第一篇:高联考研英语作文
高联08年英语作文模板——个人总结 一个不错的英语考研作文模版
今天我提供给大家一个很不错的作文模版,是我去年上的高联考研辅导班上讲的,授课人是商志,可能有不少人听过他的讲演吧,很幽默一位老师。个人认为他是很有个性的,不光他的人,他讲的作文模版也很有个性,是和其他考研辅导机构所讲的模版有些不同的。
下面我就把我当时记的笔记分享给大家。
首先说小作文。
一,格式:Dear Sir or Madam,(注意大写和标点符号)X X X X(空四个字母接着写下文)X X X X X X X X X。
。
Sincerele yours 最后两行)Li Ming
去年猜的可能的类型有这么几个:
咨询信 Inquiry
投诉信 Complaint
邀请信 Invitation
介绍信 Introduction
二,各段的写法。一般写三段。
第一段:内容有:
⑴介绍自己
⑵说自己的处境及写信的目的⑶表示感谢 [共35—45字]
例: I am a senior in Computer Depart in Wuhan University.I 处境,so I am writing to 目 的.Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter.(学校随便写,但是不能写真实的,“处境”“目的”根据信的类型补上)
第二段:主题句+列举(二,三点)[50字左右]
例: There are several factors contributing this
inquiry/invitation/introduction.(什么信选什么)。下面是列举:
如果是两点:on one thing, „ „ „ „ „.On another, „ „ „ „
如果是三点:To begin with, „ „ „
In the second, „ „ „
Additionally, „ „ „ „
第三段:表示期望
例:Your kind response at your earlist convenience will be very much appreciated.I would be most grateful if you can 切题写。
大作文:一般是讽刺类的[图片,漫画]
第一段: Whorver in front of this image will be very much interested:How fascinating and amusing it is!What isconspicuously illustrated in the painting above is that „描述图画,补充描述。What on earth does the drawer really intend to convey? 怎样描述图画?⑴词汇:用常用简单词汇
⑵逻辑:“对立”
如 „ „,contrarily, „ „.或 „ „,while „ „.如07年就是:一个球员在做什么„,然而,另一个球员„。尽量用简单词汇,因为在考场上,很多专业词汇大部分的考生是不会的,比如,前锋,门将,射门等。
第二段: Odd and funny as it seems to be , it is apparently far more than a simple drawing.Indeed , the implicationg goes far deeper than what we get at first sight —(破折号)+主旨(图画的深层含义)。此后接着有两种写法:一是写问题的普遍性,并举例。二是写问题的严重性,并举措施。具体什么视题目要求而定。
若是问题的普遍性,可以这么写:According to a survey conducted by China Daily last september,78.1%of the people 主旨。或(are following this tide).Nowhere in history have such happenings been concerned so much as in our contemporary community.(史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代更关切这种事情)。
Similar stories happened and happening are available in newspapers , TV shows , and even the Web , indicating that this phenomenon is far from being rare.A case in point is one of my colleagues,who 举例 , Another pervasive example gose to an acquaintance of mine , who 举例。
第二段尾处或第三段的开头,可以使用一下直接引语,这些用法在考研真题阅读理解的许多题目中都有所体现。“ „ „ ”,argues Dr.谁,什么地方什么职务。
(具体格式可以参考真题阅读理解)。
引号中可以使用的句型有:“It is alarming that a growing number of people 主旨 ”。
“Failure to realize the severity of this grim situation may bring about dire consequences.”
“It is hard to imagine what our society will be like years latter.”
第三段:Much can be done.What tops the agenda , I deem, is to help people 主旨 [如 develop a positive and some outlook on life as well as the world
and cultivate worthy qualities.] Besides , effective measures should be encouraged and concerted and sustained efforts should be made to reverse such upsetting trend.I am strongly convinced that a campaign to 主旨 has begun , and a happy , healthy and harmonious society may not far behind.或者详细措施的写法:On one thing , schools and mass media should serve as a counterbalance to this tide , communicating their scientific and positive messages to the public actively an forcefully.On another , the Administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.这个模版,个人觉得还行,适应的范围也很大,希望对同学们会有所帮助。一个不错的英语考研作文模版
今天我提供给大家一个很不错的作文模版,是我去年上的高联考研辅导班上讲的,授课人是商志,可能有不少人听过他的讲演吧,很幽默一位老师。个人认为他是很有个性的,不光他的人,他讲的作文模版也很有个性,是和其他考研辅导机构所讲的模版有些不同的。
下面我就把我当时记的笔记分享给大家。
首先说小作文。
一,格式:Dear Sir or Madam,(注意大写和标点符号)
X X X X(空四个字母接着写下文)X X X X X X X X X。
。
Sincerele yours 最后两行)Li Ming
去年猜的可能的类型有这么几个:
咨询信 Inquiry
投诉信 Complaint
邀请信 Invitation
介绍信 Introduction
二,各段的写法。一般写三段。
第一段:内容有:
⑴介绍自己
⑵说自己的处境及写信的目的⑶表示感谢 [共35—45字]
例: I am a senior in Computer Depart in Wuhan University.I 处境,so I am writing to 目 的.Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter.(学校随便写,但是不能写真实的,“处境”“目的”根据信的类型补上)
第二段:主题句+列举(二,三点)[50字左右]
例: There are several factors contributing this
inquiry/invitation/introduction.(什么信选什么)。
下面是列举:
如果是两点:on one thing, „ „ „ „ „.On another, „ „ „ „
如果是三点:To begin with, „ „ „
In the second, „ „ „
Additionally, „ „ „ „
第三段:表示期望
例:Your kind response at your earlist convenience will be very much appreciated.I would be most grateful if you can 切题写。
大作文:一般是讽刺类的[图片,漫画]
第一段: Whorver in front of this image will be very much interested:How fascinating and amusing it is!What isconspicuously illustrated in the painting above is that „描述图画,补充描述。What on earth does the drawer really intend to convey? 怎样描述图画?⑴词汇:用常用简单词汇
⑵逻辑:“对立”
如 „ „,contrarily, „ „.或 „ „,while „ „.如07年就是:一个球员在做什么„,然而,另一个球员„。尽量用简单词汇,因为在考场上,很多专业词汇大部分的考生是不会的,比如,前锋,门将,射门等。
第二段: Odd and funny as it seems to be , it is apparently far more than a simple drawing.Indeed , the implicationg goes far deeper than what we get at first sight —(破折号)+主旨(图画的深层含义)。此后接着有两种写法:一是写问题的普遍性,并举例。二是写问题的严重性,并举措施。具体什么视题目要求而定。
若是问题的普遍性,可以这么写:According to a survey conducted by China Daily last september,78.1%of the people 主旨。或(are following this tide).Nowhere in history have such happenings been concerned so much as in our contemporary community.(史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代更关切这种事情)。
Similar stories happened and happening are available in newspapers , TV shows , and even the Web , indicating that this phenomenon is far from being rare.A case in point is one of my colleagues,who 举例 , Another pervasive example gose to an acquaintance of mine , who 举例。
第二段尾处或第三段的开头,可以使用一下直接引语,这些用法在考研真题阅读理解的许多题目中都有所体现。“ „ „ ”,argues Dr.谁,什么地方什么职务。
(具体格式可以参考真题阅读理解)。
引号中可以使用的句型有:“It is alarming that a growing number of people 主旨 ”。
“Failure to realize the severity of this grim situation may bring about dire consequences.”
“It is hard to imagine what our society will be like years latter.”
第三段:Much can be done.What tops the agenda , I deem, is to help people 主旨 [如 develop a positive and some outlook on life as well as the world and cultivate worthy qualities.] Besides , effective measures should be encouraged and concerted and sustained efforts should be made to reverse such upsetting trend.I am strongly convinced that a campaign to 主旨 has begun , and a happy , healthy and harmonious society may not far behind.或者详细措施的写法:On one thing , schools and mass media should serve as a counterbalance to this tide , communicating their scientific and positive messages to the public actively an forcefully.On another , the Administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.这个模版,个人觉得还行,适应的范围也很大,希望对同学们会有所帮助
第二篇:高联英语考研辅导班听课笔记(孟高正义版)
一,完形填空:
(一)要读两遍,第一遍先做有把握的,第二遍再蒙。注意:历年的完形填空的答案分布规律是5个A、5个B、5个C、5个D,一共20个题,每小题0、5分,如果全蒙A、B、C、D四个选项中的任何一个选项都可以对5个,也就是最少可以得5·0、5=2、5分。所以,对于完型填空,我们的策略是能够根据下列
(三)中的明确控制因素可以明确判断出来的选项先选出来,对于那些不会的全选与已经选择出的选项不同的选项,这样得分就可以维持在5—7分之间,不会影响最终得分了。另外要注意做题的顺序,一般最后做完形填空,即使先做完形填空也要把时间控制在20分钟左右。
(二)精读首句,把握主旨
(三)明确控制因素
1,逻辑关系词:
(1)表示转折关系的词:
1)However(一般选这个)
2)Although(只用于句首)
3)Though(可用于句首,句中,句末)
4)While(当···的时候,同when;转折,然而)
5)Whereas(只用于句首,表转折)
(2)表示举例关系的词及词组:
1)for example(后面既可跟句子,也可跟短语、名词、动名词等)
2)For instance(后面只跟句子)
3)Such as(后面只跟名词、短语、动名词等)
4)Consider sth(以sth为例子)
5)Take ····for example(一般出现在文章中,很少作为题目考查)
(3)表示强调关系的词:
1)indeed(意思是“确定”,出现在句子中一般是后一句对前一句的强调、解释和进一步的说明)
(4)表示类比(compare)关系的词:
1)Likewise(相同的是)
2)Similarly(相同的是)
(5)表示对比(contrast)关系的词:
1)on the contrary(相反的是)
2)Byin contrast
3)Contrarily
4)Instead
(6)表示因果关系的词:
1)Because
2)So
3)So that
4)Consequently
5)Therefore
6)As a result
7)Since
8)As
9)For
10)On the grounds that
11)By virtue of
12)In view of
(7)表示假设的词:
1)If
2)Unless
3)Not···until
4)Given
5)Suppose
6)Supposing
7)Provided
(8)表示递进关系的词:
1)Morever
2)Furthermore
3)What`s more
(9)表示解释说明的词:
1)Obviously
2)It is obvious that
3)Obviously,···
(10)表示并列关系的词:
1)Simultaneously
2)In the meanwhile
3)At the sametime
(11)表示总结关系的词:
1)generally,in
2)General,at length
3)Finally,eventually
4)Last but not least
2,词语搭配:
(1)动词搭配:(把···作为···)
1)regard as
2)Consider(to be)
3)Look on as
4)View as
5)See as
6)Envision as
7)Passion as
8)Dream as
9)Matain as
10)Interpret as(翻译作)
11)Define as(定义为)
12)Accept as
13)Recognize as(把···视为)
14)Label as
15)Dismiss as(解雇;解散;把···蔑视为···)
(2)名词搭配:(工作、职业)
1)Work
2)Work ethic
3)Job
4)Job satisfaction
5)Employment
6)Employment rate
7)Employment pressure
8)Employment prospect(职业前景)
9)Career
10)Career planning
11)Career decision
12)Career woman
13)Occupation
14)Occupational orientaton(职业定位,其中—oriented是以···为导向,以···为中心的)
15)Vocation
