初二学生英语作文及评析

第一篇：初二学生英语作文及评析

Hi,my name is Li hua.I am 14 year old.My Birthday is on May 10th.I have two habbits.I am good at singing.I like to dance and I like to play to guitar.If your need me,please call me at 643-2508 today.老师评语：本文出自一个初一升初二学生手中，整体来说句子还算连贯，逻辑清楚并且应用了初中一些重要的短语例如：be good at ,call somebody at,like to do something.但是还有一些错误：

1.乐器名词前要加定冠词the.Play the guitar

2.You是指你，你们

3.Your是指你的你们的，形容词性物主代词

4.年龄的表达方法：14 years old或者是14-year-old

5.只有首写字母或者是专有名词要大写。因此文章的Birthday→birthday

6.Like to do something 或者是like doing something

7.不要遗失信息点。在打电话后还可以加上邮件即 or email at ****** 建议：对于这些刚接触英语写作的学生来说，多读，多背，多记是写好作文的关键。同时这些作文也需要专业老师细心地评论。经过多次的这样的修改，学生一定会有很大的提高。

本文为岳老师整理李老师的稿件。感谢老师们对德育家教网的大力支持。因为有了这些老师的孜孜不倦，才能有长沙德育家教网的不断强盛。

第二篇：初二英语作文

初二英语作文1

Hello, everyone. I can tell you about me! I am a happy girl. My name is Nina, I am 12 years old this year. My hobbies are

singing and dancing. I usually play basketball on Saturday. I want to grow up to be a doctor .I didn’t like playing

video games, but I like reading some books .I ride bike to school .I go to school from Monday to Friday. I am a good

student in my school .Because I so like study .I am good kid too, Do you know? I usually do homework, help my family. My

cook food is tasty .I like cat my favorite season is fall. I like warm and sunny. I so like red. This is me! What about

you?

大家好。我可以告诉你关于我的！我是一个快乐的女孩。我叫妮娜，今年12岁。我的爱好是唱歌和跳舞。我通常在星期六打篮球。我想长大后成为一名医生，我不喜欢玩电子游戏，但我喜欢读一些书，我骑自行车上学，我从星期一到星期五上学。我是一个好学生，因为我很喜欢学习，我也是一个好孩子，你知道吗？我通常做家庭作业，帮助我的家庭。我的烹调食物很好吃，我喜欢猫，我比较喜欢的季节是秋天。我喜欢温暖和阳光。我很喜欢红色。这是我！你呢？

初二英语作文2

I am Jack. My favorite sport is football. I often play football with my friends. I like Ronaldo very much. I want to be a scientist in the future. This is my dream. Steve is my classmate. He is good at swimming. He goes swimming twice a week. His favorite player is Sun Yang. His dream job is to be a great swimmer. What about Mary? Tennis is her favorite sport. She plays tennis every day. Her favorite player is Li Na. But her dream is to be a dancer.

初二英语作文3

Most people believe that the rich people are very busy and have no time to play, while the poor people are in the contrary. Actually, the poorer, the less time, because the rich people spend money to buy time and the poor people spend time to struggle for their lives. So why don’t we change the attitude to life. If the money people make is almost the same, then why not give up to make the little extra income, just go home after work and spend the time with families. We can’t control the world, but we can make some changes in ourselves. In that way, we can be satisfied with our life.

初二英语作文4

今年暑假，我去了溧阳的第29届疯狂英语夏令营，在那里我快乐地度过了这短暂的'12天。这是我第三次来，但是这次效果明显不一样！这次，我没有浪费时间。不像以前，骗老师说肚子疼，去校医办公室休息。后来被校医叫十二指肠，真的很气人！但是，如果我不总是假装肚子疼，我想我也不会被称为十二指肠。总之，都是我的错。我觉得不应该怪医生。

