第一篇:英文作文
Happy
holiday
I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival.I went to the park with my friends.We met at eight o'clock at the school gate.We went to the park by bike.It was a beautiful day.We sat under a big tree and chated with each other.We took about some movies and some fun things.We had lunch there.We ate hamburgers and some drinks , but I know they are not healthy and not good for us.Then we played some games.We were all fell tired ,but we were very happy!It was great fun!
初一英语春节作文 Today I feel good, because the New Year will come next month.I rode a bike to the mall to buy stocking street is really busy, there are a lot of people are preparing the New Year with things.I also met a lot of friends, they are also parents out of concern and preparation along with a number of things.Chinese New Year is our traditional festival, we have the arrival of Chinese New Year is ready.Unconsciously I have home, and I am looking forward to the arrival of Chinese New Year 2010年1月31日
今天我感觉很好,因为在新的一年下月推出。我骑自行车到超市买袜子街道非常忙,有很多人与事,准备在新的一年。我还遇到了很多朋友,他们也是出于关心和准备的父母连同许多事情。
农历新年是我们的传统节日,我们有农历新年的到来已经准备就绪。不知不觉,我的家,我期待着农历新年的到来 春节的初一英语作文 The Spring Festival As the most important festival in China since ancient times, the Spring Festival is always being excepted by we kids.Because we don't need to do any homework during this time very year.It's really a precious holiday for us.And our parents are free from their work too.We go to our grandparents' to get together with them to enjoy the moment when the new year comes.I will priciate if the holiday to be longer.haha 一篇初中的作文,写这么多够了 下面是中文。作为一直以来中国最重要的节日,春节总是带给我们这些小孩美好的期待。首先,在这春节期间我们不用写作业了。这对我们来说真是弥足珍贵的假日。我们的父母也放假,所以我们能一起去爷爷奶奶家欢度新年,一起享受新年钟声敲响时的快乐。当然,如果这假期长一点的话我们会更开心的,哈哈。纯手工,希望能帮助楼主 作文库大全
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My Family My name is Neo,a junior student that study in Beijing junior high school.My family has four members,including mom ,dad and a lovely sister.My monther was a teacher,but now a housewife.My father is a businessman,a man that i am always proud of.I want to become a man just like my father when i grow up.At last is my naught sister,who always makes me crazy!In a word,i have a happy family 我的家庭我的名字叫尼欧,一个大三学生,在北京学习初中。我的家庭有四个成员,包括妈妈,爸爸和一个可爱的妹妹。我的妈妈是一名老师,但是现在一个家庭主妇。我的父亲是一个商人,一个男人,我总是骄傲的。我想成为一个男人就像我的父亲,当我长大。最后是我的零的姐姐,总是让我疯狂!总之,我有一个幸福的家庭 My Family There are three people in my family,my parents,my and I.My family is pretty good.I’m really happy.My father is a doctor.He works in a hospital of Sanya.He doesn’t like watching TV, but he likes reading newspaper and read it every night.My mother is a waitress.She works in a restaurant.She has good habits.She likes eating vegetables and drinking milk every day.But I don’t like milk.It is awful.She likes watching Beijing Opera at free time.She says it’s good for her to keep young and it can make her relaxed.My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home.我家里有四口人,我的父母,我的哥哥和我。我的家人很好。我真的很高兴。我的哥哥是害羞和有趣。他擅长运动,擅长排球。但他讨厌学习,成绩也不好。他喜欢讲笑话。他总是扮演他的朋友开玩笑和我的家人,总能让我们大笑。我的父亲是一名医生。他在医院工作的三亚。他不喜欢看电视,但他喜欢看报纸和阅读它每天晚上。我的妈妈是一个服务员。她在餐厅工作。她有良好的习惯。她喜欢吃蔬菜和喝牛奶每一天。但我不喜欢牛奶。这是可怕的。她喜欢看京剧在空闲时间。她说这是对她好保持年轻,这能够让她放松。我的家人总是做一切对我来说是最好的。他们总是站在我这边。我爱每一个人在我的家人。我爱我温暖的家。3 我的朋友 Li Hua is my best friend.She is slim and beautiful with a pair of glasses.She is friendly and generous.She is good at English and I am good at maths so we often help each other.Her interests similar to mine, she likes traveling, reading and playing table tennis.She is the most knowledgeable person I have ever known.No matter what you ask, she can always find a perfect answer in her brilliant brain.We often play table tennis on weekend and sometimes we go to movies on Sundays.李华是我最好的朋友。她苗条、漂亮,带眼镜。她很友善、大度。她擅长英语而我擅长数学,因此我们彼此互相帮助。她和我有相同的兴趣:喜欢旅游、看书和打乒乓球。她是我认识的知识最渊博的人。无论你问什么都会得到完美的回答。我们经常周末打乒乓球,有时周日去看电影。我的朋友 Bill is my good friend。I mean, one of my best friend.Well, he is a trodintional British12-year-old boy, prefering vegetables,fruit,reading,books,volleyball and pingpong to ice crame and computer games.His phone number is 256-8516.So, if you are interested,call this number and and talk to him!比尔是我的好朋友的意思是,我的一个最好的朋友。嗯,他是一个trodintional British12-year-old男孩,喜欢蔬菜,水果,阅读,书籍,排球和乒乓球,冰起重机械和电脑游戏。他的电话号码是2568516。所以,如果你有兴趣,就打这个电话,和他说!
