贷款申请书---蒋永虎

第一篇：贷款申请书---蒋永虎

贷款申请书

临泽县畜牧局：

本人蒋永贤，系临泽县沙河镇东寨村七社农户，现年42岁，家庭人口4人，劳动力2人，耕地15亩。现已在沙河镇鹏程奶牛专业合作社养殖奶牛45头，养殖场占地面积3亩，建筑面积500平方米。本人为扩大养殖规模，计划养殖奶牛60头，现存在资金困难，根据县委1号文件精神的相关优惠政策规定，本人申请上级主管部门给予贴息贷款30万元，请审核办理。

特此申请

申请人：

二〇一三年九月二十四日

第二篇：蒋军虎课程笔记

2012年11月3日清华经管蒋军虎课程笔记

一． 题型分析

1.完型填空

a.20题，每题0.5分，共计10分

b.鸡胁题型，性价比不高

c.总分少，题量大，时间花得多

d.建议：先做其他，最后做完型填空

2.阅读理解A

a.4篇文章，每篇5题，每题2分，共计40分

b.建议：通过精读80篇熟悉问题类型，达到30分左右目标

3.阅读理解B

a.新题型：信息匹配

a.7选5

b.难度低，送分题

c.不要通读，要寻读，查读

d.如果有可能，使用词性进行判断，帮助寻找答案

e.如无可能使用词性，则寻找关键词，回文章进行定位寻找答案 b.新题型：段落标题匹配

a)7选5

b)难度低，送分题

c)不需要读文章第一段，如果有最后一段总结也无需读

d)注意标题是概括标题的后面一段

e)先读七个标题，然后寻找关键词或大意。

4.翻译

a.不要畏难，把知道的词翻译出来，尽可能使句子通顺

b.练习方法：精读3年内的英语二真题，每份卷子9篇文章，进行翻译

5.写作

a.小作文，小作文为应用文，要写到120字左右，类型可能为书信，备

忘录，报告等，准备以书信为主，兼顾其它。

b.大作文，图表情景，图画情景，文字情景，准备以图表情景为主，兼

顾其他。要写到180字左右。

c.写作的性价比最高，想要过小分线的，需要在作文上进行突击。

二．小作文攻略

1.真题历史

10年，书信，感谢信+邀请信

11年，书信，祝贺信+建议信

12年，书信，投诉信

2.评分原则与标准

a.内容完整性与连贯性

b.语言的准确性与多样性

c.卷面整洁性

d.卷面规范性

3.书信作文的准备（10类）

a.建议信推荐信

b.求职信辞职信

c.感谢信道歉信

d.申请信/请求信邀请性

e.祝贺信投诉信

最可能出现的：建议信，求职信

历年英语一考试类型：

 05 辞职

 06 请求

 07 建议

 08 道歉

 09 建议

 10 通知

 11 道歉

 12 建议

4.书信格式

a.齐头式X

b.缩进式

5.书信的结构

a.HeadingX

b.Inside addressX

c.Salutation

d.Body

e.Signature

f.PostscriptX

g.AttachmentX

6.称呼(Salutation)

a.机构/组织

To whom it may concern,To those concerned,Dear Sir or Madam,b.朋友，熟人

Dear Judy,Dear Li Ming,c.具体身份的人

Dear Mr.Wang,Dear Editor,Dear President,Dear Professor,d.某一群体

Dear friends,7.Signature

a.位置：最行一行，中间靠右的位置

Yours faithfully,Yours truly,Yours sincerely,Sincerely yours,Truly yours,Faithfully yours,Li Ming

8.Body

a.Para 1

i.S1: 自我介绍（根据指令此句有可能省略）

ii.S2：表明写信的目的（备+借）

iii.备：提前准备好的固定句式，短句

iv.借：题目中的要求文字

b.Para 2

i.3句到5句话，最常用四句，最短3句，最长5句

ii.一般采用总分式结构，如果已在第一段中总述，则只需分述

部分

c.Para 3

i.2句到3句

ii.礼貌性收尾

iii.感谢，祝福，期待（备）

9.必备写作材料

a.备---《英语二高分作文老蒋笔记》

b.背（诵）

c.背（写）

d.仿（写）

e.改（修改）

10.审题意识（*****）

a.致信对象

b.书信性质

c.表达借用（借用指令，通常在第一段中借用）

11.例文

提纲：

 Para1

 S1：写信目的1，祝贺

 S2：写信目的2，建议

 Para2

 S1: 电脑

 S2: 英语

 S3: 沟通能力

 Para3

 S1: 期待采取建议

 S2: 祝福有多姿多彩大学生活

Dear Li Ming,I’m writing the letter for the purpose of congratulating you on being admitted to Sichuan

