第一篇：中考英语满分作文应该这样写
中考英语满分作文应该这样写
中考的脚步越来越近，有的同学开始焦虑：时间越来越短，那么如何才可以在短时间内提高自己的写作水平呢?其实，中考英语写作是很容易提高的。作者总结了以下写作文时需要注意的四个方面，希望对大家有所启发。
第一，词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去，很多时候想到一个很好的句子或文字，但一下子词汇不记得了，没法写。词汇量不足的学生，建议使用“奇迹英语背单词8.0”软件，这套软件可以从 sayen.net 下载，能够在较短时间内迅速提高词汇量。
第二，审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时，普遍存在这样一个情况：看完作文题，就开始写，想到哪写到哪，只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章，看起来就像在记流水帐，没有任何逻辑，杂乱无章，毫无条理，同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想，如果你是试卷的命题人，你出作文题的时候，肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面，确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态，因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的，时态的要求也非常重要。
第三，提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为，中考英语作文译成中文，最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平，所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实，这种想法是非常错误的，因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰，还有很重要的一点：防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求：要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容，即使文章写得再优美，用词再准确，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误，同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四，文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点，中英文表达方式有很大的差异，所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达，降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异，并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点，并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
最后，细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好，用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语，以为可以得高分，但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数，名词的单复数，大小写，甚至标点、书写、段落安排等，这些细节问题也很重要。
做好以上几个方面，中考英语写作是很容易提高的！祝愿大家在中考中能取得理想的成绩！
第二篇：经验材料应该这样写
经验材料应该这样写
用点上经验指导面上工作，是各级领导机关广泛采用的工作方法。基于此，撰写经验材料也就成为机关工作人员必须掌握的技能。下面，笔者就经验材料的写作技巧谈谈体会。
选题——口子要小，立意要新
一份经验材料有无价值和吸引力，在很大程度上取决于主题的选定。选题口子要小。选题不要贪大求全，面面俱到。口子张得太大，什么都想写，反而什么都说不透。反之，口子收得小一些，集中写某个方面的经验，不仅能写得充实生动，还能起到“小中见大”的作用。
>>>>>立意要新颖独到。能否“出新”是检验经验材料成功与否的重要标志。“出新”不是脱离实际地哗众取宠，而是要通过对材料的提炼，发现他人未发现的东西，抓住普遍存在而未能很好解决的问题，或是人们都想办而不知怎么办的事情去总结和提供经验，这样的经验才有意义。举个例子，同是总结抓典型方面的经验，如果从怎样宣传典型的角度去选题，很难写出新意来。换个角度，从“怎样让先进典型不吃亏”去总结，就很有新意。
>>>>>标题要朴实醒目。总的原则是既要力求朴实，让人一看便知主题是什么；又要力求醒目，让人看了能留下深刻印象。常见的标题制作形式有以下几种：一是直接表述。如，《我们开展岗位练兵的几点做法》，让人一看就明白在谈哪方面的经验。二是间接表述。如，《引入竞争机制
激发工作热情》，使人既知道基本做法，又知道目的、效果。三是提问式。如，《我们是如何做好竞争上岗工作的》，通过提出问题，引人想知下文。四是对比式。如，《从二十三人受处罚到荣立集体三等功》，通过前后对比，给人留下深刻印象。
素材——情况要真，挖掘要深
经验材料要靠事实说话。如果掌握的素材不充分，写起来就很费劲，即使勉强拼凑出来了也很难给人以启发。因此，要写出有价值的经验材料，首先要在调查情况、占有素材上下功夫。
>>>>>围绕主题挖掘素材。收集和掌握素材，通常有两种情况：一种是目的很明确。如总结某项试点经验，因试点前已有具体方案，对要解决的问题、方法、步骤等都很清楚，只需要围绕主题，按照既定方案去了解效果和寻找事例，这样的素材比较好掌握。另一种是目的不很明确，往往只知道某单位某方面工作有特色，但具体有何特色并不清楚。这就需要通过初步调查，尽快把主题大致明确起来，然后再围绕主题去充分挖掘和占有素材。否则，很可能素材记了一大本，动笔写时全没用。
>>>>>点面结合挖掘素材。点，是指典型事例；面，是指综合情况。有点无面，经验就缺乏说服力；有面无点，经验则缺乏感染力。因此，在挖掘素材的时候，既要注意掌握面上的情况——主要做法、综合效果、数字分析等；又要注意了解典型事例——能够说明主题和效果的具体人、具体事。尤其是对典型事例的前因后果，一定要深入了解、细致掌握，不可一听即过。这是因为，经验材料的生动性，往往取决于具体事例的典型性，“与其把十个例子点到，不如把一个例子写好”。
>>>>>不带框框挖掘素材。经验从实践中来，观点从素材中来。带着思想框框去挖素材、找例子，很容易浅尝辄止。需要注意的是，这与围绕主题挖掘素材并不矛盾。因为明确主题后，只是为收集素材提供了大致方向，并不是要定下观点再去找事例。在实际工作中，有些同志习惯于先搭好架子再去了解情况，搜集素材时也喜欢在了解做法、体会上下功夫，这样很容易挖掘不深。正确的方法应该是把重点放在了解典型事例和综合效果上。这方面的素材充分占有了，主题、观点、做法、体会等都可以从中产生。
