第一篇：高考英语作文 记叙文
记叙文
记叙文是高考完形填空的主要体裁。其主要特点是以记叙为主，辅以各种综合表达方法，包括描写、说明、议论和抒情等。通过对人和事的描写表达作者的思想感情和中心思想。记叙的要素包括时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果，即我们常说的五个w(who，what，when，where，why)；记叙文的另一特点就是有一定的叙事线索，如：人物线索(人物的经历、见闻、感受等)、事件线索(中心事件的来龙去脉)、感情线索(作者或作品中主要人物的思想感情变化)、时间线索、地点和空间线索等。
作者在叙述过程中往往会融入人物的语言、行为、心理的描写，这在一定程度上增加了考生理解文章的难度。这时，考生必须理清上下文的脉络，对人物的语言、行为、心理等给出合理的想象和推理，并仔细揣摩作者的用意，从而透彻地理解文意，达到对语境的准确理解，这样才能作出合理的选择。
[2010·湖南]
Behind our house is the start of a fascinating trail(小径)．This trail is one of the，Beans，and I walk the trail frequently.Normally，Beans sniffs alongside the trail to follow the smell of a deer Beans is a white dog，we tell him，One morning，we took a different route，which led us to an unfamiliar trail.I was，no.We seemed to be far off course.After two hours，home.So I urged，“Beans，take me home.”He ran down a new trail.But it merely led to an intersection(岔道口)of trails.，without food or drink.We had walked about ten miles.But BeansFinally，turn left.We did a cottage beside a field.I knocked on the door and explained my situation to an old man.He laughed and then drove us home.Since our adventure，home.He was just having too much fun exploring new trails.()1.A.deerB.dogC.ladyD.man
()2.A.imagineB.considerC.exploreD．present
()3.A.smartB.sweetC.slowD．shy
()4.A.turnB.kickC.jumpD.speak
()5.A.drivewayB.pathC.crossroadD.highway
()6.A.knewB.sawC.showedD.made
()7.A.mysteriousB.ridiculousC.fascinatingD.apparent
()8.A.houseB.forestC.fieldD.cottage
()9.A.unconcernedB.unconsciousC.undecidedD.uncomfortable
()10.A.left forB.went offC.came toD.drove toward
()11.A．punctuallyB.frequentlyC．formallyD.shortly
()12.A．regrettedB.rememberedC．concludedD.confirmed
训练题
I grew up in San Pedro.My dad was a fisherman.It was hard to make a living on the sea.He worked hard and would stay out there until he caught enough to feed the family.No just enough for our family, but also for his mom and dad.When the with loud noise and heavy smoke.Then he would lean over to give me a big kiss and tell me to be a good boy.It was soI remember the day I decided I was too old for a goodbye kiss.When we got to the “No, Dad.” his face.I said, “Dad, I’m too old for a goodbye kiss.I’m too old for any kind of kiss.” “You’re right he said，” “You’re a big boy„ a man.I won’t kiss you anymore.” It wasn’t long after that when my dad went to sea and never came back.It was a day when all of the ships stayed in, but not dad.He had a big family to feed.You don’t know what I would give to have my dad give me just one more kiss on the cheek„to touch his rough old face„to the ocean on him„to feel his arm around my neck.I wish I had been a man then.If I had been a man, I would never ”
()1.A.takeB．driveC．watchD．rush
()2.A.businessB．careerC．projectD．journey
()3.A.repairB．screamC．complaintD．disappear
()4.A.laughingB．watchingC．performingD．playing
()5.A.kissB．sayC．hugD．send（（（（（（（）6.A.usualB．commonC．dailyD．sweet)7.A.headB．handC．cheekD．mouth)8.A.excitedB．pleasedC．terrifiedD．bored)9.A.lightsB．apologiesC．tearsD．sorry)10.A.looked outB．looked upC．looked aroundD．looked on)11.A.noticeB．smellC．senseD．feel)12.A.youngB．oldC．shyD．late
【文章大意】 父亲用他的方式表达着对“我”的爱。每次送我，都要和我吻别。12岁的时候，我突然对将要和我吻别的父亲说自己已经长大了，不需要任何形式的吻了，父亲伤心得泪水盈眶。然而一次意外，留给我无尽的后悔和遗憾„„
1．B 由下文的that truck，以及As he would drive可以看出，这是爸爸用车送我去上学，所以选drive，意为：用车送。句意：当天气不好的时候，他就用车送我去上学。
2．A business表示一个人经常的，且赖以生活的职业。这里捕鱼，就是父亲赖以生活的职业，因此A符合语境。最大的干扰项是career，该词指某种经过特殊训练，而又为之献身的终生事业，带有崇高色彩。
3．D 从后面的“it seemed like everybody would be standing around”来看，由于这辆破车很差，噪音大，又冒着浓浓的黑烟，所以怕别人看到了笑话我，所以我就滑倒座位底下，希望自己消失。repair修理；scream尖叫；complaint抱怨。
4．B 我作为一个小孩子，担心被别人看到自己坐在一辆破车里，所以要用watch，如果把A项改为laughing at(嘲笑)也讲得通。perform表现；play玩。
5．A 下文有原词复现：a goodbye kiss。句意：我12岁了，他总是和我吻别。
6．A usual通常的；common普通的；daily日常的；sweet甜的。
7．B 我已决定不再让爸爸吻我，所以当他倾下身来的时候，我举起了手阻止他的嘴，故选hand。
8．C 因为父亲从未想到他对我这种爱的方式会使我如此的反感，对于突如其来的伸手阻止没有一点防备和心理准备，有点受惊，所以选terrified，意为“受惊吓的”。excited 兴奋的；pleased高兴的；bored无聊的，无趣的。
9．C 很显然，父亲很伤心，从后面的他转过身去，可以看出，他不想让我看到他眼睛里的泪水，所以选tears。意为“眼睛含着泪水”。
10．A 转过身去，往外看，所以要用look out。look up向上看(和turn不符)；look around环视(这里不是找东西或人，显然也不符合语境)；look on旁观，观看。
11．B notice注意到；smell闻；sense感觉到；feel触摸，感觉。海洋不可能在父亲的身上，打鱼回来，带来的只能是海洋的味道，所以选B项。
12．B 这里是对自己以前所做的蠢事的后悔，因为当时自己并没有长大，所以这里作者用了两个虚拟语气说：要是我当时已经长大了，我就不会对父亲说，我已经长大了，用不着吻别了。之后不久，父亲出海打鱼，再也没有回来。那样的话，父亲也不会伤心，我也不会留下遗憾。
第二篇：高考英语必备 记叙文突破
记叙文突破
记叙文体裁主要是记人、叙事、写景、状物一类的文章，具体地说，它是借助叙述、描写、抒情等手段记叙社会生活中的人、事、景、物的情态及其发展过程，用以表现作者的思想，抒发作者某种情感的文章形式。近几年的高考完形填空题中的记叙文主要以叙事、记人为主，如幽默故事、童话故事、历史故事、人物传记和新闻报道等。
记叙文是中学英语阅读材料中最常见的文体，其语言特点有：
1、以一般过去时为主，其他时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的谓语动词时态，而这种复杂的时态特征在汉语记叙文中是根本没有的。正是有了动词时态的变化，才使英语文章中所叙述的动作有了层次感和立体感。
2、广泛使用动词，特别是动态动词。由于这些动词的存在，文章就会充满“动感”，而这种让往事历历在目的“动感”正是优秀的记叙文所要追求的。
3、适当运用直接引语。直接引语的使用可以代替间接的主观叙述，简洁、生动地表达出事件发展的过程和各种人物的心理活动，充分展示人物的独特个性和人物之间的相互关系。
解答记叙文体的完形填空时，应着重把握以下几点：
1、了解文章的结构形式。通常为了叙述方便，作者会按时间先后顺序或空间顺序等方式来安排情节和内容。其优点是条理清楚，层次分明。读者也较容易理解和接受。但是有时为了突出某个情节或为了增加阅读趣味，或为了其他目的，作者可能会采用插叙，甚至倒叙的写作手法。弄清了文章篇章信息的分布情况，有助于抓住文章的主线，理清文章的脉络。
2、明确作者的写作目的。就事论事肯定不是记叙的目的，而通过叙述阐明一个道理，同是作者必须考虑的。只有心中有了目的，在情节选择和细节描写上才会作出合理的安排。明晰了写作目的，就能抓住文章的主题。
3、知晓文章所记叙的几大要素。为了使读者清楚地了解一件事的起因、经过和结局，作者就有必要在记叙文中将事件、人物、时间、地点、原因(why)和结果等要素讲清楚。这六个要素是记叙文的基本组成部分，一般不能缺少。弄清了这六个要素，基本上就理解了整篇文章。
4、弄清文章是以第几人称的视角展开记叙的。通常英语记叙文展开记叙的视角有两个： 第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称就是从“参与者”的角度进行记叙，读者可从字里行间感受到作者亲切的态度和深厚的感情。用第三人称就是以“观察者”的身份展开叙述，作者的语气客观，与读者保持着一定的距离，读者的注意力更多集中在故事本身。了解了作者的写作角度有助于我们走进作者的思维，深入理解文章的意义。
请看下面的例题：
（一）As she waited at the edge of the ice for her music to start,.Peggy took a quick look at her father standing nearby with a group of parents and teachers.He smiled at her.Then she 1._____ out at the audience, 2._____ to see her mother.These two, Alvert and Doris Flemint, had 3._____ all the way from California more than 2,000 miles away, to see their 4._____ compete in this sports meet in Cleveland, Ohio.The music 5._____ and Peggy moved onto the ice, letting the music 6._____ her along into her turns, and she began skating with much 7._____ in herself.The cold fear she always had in the 8._____ seconds before skating onto the ice was 9._____.She was feeling the movement of the 10._____ and letting it carry her.She skated easily, 11._____ did some jumps, a final turn and her performance was 12._____.The crowd loved it and cheered 13._____ she skated off the ice.“Nice job,” said one of the
other 14._____.It was the remark that 15._____ came after a free-skating performance.But what should the 16._____ say? Standing beside her father, Peggy 17._____ for the scoring to be finished.On all sides were other young skaters, some waiting 18._____ alone, others with a parent.Shortly before 10 o’clock the results were 19._____.The new United States Women’s Figure Skating Champion was Peggy Fleming of Passdena, 20._____.1.A.looked
B.watched
C.found
D.stepped 2.A.failing
B.looking forward
C.wanting
D.hoping 3.A.bicycled
B.driven
C.run
D.walked 4.A.friend
B.children
C.son
D.daughter 5.A.started
B.played
C.developed
D.sang 6.A.allow
B.set out
C.carry
D.support 7.A.thought
B.belief
C.success
D.design 8.A.following
B.last
C.recent
D.past 9.A.lost
B.present
C.strong
D.gone 10.A.music
B.fear
C.ice
D.audiences 11.A.so
B.or
C.before
D.then 12.A.satisfied
B.unsatisfactory
C.finished
D.welcome 13.A.because
B.until
C.before
D.as 14.A.skaters
B.parents
C.judges
D.parents 15.A.always
B.seldom
C.again
D.hardly 16.A players
B.audience
C.judges
D.parents 17.A.waited
B.looked
C.wished
D.asked 18.A.comfortably
B.hurriedly
C.happily
D.anxiously 19.A.cried out
B.let out
C.announced
D.declared 20.A.England
B.Cleveland
C.Ohio
D.California 内容概要:本文叙述了一个加利弗利亚的小女孩参加滑冰的比赛的经过,从紧张到放松, 最后取得了胜利。
答案简析:
1、选A。从后面的状语„to see her mother中可以得到启发。
2、选D。四处张望的目的就是“希望”见到她母亲。want一般没有现在分词形式，look forward to 中的to是介词，后面应接名词或动名词，故B、C不能选用。
3、选B。根据常识可以排除另三个选项。
4、选D。Peggy是女孩，故为女儿。
5、选A。音乐响起。首句已呈现过该说法，另play在此系及物动词，形式不对。
6、选C。下文中有and letting it carry her 这样类似用法。
7、选B。从其后面的状态来看，Peggy心中充满了自信。
8、选B。表示进入溜冰场之前的最后几秒钟。该空可以根据常识和行文逻辑选定。
9、选D。表示自然消失而不是人为丢失，应该用gone，而不用lost。
10、选A。见第二节第一句。
11、选D。then表示时间上的顺承。
12、选C。凭语感选定。
13、选D。as表示“当„„的同时”。因为表演完美，所以谢幕时人们欢呼。
14、选A。the other 后总是接同类名词，故此处选skaters。
15、选A。根据常识，自由滑冰运动员退场时，观众总是会欢呼的。
16、选C。选手关注的，除了观众，就是“裁判”了。
17、选A。第18空前再现了这一说法。
18、选D。等分数时的心情应是焦急的,故用anxiously。
19、选C。结果的宣布一般用announce。而战争、罪行等重大事件的宣布则多用declare。20、选D。上文中提到了父母亲从加利弗利亚开车过来,所以Peggy可能来自California。
（二）Two men on a touring holiday were injured by an explosion in their motor van(面包车)yesterday.Shoppers, traders and businessmen in Red Lion Street were 1._____ by a loud bang, and seconds later the two men jumped over from the van, which had stopped outside Barclays Bank.Several people rushed to give 2._____ and helped to put out the fire 3._____ the van.A light American truck changed the 4._____ to provide living accommodation room（躺的地方）, 5._____ firemen arrived.The men, Mr.Cary House, who was driving, and his 6._____ Mr.Charlie Lynn—were taken to hospital with slight 7._____.They were allowed to leave after 8._____.“I heard this explosion.It was 9._____ loud.I thought it could have been a(n)10._____.” said Mr.Leslie Webster, manager of the market, who was working in his office in Red Lion Street.“I looked out of the window and saw this lad jump from the van and 11._____ on the ground.Then another lad came out of the van.He seemed to be in a 12._____ state---parts of his trousers were hanging below his knees.”