University.And I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.To begin with,(At the top of the list/First and foremost)it’s advisable for you to be equipped with some computer skills, considering that we are in a hi-tech era.In addition

(Moreover/Furthermore/What’s more), I would recommend that you should continue studying English in your spare time, which will lay a solid foundation for your future study aboard.Last but not the least(In the end/Finally/In the last place), emphasis should be put on

communication skills as well as academic achievements.I genuinely hope that you will take my advice into serious consideration.Wish you a splendid university life.Sincerely yours, Zhang Wei

Legend:

Blue: Frame sentencesRed: From questionsGreen: Prepared phrases.参考学习资料：

主要：《英语二真题老蒋详解》 Black: Your task

辅助：

写作：《高分作文》 阅读：《80篇》 真题学习要求：

a.b.c.d.自测（18分钟内）看解析，看视频 研读词，句，篇 英译汉 e.熟读文章

第三篇：学习蒋永华同志

勇往直前践行“三严三实”把下乡体检工作做实

肖怀文

“三严三实”乃习近平同志于2014年3月9日首次提出，是新时期干部党员的为官之道和行为准则之一。“三严三实”总的来说就是严以修身、严以用权、严以律己，谋事要实、创业要实、做人要实。蒋永华同志就是践行“三严三实”的一个典型代表。为什么这么说呢？ 在他的事迹报道中，我们可以发现他作为朱泾镇的党委书记，做到了几件很多干部做不到的事情：

首先，密切联系群众，踏踏实实做事。他说过用我们干部的“辛苦指数”，来换取群众的“幸福指数”，而且他任期内做到了：仅用了三个半月时间，蒋永华就把全镇11个村、17个居民区跑了个遍；三年不到的时间里，城南菜场开张了，城南幼儿园建起来了，朱泾体育中心开放了，城南生活服务中心接待居民了，万安街翻修一新，城南的房地产项目一个个拔地而起，农村主干道安装了56公里的路灯，翻建了79座农村桥梁，修筑了138公里的乡村道路，整治不规范畜禽养殖34处，拆除田间棚舍19.3万平方米，村委会干部还把办公室搬到底楼„„。这些情况说明蒋永华同志带领的团队做实了改变百姓生活的大事，体现了这些共产党人在实实在在地为人民服务。

第二，脚踏实地、真抓实干，敢于担当责任，勇于直面矛盾，善于解决问题，努力创造经得起实践、人民、历史检验的实绩，这也就是所说的创业要实。蒋永华同志也做到了：来到朱泾后，蒋永华碰到的第一件头疼的事是要不要实施市郊唯一一个棚户区的改造试点。因为是试点，没有模式可参照，且基地内情况非常复杂，有直管公房、私房、无证房、商业门面、工业企业等。村办企业的发展已走过了30多年的历程。都是一些低端行业，安全隐患多，环境污染多，但它又是村级经济的来源之一，要不要整治？如何整治？在反复讨论形成共识的基础上，蒋永华和他的班子提出了村级租赁企业的管理办法。朱泾镇共有165户村级租赁企业，自动搬离的2家，停产停业的21家，纳入土地减量化33家，统一签约109家企业。接下来，再花2-3年将村域小企业全部依法清理或迁入工业园区。他说：“前怕虎后怕狼，到头来只能是一事无成。”的确如此，我们共产党人就是要敢于担当，拿出切实可行的办法来解决科学发展的大问题，这也是艰难创业的大事情。

第三，蒋永华在工作实践中总结出十条“草根理论”，从实践效果看，可以初步解决“群众想要的，我们给不了;我们给群众的，群众不需要”的问题;初步解决党的领导、政府负责、社会协调、公众参与“共同行动”的问题;初步解决“心有余而力不足”、“有人不干事，有事没人干”等问题;也初步解决了“被领导作主”的问题。这说明蒋永华同志善于从实践中总结经验，用理论指导实践，再在实践中把理论升华为真知。

从以上的报道中，我们已经可以清晰看到一个践行“三严三实”的典型代表的形象，他的确值得我们认真学习。我们应该把人家优秀的方面借鉴过来，指导我们自己具体的工作，使我们的工作更有成效。

新时代的医务工作总要求是要使疾病被早发现，早治疗，甚至治病于“未病”。在这一方面，我们亭林医院就做的很好：在院长书记的带领下，我们利用周末时间，带上设备，直接来到社区，免费体检，发现了许多需要治疗的疾病，也给需要关注的未病者提供了一些建议。尽管我们医务工作者苦点、累点，但是许多居民的疾病被我们及时发现了，得到了相应的治疗，我们还是很欣慰的。