结构——谋篇要精，布局要好
一份完整的经验材料，通常由开头、正文、结束语三个部分组成。其中结束语这一部分，如果不是在会上介绍，一般也可以舍去不写。
>>>>>开头部分，一般先开门见山地对要讲的主题作个简要介绍，然后高度概括地介绍一下整体效果，由此再自然而然地引出做法来。
>>>>>正文部分，常用的有两种结构形式。一种是横式结构，按问题的性质，从几个侧面和角度来说明，相互之间为并列关系。即一篇经验中的几点主要做法，通常是同等重要、平起平坐的，既不能互相代替，也不能出现遗漏。如，有份题为《从抓基层干部入手
促进<纲要>在连队贯彻落实》的经验材料，主要写了三条做法：第一，形成外界压力，增强基层干部高标准建设连队的责任感；第二，增强内在动力，调动基层干部争创先进连队的积极性；第三，提高自建能力，打牢基层干部抓好经常性工作落实的基本功。“压力”“动力”“能力”三者同等重要，缺一不可。只有使基层干部既有压力，又有动力，并有能力，才能把《纲要》落实到基层。在处理并列关系上，必须注意，“并列只能是同等重要、同一层次上几个问题的并列”，不能把大小不一的问题相提并论。
另一种是纵式结构，按照事物发展过程来叙述，几个观点或做法，既互相联系，又逐步深入，相互之间为递进关系。如，有份加强干部队伍建设的经验，具体写了三点做法：一是全面考核，力求选准配强；二是加强培养，努力提高素质；三是保持稳定，不断增长才干。这三点做法，逐步深入地回答了“选配—提高—稳定”这三个一环紧扣一环的问题。在处理递进关系上，必须注意，“递进只能按事物的客观规律和发展顺序递进”，不能违背规律而任意颠倒。
无论采用何种结构形式，具体到每个问题或每个做法，一般都由“为什么、是什么、怎么样”这三个要素构成。“为什么”，即提出问题，讲清目的；“是什么”，即回答问题，交代做法；“怎么样”，即运用结果，证实效果。
文字——行文要活，语言要美
一篇辞义相彰的应用文，能够给人以美感。而经验材料作为写作要求更高、表现手法更灵活的应用文，尤应在文采上下功夫，包括结构、句式、遣词的精心设计。当然，经验材料的写作毕竟不同于文学创作，应本着符合实际、实事求是的态度，一切杜撰以及胡乱夸张，都应坚决予以摒弃。在具体写作过程中，需注意以下几点：
>>>>>思想文字都要精。思想要精辟，抓住要害去点明主题，写出深度，防止一般化；文字要精练，三言两语就切入正题，引出下文，不要弯弯绕。
>>>>>表述方式要灵活。要把讲究条理和力求活泼有机地结合起来。条理不清不行，但通篇“一是、二是”也容易显得死板，因为经验材料毕竟不是指令性文件，只有把条理与灵活这两者都照顾到，才能做到既思路清晰，又生动活泼。
>>>>>进入角度要有异。在同一篇经验材料中，每个问题的进入角度最好有所区别。如果千篇一律都由“因此”“为此”引出做法，同样显得死板单调。为了避免雷同，有的可以从正面进入，有的可以从反面进入，有的亦可以从侧面进入。
第三篇：中考英语满分作文
中考英语满分作文
My Hobbies（爱好）
I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and
keeping a diary.In school, I often hear the P.E.teacher say, sports do good to one's health, and will make one live longer.So, I like sports very much.I go running at five o'clock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon.I play pingpong with my friends.These sports have kept me healthy.At home, I like to sing and play the violin.I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up.In order to attain these goalsI go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day.Busy as I am,I am quite happy
An Interesting Story（有趣的经历）
Long long ago, there was a kind girl living in a small village.Her family was very poor but the girl was happy and she was friendly to everyone.One day, she met a frog on her way home.The frog was ill and it would die soon.The girl took the frog home and looked after it until the frog got stronger and stronger.Very soon, the frog grew very very big.So the girl had to build a house for the frog.After a few days, the house was built and it was beautiful.The frog was very happy.The girl and the frog lived happily together.But one evening, a robber went into the girl's house and he wanted to kill the girl.When the frog knew it, it was very angry.It jumped onto the girl's bed and woke her up.The girl wasn't afraid of the robber.She shouted and when her neighbours heard it, they ran into the girl's house and drove the robber away.The girl was thankful to the frog for saving her.健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；
3.饮食要健康；
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
Dear Dad(Mum),You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I’m worried about your health all the time.I’d like to give you some suggestions.I hear walking is the best sport.Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym.Going to swim is also a nice choice, too.What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food.Try not to stay up too late.Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.Dad, please accept my advice.I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son(daughter)
