第一篇:改错题的经典题型大全
错词
1.动词错误:
(1)时态和语态、主谓一致的错误。【1】整体时态:
*We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B& B hotel before.定语从句的时态在主句之前发生,故have改为had。
*High over the water ,they discover a hole in the balloon.The hole became bigger and bigger.全篇使用过去时态,故改discover--discovered 【3】主谓一致
*Having fun with their friends make them happy.动名词短语做主语,谓语动词用单数形式makes。
*But the most wonderful thing about jack were his musical ability。主语为the most wonderful thing 故此,系词为was *But not all information are good to society.主语不可数,所以动词用is。(2.)动词错误:
*In American big cities ,thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.(buy)根据句子意思,数千人买票去看比赛。故sell改为 buy。(3)非谓语动词 【1】动名词错误
*I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future.(seeing)解析:to 为介词,故此see改为seeing * Not only it makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit.解析:主语应为动名词,故Play football改为Playing football 【2】现在分词
*The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming down.解析:分词做定语,故keeps 改为keeping *I found a small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room.解析:with a light shone 改为with a light shining。a light和shining为主动关系。【3】不定式
*I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.(become)解析:help sb do sth 故改becoming为 become *He did not want share things with others.解析:want to share sth.want后可跟不定式做宾语。【4】过去分词
*I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.解析:have sth done , some records和give是被动关系,故改为given。2.连词错误:
*I came into the living room and saw one of them just go through the kitchen door but turn on the light.解析:根据句意,―我看到他们中的一个人走进厨房,并且打开灯。‖两个分句子之间是并列关系。故改but为and *We would return at night to hear that he`d picked up from the radio in the day.解析:考查宾语从句,pick up 缺宾语,故改that 为what *The classes helped me understand what the world works
解析:根据句子意思,―这些课程有助于我了解世界是怎么运转的‖故改what 为how。3.形容词/副词错用:
*You always gave me specially attention.解析:名词应该被形容词special修饰。
*It is real a good chance to have met all of you here.解析:副词really修饰系词,故改real为really。
*My hometown has taken on a new look.How great it has changed!解析:great修饰动词,故改为:greatly 4.冠词错误:
*This is my first visit to a American family.(an)解析:American 第一个音标的音素是元音,故用an.*Each player must obey captain ,who is the leader of the team.解析:有定语修饰,the特指captain.*Suddenly ,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.解析:固定搭配catch sight of.故此去掉冠词a。5.代词错误: 【1】反身代词
*I just smiled to me and thought ,… 解析:主语和宾语相同,故此me—myself。【2】形容词性物主代词
*Besides ,the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interesting.(his--their)解析:主语是第三人称复数,因此try one`s best 【3】it/that/them /us *I thought that was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other.解析:that不可以做形式主语,故改为it。
*It was about noon when when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited.前后人称错误。故此改them为us.6.名词单复数和名词的所有格的错误
*She marked strictly on student`s performance.(students`)解析:根据句意,学生们的表演,故改为students` performance *Physics is one of the most difficult subject for us(subjects)解析:one of说明后面为复数形式。
*We practice three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.解析:常常看比赛,故此match改为matches.* I have no papers to write on.解析:纸不可数,所以改为paper 7.介词错误 *He left Shanghai at a cold night.解析:一天的部分被修饰时,介词用on, *I am a new comer of a small town.解析:根据句子意思,来自一个小镇come from a small town.* I was caught by the rain last night 解析:固定短语be caught in the rain 遇上雨。8.语意错误
*Thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games.解析:句子意思:数千人卖掉票去看足球或者篮球比赛。故此错误,sell—buy *Not all people like to work and everyone like to play.解析:句子意思:并非所有的人都喜欢工作,并且所有的人喜欢玩。语意错误,应该为转折关系,and—but 二.多余词
多词一般为:冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词等。【1】连词多余:
*They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning.解析:连词多余,故此去掉(that),原句是状语从句。【2】介词多余:
*The crowd waiting for to greet them in England was very surprised.(for)解析:没有宾语,所以去掉for。【3】冠词多余:
*Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.解析:固定短语,catch sight of :偶然看见。【4】系词/助词多余:
*My mother was asked : ―Have you taken medicine ?‖ 解析:根据句意,是妈妈问:故为主动语态。三:缺词
缺词一般为:冠词/连词/介词/系词be 助词/ 【1】缺介词
*He was looking for a glass ^the cupboard(in)解析:根据句意,in the cupboard 做状语。【2】缺冠词
*However ,the popular teacher is at^ same time the one who should be strict with students.(the)解析:形容词same 和the 搭配使用,故给same前加 the。【3】缺连接词
*In one class ,I learned^ it rained(why)解析:根据句子意思可知,缺连接词,句意为:―在一节课上,我知道了下雨的原因‖。【4】缺系词
*What ^your favorite sport ?(is)解析:句子中缺系词,在What加is.【专题训练与高考预测】