然而，这还是远远不够的。首先，我们一家单位的人力、物力是有限的，不能解决所辖社区全部居民的健康要求，如果把所有社区体检一遍，那得至少5年才轮一圈。第二，我们的体检项目不可能全面涵盖，所以还有许多疾病发现不了，比如结直肠癌和胃癌，这是最需要早发现早治疗的多发病，一旦进入进展期，手术治疗的效果就不令人满意了；而这些疾病的普查需要的设备较复杂。那么，我们是不是在困难面前就畏缩不前了呢？此时，我们就要好好学习蒋永华同志迎难而上、求真务实的精神，想办法克服困难，总结出切实可行的经验，把健康体检工作推向更高的层次，做人民健康的守护神。

尽管我们还没有找到可以推广的，内容全覆盖的社区体检好办法，但是蒋永华同志的精神鼓舞了我们亭医人，一定会把下乡体检，为民办实事的工作做的踏踏实实。

第四篇：蒋军虎英语作文(简洁版)

一、英文考试做题顺序

蒋军虎老师建议的做题顺序： 第一步，阅读

第二步，写作，小作文和大作文 第三步，翻译

第四步，完形填空。

顺序原因：一切围绕考分重点，即阅读和写作来投精力。完形填空作为时间的替补。

二、英文小作文通用要求和注意事项

1，格式规范：如作文标题，书信的开关及落款

2，书写整洁：阅卷规定，书写不清可以降低1档（3分左右）

3，虎头豹尾：作文的开头、结尾都要用事先准备好的范句，不可出错。前三句即决定成绩。4，避免明错：作文要用保险的方法，不要出明显差错，如时态，单复数，虚拟语气等。备注：

1，老师阅卷是将试卷扫描成电子版，在电子版上阅卷，所以不能写出界，否则扫描不上 2，小作文和大作文可以有重复的句子出现。因小作文和大作文是不同老师流水线改卷。

三、小作文种类 1，作文通用要求

MBA英语二的写作25分，分为：

A节：小作文，10分，种类：A1，应用文:书信，备忘录，报告，通知，便笺

字数要求100字，一定要大于100字 B节：大作文：15分，三类：

B1，文字情景作文，05，08，09，传统考法

B2，图表情景作文：考试年份：06，07，10，本年备考重点 B3，图画情景作文：考试年份：98，99，2008，2010，2，十种书信

2.1 书信通用要求:标准格式，142阵形

书信格式：要求采用缩进式，缩进可以4或8个字母 书信结构：

1，称呼顶格：个人：Dear Sir/Madam/Judy/Jack,(用逗号)机构：Dear Sir or Madam, /To whom it may concern, / To those concerned, 专业：Dear Mr.Wang, / Dear Professor Wang, / Dear Editor Wang, 2，正文缩进4字.通常分三段，句子数量：1，4，2，或1，5，2内容为： 首段：写信目的1句

中段：写信详情4或5句，通常1句总述，3到4句分述 尾段：收尾2句，S1：感谢看信，S2：期待回信 3，落款在右边：

Yours truly, / Yours faithfully,/ Yours sincerely, NAME 2.2求职信、申请信application letter/cover letter & Applying letter 1，outline：

P1【写信目的求职】P2【我有资质.教育背景.工作经验.自身素质】P3【感激面试.期待回应】 Para1, S1, writing the letter, purpose, applying for a position Para2,S1,my qualifications, meet your requirements

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S2,In the first place, major, in line with this job

S2,In the second, previous work experience, help lay a solid foundation

S3,Inaddition, a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn

S4,refer to my resume attached, for more details.Para3,S1,would appreciate it a lot, schedule an interview

S2,Looking forward, to your reply, at your earliest con-ven-ien-ce.3，Example 1：application letter Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position [as posted in the newspaper].My qualifications, I believe, just amply meet your requirements.In the first place, my major, English, is perfectly in line with this job.In the second, my previous work experience [as a middle-school English teacher] has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here.In addition, I am a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.Please refer to my resume attached for more details.I would appreciate it a lot if you could schedule an interview for me.Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours truly，Li Ming Key words：

Application 申请；Apply 申请；Position 职位；Post 职位；Qualifications资质;Background: bachelor Master Doctor;work experience: solid foundation(良好的基础);team player, self-motivated, eager to learn(渴望学习)

4，Example 2: applying letter To whom it may concern, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of applying to be a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.My qualifications, I believe, just amply meet your requirements.In the first place, my specialty, English, is perfectly in agreement with the job.In the second, my previous work experiences as a social volunteer has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here.Moreover, I am a good team player, self-motivated, eager to learn.I would appreciate it a lot if you could schedule an interview for me.Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.3推荐信recommendation letter 1, outline P1【写信目的推荐.在找工作】P2【符合要求.有经验.有素质.值得考虑】P3【感谢.期待回应】 Para1,S1,recommend to you S2, seek employment as a sales manager Para2,s1,amply meet your requirements S2, rich experiences, help lay a solid foundation S3,good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn

