雅思写作一个月突击第1周写作任务（定稿）

第一篇：雅思写作一个月突击第1周写作任务（定稿）

第1周学习安排

雅思写作的Task 2部分要求考生在40分钟之内完成一篇至少250个单词以上的议论文。Task 2部分的出题范围相 当广泛，但是写作主题的重复率也相当高，主要涉及教育、社会问题、政府职能、交通、科技、环境、媒体、犯罪等 话题。而考查的题型主要包括两类：第一类是辩论型写作(argumentation)，要求考生针对某个观点发表支持或反对意 见，或者就一组对立的观点发表自己的见解；第二类是报告型写作(report)，要求考生解释某种问题出现的原因(或带 来的影响)，并提出相应的解决办法。虽然雅思写作Task 2考查的题型分为两类，但是其解题思路和写作结构是基本相似的。考生在写作之前，需仔细审题，确定题目属于哪一种题型，并对写作内容进行相应的构思。一般来说，针对不同的题型，具体的写作 技巧会有所不同，但结构大体上是一致的。具体来说，Task 2的写作结构可以分为三大部分：首先是开头段，主 要交代话题背景或引出自己的观点；其次是主体段，一般用2~3段文字分析某种问题出现的原因(或带来的影响)，提供解决问题的建议或是论证自己支持的观点；最后是结尾段，主要用来总结文章内容或是重申自己所支持的观点。

1.题目：A study shows lots of children between the ages of 7 and 11 spend too much time

watching television and playing video games.How do you think this problem affects thechildren, their families and the society? What measures can be taken to solve it?

题目大意：研究表明，许多7~11岁的孩子花费太 多的时间看电视和玩电脑游戏。你认为这个问题会给孩 子、他们的家庭以及社会带来什么样的影响？可以采取 哪些措施来解决这个问题呢？

2.题目：

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.有人天生就有某种天份，比如体育和音乐的天份。但是有人说任何孩子都可能被教成运动员和音乐家。讨论两种观点?

3.Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to ju

dge right and wrong and how to behave well, some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects.Discuss both views and give your opinion.评价一下第三个范文

As a result of the responsibility of a teacher, One side argument is they orght to teach the students how to distinguish right and wrong and how to be a human being well.the other side view is they should solely teach students about academic konwledges.In the following paraguaphs I will discuss each argument.First, teaching konwledges is a initial responsibility of a teacher.they should make every student learned various konwledges and the methods of how to study.When the students are studying in the primary school,they do not know anything about different subjuct.A good teacher should have the ability of how to guide the students to study and improve the attention of students increasingly paying to the various subject.On the other hand, apart from academic knowledges the students also need other skills.It is necessary that the teacher taught the students how to realise everything of the society, such as teammork,uderstanding each other, helping someone when he or she needs, in addition,the teacher also need teach the students how to solre the problems they meet, and how to face the difficult time and so forth.In conclution,Teacher plays a significant role in Education of students.The academic knowledges and social skills were learned through the teachers.Thus, They should not only teach varions knowledges, but teach every social technologies as well.

第二篇：雅思写作第四讲

雅思写作第四讲

第四次课：大作文主体段的构建要素

学时数：2H

教学重点：主题句和推展句

教学难点：合格主题句的写作要领

习得技能：同过主题句和推展句构建段落的立体结构

主题句：简洁，不需要长难句

写作要领：具有概括性，能概括出分论点

不需要详细的论点

论证方法：因果论证（因为人们生活在竞争激烈的社会，因此信息获取对增强竞争力很重要）

举例论证（注意逻辑连接词的使用，take sth for example, a typical example can be found is in

对比论证、例1：The news media play an important role in modern society.Is the influence of the news media positive or negative?

