第一篇:出国留学长篇文书中英文指导
出国留学长篇文书中英文指导
Common 长篇
1.Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.描述你的一次有意义的经历、成就、完成的任务或者面对的一次道德困境。
2.Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.选择一个关于个人的、本土的、国家的或者国际的议题讨论,并说明这个问题对你的重要性。
3.Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.描述一个对你产生重要影响的人。
4.Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.选择一个小说人物、历史人物或者一件作品(艺术、音乐、科学等作品),对它进行描述并且 说明它对你的重要影响以及原因。
5.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.说明你的个人背景、经历对大学可能带来的影响,或者阐述这种多样性对你的重要性。写作难点:如何选题。
2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;
1、5题相对易写,但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。
写作要领: 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。
【精彩例文】
Becoming a Real Man
My mother said she never thought about me as an athlete.I did not, either.When I was little, I often got sick and would stay inside the house instead of playing wildly with other boys.I,the “science guy,” spent much time watching science programs and enjoyed being set as a good example in my neighborhood.Then, my parents brought me to Macau when I was fourteen.We walked on the streets of Macau and happened to see a Manchester United Football Club store.About twenty Manchester fans were wearing the red team shirt and were watching a game on TV cheering for their team.I stopped and stared at those red spots that were jumping, yelling and smiling at one another, and I could feel the passionate flame hidden in my body was kindled;I belonged there.Turning to my mother, I asked for a red Manchester United shirt with my name on it.She was stunned by my request and warned me that I couldn' t have anything else if she bought me this one.Without any hesitation, I agreed, and this red shirt was the only thing I brought from Macau.Back at school, I immediately joined the football club.Everyday I spent there made me feel lucky that I had the chance to get to know this wonderful sport.Pass, shoot, and gain a point;it was great to freely run across the sports field and I felt like a hero.Unbelievably, half a year later, the “science guy” became the assistant-coach of our school women ’ s football team.Proving my talents in athletics, I was selected to take part in the sports meets in my last year in the junior high school.Enrolled in two games, I aspired to win two gold medals for my class.I did win the long jump, but I sprained my ankle in my last jump.My head-teacher asked me to give up the 4* 100m relay race the next day;however, seeing there was no replacement for me, I decided to take part in the competition anyway.I was the last runner of my team, and by the time I got the stick from the third runner, our team was almost 300m behind.The idea of “game over” flashed in my head but then smashed by me.My classmates watching the game beside the track used all their strength to shout, “Run,YZ!Get past them!You can do this!Come on!”
“Yes, I can do this.I won’ t let you down,” I said to myself.Bearing the pain from my ankle, I tried my best to pass the students ahead of me one by one.Six, five, four, three, two, one left, the whole class ran to me and held me up!The silver medal that hung from my neck shined even over the golden one.The green and red sports field left me with great pleasure.The days I spent with it were rewarded with strength, determination and responsibility, which helped me grow up into a real man.【成为一个真正的男人】
妈妈说她从没想到我会成为一个运动员。我也没想到。当我很小的时候,我经常生病,因此我只能待在屋子里,不能和其他男孩子一块疯玩。我成了一个“科学男孩”,花很长时间去看科学节目,乐于被街坊四邻当作好孩子的典型。
在我14岁的时候,爸爸妈妈带我去澳门玩。我们走在澳门的街道上,碰巧看到了一家英国曼联足球俱乐部的商店。大概20个曼联球迷穿着红色的队服,一边观看球赛,一边为他们的球队加油。我停下脚步。那些跳着、叫着、大叫着的红点在我面前晃动,让我感受到自己体内一直被压抑的热情被点燃了。我属于他们。我向妈妈央求要买一件印有我名字的曼联队服。妈妈对我说如果我买了这件队服就不能再买其他东西了。我毫不犹豫地答应了,这件红色的队服就是我从澳门买回的唯一东西。
回到学校,我马上加入了足球俱乐部。在那里度过的每一天都让我感到自己很幸运能够有机会了解这项精彩的运动。传球,射门,得分,自由地跑遍全场的感觉太棒了,让我感觉自己像是个英雄。半年 之后,那个曾经的“科学男孩”竟然变成了学校女子足球队的助理教练。
我的表现证明了我的运动天分,在初中的最后一年,我被选中参加运动会。我报了两个项目,信心十足地要为我的班级赢得两枚金牌。我赢得了跳远比赛的第一名,我却在最后一跳的时候扭到了脚踝。班主任让我放弃第二天的4*100米接力比赛,然而在得知没有人可以替代我参赛的消息时,我决定依 然参加比赛。我是全队的最后一棒,当我从第三棒手中接过接力棒的时候,我们队落后其他队伍300米远。“追不上了”这几个字在我脑中一闪而过,但立刻被我击碎了。观看比赛的同学们用尽全身力气为我加油,“加油啊,YZ!超过他们!你能超过他们!加油!”
