知所云，以致直接影响考试成绩。

中考英语作文5

审题细心

审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备，包含以下四方面：

1)审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。

2)审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分，定好段落。

3)审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。

4)审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯性，读懂图的意思

时态要准确

英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。

提炼字词句

一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素，就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样，如果砖瓦质量不好，那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的，如果基本的词句掌握不好，那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手，甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有“存货”造成的。

中考英语作文6

题目：请向你未见面的笔友写一封自我介绍信，字数不少于60单词。

Dear Bob,

亲爱的鲍勃，

Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in...

昨天我收到了你的来信，我很高兴成为你的笔友。我的名字叫张彼德。我今年十六岁，我住在......

I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

我也是一名中学生，我非常喜欢英语和数学。我还喜欢体育运动，我很擅长唱歌。我对美国的了解不多，下次来信时能多跟我聊聊你们国家的事吗？

Please write to me soon.

期待着你的来信。

Yours

你的

Peter Zhang

点评：回信简洁明了，句子间的衔接自然、紧凑，文中作者把自己的情况大致向美国朋友作了介绍，达到了回信的目的。

中考英语作文7

1. 动笔之前，认真审题

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据、图表、提纲或短文提供的`资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：

(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;

(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是，要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

中考英语作文8

书面表达(共1题；满分15分)

你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题。

请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。

Ben's problems

Your advice and reasons

朋友少，感觉孤单

1.参加学校社团(club)---结识更多朋友

2.?(请你补充)

英语单词难记

1.多阅读英语故事、新闻一在运用中学单词

2.?(请你补充)

Dear Ben,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school you're your letter you said that…

…

Good luck with everything!

注意：

(1)回信应包括所有要点；

(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)；

(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

中考英语作文9

本周三，在这个阴沉沉的早晨，我进行了一次紧张而难忘的英语期中考试。

在早读课上，我认真读英语书，生怕漏掉什么，让我没能取得好成绩。但是，当时我并不是很紧张。这时，我听到广播里说要老师拿卷子，心里默默想:放松，放松，我能考好，为什么要紧张？虽然我尽力安慰自己，但紧张的感觉油然而生。突然，4 (3)班的老师进来了。原来她这次是我们监考。我开始放听录音，声音震耳欲聋。我听不清楚一个问题，所以我得到了答案。我暗自心想:天啊，我没听清楚这个问题。如果我得到的答案是错的，不会拖累我吗？我觉得笔试部分很简单，没有仔细检查。

第二天报成绩的时候，心脏扑通扑通的跳着，大脑神经绷到了极点。虽然我考得不错:98.5，但还是不是我理想的分数。果然，我没听清楚的听力题果然错了，一个字少了复数的s。我感到遗憾。如果当时查了的话，可能就错了。

这次考试因为自己的粗心和对题目的轻视而犯下的错误铭刻在我的脑海里。从现在开始，我不能让自己再犯同样的错误，我必须认真做好每一件事。

中考英语作文10

话题作文“文体不限”，指的是不限制用哪一种文体，便于考生选择自己最擅长的文体来写作，但这样并不等于文体的泛化。文体的选择可以随意，但选定后，保持文体自身的规范与和谐却是必要的。有的考生把“文体不限”误以为可以写成不管什么样的文体，结果出现一些记叙文议论化、议论文记叙化、散文杂感化之类的文章，搞成一种文体的大拼盘大杂烩，信笔胡言，非驴非马，客观上影响了内容的表达，这是不可取的;为了标新立异，有的考生甚至还写出一些令人震惊的“另类”作文，这更应该及时纠正，以免延误大事。诚然，现在有些报刊上确实有些文章不伦不类，文体特征不鲜明，令人难以卒读。我们考生毕竟还处在学习写作阶段，文体的特征一定要鲜明，这既便于自己写作，也便于阅卷者阅卷。正确的方法是根据自己的擅长扬长避短，选择文体，确定自己是写什么文体后，就要在自己的文章中鲜明地表现出这一文体的语言特征。比如：形象思维比较发达，善于记叙描写的学生，可以选择记叙文;逻辑思维比较发达，善于议论说理的学生，可以选择议论文;感情丰富，视野开阔的学生，可以选择散文等等。

