第一篇：初二语文改错练习
初二语文改错练习
1、下面的语段有好几处语病，请根据文后要求，用规定的符号直接在原文上修改。（4分）①今年央视春晚中，来自中国台湾的魔术师刘谦把董卿的戒指变到鸡蛋里的一幕，让亿万观众哑口无言，随后网络上打响了一场声事浩大的揭秘游戏大讨论。②有网友认为“董卿就是刘谦的托儿”，有网友猜想“道具是特制的，暗藏机关”。③刘谦回应，“这些‘破解’都不正确”。他认为，“挖空心思破解魔术”是观众的“不正常的欣赏习惯”。④在春晚一炮打响后，刘谦一直处于频繁表演，他在内地表演的数十个魔术几乎不重样，这对魔术师来说是个极大的考验和挑战。
（1）语段中有一个错别字是，改为。
（2）语段在语言的表达上有几处毛病，请找出来，用规定的符号在原文上加以修改。（不得超过4处）
2、下面的语段有好几处语病，请根据文后要求，用规定的符号直接在原文上修改。（4分）①有些人认为爱因斯坦这样的天才几百年才能出现一个。②事实上，幼年的爱因斯坦与一般的小孩比起来发育比较迟缓，到了四五岁还不太会说话。③他刚入中学读书时，老师们都嫌他“生性孤辟，智力迟钝”，责备他“不守纪律，想入非非。”④不久他勒令退学了。⑤在家的一段时间，他经常去邻居山姆大叔家玩耍。⑥后来，他到了瑞士的阿劳州立中学，这所学校主张学生自我负责，老师的责任是向学生展示知识和科学的魅力，鼓动他们的求知欲望，让他们的智力得到自由发展。⑦在这所学校里，爱因斯坦逐渐变得乐观、自信，他对知识的渴望也达到了前所未有的程度，为他后来的成功奠定了重要的水平。⑧可见，不同的教育环境和方法，对一个人的影响是非常大的。
要求：（1）文中有一句话与中心关系不大，请删去。（1分）
（2）语段在语言表达及标点使用上有毛病，请选择3～4处加以修改。（3分）
3、下面是某位同学的作文片段，请根据文后要求，用规定的符号在原文上直接修改。（4分）
①理想，就像刍鹰的翅膀，如果你有着高飞的理想，并且肯去实现，理想可以带着你飞向成功的彼岸。②若是你有着远大的理想，却怀着“明天开始努力”，那么你将是一只经不起风吹雨打的小燕雀。③要是你胸无点墨，没有奋斗的目标，那么你将永远不能登上辉煌的高峰。④要奋斗，总要有一个具体的目标和计划，“万事具备，只欠东风”，有了计划理想才能一步一步实现。⑤理想对于我们来说就是指路的明灯，是克服困难的阻力，对我们的成长起着重要的作用。⑥我们从学生时代就必需要树立崇高的理想，并且朝着这个理想去拼搏；去奋斗。
要求：（1）删掉片段中与中心无关的一个句子。（1分）
（2）片段在语言表达及标点使用上有毛病，请选择3～4处加以修改。（3分）
4．下面是某小说的评论片断，根据文后要求，用规定符号在原文上直接修改。（3分）
①这部小说，作者借一座老宅即将被拆除的挈机，传递出了那个万物复苏的年代里南方小城特殊的气息，借一群芸芸众生极为日常化的生活，塑造了多个市井小民。②小说尽管再现了那个年代特有的社会氛围和生活场景，还浓墨重彩地写了改革开放大潮在老宅子中发起的颇具文化意味的波斓。
要求：（1）必须修改①中的一个错标点和②中一处错用的关联词；
（2）其他在错别字、搭配不当、成分残缺、重复啰嗦等方面任选两处修改。
5、下面是某报上的一则广告，根据文后要求，用规定符号在原文上直接修改。（3分）
①国家大豆技术研究推广中心——太平洋天然食品有限公司被国家列为“火炬计划”重点技术高新企业，公司主要从事具有大豆生物特色的现代生物医药、保健食品的研发、销售与服务工作。②目前，为推广高科技大豆生物医学成果在心脑血管及肠胃道等疾病防治领域，该公司发起了延长衰老健康工程，“生命更美丽”，凡得到增送的中老年朋友，均可凭有效证件，到指定地点免费领取。
要求：（1）句①有一处语序不当。
（2）句②在标点和表达上有多处错误，请各选一处加以修改。
6、下面是某校心理健康教育与咨询中心致全体师生的一封题为《积极乐观，从容应对甲流》的公开信的片段，内容和格式方面出了一些问题。（4分）
各位老师同学，“甲型H1N1流感”正蔓延全球，我们的生活正面临严竣考验。从心理学的角度看，这样的恐慌是缺乏安全感，在疫情蔓延期间这属于正常反应，但如果反应过度，就会影响我们的学习与生活。愉悦的心情，能增加身体的免疫能力，改善烦燥焦虑的情绪。能否有健康的生活方式也是预防疾病和抵抗流行性疾病如“甲流”的最佳方法。„„
老师们，全社会都在行动，我们的学校也正在开展各种有效的措施。让我们以勇气做基石，信任做纽带，积极乐观，从容应对，让甲流离我们远去！
2009.10.21
校心理健康教育与咨询中心
7、下面这封感谢信的格式有毛病，请依次指出。（４分）
××中学：
我儿小强身患重症，家境又十分困难，连筹医药费都很困难。正在我们一筹莫展之际，学校领导将五万元的捐款送到我们手里，这笔救命钱解了我们的然眉之急，小强重新返回学校，恢复健康。为此，我万分感谢学校的广大师生，是你们的爱心挽救了我儿的生命。
李林荣
初二语文改错练习答案
1、（1）“事”改为“势”（1分）；（2）“哑口无言”改为“瞠目结舌”；“打响”改为“掀起”；“刘谦一直处于频繁表演”缺宾语，应加上“的状态”（3分。改对1处得1分，得满3分为止。如有其他改法，只要合理也可得分）
2、（1）删除第5句（2）“辟”改为“僻 ”； “鼓动”改为“激发”；“水平”改为“基础”；“为他后来”前面加上“这”；‘想入非非。”’中‘。”’改为‘”。’ 如有其他正确改法也可以。
3、（1）删掉句④②；（1分）
（2）句①中“刍”改“雏”；句②“明天开始努力”后加“想法”或“念头”；句③“胸无点墨”改“胸无大志”； 句⑤“阻力”或 “动力”。句⑥“必需”改“必须”。（3分，改出一处1分，给满3分为止，其他改法只要合理即可。）
4．（1）①中“特殊气氛”后的“，”应为“；”，②中“尽管”应为“不仅”。（2）①中“挈机”应为“契机”；应删除“一群”；“市井小民”后应加上“的生动形象”； ②中“发起”应改为“掀起”；“波斓”应为“波澜”。（3分。改对一处得1分，修改不得超过4处，超过一处扣1分；其他修改合理的也可按要求给分。）
5、修改参考：
（1）将“高新”放到“重点”后面。（2）句②中在 “防治领域”的后面添加“的应用”；或将“延长”改为 “延缓”； “健康工程”后面的逗号 改为破折号； 在“‘生命更美丽’”后面加上 “活动”；或把“增”改成 “赠”。（3分。改对一处得1分，若有其他改法，只要符合要求且正确合理亦可得分。）
6、（1）“竣”改成“峻”；（2）“是缺乏安全感”后加“的表现”；（3）“增加身体的免疫能力”中“增加”改为“增强”或“提高”；（4）“烦燥”的“燥”改成“躁”；（5）删掉“能否有”；（6）“老师们”改为“老师们，同学们”；（7）“开展各种有效的措施”中“开展”改成“采取”；（8）将信的署名和日期调换位置。（共4分。改对1 处得1分，给满4分为止。如有其他改法只要合理亦可给分）
7、（1）无标题（2）缺少致敬语（3）缺日期（4）“然”改为“燃”（5）“重新返回学校”和“恢复健康”调换位置
第二篇：经典短文改错练习
短文改错.1.Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong.Together 76.with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four.In the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78.prize.The song “Bad Girl” made her famous.The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records.Some of her songs 80.were very popular.She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends.When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82.organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83.Kong people to bravely face the disease.Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003.The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85.remembered by people.2.When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to have.One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, too.This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．
3.Every day John goes to work by trains.He always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more quickly.One day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his station.He didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go back.He arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ 4.In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for dinner.So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the restaurant.After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79．___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ meal.Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.I wrote something improper down secret.My 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.I looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was poor.Then I wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5.Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog.There are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less alone.We were 77． right.They play together happily all days.Our daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she used.In a way it 79．