“I came downstairs to get a fire extinguisher(灭火器), but 13._____ the time I got outside someone from the bank was in the 14._____ with an extinguisher.”
Mr.Webster said both men were shocked.One was taken into the market’s office to wait for a(n)15._____.“The second man 16._____ going back into the van to see if everything was 17._____, and five minutes later he came out with a drawer that was blazing(burning).” he added.18._____ inside the van was mainly superficial(表面的), 19._____ a plastic window was blown out.The two men have spent the last six months 20._____.At the time of the incident their wives were shopping in the city.1.A.disappointed
B.excited
C.frightened
D.shocked
2.A.call
B.warning
C.report
D.assistance 3.A.inside
B.outside
C.around
D.towards 4.A.plan
B mind
C.direction
D.nature 5.A.after
B.before
C.when
D.until 6.A.wife
B.passenger
C.visitor
D.guest 7.A.wounds
B.sickness
C.burns
D.hurts 8.A.operation
B.treatment
C.recovery(复原)
D.examination 9.A.much
B.pretty
C.usually
D.actually 10.A.bomb
B.fire
C.truck
D.accident 11.A.lie
B.die
C.roll
D.fall 12.A.good
B.poor
C.easier
D.worse 13.A.at
B.for
C.after
D.by 14.A.van
B.office
C.market
D.room 15.A.rescue
B.doctor
C.firefighter
D.ambulance(救护车)16.A.kept on
B.insisted on
C.cared for
D.gave up
17.A.in order
B.in all
C.all right
D.all over 18.A.Equipment
B.Suffering
C.Damage
D.Condition 19.A.although
B.since
C.because
D.so that 20.A.touring
B.repairing
C.moving
D.cleaning
内容概要：文章讲述了两个人在旅行中，车子发生了事故，引起了火灾。具体描述了救人救火的场面。
答案简析：
1、选D。因为巨大的爆炸声是突如其来的，所以街上的人感到“震惊”。
2、选D。give assistance意思是offer help，根据空格后的help 不难选定。
3、选A。火应该是车内的爆炸产生的，所以用inside。
4、选C。上面提到了众人的帮助，所以此刻一辆卡车也改变了“方向”，以便为他们提供一些方便。卡车是无生命的事物，故不能选用另三个选项。
5、选B。卡车加入救助时，消防队员显然还没有到。
6、选B。passenger是“乘客”，而guest是“客人”在车上的人应是乘客。
7、选C。因为火引起的，所以是灼伤“burn”。
8、选B。因为伤比较轻微，所以经简单“治疗”后可以离开医院。
9、选B。pretty在此处为副词，相当于very。从前面的a loud bang和人们纷纷循声涌向面包车来看，爆炸声“很”大。
10、选A。事故是肯定的，不必猜测，根据巨大的响声，猜测发生了爆炸应是合理的。
11、选C。在地上“滚”是为了扑灭身上的火。
12、选D。下面提到裤子烧掉了一截，所以情况好像比前一位更糟糕一些。
13、选D。by the time意为“到„„时候为止”。从后面已有人携带灭火器到了车上，可以得出该答案。
14、选A。火主要在车内燃烧，故救火人到了“车”内。
15、选D。受伤的人等“救护车”救护，合乎常情。
16、选B。A、D不符合事实，C不合乎词的用法。
17、选C。all right相当与OK。进入车内的目的应该是为了看看物品是否损坏。
18、选C。由superficial 和 plastic window 可以想到此处指车子部件的“损坏”情况。
19、选A。前后意义相反。20、选A。与文章首句相呼应。
（三）When dawn came, they realized that the boat was blocked in ice.The captain had 1_____ asleep but the rest of the crew hurriedly woke him.He took a small axe(斧), and 2_____great care, so as to 3_____ a hole in the ice on the deck（甲板）, he began to knock.From time to time a wave burst over the boat and swept over him but he kept working for ten minutes 4_____ the others looked on 5_____.By this time he was 6______ cold that he could no longer trust what he was doing.Each member of the crew took it in 7_____ to cut the ice away as long as he could 8_____it.First, they had to knock off enough ice to get down on their 9_____.Standing on that rolling deck meant 10_____, because a man who had fallen into the sea could not have been rescued.Then the captain discovered that ice was forming inside the cabin(船舱).He called 11_____ one of the crew and together they managed to get the stove alight, hoping that it would 12 _____enough heat to warm the cabin above 13_____ point.Unless the ice in the bottom could be
melted enough so that the 14_____ could be raised, they were in 15_____.It took an hour’s 16_____ before the boat began to float better.But by this time they had succeeded in 17_____ most of the ice.Throughout the afternoon, the coating of ice began to build up again 18_____ their work.In the face of this danger, Captain Slater 19______ the crew to clear the ice so that the boat would 20_____ until the next morning.Then they settled down to wait for anther day.1.A.gone
B.fallen
C.become
D.grown 2.A.at
B.for
C.with
D.by 3.A.make
B.drill
C.dig
D.fill 4.A.until
B.before
C.after
D.while
5.A.excitedly
B.anxiously
C.happily
D.strangely 6.A.too
B.so
C.as
D.very 7.A.surprise
B.time
C.trouble
D.turn 8.A.support
B.help
C.bear
D.put up 9.A.knees
B.legs
C.feet
D.arms 10.A.life
B.pain
C.damage
D.death 11.A.to
B.on
C.up
D.at
12.A.get out
B.give off
C.get over
D.give in 13.A.boiling
B.marking
C.freezing
D.melting 14.A.boat
B.deck
C.sail
D.back 15.A.ruins
B.excitement
C.danger
D.surprise 16.A.delay
B.work
C.break
D.play 17.A.piling
B.getting
C.freezing
D.removing 18.A.whichever
B.though
C.as long as
D.in spite of 19.A.demanded
B.made
C.ordered
D.agreed
20.A.sink
B.live
C.float
D.flow
内容概要：本文描述了一艘船在寒冷的天气中，遭遇到了冰冻，但在船长和船员的共同努力下，最终脱离了险境。
答案简析：
1、选B。需要船员们去叫醒，说明“睡着了”。
2、选C。with great care 意为“细心地”，系固定搭配，在此作状语。
3、选A。make a hole“弄一个洞”，意思较为笼统。drill暗指用钻去钻，dig暗指用锹去挖，而船长用的工具却是斧头，故B、C两个选项应该舍去。
4、选D。在轮流干之前，只是船长一人在干，船长干时，大家只是在一旁注视着。
5、选B。因为情况比较危急，所以大家观望时心情一定很焦虑。
6、选B。前后有因果关系。
7、选D。由each member推知，众船员“依次”干了起来。
8、选C。bear意为“忍受”,表明大家在尽全力干，能干多长就干多长。put up 后加上with ,也可作“忍受”讲。
9、选A。因为站着破冰有危险，所以设法“跪下”。从词语搭配关系中也能得到一点启发。
10、选D。掉下大海无法营救，所以站在很滑的甲板上某种程度上就意味着“死亡”。
11、选A。call to sb大声叫某人，call on拜访（某人），call up打电话，call at拜访（某地），四个词组中只有call to 合乎语境。
12、选B。点上炉子是为了让炉子“散发”热量，保持船舱暖和。
13、选C。为使船舱不结冰，就要使其温度保持在“冰点”之上。
14、选A。冰融化后，可使船的重量减轻，使船体上浮。
15、选C。如果冰不清除，船就会不断下沉，那就肯定“危险”了。
16、选B。船上浮是在船员们一小时的辛劳之后得以实现的。
17、选D。remove“去除”，等于take away。
18、选D。in spite of 意为“不管、尽管”，表示让步关系。
19、选C。另三个词不能按sb to do。
20、选C。float意为“漂浮”，清除冰的目的显然是为了不使船下沉。
（四）Kate said “Hello” to Mr Patel as she entered.She picked up a wire basket and walked towards the back of the store 1_____ the rice was kept.The room was quite large and divided by three long aisles(过道), with rows of shelves full of 2_____.Besides her and Patel there were only two boys in the store.They were both wearing 3_____ overcoats.They looked rather 4_____ because the overcoats were too big for them.“5_____”, she heard one of them whisper to 6_____.She walked on to the next aisle and found the 7_____ she was looking for.Then she heard something else.It 8_____ like a box dropping on the floor.She looked through the small open space 9_____ goods on the shelf and saw one of the boys picking up a box.But 10_____ putting it in the basket, he dropped 11_____into the inside pocket of his overcoat.Kate looked back and 12_____ see Mr Patel at the door checking through a list.Then she looked through the 13______ in the shelf again.The boys still had their backs to her.They were putting something 14_____into their inside pockets and then one of them said, “Let’s get out of here.” They moved away from her.When she got to the door the two boys were 15_____ her.She watched them 16_____ for the few lings in their 17_____.They had both 18_____ their overcoats.Mr Patel did not seem to know what they had done.He even 19_____ at them as they were about to 20_____.Now Kate decided to stop them.1.A.which
B.that
C.there
D.where 2.A.books
B.baskets
C.goods
D.magazines 3.A.dirty
B.long
C.grey
D.tight 4.A.strange
B.young
C.nervous
D.excited 5.A.Look up
B.Listen to me
C.Watch out
D.Put it down 6.A.him
B.her
C.the boy
D.the other 7.A.book
B.rice
C.bag
D.magazine 8.A.looked
B.heard
C.showed
D.sounded 9.A.between
B.of
C.around
D.at 10.A.instead of
B.before
C.without
D.as if 11.A.something
B.it
C.one
D.that 12.A.would
B.should
C.might
D.could 13.A.spot
B.space
C.goods
D.books 14.A.important
B.new
C.else
D.extra 15.A.looking at
B.talking to
C.in front of
D.behind 16.A.paying
B.looking
C.asking
D.reaching 17.A.hands
B.pockets
C.box
D.basket
18.A.thrown out
B.put on
C.buttoned
D.hidden 19.A.shouted
B.smiled
C.looked
D.laughed 20.A.leave
B.pay
C.speak
D.apologize
（1999年广东夏季高考题）
内容概要：本文讲述了Kate去商店买米时，无意中发现两个穿着长大衣的小孩在商店里偷东西，最后她决定制止他们的行为。答案简析：
1、选D。空格后的部分是地点状语从句。
2、选C。超市里架子上放的自然是“货物”了。
3、选B。从下文得知，他们准备偷东西，所以穿“长”大衣来做掩护。四个选项中只有long 与后面提到的too big 有点关系。
4、选A。大衣长而大，穿在小孩子身上自然就觉得古怪。young, nervous, excited与strange之间没有逻辑上的因果关系。
5、选C。毕竟是做贼的，所以提醒另一人要“当心”。
6、选D。共两个小孩，故另一个用the other。
7、选B。开头已暗示Kate是来买米的。
8、选D。it指前面听到的声音，这种声音“听起来”像„„。
9、选A。货物之间有空隙，Kate正好可以看过去。
10、选A。按理小孩应把选中的东西放进购物篮中，但他们没有，故用instead of。
11、选B。it 指前面已提到过的box。
12、选D。could表示可能性。
13、选B。第9空前的动作再次重复了一遍。
14、选C。这时放入袋中的显然不是前面提到过的box，而是“其他”什么东西。
15、选C。她看着他们，说明他们就在她面前。
16、选D。购物篮中的物品两个小孩是准备付款的。
17、选D。付款的东西自然是放在购物篮中的。
18、选C。大衣的钮子钮得整整齐齐，因为里面藏有东西，此处button是动词。
19、选B。由even所表示的语气可以推知。20、选A。根据行文逻辑不难选定。
（五）Bob and Annie had not known each other long before they became eager to get married:Bob because he wanted Annie and she because she could at least lead a life away from her1_____.When Mrs.Thompson 2_____ that they marry and live with her until they could get a 3 _____ of their own, Annie hesitated.Her idea of 4_____ had been something which 5 _____her a husband and an orderly, well-furnished home all at once.6_____ she soon saw the 7_____ of this arrangement.She would, first of all, 8_____ from her present life into a house which was quiet and well run, not 9_____ her own;and she would be able to go on walking so that she and Bob could 10____ up all the more quickly for their own house.She would also get Bob, a good enough husband for any working-class 11_____:good-natured and 12_____ to be bent her way whenever it was 13 _____for her ends.Things went well until her mother-in-law’s 14_____, when Annie had to give up her 15_____ and was at home all day.Her father-in-law became just a 16_____ figure in the house and 17____Bob became used to him, Annie began to find the old man’s constant 18_____in the house a source of growing annoyance(烦恼).“He gets on my nerves, Bob,” she said.“And he hardly says a word all day.”