1)
Spring Festival
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal.In many places people like to set off firecrackers.Dumplings are the most traditional food.Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes.They can also get some money from their parents.This money is given to children for good luck.People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune.翻译:
春节是中国最最重要的节日..春节前一天的晚上,一家人都聚在一起吃晚饭.许多人都喜欢(在这时候)放炮竹.饺子是传统的食物.小孩子非常喜欢这个节日,因为他们能吃到很多美味的食物,穿漂亮的衣服.他们还能收到父母给的压岁钱.这些钱能给孩子带来好运.人民也会把新年的画挂在墙上,为了来年的好运.2)Spring Festival.This morning, I got up at six o'clock.Then I brushed my teeth and washed my face.After that, I had breakfast with my parents.At noon, I went to my grandparents' house and visited my aunts, uncles and cousins.In the afternoon, we made dumplings together.In the evening, we had dumplings, sweet and sour pork, and lots of nice dishes for dinner.After dinner, my parents and I went home.We set off fireworks and went to bed then.We were all very happy.That was a nice Spring Festival.
第二篇:英文作文
Smiling
i think smiling is as important as sunshine.smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day.if you aren't happy, you can smile, and then you will feel happy.someone may say, “but i don't feel happy.”then i would say, “please smile as you do when you are happy or play with your friends happily.you will really be happy again.”
you don't like crying, right? so you must prefer smiling, because you know smiling will let people forget everything unhappy.every day, we see teachers or students and say, “hi/hello!how are you?” at the same time, you are smiling, right?
smiling can let you have more friends.with a smile, people will know you're a kind person.they will talk with you, so you will have more and more friends.so i say, smiling is like a flower, the sunshine, warmth.it will give you happiness.My Vexaction(我的烦恼)
when i got home, i was very surprised to find my mother reading my diary.i was too angry to say a word.my eyes were swimming in tears.as soon as my mother saw me, her face turned red and she said to me, “sorry!my daughter!i…i only want to …” i didn't want to hear her excuse.i need to have my own secrets and my parents should respect that.last week, our monitor told us a piece of news about xu zhen, a student in class 5.grade 1 in suzhou high school.Love is invaluable(爱心无价)
xu zhen is an unlucky girl.she has been ill since the end of 2005.but, her family don't have enough money to send her to hospital.we all feel very sad after hearing it.then everyone in our class donated for xu zhen before long.all of us wanted to try our best to help her.we all hope she will be out of trouble soon.i've learnt a lot from this.life is invaluable and we should treasure our lives.however, love is even more invaluable.love is important to everyone.and love can make the world more beautiful and warmer.if the world is full of love, it will be nicer.我们无法改变过去,却能用勤奋和智慧创造美好未来。亲爱的同学,你对未来的生活有着怎样的期待呢?请以“My life in the future” 为题写一篇短文,畅想字迹未来的学习、工作和生活。
要求:
1.语句通顺,合乎逻辑,书写规范。60-80词。
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称。
参考范文:
My life in the future
My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.I’m going to be a good doctor after I graduate from the university.I believe I’ll bring my parents health and happiness.In my spare time, I’ll stay with my
family.We’ll travel a lot and do lots of sports.I’ll also read as many books as
I can for I want to improve myself.Even if I work, I will never give up studing.I’m sure my dream will come true because of my hard work and the life in
the future will get better and better.回想三年的英语学习历程,丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下 了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题 写一篇英语短文,谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做,才能使英语学习更有效。
提示:
(1)Listen to the teacher.(2)Take part in activities.(3)Be confident in ourselves.要求:
(1)文稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2)文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数:60~80 个。
参考词汇:take notes, work in groups with…,not be afraid of…
What should we do in English class?