中考英语作文必备的典型句子
一、学科
1.My favorite subject is English.2.More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English.3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful.5.So English is very important and I like English very much.6.We have a lot of fun in the English class.7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class.8.I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English.9.I like English and try my best to learn it.二、环保
1.It's our duty to protect our environment.2.It is very important to take care of our environment.3.We should not throw litter onto the ground.4.We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees.5.We should plant more flowers and trees.6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.三、旅游
1.Last Sunday(Saturday,…),it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,)
2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike, bus，…
3.We enjoyed ourselves.4.We forgot the time.We didn't come back until 5 o'clock.5.We all felt very tired, but we were happy.6.I thought I would never forget this trip.7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.8.We visited a lot of places of interest.9.We had a good time there.10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap.四、比赛
1.Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two.2.All of us went to watch it.3.The match was very exciting.4.In fact, I have never seen such an exciting match before.5.The score was 5-3.Our team scored three goals in the last fifteen minutes.6.Class One won this match.Class Two lost.7.Class One played well.They deserved to win.8.Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance.五、健康
1.It is very important to keep healthy.2.How can we keep healthy?
3.We can't go to sleep too late.We can't get up too late.4.We should eat the food healthily.5.We should do more exercise.6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.7.I didn't feel like eating anything.8.I decided to see the doctor.9.In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.10.He said, “Nothing serious.” And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.11.A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.13.A few days later, I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.六、节日
1.In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival.2.It comes in January or February.3.On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner.They have a lot of nice food to eat.4.During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do.5.People visit their relatives and friends.6.They greet each other with a hug and say, “Happy New Year”.7.As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways.写作常用句型
1.表原因： There are three reasons for this.2.表重要、必要性等： It is important(difficult…)for sb.to do sth.3.表看法：People have different opinions/ideas on this problem.4.表结论：In short it can be said that…
5.套话：As a saying says, “It’s never to old to learn.”