中考英语作文11

1.内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分；

2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分；

3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分；

4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。

从个评分标准来看，它对考生的作文要求有四点：

1、内容要完整。

2、语句流畅。

3、没有语法错误。

4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

所以，在写作文的时候，大家要牢记这些要求。

要做到内容完整，我们首先要认清看好题目的要求，抓住要点，注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下，自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后，再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。

要做到语句的流畅，这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上，注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上，也指句意上的连贯。

在初中阶段，考生应注意语法点有：动词单三形式，时态（包括：现在进行时，一般过去时，将来时），定语从句（此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用），语态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如，我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成I very like football.这样的错误一定要避免。

中考英语作文12

在和谐社会中，人与人之间的互助已经成为我们生活的重要组成部分。下周，英国友谊学校将访问你的学校，你的英语俱乐部将举办一场以“互相帮助，让世界变得精彩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。如果李志想参加演讲比赛，请以“李智”的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点：

帮助同学——友情；

帮助老人——幸福；

帮助病人——幸福；

帮助他人体验.

要求：

1.字数：80字左右。课文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数；

2.你自己的名字和你学校的名字不能出现在文本中。

互相帮助让世界变得美好

大家好。我是李志。很高兴在这里谈论帮助。____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________

谢谢你的倾听。

中考英语作文13

在小红的铅笔盒里，有四位好兄弟。其中，铅笔是老大，橡皮是老二，削笔刀是老三，笔盒是老四。

一开始，他们都很团结。可有一天，铅笔开始傲慢起来，铅笔召集橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒开会，铅笔说 ：“从今天开始，你们都要为我服务。”橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒答应了。从那时起，铅笔故意刁难他们：铅笔故意在纸上乱画，让橡皮为他美容，为此橡皮瘦了一大圈；铅笔常找削笔刀为他剃头，这让削笔刀的牙齿都磨平了；铅笔躺在软绵绵的笔盒里，稍感觉有一点儿不舒服，就对笔盒破口大骂。可是他们从不说苦，因为他们认为铅笔永远是他们的好兄弟。

不久后，小红的铅笔盒里又添了几支新铅笔，他们对铅笔老大说：“瞧瞧你的熊样，小主人早该把你扔了。”铅笔听了，赶紧跑到镜子前，想看看自己的模样，只见镜子里的自己又矮有瘦，样子真像一根火柴。铅笔见了，伤心地哭了起来。此时，橡皮、削笔刀和笔盒来到铅笔面前，说：“在你刁难我们的时候，其实也毁了你的面容，只要你和我们团结一致，咱们还是好兄弟。”听了他们的话，铅笔惭愧地低下了头。

……

中考英语作文14

关于A的话题，早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。

给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…

A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。

认 真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡)。(举例)。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。

事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。

而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。

中考英语作文15

How to Keep Healthy Firstly, build normal daily routine and eat regularly. You should go to bed and get up early. Make sure you can have a good rest. Pay attention to your diets. Don't eat too much meat and sugar. Eat more vegetables.

首先，建立正常的作息，饮食规律。你应该早睡早起，确保你能够有良好的睡眠。注意你的饮食，不要吃太多肉和糖，多吃蔬菜。

Secondly, have a good mood towards life. A good mood will bring you a healthy body, too.

其次，对生活抱有好心境。一个好的心情也会给你带来一个健康的身体。

Last, do some exercises. Exercises help you build a strong and healthy body.

