雅思写作句子改错 (参考答案)[五篇]

第一篇：雅思写作句子改错 (参考答案)

雅思写作常用语法错误分析

1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．

大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause． 错因：惯用法。介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。

3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．

错因：句子结构。有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．

大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．

错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与 grow up之间是主动关系。

改正：Children，if growing up in a multicultural society．are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．

大意：如果孩子在多元文化的社会中成长，他们更容易接受不同的文化和价值观。5．It is obvious that comparing with its drawbacks，the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.错因: 不能用现在分词comparing，因为the rise of English as a global language 是被比较，是被动，因此要用过去分词compared。

改正：It is obvious that compared with its drawbacks，the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits．

大意：很明显的是，相对于它的弊端，英语作为全球性语言的崛起会带给我们更多益处.6．Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports, which mean that it would gradually lose the control on the market.错因: 主谓不一致。这个定语从句修饰的是整个主句，因此动词要用第三人称单数。改正：Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports，which means that it would gradually lose the control on the market．

大意：进口商品有可能导致一个国家过于依赖进口，从而逐渐失去对市场的控制。

7.It would be not denying that almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that is different from other countries‟．

错因：没有It would be not denying这种说法；or连接两个词的时候，谓语动词跟随后面的成分变化。

改正：There is no denying that(也可以说It can‟t be denied that)almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that are different from other countries‟．

大意：毫无疑问，几乎每个国家都有不同于其他国家的独特文化或艺术形式。

8．Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively．While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication，the others regard it as an asset.错因: the others和others的区别在于：前若是特指某个范围里的另外一些人，而后者并不强调任何一个特定范围，只是泛指其他人。

改正: Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively．While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication，others regard it as an asset． 大意: 我们可以从正反两方面看待多元文化、一部分人把它视作一个有效交流的障碍或者是一个引起误解的原因，另一些人则把它看作财富．

9.It is undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries．

错因：fact是个可数名同，应该加冠词。

改正：It is an undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries．

大意：不可否认，旅游业已为很多国家带来可观的收入。

10.I believe that everything has its downside，and the spread of English as a global language in the world is not exception.错因：not是副词，不可以修饰名词exception。

改正：I believe that everything has its downside，and the spread of English as a global language in the world is no exception．

大意：我相信每件事都有它的弊端，英语作为全球性语言在世界的扩展也不是例外.11.New immigrants cannot fit into a new environment can happen very often.错因：句子结构混乱。此处应用it作形式主语。

改正：It can happen very often that new immigrants cannot fit into a new environment.大意：新移民无法适应新环境的情况经常出现．

12．Tourism also enables people，not only visitors，but also local dwellers，learn values and features of different cultures．

错因：谓语动词使用错误。enable后面需要加to，enable somebody to do something.改正：Tourism also enables people，not only visitors，but also local dwellers，to learn values and features of different cultures．

大意：旅游业不仅让观光者也让当地居民了解不同文化的价值和特色.13．Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in same country but from 2 different cultural backgrounds．

错因：same之前一般都需要有定冠词the。

改正：Cross-cultural communication occurs between people living in the same country but from different cultural backgrounds．

大意：跨文化交流一般在那些在相同国家居住却拥有不同文化背景的人之间进行.14．In a multi-ethnical society，nationality can a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it．

错因：谓语不完整。can本身不能构成完整的谓语.改正：In a multi-ethnical society，nationality can be a taboo subject and people are embarrassed to talk openly about it．

大意：在一个多民族的社会里，国籍是一个忌讳的话题，人们公开讨论国籍是尴尬的。15．Many donor countries believe that the main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash to invest can spur rapid grow.错因：grow是动词，不能作宾语，要用其名词形式growth。（注：这句话中的两个that引导的从句并列作believe的宾语从句。)改正：Many donor countries believe that the main obstacle to third-world development is lack of capital and that giving poor countries cash to invest can spur rapid growth．

大意：很多捐献国相信，第三世界发展的主要障碍是缺乏资金，给贫穷国家用以投资的资金可以促进其快速发展。

16．The continuing cultural invasion creates problems and troubles for social solidarity，whether it is at the level of nation，community or family.错因：赘述。problems和troubles意思相近，不需要一起使用。

改正：The continuing cultural invasion creates problems for social solidarity，whether it is at the level of nation, community or family．

大意：持续的文化入侵无论在国家、社区还是家庭的层面上都给社会团结一致造成了问题。17.No matter where they come from or what their previous lifestyle is, migrants should seek to adapt to a new culture．

错因：单复数错误。lifestyle应该用复数，因为是their作定语。

改正：No matter where they come from or what their previous lifestyles are，migrants should seek to adapt to a new culture．

大意：移民需要设法适应新的文化，不管他们从什么地方来、以前的生活方式如何。18.The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to be taken place． 错因：take place是不及物动词词组，没有被动。

改正：The host country provides many social settings for language acquisition to take place． 大意：东道国为语言学习提供了很多社会环境。

19.We are not surprising to see that in the coming decades，English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged population in every part of the world． 错因：不应该用现在分词：surprised表示“惊讶的”，主语为人；surprising表示“令人惊讶的”，3 主语为物。

改正：We are not surprised to see that in the coming decades，English language learners will account for the majority of the entire school-aged population in every part of the world． 大意：在未来的几十年里，在世界的每个地方，学龄人口中的大多数都会成为英文学习者，对此我们不会感到惊奇。

20.There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace，as the world is increasingly global connected． 错因：global是形容词，不能修饰connected这个过去分词。

改正：There can be little doubt that the people who are fluent bilinguals outperform monolingual speakers in the workplace，as the world is increasingly globally connected.大意：毫无疑问，可以流利讲两种语言的人在职场上的表现会超过讲单一语言的人，因为世界各地的联系正逐步变得密切。

21.As our world shrinks and business becomes increasingly international，people, who can speak two languages fluently, will be taken as a valuable resource to society.错因：在这里不宜用非限制性定语从句，句中特指能够讲两种语言的人，修饰关系紧密，最好用限制性定语从句。

改正：As our world shrinks and business becomes increasingly international，people who call speak two languages fluently will be taken as a valuable resource to society.大意：随着世界的缩小、商业逐步国际化，可以流利讲两种语言的人将会被看作是社会里有价值的资源。

22.The effect globalization has had on culture is immense and diversity· 错因：diversity是名词，在这里应该用形容词diverse作表语。改正：The effect globalization has had on culture is immense and diverse· 大意：全球化对文化的影响是广泛和多样的。

23．During last decade，there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration．

错因：惯用法。last前一般要用定冠词the，不能省略。

改正：During the last decade，there has been much discussion and controversy over the impact of global economic integration．

大意：在过去十年里，人们进行了很多关于国际经济一体化影响的讨论和争论。

24．Globalization poses both opportunities and problems for every industry in a worldwide scale． 错因：介词使用错误。on…scale为常用搭配。

改正：Globalization poses both opportunities and problems for every industry on a worldwide scale.大意：全球化在世界范围内给每一个行业提供了机会，同时也带来了问题。

25．There is an inescapable trend that those economic developed areas are in the vanguard of a cultural change.错因：economic是形容词，不能修饰过去分词developed。

改正：There is an inescapable trend that those economically developed areas are in the vanguard of a cultural change．

大意：经济发达地区处于文化变革的前沿，这是不可避免的趋势。

26．Like tourism, telecommunications represent the fastest-growing and the most profitable industry in many countries across the world.错因：赘述。如果出现两个或者两个以上最高级，可以共用一个the。

改正：Like tourism，telecommunications represent the fastest-growing and most profitable industry in many countries across the world．

大意：在世界上很多国家，电子通信如同旅游业一样，代表着一个快速发展而且利润可观的产业。

27．Movies have a means to present contemporary attitudes, fashions and events.错因：谓语结构不完整。应该使用be动词的完成时态。

改正：Movies have been a means to present contemporary attitudes，fashions and events。大意：电影一直是展示当代观念、时尚和时事的一种方式。

28.The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes，even though their purpose is meeting the expectation of the tourists from all over the world.错因：当purpose作主语的时候，表语经常用不定式。

改正：The government and the local people have to preserve the original appearance of the local cultures, customs and etiquettes，even though their purpose is to meet the expectation of the tourists from all over the world．

大意：政府和当地居民必须要保护好包括风俗和礼节在内的当地特色文化，尽管这样做仅仅是为了满足来自世界各地的游客的需要。

29．The easy of communication and the spread of information increase the proportion of economic activity that can operate beyond national borders.错因：easy是形容词，应该改成名词ease，表示“轻松，便利”；activity是可数名词，在这里应该用复数。

改正：The ease of communication and the spread of information increase the proportion of economic activities that can operate beyond national borders． 大意：交流的便利和信息的传播增加了跨国经济活动的比例。

30.Those who speak English as the native language have an overt advantage，in large part because they have not difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds.错因：词性错误。not是副词，不能修饰名词difficulty。

改正：Those who speak English as the native language have an overt advantage，in large part because they have no difficulty in communicating in the business, scientific and educational worlds.大意：那些母语是英语的人有很明显的优势，因为很大程度上他们在商业、科学以及教育 5 领域的交流中没有困难。

31．This is a fast changing world，which English monolinguals in danger of being left behind。错因：从句结构不完整，前面应该加介词。

改正：This is a fast changing world，in which English monolinguals are in danger of being left behind.大意：这是一个快速变化的世界，在这个世界里，仅仅说英文一种语言的人有落后的危险。32．Globalization accelerates the development of English as global language and vice versa． 错因：language是可数名词，在这里需要加不定冠词a。

改正：Globalization accelerates the development of English as a global language and vice versa.大意：全球化促进英文作为一门全球语言的发展，反之亦然。

33．It is my belief that many individual characteristics--including age，gender，expectations，experience and temperament--can influence how well migrants adopt to a new country.错因：单词使用错误。adopt表示“收养”，而此处应该用adapt，表示“适应”。

改正：It is my belief that many individual characteristics--including age，gender，expectations，experience and temperament--can influence how well migrants adapt to a new country． 大意：我相信很多个人特点—包括年龄、性别、期望、经验和脾气—对移民适应一个新国家都有影响。

34．Community solidarity is being loss as a result of Power concentration in global media companies．

错因：词性错误。loss是名词，这里应该用动词lose的过去分词lost。

改正：Community solidarity is being lost as a result of power concentration in global media companies．

大意：由于全球媒体公司权力集中，社区团结正在消逝。

35．An economic recovery can be attained by enlarge the government spending and create more jobs．

错因：by后面一般加名词或者动名词，不能加动词原形。，改正：An economic recovery can be attained by enlarging the government spending and creating more jobs．

大意：经济复苏可以通过扩大财政支出和创造就业机会实现。

36．There is no denying that universities are required a large amount of funding to increase，maintain and upgrade facilities．

错因：require应该用主动，大学需要(universities require)，而不是学校被需要(universities are required)。

改正：There is no denying that universities require a large amount of funding to increase，maintain and upgrade facilities．

大意：毫无疑问，大学需要大量资金来增加、维持和改进学校设施。

37．Hospitals are under-resourced are not in a good position to make health care services readily available to the public.6 错因：有两个谓语动词are。

改正：Hospitals that are under-resourced are not in a good position to make health care services readily available to the public．

大意：资源不足的医院不能给公民提供良好的医疗保健服务。

38．Space exploration enables broaden our horizon，study our planet from different perspectives and know our planet better.错因：这里应该使用enable的常用搭配enable sb．to do sth．。

改正：Space exploration enables us to(也可以把原句中enables改为helps us)broaden our horizon，study our planet from different perspectives and know our planet better.大意：太空探索让我们拓宽视野，从不同的角度研究我们的星球，并更多地了解我们的星球。

39．There are lots of good, basic reasons that we should build a sustainable moon base． 错因：先行词reasons引导的从句中缺原因状语，应用关系副词why。

改正：There are lots of good，basic reasons why we should build a sustainable moon base.大意：很多好的和根本的原因解释了为什么我们一定要建立一个永久的月球基地。40．Widespread literacy is fundamental to both social and economical development of any society．

错因：单词使用错误。economical表示“节约的”，在这里应该用economic“经济的”。改正：Widespread literacy is fundamental to both social and economic development of any society.大意：文化普及对任何社会和其经济的发展都是最基本的。

41．If students pay full fees，it will increase enough finance for universities.错因：用词不正确。一般来说finance不能用increase。

改正：If students pay full fees，it will raise enough finance for universities.大意：如果学生付全额学费，那么就会给大学带来足够的资金。42．Not surprising，poverty is a problem worthy of concern in every country.错因：现在分词在这里用得不恰当。

改正：Not surprisingly，poverty is a problem worthy ofconcem in every country.大意：贫困在每个国家都是一个值得关注的问题，这不足为奇。

43．The most simple approach to closing the gap between haves and haven-nots is applying different tax rates according to income levels.错因：simple的最高级是simplest。

改正：The simplest approach to closing the gap between haves and have-nots is applying different tax rates according to income levels．

大意：减少贫富差距的最简单途径是根据收入实行不同的税制.44．As the continued development of the charity, more people are concerned whether their donations have reached the right destinations.错因：as表示“随着......”或者“当……之时”的时候，是连词，而不是介词，因此应该改成介 7 词with。as和with的混淆是考生常犯的错误。

改正：With the continued development of the charity，more people are concerned whether their donations have reached the right destinations．

大意：随着慈善事业的不断发展，越来越多的人关心他们的捐赠物是否用到正确的地方。45．There has been considerable opposition against making military service compulsory among young people.错因：介词使用错误。opposition 后面一般不加against而是加to。

改正：There has been considerable opposition to making military service compulsory among young people.大意：关于强制年轻人服兵役，有相当多的反对意见

46．International aid provide to the poor countries will cause those countries to lose their morale and dignity.错因：句子结构混乱。provide是动词, 与后面的谓语动词重复。