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S4, certain, deserve your consideration Para3,s1, pay due attention, s2, look forward, your reply, at your earliest con-ven-ien-ce 2, example Dear Judy, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of recommending to your Li Ming, one of my best collages.He is seeking employment as a sales manager in your company.As far as I know, his qualifications amply meet your requirements.In the first place, his rich experiences as a sales manager has helped lay a solid foundation for the work here.In the second, he is a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.Accordingly, I’m certain that he deserves your consideration.Thanks a lot for paying due attention to the letter.I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.4辞职信resignation letter 1, Outline: P1【写信目的辞职】P2【不合适.没挑战.低工资.要辞职】P3【谢机会.感sorry】 Para1, S1, resign from my current position Para2,S1,After several months of work, find it in-appro-priate, take the position,following reasons S2,expected the job to, be both challenging and rewards, turn out to be the opposite S3,salary, has proved to be a lot lower, you originally promised S4, As a result, make up my mind, to quit, after much de-libera-tion Para3,S1,having offered me, the golden oppor-tunity to work, with the outstanding staff here S2,I am sorry, for any in-con-ven-ience caused.2, Example: Dear Mr.Jack, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of resigning from my current position.After several months of work, I find it inappropriate for me to take the position [as an editor] for the following reasons.In the first place, I ever expected the job to be both challenging and rewards which has turned out to be the opposite.In the second, the salary has proved to be a lot lower than you originally promised and I have a large family to support.As a result, I’ve made up my mind to quit the job after much deliberation.Thanks a lot for having offered me the golden opportunity to work with the outstanding staff here.I sincerely hope you will approve of my resignation.I am genuinely sorry for any inconvenience caused.Yours truly，Li Ming Key words: Resignation 辞职，position 职位, inappropriate 不适合的;challenging 挑战的;offer 提供;golden opportunity 绝佳机会.After much deliberation 深思熟虑 2.5建议信suggestion letter/advice letter 1, outline: P1【写信目的建议】P2【情况危急.必须行动.公众意识.相关部门.大众媒体】P3【感谢.期待】 Para1, S1, convey my deepest concern，3 / 12

Para2,S1, must be pointed out, current situation, is going from bad to worse.S2, accordingly, it’s urgent, take effective measures.S3,enhance the public’s awareness of gravity of it.S4, appeal to, relevant department, set up stick regulations, against it S5, mass media, help devise ways, easing the bad trend Para3,S1,pay due attention S2, looking forward, see some new changes 2, Example 1: 宏观大建议 To whom it may concern, I am writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my deepest concern about the “White paper”.It must be pointed out that the current situation is going from bad to worse.Accordingly, it’s urgent for us to take effective measures.In the first place, we should enhance the public’s awareness of the gravity of it.In the second, we should appeal to the relevant department to set up strict regulations against it.[For example, changing more on the plastic bags].In addition, mass media should help devise ways of easing the bad trend.Thanks a lot for paying due attention to the letter.Looking forward to seeing some new changes in the society soon.Yours truly，Li Ming Key words: Deepest concern 最深切的关注；convey 表达；suggestion 建议;going bad to worse 变得更坏；effective measure 有效手段;enhance 加强;awareness 意识;help devise ways 想方设法;deteriorating 恶化

3, Example 2: 具体事件小建议 To Sir or Madam, I’m a student from the Department of Foreign Languages and I am writing the letter for the purpose of making some suggestions about the library’s service.It must be pointed out that the present situation is going from bad to worse.Accordingly, it’s imperative for us to take effective measures.To begin with, why not set up an inquiry desk at the circulation hall? In addition, the students should have access to the latest issues of foreign magazines.Finally, you’d better maintain strict order in the reading room.Thanks a lot for pay due attention to the letter.Looking forward to seeing some new changes in our library room.Yours truly，Li Ming.2.6感谢信thanks letter[2010 年真题，今年不太可能再考] 1, Outline Para1, S1, 写信目的：感谢,thanks Para2,S1,原因1：友好热情 S2，原因2：慷慨帮助 S3，原因3：友谊 S4，内容：感谢方式 Para3,S1，再次感谢 S2，祝福 Key words:Generous 慷慨的;2, Example

