第一篇:考研作文(经典版)
I was profoundly shocked by what I have seen in the above thought-provoking cartoon/picture.As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing that ….Thereis no denying that the cartoon/picture does mirror a prevalent phenomenon in contemporary /our daily society.Obviously, what the drawing symbolically illustrates is that ….It would be no exaggeration to say that, in any period or in any conditions that can now be foreseen, X is utmost significance to us humans.Unfortunatelly,….Why is there such a phenomenon? A couple of reasons could account for it.Foronething, withthe miraculous economic take-off broughtaboutbythethirtyyears of reformand opening-up, X isbecomingverysignificanttous.For another, thereareincreasingnumberofpeoplewho arenotrealizingXisindispensabletous..If we turn a blind eye to the problem, our community will go from bad to worse.Accordingly, it is high time that we took measures to tackle the problem.Both the government and citizens should make the efforts.Our authorities, most important of all, need to enact strict law to do ….In addition, we can cultivate the people’s awareness that X is essential to us.Only in this way can we succeed in solvingtheproblem, andmakeourworlddimensional, colorfulandvigorous.Also, I am confident that the prospect we are looking forward to will be both brilliant and encouraging.
第二篇:考研作文
主持人:考研英语是考研所有科目中的重中之重,之所以说是重头戏,是因为对于很多考生来说,考研的成败很大程度取决于英语成绩的高低。英语试卷中,分值最大的有两部分,一是阅读,另一个是作文。有不少同学在网上留言栏里,对于英语作文复习方法和提高途径表示疑惑,希望得到专家的指点。今天的辉煌大讲堂活动,我们荣幸的请到了国家考研英语阅卷组专家,全国考研英语辅导专家,万学·海文考研英语资深辅导名师吴耀武老师。吴老师,欢迎您来参加我们的活动。
吴耀武:我也很荣幸来参加万学·海文辉煌大讲堂活动。我将向09年准备考研的同学们说一下考研英语大小作文的复习方法。
主持人:吴老师作为西安外国语学院的名师,长期从事英语教学,在考研英语方面有着极深的研究和丰富的教学经验,在英语阅读与写作方面尤为突出。吴老师,近几年考研英语试卷的作文题命题方向是怎样的呢?您能和同学们讲一讲吗?
吴耀武:近些年考研英语作文写作部分分两类:大作文、小作文。小作文一般给出作文内容要点,以求职信,辞职信,道歉信和感谢信等为命题体裁,要求考生按照提示写清楚要表达的要点。考生在写小作文时,只要表意明确就可以了,不需要复杂华丽的文采修饰。
大作文类型,从文体上看,可以划分为说明文和议论文,因为考这类体裁的写作比较符合形势发展的实际需要,在学习、工作和生活中,人们所书写的材料大多也是说明文或议论文;从选题范围上看,大都是目前人们最为关注的问题,反映了当前社会的热门话题或可以用热门话题来透视的哲理性问题。通过对近些年的真题分析;从出题形式上看,在平稳中逐渐趋于多样化,写作题目易于理解,无论以文字的形式还是以图表、图画的形式出现都浅显易懂。
主持人:相信大家通过吴老师对考研英语作文的考点已有大体地了解了。吴老师,作为国家考研英语阅卷组专家,您对近些年考卷问题应该较为了解,您能集中问题来谈一谈考研英语作文应该怎样复习吗?
吴耀武:作文对考生扎实的语言功底有很高的要求。同学们在复习阶段要注意以下几点:
1、适当加强阅读量
很多考生无法清晰完整的用英语来表达自己的意思。之所以出现这样的情况原因在于平时阅读量小。在这里,我只想告诉大家,当你看得多了,记得多了,表达才能游刃有余。历年的写作考题的内容和主题基本都与当年的热点话题有一定的关系,因此,你要对社会热点问题、国际国家大事有所知晓,对于比较热点、比较重要的主题,可以有目的地进行搜集整理。另外,平时多阅读英语报纸杂志,可以帮助你掌握更多的话题资源。你读得越多,在潜移默化中,你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快。
2、背诵经典文段
在平时阅读训练中,把一些经典文段整理到一个本子上,抽时间背诵它们,不能不说是积极备战快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径。考生可以选择历年真题的范文和一些与真题作文相近的文章进行背诵,要在理解文章内容的基础上有重点、有目的地进行背诵。把结构合理、适用于多种语言环境的句子背下来不但有助于你理解文章,更是能够在无形中增强你的表达能力。同学们也可以拿一些英语原著名篇来读、背,这样可以加强自己的语感,使自己的表达更加地道。
3、加强练习
加强实际写作练习有着至关重要的作用。考生最好能找有范文的题目进行练习,以便写完后能与范文进行对比。我们练习的重点是要检查文章是否切题,行文是否流畅,有无严重的语法错误等,同时通过与范文的比较可以及时发现自己的短处在哪。
主持人:吴老师,据说您在授课上教学性很强,对命题规律把握性也很强,那么,就您总结过的作文命题特点,您能否给考生们一些权威的作文复习攻略和技巧上的指导呢?
