第一篇:考研英语写作攻略~!亲~你懂的
如何利用考研英语写作模板
易犯错误一:模板中的句型套用不正确,不完整。
比如:我们在书信结尾的时候会说I am looking forward to hearing from you.而学生却把这句话写成了I am looked forward to hear from you.这种现象非常普遍,可见,学生的写作态度并不是很端正,很认真。
易犯错误二:模板中的句型和实际写作内容不匹配。
比如:有的图画作文第二段要求根据图画所表达的含义进行深层次的论证,而学生套用的句型却是第二段写对比的句型,显然是没有正确理解句型使用的语言背景。再比如:小作文的摘要,是要根据汉语文章归纳出中心内容进行英语写作,这个一般都是客观的描述,而学生却用了一个写图画作文的模板,通篇都是“我”认为,这如何又能得高分呢?易犯错误三:模板套用千篇一律,没有新意。
再好的模板,如果所有的学生都是用也就变成了一张白纸,没有任何亮点。而这个错误也正是急功近利的学生容易犯的。所以只背诵模板是不行的。
那么针对这些易犯错误,该如何改进,提高写作分数呢?
第一,端正心态,保持认真的态度,强化英语基本功
作为一个考生,首先应该有端正的考试心态,答题一定要非常认真仔细,那么对于写作来说,就应该尽量避免我们常说的“低级错误”,比如:拼写错误,单词使用错误。只有在平时注意积累,注意改正自己的错误,才会避免低级错误,才会运用正确的语法结构。
第二,重视动笔之前的审题和构思。
动笔之前,一定要认真审题,和构思,要尽量明确写作的形式,内容,比如,是写书信,还是通过图画表达含义等等,这些要弄明白。然后要要注意看写作要求,这一点至关重要。比如,图画作文的第二段,有的要求用实例证明主题思想,有的要求深化主题,这两个不同的要求所体现出来的具体内容是不一样的,如果没有认真审题的话,见题就写,没有严谨的写作思路,很容易造成跑题,偏题,不符题意的错误,也就不能使模板中的句型和内容相匹配。
第三,学会活用模板,注重素材的积累,同时要适当加入自己的内容。
我们在初练写作的时候套用模板是正常的事情,也是一个必经的过程,只有先试用别人的东西,才能发现一些漏洞,也才能在此基础上进行自己的写作积累。模板要活学活用,不要一字不差的照抄无误,而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句
都是难词,长句,而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达,这样才能真正显示写作的水平。这就要求学生再平时的学习中注意积累常用的短语或者词组,以备写作之用。另外,关于写作素材,不仅仅指写作常用的词汇,句型或者语法结构,还要包括所用的事例。比如:2001年的写作真题,要求写“爱心”,第二段要求用实例证明主题。有的考生见题就写“我考试面临很大的压力,我的朋友是如何帮助我排解压力的”,这显然就是素材贫乏造成的后果。题目中的“爱心”是指“大爱”,陌生人互帮互助的心态。如果写“汶川地震,希望工程”这类事例,显然非常符合题目要求,而且事例又广为人知,比写“朋友如何帮助我”更生动,更有说服力。因此,在平常的练习中要注意从阅读中积累素材,积累词句,而不要仅仅局限于模板之中。
第四,重视日常练习中的作文批改。
考生在备考写作时,大多的忽视了写作训练,因而不能发现自己经常犯的语法错误,更不能克服提笔不知写什么的情况。虽然有部分同学意识到了作文训练的重要作用,但是面对自已“难产出来”的文章,怎么看怎么满意,却不知里面充满了基本的语法错误,已经和考研英语写作格格不入的内容。所以建议大家一定要重视写作练习后的批改。
目前网上有很多可提供作文批改的地方,参与作文批改的老师这些年大量接触考研学生,能真正了解考研作文的要求、阅卷老师评分的批准、考生易犯的错误,能据此提出更为专业、有效的提升方案,能帮考生在短时间内快速提高成绩。
最后提醒大家,模板只是给了考生一个写作的思路和框架,但是要想获得高分,就要在框架之上填加自己的内容,把模板变成自己的东西,只有文章中有自己的内容,才会吸引判卷老师的眼球!祝大家取得好成绩。
三阶段法让你实现考研英语写作高分突破
第一阶段,框架性内容的熟悉,借助的工具也就是模板。
模板可以用上课时老师给定的,也可以在课堂内容的基础上结合范文归纳总结。模板并不是机械的死记硬背,其使用目的有三点:
1、通过模板的复习,解决每一段大致写什么内容的问题。这样在拿到一篇题目时,不至于花太多的时间构思写作内容上,而是把主要精力放在语言上。
2、模板的复习能够使得大家熟悉英语文章,尤其是应用文部分的写作格式。在现阶段解决这个问题,将有助于良好习惯的形成,从而避免不必要的失分。
3、模板中往往是含有很多好词好句的,背诵模板,也能从很大程度上丰富写作素材。即使今后随着写作能力的上升不再拘泥于模板,其中的好词好句仍然能够成为我们写作时拿分的武器。
总的来说,这一段时间是为后面复习的突飞猛进打好基础,同时有一个能够保底的分数,复习时间大概在每天一小时,一个月左右即可。
第二阶段,好词好句的积累。
在第一阶段的复习完成后,你对于自己的写作思路已经大致清晰了。现在的问题在于积累的写作素材还不够多,这时建议在阅读中学习写作。可以阅读写作范文、外国报刊乃至阅读真题,寻找那些可以用到模板中,适用范围比较广的句子。在这一阶段的复习过程中,可以采用翻译的方法练习——即看完一个句子,理解它的中文意思后立刻把英文遮挡起来,尝试着根据中文自己翻译出一个句子。应用这种方法,自己写做过程中的不足就会立刻暴露出来,起到事半功倍的效果。以前曾经有学生尝试过把新概念四以汉译英的方式进行写作学习,效果非常不错,基础比较好的同学可以参考这种方法。
整个第二阶段的复习过程在一个半月左右。
第三阶段的任务很单一,就是接触各种各样的写作习题,在实践中反复熟悉前面两个阶段的内容。如果前面两个阶段复习不错的话,这个阶段的复习可以说是一种享受,把这种享受延续到最后,你的考研写作必将取得令你满意的成绩。
以上三个阶段是每个考研考生都要经历的,至于你现在应该处在哪个阶段,要根据自己的水平灵活把握,但建议大家一定要提早准备,不要拖到考前冲刺阶段。考前冲刺阶段,即使你背了几个模板,几篇范文,但往往不能在考场上将这些内容很好的转化为自己的语言,会直接影响作文成绩。
考研英语作文模板四步构建法
在考研英语备考中,大作文是很多考生头疼的部分。他们通常在考前一个月突击背诵,效果却不理想。有些考生即使记住了很多句子,在写作时也很难将其灵活运用。有些考生甚至在考试中将背诵的范文一字不差地默写下来,评卷老师一看便知道该文源于范文,不会给高分。分析和总结往年作文考题,考生会发现近几年的题型都是图画作文,而且基本写作套路为:先描述图画,指出其寓意;接着深入分析,发表看法;最后总结,点明主旨。备考时,我买了一些作文辅导参考书,其中确实有一些很好的句子,但是我并没有机械地把它们都背下来,而是将其作为参考资料以建立自己的作文模板。构造自己专属作文模板,考生可采用4个步骤。
首先,考生可将几篇优秀的作文模板快速地看一遍,将其中好的句子抄下来。考研作文一般只有三四段的篇幅,所以我将这些好句子按段落归类,每段都有几个好的句子及词语。其次,修改好句子中的词语。考生要认真分析并变换模板中所使用的词语,特别是名词、动词及形容词。此时,考生可借助word文档编辑器。如原来的句子是“it is big……”,想找big的同义词时,只要选中该词点击右键,选择“同义词”,就会出现其所有同义词。考生可从中选择一个,最好是比较难的、比较高级的词,如“gigantic”。再如,可以用“I cogitate”表示“我认为”。这样做可使评卷老师觉得作者的词汇量大而且用词比较新颖。
再次,改造句子,主要是使句子的句型多变。考生在写每篇文章时,要尽量使用定语从句、倒装句、虚拟语气句子、状语从句、主语从句及强调句或宾语从句等,并将这些句型固定地与一些常用意思联系起来。如发表自己的看法时可用主语从句“It is my view that……”,表示自己的希望时可用虚拟语气“It would be……if the whole society could pay more attention to this issue”,表示强调时可用“Only in this way can this problem be handled”等。当然,具体用什么句型由个人的兴趣决定。一旦掌握这样的句型,我们就可以在以后的写作训练中固定使用。