“Well, I suppose he has a 19_____ to do as he likes,” Bob said mildly.“It’s his house not ours.” But to Annie, now looking after the house 20_____ it were her own, it was beginning to seem the other way about.1.A.city
B.family
C.room
D.company 2.A.learned
B.thought
C.heard
D.suggested 3.A.stay
B.child
C.house
D.world 4.A.marriage B.life
C.future
D.expectation 5.A.give
B.found
C.brought
D.searched 6.A.But
B.So
C.Instead
D.Besides 7.A.difficulty B.advantage
C.trouble
D.result 8.A.leave
B.make
C.change
D.escape 9.A.of
B.on
C.like
D.for 10.A.earn
B.save
C.build
D.set 11.A.home
B.character
C.custom
D.girl 12.A.easy
B.ready
C.kind
D.lovely 13.A.necessary
B.right
C.important
D.helpful 14.A.illness
B.arrival
C.death
D.appearance 15.A.job
B.idea
C.decision
D.dream 16.A.active
B.funny
C.strange
D.silent 17.A.until
B.although
C.before
D.when 18.A.rest
B.work
C.presence
D.cough 19.A.right
B.way
C.wish
D.freedom 20.A.because
B.if
C.even though
D.as if
内容概要：本文讲述了一对新婚夫妇因无住房而与父母住在一起的情况，后来母亲去世了，留下了沉默寡言的父亲，儿媳于是感到了不自在。
答案简析：
1、选B。Annie起初的想法是结婚至少可以离开父母生活。
2、选D。从上下文和从句中谓语动词的形式可以推知。
3、选C。由下文可知，Annie和Bob 当时还没有自己的“住房”。
4、选A。根据后面的定语从句推知。
5、选C。根据常识和上下文均可得出答案。
6、选A。很快发现了和父母住一起有好处，此处意义上形成了转折。
7、选B。下文描述的就是具体的“好处”。
8、选D。根据意义可排除B、C，leave不与from连用，据此可排除A。
9、选C。由escape 推知，Annie婚前住的房子远没有她想象中的婚后住房好。
10、选B。和父母住一起，自己可以存一些钱（save up）用以买房，此处all the more是even的意思。
11、选D。丈夫是相对于女人而言的。
12、选B。ready to bend her away意为“乐于听从她”。这是一个好丈夫的品质之一。
13、选A。此处ends表示“目的”。另三项在此不合逻辑。
14、选C。由things went well until推知，空格处要填上一个消极意义的词，由公公单身一人，可联想到婆婆已“死”。
15、选A。由at home all day推知，她放弃了工作。
16、选D。下文有“he hardly says a word all day”。
17、选B。小夫妻二人感受迥然相反。
18、选C。公公不说话，也不出门，整天“出现”在家里，Annie颇觉烦扰。
19、选A。right表示“权力”。由It’s his house not ours推知，Bob认为他父亲有权呆在自己家里。
20、选D。从上下文来看，Annie一直是将住处当着自己的房子来管理的。
（六）I ran across an old photo of him the other day, thinking of some old things.He’s been dead for 25 years.His name was Rex.1_____ was his favorite recreation(娱乐).He had so much 2_____ in the water as any person I have known.You didn’t have to throw a stick in the water to 3_____ him to go in.Of course, he would bring back a stick to you if you 4 _____ throw one in.That 5 ____ me of that night, 6_____ he brought back a small box that he found somewhere---how 7_____ nobody ever knew.Since it was Rex, it 8_____ easily have been half a race.The box wasn’t a god one.It was just a 9______ old piece that somebody 10______.Still it was something he wanted, probably 11_____ there was some difficulty in transportation（运输）.And that he thought could test his courage.We first knew about his achievement when, deep in the night, we 12 _____ him trying to get the box up onto the porch(门 厅).It sounded 13_____ two or three people were trying to tear the house 14 _____.We came downstairs and turned on the 15_____ light.Rex was on the top step trying to pull the thing up, but it had 16_____somehow.And he was just holding his own(坚持着).I suppose he would have held his own 17_____ dawn if we hadn’t helped him.The next day we carried the box miles away and threw it out.If we had thrown it out in a 18____ place, he would have brought it home again, as a small token(象征)of his strength in such matters.19____, he had been taught to carry heavy wooden objects about and he was 20_____ of his skill.1.A.Fighting
B.Swimming
C.Barking
D.Running 2.A.fun
B.trouble
C.danger
D.difficulty 3.A.stop
B.make
C.get
D.have 4.A.will
B.do
C.did
D.would 5.A.reminds
B.warns
C.tells
D.suggests 6.A.which
B.while
C.as
D.when 7.A.Far
B.long
C.old
D.heavy 8.A.could
B.can
C.should
D.would 9.A.priceless
B.worthless
C.valuable
D.important 10.A.kept
B.forgot
C.deserted（遗弃）D.remained 11.A.because
B.only if
C.even if
D.in case 12.A.saw
B.heard
C.watched
D.caught 13.A.like
B.that
C.as if
D.at least 14.A.up
B.in
C.away
D.down 15.A.hall
B.kitchen
C.bedroom
D.porch 16.A.rolled
B.stopped
C.caught
D.broken 17.A.at
B.before
C.till
D.during 18.A.distant
B.nearby
C.silent
D.busy 19.A.In all
B.As a result
C.At last
D.After all
20.A.proud
B.tired
C.ashamed
D.doubtful 内容概要：本文描述的是Rex，一个头脑简单、力大无比的小狗。它爱好游泳，爱做一些无意义的事来表现它的力气。
答案简析：
1、选B。根据第2空后的in the water可以排除另三个选项。
2、选A。因为十分喜欢游泳，所以有乐趣。
3、选C。根据后面的to go in 这一带to的不定或短语可以排除另三个选项。
4、选C。did用以加强语气，正好回应前一句。
5、选A。remind sb of sth意为“使人想起”。
6、选D。when引起定语从句修饰that night。
7、选A。“没人知道，他从多远的地方弄来箱子”。此句用来补充说明somewhere，由have a race也可推测此处指距离。
8、选A。could easily强调是狗本身的一种属性，一种能力。因为Rex是条狗，善于奔跑，且有股蛮劲，所以这件事对它来说“可能”很容易。
9、选B。主人最终还是将其扔掉了，可见其“无价值”。
10、选C。从后面主人又将其扔掉来看，这只破箱子是被人“遗弃的”，没用的箱子。
11、选A。前后是因果关系。
12、选B。下面一句有it sounded，所以用heard。
13、选C。后面描述的动作与实际情况完全相反，故选as if，表达一种虚拟语气。
14、选D。tear the house down意为“拆房子”。
15、选D。狗就在门厅，所以打开那儿的灯。
16、选C。catch意为“被钩住”，这是狗拖不动箱子的主要原因。
17、选C。由于主人知道狗的蛮劲，故推测如果没人帮它，它会拨弄箱子“一直到”天亮，即到主人起身发现这一切时。
18、选B。箱子如果扔“近”一些，Rex又会捡回来的。
19、选D。after all（毕竟），表达一种让步的口吻。
20、选A。从狗喜欢表现自己拖动重物的本领来分析，它对自己这方面的能力是引以为“自豪的”。
（七）James sat outside the office waiting for the interview.He felt so 1_____ that he didn’t know what to do with 2 ______.The person who had gone in 3 _____ him had been in there for nearly an hour.And she looked so confident(自信的)when she went in, 4 _____James.He felt 5 _____ that she had already got the 6 _____.The problem was that he wanted this job 7____.It meant 8____ to him.He had 9_____ it such a lot before the day of the interview.He had imagined himself 10_____ brilliantly(出色地)at the interview and 11_____ the job immediately.But now here he was feeling 12 _____.He couldn’t 13_____ all those things he had 14 _____ to say.At that moment, he almost decided to get up and 15 _____.But no---he had to do this.He had spent so much time considering it that he couldn’t 16_____ like that.His hands were hot and sticky and his mouth felt dry.At last the door of the office opened.The woman who had gone in an hour earlier came out looking very 17_____ with herself.She smiled sympathetically(同情地)at James.At the moment, James 18_____ her.The managing director then appeared at the office door.“Would you like to come in now, Mr Davis? I’m sorry to have kept you waiting.” James suddenly 19____ that he had gone home after all.He got up, legs 20_____ and forehead sweating and wondered whether he looked as terrified as he felt.1.A.healthy
B.nervous
C.careless
D.confident 2.A.the interviewer B.the woman
C.himself
D.the situation 3.A.by
B.with
C.before
D.after 4.A.Not like
B.So did
C.Do as
D.Do like 5.A.doubtful
B.sure
C.angry
D.astonished 6.A.reward
B.first
C.prize
D.job 7.A.hopelessly
B.naturally
C.easily
D.so much 8.A.everything
B.happiness
C.difficulty
D.nothing 9.A.dreamed of
B.learned of
C.thought about
D.talked about 10.A.explaining
B.performing
C.answering
D.writing 11.A.offered
B.asked for
C.being offered
D.being asked for 12.A.mad
B.excited
C.certain
D.terrible 13.A.depend on
B.afford
C.believe in
D.remember 14.A.kept
B.been taught
C.planned
D.been supplied 15.A.leave
B.go in
C.prepare
D.practise 16.A.take back
B.put off
C.give up
D.put down 17.A.ugly
B.pleased
C.sad
D.pretty 18.A.noticed
B.loved
C.missed
D.hated 19.A.thought
B.hoped
C.wished
D.regretted 20.A.shaking
B.bending
C.walking
D.stopped 内容概要：本文通过对比的手法，描述了James面试前紧张不安、不知所措的心理状态。答案简析：
1、选B。由后面的不知所措，可见其“紧张”。
2、选C。是他“自己”不知所措。
3、选C。因为那个女士已面试了近一个小时，可见她是先进去接受面试的。
4、选A。表示比较，别人充满自信而“不像”他。
5、选B。从他后面担心得不到工作来分析，他是“确信”那位女士面试出色的。
6、选D。面试所竞争的就是“工作”，而且下一句又再现了job这一词。
7、选D。从他后面对这份工作的憧憬来看，他“十分”希望得到这份工作。
8、选A。前面说了他非常想得到这份工作，而且为面试进行了精心准备，可见这一工作对他来说意味着“一切”。
9、选C。dream of指“梦想”，一般指超出现实或是比较遥远的事情，think about表示“考虑”，比较恰当，而且与下文的imagined，considering相呼应。
10、选B。其他三个选项不能涵盖面试的方方面面。
11、选C。想象中面试出色，所以当场得到了那份工作。
12、选D。与前面想象中的美好形成强烈对比。
13、选D。紧张导致思维混乱，所以不能“想起”准备好的话。
14、选C。希望回忆出来的话语，肯定是事前准备好的。
15、选A。根据行文逻辑选定。
16、选C。等同于前面提到的get up and leave。
17、选B。由后面的行为来看，她对自己的面试表现是满意的。
18、选D。夺取了那份工作，又表现出洋洋得意的样子，叫James怎么不“恨”她。
19、选C。由had gone这一虚拟语气形式和“两腿发抖、额头冒汗”这一信息不难推知答案。
20、选A。紧张时两腿“发抖”，这是正常现象。
（八）It was Tom’s first visit to England, and he was looking forward to his first journey, on London’s Underground Railway.And against his friends’ 1_____, he was determined to travel 2 _____.He entered the station shortly after five o’clock in the afternoon.This is a 3_____ time to travel in London, 4_____ crowds of people go home from work at this hour.He 5 _____ to join a long line of people waiting for tickets.When at last his 6 _____ came, he had some difficulty in making himself understood by the ticket seller.7____, he got the right ticket in the end and by asking people the 8 _____, he also found the right platform.It was 9 _____ tight with people.He did not 10_____ to get on the first train, but he was able to move nearer to the platform so as to be in a better 11_____ to get on the next one.When this train came in, Tom was 12 _____ forward onto the train by the 13______ of people from behind.The doors closed and the train moved off.He was unable to see the 14 _____ of the stations where the train 15 _____, but he knew that the station he wanted was the sixth 16 ______ along the line.When the train reached the sixth station, Tom got off, feeling 17 _____ that his journey had been so easy.But he suddenly realized that he had come to a station he had never 18 _____.He explained his 19_____ to a man who was standing on the platform.With a 20_____ on his face, he told Tom that he had caught a train going in the opposite direction.1.A.thought
B.advice
C.relation
D.favor 2.A.alone
B.abroad
C.along
D.away 3.A.short
B.certain
C.possible
D.bad 4.A.for
B.and
C.so
D.but 5.A.planned
B.had
C.happened
D.hoped 6.A.luck
B.time
C.chance
D.turn 7.A.Thus
B.Instead
C.Therefore
D.However 8.A.question B.way
C.place
D.condition 9.A.packed
B.caught
C.covered
D.seized 10.A.manage
B.try
C.agree
D.expect 11.A.situation
B.state
C.position
D.seat 12.A.fought
B.swept
C.drawn
D.brought 13.A.speed
B.support
C.strike
D.push 14.A.signs
B.points
C.names
D.numbers 15.A.left
B.topped
C.started
D.moved 16.A.part
B.pause
C.stop
D.arrived 17.A.glad
B.sick
C.sorry
D.tired 18.A.heard of B.talked about C.thought of
D.arrived at 19.A.result
B.mistake
C.difficulty
D.ticket 20.A.joke
B.smile
C.surprise
D.pity
内容概要：本文讲述了Tom第一次到英格兰，不听朋友的建议，独自外出，结果把火车的方向弄反了，以致到错了地方。
答案简析：
1、选B。against one’s advice意为“违背别人的建议”。
2、选A。通过下文得知他是一人出来，故用alone。
3、选D。下面街道人多为患，所以用“bad”。
4、选A。for表原因，用以解释 bad time。
5、选B。要排长队购票是不以他的意志为转移的，他是“不得不”排队。
6、选D。turn表示“轮次”。
7、选D。售票员听不懂他的话，他却把票买成了，前后句显然有“转折”关系。
8、选B。问路一般用ask the “way”。
9、选A。be packed with be crowded with。正因为人拥挤，才没上得了第一趟火车。
10、选A。manage to do表示“设法得以做成某事”，没做成当然用not manage了。
11、选C。因为是在拥挤的站台上，显然获得的是一个稍好些的站的“位置”。
12、选B。从from behind 来看，他是被人推向前的。sweep在此意思是“猛推”。
13、选D。push与sweep同义。
14、选C。看不清的应是“站名”。signs应注意排除，毕竟他首次到英国，即使各个站有其独特的符号、标记，他也不可能知道。
15、选B。站就是火车“停”靠的地方。
16、选C。这里的stop与station同义。
17、选A。觉得旅行如此轻松，心情当然是“高兴的”。
18、选A。选项D应注意排除，因为他不是英国人，所以没到过这个车站是明摆着的，故这一答案是正确，但与hear of 相比，不能算是最佳答案。
19、选C。这里的difficulty指他当时的一种迷茫。究竟是怎么一回事，他还未知道，所以谈不上什么错误，故选项B，不能确定为答案。
20、选B。听说Tom乘车的方向完全反了，那人的第一反应应当是觉得好笑，即答案应在A、B之间。joke不可能出现在脸上，故答案只能为B。
第三篇：记叙文++++全国高考英语作文写作句型及
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china finally succeeded in jointing the wto after many's efforts.this event will influence the economy in china greatly.jointing the wto brings china many benefits and opportunities.as a member coutry, china can enjoy many rights that can boost the development of the economy in china.what's more, the chinese people can buy productd of high quality with less pay.every thing has two aspects.joining the wto can also bring us some challenges.for example, some producers may be wiped out because of the intense competition.in addition, it will be more difficult for us to get a job, as the requirement for the employees will become higher.however, this great event does more good than harm to us.what we should do is to improve ourselves to become qualified for certain positions and live a better life.···→
1.以同位语作为句子的开头。
The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party.2.以单个修饰语作为句子的开头。
这个修饰语可以是形容词、分词或副词。
Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.Secretly, the girl entered the room.With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.3.以短语修饰语作为句子的开头。
短语修饰语可以是介词短语、不定式短语、分词短语以及独立主格结构。
In front of me stood a beautiful girl.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.Your homework finished, you may go home.4.用从句作为句子的开始。
If I am free, I will attend your lecture.Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.···考研英语小作文开头常用短语句式
(1)With the(rapidly)growing popularity of(computers/private cars)in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.(2)With the(rapid)growth of(our economy/population), many problems such as(water shortages/waste of energy/lack of professionals and chaotic management)are beginng to surface