吴耀武:好作文应该是紧扣文章主题,遵循特定的文体格式,选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构,内容统一、连贯,语法、拼写、标点正确,用词恰当。
研究生入学考试要求学生在规定时间内完成两篇文章,从写作的过程来看,对于每一个给定题目每个考生都会有各种各样的想法,但100字或200字的文章所能容纳的内容是有限的,考生必须迅速思考,尽快进入角色。因此必要的写作策略对于考生来说有着举足轻重的作用。
1、认真审题
考研作文忌信手拈来,提笔就写,根本不审题,想到哪儿就写到哪儿,置考试要求于不顾,作文第一步是仔细审题,考生要仔细阅读试题要求及相关信息,如图表,图画,数字等,准确把握出题者意图。
2、列出提纲,慎重落笔
虽说考试时间有限,但是切忌匆忙落笔开始胡写乱诌。你可以先花一点时间列个提纲,对原始材料分析归纳后要形成一个基本的框架。文章打算分几段写,每段大概怎样写,自数控制在多少,开头段落是道破主题,点名要旨,引人入胜还是先给出主题一般的背景情况和对主题进行浓缩的陈述呢,中间段落和结尾有怎样写呢。这些都要心中有数。
列好提纲开始落笔写作的过程中,要注意如下几点:
1)突出重点,注重逻辑
考生在选择材料时应注重选择那些最能体现中心思想、最具代表性的材料,这些材料要共同表达一致的信息。选材时切忌胡子眉毛一把抓。词语堆积,不伦不类。前后及段落之间在逻辑关系上要紧密衔接,不能把没有任何逻辑关系的词放在一起。可以用恰当的关联词把思想连贯的表达出来。
2)用词准确,语法正确
考试时要特别注意语法,此语,语气,标点符号等,为了避免太多单词拼写错误,语法错误,不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词,不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇,短语,句式。
3)题目要求要达到
字数要符合作文题目要求,否则很难拿高分。
如果时间允许,可以在答完后进行修改。检查一下词汇拼写是否准确,构句语法等是否正确。
主持人:听了您这番讲解,连我都受益匪浅。非常感谢您在百忙之中抽出时间,给予09年准备考研的考生的作文复习如此权威的学习建议。
吴耀武:今天我也很高兴能为09年考研的同学们提供些考研英语作文复习的建议,希望我的建议能对同学们有帮助。
主持人:今天的“辉煌大讲堂”活动到这里就结束了,朋友们,再见!
第三篇:考研作文
A woman with a master’s degree in English finds a job as a salesclerk in a large department store after a six-month search in trying to find a position in her field.She earns 1000 a month.A man with a double B.A in philosophy and history accepts a $ 600-a-month position as a beginning file clerk for an insurance company.Thousands of others, college graduates, register for unemployment.College no longer brings the rewards, financial or professional, that it once promised.“Overqualified and underpaid”,a term once employed to describes the average college graduates in the united states, is currently and frequently applied to their Chinese counterparts,some of whose new name is “ant tribe”.They were taught that knowledge could change their fate, but they find that is not true.If their dreams collapse and if they cannot even find a job, and they cannot find a good explanation for their failure,it could be dangerous for the whole society and they may oppose society,although nobody sees great threat to social stability so far.“一个英语专业的研究生在自己的专业领域中找了六个月的工作后,最后在一家大型的商场做了一名导购,月薪1000。一名有着哲学和历史双学士学位的本科毕业生在一家保险公司从最底层的业务员做起月薪600。就是这样,也还有很多大学生都还没有就业。大学教育不会再带来曾经人们想象的那种经济和专业的回报了。“资历过高,但薪酬过低”这是曾经用来形容美国的大学毕业生的一个俗语,现在经常用到了中国大学毕业生的身上。中国的毕业生还有了一个新的名字—蚁族。他们从小被教导,知识能改变命运,但现在发现这不是真的。如果他们的梦想崩塌了,如果他们甚至连一份工作都找不到,并且对自己的失败还找不到一个好的解释,这对于社会而言将是十分危险的,他们有可能会站到社会的对立面。虽然到现在为止还没有人认为这会对社会的稳定造成危害。
Meanwhile , that potential threat has not escaped the attention of the government.Government is moving to head off any danger.State Council has issued several notices urging ministerial and regional authorities to put college graduates at the top of their employment agenda.同时,政府察觉到了这一潜在的威胁并着手消除这样的危险,国务院今年发出了好几次通知敦促中央部委和地方政府把大学生就业放在就业议程的首位。
第四篇:考研作文感谢信
e 感谢信
一.感谢信常用词汇:
gratitude n.感激,感谢 indebted adj.感恩的 hospitality n.友好 reciprocate v.报答 take the opportunity 利用这个机会 obliged adj.感激的 heartfelt adj.衷心的,真心实意的二.常用句式:
1.it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for...就??能够表达我对您的衷心感谢,我感到非常高兴。2.you really added greatly to my convenience and pleasure of the whole trip.您真的给我整个行程带来了极大的方便与快乐。3.thank you again for your kindness and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality.再次感谢您的好意,希望有机会能够回报您的盛情款待。4.i am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help...我写信来表达对您的感谢,在您的帮助下?? 5.it is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of...正是您不遗余力的帮助,我才得以获得这个??的绝佳机会。6.i appreciate it more than i can say.感激之情无以言表。