最后,给文章润色。考生可用一些好的形容词、副词进行修饰。如“It is important for somebody to do something”经上面两个步骤后变为“it is imperative that somebody do something”,这时可再在“imperative”前面加副词如“extremely”,使句子语气更强。
考研英语小作文经典实用套句
在考研英语小作文写作中,除了保持一般的议论文风格,还需要在三段中穿插信函相关的套句模板,来适应书信文体的要求。
下面就帮大家整理了一些小作文最常用的经典套句,希望大家在考场上能够信手拈来,发挥作用。
1.一般开头句型
I'm writing to…
开门见山的开头模式
I'm writing to inform you that…(通知类型)
I'm writing to seek your assistance in …(请求类型)
I'm writing in response to your advertisement in …(回应类型)I'm writing to express my views on …(建议类型)
I'm writing to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other countries.(申请类型)
I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…(咨询类型)
I'm writing to express my disappointment/ dissatisfaction about…(投诉类型)
2.感谢类句型
thank-gratitude-grateful-appreciate的多种变体
I'm most grateful to you for your…
I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for…
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks for…
I feel greatly indebted to you for…
I'm writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me…But for your kind assistance,I would have …
I must thank you again for your generous help.Please accept my deepest gratitude.3.道歉类句型
sorry-apologize-apology的多种变体
I feel really sorry to you for…
I must apologize to you for…
I would like to express my deepest apology / regret for not being able to …
Had I …,I would have…。
Please accept my sincere apology for…
I want you to know how badly I feel about…
4.一般结尾句型
Any favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated.(申请/求职)We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your presence.(邀请函)Best wishes for your greater success in your career.(祝愿)
Thank you for your patience and concern in reading this letter.I hope this does not cause you too much inconvenience.I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.(套话组合)
虽然信函的套用句型还有很多的变化,但上面选取的这些句子在考试中都是非常实用的,无论什么样的话题,开头结尾加上表示感谢和道歉的礼貌客气话总是必不可少的。
第二篇:考研英语作文秘籍!亲~你懂的!
