经典英语高考作文欣赏5

第一篇：经典英语高考作文欣赏5

The Importance of the Reform and Open Policy

Today we are carrying outthe reform andopenpolicy.Itisbecause themostimportant tasktoday istodeveloptheinternational economy and improve the people’slivingstandard.Inordertorealizethegoal, weshouldreformtheoldeconomic system so that we canliberate the productiveforce.Weshouldalsoopenourdoortotheworld so thatwecan learnadvancedscienceandtechnologyfromthedevelopedcountries.27

Traffic safety

Traffic is one of the most important problems of every modern city.With the invention of the motor car and all sorts of motor vehicles, nearly every day we can read in the newspapers about the news of traffic accidents.We can not help sympathizing with the victims.Of course, if we can do away with those modern vehicles, no such things can happen.But it is against the progress of the civilization.We cannot return to the backward past ages.But if we cannot entirely prevent traffic accidents from happening, at least we can lessen its chances of occurrence.We can avoid it by means of educating the pedestrians and car drivers on the ways of traffic safety.28

We need A Science Society

Youths today should all take a keen interest in science, for we are in a rapidly progressing scientific age.Indeed, no one can now be regarded “up-to-date” without a general scientific knowledge we get from school textbooks, we should visit the libraries more often and read the current scientific news from the newspaper.But the enthusiastic youths have often found out that there are not enough suitable books to read in the public libraries, since many of them are too advanced and too specialized.To overcome this difficulty, I suggest that the Education Department should establish an inter-school science society.The main objects of the society are to increase the scientific knowledge of youths and to foster friendship between members.29

We Are Young But Once

Many young girls like to copy grown-ups.They wear high-heels, paint their faces, dress in tight clothes and all that burden.They.Willingly let tight clothes suffocate their breathing, high-heels hinder their walking, and make-ups mar their natural beauty.They think they equal adults by using these stuff, and look down upon their counterparts as childish, who incidentally do not care much to over-act their age.In fact, one can not be considered as a grown-up just by appearance.It acquires more, such as maturity of thought, which can only be seasoned by time..Young is indeed a very precious gift, and remember, everyone is young only once.While we still have youth with us, why should we restrict ourselves from enjoying it to our heart’s content by attempting to be much older than we really are?

Chances once lost may never come again, and youth definitely will not.Once it is over, real life requests our experience, and responsibilities await us with graveness.Our life will never be as free and blissful as we are today.Our present tasks in life are light.Our hearts are still full of youthful spirits and enthusiasm.So while we are still in the flower of life, why do we not gather the “rose-buds ”of youth before they wither away?

Women of Today

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.They are not restricted to their roles as wives and mothers anymore, they now work and have become the equal partners of men.In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, teachers, scientists and even leaders.We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.Husband and wife are now equal in the family.They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other.Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.31

Use of the Time

A man’s life occupies, at best, but a limited space of time;every bit of time wasted in idleness means a reduction of success and prosperity to the man himself and to the world at large.The magnitude of a man’s success in life depends largely upon how he makes use of his time.Those who achieve greatness in different channels of success are, as a whole, the most hard working people.Our famous scholar Yao and Shun wasted not a single minute, while Da Yu, our great emperor, valued even the briefest space of time.They were our great men;their accomplishments stand out in our history in bold relief.If we wish to do something useful, the sure way to success is to turn every minute that we may have at our disposal.The old hours which we have after our daily work are the best time for reading.There is a great deal of wisdom locked up in books.Nowhere else can we find such a rich spring of knowledge for quenching(satisfy)our thirst.Of course, different people follow different occupations.They do not need the same sort of information.Here they must make their own choice to get the books

best suited to their particular needs.The time spent in such reading will add greatly to their stock of knowledge and prepare them for greater work in their respective fields of activity.When the reading habit is once formed, they will enjoy reading far more than they do anything else.32

Build up good hobbies

Everybody has his own hobbies: some are fond of collecting stamps, coins, etc., some like swimming, and there are some who like reading or music---all these are of good hobbies.Nowadays, most teenagers are crazy about “hit-song”.From those songs we can learn many phrases which we can not find in books.Although teenagers like those songs very much, adults dislike them.And if they indulge in them, it would be a waste both of time and of money.This should not be considered as a good hobby.The worst hobbies of all are smoking and gambling.Smoking harms our bodies.Some men like to smoke in public places, and do not care about other people’s feelings.Gambling will make you lose everything.You may lose your temper, money and friendship.Friendship is the thing that money can’t buy.To lose a friend is easy but to build up a friendship is hard.So, why don’t we play something that cannot hurt others and which is worthwhile to us? For good hobbies, like stamps-collecting and reading can help us broaden our knowledge, music can make us happy, and sports can keep us in good physical condition.So why not take the good and discard the bad?