(3)With the development of(science and technology/market economy), more and more/an increasing number of people come to realize that...(4)Currently there is a widespread/serious concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/negative influence of western cultures).(5)Nowadays, a heated debated/discussion about...is under way in China.some people believe that..., whereas others argue that...(6)There are some reasons for owning(private cars/ personal computers).To begin with,...Next,...Last,...There are, on the oher hand, many reasons against it.First,...Second,...Finally,...(7)There are many advantanges and disadvantages in(owning a car).(8)There are various /at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods to do something
(9)Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for toe reasons.The first reason is that...The second reason is that.../On the one hand ,...On the other hand....(10)The possible solutions of(the enery crisis/water shortanges/these social problems)depend on three factors...(11)The tow major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth /the widespread of fake products)are...···英语高分作文必须要记住的二十六句式
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc 例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V 例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V...（不可否认的...）
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~（全世界都知道...）例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~（毫无疑问的...）
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的优点是...）
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create(produce)any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~ The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~（愈...愈...）
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~（借着...，..能够..）
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十一、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V（..使..能够..）例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十二、It is time + S + 过去式（该是...的时候了）
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the trafficproblems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十三、Those who ~~~（...的人...）
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十四、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V（不得不...）
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
十五、It is conceivable that + 句子（可想而知的）It is obvious that + 句子（明显的）It is apparent that + 句子（显然的）
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
十六、That is the reason why ~~~（那就是...的原因）
例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don’t like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
十七、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式。例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
十八、be based on（以...为基础）
例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
十九、be closely related to ~~（与...息息相关）例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。
二十、Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V（养成...的习惯）
例句：We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十一、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多么...！）
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事！
二十二、Leave much to be desired（令人不满意）
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我们的交通状况令人不满意。
二十三、Have a great influence on ~~~（对...有很大的影响）例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。二
十四、do good to（对...有益），do harm to（对...有害）例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。
二十五、Pose a great threat to ~~（对...造成一大威胁）例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
二十六、do one’s utmost to + V = do one’s best（尽全力去...）例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。英语四六级作文套句总结
开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.最近,„问题已引起人们的关注.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.Nowadays,(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that… 人们一般认为„
Many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为„
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that „ 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为„ A lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为„ 结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论„
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that „ 考虑所有这些因素, 我们可能会得出合理的结论„
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that… 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论„
There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之,我们没有„是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.引出不同观点: People’s views on… vary from person to person.Some hold that….However, others believe that….人们对„的观点因人而异.有些人认为„..然而其他人却认为．．． People may have different opinions on… 人们对„可能会有不同的见解.Attitudes towards(drugs)vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.There are different opinions among people as to… 关于„.人们的观点大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.提出建议: It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳„的建议,并对„的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对„问题应予以足够的重视.Obviously,….If we want to do something… , it is essential that… 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是„
Only in this way can we„ 只有这样,我们才能„ It must be realized that„ 我们必须意识到„ 预示后果: Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that„ will lead us in danger.很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that… 毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会„
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持 There is no evidence to suggest that„ 没有证据表明„ 过渡词 强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列举
for example, for instance, such as, take …for example.Except(for), to illustrate.时间
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during,nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.顺序
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能
presumably, probably, perhaps.解释
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.递进
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.让步
although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately.whereas 原因
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case.···图表作文常用句型
As is shown in the graph„ 如图所示„ The graph shows that„ 图表显示„
As can be seen from the table, „ 从表格中可以看出„ From the chart, we know that„ 从这张表中,我们可知„ All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即„
The increase of ….in the city has reached to 20%.这个城市的„.增长已达到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,这个数字保持不变.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.···英语四六级英语四六级作文基本句式
下面是四六级作文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this are as follows． 3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek． 5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．． 例如：
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life． 注：如考生写 4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）for sb．to do sth． 2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life． 例如：
Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon，computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age． 作文基本句式总结1 5．表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures．
2）We should try our best to overcome（con quer）the difficulties． 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with． 例如：
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it． 6．表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications． 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education． 例如：
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins． 7．表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．． 2）No one can deny the fact that．．． 3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in． 5）However，that’s not the&nb sp;case． 例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment． 8．表示比较
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV． 3）There is a striking contrast between them． 例如：
Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical
exercise． 5．表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures．
2）We should try our best to overcome（con quer）the difficulties． 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with． 例如：
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it． 6．表示变化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications． 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education． 例如：
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins． 7．表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．． 2）No one can deny the fact that．．． 3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in． 5）However，that’s not the&nb sp;case． 例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems，we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment． 8．表示比较
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV． 3）There is a striking contrast between them． 例如：
Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise． 9．表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）The population in this city has now increased（decreased）to 800，000．
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January． 例如：
With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has dec reased while that spent on education has increased． 再如：
From the graph listed above，itcan be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000． 注：“From the graph listed above，it can be seen that”见句式12。考生将句式9和句式12结合在一起，便可较好地写出2002年6月CET －
4、6短文写作的 It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
According to a recent survey, about 78.90f the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.主体
to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）most important of all, moreover, finally on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … 结尾 Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.···好句~~ 一)比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that...but it would be foolish to claim that...5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think..., but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A..., but the chief faults(obvious defects)are...二)原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to(lead to)
(account for)the phenomenon(problem).2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4.The factors that contribute to this situation include...5.The change in...largely results from the fact that...6.We may blame...,but the real causes are...7.Part of the explanations for it is that...One of the most common factors(causes)is that...Another contributing factor(cause)is...Perhaps the primary factor is that …
But the fundamental cause is that...三)后果
1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is...3.It will exercise a profound influence upon...4.Its consequence can be so great that...四)批驳
1)It is true that..., but one vital point is being left out.2)There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3)Some people say..., but it does not hold water.4)Many of us have been under the illusion that...5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6)It makes no sense to argue for...7)Too much stress placed on...may lead to...8)Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that...9)Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that...五)举例
1)A good case in point is...2)As an illustration, we may take...3)Such examples might be given easily.4)...is often cited as an example.六)证明
1)No one can deny the fact that...2)The idea is hardly supported by facts.3)Unfortunately, none of the available data shows...4)Recent studies indicate that...5)There is sufficient evidence to show that...6)According to statistics proved by..., it can be seen that...七)开篇
1)Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2)Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3)Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4)Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5)Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6)Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7)Faced with..., quite a few people argue that...8)According to a recent survey,...9)With the rapid development of...,...八)结尾