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Dear Judy, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of conveying my thanks for your warm reception [during my recent visit to your country].Your friendly warmth made it possible that I have a pleasant time in America.And it was your generous help that allowed me the chance to know the American culture better.In addition, I consider in an honor for me to make a friends of you.I hope that you would visit our country in due course so that I could enjoy the opportunity to repay your kindness and refresh our friendship.Please accept my sincere thanks.Wish you all the best.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.7祝贺信congratulation letter 1, Outline: P1【写信目的祝贺】P2【得来不易.激动.值得.鼓励.骄傲】P3【祝贺.期待】 Para1,S1,convey my sincere con-gratu-lations Para2,S1,how hard you’ve worked, to attain this goal.S2,imagine your excitement, realize such an ambition.S3, more deserving than you S4, real encouragement, to see your pains rewarded.Para3,S1, accept my sincere congratulations.S2, wish you still further success Key words: Excitement 激动;attain 取得;ambition 追求;deserve 值得 2, example Dear Judy, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of expressing my sincere congratulations on [your promotion to general manager of the company].I know how hard you’ve worked to attain this goal.Therefore, I can imagine your excitement when you realized such an ambition.Indeed, no one could have been more deserving than you.On the other hand, for me, it would be a real encouragement to see your pains rewarded.[ In short, I take great pride in your achievements].Please accept my sincere congratulations.I wish you still further success.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.8道歉信apology letter 1, outline P1【写信目的道歉】P2【道歉原因.道歉.解释，补救】P3【道歉.请求原谅】 Para1,S1,make a sincere apology, for my carelessness Para2,s1，S2, fell awfully sorry S3, try my best , as soon as possible Para3,s1, accept my heartfelt apology, S2, hope you can forgive, for my carelessness 2, example Dear Judy，5 / 12

I’m writing the letter for the purpose of making a sincere apology to you for my carelessness.When I arrived home, I found I had forgotten to return the music CD that you lent me.I fell awfully sorry for this.As I understand this CD is one of your favorites, I’ll try my best to send it back as soon as possible.Please accept my heartfelt apology.I genuinely hope you can forgive me for my carelessness.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.9投诉信complaint letter 1, outline P1【写信目的投诉】P2【道歉原因.道歉.解释，补救】P3【道歉.请求原谅】 Para1,S1,make a sincere apology, for my carelessness 2, example To whom it may concern, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of make a complaint about the laptop I bought last week.The reasons for my complaint are as follows.In the first place, the system often broke down for no reason, which led to the loss of my key data.In the second, the color of the screen was abnormal and couldn’t be adjusted.Accordingly, I find it difficult to go on with my work.My demand is that you should take this matter into serious consideration and give me a satisfactory replay as soon as possible.At the same time, I genuinely hope to see some improvement in your services.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.10邀请信invitation letter 1, Outline P1【自我介绍.写信目的邀请】P2【活动介绍.邀请.活动介绍.邀请】P3【客套.要求.期待】 Para1,S1,make a sincere apology, for my carelessness 2, example Dear Sir or Madam, I am head of a household electric appliance plant, which is a major manufacturer of high-quality recorders.I’m writing the letter for the purpose of inviting you to the exclusive presentation of our new models and a reception.The presentation is scheduled to take place at Noble Hotel on the third of January.I’ll fell it an honor if you could come.There will also be a reception at the tow p.m.I hope you will attend too.Since your presence is of vital importance to this occasion, I do hope you can make it.Just call our office at 010-69985421, and we will glad to reserve a place for you.I’m looking forward to seeing you at that day.Yours truly，Li Ming 2.11介绍信introduction letter 1, outline P1【写信目的介绍】P2【个人情况.计划.原因.期待】P3【感谢.期待】 2, example Dear Judy, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of introducing to your Li Ming, one of my best colleagues.6 / 12

Presently he is studying in Si Chuang University.He will graduate in July and go to America for further study.As it will be the first time for him to study aboard, he will most likely encounter a variety of difficulties.Therefore, he hoped to enjoy your guidance in some ways.I would be most grateful if you could kindly offer help.Thanks a lot for paying due attention to the letter.I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours truly，Li Ming.2.12请求信introduction letter 1.outline P1【写信目的请求】P2【条件.条件1.条件2.计划】P3【感谢.期待】 2, example To whom it may concern, I’m writing the letter for the purpose of asking you to help find a child in a remote area to offer financial aid.My requirements for the candidate are as follows.In the first place, he must be in poverty and truly in need of help.In the second, the child should be self-motivated and eager to learn.In addition, he must be willing to return to his hometown after graduation from university.Form my plant, I would send him a certain sum of money each term.Thank you for paying due attention to the letter.I’m looking forward to your replay.Yours truly，Li Ming 3，通知 notice 3.1通知 notice 1, outline P1【通知目的】P2【条件.条件1.条件2.条件3】P3【套话.期待】 2, example

NOTICE To enrich the students’ campus life, the Postgraduates’ Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization.The requirements for the candidates are as follows.In the first place, the applicants must have outstanding skill at English.In the second, they should be good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn.Last but not the least, the students with relevant working experience shall be preferred.Those interested in the activity may sign up with the monitor of their class before the first of Feb.Everybody is welcome to join in it.Postgraduates’ Association 2010.11.28 3.2备忘录 Memo 1，outline P1【目的】P2【主题.条件1.条件2】P3【套话.期待】 2, example Date: Juanary 15, 2011 To: All Students of the English Department From: Class Monitor Zhang Wei