考研英语作文常用结尾句二十句经典总结
1. It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to...例句:It is hoped that we should pay more attention to the problems of unemployment.2. Only in this way/only when/only through..., will/can we...例句:It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.3. As long as..., we will be able to.../the problems is bound to...例句:As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.4. In the course of time/In a long run/In the long term, sth.is more likely/bound/sure to...例句:In a long run, the practice of birth control is believed to do a great benefit to the future of China.5. In a word, there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that...in time to come.例句:In a word, there is every chance that this wise move in economic construction will acquire a broader significance in time to come.6. Anything/anyone that/who...will have to...例句:Anyone who has a strong bias against China will have to threat her with increased respect.7. It is high time that...例句:It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the economic development.8. We should do our best in eliminating...例句:We should do our best in eliminating air pollution.9. The problem is not...;the problem is...例句:The problem is not that we cannot do it;the problem is that we hate to do such nasty things.10.In order to..., we must...例句:In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must learn to live in harmony with all wildlife species.考研英语小作文必背范文
范文1:求职信
Applying for the Position of Assistant for Marketing Project Manager
Directions:
You are a senior of English for Business.A German company in China is recruiting an assistant to marketing project manager,which requires a good command of English and knowledge in German especially.Write a letter of about 100 words applying for the position,introducing yourself and asking for an interview.You needn't write the address.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, using “Wang Lin” instead.Dear Sirs,I am graduating from the Shanghai Institute of Foreign Trade this summer.As a student of English for Business, I hope to work for a foreign company after graduation.In the past three academic years,I have proved myself to be a straight student,awarded a succession of scholarships.My English is particularly good and German happens to be my second foreign language,which will live up to the requirements set by a wholly foreign-owned enterprise like yours.I apply for the position of assistant to your marketing project manager.You will find me a good team player,self-motivated and eager to learn.I believe I can be of value to your company.Enclosed please find my resume.I should be very happy if you would arrange an interview with me.Yours sincerely,Wang Lin
范文2:求学信
Dear Professor Smith,I am writing to apply for admission to your university for further studies in the field of Physical Chemistry leading to a Ph.D.degree.I would also like to apply for a position as a teaching assistant.Would you please send me the necessary information and forms?
I am 26,male,majoring in chemistry.I received my M.S.degree from Nanjing University of Science and Technology in 1994.I have been working as a teaching assistant in the chemistry Department there.An early reply would be appreciated.Thank you.Respectfully yours,(Signature)
Li Ming
范文3:感谢信
Thanks for One's Hospitality
Directions:
Your delegation has just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain.And you were warmly treated there by Professor Herthwell.Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation.Dear Prof.Herthwell,Many thanks for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during our delegation's recent visit to your university.It was nice of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors and celebrated scholars at your university.We had a safe and sound trip home.Now we have resumed our work.Meanwhile,I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”.Please have no hesitation in writing to me if you want me to do something for you in China.With best wishes.Sincerely yours,Li Dong
考研英语作文题目热门预测
一、考研作文十大重点话题预测:
1.人口问题
2.西部大开发
3.网络和双刃剑(金钱,阳光)
4.成功,梦想和现实
5.职业选择和规划/高分低能
6.洋节和传统节日
7.神七上天和嫦娥奔月
8.地震与爱心
9.奥运举办
10.抄袭与诚信
补充题目:伪劣商品;食品安全;抄袭与诚信;乱收费(因果:因:法律制度不完善,部分人只顾自己利益,忽视学生利益; 果:为社会,个人带来不良后果和巨大压力)节俭与压力;心理问题;交通阻塞。
二、考研作文预测六大话题:
以下六大话题搜集,是在充分研究2011年全年大事记的前提下,严格遵守以上两大命题思路所作出的预测,具体的范文会陆续在我的元旦押题班中发布,请大家引起足够重视!