7.i deeply appreciate your sincere help.我非常感谢您的诚恳帮助。8.i take this opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.我借此机会对您给予我的帮助表示深深的感谢。9.please accept my sincere appreciation for...对??,请接受我真挚的感谢。10.many thanks for your kindness and hospitality.多谢您的好意和盛情。
11.again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you.再次向您表示谢意。12.thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and i am looking forward to seeing you soon.再次感谢您的盛情款待,并期待不久会见到您。13.i wish to express my profound appreciation for...我对??深表谢意。
14.many thanks for your generous cooperation.谢谢贵方的真诚合作。
15.i am obliged to you for your unselfish assistance during...感谢你在??期间给予我无私的帮助。
三.感谢信的内容:
感谢信是就某事向收信人表示感谢的书信
四.感谢信的写作结构: 1)说明感谢的原因,表达感谢之情。2)可具体谈对方的帮助,以及自己的感受或这些帮助对自己的意义。3)再次致谢,或进一步表明自己希望回报对方。
五、写作要点:
1)语言要真诚感人,感激之情要恰到好处,不要过于夸张。2)建议在结尾表达希望回报对方的愿望。
六、黄金模板: i would like to convey in this sincerely yours,七、经典范文 directions: suppose you were taken good care of by mr.johnson, a friend of your father’s, when you visited london the week before.write a letter to mr.johnson to express your gratitude in about 100 words.do not sign your own name at the end of your letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the address.dear mr.johnson, i would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for looking after me when i visited london last week.without your help, i wouldnt have enjoyed myself so much.knowing i would visit london alone, i was really anxious at first.however, i felt much relieved when my father told me you, his best friend, would take care of me.despite your tight schedule, you picked me up at the airport and took me to many places of interest.the sights of london and your generous hospitality really impressed me.sincerely yours, li ming
八、热点作文 directions: 考研英语小作文模板(感谢信): dear______, i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for __________________(感谢的原因).if it had not been for your assistance in __________________(对方给你的具体帮助), i fear that i would have been___________________(没有对方帮助时的后果).every one agrees that it was you who___________________________(给出细节).again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!please accept my gratitude.yours sincerely li ming 2.6感谢信 thanks letter[2010 年真题,今年不太可能再考] 1, outline para1, s1, 写信目的:感谢,thanks para2,s1,原因1:友好热情 s2,原因2:慷慨帮助 s3,原因3:友谊 s4,内容:感谢方式
para3,s1,再次感谢 s2,祝福 key words:generous 慷慨的;2, example dear judy, i’m writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my thanks for your warm reception [during my recent visit to your country].your friendly warmth made it possible that i have a pleasant time in america.and it was your generous help that allowed me the chance to know the american culture better.in addition, i consider in an honor for me to make a friends of you.i hope that you would visit our country in due course so that i could enjoy the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship.please accept my sincere thanks.wish you all the best.yours truly, li ming dear xxx, i would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your kindness to receive me when i participated in an exchange program in usa.your generous help made it possible that i had a very pleasant stay and a chance to know american cultures better.besides, i think it is an honor for me to make friends with you and i will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever i go.i do hope that you will visit china one day, so that i could have the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship.i feel obliged to thank you again.sincerely yours, zhang wei 9.