is like having two children in the house.All of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． want.The dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wash.My wife is also happy because of 84． I have given up smoke.The dog doesn’t like the smell.85．
6.I went shopping with my wife.We have a lot of things to 1._________ buy them.We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the shop.An hour late, we came back 3._________ to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the door.So we asked policeman for help.He was 5._________ glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“How are 7._________ you doing with my car ” We were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the car.What you think we did then 9._________ We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ 7.To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by train.Travel by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ railway.However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good rest.So you can see every 83.______ coin has two sides.You'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______
8.Dear Worried, I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76.__________ suggestions.First in all, don't be disappointed.Many students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write well.In my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several things.First, 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures.Second, 80.__________ read as much as possible.There are many things can't be 81.__________ learnt.You must see it in books many times.Then you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly yourself.But, in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read much.Finally, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good passages.Good luck for you in your writing.85.9.My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home.71.___ It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in Second World War.In fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous way.We 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ 10.As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as possible.For instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our friends.However, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ 77.in---at78.but---and 79.see---saw 80.made---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she 83.concert—concerts 84.Sadly 85.the ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81． 去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really ⑶76.trains 改为 train 77.去掉 piece。78.pass 改为 passes。79.important 前加 an 80.such 改为 so。81.此行无错。82.wait 改为 waited。83.lately 改为 late。84.to 改为 with。85.importance 改为 important。
⑷76.in--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right 80.at the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 83.served 84 waiting 85.reason ⑸ 76．there改为where 77．alone改为lonely 78．days改为day 79．used改为used to 80．All改为Both 81．but改为and 82．easy改为easier 83．无错 84．去掉of 85．smoke改为smoking ⑹1.Have改为had 2.them去掉 3.late改为later 4.正确 5.asked 后加a 6.minute改为 minutes 7.How 改为What 8.surprising改为surprised 9.What 后加do 10.speak 改为 say ⑺76.To—In 77.Travel—Travelin9 78.comfortably--comfortable 79.Unless--If 80.safety--safe 81.正确 82.was—is 83.can后加not 84.去掉to 85.or--and ⑻76.accepted→received 77.in→of 78.difficulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.对 81.things后加that 82.it→them 83.But→So 84.去掉to 85.for→to
⑼71.left-leaving 72.none-neither 73.froze-freezing 74.stay-stayed 75.in 后面加the 76.so-but/yet 77.be去掉 78.that-which 79.正确80.in-on ⑽ 76.As →It 77.on →in 78.or →and 79.get ⌒much as 80.are81.However →Besides 82.∨ 83.kind →kinds 84.watching →watch 85.left →leaving
⑾ 76.accepted→received 77.去掉more, 78.because后加of, 79.other→another 80.say→said 81.and→or两,三天用two or three days.82.family前加the这里特指家庭的其他成员.83.fast→soon fast指动作的迅速,soon指时间“尽快地”.84.√ 85.happily→happy
⑿ 76.√77.is→are 78.felt→feel 79.Therefore→However 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to 82.play→playing 83.like→as 84.grade→grades“分数”, 85.for→in
⒀ 76.have→had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him 80.shoulders →shoulder 81.taking → taken 82.was后加 not 83.He→I 84.explain后加to ⒁ 1.calling—called 2.walking前加was3.and—or 4.and—but5.dead—died 6.√7.All—Both 8.去掉not 9.great前加a 10.danced—dance
第三篇：短文改错练习
短文改错专练：March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!
Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!
I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!
My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours, Jack
Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!
Ben
My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!
A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21
Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
第四篇：综合改错练习范文
修改病句梳理
修改病句，先要找出病因，然后再着手修改。修改时，注意不要改变原句的意思。常见的病句有以下几种：
（1）成份残缺。即句子不完整。如：读了《革命烈士诗二首》后，受到了深刻的教育。是谁受到了深刻的教育呢？没说出来。这个句子应该补上我或同学们一类词语。（2）搭配不当。即句子的主要成份之间，附加成份和主要成份之间搭配不当。
如：春天的苏州是一年中最美的季节。把这个句子简缩后就可看出，苏州是季节，显然不通。只要改成苏州的春天是一年中最美丽的季节，就通顺了。（3）前后矛盾。一句话必须合乎事理不能自相矛盾。如：我的回家作业基本上全部
做完了。回家作业要么是基本上做完（还有少量没做），要么是全部做完（一点儿都没有剩下）。又说是基本上，又说是全部显然是矛盾的，两种说法只能保留一种。
（4）重复罗嗦。有些句子形容词用得过多，意思重复，甚至改变了原意。把句子多余的词语删去，句子就明白简洁了。
如：我一定要改正不好的缺点。缺点当然是不好的，把不好的删去句子就简洁了。
（5）不合逻辑。如：商店的货架上摆满了葡萄、苹果、梨和水果。因为水果包括了葡萄、苹果、梨等，不能平列一起，所以应该把水果删去。（6）词序不对。即句子里的词语排列的先后不合适。
如：他完成了一次又一次的艰巨任务。调整为他一次又一次完成了艰巨任务。
（7）形容不当。如：王老师讲完故事，教室里响起排山倒海的掌声。教室里不可能出现排山倒海的掌声，形容不当，可改为热烈的掌声。
练一练
修改下列病句
1.贯彻《小学生守则》以后，发生了显著的变化。
2.我们沿着这条公路，不要一小时，就可到达县城了。
3.我们伟大的祖国在社会主义康庄大道上。
4.这个班级的同学是全校开展学雷锋活动最好的班级。
5.老师的教育下，他明确了学态度。
6.同学们积极投入爱国卫生运动，把教室打扫得整整齐齐、干干净净、清清爽爽。
7.过去，我做作业马虎潦草，很不认真，不经常拖拉，不按时完成。
8.六一节那天，我踏着轻松的步伐，兴奋的心情来到学校。9.全班同学都到了，只有王钢没来。
10.昨天傍晚下了一夜大雨。
11.校园里屹立着一棵棵白杨。
12.因为他有很大进步，但是老师表扬了他。
13.动物园的爬行馆里展出各种蛇与许多鸟。
14.公园里的松柏、桃树等树木枝繁叶茂。
15.我爱吃苹果、香蕉、黄瓜等水果。
16.图书角有《儿童文学》《少年文艺》和《中国少年报》等课外书。
17.他经常回忆过去有趣的往事。
18.今天中午下了一天的雨。
19.我上完五年级了，还有一年没有毕业。
20.万里长城、故宫博物院和南京长江大桥是中外游客向往的古迹。
21.造纸是我国古代的四大发明。
22.《林海》这篇课文的作者是老舍先生写的。
23.他穿了一件灰色上衣，一顶蓝帽子。
一进幼儿园，我就看见了一张张可爱的小脸和一阵阵动听的歌声。
综合改错练习
1、（两处错别字，四处语病，两处标点）
去年署假，我有机会加入了夏令营活动。夏令营的活动内容真是五彩缤纷，有画画、跳舞、唱歌、朗读、写生、坐军事游戏等……夏令营活动既丰富了我的假期生活，而且开阔了我的眼界。我真喜爱夏令营活动啊。
2、（两处错别字，三处病句，一处标点符号）
初夏,我们在老师的带领下，坏着高兴的心情，和摘草莓的工具去郊区摘草莓。我们有的题着盒子，挎着篮子，有的拎着袋子……大家争先恐后你争我抢地忙开了。不一会儿，盒子，篮子和袋子都装得满满的了。喜滋滋地满载而归了。
3、（一处错别字，两处标点，三处语病）
过了《五一》长假，同学们重反校园。一进教室，大家就七嘴八舌，议论纷纷地说起了假期里的新闻，扬州军嫂陈巧云多年来热爱帮助困难军属，受到了人们的一致夸耀。
4、（两处错别字，两处标点符号，三处语病）
《六一》那天，爸爸妈妈代我去太湖边游玩。湖边五颜六色、色色俱全的鲜花正在怒放，让我们赞叹不决。可惜的是太湖污染严重，湖面上漂浮着许多脏物。看到这些，我们的心情很繁重，我想，“如果我们每个人都讲卫生，不乱扔脏物，我们的健康和疾病就有保障了。”
5、（两处错别字，两处标点符号，三处语病）
尽管语文书上有很多一对对繁简字对照的列子，可是离开了简化字，还是不知道它的读音。于是我去像老师请教。老师亲密地对我说：“这不是你的问题？虽然现在这些字不常出现，所以不熟悉是正常的”。
6、（两处错别字，两处标点符号，三处语病）