第二篇：经典英语高考作文欣赏4

Health

How can we keep our health? Only by knowing and carefully obeying the laws of health.A happy man is a healthy man, and only the healthy man can live a happy life.The desire of good health is universal.Everyone who loves life understands how important good health is.First, good health is the guarantee for enjoying life.The only desire of a patient is always to live an ordinary and healthy life.Second, good health establishes a firm foundation for your ambition of the career.Without it, any lofty aspiration turns to be a day-dream.Then how to keep fit? Everyone has his own answers to this question, while I think three principal suggestions should be followed.The first one is that a scientific diet should be adopted, which offers the necessities for your body.The second one is that physical exercises must be persisted, especially for the indoor people.The last, but not the least, is that the cheerful mood should be kept.In order to keep fit, I force myself to keep away from the “junk food” , although it usually tastes good.I even form a good habit of doing morning exercises.And the beautiful music and good books always cheer me up.20

My Views on Large Modern Cities

Since every coin has two sides, living in large modern cities offers us many advantages, simultaneously causes many troubles.Better education and better jobs are easy to get, and better medical care is convenient to receive in large modern cities.People are usually well-informed(见闻广的)due to the advanced(先进的)media, such as television, newspaper and net PC.Large modern cities also provide varied(各种各样的)entertainment for the city-dwellers(城市居民).The public places like cinema, bar, disco-hall are everywhere.On the other hand, large modern cities are too big to control, so the traffic jams and traffic accidents often happen, and the social security is a headache problem.And city-dwellers have to face the housing problem.Usually a house is too expensive for the salary earning class(工薪阶层)to buy and the rent is also high.Moreover, noise and pollution in large cities bring harm to people’s health.21

Live in the City or in the Country

Where do you like to live, in the city or in the country?

Most cities are centers of economy, trade, transportation or culture.With the development of economy and society, more and more people have flooded into(涌入)the cities, which makes the scale（规模)of the cities lager and larger.Surely, it is very convenient for shopping, education, business and so on.But it also has many disadvantages: the large population makes it crowded in each corner of the city;the big factories, too many cars, buses and trucks pollute the

clean air;too much noise can make people mad.To live in the city, one even can’t get enough room for living.To live in the country is another thing.You can breathe the fresh air cheerfully, own a spacious(宽敞的)house with a big backyard, relax yourself in quietness.But when you want to go shopping, or take your child to school, perhaps you will complain about its inconvenient transportation, its remoteness(路途遥远)…

I am an ordinary person.I am always longing for(渴望)the peaceful idyllic(田园诗般的)life of the countryside.22

Should Firecrackers(爆竹)Be Banned

Letting off firecrackers(放炮)has long been a custom for the Chinese on their happy occasions.However, these years, people in China have different opinions about the custom.Some people think letting off firecrackers is a good thing.It reflects(反映)the heritage(传统)of Chinese culture.And it adds much to the warm atmosphere of the most important Chinese holidays—the Spring Festival.People can’t imagine what the holidays would be like without such a custom.But many people, on the other hand, believe that letting off firecrackers should be banned.The main reasons, in the eyes, are that letting off firecrackers not only brings great economic loss to the country, but also causes certain disorder in the society.For example, during holidays, some buildings are burnt to ashes(烧成灰烬)due to the firecrackers.And many persons are injured by the firecrackers and sent to hospital.In my opinion, letting off firecrackers should be banned.We must try our best to find new, beneficial(有益的)ways to replace the old custom.Only in this way can we spend our holiday in a peaceful and joyful manner.23

Smoking

It is well known that smoking does harm to the health.Today, however, so many people still keep smoking, which has drawn wide attention of the society.Smoking has so many disadvantages but no advantages at all.Firstly, the cigarettes with nicotine(尼古丁)in them do great harm to the health.Such diseases as pneumonia(肺炎), lung cancer may be caused or partly caused by them.Furthermore, the bad effects of cigarettes cost the smokers lots of money which could be spent on the meaningful things.Thirdly, the accidents of fire all over the world every year are mostly caused by the still-burning butts(烟蒂).The government has formulated(制定)the regulation(规章)of no smoking in public places.Yet its result is not so satisfactory.From my point of view, it needs the common efforts of the society.Not only the nonsmokers but the smokers should cooperate(合作)on this matter.24