1.漫画“瞎子摸到了真象”—— 影射国际对于中国认识的前后变化。
2.漫画“相互推卸责任”—— 影射食品安全事件中的社会责任感和道德感缺失。
3.漫画“股市大跌”—— 影射投机心态不可有,脚踏实地才是出路。
4.漫画“地震中用自己身躯保护学生的好老师”—— 影射灾难事件中人性的光辉。关于灾难,此命题切入点还有可能为保持乐观心态。
5.漫画“把我整成**明星的样子”—— 影射整容现象以及山寨现象。
三、考研写作六大话题:
考研作文热点:次热门话题
★健康:考过两次——96年提纲作文、97年图表作文。
★两代关系:考过3次——92年(代沟问题)、03年(温室花朵经不起风雨)、05年(养老足球赛)。
★爱心:考过3次——95年(希望工程)、01年(希望是一盏灯)、06年小作文(给希望工程写信请求捐款)。
★环境:考过3次——99年图表作文(保护野生动物)、2000年图画作文(保护海洋资源)、09年小作文(限制使用塑料袋)。
★青年面对社会:考过4次——03年(温室花朵经不起风雨)、04年(终点又是新起点)、07年(自信)、08年。
★文化:考过5次
1、流行文化:考过3次——93年(电视广告)、06年(偶像崇拜)、09年(网络)。
2、文化交流、文化融合:考过2次——02年(美国小女孩穿中国服装)、10年(文化火锅)。
第三篇:考研英语应用文写作攻略
考研英语应用文写作攻略
虽然大纲中罗列了多种应用文类型,包括:投诉信,建议信,申请信,求职信,辞职信,求学信,求助信,感谢信,号召信,邀请信,道歉信,摘要,简历,备忘录,寻物启事,招领启事等,但是在具体的实践中,常常考到的是书信和摘要。尤其在近几年的考研中,应用文写作考的最多的就是书信体应用文。因此本章将详细讲解各类书信以及摘要的写作方法。
投诉信又可称为抱怨信,其主要目的是表达写信人对于某一情况的不满。人们在生活中经常会遇到一些不愉快的事情,比如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等等,有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决办法。
投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容:说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过,切忌夸大其词;指出问题引起的后果;提出批评及处理意见,或敦促对方采取措施,或提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。
投诉信的写作策略:说明投诉问题——描述具体情况——期待解决方案。
注意事项:写投诉信时语气要冷静、郑重、克制,不必过于礼貌。但也要就事论事,不能进行人身攻击。同时,在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式,使描述更加客观合理。
例题一
Directions:
You bought an iPhone in a store last week, and you have found that there is something wrong with it.Write a letter to the store manager to explain the problem, express your complaints and suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10 points)
范文:
Dear Manager,I venture to write to complain about the quality of the iPhone I bought last Friday at your store.I hope I can have a good solution to the problem facing me.During the five days when the iPhone has been in my possession, problems of software have emerged one after another.For one thing, the screen is always black, making the iPhone no difference from a traditional one.For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the iPhone’s operation for only two hours.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another one or declare a refund.I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.Yours,Li Ming
尊敬的经理:
我很冒昧给您写这封信,投诉我上周五在您商店里购买的iPhone手机的质量问题。我也希望我的问题能有很好的解决。
购买至今的五天中,各种软件问题一个接一个地出现。一方面,手机屏幕总是黑屏,我使用起来仿佛和传统手机没有区别。另一方面,电池的状况也不尽如人意,只能让手机工作两个小时。因此,我希望可以换一个新机,否则我要求退款。
我希望这个问题能够得到足够的重视。
李明
谨上
例题二
Directions:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.He/She has parties in the room
and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college:
1)asking for a new room next term,2)stating that you would prefer a single room and
3)explaining your reasons.You should write with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)
范文
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me.In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
尊敬的女士或先生:
我写此信的目的是要告诉您我希望下学期换个房间,我想要一间单人房,因为我目前合住的住所很不方便。
我提出这一要求是因为我室友做事从不考虑别人。他总有朋友来拜访,还常举行喧闹的聚会。并且,有时他还不经我同意就借走了我的东西。在这种情况下,我觉得没法专心学习,我现在功课就落后了。
我相信您也会觉得解决的办法是换个单间,那样我就不会受到这些干扰了。如果您能帮我找到一间单人房我将不胜感激。我还希望新宿舍不要和现在的宿舍在同一幢楼内,而是离学校越近越好。
第四篇:2016年考研英语应用文写作攻略
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2016年考研英语应用文写作攻略
虽然大纲中罗列了多种应用文类型,包括:投诉信,建议信,申请信,求职信,辞职信,求学信,求助信,感谢信,号召信,邀请信,道歉信,摘要,简历,备忘录,寻物启事,招领启事等,但是在具体的实践中,常常考到的是书信和摘要。尤其在近几年的考研中,应用文写作考的最多的就是书信体应用文。因此本章将详细讲解各类书信以及摘要的写作方法。
第一节 书信写作总体概述
一、首段的写作方法
1.问候收信人
Dear sir/madam
2.解释写信的原因
申请:I’m writing for an opportunity to work in your esteemed company that boasts of decades of reputation.邀请:I’m writing to request your attendance to a dinner party that is to be held in Beijing on August...,...感谢:I am writing to extend my heartfelt thanks(sincere gratitude)toward...投诉:I am writing to complain about the poor service(quality)of a product that I purchased from your store two weeks ago.祝贺:I am writing to extend my sincere greetings, wishing you a happy New Year, your career greater success and your family happiness.第 1 页