我们班长的王琳是德、智、体全面发展。他不仅关心集体，克苦学习。还注意锻炼身体，因为，他被评为三好学生。语文对他特别感兴趣，经长给“语文报”投稿。
7、（一处错别字，三处语病）
上课铃一响，沸腾的校园里立即顿时安静下来。我们全班同学都在认真听讲，只有两个同学在作小动作。老师批评了他们，两个同学克服了自己的错误。
8、（两个错别字，三个错标点，三处语病）
我写的一篇作文“我爱家乡的梧桐树”在作文竟赛中获奖了。晚上，我激动的心情翻开日记本。回想着发奖时的情景就象放电影一样一幕幕地出现在眼前。当时，老师亲切地对我说：“希望你再接再励争取更大的成就。”
9、（一个错别字，一处错标点，两处语病）
在辽阔的南海上，有四个群岛：东沙、西沙、南沙和中沙。它们就是自古以来我们祖国的神圣领土。美丽富挠的西沙群岛在南海的西北面，它像一颗珍珠生长在蔚蓝的海面上。人们称它们为美丽的《南海明珠》。
10、下面这段话中一共有5处错误。（三处语病，一个标点，一个错别字）
王小军非常喜欢酷爱打乒乓球，看“体育世界”杂志。只要一打球，他就会忘记吃饭和休息。他在训练时勤奋克苦，球技不断增加。在全市小学生乒乓球大赛中，他自然不负众望，一路过关斩将，夺得了小学生男子单打的冠军。
11、修改下面一段话中的错误。（四处错误，二个错别字，一个错标点）
老师来到我的身边，用亲热的语气对我说：“在学习上不能追求虑荣，要踏踏实实，扎扎实实，这样才能取得好成就。老师的声音不大，所以它像重垂一样敲击着我的心。
12、修改下面一段话中的错误。（病句两个，错字两个，标点错误一个）。
西游记是中国古典小说四大名著，在世界文化史上也享有胜名，书中塑造了唐僧、孙悟空和众多人物形象，内容生动有趣，让人读了爱不失手。
13、（四处语病，二错字，一错标点）
阅览课上，我们讨论并阅读了“海伦.凯勒传 ”，感触很多。谁能相信一个不但看不见而且听不见的女子能掌握法、德等五种英语呢？谁能相信她果然能取得那么多惊人的成就呢？做为一个身体建全的人，我们有什么理由不努力呢？
14、综合改错。（错别字、标点、语病共6处）
“六一”庆祝会上，宣读了优秀少先队员的名单，特别发扬了刘华的先进事迹。听了这个消息，同学们纷纷向他庆祝，刘华十分激动极了，他表明自己的决心：今后一定要再接再励，刻苦钻研，努力攀登科学高峰。
第五篇：初二语文练习及答案
材料一：如今，一些城里孩子吃着肯德基、麦当劳，看着《哈利•波特》长大，不知道自己国家历史上还有李白、杜甫、花木兰，近现代还有刘胡兰、董存瑞、高玉宝，甚至不少大学生、留学生不知道《论语》《春秋》和《孙子兵法》。
材料二：《智斗》《包龙图打坐在开封府》等经典京剧唱段将正式进入中小学课堂。教育部决定2008年3月到2009年7月在北京、天津、黑龙江、上海、江苏、浙江、江西、湖北、广东、甘肃等10省市开展试点工作，在音乐课程中增加京剧内容，并在试点的基础上逐步向全国推广。
材料三：国务院新修改的《全国年节及纪念日放假办法》对民族传统节日放假作如下调整：春节，放假3天(除夕、正月初
一、初二);清明节(新增)，放假1天(农历清明当日);端午节(新增)，放假1天(农历端午当日);中秋节(新增)，放假1天(农历中秋当日)。
阅读《乡野的花》一文，完成10—14题
现在流行送花，且大多是青翠欲滴、艳丽诱人的鲜花。
这几年新春，我每每收到老友新朋托礼仪小姐送来的鲜花，可惜元宵前后最多正月底，便都会香消玉殒①。妻只好叫女儿把枯萎的花“葬”入楼下的垃圾箱中。
唯有去年那束乡野的花依然婷婷玉立于我的案头。
去年春节，女儿和外孙女回老家来过年。一到家，便陶醉于乡村的雪野。外孙女不知哪来的“灵感”，把疯玩摘来的野草桔、小竹枝和树上摇下的带柄的冻果，插在燃放过的烟花的纸管里，竟成就了一束束别具一格的花店也绝无出售的乡野的花。外孙女赠我一束并说要把剩余的带回城，送给她城里的爷爷、奶奶和其他长辈、伙伴，让他们分享农家的新春乐、乡野的淳朴情。
“是吗?”我诧异后有了几分欣喜——因她的讲孝心、重友情，更为她无意中造就出的这乡野的花。
这乡野的花不鲜不艳也不值钱，但它却饱经风霜②，几多锤炼，几多沧桑，换来的是不复苍老，因而比鲜花更久长。
这乡野的花不青不翠也不娇贵，但它却表里如一，成熟不变——它已无法再接通多变的季节的血脉，也就不会因春风至而得意忘形，为冬雪飘又萎靡不振，因而比鲜花更坚贞。这乡野的花不虚不伪又不经雕琢，本是无心插柳，随手捡得，巧手组合，浑然天成③，质朴纯正，因而比鲜花更真实。
这乡野的花哟，也不像商店里的干花，骨子里是纱是布，是刻意乔装打扮④而举着“花”家旗号的冒牌货——再像也只是徒有其形。
去年春在省委党校学习，得闲在南京植物园沐月踏青，园丁送我几枝花养在矿泉水瓶中，结果，虽按园丁吩咐的方法精心侍弄，没几天还是开始变形，最终枯得面目全非，远不如茹志鹃《百合花》中那个青年战士“枪筒里的一枝野菊花”，倒能装点那个年代青年战士纯洁美好的精神世界。
花店里的一束束鲜花，经花农栽种、车辆运输、花匠插配、商贾售送，费时费力，要不了几时就成了垃圾箱中的废物，其生命是何其的短暂!而我这案头花，本来无生命，此时看来，却又似乎有了生命。