第四篇：中考英语满分作文精选大汇总
中考英语满分作文精选大汇总
voluntary labour
你于“五一”前夕----4 月 28 日上午九点钟，与全班同学一起到学校附近的公园参加一次公益劳动（voluntary labour），全班分成了三组。你在第三组。请你用日记的形式写一篇短文。劳动任务安排
参考词汇： litter 果皮纸屑等废弃物
注意：
1.短文必须写出提示及表格所列出的全部内容。
2.词数 100 左右。
3.日记的格式已为你写好。
参考范文：
April 28th Saturday Fine
It was Saturday，just before May Day.My classmates and I went to the park nearby，we didn't go there for amusement but took part in voluntary labor.We got there at 9：00.We were divided into three groups and then began working.The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers.The task for Group Two was collecting the litter left about by tourists and cleaning the benches.The group I was in got to the Children's Playground and wiped all the equipment clean.We worked very hard.At 11：00，when all the work was finished up，all my classmates met again.Although everyone was in a sweat，yet we felt happy because we had done good job.My Chinese Teacher
以“My Chinese Teacher”为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:
1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。
2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。
3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。
参考范文：
My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we＇re getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.对作弊现象的建议
目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。
原因：1.考试太滥2.自身勤奋不够3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议：
1、作弊有害；
2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；
3、学校应减少考试。
要求：
1、字数80-100；
2、围绕要点可适当发挥；
3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit--cheating in examinations.参考作文：
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.There are three main reasons.First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult.Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard1
at their lessons.Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet.So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams.Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study.We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.询问学习外语的建议
四川资阳中考英语满分作文：询问学习外语的建议
假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你 学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。
注意：
1．回信需要包括全部要点；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．字数60左右。
Dear Linda,I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the Olympic Games.I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language,but I have some ideas that may help.Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China._______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Hua
中考英语满分作文：
Dear Linda，I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the Olympic Games.I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class.Don't be afraid of making mistakes.Then try to listen and read more in Chinese.What's more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.Above all, you should be confident in yourself and don't give up whenever you meet with difficulty.I'm sure you will succeed through your hard work.Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.Yours,Li Hua
成为志愿者后的打算
浙江绍兴中考英语满分作文：成为志愿者后的打算
A.假如你叫Ben,即将参加奥运会志愿者面试，请你根据自己的实际情况，完成下面的自我介绍并用一句话说明你成为志愿者后的打算。（文中所填内容必须全部用英语表达）
班级新闻：
演讲比赛
1.这些天我班的李佳坚持在老师的帮助下刻苦训练口语；
2.星期三下午的英语演讲比赛中，李佳获得第一名。
好人好事
1.昨天为四川灾区学生捐书200本，捐书包50个，捐款4200元
2.何立捐了500元，全班最多。
简要评价……
I am Ben ,a student in Class 3,Grade 3.I am ___________ years old.My hobby is _____________.I work hard at my school and I good at ____________.To be a volunteer for Beijing Olympic games is my dream.If I become a
volunteer,_________________________________________________________________________________.B.假如你是今天英语课上的值日生，请根据表中信息完成主题为“班级新闻”的值日报告。
要求：
1.报告必须包括表中全部内容,可适当增加细节，但不要逐条翻译；
2.简要评价必须在2个句子以上；
3.报告的开头和结尾已经给出（不计入总词数）,你只需接着写
4.词数必须在80左右（参考词汇：捐赠 donate）
Hello,Everyone!Here are two important activities that happened this
week._______________________________
That's all,thank you!
中考英语满分作文：
Hello,Everyone!Here are two important activities that happened this week.These days,Li Jia,our classmate,has kept practising spoken English hard with the teacher's help.On Wednesday afternoon,she won the first prizein the English speech contest.How exciting it is!We should learn from her.Yesterday,we donated 200 books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan.He Li alone donated 500 yuan,the most of all.That's good.I think that as a student,we needn't care how much we should give.Showing our love is the most important.That's all,thank you!