“对,我能超过他们。我不会让你们失望的。”我对自己说。尽管脚踝疼痛难忍,我依然用尽全力 超越我前面的每个对手。六个,五个,四个,三个,两个,还剩一个,全班同学跑向我把我举了起来!我胸前的银牌比那枚金牌更加璀璨。
红绿色交织的运动场给我带来了无比的欢乐。在这里度过的日子让我收获了力量,坚定的信念和责任感,它帮助我成长成一个真正的男人。
【佳文精评】
这是一篇读来感觉很“man”的文章。文章开始叙述了作者从一个“科学男孩”向一个运动男孩转变的机缘巧合。通过对热情的曼联球迷的细致描写,读者仿佛也感受到了体内潜藏的激情被点 燃。然而难能可贵的是,作者与运动的结缘并没有停留在激情层面。通过第二个参加运动会的实例,作者进一步告诉读者运动不仅让作者找到了人生的乐趣,也获得了
难得的成长。文章末段作者用三个词概括了这种成长--strength(力量),determination(坚定的信念),responsibility(责任感),这也正是一个男孩成长为一个男人所应该具备的品格。苹果公司创始人史蒂夫•乔布斯曾经说过“当你向前看,你无法预见所有的点能否连成线;而当你向后看,你会发现也许所有的点已经 连成了线。”写文章实际上就是一个向后看的过程,将所有的点连成一条主线就会是一篇精彩的文章,一个精彩的成长故事。
第二篇:出国留学长篇文书翻译指导篇
出国留学长篇文书翻译指导篇:羽毛球
Common 长篇
1.Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.描述你的一次有意义的经历、成就、完成的任务或者面对的一次道德困境。
2.Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you.选择一个关于个人的、本土的、国家的或者国际的议题讨论,并说明这个问题对你的重要性。
3.Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.描述一个对你产生重要影响的人。
4.Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work(as in art, music, science, etc.)that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.选择一个小说人物、历史人物或者一件作品(艺术、音乐、科学等作品),对它进行描述并且 说明它对你的重要影响以及原因。
5.Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.说明你的个人背景、经历对大学可能带来的影响,或者阐述这种多样性对你的重要性。写作难点:如何选题。
2、4题是议论文;2题容易偏题;
1、5题相对易写,但也要做到出彩、不落俗套。
写作要领: 反映一个中学生从不成熟到逐渐成熟的成长心路。
【精彩例文】
Ideas are extremely important, especially those that are creative, original and bold.After my experience in organizing a badminton tournament at school, however, I realized that turning an idea into reality is challenging but even more meaningful than the idea itself.An idea is not the end of a story;it should also include a lot of hard work to put the idea into practice.Badminton is one of my favorite sports that I,ve been playing since 8-years-old.However, after entering high school, I could hardly find time to play badminton due to the heavy academic load, not to mention the lack of a game court.Then in the second semester of the tenth grade, a new stadium was constructed at our school which got me excited with the idea of a badminton match on campus.I told people about my idea and we all dreamed about it.But six months passed and nothing happened.Finally, I couldn’ t wait anymore;my friends and I will make a badminton tournament ourselves.With the support of many students, I went to ask for permission from our principal.Rather than objecting to my ideas, he came up with a series of questions about financial support, qualified referees, and safety issues.These were really beyond my expectations that I had not planned for.Motivated by the