首段：背景介绍+引出话题+个人观点

It is widely acknowledged that news media such radio and television are a very influential part of our lives.While some people doubt whether it has a positive effect on us.In my point of view, I tend to believe that the positive side of news media holds more weight than its negative side.This essay will summarize some powerful reasons to support my opinions.中心句When it comes to its positive side, two main reasons must be mentioned firstly./ there are two main reasons why the news media are important and popular in the twenty-first century.分论点1The first one is that news reporting provides people with information about the events that just happened in their cities and even other countries.论据(因果论证）because we live in a world where full of fierce competition, thus whether we can get news timely and effectively is of great importance for us.If we can get the latest news quickly, which may mean we can make usually better-informed decisions and therefor have competition advantages.论点2 满足好奇心

论据2 满足好奇心，丰富谈话

驳论段：中心句+反方论点1+反方论点2

第三篇：雅思写作第一讲

Writing 1.Paragraphing     Intro(50-70)3-4 sentences Body1(70-100)6-7 sentences Body2(70-90)4-6 sentences Conclusion(30-50)2-3 sentences 2.Approach questions  Task Responses  Structure sentences 3.Grammar and accuracy     Proofreading Practice Write right in logic flow Avoid redundancy 4.How to write right? Cause A, Consequence B, Influence C Consequence B, Cause A, Influence C For instance, what do you think of public transport tools? A: I think public transport tools are very significant commuting tools to ordinary people(Consequence B), since they are not only eco-friendly but also can help individuals save time and cost(CauseA), thereby bringing huge convenience to people’s everyday lives.(Impact C)For example, what do you reckon about driving private cars? A: Since driving private cars to excess will lead to the excessive emission of heat-trapping gases(A), global warming and greenhouse effect would get serious(B), thereby posing a threat to sustainable development of societies(C).5.How to improve your sentences? 1.名词化； 2.被动语态 3.Terse and straightforward 原则： deliver complex meanings through simple sentences and words.TOPIC 1: Environment 1.Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.What are the causes of global warming? What measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

The past decades have witnessed an obvious rise in temperature in many parts of the world.Global warming is one of the thorny challenges these days, which would highly influence people’s daily life in the long run.In the following sections, this essay will identify the sources and suggest some viable solutions to this problem.The chief among a host of causes is the emission of heat-trapping gases in excess.With many countries around the world developing and industrializing, automation has become an indispensable part of individuals’ daily life.Driving private cars to commute to work is commonplace in most countries.Consequently, a huge amount of heat-trapping gases such as car exhausts, waste gases from plants, which are high in carbon dioxide, are contributing to the greenhouse effect and global warming.Apart from that, another significant reason is deforestation.With countless trees being cut down for cities sprawl(urban sprawl), more carbon dioxide will be released into atmosphere, which makes the condition more severe.With regard to the measures to resolve this complex issue, the first approach is raising public awareness for protecting environment.Local authorities and councils can promote the concept of environmental protection and the negative points of driving to excess, using door-to-door communication or advertisements on TV.From individual perspective, people are highly recommended to use public transport tools for travel and work.Also, riding bikes can be a very good alternative instead of driving private cars or over-sized trucks, for both transport and exercise.In conclusion, while enjoying the great convenience brought by modern-day industry, governments and individuals need to assume responsibilities for protecting our only earth for ourselves and offspring.2.Environmental problems are so big that they cannot be solved by any person or country alone.Instead, it should be solved at international level.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental degradation has become one of the biggest challenges humans face in the 21st century and it has posed a serious threat to our survival.To address this thorny issue, from my perspective, all nations worldwide should join forces instead of working individually.Environmental protection is ultimately teamwork, since the impact of environmental problems is always on a global scale.It is true that all humans share one ecosystem and one Earth for living.All elements inside are interrelated.For instance, a clear river of a country could be polluted by waste water dumped by its neighbouring countries.Therefore, the efforts to protect our environment from a single country are not adequate.Apart from that, another cause is the lack of skills and capital to cope with environmental issues in some countries.These nations are not capable of handling alone, because of the shortage of essential technologies and professionals.This is particularly true for those impoverished regions where people are often supported financially and draw on experience from developed countries.International support and cooperation play a vital role in helping these nations improve their environmental situations.On the other hand, although international cooperation is very significant, the detailed environmental problems each country faces are quite different.For example, the major source of pollution in China derives from the electrical industry while the problem in America is mainly caused by the widespread use of private cars.Hence, countries may take diverse measures to deal with their own problems.In conclusion, the cooperation at international level to wrestle with environmental deterioration is highly suggested.Yet, countries may be confronted with different problems and work individually for their own targets with different strategies.结语： 英语没有捷径，进步在于复习。

第四篇：雅思写作

翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会发现考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面展开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期观察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相似的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。”下面，笔者将从以上四方面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。

一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说

盲点1：无话可说

这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教育、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物保护等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘故，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。