感谢信
感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢。
写作策略:
感谢信还有浓厚的感情色彩,具有比较浓的人情味,因此可操作性不是太强。考生即便学习了一篇范文,但对另外一道此类题目也是可能不知该从何处入手。实际上感谢信(还包
括表扬信)从内容上恰恰与投诉信相反,因此可以直接套用投诉信的写法,只需将投诉信主体段落对投诉理由的具体说明改为对感谢或表扬理由的具体说明即可。例如,一道题目说代我在一个旅馆信了一段时间,但方方面面都不尽如人意,回家后你和家人都闹肚子,请你写一封投诉信。而另外一道题则是说你在一家旅馆住了一段时间,在那里度过了一段美好的时光,请你写一封感谢信。这两封信在主体段落上都可以从几个方面对该旅馆进行投诉或感谢,都可以从服务、饮食卫生、客房环境等几个方面来说明投诉或感谢的理由,只需将投诉信的不满改为感谢信的满意即可。由此可知,只要掌握了投诉信的写法,感谢信也应当是手到擒来。
感谢信开头段常用句式和套话 i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for...i am writing to express my thanks for...i am writing to show my sincere appreciation for...i would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...i feel deeply indebted to you and i really dont know how to thank you enough for your help.感谢信结尾段常用句式和套话 i must thank you again for your generous help.i am most grateful for your selfless donation.my true gratitude is beyond the words description.i feel most obliged to thank you once more.please accept my gratitude, now and always.★例:
directions: after being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person.write a letter: 1)mentioning what happened in the accident, 2)telling the person about your recovery, and 3)expressing your thanks.you should write with no less than 100 words on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use li ming instead.you do not need to write the address.范文: dear john, i am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when i was knocked off my bike by a taxi.if it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, i fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish and to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach.but you showed by your actions that you are an exception.yours sincerely, li ming
七、感谢信参考范文
directions: while your family was on vacation, your friend, mary looked after your dog, smart.now you came back, write a letter to her to show your gratitude.your letter should be no less than 100 words.you don’t need to write the address.don’t sign your own name at the end of the letter;use “li ming” instead.dear mary, i am writing to express our heartfelt thanks for your taking good care of smart while we were on holiday.he was such a happy dog when we got home.we knew he must have had lots of loving attention.when we picked up him from the kennel in your home he would whimper and carry on for hours.you not only saved us some money, but also spared us the worry about him while we were away.your kind help is very appreciated, not only by smart, but also by our whole family as well.please accept our thanks again.yours sincerely, li ming(107 words)考研英语作文指之感谢信
范文