On Making Friends

As a human being, one can hardly do anything without a friend.Helping one out of trouble and bringing happiness to a lonely heart, a true friend may shed(spread)sunshine and love on one’ life.A friend will help you find out and overcome an overlooked(忽略的)shortcoming, so that you can make progress and have success in your work or study.All the splendor(辉煌)in the world is not worth a good friend.True friendship is like an in-time rain falling on the dry land.True friends are not those who like to eat or drink with you, but those who concern more about your needs, growth, success and failures.They will never flee for their own sake when faced with a great danger.Just as the old saying puts it, “ A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

I like making friends.In order to make true friends, I will trust others, following their advice and lending a hand whenever they need help.I like to make friends with those who have the same interests and ideas with me, but not those who are boastful(full of self-praise), aimless, narrow-minded or selfish.Once I made friends with someone, I hope that the friendship will last all through my life.25

Don’t Give up

It matters not what you learn, but when you once learn a thing, you must never give it up until you have mastered it.It matters not what you inquire into, but when you inquire into a thing, you must give it up until you have thoroughly understood it.It matters not what you try to thing out, but when you once try to think out a thing, you must never give it up until you have got what you want.It matters not what you try to sift out, but when you once try to sift out a thing, you must never give it up until you have sifted it out clearly and distinctly.It matters not what you try to carry out, but when you once try to carry out a thing, you must never give it up until you have done it thoroughly and well.If another man succeeds by one effort, you will use a hundred efforts.

第三篇：经典英语高考作文欣赏2

On Learning

Learning is one’s own business, which can not rely on others.As we know, learning is a process of accumulating knowledge.It is one’s life-long task, which cannot be accomplished in one move.A successful learner is an independent one, who has both an indomitable(不屈不挠的)will and amazing endurance.He will try to discover his own way of learning.Instead of waiting for the teacher’s help, he will make efforts to create favorable conditions on his own initiative.It will certainly be of great help, if there is good environment, sufficient books and equipment, as well as instructions from teachers and beneficial friends.But even if one has got all these favorable conditions, one cannot be sure to succeed in learning.7

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common occurrence(发生的事情)in our daily life.Whatever we do, there are always two possible results: success or failure.Although everyone wants to succeed in what he tries, sometimes failure can’t be avoided.Different people hold different attitudes toward failure.When faced with it, some can stand up to it, draw a useful lesson from it and try their best to fulfill what they are determined to do.Others, however, lose heart and give in.They do nothing but complain about themselves and objective conditions.As a popular saying goes, “Failure teaches success.” In my opinion, what really counts is not the failure itself, but the proper attitude we should take after it.I trust that as long as we keep to what is right and correct what is wrong, that is to say, learn a lesson from failure, we will be certain to succeed.So I am of the opinion that failure is not a bad thing.8

On Today’s Education

I think one of the main problems with today’s education is that too much emphasis is placed on test score.It has become the most important criterion(标准)for college enrollment(入学).A student, however creative and intelligent, will not be admitted into a college for his total scores are just one point less than required.It is also one of the crucial(至关重要的)factors either in job assignment(分派)or in employment competitions.The competition for high scores among students becomes intense.Students find themselves concentrating more on strategies（策略）to achieve high scores than on acquiring the knowledge.They will play truant(逃学)of some subsidiary(辅助的)courses and skip over the substance which will not be tested on.Teachers are apt(有…倾向的)to give their students high scores.As their job is judged mainly by the students’performance in terms of scores, some teachers tend to set easy papers to test their students on or narrow down the

scope(范围)of the exam, even give them the hint(提示)to exams, or favor their students with fighter score.As a result, the competition for high scores becomes so intense that it actually affects our education results.9