夏令营的时候，我发烧了。没想到。我发烧了！自从上了初中，就没发烧过。本来打算初中毕业就不发烧了。不发烧的事情就这样断了。真是不甘心！

在这12天里，我交了很多朋友，——陈、杜欣怡、石静、兰(都在宿舍)和小(我的教子)！这些朋友，我这辈子都不会忘记！在这十二天里，他们给了我很多帮助！我真的希望能再见到他们。我想我们会再见面的。

我们班有五位老师：——孔德强(讲师)、李玉萌、顾玉轩、郑静、陈果(助教)。然而，其中一个老师不知道他为什么离开(陈果先生)，所以我不能忍受他！我们班分成四组。李玉萌老师就是教我们这个组的助理老师。我最喜欢李玉萌老师！

夏令营的时候，我和班主任还有三个同学组成了一个小家庭。我们有一个保姆(林宝浩)，但是因为想回家所以走的比较早。我们这个小家庭的成员有：(干妈)，陈(大哥，简称为“”)，钟乔(二哥)，小(三姐)，剩下的就是我(小姐姐)！我们是一个幸福的小家庭！

这12天，我对你的学习一直很认真，没有辜负父母的期望！谢谢爸爸妈妈给我这个机会再次参加溧阳疯狂英语训练营！

初二英语作文5

My best friend Tom

My best friend is Tom. He is taller than me but I’m more outgoing than him. He is talented in music. He drinks milk every day. He exercises twice a week. He sleeps nine hours every night. He often goes to Xinhua Book Store. He thinks Xinhua Book Store is the best book store in our town. He likes to watch the news. Because he hopes to find out what’s going on around the world. He is always ready to help other classmates. All of us like him very much.

初二英语作文6

莫奈，克劳德(1840年11月14日出生于法国巴黎-1926年年12月5日，吉维尼)法国画家，印象派风格的发起者、领导者和坚定的倡导者。他被认为是典型的印象派画家，因为在他漫长的职业生涯中，他对运动理想的热爱是坚定不移的，他的一幅画《日出“(muse marmottan，paris1872年)——给了这个团体他的名字。他的青年时代是在勒阿弗尔度过的，在那里，他最初是一名优秀的漫画家，但后来被他早期的导师布丹转变为风景画，他从布丹那里获得了对户外绘画的强烈偏好。1859年，他在巴黎瑞士工作室学习，并与毕沙罗建立了友谊。在阿尔及尔服了两年兵役后，他回到勒阿弗尔并见到了jongkind，他说他应归功于他所接受的“我眼中的权威教育”。然后，在1862年，他进入巴黎格雷的工作室，在那里遇到了雷诺阿、西斯利和巴兹尔，与他们一起组成了印象派小组的核心。莫奈对户外绘画的热爱从他最雄心勃勃的早期作品之一《花园里的女人》的著名故事中可见一斑。1866-67).这幅画大约有2.5米高，为了让他能够在外面画出所有的画，他在花园里挖了一条沟，这样画布就可以通过滑轮上升或下降到他需要的高度。库尔贝在他工作的时候拜访了他，并说莫奈甚至不会画背景中的树叶，除非光线条件完全正确。

初二英语作文7

Dear Mary,

How are you? Now, let me tell you about my vacation.

I will go to Guilin on vacation. Do you know Guiling? It’s in the south of China and it’s one of the most famous cities in China because of its beautiful sights. There are lots of beautiful mountains and rivers in Guilin. Many Chinese people think they are the best in the world. Every year thousands of tourists visit it. It’s best to travel around Guilin by ship. I think it must be very funny.

What about your vacation?

Yours,

Hu Xinyu

第三篇：初二 英语作文文档

初中生英语作文--请假条

假如你叫张帆，因发高烧今天和明天两天不能上学。请你给你的外籍英语教师Mr.White写一张请假条，说明你这两天不能上学的原因。词数70左右。参考词汇：request for leave, ask for leaveAsking for Leave

March 26th, 2013

Dear Mr.White,I felt dizzy when I got up this morning.So I told this to my mother.When sherealized I was sick, she took me to the hospital immediately.Doctor said I hada high fever caused by cough.I had to put on a drip and take medicines for twodays.I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today and tomorrow.Hereis the certificate the doctor gave me.Could I ask for leave two days ? Iwillgo back to school as soon as I recover.Thank you very much!