In English class,we should ____________
参考范文:
What should we do in English class?
In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when
necessary.Try to answer questions in English.We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having
discussions and playing games.We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other.It’s very important to be confident.Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes.In this way, we can make much progress.健康是一个重要话题,健康的身心,能使我们和谐相处,愉快的学习。为此,学校英语广播站举行“健康成长”征文比赛活动。请你根据要求写一篇80词以上的短文。
内容要求:
1.健康重要。
2.如何做到身心健康(饮食、起居、运动、沟通)。
参考词汇:health, keep healthy, keep a balanced diet, communicate, exercise, relax, junk food, enough sleep
说明:参考词汇仅供参考,并非必须用词汇,题目和结束语已给出,不计入词数。Growing Up Heathily!
A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily.参考范文:
Growing Up Heathily
Growing up heathily is our duty.Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy.First of all, keep a balanced diet.We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day.Don’t eat junk food.Drink water instead of cola.Secondly, get enough sleep and enough exercise.Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health.Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night.Try to
exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves
by listening to light music.Besides the physical health, we also need friendship.We should try to get along well with people around us.We can share our problems and happiness with them.And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers.Communication plays an important part in our life.A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily.内容要点:
1.这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性;
2.自信给人勇气尝试,使人成功;
3.梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难;
4.没有梦想和自信,不会获得成功;
5.你的感悟(考生自拟,至少一点)。
注意:
1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.参考词汇:自信-confidence(n.);
3.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺,文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly.___________________________参考范文:
I Believe I Can Fly
I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly.This song tells us that confidence is very important.When a person has confidence,he believes in himself.He
believes that he can and will succeed,and this gives him the courage to try new things.Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties.No one can achieve success without them.If you believe you tail fly,then you can really fly someday.I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties.I’ll remember
confidence is the promise for achieving success.1.My opinions on volunteering
We are middle school students and we are busy with our lessons.So some people think we should concentrate more on our studies.If we volunteer to help others, it’s a waste of time.But I think volunteering is great.I not only feel good about helping others but also get to spend time doing what I love to do.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.So if I have an oppoutunity, I’d like to visit old people’s home to clean up for them.I’d also like to help sick kids in hospital.I love kids and I plan to put my love to good use by working in hospital.In a word, I’d like to help people who need help.If everyone helps out a bit, the world will be more colorful.中考英语作文范文:
2.Small kinds
Human beings are advanced animals in the world.Some animals are very kind.For example , if you are kind to a dog , it will shake.It will tail to you.So if you are kind to others, they will also be kind to you.You have lots of chances to give your small kindness if you see a disabled person working in the street.You can help him to cross the street.If you meet a stranger, you can show him the way.If he or she asks you questions, you should be kind to answer them.That is you give small kindness to others.Maybe it seems to you a piece of cake, but it is very important to people in need.If you do this, the others will do it to you.Be kind to others, and they will be kind to you.
第三篇:英文作文
Are Neighbors Important ?
In pioneer days, being a good neighbor was very important.Neighbors helped one another raise a house, build a barn, and clear fields.Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment.But today in our cities and suburbs, neighboring is not common.A family may not even know the other families that live close by.We live in an age of machines, and each family may have its own car, TV set, and washing machine.People no longer depend on neighbors as much as they once did.Machines keep people apart in other ways.In our grandparents' time, women met while they hung out their washing, and men stopped and talked while they mowed their lawns.Today, women stay in the house with their automatic dryers.The men can't hear anything above the roar of their
power lawn mowers.And the children are inside watching their favorite TV show.Is the idea of being neighborly old-fashioned? In 1965, a power failure hit New York City, and many thousands of people were left stranded.Suddenly, everyone shared the same problem, and our largest city became a group of eight million neighbors.People with cars offered rides to those walking.Other persons helped direct traffic.Trapped in elevators,people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirits.In times of trouble, people still depend on one another.As time goes on, people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is important.邻居重要吗?