Knowledge and Power

Knowledge and power are the two things most desired by man.There is close connection between these two things.The man having done his best in acquiring knowledge, will easily get a high position and perform it successfully.Power depends on knowledge.Knowledge to power is just like a compass to a ship, by which her sailing is made safely across an unknown ocean.A great statesman（政治家）or a learned scholar can render(give)his good services to his country just because he has perfect and profound knowledge.Power only follows knowledge.A man cannot do anything well unless he has some information as how to do it well.A man will sometimes lose his way in a strange land;an apprentice(学徒；生手)cannotproduce any delicate(精密的)work.Why are these so? Because they are in want of knowledge.If the apprentice wishes to produce good work, he must pay attention to his instructor’s advice.We are all the future masters of our country.Our country needs our services.How can we fulfill our future tasks? To get more knowledge is the only answer.10

Rome Wasn’t Built in a Day

Learning English is like building a house.Laying a strong foundation（打基础）is the first and most important step.In other words, you should read and speak English every day.Memorizing new words and phrases is also helpful.Like building a house, learning English takes some time.So don’t be impatient.Remember “Rome wasn’t built in a day.11

Television Addiction

Television provides us with a wide range of information and entertainment.However, it’s a pity that it may also have a bad influence on young minds.For instance, some TV shows have too much violence and crime.These programs may lead youngsters astray(误入迷途).It is easy for students to become addicted to the excitement of these programs and neglect（忽视）their homework.Parents must, therefore, keep an eye on what their children watch.

第四篇：高考作文欣赏

时间都去哪儿了

◆文题精练◆

阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

“门前老树长新芽，院里枯木又开花，半生存了好多话，藏进了满头白发。??时间都去哪儿了?还没好好感受年轻就老了，生儿养女一辈子，满脑子都是孩子哭了笑了。”在《时间都去哪儿了》质朴的旋律中，有人想到赵薇的“致青春”，追忆我们逝去的青春韶华;有人想到父亲母亲，深深皱纹浓浓亲情;有人想起胡风创作的《时间开始了》，燃起热情与希望，脚步从容，重新出发??

要求：结合材料内容，选准角度，明确立意，自选文体(诗歌除外)，不少于800字。

【写作指导】

这则材料作文，具有时代感和共鸣性。马年春节，这首歌从上至下感动了中国人，温暖的歌词诉说着岁月流转中的种种故事：关于亲情，关于时间，关于青春，关于奋斗??句句歌词直戳心扉。考生发

挥空间很大，立意角度丰富，可以写孝顺父母，写感恩，也可以写把握青春，珍惜时间，坚持奋斗等，主题开放，思维角度发散，很符合高考作文命题的宗旨。行文可以议论亦可以记叙，或阐发自己的独到见解，或分享动人的情感。总之，选择记叙文或散文体，要做到“以情动人”;选择议论文体，要做到“以理服人”。

【佳作示例】

赢过时间

时间记录着世界。

时间每天都在开始。何须伤感时间都去哪儿了?只要我们的脚步踏得结实、从容，既不左顾右盼、也不走走停停，就随时可以整装出发。

时间的打磨，使得人们一天天变得成熟而宽容。曼德拉在狱中关了27年。人们可曾想过27年有多久?有一篇网文《我奋斗了18年，才和你在一起喝咖啡》曾经风靡一时，不同出身和背景的人在社会上奋斗，路径与付出自然不同，总拿自己和别人比，会永远扭曲。坦然面向世界，平静对待自己，才能让心灵走向高贵。一如初次入狱的伟人曼德拉正是43岁，他坚持学习、锻炼、传播信仰，把牢狱当课堂。27年过去，我们沉于世故与平庸，曼德拉依然光彩照人。人家才叫赢，把时间赢到了手。

赢得时间不容易，要与时间比耐心。无法忘记那名英国警官梅耶的故事。21岁，这位骑单车吹口哨的年轻人当了警察。那一年，他接手了一桩杀人案。历时52年，73岁的梅耶将罪犯捉拿归了案。这52年，他没有一刻闲着：翻阅了十几米厚的卷宗，打了30万个电话，踏遍四大洲的土地，行程可绕地球20圈。52年的时光无时无刻不在消磨着他，但他没有败阵。他后背一定刺了四个字:耐心无敌。

时间是我们行为的坐标，又是万物演变的见证。1988年，一群杂志同行沿着河西走廊考察、观光。车行戈壁，四周都是地平线，东北的冯编辑突然叫停了车，端着相机四处拍。同行们一脸困惑：什么景观也没有，在拍什么?冯编辑严肃回答：在拍历史，拍时间。的确，沧海桑田，在地球演变中不过一瞬。坐在阳关旁的坡上，久久望着坡下开阔的古战场。一些人跑下去捡拾传说中的战争残片了，一些人却想象着千年前的厮杀：时间涤荡了一切，千古风流，谁有耐心陪它到如今，谁就是赢家。