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行作出判断,如无错误,在刻行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列清况改正;该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行在边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词:在错的词下面划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意:原行没能错的不要改 Passage 1
I went out to see film with my brother after 1_______ supper.By our way to the cinema ,we met an American
2._______ girl named Alice ,she had got lost and looked very
3.._________ anxious.We went up to see that was the matter.We
4________ then took him to the hotel.While going there
5_________ I told her the great change that had taken place
6_________ in our country in the past few years but Alice told
7__________ us a lot about the youth in America
8.________
Although we miss the film , we felt very happy
9_______ for it we had not only helped Alice get out of trouble
10_______ also knew something abut the States We see English can strengthen understanding and friendship.Passage 2
Today I showed some foreign friend around our city.1.________ We started off in car from the Friendship Hotel at 8:00 a.m.2._______ We first got to Jinshan Park.We are all struck by its 3._______ beautiful flowers on show.Then, we visited the City Museum.4._______ We saw plenty of valuable things, from that we learned a lot 5.______ about the city.After that, they drove to Jinshan Temple.That is 6._______ a beautiful place of interest in our city, but there we enjoyed 7._______ the wonderfully scenery of the sea.We had a delicious lunch at the 8._______ seafood Restaurant and we returned back at noon..All the foreign 9.______ friends were pleased with my arrangement.We did have the 10_____ wonderful time today.Passage 3 Dear Mr.Brown , I am writing to thank you with your kind help.1______ Before you came to teach us ,I had not interest in 2______ English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could 3_____ only speak a few words.But one and a half year later , 4_____ I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5____ encouraging words.I will always remember what you 6.____ said ,―If you try to ,you can be No 1!‖I hope you`ve 7____ had pleasant journey home and will come to china 8_____ again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9_____ and send you the photos we take together 10______ passage 4 There are advantage for students to work while 1_____ Studying at school.One of them was that 2_____ they can earn money.For the most part ,3______ students working to earn money for their own 4____ use.Earning their own money allow them 5 _____ to spend on anything as if they please.6_____ they would have to ask their parents for 7____ money or for permission to do things by 8 ____ the money.Some students may also to save 9____ up for our college or future use.10______ passage 5 Dear Mr.Brown , I am writing to thank you with your kind help.1___ Before you came to teach us ,I had not interest in 2_____ English.My pronunciation was terribly.I could 3____ only speak a few words.But one and a half year later , 4____ I now think English fun to learn.I got a lot from your 5___ encouraging words.I will always remember what you 6____ said ,―If you try to ,you can be No 1!‖I hope you`ve ___ had pleasant journey home and will come to china ___ again sometimes in the future.I will write again 9____ and send you the photos we take together 10____ passage 6 Dear Anish, Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______ It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______ has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____ or near the school.They have all sorts of course.4___ ___ I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___ are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____ see that there is anything on their website 7____ I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____ when you arrived.You met him a few years ago ,but he 9___ has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___ forward to seeing you again.passage 7 Dear Ralph,I’m a senior student.I have be in love with a boy
1______ for three years.But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly 2._______ to express my feeling.And he wrote back.In his letter 3______ he said, ―We are students.Our task is study.Let us wait 4________ to see until we have any chance after graduation.‖ So 5.______ after graduation I called to him, asking him about 6.________ go out.But he said he didn’t want to.He just
7.________ wanted to sleep and watched TV.8._______ What do you think I should do? Do you think