desire for the games, I faced the challenge.With the guidance of my father, I came to understand that enthusiasm alone could not convince the principal to allow the games;I needed to come up with a plan.So, I searched the Internet and consulted teachers, and finally worked out a plan that I presented to the principal.This time I was fully prepared to answer any questions the principal shot at me.After a few rounds, I got my answer: YES.With the permission, my friends and I began to prepare the badminton games with every single detail: registering players, preparing the court, making the rules, training referees and so forth.Unfortunately, winning the principle ’ s favor was not the only obstacle.Since it was a school wide tournament, it was very time consuming.A few months before the games, some of my teammates dropped out because they could not balance their academic studies.So at the most crucial moment, I called together my fellow teammates and told them frankly that I could not follow through with the tournament without their support.I proposed that we should setup a study partnership to find time to study together as well as continue to prepare for the game to free our parents from their concerns.My teammates agreed, and we encouraged one another that we could do it.Finally, after so many obstacles, the tournament finally took place and over one hundred students from all four grades participated.This event taught me the skills needed to organize a large event in which every little step and detail counted.Having an imaginative idea is a valuable characteristic, but critical thinking and practical skills are also indispensable to success.Without the collective effort of my great team, however, my idea of the badminton tournament never would have come alive.Now, a badminton club is set up and is in preparation for next year’ s tournament.Perhaps I should pass on some tips to the new leader of the club.【羽毛球】
想法是非常重要的,特别是那些有创意的、全新的、大胆的想法。然而,当我在学校组织了一次羽毛球联赛之后,我意识到将想法变为现实的过程可能会遇到很多困难,而这也比想法本身更有意义。想法不是故事的结局,故事的结局应该是通过艰苦的努力将想法实现。羽毛球是我最喜欢的运动之一。从八岁开始,我就练习打羽毛球。然而,上了高中之后,我发现繁重的课业负担让我很难找到时间打羽毛球,而且学校里也缺少打羽毛球的场地。于是在10年级的第二学期,当我看到学校建成了一座新体育馆,我的脑海中涌现出了在学校举办一场羽毛球比赛的想法。我把 这个想法告诉了很多同学,我们都很期待。然而6个月过去了,什么进展也没有。
终于,我坐不住了。我和朋友们决定自己动手筹办一次羽毛球比赛。在很多同学的支持下,我向校长 提出了举办羽毛球比赛的想法,请求他的允许。他没有拒绝我,但是却提出了一连串的问题:经济支持,从哪里找到合格的裁判员以及安全问题等等。我从没想到校长会问我这些问题,我一点准备也没有。
想要举办羽毛球比赛的愿望让我决定接受挑战。在爸爸的指导下,我开始明白单凭热情是不能说服校长允许举行这次比赛的。我需要拿出一个方案来。所以,我在网上进行搜索,并且咨询了老师,终于 提出了一个方案。我把方案拿给校长看,这次我有了充分的准备迎接校长的每个问题。
经过了几个回合,我得到了校长的答案:同意!