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二、中间段的写作方法
1.阅读题目要求,找到可以用到的名词或动词。
【示例】Write a letter of application according to the following situation.You saw an advertisement in this morning’s newspaper.A company needs a secretary and you are interested.Write an application letter to that company.2.注意题目文字暗示,把名词具体化,把动词近义词化。
【示例】I am pleased to discover from Beijing Youth that company is calling for a secretary.I wonder if you could consider my application, for I am delighted to join your esteemed company.First, I can speak and write English fluently, which happens to apply for your current requirement for the vacancy.Second, I have a good command of Microsoft Office System, Graphic Design and ADOBE system.Third and last, I am always ready to help other people because I’m patient, enthusiastic and sincere.Given these consideration, I sincerely hope that I can be a contribution member of your esteemed company.三、结尾段的写作方法(三句话)
【示例】I would appreciate your assistance in this matter.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.I can be reached at...Look forward to your reply.应用文写作六字决:
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1.开门见山说意图,2.信息要点覆盖到,3.举一反三讲细节,4.语言正式词多变,5.感谢客气不能少,6.期待回信成老套。
第二节 书信的分类讲解
投诉信
投诉信又可称为抱怨信,其主要目的是表达写信人对于某一情况的不满。人们在生活中经常会遇到一些不愉快的事情,比如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等等,有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决办法。
投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容:说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过,切忌夸大其词;指出问题引起的后果;提出批评及处理意见,或敦促对方采取措施,或提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。
投诉信的写作策略:说明投诉问题——描述具体情况——期待解决方案。
注意事项:写投诉信时语气要冷静、郑重、克制,不必过于礼貌。但也要就事论事,不能进行人身攻击。同时,在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式,使描述更加客观合理。
例题一
Directions:
You bought an iPhone in a store last week, and you have found that there is something wrong with it.Write a letter to the store manager to explain the problem, express your complaints and suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming”instead.Do not 第 3 页
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write the address.(10 points)
范文:
Dear Manager,I venture to write to complain about the quality of the iPhone I bought last Friday at your store.I hope I can have a good solution to the problem facing me.During the five days when the iPhone has been in my possession, problems of software have emerged one after another.For one thing, the screen is always black, making the iPhone no difference from a traditional one.For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the iPhone’s operation for only two hours.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another one or declare a refund.I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.Yours,Li Ming
尊敬的经理:
我很冒昧给您写这封信,投诉我上周五在您商店里购买的iPhone手机的质量问题。我也希望我的问题能有很好的解决。
购买至今的五天中,各种软件问题一个接一个地出现。一方面,手机屏幕总是黑屏,我使用起来仿佛和传统手机没有区别。另一方面,电池的状况也不尽如 第 4 页
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人意,只能让手机工作两个小时。因此,我希望可以换一个新机,否则我要求退款。
我希望这个问题能够得到足够的重视。
李明
谨上
例题二
Directions:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting.He/She has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college:
1)asking for a new room next term,2)stating that you would prefer a single room and
3)explaining your reasons.You should write with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)
范文
Dear Sir or Madam, 第 5 页
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I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term.I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him;for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me.In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions.Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely,Li Ming