9.______ I should continue to love him and give up?
10______ Sheila Passage 8 My hometown is a pretty city ,so people there 1._____________ are kind and polite.With coming of spring ,grass and 2._____________ trees turn green , and flowers grew in many colors.3 ______________ In summer ,the sea under the blue sky is even more 4 ______________ beautiful.After autumn arrives ,the city looks as 5._____________ an old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter , 6._____________ a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can 7._____________ wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long 8.______________ time.While they find fish coming to the surface , 9._____________ they fly down immediate and catch them without 10.______________ delay.That is my city ,and I love it so much.passage 9 Dear doctor, My name is Wang Lin.I’m a middle school student.I have
a problem and I’m writing to ask you for some advices.1._________ I’m just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2.__________ Students often make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me.3._________ They called me ― Meat Ball‖.That makes me feel unhappy.4._________ I’m now worry about my weight.Though I am a bit too fat, I 5.__________ feel rather good.I enjoy my meals.I love eating meat very 6._________ much.And I like sweet food, either.I often have sugar with 7._________ tea, milk ,porridge ,and even hot water.In the past two months 8._________ I have put off 5 kilos.I’m worried about this problem, 9.__________ but I don’t know what to lose weight quickly.Please help me, 10_________ dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.With best wishes, Wang Lin Passage 10 Women,present and ancient,at the home and 1.______ abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beauty.But few 2.______ people realize it affects her brains.Hair grows constantly. 3.______ It takes in nourishment(营养)constantly.If it was short 4.______ of nourishment,it’ll die and falls off.Body supplies hair with 5.______ nourishment,it can’t be stopped even in a minutes.If it takes in 6.______ too many,that means hair has already used too much 7.______ nourishment which body gives it to the head.As time passes,8.______ brain is relatively short of nourishment.It leads dizziness 9.______(头昏).Therefore one’s brains will be weakened. 10.______ Passage 11 It’s easy to go downhill than to climb uphill:so it’s 1.____ easier to fall into bad habits than into good one 2.____ Bad habits don’t come suddenly.It come little by 3.____ little.Schoolboys first picks up a little in school and on 4.____ the streets.When they cannot write their homework,they 5.____ copy from their schoolmate.If they see bigger boys 6.____ smoking,they also want learn to smoke.When they 7.____ get bigger,the habits become stronger or 8.____ stronger,so that they can not longer get rid of 9.____ them.What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad 10.____ habits in the beginning!Passage 12 Fred and I haven’t many in common.I sometimes
1.__________ wonder why we were friends at all.Fred is
2.__________ always busy make things.Everything he makes is
3.__________ so perfect that I sometime feel envy at his skill.4.__________ My trouble is that I’m one of those lazy people.5.__________ Outside my work at the office, the only thing which
6.__________ interests me is listening to the music.I have a
7.__________ big collection of records but all day long the 8.__________ only thing I can think is when I’m going to 9.__________ get home listen to a new piece.10.__________ passage 13 Mary was an university student.She didn’t have much 1 ____ money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle 2.____ who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth.3.____ He always give her valuable Christmas and birthday presents.4.____ When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary wanted buy him 5.____ something really special, but because she was rich, she did not 6.____ know how to get him.She went into the best shop in her 7.____ town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful 8.____ shop assistants.Finally she asked, ―What do you have for 9.____ someone who has already got everything he wants or needs.10 The assistant sighed deeply and answered, ―Envy, only envy.