1)From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...2)It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3)It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4)In conclusion, it is imperative that...5)There is no easy method, but...might be of some help.6)To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...7)In summary, if we continue to ignore the above mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8)With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9)We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10)Taking all these into account, we...11)Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clea ···六级写作材料 六级写作补充范文 1．（2005年1月六级真题）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an open letter on behalf of the Student Union asking people to give help to a student who is seriously ill.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况 目前的困难：无法承担医疗费用，需要护理 希望捐助；联系方式 Your Help Needed Dear friends, I am writing to you, on behalf of the Student Union, to ask for your help for Li Ming, a schoolmate of ours from the Department of Computer Science.He is seriously ill now and has to have a heart transplant at once.To make things worse, he comes from the west of our country and his family is quite poor.Li Ming is now confronted with the following difficulties.To begin with, he can’t afford the medical expenses.His family doesn’t have a good financial background.Moreover, his parents have already been deep in debt in order to send him to university.In addition, his family is far away and he needs someone to take care of him day and night.Only with intense care can our friend recover from his disease.On no account can we see our friend suffer or die.He is in desperate need of your help, especially financial donations to help him pay for his expenses.Let’s all give him our hands.Anyone who wants to offer help can contact us at 88588858 or you can email us by love@sina.com.Please act without delay.Yours sincerely, Zhang Hua Chairman of the Student Union 2．（2005年6月六级真题）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
目前盗版的现象比较严重 造成这种现象的原因及其危害 我们应该怎么做
Useful words and expressions: 盗版：piracy(n.)盗版产品：pirated products 知识产权：intellectual property rights 侵犯版权：infringe sb’s copyright;copyright infringement Say No to Pirated Products Piracy is a serious problem with which this country is confronted.In many places we see people peddling pirated books or disks.Actually, piracy has become so widespread that it has severely hindered the development of the nation’s economy.A number of factors account for the problem, but the following are the most critical ones.First, pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones, so they are very attractive to people, especially youngsters, who are not financially well-off.Secondly, with highly developed technology, it is not difficult to manufacture pirated products.With one authorized copy, the illegal producers can make thousands of fake ones at a very low cost, thus making huge profits.As a result, intellectual property rights are severely infringed upon.Honest producers will lose the motivation to develop new products.Meanwhile, pirated products are often of low quality, thus damaging the interest of buyers.In view of the seriousness of the problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be formulated and enforced to ban the manufacture and circulation of pirated products.Meanwhile, people should be educated to say no to these products.With these measures taken, we have reasons to believe that the problem can be solved in the near future.3．（2005年12月六级真题）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below: 对公司提供职位表示感谢
解释为何不能接受所提供的职位
希望予以谅解，并表示对公司的良好祝愿 A Letter Declining a Job Offer December 24, 2005 Dear Sir or Madam: I am responding to your job offer on December 20, 2005.I was informed that I would be offered the position as an interpreter for your company.I cordially appreciate your trust and I am much obliged to you for providing me with this valuable opportunity.However, I have to tell you that I cannot accept it.The major reason is that I don’t think I am the most appropriate candidate for this post.As a non-English major, though my written and spoken English are outstanding than most of my peers, I am not well trained in translation, not to mention interpretation, which, I believe is highly demanding.Maybe my performance in the oral examination has misled you.Actually, I am more interested and more competent in my own major, that is, program designing.Last but not least, I happened to have been offered such a position with another company.Nonetheless, I, again, want to express my sincere gratefulness and I earnestly apologize for
any inconvenience hereby caused.Finally, I hope you can find the ideal candidate as soon as possible.Best regards.Yours sincerely Li Ming 4．（2006年6月六级真题）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad.You should write at least 150 words based on the chart and the outline given below: Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005 1.近十年来X市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游 2.出现这一现象的原因
3．这种现象可能产生的影响 Traveling Abroad It can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of people traveling abroad in City X in the past decade.As the chart shows, the year 1995 witnessed only about 10,000 people from this city touring abroad.In 2000, the number soared to nearly 40,000.Last year, more than 120,000 people in the city chose to spend their vacations outside China.A number of factors account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones.First, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades.Therefore, the people have more extra money for traveling.Secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of touring industry provide citizens with more opportunities to go out and see the world.Last but not least, people have attached greater importance to the quality of life, thus they spend more money and time traveling and sight-seeing.In a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of China’s fast expanding economy and people’s rising standard of life.The trend of traveling abroad will further stimulate the development of our economy and broaden people’s horizons.5．（2006年12月老六级真题）
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Celebration of Western Festivals.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日 2.产生这种现象的原因 3.这种现象可能带来的影响
The Celebration of Western Festivals No one can have failed to notice the fact that an increasing number of Chinese are fond of celebrating some Western festivals today.For instance, on Valentine’s Day, many people give flowers or chocolate to the one they love.Another case in point is Christmas.It seems that people around the country now love to celebrate the festival.A number of factors account for the phenomenon mentioned above, but the following might be the critical ones.In the first place, due to the policy of reform and opening-up, Chinese people tend to know more about Western culture and be influenced by it.Secondly, some businessmen wish to make money by encouraging people to celebrate those Western festivals.Last but not least, as traditional Chinese festival lose their attraction, many people tend to find joy in Western festivals.Though we need not criticize people celebrating Western festivals, nor can we stop them, we have to beware of the danger behind it.While enjoying the atmosphere brought by those Western customs, we might well lose our own tradition and identity.6．（2006年12月新六级真题）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1．阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要
2．现在愿意阅读经典的人却越来越少，原因是„„ 3．我们大学生应该怎么做
The Importance of Reading Classics Reading classics plays a vital role in a person's growth.By reading classic works, either Chinese or foreign, one can learn a great deal about history, geography, politics, wars and customs.Besides, as these classics are the outstanding representatives human language, reading them can enormously improve our ability to read and write and to inherit cultural traditions.However, a diminishing number of people would like to read classics now.A variety of factors may have contributed to this phenomenon, but the following are the critical one.In the first place, as the pace of life and work quickens, people can find little time to indulge themselves in thick and serious works.They would rather read light and easy magazines or surf the Internet and do online reading.In the second place, most classics depict things far away from our real life, which makes reading them seem irrelevant.As college students, we should shoulder the burden of inheriting and developing cultural heritage.Therefore, it is essential that we should make plans to read classics regularly.Besides, we should try to influence people around us into reading them.7．Keeping Pets There is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a hotly debated topic today.Some people think keeping pets is a good thing to do.They believe that pets, like cats and dogs, can help relieve the loneliness suffered by senior citizens and other social members who are confined to their homes for this reason or that.They also argue that keeping pets helps mankind understand animals’ world and develop positive feelings toward them.Others, however, hold the opposite view.They regard keeping pets as a useless but harmful thing to do.First, pets can transmit diseases.Secondly, the noises and dung of pets are sources of pollution.Last but not least, as many rare birds and animals are kept as pets, they will surely be hunted on a large scale, which means a threat to the balance of the ecosystem.Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Anyway, we can lessen our loneliness and express our love toward animals in other ways.And it is my belief that only by placing man and other species on an equal basis can we expect to have a lively and colorful world.8.Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way A well-known proverb goes that “where there is a will, there is a way”, which means that one can find a way to success as long as he or she has a strong will.With a strong will, one can focus all his energy on one point, which makes his success possible.Without a strong will, however, one can be easily distracted from his goal or discouraged by setbacks, which leads to his ultimate failure.History abounds with examples of strong-willed figures winning success.Actually, there is no better illustration of the proverb than the deeds of Gou Jian, king of Yue in ancient China.Defeated by Fu Chai, king of Wu, Gou tried every means possible to steel his will.Eventually, with the help of Fan Li and Xi Shi, he managed to rebuild his country and his armies and had Fu Chai taste the bitterness of failure.In short, a strong will is essential if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives.One should lose no chance to strength his will and remember, God helps those who help themselves.9.More Students Pursue Master Degrees It can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of students attending graduate entrance exams in a college in the past decades.As the chart shows, the year 1996 witnessed only 200 students taking part in the exams.In 2001, the number nearly doubled.In 2006, far more students prepared themselves for graduate studies.A number of factors could account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones.First, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades.Therefore, the people have more extra money for education.Secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of higher education provide students with more opportunities to pursue higher degrees.Last but not least, the increasingly fierce competition forces college students to further their study in order to gain more edge of competition.In a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of China’s fast expanding higher education.Although many problems have arisen in the process, we have every reason to believe that they can be solved in the near future with effective measures taken.10.Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards The recent years have seen a dramatic increase in the number of Chinese studying abroad.Obviously, studying abroad has its rewards.In the first place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which might not be available at home.In the second place, he can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends.Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.However, just as every coin has two sides, studying abroad may also confront one with a series of hardships.For one thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people.For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may also be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young.An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.From my point of view, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.But it is a big decision to go abroad to study and one should take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding.Personally, I choose to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.11．（投诉信）
Directions: Write a letter of complaint according to the following situation: You bought an air conditioner in Sun Appliance and had it installed the other day, but you found that the fan made too much noise when the machine operated.You demand the store to send a representative to check it up.