The Ways for Students to Relax
浙江杭州中考英语满分作文：适当方式放松自己
(浙江杭州)中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 “The Ways for Students to Relax”的学校座谈中与二(1)班的Terry讨论了这一话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师Mr.Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。His ideas Your ideas
1.Watching TV 1.…
2.Playing computer games 2.…
3.Hanging out with friends 3.…
注意：
1.开头和结尾已经写好;
2.可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯
3.所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己至少三个观点
4.词数：70字左右。
Mr.Griffin,Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two.__________________________________________________________
Terry
中考英语满分作文
Mr.Griffin,Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax with Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two.(As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.)In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games.He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isn't a bad way.However, I'm not quite agree with him.In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax.I think listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they can help us keep healthy.I often play Pingpong after class and I find it really helpful to both my health and my study.Besides, I think chatting with our friends isn't a bad way.I think it can help me get on better with my friends.Terry
创建和谐校园
（浙江金华中考作文）Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴 趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)
①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。
②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。
③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt.给……留下印象
Dear Mum and Dad,Time flies!I've been here for nearly a year.I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one.The students in our
school______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,Tom中考英语满分作文：
Dear Mum and Dad,Time flies!I've been here for nearly a year.I'm very pleased to find that our school is really a good one.The students in our school work hard at their lessons.They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health.They are friendly to each other and always ready to help each other.The teachers here all enjoy their work and they love their students.They work hard and do what they can do to help their students.And the students respect their teachers.They get on well with each other.The students in our school try their best to kkp the school yard clean and tidy.They never throw waste about nor pick the flowers.In a word, I am deeply impressed by the harmonious atmosphere in this school.I love my new school.Yours,Tom
My English Learning
（浙江丽水中考满分作文）Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待，感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语，他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况，以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件，要求至少涉及其中的三个问题，并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示：
When did you start learning English?(in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English?(listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)What is difficult to learn?(listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?(watch English movies, sing English songs…)
中考英语满分作文：
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.A letter to David
四川绵阳中考英语满分作文：
不久前你在九洲体育馆认识了美国志愿者David并与他成了好朋友，回国后他十分牵挂你和你的同学，并写信询问你们的现状。请你用英文回信，介绍你们 目前的生活，学习情况。回信应包含以下内容：生活
1.有安全地方住
2.有饭吃
3.有干净水喝
学习
1.都已回到学校学习
2.大多数在本地上帐篷学校（tent school）
3.有的去了外地上学
4.很多志愿者（volunteers）到校与我们一起唱歌，游泳，并教我们英语
注意：1.字数60-80；可适当增加细节，但不能漏掉以上内容 2.信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数
Dear David,I'm very glad to hear from you and thank you very much for your care.Now
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours，Wang NinDear David,I'm very glad to hear from you and thank you very much for your care.Now we all have safe places to live, enough to eat and clean water to drink.Don't worry about us.All of us have gone back to school.Most of us go to local tent schools.Some have gone to other parts of China to go to school.Many volunteers like you came to our schools to stay with us.We sing and play games together.They also teach us English.Best wishes!
Yours,Wang Nin
初中生能否骑电动自行车
四川成都中考英语满分作文
上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。
注意：
1．短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；
2．时态运用正确，书写工整规范；
3．词数80-100个左右。
生词提示：electric adj.电动的whether conj 能否
讨论结果 25人表示同意 35人表示不同意
同意理由
1．这样很方便
2．能节约上学途中的时间
不同意理由
1．年龄太小，骑电动自行车不安全
2．早上交通拥挤，骑电动自行车也快不起来
参考作文：
Last week,our school had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bycycles to go to school.25 students of our class agreed with it, because they say it was convenient for them and it could take less time to go to school.But the other 35 students didn't agree with them.They said it was not safe for the junior students to get to school by electric bycycles, for they were too young.They also said in the morning the traffic was very busy and the students couldn't ride electric bycycles quickly.