(3)形容词搭配:
1)depend on
2)Be dependent on
3)Be dependent of
4)Be subject to(受···支配,倾向于,容易做某事)
5)Be subjected to(受到)
(4)介词搭配:
1)in turn
2)At the expense of
3)Other than
4)Rather than
5)In the way
6)On the way
7)In one way
8)In no way
3,句型结构
二,阅读理解A部分:
(一)此部分共4篇阅读理解,每篇有5个题目,共4·5=20个题目,每个题目2分,所以,共20·2=40分。
(二),宫东风老师采取的做题顺序是:
1,先从第二段的段首句开始,之所以跳过第一段是为了避免让第一段误引导读者偏离主题。2,然后是第三段段首句、第四段段首句、第五段段首句等直到最后一段
3,然后是看题目,分析题目,到原文找到答题区间
(三),八大题型:
1,理解主旨要义
2,理解文中具体信息
3,理解概念性涵义
4,进行有关判断、推理和引申
5,根据上下文推测生词词义
6,理解文章的总体结构及上下文之间的关系
7,理解作者意图,观点和错误
8,区分论点和论据
三,阅读理解B部分(即新题型部分):
(一),此部分共5个小题,每小题2分,共5·2=10分。得分情况是与完形填空持平,比翻译稍好一点。
(二)共有四种题型,最近几年的题型基本固定下来了,做题的方法是:
1,将每段的段首段尾句划出来;
2,将段首句中有承上的词划出来,将段尾句中的承下的词划出来;
3,将已经固定段落的段首段尾句划出来并仔细研究;
4,先是两段两段的结成一组,最后再推敲全部排列。
四,阅读理解C部分(即翻译句子部分):
(一),注意事项:
1,一共5个小题,每小题2分,共5·2=10分,是整张考试卷中得分最低的一个题目。答题时,每一个小题用时5分钟,共用时5·5=25分钟。
2,通过引导词的分割将每小题中的句子分为若干个小句子,答题时也尽量将这若干个小句子分别翻译出来,这样可以得小分。最好不要试图整合成一句,这样,若翻译对了,则得全分,若翻译错了,则得不到分,不划算。
(二),句法考点:
1,定语从句
2,状语从句
3,名词性从句
4,被动句
(三),四步翻译法:
1,将句子中的全部谓语全部找出来;
2,将句子中的引导词找出来,进行断句;
3,将断出来的句子分别翻译
4,将翻译后的一个个小句子进行整合梳理,填到答题纸上。
五,作文:
(一)小作文部分:
1,作文分为大作文和小作文两部分,其中小作文占10分,大作文占20分。
(1)小作文:根据英语大纲规定,应用文主要有两种考查形式:书信和告示。纵观历年真题,书信考查过8次,属于重中之重,告示考查过一次,因此我们复习的大方向还是要以各种书信写作为主。
(2)书信类写作只需要写称呼、正文部分、结束语和签名四大部分,实际上降低了难度。
1)称呼:
称呼是书信的开头,具体是指写信人对收信人的称谓敬语,具体位置放在应用文写作的第一行,顶格来写,后面加逗号。
注意:务必看清楚题目要求:按照题目要求来写,比如dear bobeditormr wang。如果给不熟悉的人、团体或组织写信,比如dear sirdear madamdear sir or madamto whom it may concern
2)正文部分:
第一段:开门见山,直接表明身份与写作意图。
自我介绍:
As a student fresh into college majoring in World Economyi am a freshman sophomorejuniorsenior from the Department of Physics in Peking Universityas a regular reader of your prestigious newspaper
表明写信意图:
I am writing this letter to voice my dissatisfaction with a electronic dictionary i purchased in your store last Tuesday.I venture to send you this email to invite you to serve as the judge for our approaching campus—wide English speech contest.第二段:主要针对题目中给出的Directions进行展开写作,一般提示为三点,需要写出具体的事情、过程、缘由、条件以及提出的建议。写作的时候要注意信息要点一定全面,并且将细节描述清楚,语言尽量正式多变。
第三段:主要是表达感谢并期待回信。
Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.I would be most grateful lf you could reply to me in due course.结束语:
这是写信人对于收信人的谦称,具体位置写在正文位置的右下角,第一个词的开头字母要大写,末尾以逗号结尾。
Yours sincerelyYours respectfullyYours cordiallyYours faithfullyYours 签名:
Li MingZhang Wei
(3),告示类小作文:
告示类应用文含有标题、日期、正文和署名四部分:
1)标题:announcementnotice
2)日期:写在标题下一行的右侧,右端与右边线对齐。常见写法比如“January 14 ,2013”等。
3)正文:一般使用现在时或将来时
4)署名:根据题目要求 Postgraduate Association
(二)大作文部分:
1,写作的核心必备词汇
2,写作的核心句型
3,积木作文法练习:
(1)第一步:写出简单句;
(2)第二步:添加定语、状语等修饰成分;
(3)第三步:替换掉“平淡无奇”的用法;
(4)第四步:使用从句将简单句连接成复合句。
4,高分要求:
(1)书写工整,将语法、拼写、标点符号等低级错误降至最低,达到字数要求;
(2)用词用句准确地道,表达恰当;
1)是否长短句交叉;
2)是否会使用插入语;
3)句型使用是否准确、地道、用词是否多样、准确、形象;
4)适当用被动语态替换主动语态;
5)闪光词汇及主题词的替换;
(3)几点说明:
1)英语一和英语二的区别在于,英语二是在职研究生等考的,英语二大作文考的是图表,而英语一大作文考的是图画;
2)作文不需要写标题;
3)严禁抄写当年的题目中的词句;
4)在规定的区域作答;
5)作文即使偏了题也不要紧,只要语言流畅就好。
(4)英语一大作文中常出现的几种漫画类型:(写作思路分析)
1)优良的精神、品质、道德、素养等:
第一段:主要在于图画的描述
第二段:寓意阐述+重要性阐述+举例说明+重申观点
第三段:发表评论
2)不好的社会想象或事物:
第一段:图画的描述
第二段:寓意阐述+原因分析(内部逻辑:主题句+扩展句)+影响
第三段:解决措施(一般从政府、立法、教育、开展活动等方面)
3)好的社会现象或事物:
第一段:图画的描述
第二段:寓意阐述+背景介绍+重要性分析+举例说明
第三段:发表言论(继续重申重要性)+展望未来
4)社会想象或事物:
第一段:图画的描述;
第二段:寓意阐述+背景介绍+利弊分析
第三段:发表言论(最好中立)
第三篇:2014考研英语作文
第一段结构: 万能句+图画描述句+过渡句+中心句 万能句:
1.There have been a heated discussion about a picture(a set of pictures)in the newspaper at present.2.It is universally acknowledged that 主题+is a hot topic discussed by people in all walks of lie and that is true not only in China,but also in other country.3.(正面或负面)At present 主题 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who are confronted for the problem.4.(精神类)At present 精神 has become a matter of public concern especially for the people who lack the spirit.图画描述句:
As is depicted(illustrated/displayed/),+ 一个主语+2个动作(使用分句)。
According to the vivid description in the picture, + 一个主语+2个动作(使用分句)。过渡句:(使用到装)Simple(Ridigulous/Funny)as the picture is ,it makes great significance.Simple(Ridigulous/Funny)as the picture is ,its meaning is far reaching.或者(图表类)Isolated as these figures seem to be,as a matter of fact,they are connected with each other closely.中心思想句:
第一种:As the caption in the picture reads,+(图画中文字说的主题)第二种:There is no doubt that +(正面)china is encountered with a serious opportunity of++现象.(负面)china is encountered with a serious problem of ++现象。(精神)精神is exetremly crucial to human beings.第二段 深层涵义阐释段
结构:中心思想句(如果写在第一段,这个可以省略)+预测趋势段+原因阐释段+科学论据+例证+虚拟语气 1.象征意义解释:
Symbolically,主语 is associated with……
某某可以和 某某联系起来。Stand for 象征 Refer to 指代
Be an excellent mataphor for sth.是……的完美比喻。2.科学论据法
According to a surver /an investigation /research/,+ 数据+ 定语从句
According to a surver /an investigation /research/, Money spent on pets by Frenchmen in the city of Paris is as much as one million dollars which can feed the Japanese for a whole year.3.例证法=引出句+例子+总结句 引出句:
大事:Our human history has been filled with a various of examples,with the following one being the foremost.以下面这个最重要。然后写例子。
小事:Among all the examples that I have heard,withnessed and experienced,the most impressive one is that ………….名人:The story of(人名)can best illustrate my perspective /point.总结句:In this case,we can see that 重申观点。4.虚拟语气法:Were it not for sth,主+ would+…… 5.因果论证法=引出句+解释原因 1.引出句
A great number of complex reasons give rise to /contribute to this phenomenon.或
I can think of no better reasons other than the following one.2.解释2个原因
The frist reason ,as far as I am concerned, is that …………
In addition/Moreover,We can’t have failed to have awareness of another potential reason that ……
6.预测趋势法:未来上升或下降
Giving all informations mentioned above a consideration,I can predict that there will be a sharp increase /decline in ……
考虑以上因素,我预测……将有一个上升/下降。
第三段:个人评价段=呼吁+措施+万能总结句 1.负面现象呼吁:
The situation being so urgent,It is high time that we took some effective steps to solve the problem.措施=法律+个人
On one hand,it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities.On the other,individuals should be educated to be cautious of dreadful consequence of the problem..万能总结句:
with a proper law and an alert public,it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes a matter of the past.伴随着法律和警觉的民众,问题迟早会解决。2.正面现象
The situation being so perfect,it is high time that we took this opportunity to develop our society and economy.措施: On one hand, it is essential that some laws and regulations should be worked out by the authorities to put an end to promote the situation.On the other, individuals should be educated to be cautious of the beneficial consequence of the phenomenon.万能总结句:
With ……,we can’t have failed to witness a prosperous future.精神类:
There is no doubt that in do things,no matter great or slight,there are more or less some hardships and frustrations.用谚语结束:
Just as old Chinese proverb says,……is the key point to success.(the foundation of 基石/the shortcut to 捷径)
Having captured our attention,the picture vividly betrays the fact that [描述图片内容].Simple as it is,the drawing set us sinking in awfully.Accordingly,what this far-reaching picture depicts witnesses a common phenomenon in today's society:[图片所反映的现实(寓意)].It goes without saying that its symbolic message that [主旨句子],has gone beyond the picture itself.Why do we lay much emphasis upon this?Several points analyzed below might equip us with the deeper understanding of what we head for.For one thing,[第一个理由].For another,[第二个理由].And above all,[第三个理由(这个理由可以写可以不写)].Consequently,no issue stands as critical to [A内容] as [B内容].{说明:no issue stands as critical to A as B.再没有比B对A更为关键的了。} Judging from what has been argued above,we have come to recognize that the harms arising from [写图片反映出的问题] has been,like the pandora's box,the crippling force of [写对什么的阻碍力].{说明:like the pandora's box 比喻一系列恶果之源} It is,therefore,imperative that effective steps should be made to [点主旨句子].On one hand,[措施一].On the other hand,[措施二].Only by undergoing these measures,can we [写通过措施达到的效果].Also,I do reckon that we human beings can solve this problem,and we will have a bright future.销售:
Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First,we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second,we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season‘s are,if anything,more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.订购:
Could you give us some idea about your price?