改正：Providing international aid to the poor countries will cause those countries to lose their morale and dignity.大意：给贫困国家提供国际救援会让接受援助的国家失去士气和尊严。

47．Health care providers provide excess services to those who can pay，and limited services or no services at all to those who are unable to pay.错因：单词使用错误。excess表示“额外的，附加的”，而excessive表示“多余的，不必要的”----前者是中性词，而后者一般是贬义词。

改正：Health care providers provide excessive services to those who can pay，and limited services or no services at all to those who are unable to pay．

大意：医疗服务者为那些能付钱的人提供多余的服务，而为那些无力付钱的人提供有限的服务，其至是一点服务都不提供。

48.Education in a modern knowledge-based economy is one of the conditions to achieving economic growth，when it increases skills．

错因：单词使用错误。when表示“当”或者“如果”的意思，一般引导时间或者条件状语从句；as表示“当”或者“因为”的意思，一般引导条件或者原因状语从句。

改正：Education in a modem knowledge-based economy is one of the conditions to achieving economic growth，as it increases skills．

大意：在现代知识基础型经济里，教育是获得经济增长的条件之一，因为它可以提高技能。49.In many Weatern countries，students are exempt from tuition fee over the course of their compulsory education．

错因：fee是可数名词，在这里应该用复数。

改正：In many Western countries，students are exempt from tuition fees over the course of their compulsory education．

大意：在很多西方国家，学生在接受义务教育的过程中免交学费。

50.Because financial hardship is the real source of many family problems，so the government 8 should protect family benefit first．

错因：句子成分多余。because和so不能连用。

改正：Because financial hardship is the real source of many family problems，the government should protect family benefit first．

大意：经济拮据是很多家庭出现问题的真正原因，所以政府需要首先顾全家庭福利。51．As economic conditions improve，many people maintain that government spending should be centered on large development，such as stadiums，theatres and museums．

错因：development表示土建工程的时候，是可数名词，要么加冠词，要么变复数。改正：As economic conditions improve，many people maintain that government spending should be centered on large developments，such as stadiums，theatres and museums．

大意：由于／随着经济条件的改善，很多人坚持认为政府投资应该集中在大的发展项目上，比如说体育馆、剧院和博物馆。

52.Beneath the streets of a modern city exist the network of cables，pipes and tunnels required to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants．

错因：主谓不一致。这是一个倒装句，Beneath the streets of a modem city是地点状语，而主语network是单数名词，谓语动词应用单数。

改正：Beneath the streets of a modem city exists the network of cables, pipes and tunnels required to satisfy the needs of its inhabitants．

大意：在现代城市的街道下面，铺设着满足城市居民生活所需的电缆、管道和隧道网络。53．Cities are investing heavily in public transport，including subway system, in a bid to cut pollution．

错因：system是可数名词，且在此处表特指，故前面应该加定冠词。

改正：Cities are investing heavily in public transport，including the subway system，in a bid to cut pollution．

大意：作为减少污染的一种尝试，城市正在大力投资包括地铁系统在内的公共交通。54．Having a social environment conducive to the creature and utilization of knowledge is believed to be the key to enhancing the competitiveness of a country and realizing an affluent and comfortable society.错因：单词使用错误。creature意思是„„创造物‟‟或者“生物”，而这里应该用creation，表示“创造”。

改正：Having a social environment conducive to the creation and utilization of knowledge is believed to be the key to enhancing the competitiveness of a country and realizing an affluent and comfortable society．

大意：拥有一个利于创造和使用知识的社会环境被认为是提高国家竞争力和实现一个富裕和谐社会的关键因素。

55．Situations might occur which a person who seeks to pursue further education can not afford it．

错因：which后的句子是完整的，应该在which前加介词in，in which等于where。

改正：Situations might occur in which a person who seeks to pursue further education can not afford it.大意：一个人寻求进一步接受教育却负担不起其费用的情形是有可能出现的。

56．It remains a problem that in countries such as India, public education in many areas are not available for free due to budget constraints.错因：主谓不一致。public education为不可数，谓语动词要用单数。

改正：It remains a problem that in countries such as India，public education in many areas is not available for free due to budget constraints．

大意：在很多国家，譬如印度，因为预算限制而使公共教育在很多地区不能够免费获取的现象仍然是一个问题。

57．Although the progress in the healthcare sector，there is much scope to develop the accessibility of the service.错因：单词使用错误。although是连词，只能加完整的主谓结构，这里应该改成介词despite。改正：Despite the progress in the healthcare sector，there is much scope to develop the accessibility of the service．

大意：尽管医疗保健行业有了进步，但这种服务的普遍性仍然有很大的发展空间／但这种服务的普遍性仍有很多需要提高的地方。

58.Evidence suggests that the poor are fail to seek medical treatment because of the cost.错因：are 后面不能用动词原形，在这里应该用现在分词，表进行时态。

改正：Evidence suggests that the poor are failing to seek medical treatment because of the cost.大意：证据表明穷人因为费用的问题而不能够得到治疗。

59.It has been argued that donor countries‟ direct donation creates dependency and corruption, and it has an adverse effect on local production.错因：累赘。从句里的两个分句的主语一致，因此and 后面的it可以省略。

改正：It has been argued that donor countries‟ direct donation creates dependency and corruption, and has an adverse effect on local production.大意：人们认为捐献国直接给予援助会造成依赖和贪污，并对当地的生产产生负面影响。60.People are concerned that the persistence of high levels of unemployment has undermined people‟s confident in the economy‟s ability to create employment.错因：词性错误。confident是形容词，在这里要改成名词。

改正：People are concerned that the persistence of high levels of unemployment has undermined people‟s confidence in the economy‟s ability to create employment.大意：高失业率的持续已经削弱了人们对经济产生就业机会的能力的信心，对此，人们表示关注。

61.The spread of the Internet has profound influence on education and thought in many countries.错因：influence是可数名词，在本句中应该加冠词。

改正：The spread of the Internet has a profound influence on education and thought in many countries.10 大意：因特网的逐步扩展对很多国家的教育和思想都有深远的影响。

62.The growing use of computers are causing enormous and far-reaching changes in work and the quality of life in both industrialized and developing nations.错因：主谓不一致。主语是use，而不是computers，因此谓语动词要用单数。

改正：The growing use of computers is causing enormous and far-reaching changes in work and the quality of life in both industrialized and developing nations.大意：计算机的普遍使用使工业化国家以及发展中国家的工作和生活质量都产生了巨大而深远的变化。

63.Automobiles have been mass-produced and sold at a price average person could afford.错因：person是可数名词，且在此表示一类人，故前面要加冠词。

改正：Automobiles have been mass-produced and sold at a price the average person could afford.大意：汽车已经大量生产，并以平常人可以支付的价格出售。

64．For instance, the washing machine was invented and devised to less the drudgery of washing clothes.错因：单词使用错误。less是形容词或者副词，不能作动词，需要改成lessen。

改正：For instance, the washing machine was invented and devised to lessen the drudgery of washing clothes．

大意：例如，发明设计洗衣机是为了减少洗衣服的劳累。

65.As the distinctions between home and the workplace fade，more and more people go online from their offices to perform the tasks they are used to doing at home．

错因：单词使用错误。used to do表示“过去常常做”，be used to doing表示“习惯于做什么”。改正：As the distinctions between home and the workplace fade，more and more people go online from their offices to perform the tasks they used to do at home．

大意：随着家和工作地点之间区别的减弱，越来越多的人在办公室上网，做他们以前在家里做的事情。

66.Unemployment in market economies is always a consequence of structural change，which can further trace their root in technological change．

错因：指代不对。their应与前面的structural change对应，因此应该为单数形式。改正：Unemployment in market economies is always a consequence of structural change，which can further trace its root in technological change．

大意：在市场经济里，失业是结构改变的结果，而结构改变又可以进一步在技术变革里找到根源。

67.Introducing new technologies and replacing old ones is always a highly controversial matter，especially when the cost incur is particularly high．

错因：从句部分有两个谓语动词，分别是incur和is；需要将incur改成过去分词incurred，来修饰cost。

改正：Introducing new technologies and replacing old ones is always a highly controversial matter, especially when the cost incurred is particularly high．

大意：新科技的引进和旧科技的淘汰是非常具有争议性的话题，尤其是当涉及的费用特别高的时候。

68.Solutions to our problems do not lie in waiting hopefully for new technologies to emerge，but rather using public and private funds to make optimal use of existing technology． 错因：前后不一致。rather后面应该加in，和前面的介宾结构in waiting形成对称。改正：Solutions to our problems do not lie in waiting hopefully for new technologies to emerge，but rather in using public and private funds to make optimal use of existing technology． 大意：解决我们问题的方法并不在于等待新科技的出现，而是在于利用公共和私有的资金使现有的科技得到最充分的使用。

69.The dispose of unwanted by-products of industrialization is one of the thorniest problems in developing countries.错因：词性错误。dispose是动词，此处应用名词disposal。

改正：The disposal of unwanted by-products of industrialization is one of the thorniest problems in developing countries．

大意：工业化有害副产品的处理是发展中国家最棘手的问题之一。

70．In hospitals or on aircraft，mobile phone use is forbidden because of its possible interference with communication or other electronic equipments.错因：equipment是不可数名词，没有复数形式。

改正：In hospitals or on aircraft，mobile phone use is forbidden because of its possible interference with communication or other electronic equipment．

大意：在医院里或者飞机上，手机的使用是被禁止的，因为它可能干扰通信或其他电子设备。

71．The use of the Internet is now greater than television, radio and other media combined． 错因：than前后的语法成分要一致。

改正：The use of the Internet is now greater than that of television，radio and other media combined.大意：因特网的使用已经超过电视、广播以及其他媒体使用的总和。

72.Perhaps one of most far-reaching changes in the last century is the change from the labor-intense economy to the knowledge-based economy.错因：最高级前面要加the；变化发生在上世纪，应用过去时。

改正：Perhaps one of the most far-reaching changes in the last century was the change from the 1abour-intense economy to the knowledge-based economy.大意：也许上个世纪发生的最深远的变化是从劳动密集型经济到知识型经济的转变。73．A flexible timetable can make employees less likely to be stressful and sick．

错因：stressful一般不用来修饰人，只用来修饰物，比如说jobs、situations或者circumstances。改正：A flexible timetable can make employees experience a lower stress and sickness level．(也可以直接将stressful改为stressed。)大意：灵活的工作时间不容易使雇员产生压力和疲劳感。

74．Despite television is the dominant entertainment medium across the world，the Internet is gathering momentum.错因：despite是介词，介词不能引导句子，此处应用连词although。

改正：Although television is the dominant entertainment medium across the world，the Internet is gathering momentum．

大意：电视是世界上占据统治地位的娱乐性媒体，但因特网正在积聚力量蓬勃发展。75．With distance education，many working people are possibly to augment their careers and personal interests without giving up their jobs.错因：possibly是副词，一般不能作表语。

改正：With distance education，many working people are likely to augment their careers and personal interests without giving up their jobs．

大意：有了远程教育，很多有工作的人可以扩大他们的职业和个人兴趣，而不需要放弃他们现在的工作。

76．The same as any other mediums, the Internet provides entertainment for people of all ages and tastes．

错因：any other后面要跟名词的单数。

改正：The same as any other medium，the Internet provides entertainment for people of all ages and tastes．

大意：和其他任何媒体一样，因特网给所有年龄段和各种品味的人提供娱乐

77．As lifetime employment is dying out and jobs are more scarce，people could hardly expect to spend their working lives at the same company.错因：比较级使用错误。scarce的比较级是scarcer。

改正：As lifetime employment is dying out and jobs are scarcer，people could hardly expect to spend their working lives at the same company．

大意：由于终身的雇佣关系正在逐渐消失，而工作机会也变得更加稀少，在同一个公司工作一辈子的情况几乎不大可能出现。

78．There are not time and place limitations in online shopping and there are not boundaries，either geographical or political．

错因：词性错误、not足副词，副词不可以修饰名词。

改正：There are no time and place limitations in online shopping and there are no boundaries，either geographical or political．

大意：网络购物没有时间和地点的限制，也没有地理的或是政治上的界限

79．Because of the rapid evolution of worker skills，training has become a more recurring process than an one-time event．

错因：one-time非元音开头，因此不定冠词要用a。

改正：Because of the rapid evolution of worker skills，training has become a more recurring process than a one-time event．

大意：因为劳动者技能的快速发展，培训已经变成一个经常进行的而不是一次性的事情。

80．The ultimate financial value of working at home is that if managed time well，the homeworker should be able to achieve more during the day than he or she would in a workplace．

错因：在这里不应该用过去分词managed。主语是homeworker，与manage之间是主动关系，所以应该用现在分词managing。

改正：The ultimate financial value of working at home is that if managing time well，the homeworker should be able to achieve more during the day than he or she would in a workplace． 大意：在家里工作的最大经济价值是：如果时间安排好的话，他／她在家里做的工作可以比在工作单位做的工作更多。

81．One of the greatest Ironies of the 20 century is that although many technologies were intended to enhance our well-being，they have undermined our health over time． 错因：惯用法。表示世纪的时候，应该用序数词。

改正：One of the greatest ironies of the 20th century is that although many technologies were intended to enhance our well-being，they have undermined our health over time．

大意：二十世纪最大的讽刺之一就是很多科技原本是为了提高我们的生活质量，而它们最终都会破坏我们的健康。

82．The notion that a knowledge-based economy is replacing the industrial economy is not wide accepted among people．

错因：词性错误。形容词wide不能用来修饰accepted，应用副词。

改正：The notion that a knowledge-based economy is replacing the industrial economy is not widely accepted among people．

大意：知识基础型经济正在取代工业经济的看法没有被人们广泛接受。

83．As a general rule, pollution problems increase during the early stages of a country‟s industrial development then diminish as increasing industrial development generates adequate resources to tackle such problems.错因：句中出现两个动词increase和diminish，需要加连词but。

改正：As a general rule．pollution problems increase during the early stages of a country's industrial development but then diminish as increasing industrial development generates adequate resources to tackle such problems．