得到了校长的允许,我和朋友开始着手准备每个细节:登记运动员,准备场地,制定规则,培训裁判员等等。不幸的是,获得校长的首肯并不是我们遇到的唯一问题。
因为这是一次全校性的比赛,准备起来非常耗费时间。比赛前的几个月,我的几个团队成员相继退出,因为他们没办法平衡繁重的学习负担和工作压力。在这个关键的时刻,我把所有的团队成员召集起 来,诚恳地告诉他们如果没有他们的帮助,我无法一个人举办这次
比赛。我提议我们建立一个固定的合作制度,一起学习,一起筹备比赛,这样让我的父母不再担心。我的队友们同意了,我们相互鼓励,坚信我们一定可以做到。
终于,克服那么多的困难后,联赛终于开始了,四个年级总共超过100名学生参加了这次比赛。这 次经历教会了我举办一场大型活动所需的技能,让我懂得每一步、每一个细节都需要被仔细考虑。有一个充满想象力的想法是很可贵的,但是批判性思维和实践能力也是成功必不可少的因素。如果没有团队合作,我举办羽毛球比赛的想法可能永远不会成为现实。现在,我们建立了一个羽毛球俱乐部,并且正 在筹备明年的比赛。或许我可以给俱乐部的下一任主席留下一些建议。
【佳文精评】
不以情动人而以理服人,读完这篇文章大概会有这样的感觉。想法和实践孰轻孰重一直是人们在探讨的问题,作者则结合自己的亲身经历给出他的答案——有想法固然可贵,但实践能力却是获得成功所不必不可少的。文章第一句话就点明了这一点,随后通过详述自己举办羽毛球比赛的细节 来证明这个观点。从只有一个模糊的概念而回答不上校长的任何一个问题到拿出细致的方案并且克服所有的困难,作者娓娓道来,将这个大家原本就很熟悉的道理讲得生动翔实,令人信服。无论是以情动人,还是以理服人,都能够成就一篇佳作。
第三篇:出国留学文书写作指南
英国留学文书是学校录取委员会决定是否录取的因素之一,即使你有很高的成绩,如果英国留学文书写的不好,或者错误连篇,那么你也拿不到心仪大学的offer。每年都有大量的学生折在英国留学文书上。
写好英国留学文书第一招:正确使用英文
好的申请文书必须使用正确的英文。录取委员会的教授只能从书面材料来对你的学识、人品和语言能力进行判断,而你也只能以书面的形式来表现和证明你自己。你和他们之间唯一的媒介是文字。你的雅思成绩也许很高,但试想你的Personal Statement写得一塌糊涂,洋教授们会怎么想?毕竟这种文件是在没有严格时间限制的情况下写的,如果质量差,人家对你英语语言能力的印象就会打折扣,认为你是一个高分低能的人,一定要把自己的形象表现得鲜明、具体和个性化,给自己一个独特的包装。
写好英国留学文书第二招:全面展示自己
可以说,申请文书相当于不见面的interview。你要通过这些文件,让你希望师从的教授们了解你过去的成就、现在的能力和未来的打算。但仅仅这些并不够。你还要告诉他们你是在什么样的情况下取得这样的成就的,是什么原因使你像你所声称的那样杰出以及你为什么想深造。如果你曾遭受什么重大的失败、挫折或失望,你需要对这些做出合理的解释。
这些文件还得展示你的性格和人格力量。要尽量写得生动、具体,让教授们读了以后好像已经见过你本人一样。
写好英国留学文书第三招:知晓会被提问的问题
由于学校的类型,选择的科系以及所选学校的威望,入学委员会将会阅读成千上万的个人资料,为了让你的文章有说服力,令人难忘和个性突出,他们到底要得到什么信息?问题涉及的范围是什么?申请涉及的问题范围极广,从人际方面怎样的挑战使你认为它们锻炼出你解决矛盾的能力和管理方面的技巧,到一些不定性的乌龙问题,除了邮递问卷之外,大部分的学校通常会提供回答问题的指导,请仔细地按部就班,不要偏离它们。
在申请文档中避免不同部分之间的冗长重复,不要只在行文间陈述你的平均绩点和课程,这些东西在申请中是会被予以与其他部分相当的重视,然而如果你认为平均绩点和课程有所需解释之处则不妨多写一些,比如说,你可以讲明某一些平均绩点的不定是因为生病或是家庭问题所致,除了这些情况,千万别为你的分数找理由,入学委员会每年都要读过成百上千个这样的理由。
写好英国留学文书第四招:全面了解所申请的学校
(1)研究你所申请的英国大学。大部分学校会给你提供一本小册子告诉你校方对申请者的要求。与该所学校的研究生和你所知的就读该校的人交谈,充分利用学校的校友会组织与研究生们建立关系,与学校通电话,和入学委员会成员或其他校方官员联系,你了解该所学校和它的运作以及职能成员愈多,你愈可能写好你的申请书以此证明你对该所学校确实十分地感兴趣。
(2)另外,你得花费时间给读信者一种印象:你花了更多的时间使自己对该所学校了解得比其他的申请者更透彻,这些特别功夫使读信人对你的勤奋,专心致志和对该院系的兴趣有着十分良好的印象。这些特别了解和信息不必在每一句中提出,也无须特别夸张其辞,你的陈述只需包含足够的信息使人留下你做了特别努力的印象即可。
写好英国留学文书第五招:不同的学校写不同的个人陈述
一旦你认识到进行个人陈述的目的所在,你必须关注行文的类型和结构,以便最有效地达到目的。脑子里有了这样的认识,就会意识到没有一个完美的个人陈述能适合你所申请的那些学校提出的问题,大部分学校对于他们所希望录取的人要求不同,你必须根据申请文件中提出的问题来“量体裁衣”,理想的方法是:针对不同的学校写不同的个人陈述。
记住,英国留学文书一定不能敷衍了事,糟糕的英国留学申请文书可能会完全掩盖你的好成绩。每所大学,尤其是世界名校,每年都收到大量的入学申请。假如你给学校录取委员会的印象没有别的申请者深刻,那么你也只好望“洋”兴叹了。