Yours,Zhang Fan

翻译 :

请假条

怀特先生,今天早晨起床的时候，我感觉到头晕，因此我告诉了妈妈,她知道我生病后，马上就带我去医院了。医生说我是由于感冒引起的高烧，要打两天的点滴，要吃药还要我好好休息两天。我很抱歉的告诉你今天和明天我不能去学校了, 这是医生给我开具的证明。我能请两天假吗？我一恢复就尽快回学校。非常感谢您!

学生：张帆

第四篇：初二英语作文

初二下册英语作文集锦

1.My hobby（我的爱好）

（一）I like sports very much.We usually take exercise in the early morning.We do eye exercises in the afternoon.After school we play basketball or football..After supper, I often go out for a walk with my parents.My favourite sport is basketball.I often watch basketball matches on TV on Sundays.I think doing sports is good for our health.Our school holds a sports meeting every spring.It really can relax myself and build my body.（二）I have many hobbies, such as reading ,painting, running ,looking after animals and so on.My favorite hobby is reading.I began to read at the age of 5.I often read in my spare time.It can make me feel free.I can also get knowledge and new skills from reading.Reading has brought me enjoyment and success.By the way ,what’s your favorite hobby? Tell me ,ok?

2.Friendship（友谊）

Everyonehasfriends.Friendshipisoneofthemostimportantthinginourdailylife.Afriendisonewho isthereforyouwhenyouareintrouble.Andwhenyouare happy , youarewillingtosharethemwithhim/her.Youcannotlivewithoutafriend , justlikeyoucannotlivewithoutair.Yourmost closeonesarefriendsbesidesyourparents.Ifyouhavefriends ,remembertotakecareofeachotherandtoforgivehis/her mistakes.Onlyinthiswaycanyourfriendshiplast longer.Friendship can make us happy and warm.So we should make more friends.3.用一般将来时描述未来的生活

In the future I think my life will be more interesting and our world will become more beautiful.I will be a teacher and make friends with my students.Also, I will live in an apartment with my parents.Every day I go to work happily and at night I will relax myself.Besides, I will have a pet, perhaps a lovely dog.Every day I can go out for a walk with it.When I am at work, I will work hard and be a good teacher.In my holiday I will go to visit every part of the world, especially some famous cities.I will be happy every day.4.用过去进行时描述某个时间正在发生的事情。

（一）One day a girl was going to the park at 11:00 in the morning.She put her bike near the swimming pool.She saw two boys swimming in the pool.At 11:15, while she was sitting, a boy took her bike away.A moment later, she found her bike was lost.Then she called the police.(二)Jim’s day

Jim had a busy day yesterday.He was getting up at 6：15 in the morning, then he had breakfast and went to school.After having two classes, he began to do some exercises.He was having lunch at noon.After that, he was playing football at 3：40 in the afternoon.At 6：20 he was having supper.Then he did his homework.At 10：45 he was going to bed.What a busy day it was!

5.自己的爱好

（一）I like to collect many things, such as nice stones, names of movies, books, toys, photos of famous people.But I like collecting stamps best.I have been collecting stamps for five years.When I was very young, my uncle sent me a stamp from Australia.I loved it at once.Since then I tried to collect stamps and fell in love with it.I have more than one hundred stamps.Some were sent by my friends, some were collected by myself;some were from foreign countries, some were Chinese.I like them.Often, I take them out and show them to my friends.(二)my hobby

Different people have different hobbies.For example, someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on.I used to read books and draw pictures because by reading books I could learn many funny things.But now I don't like it.I can only learn from books.I couldn't get knowledge from others.I need a change.Traveling is my favorite hobby now.But I can't go traveling a lot.I can visit many different places of interest by traveling.I can learn a lot about people, places and history.It's very interesting.What is your hobby? Let's share each other！