Write your letter in no less than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the address.June 23, 2007
Dear Sir or Madam，I’m writing to lodge the complaint about the poor quality of an air conditioner that I purchased from Sun Appliance Company.Frankly speaking, Sun Appliance has always been my favorite.On April 4, 2007, I bought the air conditioner(serial number 12345)from one of your chain store located in Lang Fang.The machine operated well at first, but ten days later, there was a fault that bothered me, that is, the fan made so much noise that I could not sleep well at night.Worse still, the cooling system didn’t work well and the machine began to leak recently.Its poor quality ruined almost all my previous impression toward your products.I strongly suggest that a repairman or a service engineer should be sent to my home without delay.I wonder if you could pinpoint the exact cause of the malfunction as soon as possible.If you can’t, I am afraid that I will request for full amount of refund or a new air conditioner.I would appreciate all your assistance in this matter.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Look forward to your reply.Yours Sincerely，Li Ming
12．（邀请信）
Directions: Suppose you are the dean of the History Department, Peking University.You want to invite Professor Herb Jason, a well-known scholar of Chinese history, to come to attend an international conference on Chinese history.You’ll cover the following points:
The purpose of the invitation
The time and place of the conference
Ask him a favor of presenting a lecture to your students during his stay
Write your letter in no less than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the address.June 23, 2007
Dear Professor Herb Jason，I am Li Ming, dean of the History Department, Peking University.I am writing to invite you to participate in an international convention that is to be held in Beijing from 22th to 25th, July, 2007.Since your visit in Beijing last year, all the teachers that attended your lecture have been deeply impressed with your thorough knowledge and profound understanding of the subject.We would be pleased if you could come, as our guest of honor, to the International Conference on Chinese History, If possible, would you please deliver a speech on whatever subject that interests you.Enclosed in this letter is a time schedule for the event.You would, of course, receive our standard honorarium to cover traveling and other expenses.When you arrive in Beijing, I will certainly meet you at the airport.Please let me know your date of arrival if you can come and tell us when you can make the trip.If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
13．（感谢信）
Directions: Write a letter of thanks according to the following situation.Once you were ill and were hospitalized for a few weeks in the Chaoyang Medical Center, Taiyuan, Shanxi Province.During your stay the entire staff were
kind to you.When you came back home, you wrote them a letter of thanks.Write your letter in no less than 150 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use Li Ming instead.You do not need to write the address.June 23, 2007 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt thanks to all the nurses and doctors in your hospital.Last month, while I was on a business trip in Taiyuan, Shanxi province, I suffered from a bad cold and a fever, so I was sent to Ward Rom 201, Chaoyang Medical Center.During my stay at hospital, nurses on duty patiently took my temperature, regularly examined my body, and often fed meals to me.In addition, doctors prescribed me the most effective drugs and gave the best medical advice.Thanks to the constant care from the hospital staff, I recovered quickly.Now that I have returned home, the excellent service of your hospital still impresses me.I believe that as patient, I have received the most professional treatment and the most considerate care.Please allow me to convey my sincere greetings toward the doctors and nurses that contribute all their efforts, patience and energy to their patients.Nothing can express my gratitude except my best wishes to them.If you have anything that needs my help, please don’t hesitate to contact me.Yours sincerely, ···
(一)原因1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to(lead to)(account for)the phenomenon(problem).2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4.The factors that contribute to this situation include...5.The change in...largely results from the fact that...6.We may blame...,but the real causes are...7.Part of the explanations for it is that...One of the most common factors(causes.is that...Another contributing factor(cause.is...Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that(二)比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that...but it would be foolish to claim that...5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10.A and B differ in several ways.11.Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12.People used to think..., but things are different now.13.The same is true of B.14.Wondering as A is, it has its drawbacks.15.It is true that A..., but the chief faults(obvious defects)are...三)批驳
1.It is true that..., but one vital point is being left out.2.There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3.Some people say..., but it does not hold water.4.Many of us have been under the illusion that...5.A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6.It makes no sense to argue for...7.Too much stress placed on...may lead to...8.Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that...9.Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that...(四)后果
1.It may give rise to a host of problems.2.The immediate result it produces is...3.It will exercise a profound influence upon...4.Its consequence can be so great that...(五)举例
1.A good case in point is...2.As an illustration, we may take...3.Such examples might be given easily.4....is often cited as an example.(六)证明
1.No one can deny the fact that...2.The idea is hardly supported by facts.3.Unfortunately, none of the available data shows...4.Recent studies indicate that...5.There is sufficient evidence to show that...6.According to statistics proved by..., it can be seen that...(七)开篇
1.Many nations have been faced with the problem of...2.Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3.Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4.Recently the issue has aroused great concern among...5.Nowadays there is a growing concern over...6.Never in our history has the idea that...been so popular.7.Faced with..., quite a few people argue that...8.According to a recent survey,...9.With the rapid development of...,...(八)结尾
1.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that...2.It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop...3.It is necessary that steps should be taken to...4.In conclusion, it is imperative that...5.There is no easy method, but...might be of some help.6.To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must...7.In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8.With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9.We might do more than identify the cause;it is important to take actions to...10.Taking all these into account, we...11.Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...···
一． 上升增长
1．„add up to„ 增加了eg.The total amount of „ added up to 14 billion pounds(14%)in 1994.2． to jump to / to soar to„„ 一跃达到/ 猛增到„
eg.The total working days lost soared to 10 million in 1979.3．„an increase of about„percent as compared with„„ 与„相比大约增加了„
eg.In August as many as 39 car accidents were reported, indicating an increase of about 79% as compared with the number of January.4．„to experience an increase/incline „有了增长 eg.Tobacco consumption is experiencing an incline.二． 下降，减少
1．„to sink/drop/reduce to„ 减少到„
eg.The rate of strikes sank/dropped to the lowest point in 1979.2．„to experience a decrease/decline „有了减少
eg.Tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease.注意： 修饰上升/减少的副词有：
rapidly slowly dramatically respectively 表达上升/减少的最后状态的词有： the highest peak the lowest point 10 million 10% 三． 起伏
1．„to go up and down „起伏不定
eg.The strike rate went up and down during the period from 1952 to 1967.2．There be ups and downs „有起有伏
eg.Between 1972 and 1979, there were several ups and downs in（某方面）.四． 稳定
1．„to remain steady/level/unchanged „保持稳定，几乎不变
eg.The rate of …remained steady(fairly level/almost unchanged)during the four years from 1963 to 1967.2．„to level off(vi.)eg.After a steady decline for a whole decade, the …rate shows signs of leveling off.注意：
修饰起伏或稳定状态的副词有：
almost fairly 可以用于表达起伏，稳定状态的句子中的词组或句型： the general situation was not worsening show indications of improvement it can be predicted that…
eg.The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,and it can be predicted that the general situation was not worsening.eg.The rate of …remained steady during the four years from 1963 to 1967,showing signs of improvement in … ···
五． 成正比，反比
1．…be in direct /inverse ratio to/with 与…成正比/反比
eg.Male illustrations are in direct ratio to /with the advancement of grades, while female illustrations are in inverse ratio.六． 占百分之几，几分之几
1….to form/comprise/make up/constitute ….percent …占百分之…
eg.Women comprise more than 50% of the U.S.population.eg.Females make up only 24% of the illustrations whereas males constitute 76%.2．…to form/comprise/constitute a half/third/fourth of……占…的1/2,1/3,1/4 eg.Female illustrions form less than a fourth of the total.3．…account for…percent 占百分之几
eg.……, accounting for approximately 20 percent of… 七． 倍数
1．A be …times as much/many as B
eg.The annual rainfall of Hunan is 5 times as much as that of Sichuan.2．A doubles/is half/triples B A是B的两倍，一半，三倍
eg.The annual rainfall of Jidda doubles that of Janta, but is only half the amount of rain Kuwait receives each year.附一 圆盘比例型图表 例： 一个圆盘显示了大学生在food, books, transportations, entertainment, clothes, unknown中的开销，它们各自占的比例依次是60%,3%,5%,10%,10%,12%，要求你描叙这个圆盘图。描述: The above pie chart consists of 6 segments, the largest one representing food, which accounts for 60% of the total.Clothes and entertainment each takes up 10%.5% goes to transportation and 3% books.All the rest expenses, 12% of all ,is spend on unknown items.总结写作模式：
…pie chart consists of…segments, the largest one representing…,which accounts for …of the total.…each takes up….…goes to….All the rest…, …of all,……..八.原因结果
1….(结果)…, owing to(原因)[owing to 为分词结构] 2….(结果)…, attributable to（原因）[attributable to为形容词短语] 3….(结果)lie in the fact that（原因）[ 同位语从句 ] 4….（结果）result from（原因）[句型一般]
5.It is precisely because（原因）…that（导致结果）… [强调结构] 6.…, as a result, …（导致结果）… [as a result做插入语] 7.（原因）be responsible for（结果）[常见句型] 8.（原因），which in turn（结果）
eg.They give rise to unfair competition, which in turn throws original businesses into a commercial panic.