Full information as to prices,quality,quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However,we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信:
你参加了一个公司的面试,结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无,根本不顾及你的感受,请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。
1,说明来信目的 2,具体阐述投诉理由 3,期待的解决方式
Dear Sir or Madam,I,the undersigned,am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer,Mr Wang.First,when I was about to illuminating my deep thought,he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally,his
cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject,after all,I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration,what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.
第四篇:2011考研英语作文(推荐)
很好,2011年考研英语入学考试迫在眉睫,很多同学虽也投入在如火如荼的复习进程中,但总有些许瞎忙摸不着头脑的感觉!尤其对于占总分值30%的作文来说,很多同学更是无从下手,而只能拙劣的选择背诵一些模板,最后到考试时也只能东拉西扯,草草了事,那么最终的得分惨不忍睹也就可想而知了。究其原因,实质还是对于历年考研英语写作真题规律研究不透彻所致。本文力图帮助2011年即将考研的学员在最短的时间内找到方向,拟从以下两方面入手拨开笼罩考研作文之层层迷雾。ok
(一)2011年小作文写作前瞻
纵观往年考研小作文(应用文)命题,个人认为规律性非常明显。大纲规定的应用文类型,也就那么几种,几乎是一年考一种。我们来看看真题:
2004年大纲第一次增加小作文,所考的第一篇作文来自于2005年1月的辞职信。当年这篇作文令很多业界所谓的预测大师们感到非常意外,因为按照常理,大学生写的第一封职业类邮件应该是求职信,考研学子大多数都是应届生,还没学会写求职信就先写辞职信,总感觉不大厚道。结果,不厚道的事情就是发生了,随之而来的就是网上所罗列的大量预测模板彻底失效,甚至当年有人叫嚣绝对不可能考辞职信;
紧接着2006年,考了咨询信,如何向希望工程捐款,此封信考的很常规,只需在考前做过适当准备即可;
2007年,考查的是主动建议信,再次把考生放在了非常主动的地位上,没人问你意见,你自己跳出来对母校的大学图书馆管理提建议。这封邮件再次使网络上以及很多培训机构的预测失效,因为他们为同学们准备的范文多半是类似于你有一个同学,要去美国读书,写信问你到底是读历史还是计算机。实质上,这属于回复建议信,它的文章开头多半是In respond to your question about whether to „ , I would like to present the following recommendations.而主动建议信的开头却截然不同,因为是主动,所以收信人多半会感觉比较突然,因此需要写信人在开头稍作自我介绍,并不是介绍自己的姓名,而是稍微说明下自己主动提建议的初衷是为对方好,首先取得对方的理解,这才是一封主动建议信所必须具备的,基于此,开头往往会设计为,As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full 的人,I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of
so that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to
as follows.因此,如果不能准确使用,则后果会很严重,从第一句话就会暴露你根本没有审题,得分也就可想而知;
2008年考察的非常巧妙,杂交了两种类型的邮件:道歉加失物归还。出国旅行,把国外朋友借给你听的CD机一不小心带回国了。这封邮件再次使很多死板的失物招领信或寻物启事信模板无用武之地;
2009年,倡议信,倡议大家不要再使用一次性塑料袋,这封信比较常规;
到了最近一次2010年,很多同学都在惊讶于怎么考了一篇招聘通知,难道邮件时代就此终结?我认为,实则不然。首先,通知和邮件的格式并无实质差别,考研小作文的注意力从来就不应该是放在格式上;其次,2009年上课我反复给大家讲过求职信怎么写,尤其是得分的关键---第二段,你必须说明自己适合这份工作,因此我给大家设计了三大自证理由,英文(证书)水准,著名企业实习经验,适合团队协作的性格等,而学习主动性稍微强一些的同学只要动点脑筋,就会发现其实只要把这三点反过来,变成招聘要求,这篇通知就会迎刃而解。这就是为什么当年考完试当天就有很多同学自信的跟我说考得不错的原因,因为他们愿意思考,临门一脚还得靠大家自己!
好了,分析了这么多,也就是为了预测未来。综上所述,小作文考察的特点主要有:第一,希望把学生放在一个主动的地位上,比如辞职,主动建议等,都把大家放在了主动方,而这恰恰与很多同学平时训练应用文时喜欢把自己放在被动方的思维相悖,也是大家为什么感觉总押不到题的根源。第二,考研的考察方向依旧是以邮件为主,换句话说,只要把邮件写好了,即使考别的应用文类型,那也不怕!因此,经过对2011年考研新大纲的考量,本人有七成把握今年考研会考订购信(或出售信,一正一反,都要会写)和投诉信(或回复投诉信)。
(二)2011年考研英语大作文命题方向前瞻
考研英语大作文的命题范围虽每年千奇百变,但基于中国国情的基本事实和命题规律却从来没有改变过,因此命题的方向把握相对就不是太难的事,具体来说,从宏观角度符合以下两点:
(1)高举和谐社会大旗(Harmonious Society)
从1998年考研英语大作文命题至今,考题基本锁定和谐社会的大旗,反复变换切入点,而命题方式,除了1999年的图表题之外,已经基本锁定在图画题,这个规律已经延续11年未变,具体来看,1998年的诚信(credit)话题,1999年以及2000年连续两年的人与自然和谐共处的话题(nature),2001年爱心话题(love),2002年的世界文化融合话题(culture),2003年的个人、企业独立成长话题(self-independence),2004年的人生奋斗无止境话题(it ends today but starts tomorrow),2005年的抚养老人话题(to respect elders),2006年的偶像崇拜话题(idol worship),2007年的自信话题(confidence),2008年的残疾人合作奋斗自强不息话题(never give up),2009年的网络对于人类交流亲疏远近之影响(interpersonal relationship immersed in Internet era)以及2010年再次重现的中西文化大融合话题。从这些历年真题中无不察觉出命题者的良苦用心,即完善人格,关注生活,关心他人,最终实现人与人的和谐,个人自身的和谐以及人与自然的和谐。一旦把握此命题思路,在平时的训练时就能真正做到有的放矢,例如,一些阴暗的,过于政治化的话题,就不会成为应试范围,而尚未考察过的一些和谐话题,例如社会责任(responsibility),乐观心态(optimism)亦或平心做人、脚踏实地(to try to grasp your aspiration step by step)等,就应该在平时适当进行练习,这样在走进考场那一刻才能真正实现胸有成足,写作时的素材才会有信手拈来的感觉。
(2)影射当年热点话题(hot spot)
2008年1月19日下午,正值08年考研第一天,我的手机从当天的研究生入学英语考试结束之时起就一直响到当天晚上21时许,大多数是来自学员和同事的祝贺以及感谢,说我押中了08年的考研大作文题。其实,对于押题这个字眼,我内心从来都是不太感冒的,因为一个好的考研者,英文复习的重心绝对不应该放在押题中,一个好的师者,也不应给学员传达押题这样的信息,而是应该帮助学员实实在在找到方向,真正提高写作水平。但押终归押到了,虽有些许惊诧,但也很欣慰的发现,自己一直以来对于考研命题的思路探析没有出错,起码与命题组的专家们算是有些契合了!其实用心观察的人都会发现,近些年尤其是近5年来考研的命题,除了把握和谐社会这个大方向不变之外,影射当年热点就是另一个最直接有效切中命题的捷径。让我们来看看吧,2003年1月考研,正值中国加入WTO第一年,实为2002年经济界的一个热点话题,因此图画选择了“温室里的花朵经不起风雨”,影射中国企业成长继而引申到个人成长都需要自主独立;2005年1月考研,“养老足球赛”,大家查阅2004年全年BBC评选的中国大事记,把当年命名为中国的“司法聚焦年”,因此赡养父母这个小的切入点影射的实为中国当年的人际全局面貌;2006年1月考研,“偶像崇拜话题”,更是明显不过,2005年全年的超级女声几乎撼动了整个中国娱乐界;2007年1月的“自信话题”,漫画中一个守门员,一个射手,正在面临点球大战前的心理波动,回应的的正是2006年沸腾全球的德国世界杯;再到2008年1月,充分显示了命题者的智慧,中国正式进入奥运年,奥运所体现的一切精神就是永不放弃,自强不息,但如果直接选择一幅漫画就是关于奥运,又太过明显,因此,我当时在2007年5月17号的一次考研讲座现场就第一次提出了了08年考研的展望,即奥运这个热点过于强大,所以不可能避开,那怎么隐藏??所以只能选择打“擦边球”,通过残奥,影射残疾人不屈不挠奋斗之话题,因为每一个观看过哪怕任何一场残疾人运动会的人都会为这个特殊群体的精神所震撼,果不其然,最终的结果如我所料!因此,我们可以大胆的推测,即将到来的11年考研,这个大规律依旧有很大的可能得到延续。
(三)2011年考研英语预测
以下六大话题搜集,是在充分研究2011年全年大事记的前提下,严格遵守以上两大命题思路所作出的预测,具体的范文会陆续在我的元旦押题班中发布,请大家引起足够重视!
1.漫画“瞎子摸到了真象”---影射国际对于中国认识的前后变化。
2.漫画“相互推卸责任”---影射食品安全事件中的社会责任感和道德感缺失。
3.漫画“股市大跌”---影射投机心态不可有,脚踏实地才是出路。
4.漫画“地震中用自己身躯保护学生的好老师”---影射灾难事件中人性的光辉。关于灾难,此命题切入点还有可能为保持乐观心态。
5.漫画“把我整成**明星的样子”---影射整容现象以及山寨现象
附件一:2011年考研英语大作文权威预测一
范文演示:Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.附件二:2011年考研英语大作文权威预测二
重点推荐: the lack of responsibility
范文演示:When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.附件三:2011年考研英语大作文权威预测三
背景介绍:山寨现象
“山寨”一词源于广东话,是“小型、小规模”甚至有点“地下工厂”的意思,其主要特点为仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今,网络上各种各样的东西都有山寨版,山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”,山寨版“鸟巢”,山寨版的《红楼梦》甚至火过新版《红楼梦》。
从2003年开始出现山寨手机到各种山寨产品,“山寨”一词从经济行为逐渐演变为一种社会文化现象。如今“山寨相机”、“山寨电影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等诸多带有模仿性质的“山寨现象”层出不穷,形成了独有的“山寨文化”。
KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”(山寨)
MODEL ESSAY:
As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”
特别提醒:2011年必背小作文三篇
订购及销售信
销售:
Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.订购:
Could you give us some idea about your price?
Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投诉信:
你参加了一个公司的面试,结果在面试过程中考官把你批的颜面全无,根本不顾及你的感受,请写信给这个公司的领导投诉。
1,说明来信目的 2,具体阐述投诉理由
3,期待的解决方式
点评:这是一封典型的combination(合体式)作文,它既涉及找工作面试用语,又涉及投诉信,代表了考研应用文命题的典型思路。
MODEL ESSAY:
Dear Sir or Madam,I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours,Li Ming
第五篇:考研英语作文
范文
(一)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)describe the cartoons,
2)state its main idea, and give your comment.
You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
范文
These two cartoons show two contrasting scenes.While the male student spends all his time and money playing Internet games, the female student studies diligently.One could easily argue that a bright future awaits the students who study hard, while those who waste tuition playing games have little to look forward to.The above images encourage students to value their time in school and take advantage of educational opportunities.
While students dream of being accepted into college for years, they often become lost once admitted.Without their parents' constant support and advice, or because of limited communication with teachers, many students are unable to focus on their future goals.Such confusion leads some to forget their studies and resort to playing on the Internet, among other forms of recreation.Students should not only keep their ambitions in mind, but also seriously strive towards them.Without a clear purpose, one might easily waste crucial years neglecting one's studies.
Constantly playing on the Internet leads to failure, while continuously studying guarantees success.Students need to appreciate their time in school, and work hard in order to ensure a good future.这两幅漫画描述了两个形成鲜明对照的场景,第一幅画中的男生在网络游戏中虚掷了所有的时间和金钱,而第二幅画中的女生却在勤勉地学习。可以很容易得出结论:对于刻苦学习的学生,一个美好的未来在等候着他们;而浪费学费玩游戏的学生没有什么指望了。上面这两幅画激励学生们珍惜在校的时光和受教育的机会。
经过多年的梦寐以求终于跨进大学门槛的学生,却往往迷失了自己。因为没有了父母常在身边的支持和建议,或是缺乏与老师的沟通,很多学生找不到自己未来的奋斗目标。而这种困惑就使得一些学生扔掉书本,靠各种消遣 —— 包括玩网络游戏 —— 来打发时光。大学生不应只空谈理想,应该认真地为之奋斗,而没有明确的目标则会让一个人在度过他至关紧要的几年后头脑空空。
沉湎于网络游戏只会导致失败,而坚持不懈的学习则能收获成功。大学生们一定要珍惜在校时光,为了美好的未来而努力。
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(二)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: How can we meet the needs of today without diminishing the capacity of future generations to meet theirs? Sustainable development implies a broad view of human welfare, a long term perspective about social development.Write an essay which should cover:)describing the set of drawings below,)stating its main idea, and)giving your comment.
You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
范文
The images above are both meaningful and instructive: this man's hard work is not only for his own benefit, but also for the benefit of future generations.The pictures serve to remind us that the existence of our current happiness and valuable national heritage is due to the struggles of our predecessors.We, in turn, should also work hard in order to guarantee the comfort and safety of generations to come.Sustainable development has become a topic of heated debate in recent years.While it is justifiable to satisfy current demands, we cannot neglect the needs of our descendants in the process.Our children also depend on Earth's natural resources and we should not deprive them of such necessities.Unfortunately, many people only think of their short term, personal interests.An entire forest might be clear cut, in the interest of making a profit, without a single tree planted in its place.This inconsiderate attitude towards the welfare of our descendants, as well the indifference to the outcome of such reckless actions, can only turn Earth into a cold and lifeless planet.People must be taught to appreciate Earth as not only their home, but also the home of our children and grandchildren, as well as all other plants and animals.While making great efforts to increase our current quality of life, we must simultaneously consider how our actions will affect future lives.译文:
上面的漫画意味深长而发人深省,栽树人的艰辛劳作不只是为了他自己,也是为了后人。这幅漫画是为了提醒我们今天的幸福生活和宝贵的民族遗产归功于我们祖先的奋斗,而我们,反过来,也要努力劳动来确保我们后代的幸福和平安。
可持续发展是近几年的热点话题,虽然我们要满足自己当前的需要,但不能将子孙后代的需求抛置脑后。我们的孩子同样需要自然资源,我们不能剥夺他们的这份必需品。 不幸的是很多人只考虑他们短视的、自私的利益。为了获得利润,整片的森林被砍光,一棵树都不留下。这种不顾及子孙福利的态度,和对这种轻率行为的后果的无动于衷,只会让我们的地球变成一个冷冰冰而无生气的行星。
必须告诫人们的是:地球不仅是他们的家园,也是他们的孩子和所有后代的家园,还是其他所有的植物和动物的家园。在努力提高今天的生活质量的同时,我们必须考虑到我们的行为会对未来的生命产生什么样的影响。
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(三)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following set of cartoons carefully and write an essay in which you should )describe the cartoons, )interpret its meaning, and )point out its implications in our life.
You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
美丽不是表面的范文
In the above cartoons, a young woman happily eats bananas and casually discards the peels on the street, unaware of the fact that such actions not only pollute the environment but also pose a danger to others.In the next illustration a disabled man struggles to properly dispose of the trash she has left behind.Despite the girl's youth and beauty, it is the disabled man who is truly beautiful.True beauty comes from one's actions rather than one's appearance.While most of us enjoy pretty appearances, it is more important to cultivate a clean and beautiful soul.Only such souls can create a genuinely beautiful society.Chinese traditionally uphold the virtues of modesty, generosity,broadmindedness, and politeness.Confucian teachings such as: “do not do to others as you would not want done to you” and “one should be delighted to hear criticism,” are wise and worthwhile.If people embody these teachings our society can only improve and progress.The thoughts of great minds like Confucius are also worth studying.His writings set fine and noble examples for us to follow.Another proverb thus comes to mind: in the company of three one always can find a teacher.We should always be willing and able to learn from those around us.译文:
在上面的漫画里,一个年轻女子愉快地吃着香蕉,然后随手就把香蕉皮扔到了街上 —— 丝毫没顾及到这样的举动不仅会污染环境,还会给他人带来危险。而在接下来的那幅图中,一位残疾人艰难地把她扔下的垃圾清理掉了。虽然这个女孩年轻貌美,但真正美的是那位残疾人。真正的美是出自行动而不是外表,虽然我们每个人都喜欢漂亮的外貌,但更重要的是培养纯净、美丽的心灵,只有这样的心灵才能创造出真正美好的社会。中国自古推崇谦逊、宽宏、心胸开阔和以礼待人的美德。
孔夫子的教导: “ 己所不欲,勿施于人 ”、“ 闻过则喜 ” 是明智的并值得我们遵循。如果人们把这些箴言都落实到生活中,那么我们的社会就会得到改善和进步。大思想家孔子的思想是值得我们学习的。他的著述给我们留下了杰出、高尚的楷模让我们效仿。另一句谚语又浮现在我的脑海里: “ 三人行,必有我师 ”。我们必须随时愿意和能够向周围的人们学习。
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(四)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions:
A.Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.B.Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET II.C.Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1.Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed
2.Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon..范文:
Indicated above are pictures that show trees play a vital role in water and soil conservation.In the left hand picture, people are fleeing from voracious sand dunes because they cut down all the trees.The caption reads, “As the sand advances, we
retreat.” In the right hand picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water and samplings for the reforestation of the land.We are informed that, “As we advances, the sand retreats.”