在拓荒时代,成为好邻居非常重要。邻居们相互帮助养家糊口,修建谷仓,清理农田。家庭之间相互依赖获得友谊和娱乐。但如今在市区或者市郊,比邻而居并不常见。一个家庭可能甚至不认识附近居住的其他家庭。
我们生活在一个机器时代,每个家庭都可能有自己的汽车、电视和洗衣机。人们不再像以前那样依赖邻居。
机器还在其他方面把人们分离开来。在我们的祖父母时代,女人们出去晾衣服的时候都能相互见面,男人们在除草的时候也停下来聊天。现在,女人们和她们的自动烘干机呆在家里。男人们则除了他们电动除草机的轰鸣声外什么都听不到。孩子们则呆在家里观看他们最喜欢的电视节目。
与邻居友好相处的想法是否过时了?1965年,纽约城停电,使得成千上万的人手足无措。突然,所有的人都有着共同的问题,我们最大的城市变成了八百万人互为邻里的大集体。开车的人让走路的人搭载。另外有些人帮忙指挥交通。陷在电梯里的人们做着文字游戏,相互帮忙保持良好情绪。
遇到麻烦时,人们仍然相互依赖。随着时间的推移,人们有可能会再次感到成为好邻居的重要 Step Away From the Video Games(远离电子游戏)
Step Away From the Video Games
Every afternoon hundreds of thousands of youths flood Internet cafes, switch on a game console, or otherwise sit down to involve themselves in intense fantasy worlds.I'm talking about video games;games like Counter Strike, Diablo, Smash Brothers or Halo.These games can be fun and exciting, but we need to watch out for when this pastime becomes an addiction.Games are often incredibly exciting and dramatic, but they generally aren't very intellectual.We don't learn as much from them as we would simply reading a book, and spending too much time playing them can take away from our study time.We need to remember that we are students first and foremost.Nothing should ever get in the way of proper studying.Video games can also be a bad influence on younger children who may be watching.Many video
games are violent and the object in most of them is to kill the other player(s).This does not send the right message to the children who need to be told that violence is not acceptable and need to be taught how to handle situations maturely.Even if we do decide ourselves to sit down and play a violent video game, we need to make sure that it is not influencing the younger people around
US.远离电子游戏
每天下午,成百上千的年轻人就会涌进网吧,接通游戏控制台,或者坐下来自己一人沉溺于一个紧张的梦幻世界。我说的是电子游戏,像反恐精英、暗黑破坏神、任天堂明星大乱斗、光晕。这些游戏非常有趣、刺激,但我们必须提防不要沉迷于这种消遣之中。
游戏通常都非常刺激、生动,但通常并不能锻炼智力。玩游戏并不能像读书那样学到很多知识,况且花太多时间玩游戏也会占据我们读书的时间。我们必须记住,首先也是最重要的一点是,我们还是学生。没有什么应该影响我们正常的读书。
电子游戏对于那些只是观看的小孩也是一个坏影响。许多电子游戏都非常暴力,其目标大部分都是杀死另外的玩家。对于那些必须教会他们暴力是不正当的,必须教会他们成熟处理事情的孩子来说,这并没有传达一个正确的信息。即使我们自己决定坐下来打一场刺激的电子游戏,也必须确保没有影响到周围的年轻人。
On Friendship(论友谊)
On Friendship
Friendship means being friendly to each other or making friends with one another.Human beings are social animals.They do not live in isolation.They need each other both physically and emotionally.However, some people distort friendship by forming small groups that are harmful to others, or even to the whole community.In university some students from the same city or province form an association to help each other.But such associations often exclude students from other parts of the country, and thus do not promote friendship in a broad sense.True and lasting friendship is based on a more solid foundarien.Real friends share the same ideals.While marching toward their common objective, they help each other.If one makes a mistake, his friend will not hesitate to point it out for him, because he knows the frank criticism will help him.What we need is this type of genuine friendship.论友谊
友谊意味着彼此友好相处或与他人交朋友。人类是一种社会动物,他们不能孤立存在,他们在生理上和情感上都彼此需要。
然而,有人却把组建对付他人、甚至于危害整个社会的小团体曲解为友谊。大学里,来自同一城市或同一省份的一些学生组成一个社团,彼此互相帮助。但这样的社团往往排斥了来自其他地区的学生,因此从广义上讲,这并不能促进友谊。
真正而持久的友谊是以更为牢固的根基为基础的。真正的朋友拥有共同的理想。当他们向共同的目标迈进时,彼此相互帮助。若一个人犯了错,他的朋友会毫不犹豫地为他指出来,因为他知道真诚的批评会对他有益。我们需要的就是这种真正的友谊。
On Diligence