大意：通常，污染问题会在一个国家的工业发展初期增加，然后，当工业发展的增长产生出足够的资源来解决这些问题的时候再减少。

84．The allure of computers stems mainly from the fact that it can be used for a wide range of purposes．

错因：it不能指代前面的复数computers。

改正：The allure of computers stems mainly from the fact that they can be used for a wide range of purposes．

大意：电脑的吸引力主要在于它们的用途广泛。

85．Of the many machines invented in the last century，none has a greater impact on our daily lives than computers．

错因：有than的时候前面的形容词要加比较级。

改正：Of the many machines invented in the last century，none has a greater impact on our daily lives than computers．

大意：在上个世纪所发明的很多机器当中，没有任何一个比电脑对我们日常生活的影响更大。

86．Many architects have received wide recognition by fusing classical architecture with elements of modern art．

错因：单词使用错误。classic是“一流的”意思，而classical是“古典的”意思。

改正：Many architects have received wide recognition by fusing classical architecture with elements of modern art．

大意：很多建筑师将古典建筑和现代艺术的元素融合在一起，获得了广泛认可，87．Given the competitive pressure，not a few young people have fallen into the habit of using drugs(such as sleeping pills)，drink and smoke to have fallen into the habit relieve stress． 错因：词性错误。drink和smoke都是动词，要用动名词形式。

改正：Given the competitive pressure．not a few young people have fallen into the habit of using drugs(such as sleeping pills)，drinking and smoking to relieve stress．

大意：不少年轻人为了减轻竞争带来的压力养成了使用药物(比如安眠药)、抽烟和喝酒的习惯。

88．Loss of leisure time and family disruption are normally recognized as the negative results of extra job hour．

错因：hour是可数名词，在这里要用复数。

改正：Loss of leisure time and family disruption are normally recognized as the negative results of extra job hours．

大意：休闲时间的缺乏和家庭生活的破裂经常被认为是工作时间过长的负面后果。89．When people go shopping，they are not only with desire for consumer goods，but also abstract desires like for the respect or acceptance from other people．

错因：not only…but also…是并列连词，前后的语法结构应该一致。

改正：When people go shopping．they are not only with desire for consumer goods．but also with abstract desires like for the respect or acceptance from other people．

大意：当人们去购物的时候，他们不仅带着对消费品的期望，同时也有更多抽象的需要，比如说，为了得到别人的尊重或者接受。

90．It is not coincidence that we now take fewer vacations for shorter periods of time and find the boundaries between work and play increasingly blurred．

错因：词性错误。coincidence是可数名词，在这里需要加不定冠词a；也可以将not改成no，因为no等于not a或者not an；It is no coincidence...是一种习惯说法，表示“这不是偶然的”。改正：It is no coincidence that we now take fewer vacations for shorter periods of time and find the boundaries between work and play increasingly blurred．

大意：我们现在假期少、持续时间短，而且工作和娱乐之间的界限更为模糊，这不是偶然 15 的。

91．Despite a growing rate of obesity in developed countries，undernutrition and malnutrition remain the most common nutritional problem in developing nations． 错因：problem应该使用复数，因为主语有两个问题。

改正：Despite a growing rate of obesity in developed countries，undernutrition and malnutrition remain the most common nutritional problems in developing nations．

大意：尽管发达国家的肥胖率在增长，但营养不良和营养失调仍然是发展中国家最普遍的营养问题。

92.Due to work or family commitments, many people give up exercise habits in mistaken．Belief that only vigorous exercise or playing sport counts as healthy activity． 错因：belief是可数名词，要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：Due to work or family commitments, many people give up exercise habits in the mistaken belief that only vigorous exercise or playing sport counts as healthy activity．

大意：由于工作或者家庭琐事，很多人放弃了锻炼的习惯。这些人往往错误地认为只有高强度的锻炼或者体育运动才算健康活动。

93.Fashions may vary significant within a society according to age, social class, occupation and geography as well as over time.错因：词性错误。significant是形容词，不可以修饰动词。

改正：Fashions may vary significantly within a society according to age，social class，occupation and geography as well as over time.大意：在一个社会里，时尚会随着年龄、社会阶层、职业、地理位臵以及时间而显著地变化。

94.The convenience and widespread availability of cars account for its popularity among today's people．

错因：its指代前面的cars，因此应用复数形式。

改正：The convenience and widespread availability of cars account for their popularity among today‟s people．

大意: 汽车的便捷性和普遍性使其非常受当今人们的欢迎．

95.When it comes to eating habits, it becomes clear that more is not necessary better.错因：词性错误。necessary是形容词，不能修饰形容词，要改用副词。

改正：When it comes to eating habits，it becomes clear that more is not necessarily better.大意：当说到饮食习惯的时候，有个道理显而易见----并非吃得越多越好。96．A benefit of eating a balanced diet is you can enjoy your health． 错因：句子成分残缺。is后面是个从句，应用that引导。

改正：A benefit of eating a balanced diet is that you can enjoy your health.大意：饮食均衡的一个好处是你可以保持健康。

97.Common knowledge is that people are more likely to feel under stress if they overwork and does not have enough time for rest.16 错因：主谓不一致。从句中主语是they，因此助动词应该用do，而不是does。

改正：Common knowledge is that people are more likely to feel under stress if they overwork and do not have enough time for rest.大意：众所周知，如果人们工作过量而且缺少休息，则更容易感到压力。

98.Watching films are one of the most popular entertainments and shared by people of different ages，including children，young people，adults or even the old． 错因：主谓不一致。动名词作主语的时候，谓语动词要用单数。

改正：Watching films is one of the most popular entertainments and shared by people of different ages，including children，young people，adults or even the old．

大意：看电影是最流行的消遣之一，各个年龄层的人都得以分享其乐趣，包括小孩、青年、成年人甚至老人。

99．The benefits of job-hopping are taking on a new challenge，which can be translated into an initiative for self-development，enriched experiences and possibly higher incomes． 错因：动词are不准确。taking on a new challenge只是benefits中的一个，应该改用include，表示“包括”。

改正：The benefits of job-hopping include taking on a new challenge，which can be translated into an initiative for self-development，enriched experiences and possibly higher incomes． 大意：跳槽的一个好处是接受一个新的挑战，这可以转化成自我提高的动力、经验的积累以及收入的提高。

100．Because of economic transform，many people need immediate reeducation for employment． 错因：transform是动词，在这里要用名词transformation。

改正：Because of economic transformation，many people need immediate reeducation for employment．

大意：因为经济转型的原因，很多人为了工作需要马上接受再教育。

101.Overworking links to many adverse health effects, including profound fatigues，back pain，general anxiety，headaches，and occupational diseases．

错因：link是及物动词，不需要加介词。一般来说，当link表示“……和……相关”的时候，其搭配是be linked to。

改正：Overworking is linked to many adverse health effects，including profound fatigues，back pain，general anxiety，headaches，and occupational diseases．

大意：工作过度会对健康产生许多负面影响，包括深度疲劳、背疼、焦虑、头疼和职业痛。102．At times of rapid change, the quest for latest knowledge is urgent.错因：最高级前要加定冠词。

改正：At times of rapid change，the quest for the latest knowledge is urgent． 大意：在瞬息万变的时代，对最新知识的获取是迫切的。

103．City dwellers can become more healthy if they walk or take public transportation to their destinations and increase their daily exercise．

错因：healthy是双音节词，比较级应该是healthier。

改正：City dwellers can become healthier if they walk or take public transportation to their destinations and increase their daily exercise．

大意：如果走路或者搭乘公共交通工具去目的地，并且增加每天的锻炼，那么城市居民会变得更健康。

104.The decline of manufacturing and the contraction of male manual jobe are among those emerge trends in the employment market.错因：emerge是动词，在这里需要改成现在分词emerging，形容trends。

改正：The decline of manufacturing and the contraction of male manual jobs are among those emerging trends in the employment market．

大意：制造业的衰退和男性体力工作的减少成为雇佣市场的一些最新趋势。

105．Scientists are interested in the benefits of a healthy balanced diet fro a long time because it appears to reduce a person‟s chances of developing heart disease, obesity and cancer． 错因：时态错误。当出现像for a long time这样的时间短语时，应该用完成时态。改正：Scientists have been interested in the benefits of a healthy balanced diet for a long time because it appears to reduce a person‟S chances of developing heart disease，obesity and cancer． 大意：长期以来，科学家对健康平衡的饮食所带来的好处很感兴趣，因为它会减少一个人出现心脏病、肥胖症和癌症的几率。

106．Improper use of substances，alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people have pressure.错因：cause和pressure这两个词使用不正确。

改正：Improper use of substances，alcoholism and unhealthy lifestyles are among other problems which cause people to feel under pressure．

大意：药物的不恰当使用、酗酒和不健康的生活方式是会导致人们感到压力的其中一些原因。

107．One of the most important point is that online shopping enables people to go shopping nd normal business hours．

错因：one of后面应该加名词的复数。

改正：One of the most important points is that online shopping enables people to go shopping beyond normal business hours．

大意：很重要的一点是，网上购物可以让人们在非营业时间购买商品。

108.There is a growing recognition that more people than ever before have adopted shopping as hobbies.错因：hobbies和shopping在数上不一致。

改正：There is a growing recognition that more people than ever before have adopted shopping as a hobby．

大意：人们逐渐意识到越来越多的人把购物当成一种爱好。

109．It is well-know that hobbies form an important part of our everyday lives． 错因：没有well-know这个说法，这里要用形容词well—known。

改正：It is well-known that hobbies form an important part of our everyday lives． 大意：众所周知，业余爱好是日常生活的重要组成部分。

110．Unless the integrity of the family is restored，and all traditional values will disappear． 错因：成分多余。unless是一个从属连词，可以连接两个句子，不需要再用一个连词and。改正：Unless the integrity of the family is restored，all traditional values will disappear． 大意：除非家庭的完整性得以恢复，否则传统价值观念就会消失。

111．Those who from a working-class background are more likely to experience stress.错因：从句缺谓语动词。

改正：Those who are from a working-class background are more likely to experience stress.大意：来自工薪阶层的人更有可能体会到生活的压力。

112.There are many distressing social trends that continue with out a break,include family breakup and declining educational standards.错因：句中出现两个谓语动词：are和include，这里可以把include改成including，充当状语。

改正：There are many distressing social trends that continue without a break，including family breakup and declining educational standards．

大意：有很多不好的社会趋势仍然在持续，包括家庭关系的破裂和教育质量的下降。113.Although in theory，those who stick to a strict vegetarian diet never eat meat or fish，but in practice，many foods they are eating contain meat or fish.错因：although和but不能连用。

改正：In theory，those who stick to a strict vegetarian diet never eat meat or fish,but in practice,many foods they are eating contain meat or fish．

大意：理论上，素食主义者从不吃肉类和鱼类，但实际上他们吃的很多食物中都包含肉或鱼。

114．Stress can be destructive but it also can be constructive if it is handled well.错因：it和itis有点累赘，在这种情况下，往往可以省略。

改正：Stress can be destructive but also can be constructive if handled well.大意：压力具有破坏性，但若处理得当也可以成为动力。

115．As the modern transport used widely, it is possible that people can travel everywhere in the world.错因：as是连词，后面应该加完整的句子。

改正：As the modern transport is being used widely，it is possible that people can travel everywhere in the world．

大意：随着现代交通工具被广泛使用，人们周游世界成为可能。116．Life today is filled with sources of stress, most of that cannot be avoided.错因：非限制性定语从句不能用that。

改正：Life today is filled with sources ofstress，most of which cannot be avoided 大意：现在的生活充满着各种压力源，其中的大部分是不可能避免的。

117．With positive personalities，one can feel that the world is a more congenial place to live． 错因：句子成分残缺。place 是to live的逻辑宾语，live为不及物动词，因此需加介词in。改正：With positive personalities，one can feel that the world is a more congenial place to 1ive in.大意：乐观的性格会使一个人觉得世界是一个更为舒适的生活场所。118.The three main dead diseases in today‟s society，heart disease，cancer and stroke，can be largely prevented．with lifestyle chages, such as adopting a low-fat vegetarian diet，refraining from smoking and alcohol abuse and getting regular exercise.错因．单词使用错误。dead表示“死了的”，应该用deadly，表不“致命的”。改正．The three main deadly diseases in today‟s society，heart disease，cancer and stroke，can be largely prevented．with lifestyle chages, such as adopting a low-fat vegetarian diet，refraining from smoking and alcohol abuse and getting regular exercise.大意．现代社会的三个主要致命疾病——心脏病、癌症还有中风，大都可以通过改变生活万式来预防，比如吃低脂肪的素食、不抽烟不酗酒以及经常做运动。

119.Increased leisure time does not necessarily benefit from the well-being of individuals，because periods of inactivity have actually been prolonged.错因：benefit 表示“对……有利”的时候是及物动词，不需要加介词。

改正：Increased leisure time does not necessarily benefit the well-being of indiViduals，because periods of inactivity have actually been prolonged.大意：休闲时间的增加未必一定有利于人的健康和快乐，因为人们不运动的时间实际上被延长了。

120．One the nagative side,openness and honesty sometimes lead to people express extreme opinions more openly.错因：leadto的to是介词，后面不能加动词原形。

改正：0n the negative side，openiless and honesty sometimes lead to people expressing extreme opinions more openly．

大意：从消极的一面讲，坦诚和诚实有时候会导致人们更加公开地表达极端的观点。121．Maximising one‟s own profit usually imply working against the welfare of other people． 错因：主谓不一致。动名词作主语的时候，谓语动词要用单数。

改正：Maximising one's own profit usually implies working against the welfare of other people.大意：最大程度地满足我们自己的利益通常意味着要损害其他人的利益。

122．Increased life pressure and the climbing unemployment rate have remained as some of the major reasons to account for people's depression.错因：在本句中，increase应用现在分词形式修饰life，表示“逐渐增加的”。