6.请写一篇关于你外出旅行的短文，内容包括：时间、地点、人物、交通方式、天气、食物、活动及感受。

I went to Guilin with my parents last winter vacation.Guilin is a small but very beautiful city with mountains and rivers around.It’s not cold at all, even in winter.I took the train there so that I could enjoy the scenery on my way to the city.When you go to Guilin, one thing you can’t miss is the Guilin rice noodles.It’s my favorite.We also went boating and enjoyed the songs sung by local people.Amazing!And we had fun playing in the water.I hope I can go again in spring time.It should be more beautiful at that time

7.根据汉语提示及要求，以 My Dream Job 为题用英语写一篇短文。提示：1。想成为一名记者。

2。打算给报纸，杂志写文章。

3。高中毕业后想去北京上大学。

4． 想在一家电台工作并环游世界。

My Dream Job（我的理想工作）

When I grow up, I’m going to be a reporter.Next year, I’m going to write articles for magazines.I’m going to a university in Beijing after senior school.Maybe I’m going to find a part-time job and save some money.Next, I’m going to work for a radio station as a

journalist.Then I’m going to travel all over the world.8.my gift for mum.（给妈妈的礼物）

（一）Mother’s Day is coming.I want to give my mother a big surprise.I’ll buy a special gift for her.I know she likes computers and she also likes taking photos.So I want to buy a new one.Because our computer is too old to use.But I don’t have enough money.So I must buy another one.I’ll go to the shop to buy a new album and write my favorite words on it.Tomorrow I will give it to my mom.I think it’s the best gift for her.Because this album falls my love.9.The summer holiday plan(假期计划)

(一)The summer holiday is coming.My parentsdoesn't work, too.So I am going to Shanghai with my parents on vacation.I am going

sightseeing and going shopping.We also are going to visit the museums.I am going to the bookstore to buy some books.I hope we will have a good time there.（二）As we all know ,Summer vacation is come ,I think I have lot of something I could do.First of all ,I will doing my home work well, If I finish my work, I want to try to travel with myself.I want to go Beijing, because I want to see The Bird Nest。I think I will learn lot of something to make me grow up in Beijing。I will notafraid problem on my way。I believe nothing is improbable if you do。So I will study harder than before。

第五篇：初二英语作文

【精选】初二英语作文汇编六篇

在平平淡淡的学习、工作、生活中，大家都经常接触到作文吧，作文是人们把记忆中所存储的有关知识、经验和思想用书面形式表达出来的记叙方式。你所见过的作文是什么样的呢？以下是小编为大家收集的初二英语作文6篇，供大家参考借鉴，希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。

Reading is very important in our life.We can get knowledge throug h reading.It can not only open our minds but also make us more

intelligent.Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English.Textbooks, newspapers, magazines and other kinds of reading mater ials ca n help us k now more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person.I’m planning to read at le ast 5 books in the coming holiday.And I’ll spend more time reading every day in my seni or high school life.Reading makes a full man!Let’s start reading now.

You take notice in some places, you'll see the fact that most smokers are young people and even some are middle school students.It is said that in China the number of the people smoking is about 0.3billion.Why do so many people smoke? Some think that smoking is pleasure, some believe that they can refresh themselves by smoking.In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which has great harm to people'health.The study of smoking shows that many kinds of illnesses have something to do with smoking.Smoking itself is a waster.It costs one so much money, Besides, many fires are caused by careless smokers.Today more and more people all over the world want to give up smoking.If you’re mot a smoker, don’t start.

Beijing Opera

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.