It is the duty of every man to work.The life of a lazy man is of no use to himself and to others.The man who is too lazy to work is the man who's generally most ready to beg or to steal.Every boy when he
is young should learn some useful work.But it is not enough that a boy should learn some kind of work.He should put his heart and soul completely into his work, and not waste his spare time.“Work while you work and play while you play” is as good a rule for young people as for the old.There is no better help to diligence than the habit of early rising, which just like all other good habits is most easily formed in youth.There is an English saying, “Lost time never returns.” This means that everybody must be diligent, and make good use of his time.One must study hard when he is
young so that he may make great progress, succeed in life and become useful to his country.Therefore, we say that diligence Is the mother of success.论勤奋
工作是每个人的义务。懒人的生活无论是对自己还是对他人都是毫无用处的。一个懒惰不愿工作的人,其结果通常只能是乞讨或偷盗。每个男孩从小就应学会一些有用的技能。
但是仅仅学会某些技能还是远远不够的。他需要全身心投入地工作,休息时也不浪费时间。“工作时工作,娱乐时娱乐”,这句话对年轻人和老年人都是不变的真理。
养成早起的习惯最有助于成为一个勤奋的人,和其他很多好习惯一样,早起的习惯在人年轻时最容易养成。英语里有一句谚语:“时光一去不复返”。就是说每个人都应该勤奋工作,充分利用时间。一个人年轻时必须要努力学习才能取得巨大的进步,在生活中获得成功,成为对国家有用的人。因此,我们说:勤奋是成功之母。
Youth
Youth is not a time of life;it is a state of mind;it is not a matter of pink cheeks, red lips and flexible knees;it is a matter of will, a quality of imagination, a vigor of the emotion;it is the freshness of the deep
springs of life.Youth means a dispositional control of courage over cowardice, of the appetite for adventure over the love of ease.This often exists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20.Nobody grows old merely by a
number of years.We grow old by deserting our ideals.Years may wrinkle the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul.Worry, fear, self-distrust
bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust.Whether 60 or 16, there is in every human being's heart the looking forward to wonder, the endless child-like appetite of what's next and the joy of the game of living.In the center of your heart and my heart there is a wireless station: so long as it is receiving messages of beauty, hope, cheer, courage and
power from men and from God, you are young.When the aerials are down, and your spirit is covered with snows of cynicism and the ice of pessimism, then you are grown old, even at 20, but as long as your aerials are up to catch waves of
optimism, there is hope you may die young at 80.青春寄语
青春不是人生的一个时期,而是一种心境、,青春不是 指粉红色的面颊、红润的嘴唇和灵活的膝盖,而是指坚强的意志、丰富的想象和激越的情感。青春是生命深处的一泓清泉。
青春是一种气质:勇猛果敢而不是怯懦退缩,渴望冒险而不是贪图安逸。一个60岁的老人身上常常散发着这种气息,而20岁的青年身上倒未必可寻。没有人会单纯因为年岁增长而衰老,而一旦丧失理想,就
会真正变老。
年岁也许会在皮肤上生出皱纹,而热情不在则会使心灵起皱。忧虑、恐惧、自卑都会使人心灰意懒,一
蹶不振。
无论60岁还是16岁,每一个人心里都怀有对新奇事物的向往,都会像儿童一样对未来充满永不衰减的憧憬,都能在生活的游戏中汲取快乐。在你我的心灵中央都有一座无线电台:只要它正在接受其他·人和上
帝发出的美丽、希望、快乐、勇气和力量的信息,你就会永远年轻。
当你的天线收拢,当你的心灵覆盖着愤世嫉俗的霜雪和悲观厌世的坚冰,即使你年方二十,你也已进入了垂暮之年。然而,只要你的天线张开,接收着乐观向上的电波,那么你可以指望,在80岁死去时你依然
年轻。
第四篇:英文作文
暑假,凯特和她的朋友们乘车去公园玩。当她们在公园的椅子上休息的时,凯特湖边有一双鞋和一双短袜,可是却没有看到东西的主人。她们怕这个人掉到湖里,于是赶紧去寻找,后来发现这个女孩正在一棵大树下面,因为弄湿了鞋和裙子,正在湖边晒凉呢。
Summer, Kate and her friends travel to the park to play.When they rest on the chair in the park when, Kate found that the lake has a pair of shoes and a pair of socks, but did not see things the owner.They fear that this man fell into the lake, so hurry to find, but later found the girlis a tree below, because the wet shoes and skirts are cool lake drying it.
第五篇:英文作文万能
英语作文万能模板(不会英语也要得作文分)!