请申请的同学检查自己对PS/CV/RL(全称分别为:personal statement/ curriculum vitae/ recommendation letter)这3样材料的准备情况。除掉那些客观的成绩,这3样材料的重要性不言而喻。而在它们之间,并无孰重孰轻的区分——要利用一切材料尽可能自然地展示自己的闪光点和学术能力(潜力)。
1、cv
cv的总体格式可以参考前人模版(总标题curriculum vitae用3号字,其他标题和正文均小4,标题处都可以加粗,除总标题外的其他标题可有下划线。正文行距为单倍行距)。
Obejective, education(major/degree/gpa), related experience, publications, honors and awards, Courses in Major Field of Study, references等信息可以依次列在cv里面。
Obejective一个经常被问到的问题是:到底申phd还是申master(也就是哪种被录取的可能更大)?通常系里的网页上会出现这样几种情况:本科生可以申phd也可以申ma;本科生只能申请ma,有了ma学历的才能申phd;还有就是系里只有ma,不提供phd。结论是:除了第三种也就是系里没有phd的情况下你申请ma以外,其他一律申请phd,而不用去管他本科学历是否有资格申phd。原因就在于:你想学他最好的东西,那就要表达你想读 phd的愿望。道理就这么简单。
Related experience可以罗列参加过的考察、实习。当然,这些都应该是和专业相关的经历。其他的内容诸如公司实习、学生会团委、班干部、无关比赛、志愿者都可以省略,只需要写和专业学术有关的东西。在每项活动下面应该附几行文字(5号字,并且行距调小,调成最小值)说明活动的内容以及自己所承担的任务,做了哪些事情,尽可能简要、清楚。
Publications指的是学术论文,如果你在申请时已经有发表的论文,那是最好的。如果尚未发表,但你知道将会在何时发表的,可以写上accepted for publication由 提供,后面写上要发表的刊物/时间。如果是已经提交的,但是还不知道是否可以发表的,也可以写上去,写submitted, in review。
Honors and Awards,如果你有更高级的奖项,那就全部堆上去吧;奖额高的,还可以把具体金额也写出来。
Courses in Major Field of Study是指附一个专业课的表格,也就是你major gpa是由哪些课程得出的,把它们依照Term/ Course Name/ Credits/ Grades等罗列出来。
2、PS(小4,单倍行距)
ps似乎没什么规律可循,应该是很personal 很special的。
ps是对自己申请动机一个重新审视的机会。注意逻辑的连贯性。文科ps,不用罗列gpa/ranking这样的数字,更不要写gt以体现英文水平,因为这些数据容易打断整体的连贯性。也不要
为哪门课成绩不好而去作解释或者编造理由。ps还是扎扎实实写些自己的想法和研究情况,特别注意交待清楚研究方向和兴趣所在。能够针对自己做过的topic写些东西和感受就好,但也别扯太远。比如“就事论事”,写了自己做某topic收集材料齐全,发现了对某样东西与众不同的解释等等,而这些都是配合writing sample的,也就是说教授看writing sample是可以找到所说的这些东西的。所以,就相当于在ps里把ws最闪光的地方给总结了一下。
3、RL
推荐人的选择:可以是专业课任课老师、论文指导老师、实习指导老师,总之一定是要和你有过较多接触,对你比较了解的人。在这个前提下,当然是越牛越好,知名度越高越有利。一般老师都会让你自拟一个底稿,他再润色。推荐信篇幅不宜很长,最多不要超过A4一页。教授的推荐信显得尤为短,而且往往越牛越短。内容上只要突出某个特质或优点就可以,不宜面面具到,主要以谈学习态度、学术能力为主。至于缺点,可写可不写。
第四篇:如何写出国留学文书
如何写出国留学文书—写好留学文书七大工程
编辑:华一留学:http://www.xiexiebang.com/
随着时代的进步,经济条件的改善,很多有志之士想拓展自己的阅历、视野。学习专业知识,学术的交流等。为了是自己在以后的人生道路活得更精彩,越来越多的华人选择出国留学深造。但是由于地域文化等等差异使我们的有志之士成功留学道路上充满坎坷。华一留学何老师提供一些关于文书写作的经验。
如何写出国留学文书工程
一、PS的注意事项
1.PS切忌套用模板,好的PS是千锤百炼的结果,是思想的结晶。初稿时可以借鉴别人好的经验,这是必须也是必要的,但是成型后的PS一定要有自己的特点。
2.要注意PS与其他材料的配合,比如推荐信,CV等,PS也要有所突出和重点,不能样样俱全。
3.最好不要有表达上的问题,自己要用自己拿手的有把握单词和句式,千万不要因为想多样性,而去多样性。
4.一定要按照学校的要求来写PS,比如字数要求等。所以在网申提交PS时一定要看清学校的要求,不要偷懒。PS的字数要尽可能的接近或稍微超过学校的字数要求。不要写的太少或超的太多。
如何写出国留学文书工程二---PS作用与目的PS在整个的申请过程中的作用是不容置疑的,好的PS可以吸引教授的眼球,可以弥补一些其他方面(比如GT)的瑕疵。因为在国外,教授的权利还是比较大的,大部分学校都是如此。所以能让一个教授看上你,你就会很有希望。所以我们写PS的一个主要目的就是要全面的展现自己的优势并吸引住教授(最好的PS是可以让教授亲自去联系你)。如何写出国留学文书工程三---PS如何写好