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Subject: Sprint Excursion As spring arrives and the weather turns to be agreeable, the department has decided to organize a spring excursion in a suburban country.The activities include mountain claiming and picnic.All the students of the English department are encouraged to participate.We remind you of the necessity of bring some food and water as well as wearing comfortable shoes.Those interested in this excursion may sign up with the monitor of their class.Everybody is welcome to join in it.3.3 报告report 1，outline P1【主题】P2【主题.条件1.条件2】P3【套话.期待】 2, example To: Professor Clinton From: zhang wei Date: January 15, 2011 Subject: A progress report on graduation research This is a report I have to submit to you about my graduation paper.Last week, I gathered information from library and from an interview.Of the twelve references lists on my proposal, I found only nine, for others I will go to search in a larger library.As far as interview concerned, I had an extended interview with Mr.Liming, a professor from Peking University, who was kind enough to give me some brochures as well as a copy of report on electronic mail.I hope to use in my paper.Starting tomorrow, I will begin organizing my paper.And I can be expected to submit a rough draft by the end of the month.4，摘要写作要点

摘要，是用1500字左右的中文，摘写100字左右的英文，是阅读能力和翻译能力。思路：1读，2摘，3译

1读：浏览各段首句或2、3句，不用看完全文 2摘：选摘总结句->或句子中的关键词 3译：对摘的句子做翻译

摘的要点：文摘句（自选能写的）-》句改写（容易翻译的方式）-》句摘词（把复杂的词或句子结构简单化）

宗旨：通过摘句、改句、摘词，将难度控制到自己能写的范围内

翻译要点：1，分析句子结构，2，确定并翻译句子主干，3，添加句子的枝叶，副词或修饰，4，通读审校。

并注意：通用短语不要用单词，增加句子的丰富性。5，小作文考试重点

优先级：1,书信 2,通知+备忘 3,报告

三、大作文模板

考试要求：大作文有三类：1，文字情景描述，写评论，2，图表，写评论 3，漫画，写评论

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三种作文的难度越来越大，相同一个万能模板，只是第一段分为文字开头、图表开头、漫画开头，二、三段不太变化。字数：英语一200字，英语二150字，只需要酌情增减从句。1，文字情景作文 1.1 记忆要点

篇章结构：三段论。句子阵形：442。行文思路：总分总。写作要点：背模板，套熟句 Outline: 第一段：总述形势：

P1,S1: :开头是趋势，S2：双方不满意；S3：有人要支持，有人抱怨去；S4：我看是好事 第二段，提供论据

P2,S1: 证据非难事S2：先经济政治，S2a调查可证实S3：再确信好事，S4：并不容忽视 第三段，深化认识： P3,S1：结论深了去S2：公众别怀疑 [可选S3，我信这趋势] 记忆要点：

S1：These days, an increasingly hot issue, among the public that, a growing number of, willing to S2:whenever, come to this subject, spring up opposite voices S3a:，tend to, view it as a blessing(beneficial), S3b:，claim, it’s a hell S4:。For my part, incline to support, former view S1：：of no difficulty, put forward several arguments, to account for the phenomenon S2：：at the top of the list, rapid development of the economy, steady improvement of living standards, more and more people[family] can afford a private car S2a:：According to a recent survey, about 55% of, have such financial resources S3：：in the second, admit that, to study abroad[ to obtain another degree], enrich their experiences [enable people to find well-pay job] S4:：last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that, lifelong study has become a must in the current era of knowledge explosion [ we should keep up with the times] S1: considing what has been argued so far, safely come to the conclusion, trend, S2: accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public, regard it with, too much anxiety.S3: And I firmly believe that, situation, continue for quite a while, in the years to come 1.2 作文模板[不要写作文题，没有明确就不要写] These days, it has become an increasingly hot topic among the public that

[a growing number of college students are willing to work as a nurse after graduation.] [a growing number of adults intend to continue their further education].Whenever it comes to this subject, there will always spring up opposite voices.Some people tend to view it as a blessing, while the other claims that it’s a hell.For my part, I am inclined to support the former view.It’s of no difficulty to put forward several arguments to illustrate [account for] my standpoint[ the phenomenon].At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and the steady improvement of living standards,[more and more Chinese families can afford their children’s higher education abroad][those with various degrees are in great demand].According to a recent survey, about 55% of [Chinese families in big cities have such financial resources][ of job hunters have found their desirable positions].In the second, we must admit that [to study abroad can enrich their life experience][to obtain another degree can enable people to find well-paid jobs].Last but not the least, the fact could not be ignored that [children will have to be independent of their parents] [ lifelong study has become a must in the current era of knowledge explosion].9 / 12