尊敬的女士或先生:
我写此信的目的是要告诉您我希望下学期换个房间,我想要一间单人房,因为我目前合住的住所很不方便。
我提出这一要求是因为我室友做事从不考虑别人。他总有朋友来拜访,还常举行喧闹的聚会。并且,有时他还不经我同意就借走了我的东西。在这种情况下,第 6 页
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我觉得没法专心学习,我现在功课就落后了。
我相信您也会觉得解决的办法是换个单间,那样我就不会受到这些干扰了。如果您能帮我找到一间单人房我将不胜感激。我还希望新宿舍不要和现在的宿舍在同一幢楼内,而是离学校越近越好。
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第五篇:考研英语写作高分攻略1
§考研英语写作高分攻略背诵版(1)
第一章 图 画 作 文§
第1节 人生价值
【要点提示】
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图画作文也叫漫画作文,出题方式一般是提供一幅图画,并且图上带有一点文字提示。然后题目要求考生对图画进行简单描述,并且说明其内在寓意和考生自己的看法。如此一来就需要考生对图画进行细致认真的观察,获取有效信息,这样才能正确把握图画的寓意。为了方便考生复习,我们海天英语教学团队总结出有关“考研英语图画作文十大经典话题”的重要图画启示以及相关的核心表达、句式和模版来供考生背诵。
首先,在第一节大家需要掌握的是关于人生价值的漫画给我们的启示,一般可分为以下几种:
1)人要有乐观的心态,树立自信,只有这样才能获得成功;2)逆境无处不在,人们应当积极面对,用坚强的意志去战胜它;3)寻找人生的真谛,取得事业成功,向社会贡献力量才是人生的奋斗目标;4)知足常乐;5)只有真正了解自己,才能克服人生道路中的困难;6)金钱不是万能的;7)人生就像一盘棋,要统筹安排,不能轻易放弃;8)人们要懂得化阻力为动力。
【核心表达】
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self-delusionn.自欺
self-assessmentn.自我评价
ridiculen.&vt.嘲笑,奚落
blessingn.祝福
perspectiven.看法,观点
optimistn.乐观主义者
arrangementn.整理,布置;约定
impulsivenessn.冲动
possessvt.拥有
ragevi.发怒,怒斥
appreciatevt.感谢,感激;欣赏,赏识
cultivatevt.培养;陶冶,建立,加强(友谊)
overestimatev.高估
underestimatev.低估
surmountv.战胜,克服
harborvt.心怀,怀有 n.港湾,海港
realistica.现实(主义)的narrow-mindeda.气量小的,小心眼的contenteda.心满意足的,满足的sobera.冷静的,清醒的;审慎的determinanta.决定的persistenta.坚持不懈的;持续的,持久的cynicala.愤世嫉俗的;悲观的harmoniousa.和睦的,友好的;和谐的,协调的triviala.琐细的;不重要的;无价值的despiteprep.不管,尽管
carry weight 对„„重要,有影响力
all walks of life 各行各业
take into account 考虑,注意,顾及,体谅
succumb to 屈服
more often than not 往往,多半
long for 渴望
take a second look at 重新观察
owe to 把„„归功于
can’t afford 承担不起,买不起
in addition 此外
as long as 只要
【黄金句式】
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1.We have to admit that…(我们不得不承认„„)
2.The aim of this picture can be interpreted as follows:…(这幅图的目的可以解释为如下意思:)
3.As is vividly depicted in the picture above…(正如上图形象描述地那样,„„)
4.Just as is revealed in the picture above,…(正如上图所揭示的那样,„„)
5.Looking at the drawing above, …(看上图,„„)
6.The implied meaning subtly conveyed in the picture should be taken into account in this way:…(图片所表达的内在含义应当可以解释为„„)
7.From my point of view,…(从我的观点来看,„„)
8.Only by means of doing…(只有通过做„„的方式)
9.Under such rough condition,…(在如此艰苦的条件下,„„)
10.Equip ourselves with…(用„„武装我们自己)
11.It is widely acknowledged that…(众所周知„„)
12.Most people are of the opinion that…(许多人认为„„)
13.When it comes to…(当谈到/涉及到„„)
14.…can’t help but leave one impressed with…(„„不得不对„„留下深刻印象)
15.A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…(越来越多的人开始意识到„„)
16.If this is indeed the case, then…(如果事实确实如此,那么„„)
17.One of the most important traits of …is…, another is…, and still another is …(„„最重要的特征之一是„„,其次是„„,还有一个是„„)
18.We can deduce from this picture that…(从这幅图中我们可以推断„„)
19.The picture indicates/ conveys the meaning that…(这幅图指出/传达了„„)
【万能模版】
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模版一
________________.Actually, what the drawing reveals is thought-provoking.Needless to say, this picture aims at revealing a philosophy of human’s life: ________________________________.As a matter of fact, _________________.Many people believe that _______________.However, more often than not,_______________.There are many ways to _____________.First, _____________.Second, _________.Third,_______________.To sum up , _________________________________________________________.模版二
_________________________________________________________.__________________________________, ______________ happens to all of us, we should try to persist through the obstacle course of life with strong will._______________________________.There are many examples of men and women who achieved greatness in the end despite facing deep hurdles(困难)once in their lifetime.