directions: while your family was on vacation, your friend, cathy looked after your dog, smart.now you came back, write a letter to her to show your gratitude.your letter should be no less than 100 words.you dont need to write the address.dont sign your own name at the end of the letter, use emily instead.dear cathy, i am writing to express our heartfelt thanks for taking good care of smart while we were on holiday.he was such a happy dog when we got home;we knew he must have had lots of loving attention.when we used to pick up from the kennel he would whimper and carry on for hours.you not only saved us some money, you also spared us the worry of how he was doing while we were away.your kind help is very much appreciated, not only by smart, but also by our whole family as well.yours truly, emily 译文
我写信是要谢谢在我们度假期间你帮助我们照顾小狗。我回来时看见它是那么高兴,就知道你对它一定很好。以前每次度假回来,去寄存中心接它时它总是非常难过,要持续几个小时。
你不但帮我们省了钱,也使我们免于对于它的担心。对于你的帮助我们都非常感谢。
你真诚的:艾米丽
考研英语作文指导之道歉信
范文
directions: one of your pen friends, john, will be visiting your city.however, for some reasons, you can not meet him at the airport on time.write a letter asking to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to recognize you.your letter should be no less than 100 words.you dont need to write the address.dont sign your own name at the end of the letter, use alice instead.dear john, i am eagerly looking forward to your visit to our city.after all these years of writing to each other, i can not wait to see you.however, i regret to inform you that i will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.the reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the earliest i can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land.will you please wait for me in the arrival lounge? you can have breakfast while you wait.by the way, as we have never met i must tell you home to identify me: i am of 165cm tall and have a long hair.in addition, i will wear a white skirt and carry a china daily at hand.hope we can meet soon.sincerely yours, alice 译文
亲爱的约翰: 我非常期待着你来参观我们的城市。这么多年来我们一直通信,我早就想见到你了。但是很抱歉我不能按时到机场接你。
因为你的飞机是一大早就到达机场,而我最早也要1小时后才能到。你能不能在旅客休息室等我,你可以利用这段时间吃早饭。
随便说一句,因为我们没过面,我得告诉你怎么找我:我大概1.65米,长发。另外我会穿一件白色的裙子,手上拿一份中国日报。
希望早点见到你。
你真挚的:艾丽丝
作文模版
(十)感谢信 dear xiaoqiang: i am writing to extend my sincere gratitude.i am referring to the fact that you have donated a lot of money and food(given more help/made great contributions)to the victims in the earthquake of si chuan.if it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid,i fear that the although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish,we see very few people practice what they preach.if there were more people like you,this world would be a much nicer place.once again,thank you for all you have done for us.yours sincerely, li ming(107)
考研英语作文指之感谢信篇三:考研英语写作小作文之感谢信
考研英语写作小作文之感谢信
在考研英语的part a 小作文部分,书信作为考查的重点所在,种类繁多。在前面我们曾就以题目为例,详细地解析过建议信、投诉信和咨询信的写作方法及其注意事项。今天本文就对考研英语小作文中的第四类书信——感谢信——进行深入的分析。
感谢信,英文中称为 letter of thanks或letter of gratitude。顾名思义,就是写信人因得到某人或某单位的帮助、支持或关心而向对方表示感谢的信件。书写时语言要真诚感人,表达感激时要恰到好处,切忌过于夸张、让人心生虚伪之感。
一般来说,在考研英语中,感谢信主体部分的写作可按照三个步骤进行,即“三步走”策略:
首段:提出感谢,简述事由;中段:具体帮助,自身感受;尾段:再次感谢,期待回报。
例题:
directions:
you should write neatly on answer sheet 2.do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.use “li ming” instead.do not write the address.题目要求向孙教授写一封信,感谢他在自己申请耶鲁大学时所给予的推荐。根据上面所提的感谢信写作“三步走”策略,操作如下:
第一句话直接表明写信目的,即向对方表示衷心的感谢,之后再简要陈述事由,即为了什么事情向对方表示感谢。此句之后,为了让自己的感谢之情表现得更为真诚和强烈,第二句需进行进一步的强调,可用without your help, i wouldnt have done??。在本段中,若收信人对自己的帮助不止一点,则首先要将其帮助细节进行分条描述,更显逻辑;若收信人所提供的帮助只有一点,则进行具体陈述即可。此外,无论收信人的帮助多或少,写信人都需在具体陈述帮助细节后附加自己的感受或对自己的意义等来进行进一步的深化与阐释,以使自己的感激更为真诚,而不浮夸。
尾段:thank you again for your kindness and i hope i will have the opportunity to return your charming help.本段中第一句话再次表达了自己对收信人的感激之情,第二句话表达了自己希望有机会对收信人的帮助做出相应的回报,这样一来,就显得自己的感谢并不仅仅是说说而已。在考研英语的书信表达中,类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富,大家需要在复习过
程中进行有意的积累,并在写作中加以运用: 1.it is my great pleasure to show my hearty thanks to you for...2.i am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help...3.i take this opportunity to express to you my deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.4.i appreciate it more than i can say.5.i am obliged to you for your unselfish assistance during...6.thank you again for your kindness and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return your charming hospitality.因此,该题的完整范文如下: dear professor sun, thank you again for your kindness and i hope i will have the opportunity to return your charming help.yours sincerely,篇四:考研英语作文感谢信模板
考研英语作文感谢信模板
一、信函写作:称呼、正文、落款
1、审题—-判断是个人书信&事务公函
决定:
语域使用:正式:使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)半正式:可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私)非正式:(一般不考)——it depends 呼语: 特定的写信对象:dear xx 不明确收信人:dear sir/madam, or to whom it may concern
2、正文
三段(8句):写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
3、各种信函内容安排 8)感谢信 a.基本结构 dear„, 表示感谢;,;yours sincerely, li ming b.范文解析: dear jim, i am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.i am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when i was knocked off my bike by a taxi.although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach.if there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.yours sincerely, li ming c.感谢信框架(重要)dear jim, if it had not been for your timely„, i fear that agrees that it quick-witted a much nicer place.(或回报,再次感谢)yours sincerely, li ming篇五:2016考研英语小作文例句及范文:感谢信 2016考研英语小作文例句及范文:感谢信
考研后期复习要稳抓提分项,作文就是考研英语的重点,大家要积累词汇词组,掌握表达句式,背诵作文模板,研究高分范文,正好是十一黄金周,新东方在线特此整合分享考研英语小作文各类书信例句表达及范文,大家可以多练练。
必背表达
第一部分:表示感谢
thank you so much for „ i warmly appreciate your hospitality(款待).i am writing to express my thanks for „ i am writing to extend my sincere/hearty gratitude/appreciation(真诚的感谢)for „
i would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for „ 第二部分:说明事由 thank you very much for the gift you sent me.it’s one of the most wonderful gifts i got on my birthday.i am writing this letter to thank you for your warm hospitality accorded to me and my delegation during our recent visit to your beautiful country.i would also like to thank you for your interesting discussion with me which i have found very informative and useful.第三部分:再次表示感谢 thanks again.again, i would like to express my warm thanks to you!please accept my gratitude.thanks again and i hope that i will have the opportunity to return/ repay your kindness.i am looking forward to„
高分热文 dear john, i am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when i was knocked off my bike by a taxi.but for your assistance, i fear that the consequence might have been much more serious.yours sincerely, li ming 精彩译文