第四篇：高考记叙文
高考记叙文范文：回家的路
这是我回家必经的一条路。
起点——怀着愉悦的心情
周五放学后，便开始踏上了回家的路。走出校门，这便是起点了。风，轻轻地、温和地吹着，吹过了我的脸颊，就像妈妈的手抚摸着的感觉。穿过人海，向公路十字路口徒步前进。贪婪地呼吸着清新的空气，抬头望着瓦蓝瓦蓝的天空，倍感心旷神怡。两排的树绵绵延伸到远方，就如希望般不尽的绿色火炬。自然的音乐洗礼着这颗焦躁的心，唯有喜悦还在心里荡漾。这时候，我拿起电话对家里说自己即将回家。唉，一贯沉默内向的我，竟不知該和另一边的家人说些什么，只能轻轻挂断电话。再走一小会儿，就到了候车的地方。
中点——无限的遐想
坐上了公交车也闲着没事，就喜欢坐在靠窗边的位置看不断退却的风景展开一系列联想。有时车子是一路顺风；有时就有可能被交警拦下，拖了极长一段时间。不管怎样，还是喜欢车子里的人可以少一些，这样可以安静一点。风不断地从窗口溜进来，就好比一股股的清泉汩汩地流到身边。当看到一片片美丽的田野，绿树和绿草，以及远山的时候，就不禁想起《田园交响曲》，耳畔也不禁响起了主旋律，人也随着虚幻的田园飘了起来；一切都瞬息万变：风景一转，就看到就看到一层层高楼大厦。头脑就油然产生一种想回归大自然的强烈欲望，而这里浊恶的空气令我深感厌恶。于是脑海中又出现了一幅美妙的自然风景画。我想，等我将来实现了自己的梦想，我就带着全家回那个大自然的天堂——家乡，在那里专心研究、寻找大自然的灵感与启发。当我眺望远处大海的时候，思绪就更加飞舞了。我想到了将来自己的计划、自己的情况等等。当碰到车被抓的时候，我又想起了家里的平安，心中烦恼着、默默祈祷着。我明白，此时至少会晚半个小时到家，家里也必定打来电话，然而，我听不到那声音了，因为车里的嘈杂。
终点——急切的尾声
下了车，我便使劲往家的方向跑，说不出的兴奋和急切。匆匆过了天桥，家似乎就近在咫尺了。回家的喜悦，冲淡所有的一切。顺着公路一直走，不知不觉中已到楼下。在楼梯口，我习惯性的拿起电话来一看，发现好几个来自家里的未接电话。
第五篇：高考记叙文
高考记叙文
高考记叙文1
浩浩长江从唐古拉山绵延而下，一路上有激流险滩，也有悬崖瀑布，可江水总带着一往无前的气势和誓要与汪洋相汇的决心越过一个个横亘在面前的阻碍，最终与东海相拥。
生活亦是如此。它从来不是一条康庄大道，沿着既定的轨迹便能到达理想的高地，总有那么一道道坎阻挡着前行的步伐。于是很多人停在了追梦的路上。而只有那些跨过了生命的坎坷的人才最终寻得了梦想，找到了真理，迎来了光明和希望。
在追求理想的路途上，面对怀疑和睥睨的目光，请告诉自己：必须跨过这道坎，因为只有跨过了才能实现理想和追求。晦暗萧索的街头，一个单薄的身影正在挨家挨户地敲门诉说着自己的理想。伊莎多拉邓肯，后现代舞的开创者，她知道横在她面前的这道坎是芭蕾至高无上的地位，是众人怀疑的目光。可是凭着满腔热情与对舞蹈的热爱，弱小的女子从没有放弃，她知道她能够也必须跨过这道坎。于是她成功了，她成了那个“一条腿跨过洛基山脉，双手从大西洋伸向太平洋，额前星光灿烂”的人，而人们早已忘了她连续一周啃西红柿的日子。
带着热情与执著上路，坚定地告诉自己：必须跨过这道坎，那么面对困难和坎坷时，我们便会坚信，跨过了它，理想的高地便在前方。
在探求光明的路途上，面对黑暗和绝望，请告诉自己：必须跨过这道坎，因为只有跨过了方能寻得光明与希望。英吉利海峡的潮水击打着岸堤，水汽氤氲模糊了眼前的景致。戴高乐伫立在岸边眺望，彼岸是他深爱的法兰西。可是横亘在他面前的英吉利海峡以及法西斯的重装铁甲却是难以逾越的坎。然而戴高乐从未放弃，从BBC中掷地有声的宣言到艰难组建起的自由法国，信念和责任告诉戴高乐必须跨过这道坎。于是他成功了，他成了那个带领法国人重回凯旋门的铁血将军，而人们早已忘记了他离开诺曼底时的孤单身影。
带着信念和责任上路，坚定地告诉自己必须跨过这道坎，那么面对绝望和黑暗时，我们便会坚信跨过了它，黎明的曙光便在前方。
跨过这道坎，坎是什么？不仅仅是生活中失意，不仅仅是眼前的困难，更是自己的心坎，心中对于未来的不确定与前行途中的退缩。
跨过这道坎，如何去跨？不是只凭嘴上说说，不是只用双眼观望，而是用信念去征服，用行动去逾越，凭着执著和坚强去克服生命中的一个个障碍。
必须抱有希望，必须战胜自我，必须跨过这道坎。请坚信，坎坷过后便是平原，理想的高地便在前方。
名师点评：
本文亮点：层层推进，结构谨严。
作者先由长江跨越“一个个横亘在面前的阻碍，最终与东海相拥”这个大自然的现象展开类比联想，“跨过了生命的坎坷的人才最终寻得了梦想，找到了真理，迎来了光明和希望”。接着用伊莎多拉邓肯与戴高乐的事例从不同角度论证必须跨过怀疑和睥睨的目光、黑暗和绝望这道坎的重要性，分析透彻。最后还分析了如何跨过这道坎的方法，层层推进，结构谨严，给读者以真正的人生启迪。
高考记叙文2
“小燕子，我们上学去”。妹妹的小伙伴招呼妹妹的声音，似乎又使我回到了梦境般的童年时代，而我那儿时伙伴的稚气的脸就会浮现在我的脑海中……
“小雅，走呀!”我的耳边似乎又响起了辛刚的声音。辛刚是我幼时的伙伴，我们从幼儿园到小学一直是同学，用妈妈的话说：“你们俩好得像一个人似的。”
1982年我们俩一起考上了同一所重点中学，记得上学的第一天妈妈对我说：“以后不要老和辛刚在一起了”。“为什么?”我不解地问。“你们都大了，别人会说闲话的。”“我们又没做坏事。”我不以为然地摇摇头。妈妈叹口气：“唉，这是习惯呀，你太小，还不懂。”
然而，上学没多久，我就懂得了妈妈的话的含义。
那是在我13岁生日的那天，放学路上，辛刚递给我一个日记本，荧绿的封皮，烫金的大字，十分可爱，我翻开封皮，只见扉页上画着一个胖呼呼的娃娃，底下写着：“小雅生日快乐”。我不禁“嘿”的一声笑了。
第二天早晨，我和辛刚一起上学，来到教室前，只听教室中乱哄哄的。外号叫“新闻发言人”的金静正发布什么新闻。向来爱凑热闹的我一个健步冲进教室，然而就好像我按动了什么开关似的，教室里一下子静了下来，几十双眼睛齐刷刷地向我望来，接着，他们像突然又醒过了神儿，马上又爆发出大笑，还夹着几声口哨，几个男生挤眉弄眼地推着辛刚，我不由骂了一句：“神经病。”
天黑沉沉的，我跌跌撞撞地在路上走着，我不知道是怎么走出老师办公室的，大概是放学后，班主任老师把我召到办公室，她看了我半天，然后慢悠悠地说：“听说你和辛刚……十分要好?”“是的。”“噢，你应该清楚，早恋对你们是很不利的。”“什么?”我的脑袋哄的一声，像是爆炸了原子弹，“不，不是，我，我们没……”我语无伦次地说道。“噢，当然，他不是送了你一个日记本吗?”我做贼似的把书包往身后挪——那日记本正在书包里。“噢，同学们这么反映的，而且你们俩也大了，人们习惯这么想。”我愣愣地站着，不知老师都说了什么，也不知我后来是怎么走出办公室的，耳边只有一个声音：“人们习惯，习惯……”我停住脚步，从书包里拿出那个绿皮日记本，一篇篇地撒个粉碎，往路边扔去。
从那以后，我再也没与辛刚说过一句话，从前活泼的小姑娘一下子变得孤僻了。
“姐姐，我走了”。小燕子的声音把我从沉思中唤醒，妹妹天真的笑脸展现在我的眼前。“小刚，我们走吧”!妹妹与一个小男孩一蹦一跳地走远了。
啊，纯洁的小天使，但愿那个“习惯”不再伤害你们纯洁的心灵。
高考记叙文3
人的手，可以触摸到一个生命的灵魂。一生之中，我用双手感受过无数事物，终于有一天，我真切地感受到了灵魂的温度。
我第一次参加葬礼，刚十六岁。
殡仪馆积聚多年的寒气仿佛全部集中在这间小侧屋里，人站在里面，仿佛侵泡在蓄满冰啤酒的湖里，冰凉麻木，昏昏欲睡。
我的左手轻轻停留在她的脸颊上，力度真的轻的不像话，使劲再用力，也弄不醒这个陷入沉睡的女人。我幻想着她会再次睁开那双漂亮的眼睛，然后站起来，走出这座冰棺，无论是诈尸或是重活都好。
但这只能是一次充满深情与童真的妄想罢了。
她刚被抬来的那会儿，就有一群人在门口打麻将，吵吵闹闹，不绝于耳。起初我很愤怒，但又只能安慰自己，也许这是一种习俗吧，热闹热闹，这里，的确太冷清了。
我用手掌贴着她的脸颊，一丝丝温温的热度传来，我十分欣喜，脑子里竟然浮现她苏醒过来的场景，我又去握她的手，但她的手被压在了身下，我舍不得用力拖开，于是只能轻轻贴着她的手背，冰冷的温度，顺着我的手，传遍了整颗心脏。
晚上还有道场上的很多事等着我去做，这里只有我一个人披麻戴孝，但我不觉得孤独，因为我总觉得，她在看着我呢。
吊唁的人陆续到达，我不断地向每一个前来悼念的人下跪，每跪一个人，竖起的是她那双漂亮却带着水色的眼神，现在那水却顺着我的眼角流了下来。
时间慢慢远逝，那些哭过喊过或始终目无表情的人都走光了，只留下几个守夜的冰冷的人，他们砍了条板凳，烧起一堆火，围坐着嗑瓜子，说说笑笑。我打了几个盹，每次都被寒冷刺醒，即使挨着火堆，也无济于事。
天渐渐亮了，到了第二个早上，终于还是到了分别的时刻，昨天抬她进来的人，又再次抬起她，走进了火葬室，我站在门口，突然就哭到不可抑制，但我想我是为她的解脱而感到高兴吧。
我安静地站在一间小屋门外，直到门缓缓打开，我跪下，双手接住了那炙热的骨灰盒，那时，门里的人说：“妈妈会保佑你的。”我双手捧着她，即使烫手也毫不在意。也许这时，她也在里面静静地看着我。而此时，我手托着的，是她古老而永存不灭的灵魂。
天堂是永远的家，人间只是学习的地方。我说：“我像男人一样，洒脱地送你回家。”
高考记叙文4
生活是包罗万象的，即便一部长篇小说，也不可能涵盖生活的全部。因此，一篇800字左右的记叙文要想写出自己平常的经历及感受、感悟，大家就必须学会灵活描述，突出重点。
其基本原则有三：
一、事要“紧”
生活是一条河，它总是按照自己的节律向前流淌。如果我们将之原封不动地搬进作文，那就成了记流水账，既无“看头”，更无“兴味”。因此，在写作文时必须剪除与主旨联系不紧密的旁逸斜出之枝，留下紧扣文章主旨、凸显人物性格特征的典型事件之干，只有这样，才能使叙事的线索更明晰，故事的发展更紧凑，矛盾的冲突更集中，桥段的设计更精彩。只有这样，才能使文章尺水兴波，抓住读者的眼球，让读者产生阅读的冲动。
二、情要“炽”
季羡林说：“要勉强说愁，则感情是虚伪的，空洞的，写出的东西，连自己都不能感动，如何能感动别人呢?我的意思就是说，千万不要勉强写东西，不要无病呻吟……我写东西有一条金科玉律：凡是没有真正使我感动的事物，我决不下笔去写。”所以，我们要饱蘸那些至今想来仍让自己怦然心动的情怀，一想起来就让自己感慨唏嘘的情结。这样写出的作文才能拨动读者心底那根最柔软的琴弦，让读者的眼泪跟着你一起飞，才能与读者产生强烈的情感共鸣。
三、理要“切”
记叙文中的“理”不是通过“说教”来表示的，而是通过“写人记事”来昭示的。好的记叙文叙事写人自然生动，与生活紧密相关，字里行间流露的感悟非常真实、具体。所以在记叙文中说理时，要揭掉那些为吸引眼球而粘贴在文章里的“高大上”哲理标签，融入自己心底最真切的那份感悟，洗尽铅华，回归生活，触摸生活，品味出生活的真滋味。只有这样，我们的感悟才能接地气，食烟火，散发出青少年身上特有的青涩之味、牛犊之气，让读者发出“于我心有戚戚焉”的会心一笑。其实，读者心底真正想读的并不是一个个小老头、小老太念的“老人经”，而是一个个活泼少年闪亮的双眸中折射出来的发现“灵光”。