‖ Pasasage14 As the world enters the 21st century ,the development in the 1 _____ science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and 2_____ chance we`ve never imagined before.People are hoping have 3_____ a peacefully and highly developed world.To catch up with 4_____ the new development and to be success in the new century the 5____ younger generation is required to have different kind of skills 6____ and abilities ,such like the computer science and the English 7____ language.Otherwise one will be left behind.Young people should 8____ study even hard at school and prepare themselves mentally 9____ and physically to meet with the challenge of the new century 10____ Passage 15 Mark Twain was born in a small town of Horid.When he is only 1___ twelve years old ,his father died.Late he became a river boat pilot.2_____ Mark Twain was her pen name.During the American Civil War 3_____ He worked as a reporter and write a lot of stories.Gradually he 4____ made his mark and his work were popular.He became one of the 5_____ best known writer of the 19th century in the U.S.A.In his life 6____ Mark Twain wrote the number of stories and novels ,on which 7____ ―Adventure of Tom Sawyer‖ is the most famous one.His writings 8____ have been translated to many other languages ,and they are 9_____ deeply love by the readers all over the world.10 ___ 【参考答案】 KEY:1
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第二篇:bec改错题题型总结
BEC中级阅读短文改错怎样做
想必大家对商务英语BEC中的短文改错题型不会感到陌生吧,因为其它的各类考试中也基本都会有这类题型。但是商务英语中的短文改错的特别之处在于文章内容涉及商务知识,短文中可能有1个或者多个行是正确的,还有就是,作答时须用大写字母。应该说,这类题型是可以通过平时多练习、勤总结来提高的。下面先来对做这类题的方法做个简单的讲解,后面还附了一套练习题,供大家自我检验。
通读全文,把握大意
很多考生在做题的时候会遇到不知道是否该删除某个词语的情况,这时应该从全文内容出发,判断其是否多余,通常情况下,都是名词或代词为多,出题者通过增加多余的名词或代词来对考生进行干扰,从而达到测试的目的。先通读全文的另外一个好处就是可以在读的过程中先找出一些明显的错误,这也遵循了我们常说的先易后难的解题规律。
以句子为单位,逐个进行分析
在四六级中,经常是几行才设置一道题目,而BEC则不同,每一行都设置一道题目,因此,一个句子通常都会被拆分成时上下两行。所以,我们做题的时候应该以句子为最小单位,然后对其进行分析,找出其中的错误所在,而不应该仅仅局限于一行对句子进行分析。
分析句子成分,找出错误所在
判断一个句子正确与否,通过需要对句子进行语法成分的分析,以判断是缺少语法成分,还是出现多余的语法成分。一个完整的句子通常要包含主语,谓语和宾语。所以我们分析句子的时候也是从主谓宾入手。这就要求学生掌握一定的语法知识,具备分析句子成分的能力。考生应该在平时练习时加强对句子成分的分析。
遵循先易后难,充分利用时间
就考试时间而言,BEC的考试时间要比四六级考试时间长。但是,由于BEC的难度较大,很大一部分考生仍会感到时间不够用。因此,在做题的时候,我们仍要遵循先易后难的原则,争取在最短的时间内拿到做多的分。考生在平时练习的时候也要养成这个习惯,这样就可以避免在考试的时候死扣住一道难题不放,而失去了那些容易的该得分的题目。
常见错误:
将泛指内容特指化:这主要是指在名词前加上了多余的定冠词,造成泛指的内容被特指。因为在BEC考试中不存在漏词的情况,因此在名词前缺少冠词的情况是不存在的。当考生遇到复数名词前的定冠词时,可以考虑其是否多余。
例如: The final decision was reached after day-long session of the tests, interviews and exercises.(tests, interviews and exercises均为泛指的内容,而不是某种特有的,专门的tests, interviews and exercises,所以在这个句子中,the是多余的。)
时态不正确:对于时态方面的考查,最常见的就是在时间,条件,让步状语从句后用带will的将来时态。我们知道,这些从句要用一般现在时来代替一般将来时。所以,句中的 will往往是多余的。(当然,有时候will表示意愿,用在if条件句中,表示“如果你愿意......”这个要区别对待)例如:..., a password allows them to access the system wherever they will happen to be that day.(这是一个让步状语从句,从句要求用一般现在时来表示一般将来时,所以句中的 will是多余的,应该去掉。)
对立性词语在句子中同时出现:在中文里,我们可以把“虽然”“但是”放在一起,也可以将“因为”“ 所以”放在一起,而在英语中,我们用了although/though就不可以用but(但是可以用yet),用了because/since/as就不可以用so。另外。在句子中一般不可以同时出现以下的词语: how与well,only与hardly,serve与for,reach与at/in,rise与up,most与best,must与have to,another与other(s),marry与 with,repeat与again(但可以与again and again连用),return 与 back等等。
例如: How do you get on well with the staff.(这句话中,well实际上回答了how,所以well是多余的。又如serve for our customs 中for也是多余的,因为serve是及物动词,本身已经含有for的意思,再用for就造成了意思上的重复。)
词性的误用:由于词性的误用而造成的单词多余在BEC短文改错中也是经常可以碰到的。特别是对动词的考查,如及物和不及物的混用等等。
例如:Their backgrounds are vary from arts to sciences(vary是动词,因此,are是多余的。又如:But Garrard is going to be relax.一句,relax是动词,be是多余的。又如:Rather than waste of time in traffic jams.中的of 是多余的,因为waste是及物动词;又如:...,where executives fly them in and out the same day.中them是多余的,因为fly是不及物动词。)
又如:In addition to have formal lessons, participants have the opportunity to learn in social situations with trainers and fellow students.(In addition to中to是介词,后面要接上名词或动名词,不可以接上动词原形。所以应该去掉have)
宾语从句中that与what 或that 与if/whether的同时出现:在宾语从句中,我们不可以用两个连词来连接同一个句子。出题者往往会在宾语从句中同时使用 that和what或that和if/whether来考查学生是否掌握好基本的语法知识。
例如:It really doesn't matter that what we pay for an investment.(在这句话中就同时用了两个连词。我们知道,pay是一个及物动词,要求接上宾语,what在这里充当pay的宾语,而that仅仅是起到连接的作用,没有实在的意义,所以 that是多余的。)又如:They understand that if the really price of not training is the company failing behind as a result.(在这句话中同时使用了两个连词that和if ,根据句子的意思,我们可以判断出不含有“是否”之意,所以句中的if是多余的。)
第三篇:改错题
改错题(指出下列公文的8处错误)
关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的批复
《关于办理商标注册附送证件问题的请示》收悉,国务院大致同意关于办理商标变更、转让或者续展注册时不再附送原商标注册证的意见,但考虑到这一问题涉及《商标法实施细则》的修改,特批复如下,盼遵照执行。
......本批发第一项、第四项由你局在1995年12月15日前发布。第二项、第三项由你局在一九九八年十一月一前发布。
国务院
1995年4月23日制发
①标题不完整
②缺主送机关
③“大致同意”用法不当
④实施细则应用全称
⑤语气不当“盼......”