改正：lncreasing life pressure and the climbing unemployment rate have remained as some of the major reasons to account for people‟s depression.大意：逐渐增加的生活压力和不断上升的失业率一直是人们压抑的几种主要原因。123.The value of the arts to society has been subjected to a lot of discussions over the years． 错因：discussion泛指的时候往往不需要加s，只有具体到一次或者某一个讨论时，才用复 20 数，譬如说class discussions“教室讨论”。

改正：The value of the arts to society has been subjected to a lot of discussion over the years． 大意：艺术对社会的价值这些年来一直被广泛地讨论。

124．New constructions should not destroy the cityscape that characterise a city． 错因：主谓不一致。cityscape是可数名词的单数，动词要用单数。

改正：New constructions should not destroy the cityscape that characterises a city 大意：新建筑不应该破坏那些代表一个城市特点的都市风景。

125．In some contexts，it is undeniably true that many other elements，rather than pursuit of aesthetical values，concerns building designers．

错因：主谓不一致。rather than和as well as类似，当它出现的时候，谓语动词应该跟随它前面的主语来变化，这里concern的主语是elements，因此，应该用复数。

改正：In some contexts，it is undeniably true that many other elements．rather than pursuit of aesthetical values，concern building designers．

大意：在某些情形下，毫无疑问，房屋设计师更关注很多其他的因素，而不是对审美价值的追求。

126． Artists can unlock our imagination，stir us to pause，think and reflect． 错因：并列句中间应该有并列连词。

改正：Artists can unlock our imagination and stir us to pause,think and reflect． 大意：艺术家会释放我们的想像力，促使我们停下来考虑和沉思。

127．A violent film or television programme has been always the subject of criticism as it contains a lot of scenes that show violence．

错因：副词的位臵错误。一般来说，副词放在助动词have／has和been之间。

改正：A violent film or television programme has always been the subject of criticism as it contains a lot of scenes that show violence．

大意：暴力电影或者电视节目总成为被批评的对象，因为其中包含很多表现暴力的场面。128．When people are exposed to the violence in movies，especially the movies acted by a popular celebrity，they are more likely to copy the violent acts，considered them acceptable and adorable． 错因：这里的consider应该用现在分词，因为主句的主语是观众，而观众与consider之间为主动关系。

改正：When people are exposed to the violence in movies．especially the movies acted by a popular celebrity，they are more likely to copy the violent acts，considering them acceptable and adorable．

大意：当人们接触电影暴力，特别是那些著名影星主演的电影的时候，他们更有可能模仿暴力行为，因为他们认为这些行为是可以接受的并值得崇拜的。

129．Imitating is considered a part of our human nature and particularly explicit among the young people．

错因：当表示某物是某物一部分的时候，part前不需要加a。

改正：Imitating is considered part of our human nature and particularly explicit among the young 21 people．

大意：模仿被认为是人的本性的一部分，在年轻人身上尤其明显。

130．The government，which is expected to serve the citizen around its country, has the responsibility to reduce or eliminate citizens‟fear of vilent crime by any available means． 错因：关系代词使用错误。应该用who，而不是which。

改正：The government，who is expected to serve the citizen around its country，has the responsibility to reduce or eliminate citizens‟fear of violent crime by any available means． 大意：作为为人民服务的机构，政府有责任通过任何可行的途径去减少或消除任何暴力犯罪引起的公众恐慌。

131．In the view of the fact that it can negatively impact the audience‟s behaviour，a detailed description of violent crime in the media should be restricted.错因：常用搭配。in view of为常用搭配，意思是“考虑到……”。

改正：In view of the fact that it can negatively impact the audience‟s behaviour，a detailed description of violent crime in the media should be restricted．

大意：考虑到对观众的负面影响，媒体对暴力犯罪的细节描述应该有所限制。

132．Watching television has become a way of life,therefore，its effects on viewers have drawn much more attention than ever before．

错因：therefore是副词，而不是连词，不能够连接两个完整的句子。

改正：Watching television has become a way of life；therefore，its effects on viewers have drawn much more attention than ever before．

大意：看电视已成为一种生活方式。因此，它对观众的影响受到空前的关注。

133.Many people harbour misconceptions about the Impact of violence display in the media on us.错因：此句有两个动词harbour和display，在这里应该将display改为过去分词形式，修饰violence。

改正：Many people harbour misconceptions about the impact of violence displayed in the media on us．

大意：很多人对媒体暴力的影响持有错误的观念。

134．We need to realise that a large proportion of information presented by news media might have no relevant to our everyday lives.错因：relevant是形容词，不能放在have后面作宾语。

改正：We need to realise that a large proportion of information presented by news media might have no relevance to our everyday lives．

大意：我们需要意识到新闻媒体发布的很多信息与我们的日常生活并无关联。135．Many media are able to transfer information with high speed and accuracy.错因：常与speed和accuracy搭配的介词为at和with；此外，并列连词and前后的语法成分应一致。

改正：Many media are able to transfer information at high speed and with accuracy.22 大意：很多媒体能够迅速准确地传播信息。

136．People tend to believe that every character in the movie has real life counterpart.错因：counterpart是可数名词，且在这里表示一类，故要加不定冠词a。

改正：People tend to believe that every character in the movie has a real life counterpart.大意：人们倾向于相信每一个电影角色在现实生活中都有相应的人物。

137．In movies，violence is used as a solution to problems, which are contradictory in a society which values non-violent solutions.错因：句中第一层从句的先行词不是problems，而是前面的整个句子。

改正：In movies，vio1ence is used as a solution to problems，which is contradictory in a society which values non-violent solutions．

大意：在电影里，暴力被用作解决问题的方法，这和重视非暴力解决方法的社会是矛盾的。138．Many movies tend to trivialise or glorify the actual consequences of violence, instead of addressing them.错因：address的词义是“解决”，近似于“solve”，代词指代的应该是violence，而不是violence的后果(consequences)，因此应该用代词it。

改正：Many movies tend to trivialise or glorify the actual consequences of violence,instead of addressing it．

大意：很多电影趋向于缩小或是颂扬暴力的实际结果，而不是解决暴力问题。

139．The way the media presents information on crimes and offenders is worth of concern，because it can easily form an opinion about criminals.错因：worth作形容词时意为“值……(多少)钱”，其后加of一般用于像five dollars‟worth of paper(价值五块钱的纸张)这样的表达；Worthy作形容词时意为“值得……的”，wotrthy of concem是固定说法，表示“值得关注的”。

改正：The way the media presents information on crimes and offenders is worthy of concern,because it can easily form an opinion about criminals．

大意：媒体发布关于犯罪和罪犯信息的方式是值得关注的，因为它可以很轻易地形成人们对罪犯的看法。

140.The increasing violence showing in films or on television has sparked public outcry, and some critics have shown their concern on the interplay of social violence and media violence． 错因：分词使用错误。在这里应该用过去分词shown，与violence之间是被动关系。改正：The increasing violence shown in films or on television has sparked public outcry, and some critics have shown their concern on the interplay of social violence and media violence． 大意：电影电视中逐渐增加的暴力引起了公众的反感，一些评论家对社会暴力和媒体暴力之间的相互影响表示了关注。

141.Some video games might lead children to associate pleasure and success with their ability to cause suffering to other．

错因：单词使用错误。other是形容词性的代词，表示“其他的”，介词to后需要跟名词，应该用名词性的代词others。

改正：Some video games might lead children to associate pleasure and success with their ability to cause suffering to others．

大意：一些电子游戏引导小孩将自己的快乐和成功与他们导致别人痛苦的能力联系在一起。142.One of the main arguments against advertising is its giving an exaggerated description of something which is not existed．

错因：something作先行词的时候，后面只能用that；exist是不及物动词，不能用被动。改正：One of the main arguments against advertising is its giving an exaggerated descnption of something that does not exist．

大意：反对广告的一个主要观点是广告夸大一些并不存在的东西。

143.It is difficult for businesses to produce products that satisfy the demands of all consumers and acceptable to consumers at all income levels.错因：句子成分残缺。and是并列连词，后面的分句没有谓语动词。

改正：It is difficult for businesses to produce products that satisfy the demands of all consumers and are acceptable to consumers at all income levels．

大意：企业很难生产出使所有消费者都满意并可以被不同收入水平的人所接受的产品。144.The essence of the argument is that advertisement provides information on brands，prices and quality，thus increasing buyer knowledge.错因：advertisement是可数名词，不能单独使用，或者用不可数名词advertising。改正：The essence of the argument is that advertising provides information on brands，prices and quality，thus increasing buyer knowledge．

大意：讨论的重点在于广告提供了关于品牌、价格和质量的信息，因而增加了消费者的知识。

145．Whenever a matter of public concern is discovered，we rely on the cooperation of the media to ensure that the information reach wide audience．

错因：information是不可数名词，谓语动词要用单数；audience是可数名词，要加限定词，此处表示一类观众，而不是特指的观众群，因此应加不定冠词。

改正：Whenever a matter of public concern is discovered, we rely on the cooperation of the media to ensure that the information reaches a wide audience．

大意：每当有受公众关注的事件发生时，我们需要依靠媒体的合作来确保信息可以传送到广大的观众那里。

146．As the world has industrialiead and its population has grown，the problem of water pollutions has intensified． 错因：pollution是不可数名词。

改正：As the world has industrialised and its population has grown．the problem of water pollution has intensified．

大意：由于世界的工业化和人口的增长，水污染的问题加剧了。

147．The number of private vehicles is increasing at a rapidly rate，causing traffic jams and a choking atmosphere.24 错因：rapidly是副词，副词不能修饰名词。

改正：The number of private vehicles is increasing at a rapid rate，causing traffic jams and a choking atmosphere．

大意：私人交通工具的数量正在高速增长，导致交通堵塞和让人窒息的空气环境? 148．There is a shortage of water in some countries since the weather is hot due to greenhouse efects.错因：“the weather”指代不清。

改正：There is a shortage of water in some countries since their weather is hot due to greenhouse effects．

大意：由于温室效应导致的炎热天气，一些国家出现水短缺的问题。

149．Air pollution and other kinds of pollution become worese as a result of the increasing traffic． 错因：时态错误。become作“变得”讲时较少用于一般现在时态，在这里可以用进行时态或者完成时态。

改正：Air pollution and other kinds ofpollution have become worse as a result of the increasing traffic．

大意：空气污染和其他污染的恶化是交通流量加大的结果。

150．Then expanding gap between rich and poor and increasing environmental degradation are among the major problems faced the countries in the developing world.错因：在这里face作“面临”讲，与problem是主动关系，因此应该用现在分词facing。改正：The expanding gap between rich and poor and increasing environmental degradation are among the major problems facing the countries in the developing world．

大意：发展中国家面临的主要问题中包括贫富差距的加大和环境的不断恶化。

151．One of the problems of world agriculture that has been pereisted from the middle of the last century to the present day is an increasing reliance on fertilleere and machinery． 错因：persist是不及物动词。

改正：One ofthe problems of world agriculture that has persisted from the middle ofthe last century to the present day is an increasing reliance on fertilisers and machinery．

大意：从上个世纪中叶到今天，世界农业持续的问题之一是对化肥和机器的使用逐渐增多。152．Energy efficiency and greater use of renewable energy are crucial to combat climate change． 错因：词性理解错误。to在这里是介词，后面要加名词或者动名词。

改正：Energy efficiency and greater use ofrenewable energy are crucial to combating climate change.大意：能源效率和可更新能源的更广泛使用对于应对气候变化至关重要。

153．The question of whether fertilisers are a curse or a blessing to farmers are still being bitterly contested．

错因：主谓不一致。主语是question，谓语动词要用单数。

改正：The question of whether fertilisers are a curse or a blessing to farmers is still being bitterly contested．

大意：化肥对农民是好是坏的问题现在仍然处于激烈争论之中。

154．Fossil fuels such as coal，oii and gas will service our needs for some considereble times to come．

错因：time表示时间的时候是不可数名词，没有复数。

改正：Fossil fuels such as coal，oil and gas will service our needs for some considerable time to come．

大意：像煤、石油还有天然气这些化石燃料在即将到来的很长一段时间内都能满足我们的需要。

155．Some people argue that climate change is beyond human controI and the best way to tackle is to stimulate economic growth so that nations will be rich enough to pay for adaptation in the future．

错因：句子不完整。tackle是及物动词，后缺宾语。

改正：Some people argue that climate change is beyond human control and the best way to tackle it is to stimulate economic growth so that nations will be rich enough to pay for adaptation in the future.大意：有一些人认为气候变化超出人类控制，解决这个问题的最好方法是促进经济增长，使国家变得足够富裕，以便在未来能够承担得起适应新环境所需的费用。

156.Industrialiestion has been responsible for the most radical of the environmental changes causing by humans.错因：cause与changes之间是被动关系，因此应该用过去分词caused。

改正：Industrialisation has been responsible for the most radical of the environmental changes caused by humans．

大意：工业化应该为人类所造成的最根本的环境变化负责。

157．Climate change over the past decades cannot be explained by natural processes alone，and human activities are believed to have marked impact.错因：impact是可数名词，且在这里表示范指，故要加不定冠词a。

改正：Climate change over the past decades cannot be explained by natural processes alone，and human activities are believed to have a marked impact．

大意：过去数十年的气候变化不能够仅仅用大自然的进化来解释，人类的行为对此也有显著影响。

158.Wherever is plenty of water, life is abundant in various form.错因：wherever(=at any place that／where)后面的主谓结构不完整；various后面的名词要用复数。

改正：Wherever there is plenty of water，1ife is abundant in various forms.大意：在任何水源充足的地方，各种类型的生命都非常繁盛。

159．Population growth is the most obvious reason why there is less room for another species.错因：another表示“另外一种”，而在原句中不可能只代表一种物种，因此应该用other，表示“其他的”；也可以改成any other，表示“其他的任何一个”。

改正：Population growth is the most obvious reason why there is less room for other species.大意：人口增长是使其他物种生存空间减少的最显著原因。