症状一:文体格式混乱
【表现】读了作文要求之后,提笔就写——明明要求写一封表达建议的书信,结果写成了议论文;或者明明要求写说明文,偏偏写成了记叙文;或者总算文体没有弄错,结果写通知误用日记的格式,写书信又误用通知的格式。
【症结】平时缺乏作文文体方面的针对性训练,对英语作文的几种常用文体及其相应的写作格式不熟悉,拿到写作材料习惯性地对写作要求一扫而过,提笔就写自己最熟悉的格式。
【突破之道】明确文体和对应格式
常用文体有记叙文、说明文、议论文还有应用文等。近几年的高考(Q吧)书面表达多以应用文为主,提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现,书写的格式大都是书信、通知。所以,同学们应该掌握书信的称呼、开头、正文、结尾、签名等方面,另外,口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之,同学们应根据写作提示分析材料,明确写作文体和其相应的格式。
症状二:时态人称混乱
【表现】作文时,时态和人称运用混乱——时态方面,要么整篇文章都是一种时态(以一般现在时、一般过去时居多),要么就是一段甚至一句话中出现三种以上的时态;人称方面,要么文章开头是第一人称,写到文中甚至文末就成了第二、第三人称,要么前面是单数人称,写着写着就变成复数人称。
【症结】英语基础知识不牢固,对英语中时态和人称所代表的含义及其运用掌握不足,因此无法根据文体来选择正确的时态和人称而滥用或者混用。
【突破之道】明确时态和人称
同学们要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态和人称。一般来说,记人叙事多用一般过去时;发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式;发表议论大多用带有情态动词的一般现在时;人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点,但要记住,写作时时态并不唯一,要依据表达内容而选定正确的时态。人称方面则要注意前后统一,避免出现前后人称属性或者单复数不一致的情况。
症状三:词汇运用混乱
【表现】经常出现乱用词语的现象,同时使用一些较难的、较长的、用法不熟悉的单词,或者明明用一些简单的词汇就能够很清楚地表达意思,偏偏要选择一些难度较大的、不常用的表达方式。
【症结】写作时对文章的脉络把握不足就匆匆下笔,对其中所需的词汇和常用表达方式理解记忆不牢固。平时练习时,习惯性地忽略一些形式简单但用途较广泛的基本词汇和表达方式,喜欢选择复杂的词汇和表达方式。
【突破之道】确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构
应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出并理清要点,然后选词造句,要注意语言的准确得当,力求用最简洁的话表达准确的意思。同时,平时写作要多进行发散思维,例如,是用verysorry还是terriblysorry,是surprised还astonished。同学们应学会尽可能避免使用较高级的语法结构和词汇,如非谓语动词、复合句等,以免造成过失性失分.症状四:语序句序混乱
【表现】作文的语序、句序混乱,通常这里写一点,跳过去又另起一点,这样造成要么文章洋洋洒洒一大篇却全是废话,没有中心和重点,什么都没有表达清楚;要么通篇没有适当的过渡词、句,整篇文章一“逗”到底,密密麻麻让人找不着北。
【症结】平时练习时不注意表达的连贯性,想到哪里就写到哪里,写作之前没有列提纲的习惯,不去深入思索怎样表达才能达到最好的效果,从而造成整篇文章逻辑思维混乱,层次不清晰。
【突破之道】整理成篇行文连贯
同学们应该根据写作内容列好简要提纲,分清文章的层次,确定详略,写好的单句要重新排列组合起来,使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词或句子使文章过渡自然,行文流畅。另外,该分段时要分段,这样文章才能中心突出,一目了然,整篇作文才能如行云流水般整齐划一。
--2008万能英语模板
图标作文
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease,significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart,it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand,____.In the other hand,_____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition,______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.书信作文模板
Your address Month,Date,year Receiver’s address Dear „,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.„„
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours,话题作文
Nowadays,there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up,the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing,_____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.对比观点作文
_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly(besides),______.Thirdly(finally),_____.From my point of view,I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.大学英语四六级考试万能作文模板大全1
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下面就是这个模板。
Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合].It is estimated that [相关数据].Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解决办法一].On the other hand, [解决办法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].为便于读者理解,我特意用这个模板,写了一篇关于ghost writer(捉刀代笔的****)的示范性小作文,请您观摩一下。
Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / ****] in [China’s examinations / 中国的考场].It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的应试者是****].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / ****]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers“ ignorance / 雇主无知].Besides, [hirers” indolence / 雇主懒惰].The third one is [hirers“ obtusely / 雇主迟钝].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / ****] is due to [hirers” low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斩首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / ****].大学英语四六级考试万能作文试题模版
(I)说明原因型
模块
(一)Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the
number of XX.注释:
(1)用具体数据说明XX现象
(2)原因一
(3)原因二
(4)原因三
(5)指出主要原因
(6)解决建议一
(7)解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and
children which is so-called generation gap.It is estimated that(75 percentages
of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children
usually think their parents too old fashioned).Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?
Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them).Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face).The third reason is(with the
pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their
work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(lake of communication and understanding each other).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing(children should
respect their parents).On the other hand ,(parents also should show solicitue for
their children).All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.第二天:
(I)说明原因型
模块(2)
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there
comes a case that(4).Moreover ,(5).Especially
when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind
people that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television
In recent years , with the development of science and
technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite
TV , offering as many as 50 channels.It has caused a heated
debate on(the impact of television on children).Many
parents are worried about the impact of so much television
on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in
television and spend too much time on it.).First of all ,(with so
many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much
exercise as they should).Then , there comes a case that(some
studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions
of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover ,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than
the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children
are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind
parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities
for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way ,children
will not be influented too deeply.(I)说明原因型
模块(3)
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate
the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(), as a result ,your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You donn't have to
look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(7).注释: : XX的第一个优点
2: 支持XX的做法
3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二个优点
5:举例证明优点二
6:说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable
than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power
to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties), as a result , your dreams willcome true.On the contrary,if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。
It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light
when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect
that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and
self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound
influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions)
With reference to my standpoint ,I think(he that can have
self-confidence can have what he will).(I)说明原因型
模块(4)
For most of us today ,().From above ,we can find that the reasons
why()are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is().Second,().The third reason, actually ,is().The significance for()。
Therefore ,().注释:
(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措
(2)归纳现状
(3)第一个原因
(4)第二个原因
(5)第三个原因
(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因
(7)我的建议我写的模块(4)的相应的作文,仅供参考
pollution
most of us today(recognize that environmental pollution has
been a greatly serious problem.lots of plants trees corps are
destroyed by bad air.many fish die of poisonous water.thousands
of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas.therefore ,environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases
that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human beings ,but also to wild life.)
from above ,we can find that the reasons why(environment are polluted
more and more seriously)are as follows.the primary reason ,I think , is(the reason of harmful substances into
environment.for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great
amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests.however ,they
pollute air ,water and land).second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make
environment polluted badly).the third reason actually is(the result of a growing population in
the world.everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from
houses ,also pollute the environment).the significance for(controlling pollution)noted that it's high
time that more effective measures should be taken.therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants
from factories.moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need
to reduce litter and waste.let's make our good efforts ,and the world
will be a safer place to live for us).(I)说明原因型
模块(5)
These days we often hear that(1).It is common that(2).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social
protects? For one thing ,(3).For another,(4).What is more,since(5),it is natural that(6).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth
trying.We should do something such as(7)
