第一篇:英语网络作文
Will Computers Replace Us?
Nowadays the development of computer technology is beyond our imagination.Not only it is applied to production and economy but also it brings great convenience to our life.However it is so omnipotent that some people believe that it is just time problem for us to be replaced by computer.As for me, I firmly believe that there is no possibility that computers can replace human one day.Because computers are made by human and they have no choice but to carry out their instructions to the human.They can’t stand on their own because they are just machines which are made to help people solve complicate problems.All in all, computers are nothing but an extension of human brains.They can bring us a bright future but will never replace us.
第二篇:社交网络英语作文
The Influence Of The Social Network Sites.With the popularization of computers and Internet, social network sites will become more and more popular with both the young and the old.Here people can acquire the convenient communication.However, recently the issue on whether the role of social network is positive or not has been aroused wide concern in public.Though when confronting such a dilemma, answers from various people may differ greatly it is conspicuous that there are two major controversies that can be made for the social network sites.For one thing, social network has provided us with grand convenience.For example, we can nearly pick up knowledge about all aspects and meet more people with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines,such as Sina Weibo, the Chinese version of twitter has just celebrated its second birthday.In such short time, it has become the most popular social network in China.For another, it is widely held that we can expand our horizon as well as make us all-round development to form healthy personality when we search the extensive social network.Despite the advantages,it is necessary for us to distinguish the drawbacks of the network.On one hand, with explosive information on the network, it can be difficult to avoid Young Peoples' risky behavior on social network sites.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.What is more, some dirty information on the network may exert negative impacts on them.On the other hand, Social network website is posing a challenge.For instance, fraud,porn and violence are easily found on social network websites.In one study, researchers have examined plenty of 18-year-olds from the United States.They found that 41 percent of the profiles chosen at random included information about alcohol or drug use.And14 percent included discussion of violence, which places them in potential danger.When it comes to my standpoint, it is crucial for us to take full advantages of the network to enhance our efficiency and save our time.However, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even harmful information.Only in this way can the network better serve for our life, study and work and we have a bright tomorrow
第三篇:网络犯罪英语作文
Network crime to stop
With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem
facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals appear to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt
e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses.However, we should not tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It's high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses.As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes.For one thing, we should not use others' computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes.
第四篇:英语作文网络交流
Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.It made our communicationmore and more convenience.young people incline tocommunicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits.There has a example, a Chinese girl talkedwith her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m.If there has no internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere.It eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us.The second, It also have some bad influence.young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.Some people say,they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life.Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.So,e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.1.1
Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: technique, technology 均有“技术”之意。
: 多指具体的某种技术和技巧。
: 含义比technique广泛,泛指生产工艺、科学技术。
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It made our communication more and more convenience. [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportation 均有“交通”之意。
: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。
: 指来往的东西的情况,表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。
: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处,也可指交通运输工具。
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young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.
[教师点评][名词错误] on internet 冠词缺失[句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写好评报错 [批改提示] develop近义表达有advance/ progress/ evolve/ thrive/ flourish[批改提示] technology表示“工艺,技术”。注意与technique的区别。详情点击好评报错 好评报错
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[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格,请检查[搭配统计] 动名搭配 lack...communication 在教材中出现过次好评报错
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少,短少”之意。
: 指完全短缺或数量不足。
: 语气较重,指需要必不可少的东西,强调急需。
: 侧重缺少某种必需之物,或个人渴望得到的东西。
: 使用广泛,语气较轻。强调急需时可与need换用,但有时暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任务必不可少的。
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2.1
First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法,请检查![语法检查] 建议把 about it's benefits 改成 about its benefits(Did you mean...)[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格,请检查好评报错 好评报错
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益,好处”之意。
: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。
: 普通用词,指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。
: 作“利益”解时,多用复数形式,既可指集团、群体的利益,又可指个人的利益。
: 指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。
: 着重收益,尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。
: 指获得的物质利益,也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。
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2.2
There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查![语法检查] 建议把 There has a 改成 There is a(Revise...)[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格,请检查好评报错 好评报错 [批改提示] want的近义表达有intend或tend。好评报错
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子,事例”之意。
: 普通用词,指能代表同类事物性质或一般规律的典型例子。
: 多指用于说明、支持或反证一般事实或理论的事例。
: 多指需要加以认真研究的实例,如病例,案例等。
: 通常指样品。
: 指用来说明、解释某种理论或看法而引用的例证。
: 可与sample换用,但常指人或物中选出的有代表性部分,或指供科研、化验或检验用的标本。
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[批改提示] 注意区别。
Chinese用作名词,表示“中国人”[a person born or living in China, a person of Chinese descent]时,是可数名词,单复数同形;指中国人民或特指—个或数个中国人时,均加冠词,泛指时不能加。好评报错
2.3
If there has no internet, they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查![标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格,请检查[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。好评报错 好评报错 Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.如果设计不当,刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
The surface of Mars is remarkablydiverse.火星的表面参差不齐。
He was so informed and intensely forceful.他是那么见多识广,极了不起。
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It eliminates the barrier of distance, and very convenient for us.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查![搭配统计] 动名搭配 eliminate...barrier 在教材中出现过次好评报错
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: obstacle, barrier, obstruction, bar, hindrance 均含“障碍,障碍物”之意。
: 指在达到目的或前进的过程中必须消除或绕过的障碍物,也指起阻碍作用等情况。
: 常指临时的或者可能跨越的障碍。
: 常既指具体的障碍又可指抽象或喻意上的阻碍。
: 既可指阻止进出或通过的栅栏一类的障碍物,也可用于抽象意义障碍。
: 指妨碍他人进步或做事的人或物。
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[批改提示] eliminate近义表达有do away with/ get rid of/ extinguish/
obliterate/ exterminate
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3.1
The second, It also have some bad influence.