⑥“一九九八......”表达错误
⑦作者位置不当
⑧“制发”二字多余。
中国人民银行××市分行
关于转发总行《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》的通知
×银发[2002]×号
现将总行的《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》转发给你们,请立即组织研究,展开讨论,并根据《纪要》精神,认真贯彻执行。当前,首先要抓好第一季度的工作,以便为全年工作打下基础。中国人民银行××市分行
二〇〇二年七月二十四日
一般来说,转发性通知只能有一个目的,或为执行,或为讨论,或为参考,二者不能兼得,更不能三者兼得。上面这则通知一方面让人家“研究讨论”,一方面又让人家“贯彻执行”,这二者是不可兼得的。因为“研究讨论”意味着转发对象尚不成熟,还没有达到“执行”的程度;而“贯彻执行”却意味着转发对象已经成熟,已经没有“研究讨论”的必要了。作者在这里显然犯了自相矛盾的错误,违背了形式逻辑中的不矛盾律。这是转发性通知中的一种多发病和常见病。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由,本题10分。)
××镇人民政府:
对你镇的数次请示,经研究作答复如下:
其一,原则同意批准你镇建立联合贸易公司,负责本镇的内、外贸易工作。你镇应尽快使联合贸易公司开始营业。
其二,你镇提出试行“关于违反计划生育规定的处罚办法”最好不执行,因为这个办法违反上级有关文件精神。
其三,对你镇提出要建一俱乐部活跃居民文化生活一事,予以批准,但规模要适当控制,量力而行。
其四,同意你镇组团参加在上海举办的服装节和在服装节上进行引资促销活动。××市人民政府
2001年×月×日
一是违反一文一批的原则。市政府在积存了某乡四件请示之后,才合在一起给了这样一个批复,这样做有多种弊端:(1)延误时间,耽误下级工作;(2)多种事项集于一篇公文之中,内容杂乱;(3)一份公文涉及多方面工作,给下级落实带来困难。因为这些工作在下级机关是由不同单位和不同负责人分管的,由哪个负责人承担批复的落实工作,不好确定。正确的做法是,下级报来一份请示,就及时回复一份批复。对方的四份请求,应有四份相应的批复。
二是标题不合要求。本批复的标题只有文种品称,没有发文机关和主要内容,不够认真严肃,也影响工作效率。
三是用语含糊不清,观点不明确。如“原则同意”、“最好不执行”、“违反上级有关文件精神”,都没有明确指出自己的观点,使下级无法执行。
四是时间要用汉字,不能用阿拉伯数字。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由,本题10分。)
××市工业局文件
××字(2002)××
号签发人:张平
××市工业局关于印发“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”的通知
我局同意××市财政局关于节减行政经费的几项规定”中提出的意见,认为切实可行,请结合本单位的情况参照执行。
附:××市财政局文件
2002.10.16
主题词:印发、规定、通知
抄送:××市人民政府、××市财政局
(1)发文字号不规范,应为××〔2002〕23号;
(2)下行文不应标注签发人,应取消,发文字号居中排列;
(3)标题不规范,应将“印发”改为“转发”,引号应改为书名号《》;
(4)缺主送机关,应写明收文单位名称;
(5)转发同级机关公文,不应用批示语气,如“我局同意”、“所提意见切实可行”等;
(6)《规定》属规范性公文,应认真执行而不应写“参照”执行;
(7)附件说明不规范,应具体写明附件的标题;
(8)成文日期不规范,应用汉字写全年月日,即二〇〇二年十月十六日;应加盖印章;
(9)主题词不规范,应表明公文的主题项:行政经费;主题词之间空一个汉字位置,不用标点符号;
(10)转发公文不应再向其他机关抄送,应取消抄送机关。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由,本题10分。)
各省、自治区、直辖市人民政府:
今年初,枝江县董镇信用社职工××同志为保卫国家财产,面对英勇歹徒,顽强搏斗,最后擒获歹徒。为此决定:授予××同志先进工作者称号。
国务院希望各条战线的群众、工人、农民、知识分子认真贯彻十三届四中、5中、6中全会精神,胸怀全局,艰苦奋斗,努力工作,为社会主义现代化建设做出更大贡献。中共中央、国务院90年4月24日
1.标题结构不完整,应改为“中共中央、国务院关于授予××同志先进工作者称号的决定”。
2.“今年初”这一时间概念表达不当,应改为“1990年初”。
3.枝江县前应冠以省名。
4.“英勇歹徒”的表达有误。
5.“群众、工人、„„”等搭配不当。
6.数字表达不一致,不应用阿拉伯数字。
7.作者排列有误,应分两行排列。
8.日期书写有误,应用汉字。
公文改错题(找出下列公文中的错误并说明理由,本题10分。)