It seems that the cartoonist is sending a message about the significance of trees in water and soil conservation and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of the desertification.In fact, what he is saying is if we do not fight against the sand, it will drive us away from the land.If we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction.The best way to fight back against the greedy desert is made clear in the second picture.There the local people are vigorously setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim the land and make it fertile.The fact that there are three people in the picture, each with a different job suggests that cooperative efforts is one of the keys to success in the battle against soil erosion and only in this way can desertification be finally defeated.(225)
译文:
如图所示,树木对水土保持起着至关重要的作用。左图中,人们被贪婪的沙丘追赶,因为他们砍伐了所有的树木。标题写着: “ 沙进我退 ”。右图中,人们拿着工具、水和树苗回来重新植树造林。我们被告知: “ 我进沙退 ”。
我认为,漫画家要告诉我们的是:树木对水土保持的重要性,以及每个人参与抵制沙化威胁的必要性。实际上,他要说的是如果我们不与沙漠做斗争,它会把我们从土地上赶走。如果我们让这种情况继续下去,环境将遭到巨大的破坏。
第二幅图清楚地说明了击退贪婪沙漠的方法。那里的人们正在热情高涨地着手植树造林、收回土地,使它变得肥沃。图中三个人每人干不同的工作,这说明合作努力是成功防止土壤侵蚀的关键之一 , 只有这样才能战胜沙漠化
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(五)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions : In this part, you are to write an essay of 160--200 words within 30--35 minutes.Your essay must meet the requirements below.1.Show your understanding of the meaning of the picture below 2.State the harmful effects of fake and inferior products 3.Suggest ways to fight against fake and inferior products
假冒伪劣产品
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As the picture given depicts , the socialist market-oriented economy in our country is developing rapidly, just like a truck running at a high speed.But the general public is surprised to find that there are more and more fake and inferior products seriously hampering the expansion of our market economy.Consumers have to be very careful in purchasing goods and services they need;otherwise they will fall into the traps set by the illegal manufacturers.There is no doubt that fake and inferior products are extremely harmful.In the first place, they endanger people’s health, giving rise to a lot of injury accidents.For instance, inferior-quality medicines not only aggravate a patient’s condition, but also tend to threaten his life and, what’s worse, to result in his death.Secondly, fake and inferior products are usually sold on the cheap.In many cases they interfere with the normal economic order in our country, affecting the marketing of many high-quality goods.This, in a great degree, hinders the development of our socialist market economy and harms the interests of our state.Therefore, we can say that fake and inferior products are a dangerous “tumor” in our healthy economy, which must be cut away as soon as possible.In my opinion , several strong measures should be adopted to fight against fake and inferior products.On the one hand, those who make them deserve to be severely punished by the law.On the other hand, consumers should learn to discern between true and false.Only in this way can they defend their own legal rights and interests.(263 words)
译文:
正如所给的图画所描绘的 , 我国社会主义市场经济正在迅速发展 , 就像一辆高速行驶的卡车。但是公众惊讶地发现 , 越来越多的假冒伪劣产品严重地阻碍了我国市场经济的发展。消费者必须经常谨慎地去购买他们所需的货物或服务 , 否则他们会落入不法制假人所设的陷阱。
毫无疑问 , 假冒伪劣产品极其有害。首先 , 它们危害人民的健康 , 引发了许多伤害事故。例如,伪劣药品不仅使病人的病情恶化 , 而且往往会威胁病人的生命 , 更糟的是 , 导致病人的死亡。其次 , 假冒伪劣产品通常廉价出售。在许多情况下 , 它们又干扰了我国正常的经济秩序 , 影响了许多高质量产品的销路。这在很大程度上阻碍了我国社会主义市场经济的健康发展 , 并损害了我们国家的利益。因此 , 我们可以说 , 假冒伪劣产品是我们健康经济中的一颗 “ 毒瘤 ”, 对此必须尽快清除。
依我看 , 必须采取若干有力措施来与假冒伪劣产品斗争。一方面 , 制假者应该依法严惩。另一方面 , 消费者应该学会识别真假。只有这样 , 消费者才能维护他们的合法权益。
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(六)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
1.Describe the picture
2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures
范文
Basically, what we see in this picture is a bird lamenting the fact that its home has been destroyed.Of course, birds usually make their homes in trees, and since there are no trees left in the picture – only the stumps, to show that the original trees have been chopped down – the bird is left without shelter.In fact, the bird has no choice but to perch on the handle of an axe, which has been used to destroy its original home.We can deduce from this picture that the drawer is trying to attract our attention to the tragedy of the destruction of forests, which is part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet.He seems to be saying that soon there will be no trees left in the world.In my opinion, the sad little bird is a symbol of all living things, including human beings, and, like the bird, we too will be left homeless if we allow the destruction of the environment to continue.This simple picture is a wake – up call for the whole of the human race.If this vivid image of the grim future of our planet is not to become a reality, we must take positive steps right now to put an end the plundering of the Earth’s natural resources.It is clear that the drawer of the picture is urging us to start with a campaign to save the forests, which is something all of us can join by urging our local authorities to take positive measures to save the trees.译文:
我们主要能从这幅图上看到的是一只小鸟为自己的家被毁坏而悲伤。当然,鸟类通常把家建在树上,因为图中没有树了 — -只有树桩,表明原来的树被砍伐了 — 这只鸟无处藏身。实际上,这只鸟别无选择,只能停在被用来破坏它原来家园的斧柄上。
我们可以从图中推测出画家试图把我们的注意力吸引到森林遭到破坏这一悲剧上,而这正是威胁地球生态平衡的一部分。他似乎想说很快世界上将没有树了,但我认为这只可怜的小鸟象征包括人类在内的所有生物。而且,如果我们允许继续破坏环境,我们也会像小鸟一样无家可归。
这幅简单的图画是对全人类的一个警钟。如果不想让这个对这个星球可怕未来的生动的描绘变成现实,我们现在必须采取积极的措施停止掠夺地球的自然资源。很明显,画家在力劝我们开始拯救森林的行动。我们都可以参与,敦促当地政府采取措施拯救树木。
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(七)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
1.Describe the picture
2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures
范文:
The cartoon presents the Earth with a personified human face that seems quite unhappy.A examination of the picture immediately reveals that the source of its mood is the air pollution resulting from a huge number of automobiles spread around its surface.The cartoon, no doubt, aims at alarming humans of the heavy load we have exerted on Earth by our insatiable production and usage of automobiles.However, the majority of people merely indulge in the celebration of the convenience brought by cars, while forgetting or simply neglecting their harmful impact on the atmosphere.Admittedly, there are various factors contributing to the current worldwide air pollution, but it is undeniable that the exhaust from automobiles is categorized as one of the major elements.I would like to make the following proposals to solve this problem: firstly, we should apply the most cutting-edge technologies in order to adopt new forms of energy as substitutes for fossil fuels.It should also be guaranteed that the clean energy be inexpensive so that it can be widely accepted.Besides, there should be attempts to develop possible transportation means, so that citizens can be diverted from dependence on cars.In short, it is humans' responsibility to resume clean air for Earth.译文:
这幅漫画以拟人的方式呈现地球,它的脸显得非常不高兴。仔细观察这幅图就会发现其郁闷来自于空气污染,这是由于其表面上有着无数车辆在行驶。
毫无疑问,这幅漫画意在向人们敲响警钟,即人类永不知足的生产和使用汽车给我们的地球带来了巨大的负担。但是,大部分人却沉溺于汽车带来方便,而忘记了或者是忽略了其对大
气层的负面影响。诚然,有很多因素导致了现在的全球空气污染问题,但是不能否认的是汽车废气被归为最重要的因素之一。
为了解决这个问题,我想提出以下建议:第一,我们应该运用最先进的技术从而以新能源替代化石燃料。同时,我们要确保清洁能源的价格低廉以得到大众的接受。此外,我们应该尝试发展各种交通方式,这样市民们能够摆脱对于汽车的依赖。简而言之,人类有责任来恢复地球的清洁空气。
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(八)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160 – 200 words in which you should 1)describe the picture.)state different views on mercy killing, and 3)give your opinion on it.晚期癌症病人请求安乐死。我们怎么办?
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Mercy killing is one of the most controversial issues in the world of medicine.As the picture given above depicts , a late-stage cancer patient is terminally-ill, asking the doctors for mercy killing.But the doctors look deeply embarrassed, feeling helpless because they are at a loss what to do about it.The picture really sets me thinking.It implies that people differ in their attitudes towards the mercy killing.Some people think that physician-assisted suicide can relieve dying patients of unbearable pain and suffering.They maintain that as long as a doctor prescribes a drug for a legitimate medical purpose, he has done nothing illegal even if the patient uses the drug to hasten death.Others are strongly opposed to physician-assisted suicide.They contend that a doctor has no right to give a patient sufficient medication to control his pain if that may hasten death.They conclude that it is illegal for doctors to help the dying end their lives.As far as I’m concerned , doctors have a duty to help dying patients to alleviate their pain and suffering.I also agree that doctors deserve to be punished if they prolong the needless suffering of their terminally-ill patients.In short, I am in favor of mercy killing.(207 words)
译文:
安乐死是医学界最有争议的问题之一。正如上面所示的画所描绘的,一位晚期癌症病人病入膏肓,请求医生们实施安乐死。但医生们看上去十分尴尬,感到无能为力,因为他们不知道该怎么办。
这幅画确实发人深省。它暗示,人们在对待安乐死上看法不一致。有些人认为,医助自杀可以减轻垂死病人不堪忍受的痛苦。他们主张,只要医生开药是为了合法的医疗目的,那么即使病人使用这种药物加速了死亡,医生也没有做什么违法的事。其他人则强烈反对医助自杀。他们坚持认为,医生无权给病人开足以控制痛苦的药物,如果那样做会加速死亡的话。他们的结论是,医生帮助垂危病人结束生命是违法的。
依我看,医生有义务帮助垂死病人缓解病痛。我还认为,如果医生延长了垂死病人不必要的痛苦的话,那他们应该受到惩处。总之,我赞成安乐死。
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(九)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
1.Describe the picture
2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures
范文:
People have the illusion that they can do anything with money.Just as what is shown in the picture, by paying a penalty, people can give birth to more children, factories can let out the polluted air directly without any treatment, and trees can be felled at will.This is a very serious social problem.Compared with other countries, China has a larger population but more limited resources.If everybody behaves in the similar way, it would be far beyond the country's capacity to guarantee everyone a well-off life.Moreover, it was reported that to bring up one child costs 350,000 yuan, which means that a family with several children bears a heavy burden.Meanwhile, if factories do not take any measure to treat the polluted air, the atmosphere will be further contaminated.Also, the felling of trees will surely lead to soil erosion, while frequently occurring sand storms are humans' deserved punishment for deforestation.Though penalty is one of the methods to punish this sort of behavior, it is never the only way.Solving these problems reflected in the picture depends largely on
our responsibility to society and environment.If the sense of responsibility is greatly aroused, harmony between man and the environment will not be far away.译文:
现今很多人认为用钱就可以做所有的事情。正如图中所示的那样,通过付罚款,人们可以超生,工厂可以不经过处理就排放废气,树木也可以被随意地砍伐。
这是一个非常严重的社会问题。相比其他国家,中国有更多的人口而资源却非常有限。如果每个人都用这种方式行事的话,那么这个国家远远没有能力让每个人都过上富裕的生活。此外,有报道称要培养一个孩子需要花费 3 万 5 千元,这意味着一个有许多孩子的家庭将承受很沉重的负担。同时,如果工厂不采取措施处理废气的话,大气层会被进一步污染。另外,树木砍伐会导致土地的腐蚀和水土流失,频繁发生的沙尘暴就是人类过度砍伐森林应得的惩罚。
尽管罚款是惩罚这些行为的一种方法,但绝不是唯一的方法。解决这个问题更重要的一点在很大程度上取决于我们对于社会和环境的责任。如果能够唤起广泛的责任感,那么我们离达到人与自然之间的和谐就不远了。
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(十)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
1.Describe the picture
2.Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the picture 3.Suggest your counter – measures
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In this picture a man rudely opens a garbage can and violently throws all kinds of waste into it.However, the box is not an ordinary trash can, but is, as a matter of fact, the Earth.It is where survive, breed, and prosper.But as the drawing indicates, Earth does not receive an equal repayment.Quite the contrary, one of the biggest “gifts” humans return to Earth is an unbelievable amount of trash.The picture purposefully points out a kind of pollution that arouses little public attention, that is, garbage.The past century has witnessed an unprecedented increase in garbage output, most of it technological products that are difficult to be decomposed through natural processes, such as plastics and glass.Furthermore, a recent report released that several major Chinese cities are already surrounded by circles of trash in the suburban areas, polluting air, water, and earth.Hence, the issue of waste pollution needs to be addressed as one of the priorities that demand social efforts.Only through a holistic system of trash disposal can this problem be fully solved.Moreover, we should advocate a more frugal lifestyle so as to reduce the growing scale of waste pollution.译文:
在该图中,一个男人粗鲁地打开一个垃圾箱、猛然地把各种垃圾往里倒。但是,这不是一个普通的垃圾箱,而实际上是地球,是人类生存、繁衍和发展的土地。可正如图中所表明的那样,地球却没有得到她应得的回报。相反,人类回复给地球的最大 “ 礼物 ” 之一就是数量惊人的垃圾。
这幅图意在指出一种没有得到足够公众关注的污染,即垃圾污染。过去的一个世纪见证了人类前所未有的垃圾生产,而大部分是来源于各种技术产品的垃圾,它们很难通过自然过程进行分解,比如塑料和玻璃。此外,最近的一则报道显示中国的几个主要城市的郊区几乎都被垃圾所包围,全方位地污染了空气、水源和土地。
因此,垃圾污染这一问题必须被看作是需要得到全社会努力解决的主要问题之一。只有通过一个全面的垃圾处理系统才能够充分解决这一问题。此外,我们应该提倡一种更加节俭的生活方式,以减小垃圾污染的增长规模。
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(十一)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions : Study the picture carefully and write an essay of 160--200 words in which you should
1)depict the present situation of private cars in Beijing, 2)offer reasons for or against owning private cars, and give your own opinion on the issue.北京拥 250 万辆汽车,其中私家车达到 170 万辆。
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With the living standards rising rapidly, more and more Beijing residents have cars of their own.Statistics show that in Beijing alone, there are 2500,000 cars, among which private cars add up to(=number)1700,000.The increase in the number of cars brings about a lot of problems, such as air pollution, noise, traffic congestion and gas shortage.Then a controversy arises: whether private cars should be encouraged in Beijing? People differ in their opinions on it.Many residents are against owning cars.According to them, private cars have to be limited in Beijing.The reasons for it are obvious.To begin with, cars contribute to air pollution.Beijing is now plagued by serious air pollution.If people are to have cars of their own, the already contaminated atmosphere will get even dirtier.Secondly, private cars can be a terrible threat to the already heavy traffic in the city.If more cars are allowed onto busy streets, there will be more traffic jams, which is really a public hazard to all of us.Finally, cars consume a large amount of fuel.Though China is rich in its oil resources, they are running out rapidly.All these facts allow of only one solution: to limit the ever growing number of cars.In my opinion, private cars should be discouraged in Beijing.In order to leave clean air, wide and safe roads and abundant energy resources to our descendants, we have to say “No” to private cars.As far as the great demand for means of transport is concerned, we can develop mass transit to take the place of private cars.In short, Beijing does not need private cars.译文:
随着生活水平的迅速提高,越来越多的北京居民拥有自己的汽车。统计数字表明,北京有 250 万辆汽车,其中私家车达到 170 万辆。汽车数量的增加产生了一系列问题,如空气污染、噪音、交通堵塞和汽油短缺。这样就引起了一场争论:北京是否应该鼓励私家车?人们对这个问题有不同的想法。
许多人反对拥有汽车。在他们看来,北京必须限制私家车。原因很明显。首先,汽车加剧了空气污染。北京的空气严重污染。如果人们都要拥有私家车,已经污染的大气将变得更脏。其次,私家车可能对北京业已拥挤的交通状况是一个可怕的威胁。如果更多的汽车开上繁华的街道,交通堵塞将会更严重。这对我们大家来说确是公害。最后,汽车消耗大量燃料。虽然中国拥有丰富的石油资源,但是它们正在日趋减少。所有这些事实只能有一种解决办法:限止日益增长的汽车数量。
我的看法是北京不应该鼓励私家车。为把清洁的空气、宽阔安全的道路和富饶的石油资源留给子孙后代,我们对私家车只能说 “ 不 ”。至于对交通工具的巨大需求,我们可以发展公交系统来代替私家车。总而言之,北京不需要私家车。
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(十二)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.“ 考试恐惧症 ”
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Testing students by examinations has long been regarded as a reliable way to assess students’ competence.But disproportion ate emphasis on examinations has brought about terrible results.As is depicted in the picture, a schoolboy, frightened to death by examinations, huddles himself up under a desk, refusing to go to school.His parents are trying to comfort him, saying “Come out, there are no examinations today.”