亲爱的约翰,写信是要感谢你在我不幸事故之后对我的照顾,几天前,一辆出租车撞了我的自行车,我摔了下来。要不是你的帮助,恐怕后果会更加严重。医生说我受伤的腿恢复的很好,一周之内我就能站起来了。而且,出租车公司也同意支付住院费用。
无论如何,每个人都认为是你在危机关头的机智的反应才有今天满意的结果。我觉得欠你很多,所以请接受我最真挚的感谢。
第五篇:考研英语作文
2014年考研作文万能模板
英语大作文一共分为三种。
积极类,比如文化融合,合作,点一盏心灯等等,都可以用积极类的模板。另一种是消极类的,比如11年的环境污染,温室花朵,过量捕鱼这是一类。还有一类就是中性类,自信啊,网络利与弊啊,这类的。
但是这三种模板的三段谋篇布局是一样一样的。描述图片+解释图片+我们该怎么办。有时候他会让你举一个人物的例子,这就更简单了,都是提前准备好的。别着急,后面都会说到,先说说这第一段。
第一段的话,80%的作文书,第一句准是as vividly+你看到图中的东西,都用烂了的,咱们不用,咱们的宗旨就是与众不同。第一句怎么写,咱们先不说,先说第二句。第二句一般会写,这个东西对我们的生活产生深远的影响。例子,1、正如图片中生动形象的描画了一个文化火锅,里边有莎士比亚、佛bulabula~~(后半句用非限定性定语从句,这个待会讲)。
2、文化对人们的生活产生了深远的影响。所以金翅给出的第一段第2句(一、2用此表示,下同)的表达方法。
Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.多元文化的确对我们的生活产生了深刻的影响,这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。大家想一
想,是不是把多元文化替换成,网络、环境问题、合作、自信都很通顺呢,而且用does强调动词 exert,让人眼前一亮。这样咱们的一、2就完事了。现在说
一、1,先上模板。As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.这句话的亮点在于非限定性定语从句,把两句话合二为一。有同学说了,这不还是as系列的么?这就需要变通啊,句子是死的人是活的呀。咱们的策略是把第一句和第二句调换一下位置,别让老师一看就是as,吐都吐死了。
综上所述第一段前两句是:
一、1:Multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.一、2 As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there is a hot-pot,which involves Shakespeare and Buddha.多元文化对我们的生活产生了深刻的影响,这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。正如这幅图片所描绘的,这里有一个火锅,它包括莎士比亚和佛。是不是感觉“正如”用的有承上启下的作用呢?是不是很传神呢?11年的环境作文中,金翅用的此法,从最后结果来看,分数还是灰常让我满意的。
第一段第三句就很简单了,一般一张pp下边会有一句话或者一个注释,咱来个中译英就行了,前边要加上修饰的模板。
一、3:And below the cartoon,there is a topic which says:the cultural hotpot is both delicious and nutritious.要是没
有配文字怎么办呢?咱也有办法。用一个感叹句搞定,What a meaningful hotpot!有人说就一个感叹句四个词,后边会不会凑不齐字数呢?前边不是说过了么,文思如尿崩,思如泉涌,不必担心字数。额,最好还是担心一下,字数别写不下了。当时11考场上写到最后一段,结果还剩三行,无奈最后一段草草收尾的。第一段的三句话,咱们就都介绍完了。
第二段一般是要介绍这个PP的深远意义或者产生的原因,写三条。第二段一共五句话,第一句说这个主题很有意义,2~4句阐述意义或者解释原因,第五句一个总结搞定。模板来啦,看官注意啦~~
二、1:The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the positive influence of cultural blending.(用了一个同位语从句,要是消极类的就用negative)
二、2~
二、4分别写三条理由意义,可以用First and foremost,What is more,Last but not least来连接,也可以不用,这个看个人习惯。我不太习惯用连接词,原因有二。一是显得很生硬,二是这三条理由的句式本来就很复杂,再加上First and foremost显得句式灰常的混乱。这个还是看个人习惯。
又有同学会说了,这个理由和意义,我们没话说。这也是我这个帖子最精华的所在,就是传说中华丽丽的万能积极理由,万能消极理由。是金翅从备考四级,六级,考研的过程中,精选又精选的万能句子,所谓万能理由,就是能自圆其说
就行,在四六级和考研中屡试不爽。闲话少叙,直接上句子。万能积极理由(10条):
1、*** can broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization.(***拓宽我们的视野,扩大我们的知识面,丰富我们的精神文明。积极类的王牌理由,适合很多题材,网络,文化,读书,而且用到了罕有的修辞——排比。气势磅礴,大开大合,老师眼前一亮)
2、*** provides us with convenience.(最万能的理由,凡是有优点的,都能给我们提供方便,你就想吧,是不是?)
3、*** meet such kind of need in physical and psycholegical aspests.(满足我们的身心健康,短小精悍)
4、Of all the ingredients of success,*** seems to be the first within our control.(在成功的所有元素中,***看似是我们最能把我的。是个意志品质类的话题,自信,合作都可以拿来直接用,而且相当的华丽)
5、*** win the appreciation of the public.(***赢得了公众的共识,有重要的用处,后边说。)
6、*** is a kind of lubricant for interpersonal relationships.(***是一种人际关系的催化剂。网络、多元文化,爱心,适合很多题材。)
7、stimulate one’s interest and tap one’s potential.(刺激我们的兴趣,激发
我们的潜能)
8、Nothing,except***,can play a more indispensable role in the cultivation of one’s personality.(华丽的句式多变,凑字数的佳句啊)
9、*** is an essential element of success.(没词时救场用的)
10、*** is the immortal theme of harmonious development.(没词时救场用的)
万能消极理由(4条):
1、the goal of achieving a harmonious society may fall through under the negative influence of ***.(超万能,所有的消极的东西,不论是环境污染,网络问题,温室花朵,过分捕鱼,交通拥挤,都会引起社会的不和谐,或许仅仅是在某一小方面。考研作文么,沾边就对,不要太计较细节,老师也没时间细想,放心的用吧。)