盲点1击破：四多原则

多看范文；多关注时事，观察生活；多与人交流；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉浸在范文书当中，分领域熟悉雅思考题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出无数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，如果某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。

盲点2：千言万语

这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和逻辑方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说”的尴尬。

盲点2击破：词以类记原则

此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes, a balanced diet, vegetarian等。)

盲点3：标新立异

这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求与众不同。

盲点3击破：自圆其说原则

雅思考试毕竟是语言能力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据

言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。

盲点4：真情流露

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝”之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。

盲点4击破：切中主题原则

这类考生必须建立自己的一套逻辑框架，并严格执行。如在写argumentation类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。

二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水

盲点1：天马行空

这类考生和“千言万语”型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在逻辑上的重复或冲突。

盲点1击破：起承转合原则

除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；第二段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。”的逻辑框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的逻辑框架来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that „(起);because they maintain that „。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact „.。(转);Therefore , I believe „。(合)

盲点2：单句游离

这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，逻辑连词也使用错误。或者是标点不注意。最常见使用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却无数次被误解成递进。

盲点2击破：行云流水原则

考生应准确记忆并正确使用各种逻辑关系词，力求做到行云流水，常见的逻辑连词有：

因果关系：

因：As since due to owning to

果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result

表目的：thereby

举例关系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。

让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even though,Provided that , if

三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放

盲点1 ： 遭遇生词

大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中无数次由于生词的关系而短路。

盲点1击破：同义改写原则

其实考生对不认识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。

注意：对于各个领域内的专有名词我们鼓励大家履行词以类记原则，毕竟只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简单的词汇解释难词。如有同学在解释寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下成了” something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work”！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。

盲点2：同义重现

如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严重的审美疲劳，分数自然不高。

盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则

其实考生在平时的习作中应注意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。

盲点3：大词连篇

很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。

盲点3击破：整体协调原则

看到剑桥系列教材大家会发现，考官给出的范文大词生词寥寥可数，真正有说服力的是你用的词能够准确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地使用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“暴发户”般的强烈视觉冲击，最后只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。

三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致

盲点1：长篇累牍

和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能使用各种复杂的长难句为荣。

盲点1击破：长短结合原则

事实上，如果大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会发现长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的情况是长短句结合使用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。

盲点2：短小精悍

和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充满了简单的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。

盲点2击破：灵活多变原则

这类考生如果能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马”。如以Parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability这个简单句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到：

It is children’s score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。

通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到：

So important is children’s score that parents and teachers often link them to children’s academic ability。

通过插入语的包装我们可以得到：

Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to children’s academic ability by teachers and parents。

通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到：

Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link children’s score to their academic ability。

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通过如此灵活的加工和包装，你会发现，简单句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比无数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。

总之，掌握了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生一定能在Task 2中获得自己满意的分数。（编

第五篇：雅思写作

雅思写作范文

Many old building are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history.However，some people think knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.How important is it to maintain old buildings？ Should history stand in the way of progress？Old buildings sometimes conflicts with social advancement.Appealing as it is in the eyes of business people，tearing down old architect to make room for real-estate development is not a wise idea in many ways.The primarily reason is that old buildings，like our native language，forms our cultural identity and keep a unique record the history of a country.From this aspect，old buildings are considered very valuable as one of the symbols of the culture of a nation.For instance，the traditional Chinese residence in Beijing，Siheyuan，are once seen as the remains of the Old World，and were destroyed by people shortly after the founding of People's Republic of China.Until recently did the people and policy makers as well realize that it is an inexcusable and stupid idea to commit such a terrible deed because old buildings，once gone，are not restorable.But their economic values and aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people.Moreover，old buildings，if planed and preserved properly，could coexist with modern real-estate development.In France，aged buildings bring millions of dollars of revenue for the government and amazed thousands of tourists.Yet no one thinks the high-rising office buildings and apartment buildings make the old architect a sore of the eye.By contrast，the new learn from the old，a fact that makes them more attractive.We admit that not all old buildings should be treated equally and some of them do need to be torn down for various reasons such as safety and new buildings.However，we should not be too blind to see their value too.If only the real and practical factors are being considered，the country will be sorry for its loss in years to come.As we have discussed，old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways.We should plan well and be wise enough to see their value.But the same time，we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.