关于申请拨给灾区贷款专项指标的报告
省行:
×月×日,×× 地区遭受了一场历史上罕见的洪水袭击,×江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水,灾情严重。经初步不完全统计,农田受灾总面积达38000多亩,各种农作物损失达 100多万元,农民个人损失也很大。灾后,我们立即深入灾区了解灾情,并发动干部群众积极开展生产自救。同时,为帮助受灾农民及时恢复生产,我们采取了下列措施:
一、对恢复生产所需的资金,以自筹为主。确有困难的,先从现有农贷指标中贷款支持。
二、对受灾严重的困难户,优先适当贷款,先帮助他们解决生活问题。到×月×日止,此项贷款已达××万元。
由于这次灾情过于严重,集体和个人的损失都很大,短期内恢复生产有一定的困难,仅靠正常农贷指标难以解决问题。为此,请省行下达专项救灾贷款指标××万元,以便支持灾区迅速恢复生产。
以上报告当否,请批示。
××银行××市支行
一九九八年×月×日
一、文种选择有误
从标题看,这篇公文是向省行提出灾区贷款专项指标的申请,目的是获得省行的批准。从正文的主体部分看,两条措施确属报告性质,但随后出现的专项贷款请求,就不是报告应有的内容了。从结语看,“以上报告妥否,请批示”,有着很强的期复性。因此,综合起来看,这篇公文应改为《关于拨给灾区贷款专项指标的请示》。
二、内容含糊
这是由于原文混淆了报告和请示的界限而造成的。写请示,只需写明请示缘由、请示事项,最后提出请示要求即可,与此无关的内容不应写入。而原文提出的两条措施:“对恢复生产所需的资金,以自筹为主”、“对受灾严重的困难户,优先适当贷款”,既不是请示缘由,也不是请示事项,不应该写入文中。
三、语言不准确
文中有多处语言不确切。如“×江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水”,×江两岸所有村庄都遭受洪灾似不可能,“同时发生”更不可能。“灾情较重”跟后面“这次灾情过于严重”的说法相龃龉;“据初步不完全统计”,“初步”和“不完全”语意重复。
第四篇:改错题
第十次上机题(改错补充题)
一、改错题
1.利用数组计算分数序列:2/1,3/2,5/3,8/5,13/8,21/13...前20项之和。
#include
void input(int n =10 ,int w[] ,);float sum(int w[] , int n);
void main(){ int data[22],n;cout<<“请输入数列的项数: ”;cin>>n;input(data[22],n);cout<<“2/1+3/2+5/3+…=”< void input(int n ,int w[]){ w[0]=w[1]=1;for(int i=2;i w[i]=w[i+11]+w[i+22];} } float sum(int w[],int n){ float num;for(int i=2;i num+=1.0*(w[i-1]+w[i-2])/w[i-1];} return num;} 【要求】 1.把上述程序录入到文件学号_1.cpp中,然后根据题目的要求及程序中的语句之间的逻辑关系对程序中的错误进行修改。程序中的注解可不输入。 2.改错时,可以修改语句中的一部分内容,调用整句的次序,增加少量的变量说明或编译处理命令,但不能增加其它语句,也不能删去整条语句。3.将改正后的源程序学号_1.cpp放在考试盘中的根目录下,供阅卷用。 二、改错题 题目:设计一个程序,键盘输入一个4×4矩阵,并按每行4个数据在屏幕上显示输入的原始数据。求:两对角线之和及将该矩阵转置后输出。含有错误的源程序如下: #include int sum(int a[4][4]);void f(int a[4][4]); void main(){ int data[4][4]={0};for(int i=0;i<4;i++) for(int j=0;j<4;j++) cin>>data[i][j];for(i=0;i<4;i++){ for(int j=0;j<4;j++) cout< cout< for(int j=0;j<4;j++) cout< cout< int sum(int a[][4]){ int n=0;for(int i=0;i<4;i++) n+=a[i][i]+a[i][3-i];} void f(int a[4][]){ int temp;for(int i=0;i<4;i++) for(int j=0;j<4;j++){ temp=a[i][j]; a[i][j]=a[j][i]; a[j][i]=temp; } } 【要求】 1.把上述程序录入到文件学号_2.cpp中,然后根据题目的要求及程序中的语句之间的逻辑关系对程序中的错误进行修改。程序中的注解可不输入。 2.改错时,可以修改语句中的一部分内容,调用整句的次序,增加少量的变量说明或编译处理命令,但不能增加其它语句,也不能删去整条语句。