______________________________________________________.All these set us good examples.______________________________, we will surely be able to move ahead and grow in full bloom like the flowers in crevice(岩石、墙等的裂缝).模版三
According to the drawing above, ________________________.Although this is a very simple drawing, its intended meaning is meaningful and thought-provoking.It is wise to compare _______to______.As far as I’m concerned, there are______ reasons.To begin with, ___________________________________________________.Attitude decides everything.We should be an________, try to be_________.Furthermore, ___________________________.It is the same to life.We should be always clear about ________________.Eventually,______________________________________________.Similarly, life is not always smooth to each of us.Giving up in half way is irresponsible, we should _______ all the time.In conclusion, __________________not only_______, but also_________________.模版四
The first drawing presents us with a scene that_________________________.While in the second drawing,______________________.These two pictures set me thinking for a long time.Gradually, I find that the drawer may want to tell us a lesson:______________________________________________.We have to admit that many _____ are due to______.In my view, there are still some ways to overcome it.Firstly,_______________.Secondly, ___________.Thirdly,__________________.If we could do so, surely, the chances of being _______would be doubled.模版五
The drawing depicts ______________________________________________.The drawing intends to show us that__________________________________.In fact,_________________.The drawing reminds us that it is important to have a clear picture of the_________ we face in life.Examples of this phenomenon can be found in many other situations.For instance,_____________________________________________________________.模版六
It goes without saying that this
In picture this aims at revealing a current problem:_________________________._________in front of challenges.This kind of situation drawing, _______________.However, ___________________lack almost every aspect of our ______________________________________.Obviously, can be seen in
life._____________________.Sometimes,_________________________________.In a word,_______________________________________________________.模版七
As is shown in the above picture,_____________________________________.Take_________ for example.Though he/she is ___________(e.g.deaf/handicapped), he/she never gave up.That’s why he/she became a successful__________ at last.We are well-being and much more fortunate than______, is there any excuse that we don’t work hard to pursuit our life goals?
Meanwhile,_____________________ is also necessary.Never lose heart, you will make it.In short, we should take efforts just because we are living on this planet.It is then our value will be realized and __________________________.模版八
This cartoon humorously presents a scene of _____________________________.However, at the critical moment,_______________________.Likewise,_________.Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the importance of _________.On account of the quickening pace of life,______________________.Suppose ________________.Therefore,_________________________________.Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive attitude.A case in point is ___________________________________________________.As for me,____________.As the saying goes,______________.Only by building strong ______________ can we demonstrate__________ and turn our dreams into reality.