[教师点评][动词错误] 主谓不一致,建议将it后的谓语动词改为第三人称单数形式。[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格,请检查[推荐词汇] bad在写作中使用的太泛,在某些语境下可考虑换为unfavorable/dreadful或好评报错 好评报错 be less impressive等。
He had formed an unfavorable opinion of my work.他对我的工作已有了成见。
I' ve had a dreadful day everything seems to have gone wrong.我度过了很糟糕的一天,每件事好像都出了差错。
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3.2
young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.
[教师点评][句子错误] 句首单词请注意大写[低频警示] hours chatting with friends through 在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语好评报错 [高分表达] 建议将bad改为negative/unfavorable更好一些。[批改提示] influence近义表达有act upon/ affect/ bear upon好评报错 好评报错 好评报错
[学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。
: 一般用词,指某人喜爱并乐意与之相交往的人。
: 最普通用词,既可指好友、同事,又可指合伙人,还可指配偶的一方。
: 指彼此相识,但交往不甚密切,相互间没有深厚情感的人。
: 口语用词,指十分要好的朋友。
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Some people say, they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: genuine, authentic, actual, real, true, factual 均有“真的,真实的,实在的”之意。
: 普通常用词,指真正的,货真价实的,强调非人为或非虚假的。
: 常可与genuine换用,指与事实完全相符,强调准确可靠。
: 指事物的实际存在,并非出自主观臆造。
: 普通用词,含义较广,有时可与actual和genuine换用。指一切真实的或 表面看不出虚假的事物。: 指同实际情况或标准完全一致。口语中多用。
: 与actual同义,但更测重根据事实,不扩大或缩小,不渲染。[批改提示] through的近义表达有in term of或via。好评报错
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3.4
Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查![名词错误] virtual world 前面冠词缺失[名词错误] in virtual world 冠词缺失[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...friend 在教材中出现过次好评报错 好评报错 好评报错
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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...difficulty 在教材中出现过次
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So, e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.
[教师点评][句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查![标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格,请检查[搭配统计] 动名搭配 strike...balance 在教材中出现过次好评报错 好评报错
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[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...best 在教材中出现过次
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[学习提示] 易混词汇: remainder, surplus, rest, remains, balance 均含“剩余部分”之意。: 含义较广,可指数学运算中的余数,也指从整体取走或用掉部分后的所余部分,或一群人走掉一部分剩下的人。
: 指超过需要数量之外的剩余。
: 最普通用词与定冠词连用,指任何指定数量的人或物等。
: 常指人或动物死后的遗体或遗骨,也指古代文明的遗迹或去世作家尚未发表的遗稿。: 指支取存款的余额或减去各种开支后的尾数。
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第五篇:网络谣言 英语作文
互联网谣言
1.近年来网络上谣言盛行
2.这种现象造成的危害
3.如何解决这一问题
Online Rumors
No one can have failed to notice the fact that Internet rumors have been a grave problem confronting us.Groundless allegations flood the Internet.Taking a look around, we can find examples too many to enumerate: scandals of both famous and unknown people, fake forecast of earthquakes and the like.Internet rumors will definitely result in severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to them.First and foremost, made-up scandals directly infringe upon citizens' rights, affecting their daily life and ruining their public image.Besides, the dissemination of such rumors as those about social or natural disasters causes panic and disorder among society.Last but not least, the spread of rumors on the Internet will undermine the credibility of the net to such a degree that people will no longer trust it in the future.Given the seriousness of this problem, effective steps must be adopted before the situation deteriorates.First, it is imperative that laws and regulations be enacted and executed to stop the production and transmission of Internet rumors.For instance, real-name system should be introduced as soon as possible.Secondly, people should be educated to identify and reject groundless allegations.With severe laws and a conscious public, it will only be a matter of time for Internet rumors to be eradicated.For one thing,the advanced network technology has provided people with such convenient communication tools as BBS, Microblogs, QQ, and e-mail, which will promote the spread/diffusion of rumors.Moreover, the convenience of anonymity on the net enables users to shirk responsibility for their remarks , which has also reinforced this trend.(52words)
问题的解决措施
Firstly, the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose heavy penalty on those who spread rumors through the Internet.Secondly, relevant departments should strengthen the supervision of the network information and stop the circulation of rumors.Last but not least, as for the Netizen themselves,neither should they believe the rumors easily,nor disseminate rumors deliberately.As the common saying goes, “rumors stop at the wise.”(73 words)