3.将改正后的源程序学号_2.cpp放在考试盘中的根目录下,供阅卷用。 三、改错题 【要求】 1.把上述程序录入到文件学号_3.cpp中,然后根据题目的要求及程序中的语句之间的逻辑关系对程序中的错误进行修改。程序中的注解可不输入。 2.改错时,可以修改语句中的一部分内容,调用整句的次序,增加少量的变量说明或编译处理命令,但不能增加其它语句,也不能删去整条语句。3.将改正后的源程序学号_3.cpp放在考试盘中的根目录下,供阅卷用。 四、改错题 以下程序验证一个猜想:任意一个十进制整数与其反序数相加后,得到一个新的正整数,将该新正整数重复上述处理后,最终可得到一个回文数。所谓反序数是指原数的数字次序颠倒而得到的数值,如4361的反序数为1634 所谓回文数是指正向和反向读的数字次序是一样的,例如12321和234555432。程序同时统计反复处理的次数c,例如对整数639,程序的运行状况如下: Please input a number:639 <回车> 639 , 99099 , 5 含有错误的源程序如下: 【要求】 1.把上述程序录入到文件学号_4.cpp中,然后根据题目的要求及程序中的语句之间的逻辑关系对程序中的错误进行修改。程序中的注解可不输入。 2.改错时,可以修改语句中的一部分内容,调用整句的次序,增加少量的变量说明或编译处理命令,但不能增加其它语句,也不能删去整条语句。3.将改正后的源程序学号_4.cpp放在考试盘中的根目录下,供阅卷用。 五、改错题 【要求】 1.把上述程序录入到文件学号_5.cpp中,然后根据题目的要求及程序中的语句之间的逻辑关系对程序中的错误进行修改。程序中的注解可不输入。 2.改错时,可以修改语句中的一部分内容,调用整句的次序,增加少量的变量说明或编译处理命令,但不能增加其它语句,也不能删去整条语句。3.将改正后的源程序学号_5.cpp放在考试盘中的根目录下,供阅卷用。 一、病句的几种类型: 1.成分残缺:即句子中缺少了某些必要成分,句子意思表达不清楚。 例:他受坏思想的影响,走上了犯罪。 2.搭配不当:即句子中的某两个成分或某两个词语错误搭配。 例:教室里人声混乱,老师讲的什么,谁也没有听清。 3.词序颠倒:即句子里的词没有按照规律和表达意思的需要来排列。 例:历史博物馆里展出了两千多年前新出土的文物。4.意思重复: 即句子里出现多余成分,显得语句罗嗦、累赘。 例:我觉得这是想得不对的错误想法。 5.概念不清:即句中的意思含糊不清,令人不解、混淆。例:造纸是中国的四大发明。 6.前后矛盾:即句子前后意思不一致。例:我肯定李琳大概是生病了。7.分类不当:即句子中把不是一类的归为了一类。例:篮子里有青菜、萝卜、葡萄、西红柿等 蔬菜。 二、改病句的三个步骤 ①读句子、理句意②查排审、找病因③改句子、保原意(改得少、改得巧) 三、改病 句练习。 (1)每个小学生都应该上课专心听讲的好习惯。 (2)“六一”联欢会上,我们班表演了文娱节目和大合唱。(3)我们要不断改进学习方法,增强学习效率。(4)周爷爷爱戴我们小朋友,我们热爱周爷爷。(5)这本书对我很感兴趣。 (6)黄继光不但壮烈牺牲了,而且他永远活在我们的心中。(7)大家都讲卫生,我们的健康和疾病就有保障。(8)《繁星》的作者是巴金写的。 (9)我们要积极响应“人人动手,绿化祖国”。(10)美丽的大草原一碧千里,到处都是绿色。(11)我们开会通过并讨论了他的建议。 (12)《小学生语文报》和《少年文艺》这两种报纸我都很爱看。(13)联欢会开始了,整个会场充满了热闹的气氛。(14)战士们冒着大雨和泥泞的小路快步前进。(15)下午,全校师生和少先队员去参观画展。 (16)《科学画报》和《少年文艺》这两种报纸我都爱看。(17)我估计他今天一定不会来参加会议了。 (18)在美术老师的悉心指导下,使我的素描画进步很快。(19)我们必须认真克服并善于发现学习上的毛病。(20)上课时,始终专心听讲,因此,成绩很好。 (21)菜园里种着西红柿、西瓜、黄瓜、毛豆、红豆、扁豆等蔬菜。(22)经过教育,我明确了学习目的和学习态度。(23)墙上的挂钟走了一圈,一个小时又过去了。(24)我们要热爱公共财产。(25)草原把夕阳照得五彩缤纷。 (26)《小学生数学报》和《少年报》这两种报纸我都很爱看。(27)王老师被光荣地评为“模范班主任”的光荣称号。(28)我们大摇大摆地走在山间小道上。 (29)我们要不断改善缺点,发挥优点,取答得更大的成绩。(30)经过努力,王小明的错别字大大进步了。 (31)黄河、长江、万里长城、古运河都是我国古代的伟大工程。(32)这篇作文层次和语句都很通顺。改病句练习 1.造纸是我国古代的四大发明。 2.《林海》这篇课文的作者是老舍先生写的。3.他穿了灰色上衣,一顶蓝帽子。 4.一进幼儿园,我就看见了一张张可爱的小脸和一阵阵动听的歌声。5.大扫除开始了,男女老少都参加,男的干重活,老的少的干轻活。6.这篇文章的内容比较优美。7.夏天的庐山是美丽的风景。8.小王用的毛笔写字非常漂亮。9.