Considering what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal and acceptable.Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.[ 可选Therefore, I firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.] 2，图表情景作文 2.1 Outline Figures-> change-> phenomenon-> issue/topic/subject P1,s1:有变化；S2：具体变化[上升还是下降]；S3：数据引用[开始，后来];S4：与此同时 Para2与Para3与文字情景作文相同 首段记忆要点

S1, what is shown in the char above, demonstrate[reveal] clearly, some change, have taken place, with regard to, [the recruitment number].S2,based upon the data of the chart, one can see that, has been on a steady rise [decline] all the time S3, In the year of , is only about, but within no more than server years, went up[down] to.[S4,有两种变化时描述第二种变化,meanwhile, have witnessed [slight] changes].2.2 template What is shown in the chart above reveals clearly that [remarkable/some] changes have taken place with regard to [university graduates’ expected income毕业生期望薪酬] [ the recruitment of Master of Engineer] [DINK families in China].Based upon the data of the chart[diagram], one can see that the [expected income per month][number][percentage] of [recruitment of ME ][such families] has been on a steady rise[decline] all the time.In the year of [1998,图表数据], it [recruitment number] was only about [3,100 RMB] [1%], while within no more than several years, it [the number][percentage] went up[down] to [2,100 RMB] [12%] in [2009].[ At the same time, college graduates’ real income[the number of others] has witnessed slight changes.] It’s of no difficulty to come up with several possible factors to account for the trend.At the top of the list, with the rapid development of [higher education] our economy and the steady improvement of living standards, [a great number of families are rich enough to afford the private cars][the number of graduates has been growing.][ mobile phone has become a life necessity] [a growing number of couples enjoy family time without children.][those technical are in great demand] According to a recent survey, about 55% of [families in big cities have plan to buy a car in next year][students claim that competition between students is increasing] [families have no plans to bear children][employers need professional graduates].In the second, we must admit that [a good many of graduates have turned down-to-earth].[there are a great number of population in our country][some couples are showing great worry for the rapid growth of population].[ME can help people to find well-paid position with great ease.] Last but not the least, the fact could not be ignored that [mobile service in our country has been increasingly cheaper][youngth have come to place more emphasis on the choice of life work instead of monthly rewards].[it’s too expensive to raise a children][lifelong study has become a must in the era of knowledge explosion].Considering which has been argued so far, we could safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal[abnormal] and acceptable[negative].Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to

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regard it with too much anxiety.[如果是负面:Accordingly, it is urgent for us to take effective measures to reverse the trend][ 可选Therefore, I firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.]

3，图画情景作文 3.1 Outline 1，看Directions, 审题

2，看图，先看宏观，再看微观，3，确认自己主题：支持或反对 2，作文结构

Para1: S1，赞美图画:thought-provoking drawing, attract, attention by, startling originality S2，感慨Looking at this drawing, every reader sink into, meditation, upon its implication S3，描述As is shown by the cartoon, S3，解读 Needless to say, this picture is intend to illustrate the gravity of [ the current traffic jam] Para 2: S1有原因It is of no difficulty ,to put forward, some factors, to account for, above phenomenon S2：原因1, To begin with, rapid development of economy, steady improvement of living standards S3举例,Based upon, survey, about 55% of , S4,原因2，In addition, we must admit that S5,原因3，Finally [Last but not the least],the factor cannot be ignored that Para 3: S1，评论Taking into account, what has been argued so far, I’m inclined to view, as.., abnormal, negative [normal positive] S2：预测Accordingly, It is of necessity for the public, to regard it, with too much anxiety.3.2 template This though-provoking drawing will catch every reader’s attention by its startling originality.Looking at the drawing, I believe, every reader will sink into meditation upon its implication.As is shown by the cartoon, [every car, lorry and bus on the road moves at a rather slow speed, even no faster than the grandmotherly women walking nearby with a snail.][various culture elements, such as Kongfu, Beijing Opera and Laoshe are surprisingly boiled in a hotpot] Needless to say, this picture is meant to illustrate the gravity of [the current traffic jam][culture integration].It’s of no difficulty to put forward some possible factors to account for the phenomenon.At the top of the list, with the rapid development of our economy and the steady improvement of living standards, [论据一 a growing number of families are rich enough to afford private cars][there is an increasing demand for various cultural products].According to a recent Internet survey, about 55% of [举例families in the big city have plans for a car ][people in big cities are positively in favor of the trend].In addition, we must admit that [论据二 the public transport system still fails to keep up with the times与时俱进].Last but not the least, the fact cannot be ignored that [论据三 the public have yet to improve their sense of environmental protection][multi-cultural society will make our life rich and colorful].Considering what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that the phenomenon is normal [/abnormal] and positive[/negative].Accordingly, it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.[ it is urgent for us to take effective measure to

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reserve the trend.] [And we firmly believe that the situation will continue for quite a while in the years to come.]