160．In many countries，one of the biggest challenges are to achieve economic growth，without causing severe harm to the environment.错因：主谓不一致。主语是one，因此谓语动词应该用单数。

改正：In many countries，one of the biggest challenges is to achieve economic growth，without causing severe harm to the environment．

大意：在很多国家，最大的挑战之一是发展经济而又不严重破坏环境。

161．As the development of technology,we will discover an alternative to resource-intensive and wasteful industry，which allows us to use resources sparingly and cause minimum damage to the environment．

错因：as作连词时后面只能加完整的主谓结构，作介词时表示“像……”或者“处于某种状态”，此句要表示“随着...”，因此此处应该用with。

改正：With the development of technology，we will discover an alternative to resource—intensive and wasteful industry，which allows us to use resources sparingly and cause minimum damage to the environment．

大意：随着科技的发展，我们将找到取代资源密集型、浪费型工业的替代品，这可以让我们节约能源。对环境造成最小的伤害。

162．The more waste we generate, the more waste we have to dispose.错因：dispose当作“丢掉，处理”讲时，是不及物动词，需要加of.改正：The more waste we generate，the more waste we have to dispose of． 大意：我们制造的垃圾越多，需要处理的垃圾就越多。

163.Experiments show that reducing the diversity of an ecosystem is lower the abundance of wildlife．

错因：谓语动词使用错误。is和lower同为动词。

改正：Experiments show that reducing the diversity of an ecosystem will lower the abundance of wildlife．

大意：实验显示，减少生态系统的多样性会降低野生动物的丰富性。

164．In most cases，the damage to a ecosystem can be attributed to individual activities such as over-hunting and pollution，or to habitat loss． 错因：ecosystem元音开头，应该用an。

改正：In most cases，the damage to an ecosystem can be attributed to individual activities such as over-hunting and pollution，or to habitat loss．

大意：在大部分情况下，对生态系统的损害可以归咎于个人的行为，比如说过度狩猎和污染，或者动植物栖息地的减少。

165．Although many people have strongly opposed vivisection，some other people are enthusiastically support this practice．

错因：谓语动词使用错误。are和support同为动词，不能连续使用。

改正：Although many people have strongly opposed vivisection，some other people are enthusiastically supportive ofthis practice．

大意：虽然很多人强烈反对活体解剖，而其他一些人则非常热切地支持这种行为。166．It is lenerelI agreed that living being with a brain feels pain，so laws should be designed to limit the suffering of experimental animals.错因：being表示“生物”的时候是可数名词，在这里要加冠词或者形容词every。

改正：It is generally agreed that every living being with a brain feels pain，so laws should be designed to limit the suffering of experimental animals．

大意：人们普遍认同每个有大脑的生命都会感觉疼痛，所以应该制定法律来减少实验动物的痛楚。

167．Either in theory or in or in practice，there are alternative sources of nutritions to animal meat 错因：nutrition是不可数名词。

改正：Either in theory or in practice，there are alternative sources of nutrition to animal meat.大意：不管是在理论上还是在实际上，肉类都有很多可替代的营养来源。

168．An animal‟s brain system is much less complex than a man.As a result，animals do not suffer as a man would under similar circumstances.错因：than前后的语法结构应一致，此处进行比较的不是动物和人，而是动物的大脑系统和人的大脑系统，因此要用所有格man‟s。

改正：An animal‟s brain system is much less complex than a man‟s．As a result，animals do not suffer as a man would under similar circumstances．

大意：动物的大脑系统远远不如人的大脑系统那么复杂所以在类似情况下，动物不会像人一样感觉那么痛楚。

169．Rarely researcherscan provideprope_rcondIitionsforlabanimals.错因：带有否定意义的副词放在句首，句子要倒装．

改正：Rarely can researchers provide proper conditions for lab animals.大意：研究者很少能够为实验室动物提供适当的条件。

170．Continued efforts made by researchers open up the possibility of finding acure of some deadly diseases．

错因：介词使用错误。a cure后习惯上跟for。

改正：Continued efforts made by researchers open up the possibility of finding a cure for some deadly diseases．

大意：研究人员所做的持续努力为找到一些致命疾病的治愈方法增加了机会? 171．1t remains a matter of great concern to US that young，skilled workers are difficult to be found in country areas.错因：easy／difficult to do中to后的动词一般用主动。

改正：It remains a matter of great concern to US that young，skilled workers are difficult to find in country areas.大意：年轻、有技能的工作者在乡村地区很难找到，这对我们来说依然是一个值得关注的 28 事情。

172．A city can be charecterised by a large network of amenities.which are provided for people's convenient，enjoyment or comfort，including shopping centres and sports facilities． 错因：convenient是形容词，不能充当for的宾语。

改正：A city can be characterised by a large network of amenities．which are provided for people‟s convenience，enjoyment or comfort，including shopping centres and sports facilities． 大意：一个城市的特征往往是有很多的设施，如购物中心和运动器材，这些设施为人们的方便、娱乐或舒适提供便利。

173．Despite the expansion in the number of medical graduates，many countries are not able to find sufficient doctors to meet theirs needs．

错因：theirs是名词性代词，不能修饰名词，应该改成形容词性代词their。

改正：Despite the expansion in the number of medical graduates,many countries are not able to find sufficient doctors to meet their needs．

大意：尽管医科毕业生的数量增多，很多地区仍找不到足够的医生来满足需要。174．Reports in recent years on the widen gap between urban and rural areas have raised public awareness on the importance of education for rural people． 错因：widen是动词，不能修饰名词，要改成现在分词。

改正：Reports in recent years on the widening gap between urban and rural areas have raised public awareness on the importance of education for rural people．

大意：在最近几年，关于城乡差距加大的报告已经提高了人们对农村教育重要性的意识。175．Factories are strongly encouraged to locate far away from the city centre； unless there are compelling reasons to contrary．

错因：惯用法。to the contrary表示“相反地”。

改正：Factories are strongly encouraged to locate far away from the city centre；unless there are compelling reasons to the contrary．

大意：工厂被强烈建议建在远离市中心的地方，除非具备强有力的理由不去那么做。176．Without basic education，rural people are nearly unlikely to increase their productivities，adopt advanced technologies and improve their livelihoods． 错因：productivity是不可数名词，没有复数形式。

改正：Without basic education，rural people are nearly unlikely to increase their productivity．adopt advanced technologies and improve their livelihoods．

大意：如果没有基础教育，农村居民基本上不可能提高生产率、采用先进的科技和提高谋生技能。

177．The second factor that induces people flock to the city is the high availability of facilities and amenities there.错因：induce sb．to do sth．是固定搭配，不定式作复合宾语，这里少了一个to。

改正：The second factor that induces people to flock to the city is the high availability of facilities and amenities there．

大意：第二个吸引人们涌入城市的因素是城市里可享用的设备和设施资源。178．There are a wide range of social and economic factors drive the expansion of cities． 错因：句中有两个谓语动词are和drive，需要将其中一个改成从句。

改正：There are a wide range of social and economic factors which drive the expansion of cities.大意：有很多社会和经济因素促成了城市的扩展。

179．People in rural areas and small towns are generally reluctant to move to cities，even if it should mean a substantial increase in their standard of living．

错因：单词使用错误。should表示“应该”或者“必定”的意思，应该用would，表示“将”的意思。

改正：People in rural areas and small towns are generally reluctant to move to cities．even if it would mean a substantial increase in their standard of living．

大意：在乡村和小城镇居住的居民一般都不愿意迁居到城市，尽管这意味着他们的生活标准将会显著上升

180．The tempo of life in country areas has quickened as result of urbanisation． 错因：as a result是固定搭配．

改正：The tempo of life in country areas has quickened as a result of urbanisation 大意：由于城市化进程，乡村地区的生活节奏已经加快了

181.In rural areas, children are very often forced to engage in income-generating activities，even though this money earned at the expense of their schooling． 错因：eam与money之间是被动关系，因此应使用其被动语态。

改正：In rural areas, children are very often forced to engage in income-generating activities, even though this money is earned at the expense of their schooling．

大意：在乡村地区，小孩经常要参与创造收入的活动，尽管赚这些钱要以牺牲学业为代价 182．The reason why people like to move from rural areas to urban areas is rooted in the fact that city homes more social and economic opportunities．

错因：city是可数名词，需要加限定词；在这里应该用定冠词，特指城市，区别于乡村地区。改正：The reason why people like to move from rural areas to urban areas is rooted in the fact that the city homes more social and economic opportunities．

大意：人们从乡村迁居到城市的原因是城市提供更多的社会和经济机会。

183.Urban sprawl is a form of metropolitan growth, resulted from the combined affects of economic，social，and political forces．

错因：分词使用错误。分词的选择参照其所对应的主语，如果是主语主动发出的动作就用现在分词，这里主句的主语是urban sprawl，因此应该用现在分词resulting from。改正：Urban sprawl is a form of metropolitan growth，resulting from the combined effects of economic，social，and political forces．

大意：城市扩张是大城市发展的一种形式，主要由经济、社会和政治力量的共同影响而产生。

184.What we should bear it in mind is to spread wealth to the impoverished countryside．

错因：成分多余。本句的主语为what we should bear it in mind，而what充当了从句中的宾语，因此it是多余成分。

改正：What we should bear in mind is to spread wealth to the impoverished countryside． 大意：我们需要记住的是将财富带到贫穷的乡村地区? 185.There are some possible explanations as to why this problem has been happened． 错因：happen是不及物动词，不可以用被动。

改正：There are some possible explanations as to why this problem has happened． 大意：这个问题发生的原因有多种可能的解释。

186.Being like those general causes，such as heart disease and cancer，traffic accidents have become one of the biggest killers．

错因：成分多余。like作介词表示“如同，像……一样”，此处不需要加分词being。改正：Like those general causes，such as heart disease and cancer，traffic accidents have become one of the biggest killers．

大意：就像那些普遍原因一样，如心脏病和癌症，交通事故已经成为人类最大的杀手之一。187.I reject the notion that armed police have an essential deter effect on potential offenders． 错因：deter是动词，不能修饰名词，要改成形容词deterrent。

改正：I reject the notion that armed police have an essential deterrent effect on potential offenders 大意：我不接受警察配枪对潜在罪犯有震慑作用的看法。

188.Many regions have imposed strict rules, however，this does not automatically mean that road offences have been curbed．

错因：however表示“但是”的时候，是副词而不是连词。

改正：Many regions have imposed strict rules；however，this does not automatically mean that road offences have been curbed．

大意：很多地区已经实施严格的规定，然而，这并不意味着道路违规已得到控制。189． Criminal prevention can be done in any context or location, where it is in a residence, workplace，school，neighbourhood or community．

错因：criminal是形容词，表示“犯罪的”，其名词意义表示“罪犯”，根据句意，在这里应该是强调犯罪这种事情的预防，因此应该用表示“犯罪”的名词crime。

改正：Crime prevention can be done in any context or location, where it is in a residence, workplace，school，neighbourhood or community．

大意：犯罪的预防可以在任何情景或者地点实现，无论是居住地、工作地、学校、街区或者社区。

190．Lack of a classification in the prison is exposes first-time and non-violent offenders to repeat and violent offenders．

错因：此句出现两个谓语动词is和exposes，根据句意，保留expose的一般现在时态即可。改正：Lack of a classification in the prison exposes first-time and non-violent offenders to repeat and violent offenders．

大意：在监狱里缺乏罪犯分类系统会让初犯和非暴力犯罪者接触惯犯和暴力犯罪者。

191.Speed is the single biggest cause of road traffic collisions． 错因：speed表示“速度”，根据句意应该用speeding"超速驾驶”。改正：Speeding is the single biggest cause ofroad traffic collisions． 大意：超速行驶是路面碰撞事故发生的最大原因。

192.Checking into a nursing home is likes dropping out of society, and can lead to feelings of isolation．

错因：like在这里是介词，没有数的变化。

改正：Checking into a nursing home is like dropping out of society, and can lead to feelings of isolation．

大意：住到老人院就如同和社会脱节一样，会导致孤独感的产生。

193.The rapid extension of the lifespan，result from improved health and licing conditions, is a feature of all developed countries in the 21st century.错因：句子出现两个谓语动词，result from是动词短语，应该将其变作分词。

改正：The rapid extension of the lifespan，resulting from improved health and licing conditions, is a feature of all developed countries in the 21st century.大意：健康状况和生活条件的改善使寿命迅速延长，这是二十一世纪所有发达国家的一个特征。

194.The cost of health care in retirement is large, because people tend to be illness more frequently in later life.错因：illness是名词，表示“疾病”，应该改成其形容词形式ill，“生病的”。

改正：The cost of health care in retirement is large，because people tend to be ill more frequently in later life．

大意：退休的健康医疗费用是很大的，因为人在晚年往往更加频繁地生病。

195．There is a general stereotype that a worker becomes less productive as one gets older.错因：指代不清。one表示任何一个人，不能指代a worker。

改正：There is a general stereotype that a worker becomes less productive as he or she gets older.大意：一个人变老的时候，他或她的工作能力会下降，这是一个普遍的成见。

196．Retirement might coincide with many important life changes, such as have less frequent contact with their previous social context.错因：such as后一般加名词、动名词或者介宾短语等。

改正：Retirement might coincide with many important 1ife changes，such as having less frequent contact with their previous social context．

大意：退休或许会和人生的很多重要变化一起发生，比如和之前社会圈子的接触减少等。197．The age ofretirement should be raised progressively because trends in life expectancy.错因：because作连词时后跟完整句子，如果跟短语则应该用because of.改正：The age ofretirement should be raised progressively because of trends in life expectancy.大意：由于人均寿命的变化，退休的年龄一定会逐步提升。

198．Some senior people might raise the question as to why should they be forced out of 32 employment because of age.错因：why在这里引导一个从句，应该用陈述句语序。

改正：Some senior people might raise the question as to why they should be forced out of employment because of age．