她焦急地等待着汽车开来的方向。10.列车沿着铁路在戈壁 滩上奔腾。 11.联欢会上,同学们唱了许多动听的歌和舞蹈。12.劳动开始了,男的女的都 一、病句的几种类型: 1.成分残缺:即句子中缺少了某些必要成分,句子意思表达不清楚。 例:他受坏思想的影响,走上了犯罪。 2.搭配不当:即句子中的某两个成分或某两个词语错误搭配。 例:教室里人声混乱,老师讲的什么,谁也没有听清。 3.词序颠倒:即句子里的词没有按照规律和表达意思的需要来排列。 例:历史博物馆里展出了两千多年前新出土的文物。4.意思重复: 即句子里出现多余成分,显得语句罗嗦、累赘。 例:我觉得这是想得不对的错误想法。 5.概念不清:即句中的意思含糊不清,令人不解、混淆。例:造纸是中国的四大发明。 6.前后矛盾:即句子前后意思不一致。例:我肯定李琳大概是生病了。7.分类不当:即句子中把不是一类的归为了一类。例:篮子里有青菜、萝卜、葡萄、西红柿等 蔬菜。 二、改病句的三个步骤 ①读句子、理句意②查排审、找病因③改句子、保原意(改得少、改得巧) 三、改病 句练习。 (1)每个小学生都应该上课专心听讲的好习惯。(2)“六一”联欢会上,我们班表演了文娱节目和大合唱。(3)我们要不断改进学习方法,增强学习效率。(4)周爷爷爱戴我们小朋友,我们热爱周爷爷。(5)这本书对我很感兴趣。 (6)黄继光不但壮烈牺牲了,而且他永远活在我们的心中。(7)大家都讲卫生,我们的健康和疾病就有保障。(8)《繁星》的作者是巴金写的。 (9)我们要积极响应“人人动手,绿化祖国”。(10)美丽的大草原一碧千里,到处都是绿色。(11)我们开会通过并讨论了他的建议。 (12)《小学生语文报》和《少年文艺》这两种报纸我都很爱看。(13)联欢会开始了,整个会场充满了热闹的气氛。(14)战士们冒着大雨和泥泞的小路快步前进。(15)下午,全校师生和少先队员去参观画展。 (16)《科学画报》和《少年文艺》这两种报纸我都爱看。(17)我估计他今天一定不会来参加会议了。 (18)在美术老师的悉心指导下,使我的素描画进步很快。(19)我们必须认真克服并善于发现学习上的毛病。(20)上课时,始终专心听讲,因此,成绩很好。 (21)菜园里种着西红柿、西瓜、黄瓜、毛豆、红豆、扁豆等蔬菜。(22)经过教育,我明确了学习目的和学习态度。(23)墙上的挂钟走了一圈,一个小时又过去了。(24)我们要热爱公共财产。(25)草原把夕阳照得五彩缤纷。 (26)《小学生数学报》和《少年报》这两种报纸我都很爱看。(27)王老师被光荣地评为“模范班主任”的光荣称号。(28)我们大摇大摆地走在山间小道上。 (29)我们要不断改善缺点,发挥优点,取答得更大的成绩。(30)经过努力,王小明的错别字大大进步了。 (31)黄河、长江、万里长城、古运河都是我国古代的伟大工程。(32)这篇作文层次和语句都很通顺。改病句练习 1.造纸是我国古代的四大发明。 2.《林海》这篇课文的作者是老舍先生写的。3.他穿了灰色上衣,一顶蓝帽子。 4.一进幼儿园,我就看见了一张张可爱的小脸和一阵阵动听的歌声。5.大扫除开始了,男女老少都参加,男的干重活,老的少的干轻活。6.这篇文章的内容比较优美。7.夏天的庐山是美丽的风景。8.小王用的毛笔写字非常漂亮。9.她焦急地等待着汽车开来的方向。10.列车沿着铁路在戈壁 滩上奔腾。 11.联欢会上,同学们唱了许多动听的歌和舞蹈。12.劳动开始了,男的女的都 三、将下面的词语补充完整。(4分)呕心沥()()断丝连()灵手巧 安然无()大显身()()天立地()往今来 不动声() 四、我会按要求完成下面各题。(8分) 1.大树爷爷看到了孩子们幸福的笑脸和欢乐的歌声。(修改病句) 2.目前已知最大的鲸约有十六万公斤重,最小的也有两千公斤。(写个句子,用上列数字的说明方法。) 3.21世纪图书馆的大门不会关闭。(改为反问句) 4.未来的社会不可能不是“多元”的社会。(改为肯定句) 五、用恰当的关联词语把下面的两句话合并成一句话。(6分) 1、(1)空气中没有灰尘。(2)大自然将多么单调。 2、(1)赵州桥雄伟坚固。(2)赵州桥美观。 六、根据提示的内容填空。(4分) 1.有些同学取得一点成绩就高兴的忘乎所以,我要送他的名言警句是: 2.我最喜欢的一句有关读书名言警句是: 七、写出下列句子运用的修辞手法。(8分)1.小明家的房子小得只有书桌那么大。() 2.小草偷偷地从土里钻了出来,嫩嫩的,绿绿的。()3.难道不耕耘也会有收获?() 4.它好肥,整个身子好像一个蓬松的球儿。() 八、选词填空。(6分)愿望 期望 盼望 1.我()到上海出差已三个月的爸爸早日回来。2.老师()后进生早日进步。 3.你想做个科学家,但想过怎样去实现这个()吗? 请求 乞求 要求 1.小姑娘抱着爸爸的腿,用会说话的眼睛()着。2.老师对学生的学习提出了新的()。3.指导员答应了董存瑞的()。 九、给下面的句子加上标点符号。(2+3=5分)1.欢迎你 同学们一口同声地说 2.我叫张丽娜 小女孩大大方方地说 希望大家多多帮助我第五篇:改错题