to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything
will be better in the future.(1)提出论题
(2)说明现状
(3)理由一
(4)理由二
(5)理由三
(6)理由三引起的后果
(7)解决方法
我写的模块(5)的相应的作文
pollution of environment
These days we often hear that(our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment).It is common that(many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed.).Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded.).For another,(th
e overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology).What is more , since(the industrial revolution),it is natural
that(a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms.The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying.We should do something such as(planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources)to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future.CET-4写作中拓展主题句的有效途径
大学英语四级考试中的短文写作部分是考核学生用英语进行书面表达的能力,也就是语言的运用能力, 但不是自由作文, 而是有控制的作文,即对作文的每一部分内容有较明确的要求,用各种明确的方式如提纲、图表、关键词等加以规定.而提纲常用中文给出,学生需自拟主题句,因此,对主题句常有以下要求:(1)意义完整:主题句必须是一个意义完整、符合语法结构的句子;(2)表意清晰:主题句不能包含两种或两种以上的意义,要易于识别、确认;(3)避免笼统而抽象的概述.如:The book is interesting in content.比The book is interesting.更好些.(4)不宜采用问句的形式,像“Is it worthwhile to go after fashion?” 不宜作为主题句.主题句是作者思维的起点、切题的准绳、阐述的对象,拓展好主题句关系到文章的成败.本文就如何拓展主题句从语言形式上和内容上加以阐述.一、语言形式上
1.平行结构的运用
平行结构作为一种使句子变得紧凑而错落有致的写作方式,有以下功效:句式优美、表达清晰、重点突出,使用尽可能少的词传达了尽可能多的信息.例如:主题句为Video games are a kind of entertainment.利用平行结构拓展为: They bring pleasures to youngsters, train them to respond quickly, stimulate their imagination in electronics.不难看出,此处内容丰富具体、行文流畅,有极强的说服力.2.句式灵活多变
若文中的简单句出现得太多,就会显得单调、含混、不生动.要写出生动而鲜明的句子,可通过乔姆斯基的转化生成语法中的嵌入方式来实现.一个简单句,嵌入定语、状语、补语后,变得生动有趣.如: Books telling people how to adapt themselves to the society are worth reading.读起来比Books are worth reading.更耐人寻味,是由于前一个句子中的主语前加了一个复杂的定语.再如:Harry stood at the edge of the path, watching the cars running.这是一个简单句后附上了伴随状语,使句子更加生动.在拓展主题句时,注意适时地变换句式,是一种有效的写作策略,同时能使文章产生意想不到的文学效果.3.使用符合英美人表达习惯的习语
能将诸如attach great importance to, leave a deep impression on, in due course, get the jump
on等习语运用到文章中,反映了作者一定的语言功底和较高的英语表达水平.4.连接手段的补充
准确地使用一些signal words,总能让松散的拓展句自然地衔接起来,而且整个段落层次分明、前后连贯.常用于表示因果关系的连词有:so, hence, thus, therefore, as a result等.常用于表示递进关系的连词有:besides, moreover, furthermore, additionally等.常用于表示转折关系的连词有: however, nevertheless, but, yet, on the other hand等.常用于表示对比关系的表达方式有:Some prefer...others long for...;We can compare A with B...;...have something in common;Each has its positive and negative aspects.等.常用于举例说明的表达方式有:A simple example is...;Take...as an example...;An illustration will make the point clear.;First, consider the case of...常用于总结全文的表达方式有:in a word, to sum up, in short, thus, the reason why we must...;On account of this we find that...;From this point of view...二、内容上
1.化抽象的概述为细节的描述
抽象的概述总会给人言之无物的感觉,若再进行具体的描述,文章内容顿时充实起来,变得有血有肉,不再枯燥乏味,似乎有生命力了.例如:Music is everywhere.这是一个内容抽象的主题句,我们找到切入点后,可在everywhere上做文章,于是接下来可拓展为:We can hear it in restaurants, airports, hospitals, supermarkets and many other public places.再如:People can acquire skills through recreation.这也是个概述,若充实以下内容就丰富多了,即: They can learn to fish, paint, plant flowers and do paper cutting.另外,这里的learn to正好与acquire相对应.2.从不同角度选材
选材时应考虑到段落的单一性和完整性,单一性即一个中心思想,完整性就是要避免支离破碎或内容仅局限在某一狭窄的范围内.材料要做到涵盖面广,而且愈典型愈好,但也不能凭空编造,应以事实为基础,这样一来,就避免了片面性或谬误.例如:主题句为Science and technology benefits human being much.(科学技术给人类带来益处),在展开此主题句的过程中,可从农业、医学、电讯业等不同角度来补充材料,行文如下:Science makes it possible for a nation to ensure food and clothing(农业方面), science can make people live longer(医学方面), and it's science that makes it a small world(通讯方面).当然,提高写作水平非一日之功,要注意平时不断地积累,尽可能增加语言的输入量,才能厚积薄发,写作时才能得心应手;这样,假以时日,自然而然就提高了用英语流畅地表达思想的能力.2008万能英语模板
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As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____.From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.In one hand, ____.In the other hand, _____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition, ______ is responsible for _____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.书信作文模板
Your addressMonth, Date, yearReceiver's addressDear...,I am extremely pleased to hear from you.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.„„
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.Sincerely yours, 话题作文
Nowadays, there are more and more __ _ in __ _.It is estimated that ___.Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is ______.Besides,_____.The third one is _____.To sum up, the main cause of it is due to _____.It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,_____.For another thing, _____.All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.对比观点作文
_____ is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say ____ is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ____.What is more,_____。Moreover,______.While others think that _____ is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,_____.Secondly(besides),______.Thirdly(finally),_____.From my point of view, I think _____.The reason is that _____.As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.此帖于 2009-09-25 09:30 被 youboy 编辑.