大意：年长的人或许会提出质疑----为什么他们一定要因为年龄而被迫离职。

199.The traditional prejudice is that the old will take time off whereas the young will not．The oppose is found to be the case.错因：oppose是动词，不能作主语，应该改成名词opposite。

改正：The traditional prejudice is that the o1d will take time off whereas the young will not．The opposite is found to be the case．

大意：传统的偏见认为年纪大的员工会请假，而年轻的员工则不会。但事实刚好相反。200.Improved medical technology and health awareness are allowing us live longer.错因：惯用法。allow的用法是allow sb.to do。

改正：Improved medical technology and health awareness are allowing us to live longer.大意：先进的医疗技术和健康意识让我们的寿命更长。

201．It has been become harder to maintain 1iving standards far the dependent population, because the workforce is shrinking．

错因：成分多余。been和become都是动词，两者取一。

改正：It has become harder to maintain living standards for the dependent population，because the workforce is shrinking．

大意：由于劳动人口在缩小，要维持没有劳动能力的人的生活水准就变得更加困难。202．There is a general stereotype that women are less intelligent and capable than men and need not to be treated equally．

错因：need使用错误。need作情态动词的时候否定形式应该是need not，而作实义动词的时候否定形式应该是do not need.改正：There is a general stereotype that women are less intelligent and capable than men and need not be treated equally．

大意：一般的偏见认为女性不如男性聪明能干，不需要被平等对待。203．The biggest obstacle to recruiting females in the army could social attitudes． 错因：谓语不完整。缺少be动词。

改正：The biggest obstacle to recruiting females in the army could be social attitudes． 大意：在军队中雇用女性的最大障碍可能是社会态度的问题。

204．Women are now able to take control of their lives and take a much active part in the world． 错因：much一般不能直接修饰形容词，而是修饰形容词的比较级。

改正：Women are now able to take control oftheir lives and take a much more active part in the world．

大意：女人现在可以掌握自己的人生，在世界上扮演更为活跃的角色。

205．Traditionally，the police force is typically a male-dominating domain and women are 33 considered a minority group.错因：分词错误。dominate应该用过去分词的形式，与domain之间是被动关系。改正：Traditionally,the police force is typically a male—dominated domain and women are considered a minority group．

大意：从传统上讲，警察队伍是男性主导的领域，而女性被认为是少数群体。

206．It is certainly true that the position of women in society has undergone a remarkable change in past century．

错因：past之前应加定冠词the。

改正：It is certainly true that the position of women in society has undergone a remarkable change in the past century．

大意：妇女的社会地位在过去一个世纪里确实经历了显著的改变。

207·Athletes are now able to play to an older age, recover more quickly from injuries and train more effectively than previously generations of athletes, because of technological development． 错因：词性错误。previously不能修饰名词generations，应用其形容词形式。

改正：Athletes are now able to play to an older age，recover more quickly from injuries and train more effectively than previous generations of athletes，because of technological development． 大意：由于技术的发展，相比前几代的运动员，现在的运动员运动生涯更长，从伤病中恢复更快，而且训练也更为有效。

208.It can be argued that the current scale and status of the Olympic Games is owing entirely to the developments of communication technology．

错因：owe…to…表示“将……归功于”，在此句中，应用其被动语态。

改正：It can be argued that the current scale and status of the Olympic Games is owed entirely to the developments of communication technology．

大意：可以提出的一点是，奥林匹克运动会目前的规模和地位完全归功于通信科技的发展。209.Although many overseas students will return their home countries sooner or later，the experience of being away from home can be life-changing． 错因：return是不及物动词，后面要加介词才能跟宾语。

改正：Although many overseas students will return to their home countries sooner or later, the experience of being away from home can be life-changing．

大意：很多海外学生迟早都要回到祖国，但离家在外的经历是可能影响一辈子的。210．Many educators nowadays stress permitting pupils to pursue independently whatever interests them.错因：当whatever充当从句主语的时候，谓语动词常用单数。

改正：Many educators nowadays stress permitting pupils to pursue independently whatever interest them.大意：很多教育者现在都强调允许小学生独立追求任何他们所感兴趣的东西。

211.According to some educators，the goal of teaching is helping students learn what they need to know to live a successful life．

错因：当主语是goal，objective，purpose和mission等这些词语的时候，表语应该用不定式，对主语起补充说明的作用；不定式作表语一般表示目的、原因等，特别是表示将来的动作。改正：According to some educators，the goal of teaching is to help students learn what they need to know to live a successful life．

大意：根据一些教育者的看法，教育的目标是帮助学生学习获得成功人生所需要知道的东西。

212．The debate which is whether or not human nature is the key factor in criminal production has attracted public attention.错因：根据句子结构，本句不能为定语从句。可以将本句改为debate+介词over／about+宾语从句。

改正：The debate over／about whether or not human nature is the key factor in criminal production has attracted public attention．

大意：关于人的本性是否是导致犯罪的主要因素的争论引起人们的广泛关注。

213．A university is now multi-ethnical and multi-cultural，which students from all over the world study together．

错因：后面从句中关系词应作状语，所以此处应改为关系副词where。

改正：A university is now multi-ethnical and multi—cultural，where students from all over the world study together．

大意：当今，大学是一个多元文化、多种族的场所，在那儿学习的学生来自世界各地。214．There can be little doubt that teamwork is well suited to encourage effort and academic achievement．

错因：to在这里是介词，需要加动名词，而不是动词原形。

改正：There can be little doubt that teamwork is well suited to encouraging effort and academic achievement．

大意：毫无疑问，团队合作非常适合鼓励大家付出努力，并促进学术成就。

215．Although the computer cannot replace the teacher，but it can be used every now and then to ease teachers‟workload．

错因：although和but不能连用。

改正：Although the computer cannot replace the teacher，it can be used every now and then to ease teachers‟workload．

大意：虽然电脑不能完全代替老师，但是它可以时而被用来减轻老师的工作量。

216．An excellent student should be measured not only by the ability to read and write but also the ability to cope with different problems in real life．

错因：使用not only…but also…的时候，要注意前后结构对应。

改正：An excellent student should be measured not only by the ability to read and write but also by the ability to cope with different problems in real life．

大意：衡量一个优秀的学生不应仅以其读写能力为依据，也应该考量其在现实生活中处理各种问题的能力。

217．In the rapid changing economic and social context，educators need to find ways of integrating learning into the workplace.错因：rapid是形容词，不能修饰现在分词changing。

改正：In the rapidly changing economic and social context，educators need to find ways ofintegrating learning into the workplace．

大意：在经济和社会环境快速变化的社会里，教育者需要找到将学习融入工作中的方法。218．It is now recognised that learning is stem from experience.错因：此句同时出现动词is和动词词组stem from，需将is去掉；表示“源于”时，与stem有关的常用词组为stem from，为主动形式。

改正：It is now recognised that learning stems from experience.大意：现在人们都认同，学习来自于实践。

219．Learning the fundamentals of different subjects not only enables students to extend vision but also to identify their real learning interest.错因：使用not only…but also…时，前后要对称。

改正：Leaming the fundamentals of different subjects enables students not only to extend vision but also to identify their real learning interest．

大意：广泛学习各个科目的基础知识不仅可以拓宽学生的视野，而且有助于他们找到真正兴趣所在。

220．Many people argue that children can increase knowledge by various means, including attending distance-learning courses，but others against.错因：but用于连接两个完整的句子，在这句话中but后面的句子缺乏谓语动词。

改正：Many people argue that children can increase knowledge by Vari。US means，including attending distance-learning courses，but others oppose it．

大意：很多人认为孩子可以通过多种渠道获得知识，比如远程教学，然而有些人反对这样的观点。

221．The popularity of the Internst has posed growing challenge to some of the most widely held belief about teching.错因：belief是可数名词，其前有some of修饰，因此在这里要变成复数。

改正：The popularity of the Internet has posed growing challenge to some of the most widely held beliefs about teaching．

大意：因特网的普及对教学的一些最普遍观念逐渐提出了挑战。

222．Authoritarlan parenting style is marked by set clear and unbending rules and apply strict punishment to children‟s misbehaviours.错因：by是介词，后面应该加动名词或者名词。

改正：Aumoritarian parenting style is marked by setting clear and unbending rules and applying strict punishment to children‟s misbehaviours.大意：专制式教育方法的特点是设立明确和死板的规则，对孩子的错误行为实施严厉的惩罚。

223．1t has been agreed that improve academic performance is only one of the many prerequisites to success．

错因：improve是动词，不能作从句的主语，应该用其动名词形式。

改正：It has been agreed that improving academic performance is only one of the many prerequisites to success．

大意：人们普遍认同提高学业成绩只是达到成功的必要条件之一。

224．While imparting knowledge to students，teachers should pay attention to the development of students in any other aspects, such as social well-being．

错因：any other表示“其他任何一个”，一般接可数名词的单数，在这里应该用other，表示“其他的”。

改正：While imparting knowledge to students．teachers should pay attention to the development of students in other aspects，such as social well-being．

大意：在将知识传授给学生的时候，老师应该注意学生其他方面的发展，比如其社会健康状态。

225．What is ingrained during the early years usually become a habit that stay with us throughout our adult life．

错因：两个主谓一致的错误。主句谓语动词become的主语是what引导的从句，所以become应为单数；而a habit是定语从句的主语，因此其谓语动词stay也应该用单数。

改正：What is ingrained during the early years usually becomes a habit that stays with us throughout our adult life．

大意：在人生早期根深蒂固的东西经常在我们成年的时候变成伴随我们的习惯。

226.The factors that lead to one's success or failure in school including teachers‟commitment and parents‟intervention．

错因：这个句子缺乏谓语动词，应将including改为动词include。

改正：The factors that lead to one‟s success or failure in school include teachers，commitment and parents‟intervention．

大意：导致学生在学校成功或者失败的因素包括老师的敬业和家长的参与。

227.According to popular belief，more educated you are,more you will discover about your prospects and potential．

错因：惯用法。表示“越……越……”的时候，比较级前面要加定冠词the。

改正：According to popular belief,the more educated you are，the more you will discover about your prospects and potential．

大意：根据普遍的观念，你越有知识，就越能发现自己的前途和潜力。

228． More often than not，a student‟s poor performance is attributed to lack of motivation rather than lack of knowledge or aptitudes．

错因：rather than前后的语法结构应该一致，在这里都要用to引导的介宾短语。

改正：More often than not，a student's poor performance is attributed to lack of motivation rather than to lack of knowledge or aptitudes．

大意：很多时候，学生表现不佳应该归咎于缺乏动力，而不是缺乏知识或者能力。229．The reason why peer pressure has been studied a lot in these years is because it has powerful influence on behaviour．

错因：because一般只引导状语从句，而不引导表语从句。

改正：The reason why peer pressure has been studied a lot in these years is that it has powerful influence on behaviour．

大意：同年龄群体压力在近几年受到关注，因为它对人的行为有深远的影响。

230．Peer group is referred to the group of people you know who are the same age as you or who have the same social status as you．

错因：当refer to用于解释一个概念的时候，一般用主动。

改正：Peer group refers to the group ofpeople you know who are the same age as you or who have the same social status as you．

大意：同年龄群体指的是那些你所认识的、和你具有相同年龄或者相同社会地位的人。231．Misbehaved children are chiefly from the households headed by uninvolved or neglectful parents．

错因：misbehave是不及物动词，没有被动语态，因此不可能有过去分词作定语的情况。改正：Children who misbehave are chiefly from the households headed by uninvolved or neglectful parents．

大意：行为不好的孩子通常都来自父母不负责任或者漫不经心的家庭。

232．We can hardly determine．which contribute more to the success of a person，innate skills or regular practice．

错因：主谓不一致。contribute的主语是代词which，后面谓语动词应该用单数。

改正：We can hardly determine which contributes more to the success of a person，innate skills or regular practice．

大意：先天的技能或持续的实践，我们很难确定哪一个对人的成功贡献更大。

233．When the children believe that their parents‟aggressive behaviour is normal，they will use it themselves．The reason is that they do not see the harm in acting similar to their parents.错因：children是泛指，前面不需要加定冠词；similar是形容词，不能修饰动词。改正：When children believe that their parents‟aggressire behaviour is normal，they will use it themselves．The reason is that they do not see the harm in acting in a similar way to their parents． 大意：如果小孩相信他们父母攻击性的行为是正常的，那么他们也会使用这一行为，因为他们看不到类似行为所带来的伤害。

234．Children are now very competent experts on use the Internet--but not on how to live in the real world．

错因：use是动词，不能充当介词的宾语，要用动名词。

改正：children are now very competent experts on using the Internet--but not on how to 1ive in the real world．

大意：现在孩子们在使用网络上都是专家，而在现实生活中则不是。

235．Upbringing is considered successful only if both the child‟s biological and psychological needs are properly catered.错因：cater作“迎合，满足……需要”讲时为不及物动词，后需加for。

改正：Upbringing is considered successful only if both the child‟s biological and psychological needs are properly catered for．

大意：只有当小孩的生理和心理需要被恰当地满足时，父母对小孩的抚育才可以说是成功的。

236．In addition providing physical care(including nourishment，shelter and medical care)parents should provide children with social development and emotional support.错因：in addition是副词词组，应该改成介词词组in addition to，这样才可以加动名词或名词。

改正：In addition to providing physical care(including nourishment，shelter and medical care)parents should provide children with social development and emotional support.大意：除了提供身体上的照料(包括食物、住处和医疗)之外，父母还应该为小孩提供社会发展和情感上的支持。

237．Children‟s increased computer time should expose them to harmful impacts on their eyes and backs.错因：单词使用错误。should表示“一定会”，这很明显是不够谨慎的说法，应该改成could，表示“有可能”。

改正：Children's increased computer time could expose them to harmful impacts on their eyes and backs.大意：接触电脑的时间增多会让小孩的眼睛和背部受到伤害。

238．It can be stated that children living in the families of poor economic condition have less possibilities to finish schooling and find a decent job.错因：possibility为可数名词，不能用little修饰，应改为few的比较级fewer。