第五篇：中考英语满分作文
中考英语满分作文
中考英语书面表达优秀范文赏析：信
中考即将到来的时刻，英语复习应更多地集中在中、难度题型的练习上，今天和同学们谈谈书面表达这个题型。写作是英语综合能力的形式，这个形式体现学生本人的词汇量大小；单词、词组和句子的运用能力及逻辑思维能力。下面就一个有关锻炼身体的话题和一封写给父母的信，从构思、文章结构到写作的方法来看如何完成这样的书面表达。
例2：
健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；
3.饮食要健康；
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2.80—100词左右；
3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
构思方法：
1.找到信息点。
2.这个题目的信息点应该是：
a.作为儿(女)担忧父(母)的身体状况；
b.上班最好步行；
c.每周至少一次到体育场馆从事体育锻炼(球类运动、游泳等)；
d.健康的饮食；
e.早睡不熬夜。
写作方法：
1.首先要谈到对父(母)的身体状况担忧。
2.然后引出希望父(母)怎么做。
3.作为小辈向父母提出建议和要求时，要注意语气，不可以命令。
4.注意信的写作格式。
学生的作文：(1)
Dear Dad(Mum)，You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I’m worried about your health all the time.I’d like to give you some suggestions.I hear walking is the best sport.Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym.Going to swim is also a nice choice, too.What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food.Try not to stay up too late.Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.Dad, please accept my advice.I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son(daughter)
Tom(Mary)
(2)
Dear Dad(Mum)，You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you.I hope you can keep healthy.You often drive to your office.It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I’d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week.It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits.Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.I’m looking forward to receiving your letter.Your loving son(daughter)
Tom(Mary)
这两篇作文使用了I’d like to„，Why not„?It is important to do„,Try not to do„,I hope that„,What about doing„?I’d like you to do„,You’d better do„等婉转口气的请求句式，表达出了作者对父(母)的关心，信息点完整，内容充实，注重了书信的结尾形式。
中考英语书面表达优秀范文赏析：运动
中考即将到来的时刻，英语复习应更多地集中在中、难度题型的练习上，今天和同学们谈谈书面表达这个题型。写作是英语综合能力的形式，这个形式体现学生本人的词汇量大小；单词、词组和句子的运用能力及逻辑思维能力。下面就一个有关锻炼身体的话题和一封写给父母的信，从构思、文章结构到写作的方法来看如何完成这样的书面表达。
例1：
随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。
注意：1.词数80—100左右。
2.要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。
参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健身体
reduce diseases 减少疾病
构思方法：
1.认真阅读、理解和思考题目中给出的所有信息点。信息点是围绕着提示从文字中扣出来的。
2.这个题目的信息点应该是：
a.阳光体育；
b.政府重视中学生身体；
c.提出的标语；
d.参加了各种体育锻炼；
e.有利于强身健体；
f.增强了学习效果；
g.校园生活丰富了。
写作方法：
1.安排以上信息点在文中的逻辑关系。
2.用所掌握的词汇、词组、固定句型将所有信息点表现在文章中。(the Sunny Sports, pay attention to the health of the students, raise the slogan, take part in the exercise, build up one’s body strength, reduce diseases, make study effective, school life, colourful)
3.文章最后加入个人评价(观点)。
下面是学生的作文：
(1)
As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, “EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”.So far our school life has changed a lot.Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school.We play football, basketball, badminton and swim.They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful.We have become more energetic.Above all our study has all been improved.Let’s take exercise every day.It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.(2)
Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now.So “EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY” has been raised by the government.At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running.Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us.Let’s keep on doing it.这是两个学生的习作，他们分别以独特的思路和风格，利用丰富的词汇、准确的时态、简单句和复合句的搭配、合理的构思使文章语言流利，一气呵成，展现了扎实的英语语法功底和综合运用能力。
中学英语作文：我们怎样过教师节
How We Spent Teachers' Day Yesterday was Teachers' Day.It was a great dale for all the teachers and also a happy time for us students.In the morning,we went to school early and put a bunch of flowers on our class master's desk to give him a big surprise.Some of us stood at the school gate to say hello to every teacher when they entered the school.In the afternoon, we held a party.We sang and danced with the teachers.They said the best reward for the teachers was to see that we were making progress.中学生爱国英语演讲稿:我爱你,祖国
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, I’m very glad to make a speech here.Today my topic is “I love you, China.” Since the day I was born, I began to have a proud name—Chinese.Since the day I began to talk, the most beautiful sentence I’ve ever learnt has been “I love you, China!”