This drawing implies the harmful effect of examinations on children’s psyche.On the one hand, teachers tend to make use of different kinds of testing to force students to work hard at school.On the other hand, most parents think that school records are the sole criterion for judging the quality of a child’s work.It often happens that a child is punished heavily by his parents just because he does not do well in one examination or another.Therefore, pupils are extremely afraid of taking examinations.As far as I’m concerned , examinations are an effective form of assessment if properly used.But teachers and parents should encourage pupils to concentrate on what they do well at school.And schools have an important duty to try to fit a child’s interest to his possible future career.On no account should they reckon examination as the only means of stimulating pupils to pursue knowledge.(218 words)
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通过考试来测试学生长期以来被认为是评估学生能力的可靠方法。可是不恰当的强调考试已经产生了可怕的后果。正如这幅画所描绘的,一个学童由于极度害怕考试躲在书桌底下缩成一团,不肯去上学。他的父母亲正在努力安慰他,告诉他说,“ 孩子,出来吧,今天没有考试。”
这幅画暗示了考试对儿童心灵的有害影响。一方面,老师们往往利用各种测试来迫使学在校努力学习。另一方面,许多家长认为学习成绩是评判孩子学习质量的惟一标准。常常发生这样的事:儿童由于在某次考试中没考好而受到家长的严厉惩罚。因此,学生十分害怕考试。
至于我,我认为,考试如果使用得当,是一种有效的评估形式。可是教师和家长有义务鼓励学生把精力集中在学校里学习得好的功课上。学校的一项重要职责是力图使学生的兴趣适合于他将来可能的工作。他们无论如何也不能把考试认为是激励学生学习知识的惟一手段。
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(十三)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)describe the drawing, 2)interpret its meaning, and 3)support your view with examples.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
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It is vividly depicted in the cartoon that a boy is running along the racetrack with painstaking efforts, sweat pouring down his face.After a long journey, he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line, with strong determination to become the champion.It seems that he could rest for a while to enjoy the ecstasy of victory.However, straight ahead lies a sign which indicates a new “starting point” and urges him to continue rushing to the next destination.Undoubtedly the cartoon conveys the meaning that life is like the process of running in which one should make constant efforts and never stop making progress.Owing to the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after another.Once a person stops making progress, he can hardly maintain his past glory and survive in this competitive world.As Deng Xiaoping, the great Chinese leader said, “development is the only way.” No matter how powerful a country is, no matter how successful a specific institution, it will definitely seek new development in high speed.Generally speaking, neither a country nor a person can remain stagnant.A case in point is the successful launching of “Shenzhou V Spacecraft” which sets china in a high position of aviation and space flight.Although it means a great achievement for us Chinese, we are facing new challenges in the future and need to do further research in space technology.Another illustration is closely related to us, the examinees.If we pass this test and are fortunately admitted by a university, we shall not stop making efforts.Instead, we are confronted with the challenge of conquering the difficult graduate courses.We still have to strive for success in our future academic study, employment and career.On the whole, these examples effectively clarify the saying that “destination is another starting point.”(317)
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这幅图画生动地描绘了一个男孩在沿着跑道奔跑。他付出了艰辛的努力,汗水淌下脸庞。在长途跋涉之后,他在朝着终点冲刺,并拥有强大的决心成为冠军。似乎他可以休息一下,去
享受胜利的狂喜。然而,正前方有一个写着 “ 起点 ” 的标记,鼓励他继续朝着下一个目标冲去。
毫无疑问,这幅画显示了人生就像跑步的过程一样,人们应该做出不断的努力,而且决不要停止前进。由于生活节奏的加快,各行各业的竞争日趋激烈,激励每个人去追求一个又一个的目标。一旦一个人停止取得进步,他就很难保持过去的荣誉并在此竞争世界中生存下去。正如伟大的中国领导人邓小平所说: “ 发展才是硬道理。” 无论一个国家多么强大,无论一个具体的组织多么成功,它都需要寻求高速发展。总之,无论一个国家还是一名个人都不能停滞不前。
一个典型的例子就是 “ 神舟五号 ” 飞船的成功发射,使中国在航空和空间飞行中处于高端地位。尽管这对我们中国人意味着巨大的成就,但我们在未来正面临着新的挑战,并需要在空间技术方面进行继续研究。另一个例子和我们考生密切相关。如果我们经过了考试,并幸运地被一所大学所录取,我们也不应停止努力。相反,我们面临着征服艰巨的研究生课程的挑战,并且还要在未来的学术研究、就业和职业生涯中努力争取成功。总而言之,这些例证有效地证明了 “ 终点又是新起点 ” 这一说法。
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(十四)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should first describe the drawing then interpret the meaning, and give your comment on it.养老 “ 足球赛 ” 范文
As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, four children are playing a “football match” of taking care of their aged father.Each of them stands in a different corner of a football field.The eldest son kicked out the father with the other three children guarding their goals.The purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the mistreatment of senior citizens.First and foremost, some people shirk their duty of financially supporting their old and helpless parents due to their own interests.Furthermore, some elderly people are often ill-treated by their own children and cannot lead a normal life.Last but not least, while some young people enjoy a comfortable life, their parents are neglected and reduced to utter poverty.It is imperative for us to take drastic measures.To begin with , relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who shun the responsibilities
of caring their parents.In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that respecting the old has always been the traditional virtue of Chinese culture.Only in this way can we curb the current evil phenomenon revealed in the picture.(198)
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如图所示,四个孩子在打一场照顾他们年迈父母的 “ 足球赛 ”。每个人站在球场的一角。大儿子踢出父亲,其他三个孩子守着球门。
这幅图的目的是告诉我们应该重视虐待老年人问题。首先,有些人由于自己的利益逃避赡养他们年迈无助父母的责任。其次,有些老年人经常被他们自己的子女虐待,不能过正常生活。最后,当一些年轻人享受舒适生活的同时,他们的父母被忽视,一贫如洗。
我们急需采取严厉措施。一方面,我们应该制定相关的法律法规严惩那些逃避养老责任的人。另一方面,我们应该培养人们的意识:尊老是中华文化的传统美德。只有这样我们才能制止图画中所显示的这种丑恶现象。
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(十五)Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should
1)describe the photos briefly,2)interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them, and 3)give your point of view.You should write 160 – 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)
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What vivid pictures!One presents a young man’s face, on which the name Beckham is painted, and the other depicts an equally disturbing situation, where a teenager spends 300 yuan on his haircut simply because he wants to follow Beckham’s hairstyle.Obviously, the drawer intends to remind us how crazily these youngsters are adoring their icons.The pictures really set me thinking.I cannot help associating them with another hot word “supergirl”, which almost swept over every Chinese in the year 2005.They are mirrors, reflecting how eager the youth are to succeed like their icons.In recent
years, with China’s steady economic growth, the youngsters have enjoyed material abundance, which, however, does not always mean spiritual satisfaction.On the opposite, many of them find themselves increasingly indulged in pursuing meaningless things.They imitate whatever their icons do: how to look cool, how to look for fun, and even how to play hide-and-seek with reporters.They envy how successful their icons have become, yet they never take a look at the thorny road, along which, their icons climb up to success.Personally , I hold it self-evident that this kind of craziness will do great harm to the youth.It is high time that they were taught how to adore icons properly.It is the responsibility of every educational institution to call upon the youth to learn one thing about success: success always results from hard work.(237 words)
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多么生动的照片啊!一幅照片展现了一个年轻人的脸,脸上写着贝克汉姆的名字;另一幅照片描绘了同样令人不安的情境,一位青年花 300 元理个发,就是为了模仿贝克汉姆的发式。显然,作者打算提醒我们,这些青年人多么狂热地崇敬他们的偶像。
这些照片确实发人深省。我不由得把它们与另一个热门词 “ 超女 ” 联系起来,在 2005 年 “ 超女 ” 这个词几乎风靡全国。这些照片是镜子,反映了年轻人渴望成功,犹如他们的偶像。最近几年来,随着中国经济稳步增长,年轻人享受到了物质上的富裕,但是这并不总是意味着精神上的满足。相反,他们中很多人越来越沉溺于追求毫无意义的事。他们仿效他们偶像的行为:如何看上去酷、如何寻找欢乐,甚至如何与记者捉迷藏。他们羡慕他们的偶像已经飞黄腾达,然而却从来不看一看偶像们攀登通向成功的荆棘之路。
依我看,很显然,这种狂热对年轻人颇为有害。现在该是教育年轻人如何正确敬仰偶像。每个教育机构的责任是号召年轻人学会成功之道:成功总是来自于刻苦努力。
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Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should)describe the drawing briefly, 2)explain its intended meaning, and then 3)support your view with an example/examples.译文:
这幅漫画生动描述了足球场上的一名前锋正准备将球射入守门员把守的球门。在守门员看来,自己比起实际的身材渺小很多,以至于守门变成一个不可能完成的任务。反之,在那名前锋眼里,这位巨人守门员似乎占据了整个球门。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在看似不可克服的挑战与困境面前,最重要的是拥有自信。无论一个人在学校或工作中曾经如何成功,终有一天他会遭遇困难和问题。关键时刻,正是他对困难和人生的自信最终决定他能否反败为胜。
没有什么例子比下面的例子更有说服力。海伦·凯勒天生聋哑失明,当然没什么让她自信。但她不断克服多种障碍,最终成为一名作家和教师,成为世人的楷模。这个例子清楚证明了无论面临何种任务,我们决不能高估困难或低估自己
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It is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon that a striker is preparing to shoot at the goal defended by a goalkeeper on a football field.In the goalkeeper ’ s mind, he is so much smaller than he actually is that guarding the goal b ecomes a mission impossible.On the contrary, the giant guard seems to fill up the whole goal in the attacking player ’ s mind.The purpose of the drawing is to show us that in the face of seemingly insurmountable challenges or predicament, possessing self-confidence is of utmost significance.Regardless of how much success one has had in school or at work, there are bound to be times when he or she will encounter difficulties and problems.It is at these critical times that his self-confidence, towards difficulty and life in general, eventually plays a crucial role in determining whether he can turn failure into victory.I can think of no better illustration than the following one.Helen Keller was born deaf, dumb and blind, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence.Nevertheless, she went on to conquer her multiple handicaps to finally bec ome a writer and lecturer, to bec ome an inspiration to all.This case effectively clarifies that no matter what tasks we are confronted with, we should never overestimate the difficulties or underestimate our abilities.译文:
这幅漫画生动描述了足球场上的一名前锋正准备将球射入守门员把守的球门。在守门员看来,自己比起实际的身材渺小很多,以至于守门变成一个不可能完成的任务。反之,在那名前锋眼里,这位巨人守门员似乎占据了整个球门。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在看似不可克服的挑战与困境面前,最重要的是拥有自信。无论一个人在学校或工作中曾经如何成功,终有一天他会遭遇困难和问题。关键时刻,正是他对困难和人生的自信最终决定他能否反败为胜。
没有什么例子比下面的例子更有说服力。海伦·凯勒天生聋哑失明,当然没什么让她自信。但她不断克服多种障碍,最终成为一名作家和教师,成为世人的楷模。这个例子清楚证明了无论面临何种任务,我们决不能高估困难或低估自己
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Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions:
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should
1)describe the picture,2)suggest ways to control dogs out in public places, and 3)give your own comment on it.养狗也要守规则
Many city residents like keeping dogs as their house pets.As the picture depicts, a lady is smiling, with a cute dog in her arms, while her husband is enjoying the pleasure with their pet.But now there are also people who complain about dogs and demand that the animals be controlled out in public places.It is generally believed that dogs should have rules too.Several strong measures should be taken to deal with the problem.In the first place, the local government is supposed to launch a campaign telling dog owners to pick up after their dogs.The easiest solution is for them to put the mess in a bag and then in the next rubbish bin.Secondly, the dog owners who leave a dog mess on the streets deserve to be fined heavily.Thirdly, all dogs require a license and a rabies vaccination and are allowed outdoors only on a leash.Finally, dogs must wear a muzzle in public places if necessary.Only in this way can people co-exist with the animals.In my opinion, I agree with the measures mentioned above.It seems to me that caring for one’s dog also means being responsible enough to control it out in public places.(202 words)