时间开始了，也许它走得跌跌撞撞，也曾经让我们遍体鳞伤。但终究时间不会辜负人们，尽管那步履走得艰难，走得蹒跚。86年前，为了验证沥青是液体，物理学家把它加热后倒进了漏斗，待它凝固后滴落。86年间，沥青一共滴下了8滴，第9滴孕育了12载，已呈现出完美的泪滴形。这真是个考验人类耐心的实验。

曾记否?《他们》的故事主人公，兄弟俩走了不同的路，一辈子陌生寡言，知道弟弟死去半年后的一天，哥哥哭了。兄弟毕竟是手足，他们看似冰硬的情谊在岁月的漏斗里逐渐成型，虽然历时长久，终有一天突然滴落。

时间不能改变一切，一切终究赢在自己。

【点评】关于“时间”的话题，高考考生曾经写过，但主旨和事例都很局限，少有创新和突破。本文旨意深刻，例证素材新颖，尤其是运用数据进行对比，突出时间纵深，赋予文章立体质感。文章最大的亮点是行文层次和语言风格，言辞质朴却说理透彻，相对于考生的华丽辞藻和规范结构，本文更真实，更有说服力，更震撼人心，引发共鸣。

品位

【文题】

品位本意是指对事物有分辨与鉴赏的能力。生活中它可以是形象的展示，也可以是内在气质的流露，还可以是人生价值的体现??人们不断追求生活的品位，精神的品位??请以“品位”为话题，自选角度，自定立意，写一篇不少于800字的文章。(文体不限，诗歌除外)

【写作指导】

以“品位”为话题写文章，最容易出的问题是把“品位”和“品味”混淆了。“品位”是名词，它的意思是：①矿石中有用元素或有用矿物含量的百分率。②泛指人或事物的品质、水平。而“品味”的意思是：①尝试滋味;品尝②仔细体会;玩味③(物品的)品质和风味④格调和趣味。“品味”的第四种释义和“品位”基本是一样的，但是“品味”的范围大于“品位”，如果在写作的时候完全忽视这些差别，就容易写得文不对题。有的同学干脆在写作中抛开“品位”二字，连书写都成了“品味”，那就很难写出合格的考场文章了。

“品位”有高下，追求高的品位应该是一种共识。但什么是高品位?高品位的表象和本质是什么?一些人眼中的高品位真的是高品位么?为什么要追求高品位?怎样追求高品位?追求哪个领域的高品位?怎样才能追求到高品位?追求到高品位又怎样???同学们要练习拿到一个文题能提出各种问题，然后选择其中让自己有话可讲，有认识会分析的一个或几个问题展开自己的文章。

【优秀例文】

品位

树木花草，总有良莠之分;世间人物，自然也有品位高下之别。

高品位源于良好的环境。

蓬生麻中，不扶自直;白砂在涅，与之俱黑。品位的高下，很多时候与人的生存环境密切相关。书香门第，多有大家闺秀;市井小院，则出小家碧玉。虽说各有可爱之处，但高下之别自不待言。

出身是不能选择的，但后天选择一个良好的发展环境，则与品位的形成关系重大。近朱者赤，近墨者黑。孟母三迁，为的就是给孩子寻求一个更佳的环境。虽说不可能只靠搬家就搬出个“亚圣”，但倘若孟母不迁，则世间恐怕要少个文化的星斗，多个平庸的吹鼓手了。高品位还源于高超的技艺，广博的学识。

山歌村笛，虽不乏情趣，但终欠缺技巧，难免呕哑嘲哳难为听;琵琶女技艺超群，奏长安坊乐，则让人“如听仙乐耳暂明”，品位之高下是基于学识与技巧的。高山流水、阳春白雪、诗词歌赋??高品位的艺术形式哪一个不是代代艺人、学者用毕生心血浇灌出来的?