为何?因为由此我想到“死而复生”一词。看来，有时死才是生的试金石。自然界的植物的生命力再旺盛也会枯萎。即使像活着可三百年不死、死后能三百年不倒、倒后会三百年不朽的沙漠里的胡杨，算来也不过九百年吧?而人类的文明却已有了几千年的历史，且会长久地持续下去。这恐怕就是精神和文化的力量，我案头这来自乡野的花，本是“死”过了的枯枝萎果，但我们在感情上为其注入了灵性、精神上赋予了它以生命，所以它就美了也就能久长了。——选自《散文百家》，作者施建石，有改动
10.文章巧用对比手法突出了“乡野的花”的“久长”、“坚贞”与“真实”，请从文中择取恰当的词语填入下表(每空限填1或2个词语)。(4分)“乡野的花”的特点 “乡野的花”的情状 “礼仪鲜花”的情状 久 长
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11.谈谈你对“而我这案头花，本来无生命，此时看来，却又似乎有了生命”这句话的理解。(3分)12.结合上下文说说文中画线句在表达作者感情上的作用。(3分)13.褒义词是指含有赞许、肯定等感情色彩的词，依据上下文判断，文中加点的4个成语里属于褒义词的2个是()。(2分。只填序号)14.“因„精神和文化的力量‟而„死而复生‟”是令人深思的客观现象。品读最后一节，举例说说你对这一现象的生活感受或阅读体验。(4分)得分 评卷人(三)阅读韩愈《马说》，完成15—17题。(共8分)世有伯乐，然后有千里马，千里马常有，而伯乐不常有。故虽有名马，只辱于奴隶人之手，骈死于槽枥之间，不以千里称也。
马之千里者，一食或尽粟一石。食马者不知其能千里而食也。是马也，虽有千里之能，食不饱，力不足，才美不外见，且欲与常马等不可得，安求其能千里也? 策之不以其道，食之不能尽其材，鸣之而不能通其意，执策而临之，曰：“天下无马!”呜呼!其真无马邪?其真不知马也。
15.用现代汉语解释下列加点词或短语的意思。(3分)①食马者()②策之不以其道()③才美不外见()④执策而临之()16.用现代汉语写出文段中画线句的意思。(3分)17.文中表明造成千里马“欲与常马等不可得”的原因的句子是：(2分)得分 评卷人(四)阅读下面的文言短文，完成18—19题。(共5分)及(接触)之而后知，履(实行)之而后艰(知道艰难)，乌有(哪有)不行而知者乎?披(阅)五岳之图，以为知山，不如樵夫之一足(攀登);谈沧溟(海洋)之广，以为知海，不如估客(商贩)之一瞥;观八珍之谱，以为知味，不如庖丁之一啜(吃)。(魏源《海国图志》)18.用自己的话简要概述短文阐述的道理。(2分)19.“知山”“知海”“知味”的根本途径是什么?请各用原文中的1个字回答。(3分)(1)“知山”在于();(2)“知海”在于();(3)“知味”在于()。默写。(8分)①苔痕上阶绿。，往来无白丁。②故虽有名马，，不以千里称也。
③《池鹤》中可以用成语“鹤立鸡群”来概括的两句诗是：。
④《宣州谢朓楼饯别校书叔云》中表现作者满怀豪情逸兴、神驰太空的两句诗是。
3.按照所给文段的思路，仿照相应的句式，将文段补写完整。(2分)人生中难免有些事情不尽如人意：也许你想成为太阳，却只是一颗不起眼的星星;也许你想成为大海，;，却只是一根细弱的小草。这个时候，请不要失去人生的方向。只要珍惜自己，坦然接受自己，你会惊喜地发现平凡的你也有自己美丽的风景。
4.用所给的修改符号(不必全使用)，对下面的这段文字进行修改(不得超过6处)，使文句表达得更加准确流畅。(4分)(1)换用号：(2)增补号：(3)删除号：(4)调位号：
我俩是交往好手，不多时，就成了哥们。于是，他对我渐渐有了新的了解。他很喜欢玩电脑，简直达到了“醉生梦死”的形态。记得一次去他家玩的时候，他正在打电脑，“一条缝”盯着那屏幕上的光标移动。他最得意的是电子游戏，他可以不睡觉，也可以抛下作业不管。他的老妈想把他从家里赶出来活动活动的想法，可他就是懒在电脑转椅上不起来。
5.班级将举办一次对话式主题班会，中心话题是“中学生与网络”，请你为本次主题班会撰写一段开场白，不超过150字。(4分)得分 评卷人(三)综合性学习(共4分)6.国务院总理温家宝在接受英国《泰晤士报》访谈时，引用了中外名家的诗词名句来说明自己是怎样的人。仔细揣摩这几句话，请你用自己的话把温家宝总理是怎样一个人概括出来。材料一：晚清名臣左宗棠结婚时新房门口的对联：“身无半亩，心忧天下;读破万卷，神交古人。”
材料二：北宋大儒张载：“为天地立心，为生民立命，为往圣继绝学，为万世开太平。” 材料三：屈原《离骚》诗句：“长太息以掩涕兮，哀民生之多艰。”
材料四：德国大哲学家康德：“有两种东西，我对它们的思考越是深沉和持久，它们在我心灵中唤起的惊奇和敬畏就会日新月异，不断增长，这就是我头上的星空与心中的道德定律。”
材料五：现代诗人艾青的《我爱这土地》：“为什么我的眼里常含泪水?因为我对这土地爱得深沉。”
——《新民周刊》
1.阅读下面文字，把文中拼音所表示的汉字依次写在方格内。(2分)春天，嫩绿的叶芽从枝的缝里méng 生，努力的穿过那小小的洞向外长，渴求一见浩hàn的蓝天。终于，它长成了，长成了一片有模有样的小叶子，轻轻的膜fù 盖着它的血肉，细小的脉络隐nì
其中。这样的叶子我摸过，柔软的质地，嫩得光滑，嫩得鲜艳。金黄让人充满了希望。——《美文集粹》
2.默写。(8分)①，中间小谢又清发。② 浊酒一杯家万里。③，小桥流水人家。