改正：It can be stated that children living in the families of poor economic condition have fewer possibilities to finish schooling and find a decent job．

大意：可以说家庭经济条件不好的小孩完成学业和找到好工作的机会要更／相对较低。239.Upbringing mistakes and poor living conditions can be lead to s child‟s problem behaviour.错因：leadto一般只用主动语态，表示“引起，导致”。

改正：Upbringing mistakes and poor living conditions can lead to a child's problem behaviour.大意：父母教育的失误和不好的生活条件会导致小孩的问题行为。

240．Due to their prior limited experience, young people are too often judged by hiring managers to be under-qualified．

错因：形容词的顺序。英语当中多个形容词的顺序排列是有一定之规的，在这里，表示时间的形容词应该放在表示性质的形容词之后。

改正：Due to their limited prior experience，young people are too often judged by hiring managers to be under-qualified．

大意：因为经验有限，年轻人很多时候被招聘主管认为是不够称职的。

241．Volunteering gives young people a chance discover whether they are suited to a particular line of work.错因：句中出现两个谓语动词give和discover，应该在discover前加to形成不定式。改正：Volunteering gives young people a chance to discover whether they are suited to a particular line ofwork．

大意：志愿者工作会让年轻人有机会发现自己是否适合某一个特定的工种。

242．A lack of job opportunities restrict school lesvers‟independence，either forcing them to remain at home and forcing them to move back home．

错因：主语是lack，谓语动词要用单数，但这里不应用一般现在时，因为一般现在时常表示客观存在的持续现象，因此用will比较好，表示“将会”；either要和or连用，表示“或者……或者……”。

改正：A lack of job opportunities will restrict school leavers‟independence，either forcing them to remain at home or forcing them to move back home．

大意：缺乏工作机会限制了离校生的独立性，迫使他们留在家里或者搬回家里住。243．Job skills and social skills will be improved，which is considered as mainly advantage of working for some time before obtaining a college education.错因：mainly是副词，不能修饰名词；此处的before为连词，后面应跟完整的句子。改正：Job skills and social skills will be improved，which is considered as the main advantage of working for some time before one obtains a college education．

大意：上大学前工作一段时间的主要优点是工作技能和社会技能都能有所提高。

244．Although one likes to believe that schooling is more influential than parenting in a child‟s development，what one believes is not the case always.错因：always是频度副词，在无助动词时常放在be的后面。

改正：Although one likes to believe that schooling is more influential than parenting in a child's development，what one believes is not always the case.大意：虽然有人相信学校比家庭对孩子的成长更有影响，但是人们相信的并非总是事实。245．Unemployment in early life may permanently impair young people‟s future employability，as patterns of behaviour and attitudes establish at an early stage tend to persist later in life.错因：有两个谓语动词。在这里需要将establish这个动词变成过去分词。

改正：Unemployment in early life may permanently impair young people‟s future employability，as patterns of behaviour and attitudes established at an early stage tend to persist later in life.大意：年轻时的失业会永久地伤害其日后的就业能力，因为在人生早期所建立起来的行为和态度往往会在以后的人生阶段持续下去。

246．Many students might choice to develop their own interests by following a narrow range of courses after their first year's university study.错因：choice是名词，这里应该使用动词choose。

改正：Many students might choose to develop their own interests by foilowing a narrow range of 40 courses after their first year's university study．

大意：很多大学生在完成第一年的学业后，通过进修某些特定的课程来发展自己的兴趣。247．One of the main functions of a university is keeping learners up with the rapid pace of developments in a range of sciences.错因：此处应用keep的动词不定式表目的，而且，如果主语是function，purpose，role，mission，task这一类的词，表语一般用不定式。

改正：One of me main functions of a university is to keep learners up with the rapid pace of developments in a range of sciences．

大意：大学的主要职责之一是让学生跟上各门学科快速发展的步伐。

248．We cannot deny students the right to choose the subjects that interesting them most in the university．

错因：定语从句缺少谓语动词，interesting是形容词。

改正：We cannot deny students the right to choose the subjects that interest them most in the university．

大意：我们不能否定学生在大学选择他们最感兴趣的科目的权利。

249．Theory itself is not much important, but what matter is how to put theory in practice.错因：much一般不能修饰形容词，只能修饰形容词的比较级；当what充当主语时，动词要用单数。

改正：Theory itself is not important，but what matters is how to put theory in practice.大意：理论本身并不重要，重要的是如何将其运用于实践。

250．It is stated that many students perceive collecle as the ideal time to travel，because primarily they do not have full adult responsibilities yet，such as income-generating．

错因：副词的位臵错误。副词primarily在句中起强调作用，这类副词一般放在其所修饰的词之前，这里primarily修饰because。

改正：It is stated that many students perceive college as the ideal time to travel，primarily because they do not have full adult responsibilities yet，such as income-generating.大意：据说很多学生都将大学时期看作旅行的最佳时间，主要是因为他们还不需要完全承担成年人的责任，譬如说赚钱。

第二篇：句子改错

句子改错：每小题有一个错误（多词、缺词或错词），多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在右边横线上写出该加的词；在错的词下划一横线，在右边横线上写出改正后的词

1.It took Jack two hours climb the mountain._______

2.The tomatoes I picked are much more redder than yours.______ 3.They have never had the chance to be there ago.______ 4.Even he is old , my grandpa works on the farm.________ 5.You are terrible ill.You’d better stay in bed.________

6.The nearest village is about one hundred miles far away._________ 7.I don’t like going out lonely after dark._________ 8.I’m fed up waiting for her letter.________

9.Birds flew back because the fine environment._________ 10.The students entered into the classroom one by one.________ 1.His story is more interesting as my sister’s.________ 2.Please return my dictionary back soon._______ 3.When he heard the news , he got angrily._______ 4.They have some problems get there._______

5.Tom was just falling asleep then the telephone rang.________ 6.Sometimes we take walk by the river._______ 7.Mr More took well care of his car._______ 8.We are going to Hainan the next holiday.______ 9.I don’t agree to you , twins._______

10.Though children are young , they should be listened carefully._____

1.The monkeys climbed the trees quick.________ 3.Everyone in our class like take-away food._________ 4.The twins didn’t feel well , but they didn’t come.________ 5.Jack’s uncle joined in the army three years ago.________ 6.Could you give me anything to eat ? __________

7.It was too hot last night that I couldn’t sleep well._______ 8.To have a twin brother is little strange.________

9.There is going to have a dolphin show in the zoo.________ 10.Could you repeat it again , please ?__________ 1.Can you guess how many years I have been to this city ? _______ 2.Surfing looks so excited that I want to have a try.___________ 3.To make a lot noise at night is not polite._________

4.There will have a strong wind to the north of Huai River.________ 5.The number of the students in our school are more than 2,000.______ 6.The poor man needs a house to live.______ 7.His clothes have washed by his mother.________ 8.He said that he had been in Beijing many years._______ 9.Hunan is by the south of Hubei._______

10.There was fire in the supermarket near our school last night.___________

1.Though he is a five-year-old boy , but he can play computer very well.______ 2.My brother will phone me as soon as he get there.__________ 3.English is most widely spoken language all over the world.__________ 4.It’s very kind for you to help carry the bag.__________ 5.Twenty miles are quite a long way to go._________

6.The Class 2 students are planting trees on both side of the street._________ 7.There is going to have a sports meeting before National Day._________ 8.A horse isn’t as bigger as an elephant._________

9.It’s hard for him to do so many homework in one day.__________ 10.Edison thought for a while and came up with a idea.1.Three fifths of the books here is mine.________ 2.Your clothes should always be kept cleanly and tidy.________ 3.Tom said he was feeling even worst.________ 4.Father told me that light travelled faster than sound.________ 5.In our everyday life we see much moving things.________ 6.Which floor does your mother live ? ________

7.The heavy snow made him to feel worried about his sheep.______ 8.The boys are often told not play football in the street.________ 9.Remember to go to the post office and send this letters._______ 10.There is going to have a concert tomorrow.______

1.Ann didn't know how work out the problem in class.___________ 2.Why not ask for help when you were with trouble? ___________ 3.Look!What happy the children are in the garden!___________ 4.We have learned English since two years and a half._________ 5.I'll go back home as soon as school will be over.___________ 6.You'd better speak as more English as you can.___________ 7.With my help, he finished made the kite at last.___________ 8.Father tells his son how far is it from the earth to the moon.________ 9.Neither you nor I were sending e-mails then ________ 10.A friend of him went to Japan last Sunday ___________

1.No one of us has been to Bondi Beach._________________ 2.Everyone should make a contribution(捐赠)to protect the environment.______ 3.I couldn’t fall sleep last night.__________ 4.The number of students in our school is more than two thousands._____________ 5.Mary or her brother are going to visit the Great Wall soon.__________ 6.What do you mean at “relative”?_____________ 7.He was made tell everything.____________ 8.This pair of glasses are a little expensive.___________ 9.How long do you go to see your grandfather ? Once a week._____________ 10.Look at these Germen.How happy they are!______________ 1.Dick is afraid of meet the boss.________ 2.Jim says that he has come in China for over three years._____________ 3.Man ,like animals and plants, also need sunlight.________ 4..Mum often tells me don’t stay up too late._________ 5.Girls had better not to walk alone at night._________ 6.She is enough old to go to school.__________ 7.You must finish to do your homework during your holiday.__________ 8.It took me about half an hour doing my homework yesterday.___________ 9.She says she would go to the cinema with her parents that evening.__________ 10.I’ll return the book to the library as soon as I will finish reading it.____ 1.Dick is afraid of meet the boss________ 2..Neither of them are a farmer.3.Man ,like animals and plants, also need sunlight._______ 4..Mum often tells me don’t stay up too late.________ 5.Girls had better not to walk alone at night._______ 6.She is enough old to go to school._______ 7.You must finish to do your homework during your holiday.______ 8.It took me about half an hour doing my homework yesterday.__________ 9.She says she would go to the cinema with her parents that evening.________ 10.I’ll return the book to the library as soon as I will finish reading it.______

第三篇：雅思写作经典句子摘抄

雅思写作经典句子摘抄

This view is now being questioned by more and more people.(这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。)We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.(我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。)Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.(任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。)An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.(一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。)Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.(许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。)When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.（说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。）

An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.(越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。)No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most important aspect of his life(没有人能否认：教育是人生最重要的一方面。)In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.(事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要)People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.(人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实)No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.(没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。)The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.(最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。)According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking(依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。)Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.(在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。)This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.(这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。)This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.(这一现象在全世界许多地方已引起了广泛关注。)In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.(考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。)Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out.The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.（尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的人数会减少，自行车可能会消亡，然而，这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。）

Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it(那些城市的规划者们如果忽视这一点，将会付出他们无法承受的代价)The number of private cars in urban areas should be limited while the number of public buses should be increased(在城市私人轿车的数量应得到控制而公交车的数量应该增加)Bicycle can't be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.(在速度和舒适度方面，自行车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的。)Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.(即使最优秀的毕业生，要想成为一个博学的人也要不断地学习。)Using bicycle contributes greatly to people's physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.(使用自行车有助于人们的身体健康，并极大地缓解了交通阻塞。)An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.(一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学习的愿望)Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage.By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.(许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。)Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.(许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。)Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin.Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.(当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。)Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.(应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。)The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.(大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的)

【看英文杂志，看到有2段文章比较有用，不妨一起回味回味】

美国的女人现在受教育水平不低，收入也较高，对于大学的理工类教育，美国政府说...administration is promising to litigate, regulate and legislate(这三个词用得好）the nation's universities until women obtain half of all academic degrees in science and technology and hold half the faculty positions in those areas.这个话多像雅思的作文题目--大学是否要招收等同数量的男女学生来读所有专业。更进一步的是，居然大学师资里，女人也将占一半，否则，美国政府还要拎起法律大棒，哎！女人学业务求超棒，家事不能荒废，房事也得尽责，更加被逼入了苦难地步。

然后报道新疆的喀什，英文被称之为boomtown，新兴城镇。说它是westernmost city in China.其中westernmost（“最西部的”）这个词尽管简单，但是这个词以前其实是没想到的，不妨记记。说它在模仿深圳，而深圳是capitalize on both its advantageous coastal location andproximity to Hong Kong and Taiwan.这里的单词capitalize on和proximity很有价值，说深圳充分利用沿海地理优势和靠近港台之优势得以快速发展。

最终，深圳功德圆满，被号称为Vanguard for Chinese economic reform，中国经济改革的桥头堡/排头兵。这里总算找到了“桥头堡/排头兵”对应的合适之词，算是收获！Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.(现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识)A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time.In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study.As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.(一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。)These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past.Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.(现在，越来越多的人们开始抱怨工作比以前更有压力。许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果，无法避免。)

第四篇：雅思写作5.5分考试答案

Task 1 Underground Railways Systems

The table shows some details about underground railway systems in six cities, namely, London, Pairs, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.London was the first city that opened underground railways systems in 1863, while Los Angels was the last one in 2001.As for the other four countries, all of them opened the underground railways in 1900s.The route in London is also the largest, approximately 400 kilometers.Those of Pairs, Tokyo and Washington DC are between 100 and 200 kilometers.The lengths of underground railways are short in Kyoto and Los Angeles(11 kilometers and 28 kilometers respectively).Tokyo with 155 kilometers of route has the largest amount of passengers(1927 millions).It is followed by that of Pairs, London and Washington DC.Passengers in Kyoto and Los Angeles are similar, around 50 millions.In conclusion, the underground railway system in London is the oldest and the longest, while that in Tokyo serves the largest number of people.By contrast, Kyoto and Los Angeles have new and small size systems.Task 2 Family relationship is not as close as before.Along with the development of the society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that families are not as close as before.To my mind, this is one of the side-effects brought about by the modern world.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.Firstly, with social advance, people are now more integrated with the society and thus less dependent on their families.Apart from their families, they can easily get help from their friends in a shorter time than before, and it is much easier to make more friends now as a result of rapid improvement in telecommunications.Secondly, the outside world is becoming more charming and fascinating, and people tend to share more time with their friends, colleagues or business partners in their leisure time instead of their families.Thirdly, in the modern society, social competition is getting increasingly fierce;consequently, people have to devote more time and energy to their career.They also feel the urgent need to broaden their scope and knowledge and upgrade themselves so as not to lag behind others.Since family is the basic unit of a society, this issue should be well taken into consideration.As to how to bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions.First of all, the most important approach is through education.Parents should not only set a good example but also instill into their children from their childhood family concept so that they value family in their whole life.Secondly, all family members should try to squeeze some time for family activities such as a regular family dinner together.Dinner time is indeed a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas, which is quite conducive to a more harmonious family relationship.Furthermore, the government should organize some public activities to promote the time-honored concept of family, to call on people to treasure the basic bonds of human life and give awards to some happy families in recognition of their strive for a better family relationship.In order to enjoy a harmonious family life, our government and ordinary citizens should join hands in the efforts to create an atmosphere in which domestic peace is highly valued.Only in this way can we further ensure the harmony of our whole society.