PS要写好,难度很大,想好解释好如何写PS难度也不小,从宏观上说,有两个方面,一方面是内容,另一方面是表达。内容怎么样才算是好呢?其实答案不唯一,我个人觉得内容要跟着自己的目的走。有的放矢,假设自己PS的读者,我觉得可以把读者局限到自己想套的教授的范围内,要想方设法让教授眼前一亮,不过说得容易,做起来很难。表达是另一个难关,特别是对于我们习惯了中文思维的同学更是如此。所以要想写出好的PS,如何表达,语言关是一定要过的。
如何写出国留学文书工程四--PS的开篇
PS的开头与几种套路,所谓万事开头难,PS也是这样,在写的时候是煞费苦心,不知道怎么个写法,几种还不错的开头方法。
1.介绍背景型
这种方法可能会很普通,但是这是最容易上手的一种方法。一开始先介绍下自己的学校和专业,自己的人生理想,自己的人生目标,自己对将来的打算,或者用一句话来表达自己对学校的喜爱等。这样的开头感觉还是手很顺,因为都是想想就可以写出来,很适合初稿的写作,这样的开头也能使国外教授一开始就能对你有个大致的了解。教授一天要看很多份材
料,不可能都很细心,将自己的背景一开始就和盘托出,可以使老美省力不少,其看后面的段落时心理会更有条理。
2.明确目的型
这也是一种不错的开头方法,有点类似于写文章里举例子的开头,可以回忆一件自己小时候的事(我们写作文好像经常这么干),然后通过这件事来引出想出国的原因。比如小时候根本就不想出国,但是后来长大了,了解的事物多了,感觉到世界真是大呀,自己的同学出了国,和自己说了很多贵国的事,使得自己也对贵国充满了好奇…等等,一开始就让教授知道你出国的目的,开篇坦诚,也是国外教授喜欢的。
3.赞美型
赞美谁呢?其实赞美的对象一般是我们申请的学校,首先按照我的理解,我们之所以出国,很大的目的在于去学习国外先进的文化技术,或是觉得该国的社会环境更好,所以贵国在这方面一定是会强于大部分国家的。这时候我们可以通过我们的专业背景知识,先介绍学校在这方面的优势,赞美其在这方面取得的一系列成就。并随之赞美所申请的学校在这方面的突出贡献,阐明自己去该学校的原因。这种方法的核心还是要牵扯到自己申报的学校,这是我们的目的,其实本质就是回答这所学校为什么吸引我。这样的开头,国外教授也是会喜欢的。
第五篇:留学文书指导推荐信
Dear admissions committees professor,I amGrade 2008 counselor of electronic engineering college of Electronic Science and Technology University.Here I am honored to recommend XXX whom I am very proud of to your school to study.As the Grade 2008 counselor of electronic engineering college managing 1048 students,I am mainly responsible for the idealogical and political education and daily behavior management of the students for the whole four-year university life,and guide the students to take part in the postgraduate entrance exams and take up an occupation.For the four years,I have witnessed her growth from a green girl into a bold,strong,outstanding,innovational practitioner.On the job interview of the counsellorassistant in October 2008,XXX who first entered college performed high passion to the student work and made a deep impression on me.So,I immediately decided to hire her.And in the later contact, her hardwork and persistence are beyond my expectation.At the first, she is not a talent-excellent student.And at that time,she did not master the use of Office Excel, and the speed of the words input also was only 30 words per minute,so that the other counselors questioned her ability.She still teether insisted and said: “Give me some