④只要有这点精神，就是一个高尚的人，一个有道德的人，一个有益于人民的人。⑤写出两句咏鸟的古诗词： 得分 评卷人(二)运用(共12分)3.仿照例句的形式，写一个句子，内容自定。(2分)人们都爱春天，爱她的风和日丽，爱她的花红柳绿，爱她的雨润万物。
4.用所给的修改符号(不必全使用)，对下面的这段文字与标点进行修改(不得超过6处)，使文句表达更加准确流畅。(4分)(1)换用号：(2)增补号：(3)删除号：(4)调位号：
逐渐慢慢长大的你一定有很多自己的想法，觉得父母之间似乎有一堵无形的墙。我想对你说：墙推倒了就是桥。对着一窗的月光，找一个静谧宁静的夜晚，给辛劳了一天的母亲倒一杯热茶，和母亲作一次推心制腹的谈话好吗?让暖暖的情意在两颗心与心之间流动、交融┅┅
5.在“如果我主办校刊”的综合实践活动中，你将会给校刊取名为《 》;设置的栏目有：⑴_____________ ______;⑵___________________ ___。(3分)如果由你亲自撰写“刊首语”，你将会对全校师生说些什么?不超过60 个字。(3分)得分 评卷人(三)综合性学习(共4分)6.阅读下面三则材料，试写出你对人生的感言：
材料一：洪战辉：当他还是一个孩子的时候，就对另一个更弱小的孩子担起了责任，就要撑起困境中的家庭，就要学会友善、勇敢和坚强，生活让他过早地开始收获，他由此从男孩开始变成了苦难打不倒的男子汉，在贫困中求学，在艰辛中自强，今天他看起来依然文弱，但是在精神上，他从来是强者。
材料二： 邰丽华：从不幸的谷底到艺术的巅峰，也许你的生命本身就是一次绝美的舞蹈，于无声处，展现生命的蓬勃，在手臂间勾勒人性的高洁，一个朴素女子为我们呈现华丽的奇迹，心灵的震撼不需要语言，你在我们眼中是最美。
材料三：王顺友：他朴实的像一块石头，一个人一匹马，一段世界邮政史上的传奇，他过滩涉水，越岭翻山，用一个人的长征传邮万里，用20年的跋涉飞雪传心，路的尽头还有路，山的那边还是山，近邻尚得百里远，世上最亲邮递员。——“感动中国2005人物”颁奖词 阅读《千年独舞》一文，完成11—16题。(共18分)1405年7月11日，历史定格在这一天。这一天似乎离我们过于遥远，遥远得记不清船只的数量，水手的编制。然而又似乎离我们很近，近得我们可以看清郑和威武的身姿，抛锚起航的宏伟场面。这一天，明朝三宝太监郑和率领由百余艘大小船只，二万七千八百余人组成的庞大船队，从1405年(明永乐三年)至1433年(宣德八年)，历时28年，七下西洋。远航至东南亚、印度洋，最远到达红海与非洲东海岸，遍访30多个国家和地区。其航程之远，历时之久;船舶数量之多，吨位之大;船员之众，组织之严密;造船和航海技术之先进，均为当时世界之最，远在欧洲人所谓“地理大发现”的大航海之先，是世界航海史之壮举。
郑和七下西洋，有五次在商贸繁盛的马六甲停留。为了纪念这位伟大的航海家，在马六甲有一座采用中国传统建筑形式，红墙配琉璃瓦，富有浓厚的中国建筑风格庙宇，三宝庙。庙顶飞檐描有彩龙戏珠;大门顶上，飞檐高翘;“国泰民安”、“风调雨顺”章显为民众生活祈福。走进大门，在右边四方的石墩上，有一尊青石雕像，背负宝剑，形象威武庄严，他便是我国明代著名航海家三保太监郑和。
在喧哗的历史长河中，他是一位孤独的舞者。他以自己特殊的身份，带着“扬国威、示富强”的使命，在大西洋(按：此处疑“印度洋”之误，下同)宽广无垠的海面上驰骋。以惊涛骇浪为乐，以电闪雷鸣为伍，以飞鸟游鱼为伴，伫立于船头的身影，撕裂了大西洋千百年的孤独。曾几何，谁人能如此贴近的感受大洋的威力;谁人能如此幸运地享受大洋的安谧;谁人能横跨西洋留下足迹恩泽后世?我们不会了解也难以知道几百年前的三保太监如何战胜寂寞与孤独，如何在大西洋宽广的洋面奏响这千年绝唱的舞曲。那是海的声音，风的祝福，雷的声威!他随波独舞，以大洋为章，用自己特有方式书写了一部巨篇史诗。也许我们很难理解，在中华五千年的历史长河中，一位身份特殊的人能独舞于大西洋几百年。在雄性统治的世界里，在充满暴力的世界里，在相信势力的世界里，却让一位剥夺了雄性权利的人传承文明，去树立帝国雄威。没有人会明白，为何是一位太监，能够克服诸多困难，七下西洋接受众多国家的顶礼膜拜。
中华自古多奇人，这与中华民族吃苦耐劳，勇于开拓的精神有着密切的关系。中华几千年历史文明的沉淀，造就了一代又一代敢为人先的开拓者。这位伟大的、孤独的舞者绝然不会想到自己七下西洋的艰难旅程会成为中华民族史上的一件盛事，也许他只是遵从帝国首领的命令。他也不会想到至此以后，中华民族却再也难以走出国门，更不会想到，几百年以后，西方列强用坚船利炮轰开了中国看似坚实的壁垒。他们传承的不是“扬国威，示富强”，而是野蛮的杀戮，疯狂的掠夺，中华民族经历了百年浩劫。大西洋属于勇敢者的舞台，而令人欣慰的是舞台上的第一位舞者属于东方帝国。他是孤独的，大西洋千百年的孤寂需要他去安慰;他是幸运的，大西洋第一篇史诗记载了他的舞步;他是伟大的，大西洋的脊背上烙下了他的足迹;他是成功的，大西洋浮躁的脾性曾七次臣服于他的脚下。
前人给我们留下了宝贵的财富，它不是物质上的富有，而精神上的富足。民族复兴的伟业需要我们树立民放自豪感,增强民族自尊心，我们应沿着前人跋涉的足迹，继续传承中华文明，以我们自己的方式，完成新一代人历史使命，东方巨龙将会再次自由的驰骋于五洋七洲，畅想新的篇章!