I love you, China, and I’m so proud of being a Chinese.I’m proud that I’ve got the beautiful yellow skin, black eyes and black hair.I’m also proud that I speak the most beautiful language in the world—Chinese.I love you, China, for I can feel the deep love you give me every day, every minute.Last year, I got an opportunity to visit the United States of America.During my staying there, my father’s boss once invited my family to dinner.While at , he looked at me and asked: “Little boy, how long have you been in America?” “About a month,” I answered, “How lucky you are!” he said, “If you were living in China, how could you learn such perfect English?” I smiled and told him proudly that all the students in China are able to learn English at school.I saw his surprised eyes and said to myself, “I’m proud of you, China ”
中学生暑假趣事英语作文
I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way.I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations, but this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so.I would soon be in the last year of my high-school education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations.Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this.At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this, but later I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come.With this in mind I then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical.I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.How I Spent My Summer Vacation-我如何渡我的暑假
The summer vacation had come round again.I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while.Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation, I made a plan as to how to spend it.First, I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise, such as walking, running and rowing, to keep me physically strong.It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did, because I lived up to what I had planned.我的理想A piano player
What do I want to do when I’m older? Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when I’m ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old , I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.Christmas Day
Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December.It is a very happy day for many boys and girls.Before the term ends in some schools , the children act a nativity① or “birth” play, showing how Jesus② was born in a stable③.On the twenty-fourth of December, all children are very excited.Usually they are sent to bed early so that their parents can get the presents ready.The younger children think that Father Christmas will come down the chimney or fireplace , so they hang up a sock for him to put presents in.The greedy ones even hang up a pillow-case④ or a sack⑤ to try to get more presents.Later that night, Father or Mother will put presents in the sock, and leave others at the side of the bed.On Christmas morning, the children wake up very early.Some even turn on the light at two o'clock, and most of them are awake by six o'clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.Children look for their presents , and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared.At about one o'clock in the afternoon, the Christmas dinner is brought in.The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten.Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it.The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.【词语解释】
①nativity [n+'tiviti] n．出生；诞生；（宗教）耶稣诞生 ②Jesus ['dNi:z+s] n．耶稣
③stable ['steibl] n．厩；马棚；牛棚 ④pillow-case ['pil+ukeis] n．枕套 ⑤sack [s$k] n．袋；布袋
假如你是TOM,打算约BEN和一些同学一起去野餐.现在要写信和BEN商量野餐事宜.根据提示写一篇60词左右的短文,要包含如下要点,可适当发挥.要点: 提示:I want to konw,I wonder, 1.怎么样去野餐 I hope to know, 2.什么时间出发 I 'd like to know 3.在那里见面集中 4.要带些什么 [范文] A picnic Dear Ben, We are going to have a picnic this weekend.I hope to know how we will go to the park.I'd like to know when and where we will meet.I will bring some delicious things for lunch, and I want to know what you will bring.I wonder how much money we will take.Hope we will have a nice day.Your, Tom
互帮互助(helping each other)We are living in a society where people help each other in many ways.Not only does helping good for people, it is also good for our society.Helping each other does good for people in different ways.Nobody can survive or live a better life without having other people's help in our society.On the other hand, helping each other can help the progress of our society.Human labour is a good example.Last but not least, helping each other does good for people and the society where they are living in!
环保(environmental matter)The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays.Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world.We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world!关于学校介绍的英语作文
1.你的学校位于什么地方 2.校园景色如何
3.你对同学和老师们的感受如何
4.请谈谈你对你学校的感觉等..（在哪自己写吧）.First here is our favourite place our beautifui garden many trees and many flowers in it.Then you can go into it.Now,you know why we love it right.we can write red and chat in it.(tell you a secret:I like it because it is cool in summer and warm in winter Now,I will tell you more about my friends &teachers.Over here teachers are friendly to us,so we never say a bad word about them.Because of these,students can get good grades at my school.(Would you like to come?)I think my school is one of the best schools in the world.Because we have good teachers good students and everything is beautiful.I like it, every at it likes it.My sweet home
Most people has a sweet home,so have I.I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.I can remember clear.Once I came back home late because my teacher didn't want me leave until I finished my work.At that time,the weather became colder and the wind became stronger.I was so hungry and cold at that time!I felt I can't take it any more,so I ran to my home quickly.When I got my home,I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!That's why I love my sweet home,Don't you think so ?
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