最后，要多锻炼。锻炼能够帮助你建立强壮健康的身体。

第五篇：英语中考作文

一：

Beijing is the capital of China.It has changed a lot in the past 10 years.Many tall buildings have been built.And the traffic is convenient.It has been a famous city in the world.Every year, thousands of foreign tourists visit Beijing.In 2008, Beijing held the Olympic Games successfully.After that, more and more foreigners study and work in Beijing.I hope Beijing will be better and better.二：

Dear Li Ming,How is everything going? I am sorry to hear that you are weak in English.I‟d like to talk about the ways of learning English to you.I usually study English words by making flashcards.It‟s important to take notes in class.You should practice speaking English every day.You should also listen to the tape every day.Of course, asking the teacher for help is a good way.I hope you will do better in English.Yours

Wei Yan 三：

How I‟ve changed

When I was young, I used to play with my friends all day and all night, I was very happy.But now, I‟m growing up, I become worried.I used to like planting flowers, but now I don‟t have any time to do that, I only study and do my homework every day.I used to like watching TV, but now I‟m more interested in sports games and English programs.I didn‟t use to read books, but now I enjoy reading magazines, because I think that the more books I read, the more knowledge I will get.I used to make my mother be angry with me, now she is pleased with me.I used to be afraid of the dark, but now I like to think about my problem in the dark and enjoy the dark.四：

We have many rules at school.We aren‟t allowed to drink or smoke.We aren‟t allowed to argue with the teachers.I agree.Drinking or smoking is bad for our health.It‟s necessary for us to be polite.At our school, we have to wear uniforms every day.The uniforms are so ugly that we don‟t want to wear them at all.I think we should be allowed to design our own uniforms.We have to study in groups in class.I can‟t stand it.I think we should be allowed to study by ourselves.Because some students talk instead of studying.五：

Yantai is a beautiful civilized city.As students, what should we do?

We must respect our teachers and be polite to others.We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us.Besides, we must obey the traffic rules.When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing.And we mustn‟t go across the street when the traffic lights are red.What‟s more, we should protect our environment.For example, we mustn‟t step on the grass and climb trees.Litter mustn‟t be throw everywhere.Yantai is our hometown.Let‟s try our best to make it more and more beautiful.六：

My opinion on Internet

Hello, everyone!As you know, many students like to work on the Internet.Of course, it can bring us many good things.We can learn more knowledge outside our books, practice our spoken English with someone else and look up some useful information.At the same time, it can bring us some bad things as well.Some students have made too many friends, seen some bad information that is not good for us and spent too much time on it.We should know what to do and what not to do.That‟s my idea.Thank you for listening!

七：

My opinions on volunteering

We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons.So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies.If we volunteer to help others, it‟s a waste of time.But I think volunteering is great.I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.So if I have an opportunity, I‟d like to visit old people‟s home to clean up for them.I „d also like to help sick kids in hospital.I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital.In a word, I‟d like to help people who need help.If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.八：

Protect the environment, our duty!

Every one of us clearly remembers the nuclear leakage happened months ago in Japan.If we don‟t care about the earth, it will bring more disasters.The most serious problem in my opinion is air pollution.As there are more cars on the road, fewer trees on the land, it‟s so easy for people to get a sore throat and cough a lot.What should we students do? First, we can protect the environment by doing what we can.We can pick up rubbish and put it in the right dustbin.We can make full use of paper and pens.Second, we can call on people to protect the environment by performing songs and short plays and putting up posters.Thirdly, we can ask the government to make up laws to help.It‟s everyone‟s duty to make a contribution to caring about the earth.Take actions today!九；

May 16th, 2011

Dear Editor,I am a student of Grade Nine.We have made a survey “To whom you go when you are in trouble.” Here are the results.Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when getting in trouble because they‟re almost of the same age, they can talk with, communicate with and understand each other easily.They are patient enough to listen to their problems.Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much.They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves.They are shy.They have few friends.They hate to talk with others and can‟t get on well with others.In my opinion, when meeting with trouble, we‟d better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.Best wishes!

Yours,Zhang Liang