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第五篇：蒋永光党性分析材料

党性分析材料

蒋永光

自开展”三信”教育活动以来，我积极参与、认真参加集中学习，并坚持自学，使自己在思想上有了大的收获，尤其加深了对“三个代表”的理解，使自己充分认识到了先进性教育活动的重大历史意义和现实意义。在活动中注重有针对性地查摆自己在人生观、世界观、价值观、理想信念、宗旨观念、服务观念、依法行政等方面存在的突出问题，我个人素质、工作能力和业务水平等各方面都有了较大的提高。

一、存在的问题 １、日常学习不够，理论水平、素质能力还不能适应形势发展的需要。在日常工作中总是有意无意地放松了自我学习，忽视了知识能力的培养再造，学习的自觉性、主动性不强。与本职业务有关的就学一点，与本职业务联系不紧的就不去学或者很少涉猎，在学习上搞实用主义，知识结构单一，把握形势、了解大局不深不透，还不善于研究思考问题，不善于理论联系实际。

２、日常工作生活中，在保持和发挥先进性方面，对时时处处保持先进性这根“弦”绷得不够紧，有时把自己混同于一般群众，降低了对自己的要求和标准，满足于过得去、差不多，不善于创新。

３、在工作标准上有时不够严格，不能从尽善尽美、时时处处争一流的标准上去把握。不能够很好的灵活掌握方针政策，工作循规蹈矩，按部就班，不力求全面发展，缺乏主动性和创造性，满足于应付本职，只求完成任务，不求精益求精；不求有功，但求无过，创新的思维不活；对市场监管和业务工作考虑不深入，看问题也不够全面。

4、在本职工作中，虽然我能较好的完成我的本职工作，但是在工作中我感觉自己主观能动性不强。在工作中发现了一些问题，特别是发现一些我们内部管理上的，一些我们和其他部门协调上的，而这又都不能单凭我个人的想法和力量就能改变的，我就不向领导提出来，而且也存在自己怕我自己的一些想法和意见被别人误会，认为我对工作有意见或者对某些同志有意见，所以很多想法也没有说出来更谈不上去改变了，存在与己无关思想。

5、服务意识观念还不够强，还没有自觉把企业和群众对我们的满意度作为检验工作成效的最高标准，热情服务、微笑服务、文明服务的要求还不够自觉，个别时候还做不到“来有迎生、问有答声”。有些工作做的还不另服务对象感到满意，存在小成即满的思想。

二、存在问题的原因

以上仅是自己通过对照检查找出的几个问题，还有一些未发现的不足，请同志们给予批评指正。分析产生这些问题的原因，主要就是自己逐渐放松了对自己的要求。

一是平时不注意对政治理论的学习和世界观的改造，致使政治修养不高，理想信念不牢，组织纪律淡化，贯彻执行党的路线、方针、政策不坚决。

二是对管理业务知识学习缺乏系统性，学习深度不够，学习的理论知识与本职工作实际结合掌握的不到位；不注重学习法律、学习业务，业务素质不强，执法水平不高。

三是对自己的要求不够严格。随着年龄的增长产生了惰性，（或年轻经验不足），由于没有提高工作能力和思想素质，导致自己只看到点线而看不到面，不能在全局的立场上思考问题，解决问题，没有起到一个推动我们事业前进的作用。

四是服务意识差，不懂得换位思考，一心只有自己不犯错，不考虑工作的需要和服务对象的要求。

三、整改措施

1、要持之以恒、坚持不懈地抓好学习。学理论，要抓住实质，在提高理论素养上下功夫，加深对 “三个代表”重要思想的理解； 2、转变观念，改善工作作风，提高自身素质。努力实践三个代表重要思想，牢记党的宗旨，严格要求自己，时刻遵守党的章程，认真履行党员义务，积极参加党组织活动；团结同志，自觉维护党的形象，做到思想上、言行上与党组织保持高度一致；不断加强党性修养，增强组织观念，树立雷厉风行的工作作风，不断提高自己的工作能力和水平，提高自己党员的先锋模范带头作用。

3、增强创新意识，工作争强当先。与时俱进，开拓创新，进一步更新观念；大胆工作，敢于管理，工作中勤于思考；在廉洁自律的工作环境中自我监督，确保不发生违纪事件；多发现问题，多想办法，多出路子；兢兢业业，克己奉公，扎实工作，争做实践“三个代表”的模范，争当先锋党员。

4、增强优质服务意识。通过学习整训，做到自觉服务、主动服务、文明服务、优质服务。把全心全意为人民服务放在首位，为事业的发展为实现自我价值不断努力。