Today, early in the morning, when I woke up, I found it was later for half an hour than I usually did.Then I remembered that I didn’t set up the morning call last night.So I just grabbed some bread and rushed to the bus station.The bus seemed always not appearing when I needed it.Finally, I took on a bus, then I felt so relieved, because I wouldn’t be late for school.Suddenly, the bus stopped and the driver told us to change another bus, because there was something wrong with the wheels.I was so worried.When I arrived school, I was late.It was such a bad day for me.今天早上我醒来的时候我发现我比平时晚了半个小时起床，我才想起我昨晚没有调闹钟。因此我拿了点面包就冲到公共汽车站。公共汽车似乎总是在我需要的时候却不出现。最后，我坐上了公共汽车。我终于放松了，因为不会迟到了。可是车突然就停了，司机叫我们换车，因为车轮出故障了。我很焦急，等我到学校时，我已经迟到了。这对我来说真是糟糕的一天啊。

Time flies when we are having fun is an old expression.We know, as we reminisce of our past, time flies regardless.As we grow beyond our teenage.We remember the times of fun we had when we were young, when we were in primary school.We had little concern, little responsibilities.We all remember chasing our friends in catch, sneaking around in hide-and-seek and the fun in the playground.As we grow with time, our lives become filled with stress and worries.It is in these times we remember what we had, what we took for granted.As we do so, we look forward to what we can achieve and what we will see of ourselves years down the tracks.当我们开心时，时间过得真快，是一个古老的表达式。我们知道,当我们回忆我们的过去,时光飞逝。

当我们长成青少年时。我们记得我们年轻时有趣的事情,我们在小学的时候。我们有小的问题,小的责任。我们都记得追逐过我们的朋友,在操场上偷偷摸摸在捉迷藏和有趣的事情。

当我们随着时间长大,我们的生活变得充满压力和忧虑。正是在这些时候我们记得我们小时候,我们认为理所当然。当我们这样做,我们期待着我们能实现,我们将看到自己当年追逐的踪迹。

Heal the world

Nowadays，world leaders are in Copenhagen talking about climate change.Who has such a strong power to gather them from busy work？It‘s our mother——the Earth that has told her kids to start to heal the environment for the pressing threats they are facing now.治愈这个世界

如今，世界各国领导人都在哥本哈根谈论气候变化问题。谁拥有如此强大的力量来从繁忙的.工作中收集他们？这是我们的母亲--这个地球母亲告诉她的孩子们开始为他们现在面临的紧迫的威胁开始愈合。

It‘s commonly thought that lots of countries are blind to the protection of environment while developing the country.And as the quality of life has developed，many families have its own car.As a result，more and more CO2 has caused the earth to be a “Green House”。If no measure is taken，a large number of kids won’t see the lovely and beautiful snow in winter before long.普遍认为，在发展中国家，许多国家都是对环境保护的盲目性。随着生活质量的发展，许多家庭都有自己的车。结果，越来越多的二氧化碳导致地球成为一个“绿色住宅”，如果不采取措施，大量的孩子们在不久的冬天就不能看到美丽的雪。

To my delight，some people have been concerned about the environment.The movie <<20xx>> is just a good example.It took me 150 minutes to watch the movie.At the same time，I spent a long time considering the meaning which the movie wants to tell people.When the world is at an end，can anyone heal themselves？It‘s obvious that the answer is No.It’s commonly accepted that what the director wants to tell people is that we should take measures to beautify the environment at once or we‘ll die soon.让我高兴的是，有些人一直在关注环境。这部电影是一个很好的例子。我花了150分钟看了这部电影。同时，我花了很长的时间来考虑这部电影想告诉人们的意思。当这个世界结束时，谁能治愈自己，很明显，这个答案是否定的。导演想告诉人们的是，我们应该采取措施来美化环境，否则我们很快就会死去。

In a word，the environment pollution is a matter of life and death——a matter no country can afford to ignore.People all over the world are supposed to spare no effort to heal the world.Let‘s take action from here and now！

环境污染是一个生命与死亡的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。全世界的人都应该不遗余力地去治愈这个世界。让我们从现在开始行动吧！