第五篇：公文写作改错

历年公文改错错误设置点基本集中在以下几方面：

1.秘密程度：公布性、普发性公文，如通知、通报、公告、通告等文种没有秘密程度。

2.发文机关标识：如“××市人民政府文件”中“××市人民政府”要与标题中出现的发文机关以及落款中的成文单位保持一致。

3.发文字号：如 “国发〔2010〕1号”中要注意机关代字“国发”、年份“〔2000〕”、序号“1号”数序不能颠倒;年份要用“〔〕”不是“[ ]”、也不是“()”，且年份要写四位数，不能“2010”写成“10”;序号“1号”不能写成“第1号”、也不能写成“01”号。

4.签发人：上行文如“请示”、“报告”有签发人，下行文如“命令”、“通知”、“通告”等没有签发人；且有签发人的时候，签发人应与发文字号在一行居于两端。

5.标题：标题=发文机关+关于+事由+的+文种。注意“关于”与“的”位置，“关于”不能在发文机关前面，如“关于国务院发布《国家行政机关公文处理办法》的通知”就是错误地把“关于”提前，而“的”后面一定是文种，如出现“××××的情况报告”就是错误的例子，“情况报告”不是文种，应为“××××情况的报告”。

文种一般是必设错误点，一是文种与内容中相矛盾，如标题是“××××的通告”，正文中却出现了“特通知如下”的情况，应以正文中的文种为准;二是更高难度的考核，通过正文辨析文种。

标题中只有出现法律法规的情况才加书名号，如“上海市关于转发《××意见》的通知”中书名号应去掉。

6.主送机关：一是主送机关的个数问题，上行文只有一个主送机关，下行文一般两个以上主送机关，而一些普法性公文因主送机关太多而予以省略。二是不是联合发文主送机关不能同时主送党政，如出现“市委市政府”就要根据情况删掉一个。三是两个以上主送机关的写法，如“各区、县，市政府各部门，市直属机构，各企事业单位”，注意标点的用法，同类不同项用顿号，不同类不同项用逗号;排列顺序依次是政府、政府部门、直属机构、社会团体。四是主送机关要顶格写。五是下行文的主送机关是其下级，上行文的主送机关是其上级。

7.正文：一是层级序数依次是“

一、”“(一)”“1.”“(1)”。二是注意人称的用法，如第一人称应该是“我市”，不能是“该市”。三是杜绝模糊语言，不能出现明天、去年等指代不明词，应写上具体的年月日，且是阿拉伯数字书写。四是标准计量单位用法，不用斤，用千克;不用里，用千米等;五是数字用法，不能说减少了2倍;六是用语规范，不用口语，如“没有”要改成“未”等;七是语法搭配问题;八是一些文种固有惯用结束语，如“以上请示，请批准”、“以上通知，请贯彻执行”等。

8.附件：附件没有书名号，后面不加句号。

9.成文单位：要与发文机关标识、标题中发文机关一致。

10.成文日期：不能用阿拉伯数字书写，要用汉字小写。如“二〇一〇年十一月一日”。

11.主题词：主题词是名词或名词性短语，如“犯罪、打击、通知”中，“打击”就不是名次;主题词的最后一个词是文种。

12.抄送机关：不越级抄，不抄下级。

一

××镇人民政府：

对你镇的数次请示，经研究作答复如下：

其一，原则同意批准你镇建立联合贸易公司，负责本镇的内、外贸易工作。你镇应尽快使联合贸易公司开始营业。

其二，你镇提出试行“关于违反计划生育规定的处罚办法”最好

不执行，因为这个办法违反上级有关文件精神。

其三，对你镇提出要建一俱乐部活跃居民文化生活一事，予以批准，但规模要适当控制，量力而行。其四，同意你镇组团参加在上海举办的服装节和在服装节上进行引资促销活动。

××市人民政府

2001年×月×日

【要点】一是违反一文一批的原则。市政府在积存了某乡四件请示之后，才合在一起给了这样一个批复，这样做有多种弊端：（1）延误时间，耽误下级工作；（2）多种事项集于一篇公文之中，内容杂乱；

（3）一份公文涉及多方面工作，给下级落实带来困难。因为这些工作在下级机关是由不同单位和不同负责人分管的，由哪个负责人承担批复的落实工作，不好确定。正确的做法是，下级报来一份请示，就及时回复一份批复。对方的四份请求，应有四份相应的批复。二是标题不合要求，三是用语含糊不清，观点不明确。如“原则同意”、“最好不执行”、“违反上级有关文件精神”，都没有明确指出自己的观点，使下级无法执行。四是时间要用汉字，不能用阿拉伯数字。

二

关于申请拨给灾区贷款专项指标的报告

省行：

×月×日，××地区遭受了一场历史上罕见的洪水袭击，×江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水，灾情严重。经初步不完全统计，农田受灾总面积达38000多亩，各种农作物损失达100多万元，农民个人损失也很大。灾后，我们立即深入灾区了解灾情，并发动干部群众积极开展生产自救。同时，为帮助受灾农民及时恢复生产，我们采取了下列措施：

一、对恢复生产所需的资金，以自筹为主。确有困难的，先从现有农贷指标中贷款支持。

二、对受灾严重的困难户，优先适当贷款，先帮助他们解决生活

问题。到×月×日止，此项贷款已达××万元。

由于这次灾情过于严重，集体和个人的损失都很大，短期内恢复生产有一定的困难，仅靠正常农贷指标难以解决问题。为此，请省行下达专项救灾贷款指标××万元，以便支持灾区迅速恢复生产。

以上报告当否，请批示。

××银行××市支行

一九九八年×月×日

【要点】

一、文种选择有误

从标题看，这篇公文是向省行提出灾区贷款专项指标的申请，目的是获得省行的批准。从正文的主体部分看，两条措施确属报告性质，但随后出现的专项贷款请求，就不是报告应有的内容了。从结语看，“以上报告妥否，请批示”，有着很强的期复性。因此，综合起来看，这篇公文应改为《关于拨给灾区贷款专项指标的请示》。

二、内容含糊

这是由于原文混淆了报告和请示的界限而造成的。写请示，只需写明请示缘由、请示事项，最后提出请示要求即可，与此无关的内容不应写入。而原文提出的两条措施：“对恢复生产所需的资金，以自筹为主”、“对受灾严重的困难户，优先适当贷款”，既不是请示缘由，也不是请示事项，不应该写入文中。

三、语言不准确

文中有多处语言不确切。如“×江两岸乡、村同时发生洪水”，×江两岸所有村庄都遭受洪灾似不可能，“同时发生”更不可能。“灾情较重”跟后面“这次灾情过于严重”的说法相龃龉；“据初步 不完全统计”，“初步”和“不完全”语意重复。

三

中国人民银行××市分行

关于转发总行《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》的通知

×银发［2002］×号

现将总行的《储蓄工作座谈会纪要》转发给你们，请立即组织研究，展开讨论，并根据《纪要》精神，认真贯彻执行。当前，首先要抓好第一季度的工作，以便为全年工作打下基础。

中国人民银行××市分行

二〇〇二年七月二十四日

【要点】一般来说，转发性通知只能有一个目的，或为执行，或为讨论，或为参考，二者不能兼得，更不能三者兼得。上面这则通知一方面让人家“研究讨论”，一方面又让人家“贯彻执行”，这二者是不可兼得的。因为“研究讨论”意味着转发对象尚不成熟，还没有达到“执行”的程度；而“贯彻执行”却意味着转发对象已经成熟，已经没有“研究讨论”的必要了。作者在这里显然犯了自相矛盾的错误，违背了形式逻辑中的不矛盾律。这是转发性通知中的一种多发病和常见病。

四

各省、自治区、直辖市人民政府：

今年初，枝江县董镇信用社职工××同志为保卫国家财产，面对

英勇歹徒，顽强搏斗，最后擒获歹徒。为此决定：授予××同志先进工作者称号。国务院希望各条战线的群众、工人、农民、知识分子认真贯彻十三届四中、5中、6中全会精神，胸怀全局，艰苦奋斗，努力工作，为社会主义现代化建设做出更大贡献。

中共中央、国务院

90年4月24日

1.标题应为“中共中央、国务院关于授予××同志先进工作者称号的决定”。

2.“今年初”这一时间概念表达不当，应改为“1990年初”。

3.枝江县前应冠以省名。

4.“英勇歹徒”的表达有误。

5.“群众、工人、„„”等搭配不当。

6.数字表达不一致，不应用阿拉伯数字。

7.作者排列有误，应分两行排列。

8.日期书写有误，应用汉字。

五

××市工业局文件

××字（2002）××号

签发人：张平

××市工业局关于印发“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”的通知

我局同意××市财政局“关于节减行政经费的几项规定”中提出的意见，认为切实可行，请结合本单位的情况参照执行。

附：××市财政局文件

2002.10.16 主题词：印发、规定、通知

抄送：××市人民政府、××市财政局

（1）发文字号不规范，应为××〔2002〕23号；

（2）下行文不应标注签发人，应取消，发文字号居中排列；

（3）标题不规范，应将“印发”改为“转发”，引号应改为书名号《》；

（4）缺主送机关，应写明收文单位名称；

（5）转发同级机关公文，不应用批示语气，如“我局同意”、“所提意见切实可行”等；

（6）《规定》属规范性公文，应认真执行而不应写“参照”执行；

（7）附件说明不规范，应具体写明附件的标题；

（8）成文日期不规范，应用汉字写全年月日，即二〇〇二年十月十六日；应加盖印章；

（9）主题词不规范，应表明公文的主题项：行政经费；主题词之间空一个汉字位置，不用标点符号；

（10）转发公文不应再向其他机关抄送，应取消抄送机关。

六

青峰电机厂商调函

调字[2006]3号

东风电器厂：

我厂技术员杨××同志，男，现年42岁，1958年毕业于××技校，目前是我厂技术骨干。该同志工作一贯认真负责，有较高的专业技术水平。其家住在你厂附近，家中有老母及卧床不起的妻子需要照顾。该同志最近提出书面申请，请求调往你厂工作，以照顾家庭。经研究，我厂同意他的要求，特致函与你们联系。

青峰电机厂(印章)

××年×月×日

参考要点:

1．函具体要求包括以下内容：①正式公文的规范格式；②使用印有发文机关名称的信纸；③拟写标题；④编制发文字号；⑤结构要求完整。

2．本文在用语上未讲究谦和委婉。如“家住你厂附近”就宜改为“家住贵厂附近”，这比较符合函写作的惯例。在正文部分，除同样犯这个错误之外，还有一点就是没有提出复函的具体要求。应改为“„„我厂同意他的要求，特致函与你们联系。不知你们意见如何，请研究后来函告知。顺致敬礼”

3．东风电器厂关于青峰电机厂商调函的复函

青峰电机厂：

贵厂×月×日函收悉，关于杨××同志拟调我厂工作一事，经厂

办公会议研究，今回复如下：

我厂系新建厂家，工程技术人员比较缺乏，很需要像杨××同志

这样的中年技术人员。我们原则上同意杨××同志调到我厂工作。请

立即将杨××同志的有关材料寄来，以便考核之后作最后决定。特此

复函，并致敬礼。

东风电器厂(印章)×年×月×日

七、x x币人民政府办公厅通报

全体市民：

据反映得知，近日来本市部分地区有一种令人人心惶惶的传说，称原流行于某国的恶性传染病××热已传入本市，并已造成十几人死亡。经本市防疫部门证实，这是完全没有任何事实根据的，本市至今从未发生过一起××热的病例。经核查，这一消息源于本市《晨报》零六年4月1日的一则“愚人节特快报告”。《晨报》这种不顾国情照搬西方文化极不严肃的做法是非常错误的，已经给全市人民的稳定生活带来了极其恶劣的影响。目前有关部门已对本报作出停业整顿并令其主要负责人深刻检查等待纪律处分的处理。有关单位应汲取这一教训，采取措施以予杜绝。特此通报。

××市人民政府启

参考答案:(1)标题缺问题；(2)不应直接主送市民；(3)“传说”一词不妥；(4)文中日期混用；

(5)“本报”一词错用；(6)发文机关前后不一；(7)作者后的“启”字为错用；(8)“以予”一词颠倒。

下面是一篇便函，内容单一，字数也不多，理由不对，语气直硬。请在不变动原文主旨的限制下加以修改（注意不要在原文上修改，另外写出改好的便函。）

〖例文一便函〗

×××县××乡人民政府：

据我院许多同学反映，他们在入学期间的学费均由原工作单位报销，请你们按成人教育有关规定迅速给予你乡干部在我院学习的××同志报销学费。

××××管理干部学院

97.11.12

.××县××乡人民政府：

按国家教委《××××通知》（成教发[19××年]××号）文件的规定，凡国家干部经考试入学，在校学习期间的学费由原工作单位负责解决。现贵乡干部××同志正在我院学习，条件符合上述文件规定。他的学费望贵乡予以报销。多谢支持。

××××管理干部学院

一九九七年十一月十二日