time, I will let you see my progress.” God helps those who help themselves.After a-week self-study and practice,her input speed increased to 120 words per minute, and she could quickly make perfect student data storage form.So,she wined affirmation and praise of the whole counselors' in the office.In the next work of the assistant,she learned in face of the difficulty to find the problem quickly and orderly,and put forward the ideas of the solution to the problem and organize everyone to do their own work in together.In 2010,after my commending,she became the assistant of the practic branch of teaching affairs department.However,she is not only outstanding in the office,but also in the competition field of literary sports.As the leading singer of the chorus in the school chorus competition,she got the first prize scholarship and defeated the 17 colleges.she is the champion of the three women basketball game of Electronic Science and Technology University and the third place in the women volleyball match.And she was successful to be the site commentator for Fifth National University Western Division of Freescale Smart Car Competition,and wined a round of applause for her humor explanation and rich experience.The most surprised me is her humanities concern to the society.She grew up in Shanxi province where is the coal mines province of China,and witnessed the frequent explosion accident of the mine.Growing in the strong culture of Yellow River,she profoundly understands how valuable of every fresh life.In the summer of 2009,she took part in the consolatory practice for the post-disaster reconstruction to help the victims to establish the confidence to live,and then she got the prize of the outstanding individual in the university summer practice.She also established a good interpersonal relationship network for her optimistic,humourous,honest personality.In addition,XXX also has made brilliant achievements in thory course,and in science and technology innovation.It is her struggling dearm of many years to enter the MIT for further study.She is also the one who has the comprehensive quality of thinking and operating which your school needs.So,I solemnly commend this student to your school.If you need more information about this student,please call me.Yours sincerely,YYY