司马迁通史精文，成就了“史家之绝唱，无韵之离骚”;诸葛亮上知天文，下晓地理，中通古今，赢得了“千载谁堪伯仲间”的至誉。鲁迅知理达文，钱钟书学贯中西。历数这些高品位的名家大家，哪一个不是以高超的技艺，广博的学识作为自己的厚重基垫的?高品位更源于崇高的道德，伟大的理想。

旗帜举得高，可以引领前进;鼓声擂得高，可以振奋士气。然而，利剑悬得高、钢刀举得高却只能带来更大的危险，更可怕的灾难。没有理想的正确指引，没有道德的适时约束，品位的高下就失去了本质的意义。这时某种意义上“高品位”的人反倒成了“危险品”。风流倜傥，写得佳文美赋的公子子兰，勾结权贵，逼得屈子投江。擅长书法，自创宋体的秦桧，残害忠良，落个千古骂名。曾被称为“青年才俊”的汪精卫，出卖国家，出卖灵魂，落个“第一大汉奸”的“美誉”。道德的残缺，理想的迷失，使这些“品位”不低的人，最终被历史的车轮不留情面的碾入污泥之中，永世不得超生。品位的航船，没有崇高的道德，伟大的理想为舵，就必定误入歧途。

寻求佳境，增长学识，修正道德，树立理想。自然，你就会成为一个高品位的人。

【教师点评】

谈“品位”的角度很多。同学们大多很神往那种“有品位的生活”，可是怎样才能成为一个真正高品位的而不是矫揉造作的人呢?高品位到底从何而来?这篇文章做了一个比较全面的分析。环境、学识、道德和理想，从客观到主观，从浅层到深层。作者观点鲜明，思路清晰，论证有力，语言精练，把高品位从哪里来分析得比较透彻。

关注·思考·干预

【高考作文猜想】：

阅读下面材料，根据自己的感悟和联想，写一篇不少于800字的文章。

经常有媒体报道注水肉引发的**，也有不同媒体引用专家分析注水肉的危害，可每到重大的节日，我们总会看到各地集中力量重点整治注水肉的新闻??对此，你有什么样的感悟和思考?

要求：①选准角度，自定立意;②自拟题目;③除诗歌外，文体不限，文体特征鲜明;④不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围。

【命题思路分析】：

20XX年以来，山东省的高考语文作文的命制总体呈现一种稳定性和延续性，除20XX年是以“这世界需要你”为题进行写作的命题作文之外，其余三年均是以材料作文的方式呈现。

这些材料作文，具有以下几个鲜明的特征：一是多维度多视角的解读，突出考查学生思考的广度和灵活度，又便于考查部分优秀学生的思考深度;二是材料都能够与我们的现实生活紧密结合，贴近生活没有

太多的隔膜感，既能够引导学生关注社会生活，不做“两耳不闻窗外事”的书呆子，又能够让绝大多数学生有话可说;三是材料本身具有一定的“隐喻性”，都体现了一定的思辨色彩，能够较好地考查学生的辩证思维能力，引导学生理性地思考社会人生;四是都在“文体不限”的前提下又突出“文体特征鲜明”，既给了学生自主选择写作文体的自由，又突出了写作文体的规范——写什么文体是你的自由，一旦选择了就必须合乎这种文体的规范。

20XX年是引用了列夫·托尔斯泰一句富含哲理的名言“人生的一切变化，一切魅力，一切美都是由光明和阴影构成的。”引导学生能够辩证地思考生活中的“变化”“魅力”“美”都与生活中的“光明”和“阴影”密切相关，任何事物都具有两面性，看待事情应该一分为二，任何“变化”都有“好”和“坏”的因子，不要极端地看待生活中发生的事情;“光明”和“阴影”共同组成了生活的“魅力”和“美”20XX是命题作文，“这个世界需要你”体现了每个人都有自己的存在价值，每个人(当然包括自己)都对这个世界有着这样那样的意义，凸显了每一个人的“重要性”，引导学生认识生命个体的担当和责任意识。

20XX引用的是孙中山的一段名言，20XX的材料则用了文化名人铁凝、莫言对待“批评”“找错”的态度，这两个材料虽然看起来离得较远差别较大，但其宗旨依然还是紧紧扣住了“责任”“担当”“气度”“胸襟”，意在引导学生正确认识“生命的价值”和“责任感”。

综上分析，近几年的山东高考作文，虽然在命题角度和方法上各有所“变”,但在核心的命题立意上却“一脉相承”——多角度解读材料，理性地思考社会人生，突出人生观、价值观，彰显责任感与担当的气度。