11、根据文章有关内容，为下面对联拟一则称颂郑和功绩的下联(句式大体工整)。(2分)毕升创活字印刷显我民族智慧。
12、联系全文内容，说说《千年独舞》中的“独舞”有怎样的含义?(2分)13.用简要的语言归纳，在郑和身上体现了哪些民族精神?(3分)14.为什么说郑和下西洋是“世界航海史之壮举”?请摘录文中语句回答。(3分)15.你喜欢这篇文章吗?请从文章的内容和表达两方面说出你喜欢或不喜欢的理由。(4分)16.阅读下面材料，结合本文内容，写出胡锦涛总书记赠送礼品的用意。(2分)材料一： 2005年4月29日，中共中央总书记胡锦涛与中国国民党主席连战在北京进行历史性会见并互赠了礼品。“郑和七宝宝船”以中国共产党中央委员会总书记胡锦涛的名义，赠送中国国民党大陆访问团。
材料二：：2005年5月12日，中共中央总书记胡锦涛与亲民党主席宋楚瑜在北京进行历史性会见并互赠了礼品。胡锦涛礼赠宋楚瑜率领的亲民党大陆访问团“郑和七宝宝船”。
答案：(1)【甲】表：长期使用互联网后，身体状况出现了明显下降。【乙】表：长期使用互联网后，导致了不少严重的心理疾患。(2)提示：可结合互联网在学习中的作用、长期使用互联网的后果、同龄人身体和心理健康的重要性、使用互联网时的自我控制等方面来阐述。(共4分。每题2分。第2小题每点合理建议得1分，阐述时不能脱离图表的信息。意对即可)(二)14分
10.①冬天，母亲把老阳儿叠在被子里。②夏天，毕大妈把老阳儿煮在水里面。(3分。应至少包括人和事，写对一件的得2分。意对即可)11.(1)把晒暖的被子叠起来保温。(2)水在阳光的照射下变得暖和了。(4分。一句2分，意对即可)12.①大院里的人通常是用柴火烧水，“煮”字的联想自然贴切。②竭力保证全家温饱是母亲的责任，“煮”字的使用突出母亲日常挂念的事情。③“煮太阳”是很新颖独特的说法，给人以文学想像的空间和文字阅读的美感。(3分，答出1点得2分，写出两点的即可考虑给满分。只抄录原文的最多得1分。意对即可)13.参考：母亲“把老阳儿叠起来”(或“把老阳儿煮在水里”、“让太阳成为了我们居家过日子必备的一种物件”)带给我们温暖与快乐。(2分)母亲这种“智慧和温暖的心”，尤其是“在艰苦日子里磨炼出的一点儿本事”，成为我们生命里不可或缺的太阳(老阳儿)，母亲就是照亮和温暖我们生命的阳光(老阳儿)，是我们所有幸福和感恩的来源。(2分)(共4分。意对即可)
一、积累运用
1.融 芥蒂 jí dù(共2分，对1个不得分，对2-3个得1分，对4-5个得2分)2.①只辱于奴隶人之手，骈死于槽枥之间。(答“千里马常有，而伯乐不常有”的得1分)②发愤忘食，乐以忘忧。③人不寐，将军白发征夫泪!④枯藤老树昏鸦/古道西风瘦马。(共8分，每句1分，有错、漏、添字的该句不得分)3.(1)删除“每到清晨……面纱”一句。
(2)将“插秧”和“播种”颠倒一下位置;将“柴火卖”后的“，”改为“;”;将“繁衍”改为“养活”;在“新衣服”前加上“穿上”;将“刻骨名心”改为“刻骨铭心”。
(共5分。改对1处得1分。修改超过6处的，从第7处开始，不得分也不扣分。其他改法，只要合理也可得分)4.不设统一答案。参考：特点——口语化(1分)，通俗易懂(1分)。体现了中国领导人民主平等(1分)、务实有效(1分)、贴近群众(1分)的治国思想。(共5分，答到4点即可得全分。意对即可。其他合理说法也应酌情给分)(三)(共12分)15.① 品德高尚。② 使身体劳累。
③ 没有学问的人(或知识浅薄的人)。④ 如果能坚持(有恒心)。(共2分。答对两个得1分)16.(1)苔藓痕迹碧绿，长到了台阶上;草色青葱，映入了竹帘里。(2)世人的赞誉不值得羡慕，只要把仁爱作为自己的行动准则就行了。(共4分，每句2分。略有欠缺的可以不扣分)17.在涅贵不缁(2分。答成“在涅贵不缁，暧暧内含光”的建议不扣分。自己概括不得分)18.参考：“无说己之长”，“隐心而后动”，“守愚圣所臧”，“暧暧内含光”，“慎言节饮食”。(共2分。答出1句给1分，得满2分为止。有偏差的可以考虑给1分)19.人才的培养离不开伯乐;孤芳自赏、清高孤傲。(2分。意对即可)5.题目示例：《如此锦标》，《野蛮作业》，《足球杀手》等。漫画内容参考：这是一幅名为《如此锦标》的漫画。一位运动员手举鲜花，站在领奖台上向观众挥手。他的左手拎着一把大砍刀，漫画用一个大大的问号引起我们的思考：野蛮赛风何时了?(共3分。标题1分，内容2分。意对即可)6.参考：我国青少年传统文化观念淡薄，急需加强传统文化教育;弘扬传统文化应从小抓起，从素质教育抓起，以相关法律法规为保障，应形成优良传统传承发扬。(3分。按照要点、流畅度以3、2、1、0给分)(一)(共11分)6.【甲】花青素的酸碱度决定其颜色。【乙】人工选择优于自然选择。(2分。意对即可)7.【甲】由分到总，【乙】由总到分。具体说明略。(共4分。【甲】【乙】各2分。其它分析，言之有理的酌情给分)8.参考：不能删去，(1分)“仅”表示只举一例，“几十年工夫”表明时间短，(1分)说明人工选择在较短时间内取得的显著成果。(1分)(共3分。意对即可)9.B(2分)(二)(共16分)10.(4分，1空1分。选择其它词语的，酌情给分)“乡野的花”的特点 “乡野的花”的情状 “礼仪鲜花”的情状 久 长(饱经风霜、不苍老)(青翠欲滴、艳丽诱人)坚 贞 表里如一(得意忘形、萎靡不振)真 实(浑然天成、质朴纯正)乔装打扮