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Many city residents like keeping dogs as their house pets.As the picture depicts, „ But „
It is generally believed that „ Several strong measures should be taken to deal with the problem.In the first place, „ The easiest solution is „ Secondly, „ Thirdly,„ Finally, „ Only in this way can people co-exist with the animals.In my opinion, I agree with „ It seems to me that „ 范文(十八)
Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160 – 200 words in which you should 1)describe the picture,)state different views on global warming, and 3)give your own opinion.养鸡场变成了烤鸡店
It is known to all that global warming has become a public hazard threatening the survival of human beings.As the picture given above depicts, an old couple is standing beside the fence of a chicken run, saying “It seems that the global warming has already got out of control.” In addition, the picture shows that there are several chickens being roasted in the sun at the side of the road leading to the farm.The cartoon implies that the world’s temperature would be high enough to roast chickens because of greenhouse effect.The picture is really thought-provoking.People differ in their views on global warming.Voices now come from many quarters insisting that the science about the rise of the world’s temperature is incomplete and that it’s OK to pour fumes into the air until we know for sure.This is a dangerous game: by the time 100 percent of the evidence is in, it may be too late.On the other hand, scientists in one wave after another try to awaken us to the growing threat of global warming.But the governments of many countries tend to turn a deaf ear to the scientists’ warnings.In fact, the Earth’s atmosphere is definitely warming and the problem is largely man-made.The clear message is that we should get moving to protect ourselves.So the general public demand that all nations should adopt strong measures to prevent the increase of the earth’s temperature.In my opinion , to serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must press forward on deeper atmospheric and oceanic research.But research alone is inadequate.All governments are supposed to take the legislative initiative as soon as possible.Only in this way can the global warming be put under control.(273 words)
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It is known to all that „ As the picture given above depicts, „ In addition, „ The cartoon implies that „
The picture is really thought-provoking.People differ in their views on global warming.Voices now come from many quarters insisting that „ This is a dangerous game: „ On the other hand, „ But „ In fact, „ So „ In my opinion, „ But we should „ Only in this way „ 范文(十九)
Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Directions: Study the following picture carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words in which you should 1)describe the picture,2)state different opinions on this debate topic, and give your own comment on it.Should we shut the cafes down?
注: shut down 关闭,停业,查封。Internet café 网吧。Internet addiction 网瘾。develop addictions 上瘾。throwing away the apple because of its core 因噎废食。teenage 青少年的。blame A on B 把 A 归罪于 B。Internet abuse 滥用网络。develop/cultivate healthy habits 培养健康(有益)习惯。
As is depicted in the picture, recently, Internet cafes in X county were shut down by the local government.The action came as the result of an anonymous letter of students’ parents to the county’s Party secretary.The adults claimed that many teenagers were spending far too much time in Internet cafes and were suffering from “ Internet addiction”.The picture also shows a boy who got very surprised at the café being shut down.People differ in their opinions on the question: Should we shut the cafes down? Some believe that teens are too young to restrict themselves.Without proper supervision, they tend to spend hours in the Internet cafés and develop addictions.According to them, because it is difficult to get all cafes to refuse teenagers, shutting them down is a practical solution.Others are opposed to shutting all the cafes down because it is like throwing away the apple because of its core.They argue that Internet cafés are there for those who need easy Internet access and who don’t have access at home.Shutting down all the cafes limits the rights of these people and so the policy i sn’t fair to them and to the Internet café operators.In my opinion , we can’t blame teenage Internet addiction on the Internet cafes entirely.If our kids want to enjoy network games, they can play at home, even if all the cafes are shut down.I think we should educate the young about the side effects of Internet abuse and help them develop healthy habits instead.(257 words)
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In my opinion , „ I think we should educate sb.about 范文(二十)
Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Beijing 2008 Olympics Logo 1.Describe the picture;
2.Tell the meaning of the picture.The emblem, officially entitled “Chinese Seal—Dancing Beijing”, has a single Chinese character on a traditional Chinese seal.The words “Beijing 2008” are written with a Chinese brush below it.The figure in the logo resembles a runner or dancer and the Chinese character “Jing” which means “capital”.The image carries the message that today’s China is not only a nation with a long and glorious history, but also one full of modern dynamics.Dancing Beijing is a journey to the future, the emblem for China moving towards the 2008 Olympic Games.It represents the heart of an ancient culture embracing the
modern world, the spirit of a people moving towards a new destiny.It captures the soul of a city in transformation and its motion conveys a message of hope, joy, and unity.Dancing Beijing is a symbol of the city’s promise to make the Games a success and to be unlike any the world has known.The Chinese seal of Dancing Beijing is a promise rooted in honor and trust, character and truth.Dancing Beijing is the color of China.Red is the most significant color in Chinese culture’s symbol of luck, of celebration and of new beginnings.The depth of its meaning equals the depth of its beauty.Dancing Beijing represents the spirit of the individual.It is the symbol for every Olympian, every performer, every volunteer and every spectator.Arms flung wide, it invites all people and the world to share in the city’s history, beauty, energy, and its future.Dancing Beijing is in the form of the dragon, the ancient symbol of Chinese culture that has both beauty and majesty.It symbolizes a binding of the fire and light of the Chinese people, the power to the promise.Dancing Beijing is an invitation, a hand extended in welcome to China’s celebration.The Games are held in the hope of uniting humanity as never before.They are a gesture of friendship and hope that the community of nations will unite in peace through sport.范文(二十一)
Writing(图画提纲式议论文)
Our Right Attitudes Toward Animals
Your essay should meet the requirements below:
1)Describe the cartoon and deduce the purpose of the drawer of the cartoon;2)State the negative effects of eating wild animals;and 3)Give your suggestion as to how to solve the problem.As is depicted in the cartoon , both the cat and snake are on the table, with tears in their eyes, waiting to be eaten by humans.Through this picture, the drawer condemns the eating of wild animals.Eating wild animals gives rise to a lot of negative effects.In the first place, as many wild animals carry parasites, when we eat them, the parasites enter our bodies, thus causing a lot of illnesses.In the second place, since animals are an indispensable part of our environment, the extinction of some animals may disturb the natural balance.Last but not least, eating wild animals is cruel.Since eating animals causes so many harms, we should work together to put an end to the problem.On the one hand, the government should make stricter laws to prohibit people from eating wild animals.On the other hand, all the people should realize the harms of eating wild animals and refrain from doing so.范文(二十二)
Writing(提纲图表式作文)
Directions: Study the following pie chart carefully and write an essay of 160--200 words within 30 minutes.Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1.44%
19.2%
21.8% 16%
Describe the pie chart.2.State the possible benefits brought about by the investment.3.Suggest measures attracting investment from outside.Hong Kong--44% Japan--19.2% U.S.A.--16%
Other 23 countries and regions--21.8%
Investment in Beijing from Different Countries and Regions
范文
Since China opened its door to the outside world in 1979, Beijing has made remarkable results in attracting foreign business to invest in joint ventures.According to the pie chart, the investors in different enterprises come from 26 countries and regions.The investment of Hong Kong ranks first, accounting for 44 per cent of the total.Japan’s investment makes up 19.2 per cent, putting it in second spot.Third is the United States at 16 per cent.It is generally believed that Beijing benefits a lot from the outside investment.In the first place, a large number of joint ventures have been set up, which contributes greatly to the development of Capital Economy.Secondly, the foreign-invested enterprises offer a lot of jobs to the residents in Beijing.This in turn relieves the problem of laid-off workers in the city.Finally, the high-tech enterprises in the capital will grow rapidly as Beijing enjoys the same preferential policies as coastal cities open to the outside world.On As far as the measures to attract outside investment are concerned , they are as follows.the one hand, we should make special efforts to improve the investment environment so that an increasing amount of foreign capital can stream into Beijing.On the other hand, we should take advantage of this opportunity to run the present foreign-invested enterprises as efficiently as possible.I am convinced that with the reform and opening up policy being implemented , Beijing will be a great attraction for foreign investment.(247 words)
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AAAA 自从 1979 年中国对外开放以来,北京在吸引外企投资合资企业方面已取得了显著成绩。根据图示,不同企业的投资者来自 26 个国家和地区。香港的投资额居第一位,占总额的 44%。日本占 19.2%, 居第二位。美国为第三,占 16%。
普遍认为,北京从外部投资中受益匪浅。首先,大量合资企业已经建立,这就大大促进了 “ 首都经济 ” 的发展。
其次,外资企业为北京市民提供了许多就业机会。这又缓解了北京的下岗工人问题。最后,由于北京和沿海开放城市一样享有许多优惠政策,所以高科技产业在首都发展迅猛。
至于吸引外资的措施,有如下几点。一方面,我们应该专门努力来改善投资环境 , 以便越来越多的外资能流入北京。另一方面,我们应该抓住机遇把目前的外资企业尽可能办好。我深信,随着改革开放政策的贯彻执行,北京将吸引大量外资。
范文(二十三)
Writing(提纲图表式作文)
Directions: Study the following table carefully and write an essay of 160--200 words within 30 minutes.Year
Item 1995 1996 1997 1998 1999 Food 66% 61% 48% 41% 36% Clothing 9% 10% 12% 15% 18% Recreation 4% 5% 8% 9% 11% Others 21% 24% 32% 35% 35% Total 100% 100% 100% 100% 100%
Statistics in People's Daily Expenses in Xi'an 范文
What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken lace in the people's daily expenses in Xi'an from 1995 to 1999.The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectivily by 9% and 7%.The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.There are two factors accounting for these changes.Development in economy is an essential one in the five years.The increased income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food.Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense.Another one is the changes in life style.When foods presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time.As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increased year after year.From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people's living standards in Xi'an have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999.With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the table will continue in the better direction.译文:
上表中显示的数据表明,从 1995 年到 1999 年,西安人的日常支出发生了很大变化。食物支出下降了 30 %,服装和娱乐支出分别上升了 9 %和 7 %。上下波动的数据似乎独立存在,但是相互之间却紧密联系。
造成这些变化的因素有两个。这五年中的经济发展是一个不可或缺的原因。经济发展带来的收入增长,对食物支出的减少起到了很大的作用。因此,工资总额的一小部分足以支付食物的费用。另一个因素是生活方式的改变。当普通人不再担心食物时,人们开始把更多的兴趣集中到漂亮的外貌和快乐的休闲时间。这种转变的结果是服装和娱乐的支出逐年提高。
根据上面所做的分析,我们可以得出这样的结论:西安人的生活水平在 1995 年和 1999 年期间一直在改善。随着经济的进一步增长和生活方式的更多改变,表中显示的趋势将继续向好的方向发展。
范文(二十四)
最新大纲样题:
Directions: Widespread tobacco consumption has led to grave consequences, yet the tobacco companies still claim that they make a valbuable contribution to the world economy.There is a discussion in a newspaper on the above two viewpoints.Write an essay to the newspaper 1)criticizing their view and 2)justify your stand.In your essay, make full use of the information provided in the pidctures printed below.You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems.But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of workers.Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good.Firstly, smoking is responsible for many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on.According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population, and among them, three million people die from smoking-related diseases every year.The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 143.64 billion pounds in 1994 to 142 billion pounds in 1995 also
suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking.Secondly, tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money.As is indicatd in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year.Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds the gain in the industry.In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits.If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who suffer from smoking-related illnesses, the notion of promoting economy via tobacco production is not justifable.It is high time that we fought for the total tobacco ban.范文(二十五)Directions:
A.Study the following graphs carefully and write and essay in at least 150 words.B.Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.C.Your essay should cover these three points:
1.effect of the country's growing human population on its wildlife 2.possible reason for the effect 3.your suggestion for wildlife protection THE UPS AND DOWNS OF POPULATION GROWTH
The two charts show that the increase in the U.S.population has been accompanied by a corresponding decline in the number of wildlife species.Far too many species have been lost already.This poses a danger to ecological balance.As the human population expands, more and more wild animals are hunted for food, or because they are thought to present a threat to man.But studies show that one of the primary causes of the disappearance of wildlife is pollution, which is one of the consequences of population growth and economic development.This makes us wonder if man is able to share this planet in harmony with other life forms.In my opinion, it is imperative to take steps to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the charts.One measure would be to forbid the building of cities in areas where wild life is threatened with extinction.But, more imporantly, man must learn to stop polluting the environment, or he himself will become extinct.范文(二十六)
提纲式作文 :
Directions: Women make a great contribution to the progress of modern society.But there are still some people who don’t agree with it.There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper.Write an essay to the newspaper based on the following outline.1.Role of women in modern society
2.Prejudices and discrimination against women 3.My comment
Women play an important part in modern society.Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering.They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and factories.Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex.In addition, some of them are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men.There are even some businesses which are run completely by women.It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progress of modern society.There are, however, still prejudices and discrimination against women in our modern society.In the first place , some people think that many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough.In their eyes, women are the weaker sex – both physically and emotionally.Thus, women can only be suited to the performance of domestic duties.And a woman’s place is within the protective environment of the home.Secondly, they believe that most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males.Finally, they assert that the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only.In a word, men should enjoy more rights than do women.Personally , I'm firmly standing on the side of those woman right defenders.Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing.(241 word 范文(二十七)
规定情景式作文:规定情景式短文写作,可有两种方式:一是全部用英文命题,二是规定情景部分用中文命题。
Directions: Write an essay in which you are required to state the causes of the housing problem and the demands of city-dwellers for spacious living, and give your
possible suggestions to solve the problem.Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 words)
The housing problem is closely related to population growth.Some of the big cities in China are now crowded with an ever increasing population.Naturally, one of the most serious problems incurred is that of housing.As far as the causes of the housing problem are concerned , many factors are involved.In the first place, with the rapid increase in population, the lack of housing is becoming more evident than ever before.Many old houses have been knocked down to make room for new apartment buildings, which complicates the housing problem for the time being.In the second place, despite the ever-increasing high-rise buildings, the provision of living space still falls far short of demands.Because the society is advancing, city-dwellers long for spacious living.They look forward to decent dwelling places, which can protect human dignity.All these factors result in housing shortage.Various solutions have been suggested to deal with the problem.To begin with, we should build more apartment buildings to meet the increasing needs of people.In addition, the government may provide bank loans to the residents who want to purchase dwellings of their own.Thirdly, the moving of urban residents to the suburbs may ease the housing problem in the inner city.The best solution I think is to put the birth rate under control.But, as you know, we still have a long way to go.(232 words)
范文(二十八)规定情景式作文:
Directions : Migrant workers(外地民工)have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities.In this part, you are to write an essay of 200 words entitled “The Role of Migrant Workers”.You can agree and/or disagree, completely or partially to above statement.But no matter which position you take, you should give sound supporting reasons.As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities.They are an indispensable part of our work force.Most of them work on construction sites.There is no doubt that without migrant workers many of the construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower.In addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which enhances the consumption of food and daily items.This in turn helps to develop food industry and service trades in cities.All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.However, as a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”.The same is the case with migrant workers.Firstly, most of them are not well educated and professionally trained.Some of them have had very little schooling.As you know, illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to disturb the peace, endangering social order.Secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money.Being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they are ambitious for.Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society.In my opinion , in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything.We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them.(244 words)
范文(二十九)
Writing(规定情景式作文)
Directions: Stress is a natural part of modern life.In this part, you are required to write within 40 minutes a composition of no less than 200 words about “Stress in Modern Life”(现代生活中的压力).You are to state briefly the relationship between stress and modern life and the different attitudes towards stress.At the end of your composition you should draw your own conclusion.Stress in Modern Life
As everyone knows, stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it.As the pace of modern life continues to increase, we are always feeling on the go from morning till night.And it is hard to slow down.It seems to us that everyone around us is aggressive.Therefore, whatever one does, he feels under stress all the time.It is clear that stress has much to do with the life in a competitive society.Different people, however, think of stress quite differently.Some believe that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be.They are of the opinion that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose to life.Others argue that stress contributes to one’s mental decline and hence endangers his health.According to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body.Personally , I’m in favor of the former view.I think it is impossible to avoid stress when one is entirely devoted to the career he pursues.In my opinion, it is only when the stress gets out of control that it can lead to poor performance and ill health.(207 words)
注: be on the go 忙碌。
Writing(规定情景式作文)
Directions: In this section, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes.Your essay should be based on the information given below.现在许多人愿意乘飞机旅行。随着我国民航事业的迅速发展,全国各大城市兴建了许多现代化的机场。乘飞机旅行有许多长处(方便、快捷、省时、舒适等);但是,空中旅行也有许多不足之处(机票价格贵,有的旅客不适应空中旅行,常常感到身体不适,甚至有人还担心发生空难)。请你简单阐述上述两个方面。最后请你说明你的看法。
Many people prefer to travel by air.This is because air travel has some advantages.In the first place, airplane, the miracle created by man, is the fastest means of transport.It takes the least time for one to travel by air from one place to another.Secondly, traveling by air is convenient and comfortable.Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate.They look after passengers all the way to their destinations.Moreover, on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves.As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides.” The same is true of air travel.It has some disadvantages, too.For one thing, air travel costs a great deal.The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares.So they prefer to take trains, which save a lot of money.For another, although passengers are assured of their safety, they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.As far as I am concerned , the advantages mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.If I were given choice between traveling by air and traveling by train, I would certainly prefer the former.For me, time is money and it is the most important thing I have to take into consideration whatever I do.(216 words)