【命题材料解读】：

1、注水肉对人们的生命健康有危害，这是人人皆知的事情，明知有危害，为什么还会有注水肉出现，屡禁不绝?从商家的角度分析，注水肉增加了商家的利润，为了个人私利而不顾别人的生命健康，在他们谋了利的同时却损害了别人的健康权利，围绕这类思考，可以写“良知”“职业道德”“操守”“底线”“诚信”“价值”??拓开一些，不光注水肉，假药、假酒、假荣誉、假学历，几乎涉及生活的各个层面，都有鲜活的材料，也从另一个方面表现了问题的严重程度。

2、如果从消费者的角度分析，发现注水肉之后是自认倒霉，是退回商家了之，是有人出来甚至是人人出来较真，甚至举报到相关部门来维护自身权利，也许会显麻烦，也许不想一人出头大家受利，也许根本就没想这么多??从这个角度思考，可以写“规则”“维权”“见怪不怪与见怪必究”“责任”“素养”“文化”。

3、如果从职能部门的角度分析，这样的事件屡屡暴光，有没有应对措施?有没有相应的法律法规出台?有了法律法规之后，有没有落到实处?为什么屡查屡有屡禁不绝?这种“一阵风”式的工作作风到底是一种姿态还是一种“钓鱼”谋利?从这个角度出发，可以写“工作作风”“制度的健全与落实”“利益”“责任与担当”。

在对材料进行解读时，注水肉事件只是社会生活中的一个“点”，我们当然应该首先抓住这个“点”，但又不能仅仅停留在这个“点”上，要有所辐射，有所引申，要从事情的表面深入挖掘，要从材料出发，联系社会生活，既要学会细致地观察生活，又能对所观察的现实生活有所思考，并最终能用自己的思考发出自己的声音反过来干预生活：这应该是我们追求的方向，同时也理应是我们教育的终极目的之一。

【范文示例】：

归去来兮，迷途的灵魂

水可以注入各种各样的肉里，卖出肉的价钱;水可以灌入各式各类瓶里，卖出名酒的价钱;当然，水也可以注进各种各样的针剂里，注射到人们的肉体里，卖出药的价钱??水似乎成了弄虚作假的罪魁祸首，成了危害社会的元凶，孰不知，真正的元凶不是水，是人，是那些双眼只看到金钱却看不到生命心里只装着利益却装不下良知的人们!

金钱至上，利欲熏心，人心不古，物欲横流。本该温暖柔软的心灵突然变得冷漠变得凶暴变得像顽石像钢铁一般的坚硬。热衷财富，却忽略了古老民族积淀了几千年的优良传统，失去了诚信，丧失了责任，沦陷了道德底线，泯灭了良知，为了金钱，每个人都可以不再是人，成为兽，成为吸血啖肉敲骨榨髓的兽。这不是哪一个人的悲哀，这是一个国家一个民族一个时代的悲哀!

归去来兮，迷路未远的灵魂!

人最宝贵的是生命，生命属于我们每个人都只有一次。生命和健康是任何人都无权剥夺不能践踏的神圣权利。可是，在当今社会，在那些唯利是图的人们眼里，别人的健康不重要，别人的痛苦和欢乐不重要，甚至别人的生命也不重要，只有自己赚钱才重要。眼里只有金钱而没有健康和生命，心里只装着自己却没有为别人留下一点点位置，这是一种什么样的价值观!这种被金钱绑架的灵魂扭曲到了什么地步，如果我们的社会还没有引起高度的关注，或者虽有所察觉却没有引起足够的重视，那么，我们的社会将是一个什么样的社会?!在此，我突然想起了小品中沈腾的那句名言：“人倒了还可以扶起来，人心倒了可就扶不起来了!”这岂是危言耸听?

人，应该是人的天堂，应该是别人的天使;人，绝不应该是人的地狱，绝不应该成为别人的魔鬼。

如果每个人的眼里都只看到利益，如果每个人的心里都只装着自己，那么，最终将是你欺骗着别人却也同时被别人欺骗，你咒骂着别人却也同时被别人咒骂，你提防着别人却也同时被别人提防，那可真应了一句话，城市是车的海洋，是人的沙漠，游逛在大街上的哪有人啊，全都是欲望，全都是冷漠全都是提防全都是算计，生活在这样的世界里，你还会找到生活的快乐吗，你还能感受到人心的温暖吗，就算是穿金戴银坐拥珠宝无数，你还能体会到生命的幸福吗?