2、*** bring great loss to both the individual and the whole society.(***对个人和社会带来损失)
3、*** kill a great mass of time.(浪费大量的时间)
4、It is a epitome of the disharmonious relation between the society and human being in a specific aspect of ***(这是一个人类和社会在***方面不和谐的缩影,五星级的华丽句子,***可以是环境,可以是网络,可以是交通)
有同学又说了,我总看到作文中让举例子。憋了半天写出来一个LiMing怎么怎么样。李明太累了,让他歇一会吧。例子就要用名人的例子,一般让举例子的作文题材,都是意志品质类的文章,像合作,自信什么的。既然是万能例子就要找具有各种优秀品质的人,什么人呢,成功人士。咱们就说两个,比尔盖茨和刘翔。一般有的优秀品质他们都有。怎么把例子变成句子呢?比尔盖茨很自信?要这样写的话,写比尔盖茨和写李明就没有本质的区别了。所以咱们要突出他的特性。Bill Gates,for instance,who is the CEO of Microsoft,won the champion of Forbes’World’s Richest People in 2009.It is ***that makes his company successful.比尔盖茨是09年“福布斯”排行榜的第一名
LiuXiang,for instance,who is a famous athlete,won the champion of the 110-meter-hurdle race of the Athens Olympic Games.It is ***that makes him successful.刘翔雅典奥运会110米栏的冠军。
这两个例子足够把所有的意志品质类的包含进去,可以放心使用。前文交待,第二段一共5句话。
二、1已经说过写法了,2~4句从上文的理由中挑3条就行了。但是我们还觉得不够华丽,所以我们把第4句改的更华丽,并且把第5句引出来。23句继续用万能理由没问题。
我们第四句用的一个小技巧就是科学统计法,直接上句子,再讲解。The recent statistic conducted by CASS——Chinese Academy of Social
Science,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports multiculture from 21% to 78%.(根据中国社科院最近的统计数据,过去的十年里有一个飞速的增长——支持多元文化的人从21%增长到了78%)
这句话很讲究,首先引入CASS,字母大写吸引老师的眼球,茫茫多的小写字母中,四个连续的大写,肯定能吸引住老师,恰好这句话又是华丽丽的给力,那么这句话就差不多达到目的了。那个——后边的解释,说实话是凑字数的,要是你的字数太多了,可以把CASS换成CCTV或者China Daily,然后就不用解释了。其次用sharp,很与众不同。再结合witness被动用法,足够让老师震撼。但我们觉得让老师就这样给分不满足,然后用两个数字把老师彻底征服了。根据心理学的统计,0~9十个数字中,7是人们最喜欢的数字(武当七侠,江南七怪,全真七子等等吧,这是题外话),所以咱们自己编的两个数字里尽量要有7。第一个数3*7=21,而且三七二十一是句俗语,应该是个常见的数字,第一个数用暗7。第二个数用明7,而且8是个人间人见人爱的数字,78这个数就出来了。积极类的数字可以随便编,消极类的数字要谨慎点编,别太离谱了。此时老师已经顺利落入咱们预先设计的圈套中,如果不给15+,他会感觉这次判卷生涯不完美的。闲话少说,咱们继续。
第四句出来了,怎么接第五句呢?前文说这个数字增长得很快。如果是好的东西增长的很快,比如支持文化融合的人越来越多了,那么后边接万能积极理由5:
That is to say,multiculture win the appreciation of the public.如果是坏的东西越来越多了,比如污染面积从**%增长到**%That is to say,This problem is getting worse and worse.有同学觉得这句话没说完,变得越来越严重了,然后呢?这就正好引出咱们的第三段,建议措施段。
第三段很简单了,基本上全是模板上去就行了,但是要华丽丽的模板,拒绝千篇一律的垃圾模板。对于积极类的,我们要怎么让他做得更好;消极类的,我们怎么改变这一现状。
It is high time that we+动词的过去式,是一个虚拟语气的结构,千万要注意。
积极类:强调好的东西对我们的重要。
It is high time that we highlighted the significance of ***(如multiculture)and cultivated the citizens’awareness that ***(如multiculture)is essential to us.消极类:因为前文说的坏的东西增长的很快,所以接下来我们就要控制这种增长的趋势。然后就政府和个人两个方面来说明做法。
It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend.As far as
the government is concerned,it should set down corresponding legislations and regulations.As for us,we should arouse the awareness of public towards ***(如Interenet).中性类的最后一段,在消极类的基础上加一句话。说明这个东西本身没有好坏之分,我们需要掌握一个度,比如还是网络问题。句子如下:
I cherish a belief that *** themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from *** as long as we take a good control over them.不要觉得good bad这样的小学词汇就不屑于用,咱们都华丽了三段了,也要缓解一下老师激动兴奋的情绪,肥肉吃多了还嫌腻呢~~哈哈~~
这样最后一段就差不多完事了,但是最好再来一个完美的总结。三种类型都通用的总结,如下:
Only by enforcing these measures into practice, can our society be more harmonious ,our economy be more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising perspective.(只有我们把这些措施付诸实施,社会才能更加和谐,经济才能更加繁荣,我们作为个人才能拥抱一个更加有希望的未来。气势磅礴的排比句,给你的作文画上一个圆满的句号)
到此为止,咱们的大作文就说的差不多了,应该是能把所有的情况都涵盖进去了。这篇模板不算万能理由一共132个词,距离最低160字数只差28个字,随便
挑两个万能理由写上去就ok了。所以说不要怕写英语作文。其实作文还要慢慢练的,最重要的是总结自己的模板,结合真题或者模拟题来不断地来默写模板,要对模板做到了然于胸,知道每句话要说什么内容。(金翅掠影)