11.参考：我案头这来自乡野的花，本是“死”过了的枯枝萎果，但我们在感情上为其注入了灵性、精神上赋予了它以生命，所以它就美了，也就能久长了。(3分，意对即可)12.参考：说明“矿泉水瓶里的几枝花”非但养不长，而且连装点一下人的精神风貌都做不到。表达了自己对水瓶鲜花的不屑。(3分。意对即可。若以“那个青年战士”为陈述对象，最多得1分)13.②、③(2分，答对1个得1分)14.不设统一答案，提示：所举事例必须符合因“精神和文化的力量”而“死而复生”的意思。(4分。视恰当与深刻的程度以4、3、2、1给分。不举例最多给2分)(三)(共8分)15.①喂养马的人 ②驱使，驱赶 ③不能显现出来 ④鞭子(共3分，对1个得1分，得满3分为止)16.只是辱没在马夫的手里，(和普通马)一同死在马厩里，不把它称为千里马。(3分。意对即可，个别字词不到位的可以不扣分)17.食马者不知其能千里而食也。(2分。答“是马也，虽有千里之能，食不饱，力不足”的也算对)(四)(共5分)18.不设统一答案。参考：阐明“只有亲自接触事物才能了解事物”的道理。(2分，意对即可)19.依次是“足”、“瞥”、“啜”。(3分，1字1分)2.(1)草色入帘青。谈笑有鸿儒。(2)只辱于奴隶人之手，骈死于槽枥之间。(3)高作笼前无伴侣，乱群鸡里有风标。(4)俱怀逸兴壮思飞，欲上青天揽明月。(共8分，每句1分，有错、漏、改字的均不给分)(二)运用(10分)3.不设统一答案。上下句构成转折关系，并且与前文的太阳、星星照应。参考：却只是一股涓涓的山泉;也许你想成为大树。(2分。每句1分)4.(1)“交往”改为“交际”;(2)“他对我”改为“我对他”;(3)“形态”改为“状态”;(4)“他可以不睡觉，”删去“他”;(5)删去“的想法”;(6)“懒”改为“赖”。(4分。改对1处得1分，得满4分为止)5.不设统一答案，要有称呼，要说清楚班会的主题，开展本次班会的目的，语言简明扼要。(4分，视内容、表达分4、3、2、1给分)(三)综合性学习(4分)6.不设统一答案。参考：①温家宝总理喜爱读书，博览群书，②热爱祖国与人民，③忧国忧民，将国家与人民放在心中，④为国家与人民鞠躬尽瘁，日夜操劳，⑤完全不在乎自己个人的金钱得失。(4分。答到1点给1分，给满4分为止，完全与所给诗文无关则不给分)
一、积累运用(共26分)1.萌 瀚 覆 匿(2分，答对1个得1分，给满2分为止。)2.(1)蓬莱文章建安骨(2)燕然未勒归无计(3)枯藤老树昏鸦 古道西风瘦马(4)一个纯粹的人 一个脱离了低级趣味的人(5)只要是咏鸟的古诗词即可(8分，每空1分。有错该句不得分。)3.不设统一答案。参考：人们都爱秋天，爱她的天高气爽，爱她的云淡日丽，爱她的香飘四
野。(2分。句式对应、意对即可)4.(1)删除“慢慢”;(2)“觉得”后面添加“和”;(3)删除“宁静”;(4)“对着一窗的月光，”“找一个静谧宁静的夜晚，”调换。(5)“制”改为“置”;(6)删除“两颗”。(4分。改对1处得1分，得满4分为止。)5.校刊名称略(1分);栏目名称力求精练、新颖、有创意(每个1分);“刊首语”如能谈到 办刊的宗旨，办刊的方法，语言优美、流畅、有感召力可得满分。(3分，酌情按3、2、1给分。)6.没有标准答案。参考：他们都是普通人，但他们珍视生命历程，敢于面对挫折，甘于平凡，踏实走好人生每一步，绽放了美丽，诞生了感动。(4分。视内容、表达分4、3、2给分。)(二)(共16分)11.不设统一答案。参考：郑和驾船远航扬我中华雄威。(2分。内容概括准确，基本符合对联要求即可。)12.指郑和下西洋在近千年里是独一无二的，他征服大西洋就如同在舞台上跳出的舞步。(2分。意对即可)13.积极向上、不怕艰难、勇于开拓的精神。(3分。意对即可)。
14.“航程之远，历时之久;船舶数量之多，吨位之大;船员之众，组织之严密;造船和航海技术之先进，均为当时世界之最，远在欧洲人所谓“地理大发现”的大航海之先”(3分)15.没有标准答案。(4分。要求观点明确，理由充分。视内容、表达分4、3、2给分。)16.渴望台湾早日回归祖国，渴望祖国早日统一。(2分。意对即可)
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