回来吧，迷途的人们!

找回你丢失的诚信，让人人能够坦诚相待;找回久违的微笑，让人人能够感受到对方的关爱和体贴;打开紧闭的心锁，让人人能够愉快地交流??

人只有生活在人的世界里，才会快乐和幸福。

第五篇：经典英语高考作文欣赏（范文模版）

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Advertisements can be seen everywhere in the modern society.Large billboards（广告牌）are built on the roadsides or on top of the high buildings.Newspapers become thicker and thicker, for pages of the paper are covered with advertisements.TV shows us endless advertisements day and night.Advertisements force people to notice their products..When a new product is developed, it is the manufacturer’s or seller’s duty to let the public know what the new product is;what the specialties(特点，特别之处)are and what the manufacturer’s or the seller’s guarantees（保证，承诺）are to the products.Surely, advertisements are like bridges between customers and manufacturers or sellers.（虚假广告）can also be found at the same time.When a person has been cheated once, he can’t believe advertisements once more, or at least he can’t believe advertisements fully.People have become wiser and learn to use their brains when facing a beautiful and attractive advertisement.2

On Test and Test Taking

The purpose of a test is to check how much we students have learned about a（新获得的知识）permanent, but also enable us to find what needs to spend more time improving.But some students do not deal with test correctly.Some of them are afraid of.They cheat even at the risk of being caught on exams.Though cheating might give one “better grades”, it adds nothing to one’s knowledge.This dishonest behavior will do one more harm than good.I think that we go to college in order to have our further studies, and prepare us to be qualified for the future job.Therefore, we should take a correct attitude towards test.As long as we study diligently（勤奋地）and review our lessons regularly, we are sure to serve its real purpose.3

The Dictionary

The dictionary is a living teacher.Whenever you come across a new word, just consult（查找，参考）it and you will get a clear definition（定义，解说）.Every student, whether attending school or self-taught（自学的）dictionary …）.As a study aid(辅助工具), a dictionary is convenient, inexpensive and almost omniscient(无所不知的).Language skills will develop with your constant use of various dictionaries.The more you use them, the more familiar you will become with them.Sooner or later, you will be quite skilled in finding the page, scanning the entries and locating the exact meaning of the new words.But you should have one thing in mind.As a

language student, you can never(太过于依赖)dictionaries;basic language skills do not come from dictionaries, but from your practice.Expose yourself to the language by listening, speaking, reading and writing more, and that is the only way to the mastery(掌握)of a language.The Way to Achieve Success

Many people say that they much of …归功于）the cultivation of certain good habits in early life.In forming good habits, I think we should pay attention to four things, that is honesty, industry（勤奋）, enthusiasm（热情）and thrift（节俭）.“Honesty is the best policy.” This is a proverb to which we must pay attention.There are so many temptations in society that through a little carelessness we.But when we are honest, people will not be dishonest to us.Industry gives every man and woman, every boy and girl, proper work to do.To do nothing is going to ruin oneself.Enthusiasm is a great force.One’s soul will expand（激发 膨胀）if one devotes.The difficulties in our way are tremendous, but what can we not accomplish, if with enthusiasm? , 宣布, 提出）the advantages of thrift.Since we live in the world in which money is a very powerful thing, we should always try to save a portion（部分）of our earnings for future use.There are the four things to which we must pay attention.It is only by this way that we can achieve success.TV—a Blessing(福)or a Curse(祸)?

As TV enters into more and more families, people begin to wonder about its advantages and disadvantages.Some believe it is a blessing, others hold（持…观点）that it is a curse to society.TV, as a 大众媒体), can bring to people new information on economics, culture, arts, and many other fields.People can enjoy their favorite programs at home.In some countries, some TV stations provide such programs as looking for dangerous criminals(罪犯)and lost children, helping to find an ideal(理想的)lover, which are quite beneficial to society, and others provide various useful seminars(研讨会)for people of various ages and social status.But on the other hand, TV may exert bad influence on people.Some programs are full of violence.As a result, people, especially juveniles(青少年), are led to 犯罪沉湎于…)TV programs that some even neglect(忽略)their duties.In my opinion, the attitude toward TV all depends on oneself.People should choose those programs which are useful, and can bring to them the sense of beauty.