高考记叙文5
第一、通过人物的肖像写人。
人物的肖像主要指人物的外貌，包括人物的容貌、服饰、姿态和神情等等。肖像描写可以写人物的静态，也可以写人物的动态。
进行外貌描写有几大技巧：
1、简笔勾勒特征;
2、运用修辞手法;
3、寄托作者爱憎;
4、一人几幅肖像;
肖像描要注意两点：
一、肖像描写不是说把一个人，从眼睛写到鼻子，从鼻子写到嘴巴，从嘴巴写到耳朵，从耳朵写到头发，从脸写到身材。通常我们只是选取这个人的外表上一个最最鲜明的部分进行特写，比如说，写眼睛，鲁迅说要“画眼睛”。“画眼睛”是写人物肖像的关键。他在《祝福》中14次写到样林嫂的眼睛，而每一次眼神的变化，都透露出人物当时的和的心理性格的变化。我们不是说都要写眼睛，而是说鲁迅用了“画”这个字，强调对人外貌最具有特征的部分的特写，通常写人的外表都是为了表现人的性格服务的。鲁迅写祥林嫂是“画眼睛”，但也写了祥林嫂“花白的头发”(表现其悲惨的命运);写闰土，在写眼睛的同时，重点写到闰土的手：“那手也不是我所记得的红活圆实的手，却是又粗又笨而且开裂，像是松树皮了。”反映了闰土生活的艰辛和痛苦。
二、肖像描写切忌公式化、脸谱化。一般情况下，“人如其面”。然而人的内心与外貌并不总是一致的，外表漂亮不一定心灵美。通常外表和人物性格的反差可以给读者留下更深刻的印象。比如说：《牛虻》中的中年牛虻，就是瘸腿，面部丑陋，有刀伤痕。《红楼梦》中的王熙风美丽俊俏，却心狠手辣。
第二、通过人的语言来写人。
1.通过人物的语言写人。人物的语言要充分个性化的，能表现人物的出身、教养、经历和性格，让人读了如闻其声，如见其人。
鲁迅先生指出：“人物语言的描写，能使读者由说话看出人来。”这就是说从人物语言的描写中看出人物的鲜明特点。要达到这种境界需要做到以下两点：
一、人物语言的描写要符合人物的年龄、经历、身份、文化教养等特点。如《孔乙己》当中的孔乙己总是“之乎者也”，在文章当中描写一个农民说的道理，言语一般都是朴实的，如果你写得文绉绉的，显然就脱离了生活实际。
二、人物语言的描写，力求反映人物的特征。孔乙己说的话就处处表现出了他的酸腐气。
第三、通过人物的行动写人。
人物的行动要符合生活的本质，符合人物的性格发展的逻辑。可以选择具体的、富有特征的行动来显示人物的性格和心理活动。
人们的所作所为是其思想和性格的表现，茅盾说：“人物的性格必须通过行动来表现。”施耐庵要塑造武松的性格，就安排了一回“景阳岗武松打虎”，全是写武松怎样“打”，从行动上描写出武松谋略的机智和武艺的高强。
在描写人物行动的时候，应该注意人物行动的生动性和典型性。所谓生动性，指的是作者不仅要写出人物在做什么，而且要写出他怎样做。所谓典型性，则指的是作者要写出人物为什么这样做，而不那样做。
第四、通过人物的心理写人。
人物的内心世界是很丰富的，心理描写就是要充分揭示出人物内心的喜、怒、哀、乐、爱慕、思念、苦闷、痛苦、怨恨、惊恐、嫉妒等等。常见的心理描写方式有内心独白、思忆联想、梦境幻觉等。
不是每篇文章都适合出现心理活动的，我们在写心理活动的时候应该注意：
一、应写特定的人物在特定的环境中才会产生的心理活动，记得《卖炭翁》中有一句，“可怜身上衣正单，心忧炭贱愿天寒。”本来寒冷的冬天，卖炭翁纵然身上衣衫单薄，为了卖炭只能希望天更冷一些。
二、要努力写人物细微的感情波澜和复杂的心理变化过程。例如高尔基的《母亲》最后一章所写尼洛夫娜发现暗探时一刹那的动摇、害怕，以及内心冲突，直到坚定、沉着。
第五、通过人物的活动环境写人。
人总是生活在一定的社会环境中的，人物的个性的形成与他所处的环境有关，写好环境对表现人物的性格极为有用。
马克思认为：“人创造环境，同样环境也创造人。”茅盾也认为“人物不得不在一定的环境中活动，因此，作品中就必须写到环境。作品中的.环境描写，不论是社会环境或自然环境，都不是可有可无的装饰品，而是密切地联系着人物的思想行动。”因此写人的记叙文常常需要对环境进行描写。
高考记叙文6
三月的微信朋友圈，到处流传着几张关于黄金风铃木的图片。图中的花簇一片金黄，一朵朵花倒挂着像一个个风铃，很是招人喜爱。可显然几张图片根本满足不了我的欲望，我一边上网查着黄金风铃木的花期，一边筹划着周末出游亲自拥抱一场盛大的花事。
科技日益进步，为人们认知自然提供了极大的便利。轻点鼠标，便可查花木属性，打开电视，便可知雨雪阴晴。科技向人们传递着“足不出户知天下”的理念，却让奔走在快节奏生活中的劳碌众生以为凭此便可尽得自然。他们以为冰冷玻璃背后的几个符号、几张图片便是自然的全部，甚至有人妄想从中可收获古人常说的能润泽心灵的自然甘霖。殊不知，这种浅尝辄止、急功近利的浮躁心态只能让他们看到“黄花”就认为是油菜花，听到黄花梨木只会想到砍了赚一笔，见到木棉花只会捡回家煮一锅去湿汤。对自然只知皮毛，不曾深入体会，注定他们也无法获得自然的恩赐，所以他们的心灵依旧贫瘠与干涸。
自然不是困在玻璃柜中失去生气的标本，它是鲜活的，立体的，有声有色、甚至有语言有情感的。而这些，必须走出去，投进自然的怀抱才能体会得到。你可以在电脑上搜索出很多关于“长江”的解释词条，却无法感受到亲临长江时的心境壮阔，也无法体会江水翻滚着诠释“逝者如斯夫，不舍昼夜”的时间意义;你可以躲在石屎森林中打开电视看着一派田园风光，却无法感受到身临田园的心旷神怡，也无法收获山水煞费苦心安排的“漠漠水田飞白鹭，阴阴夏木转黄鹂”的一刻明净安谧;你可以通过手机玩着虚拟的种菜游戏，却无法感受到亲手收割庄稼的丰收喜悦，也无法真正领悟“锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土”的真谛。
感知自然，就如同做一道写景诗的鉴赏题。只知道答题术语还不够，还需要对诗歌意境正确且深入的领悟。答题术语的获得很简单，翻翻教科书就能掌握，这就像通过科技途径去认知自然。这种途径能帮助我们更好组织答案，却不能助我们拿到满分，它充其量只是“知”，并未做到“感”。必须要领悟到诗歌的意境才是抓住了诗歌的灵魂，这如同要真正理解自然就要对自然做一番深入的感悟。而要做到这一“感”字，必须走进自然，与自然共呼吸、同对话，让清澈的流水流进我们的血液，让芬芳的花香盈满我们的衣袖，让飘落的落叶漾开心湖的涟漪。只有把“感”与“知”结合起来，通过“感”促进“知”，通过“知”更好做到“感”，才能真正解读自然，才能使“自然”二字鲜活起来，才能使自然滋润我们心灵的同时发自内心地守护自然。这是感知自然的圆满答案，也是感知自然的最终归宿。
我感激科技让我认识了美丽的黄金风铃木。通过微信把图片分享出去，让更多人知晓这份美丽。然后明年三月让我们相约去看黄金风铃木吧，徜徉在金黄的海洋中，跟随一个个“风铃”一同起舞。那时你会发现，你不是玻璃屏外的看客，而是其中曼妙的一朵。
高考记叙文7
细则决定成败，细则是成功的重要。
有如此一个故事，说一位年青的大学毕业生，去一家银行应聘，却如何也没办法通过，他没丧失信心，在又一次应聘中，他发现门口有一枚大头针，就随手捡了起来，恰好这一举动被进门的行长看见了，当场便录用了他。当他有的疑惑不解的问行长时，行长说：“大头针虽然微不足道，但体现出一个人的细则观念，银行这个行业，只有着重细则的人才可以干的更好！”
毋庸置疑，细则有着无穷的魔力，能收获生活的事业。
老子曾说：“天下难事，必做于易；天下大事，必做于细”，这句话精辟地概括了“由小到大，由简至繁”的道理——想收获一番事业，需要从容易的事情做起，从细微之处入手。这正是大家中学生需要深刻领悟的。
在学习中，细则尤为重要。记得一次数学考试，我信心满满的答卷，做完了也没检查，就直接交上了。结果却让我大失所望，我重新仔细的看了一遍，发现所犯的错误几乎都与细则有关。这不禁让我想起过去写的一篇关于人物的作文，因为没着重细则的描写，造成作文内容空洞无物，人物形象塑造欠缺，不言而喻得分不高。
在日常，细则无处不在。西装上一粒纽扣的系与散，电话里挂断哪个先哪个后，就坐时哪个左哪个右，无不显示出一种风度与涵养。同样的事，在不一样人眼中，他们会发现不一样的细则。为何苹果会从树上掉下来呢？牛顿因此发现了万有引力定律；为何水烧开了之后，水壶的盖子会跳起来呢？瓦特因此创造了蒸汽机……这部分事情在大家眼中再也正常不过的了，而那些科学家却能从其中发现出大家所忽视的细则。那些伟大的创造与发现，那一个不是他们认真观察日常的细则而发现的呢？只有一个擅长发现细则的人，才能成为日常的强者。
“一滴水可映出太阳的光辉”，赏析细则，把握细则，大家也会发现小小事，魔力无穷。
高考记叙文8
今年被抽调去监高考了，三天的时间，真是一种炼狱。
自己没参加高考，着实也体会了一番高考的氛围。那种氛围可用两个词概括：紧张、沉重。
从考生、考生家长、监考人员到考场工作人员，三天都处在高度紧张中。一是时间上的严格规定，不能迟到。二是纪律上的严格规定，要安检，要启用视频监控系统。早上八点前到，中午两点前到。虽说是八点，其实大部分监考教师和工作人员实际上七点四十左右就到了，中午一般是一点四十左右到了，时间上非常紧张。
考生入场时要安检，中途上厕所返回时又得安检。安检、发试卷、三核对都还好，因为有事可做。最难熬的是考试开始后，每场起码有两个小时，什么都不能做，只能盯着考生。这段时间是最漫长的，坐立不安，度日如年。要密切关注考生的一举一动，又不能在考场来回巡视。这样的时间过得太慢了，一天一世纪。
虽然每年有不少人的弃考，但是我觉得高考目前还是一个比较公平的一种方式。记得白岩松说过：“中国高考有万千毛病，但却是目前最公平的一种方式。没有高考，你拼得过富二代吗？有多少贫寒子弟，就是通过高考而成为对国家有用的人才，也通过高考，才实现了他们的人生价值。”我觉得他这句话很经典。只要自己有梦想，并为自己的梦想付出行动，高考是一个很好的平台。
高考的氛围太沉重了。今年很多地方都实行一些新举措。我们江西今年实行安检，考生不准带任何文具进场，实行裸考。高考试卷的交接、分发全过程进行360度无死角监控并录像……如此考试，视考生如大敌。气氛之严肃，让考生心情紧张，唯恐一不小心被视为有作弊的嫌疑，各地各部门从严治考严防作弊。诚然，为保证高考的公正、公平，“严防、严惩作弊行为”那是必须的，采取适当措施那是必要的。但是这紧张的考试气氛会学生造成巨大的压力。我们的教育是要以诚为本，让我们的孩子用诚考试，营造宽松和谐的考试氛围，让学生如平日一样，心平气和地考试，才会发挥出真实的水平，考出更好的成绩？
其实，我觉得高考有必要改革成轻松愉快的考试。我国的基础教育一切为了高考，为了高考从学生到家长，从学校到政府部门，全社会都为之而紧张、而忙碌，教育阵地空气始终弥散着紧张的“高考硝烟”。为什么我们的教育不能轻松一点？为什么我们的高考不能轻松一点？或许，只需要在高考制度一点“小改变”，教育的明天就能柳暗花明，春满人间、美不胜收。
就当今高考制度表面上看是很公平的，但实际深入地思考一下是很不公平的。一个学生十多年的学习，凭一张试卷就评价了，那是公平吗？是不公平的。发达省份与落后省份的学生，优越城市与偏远山村的学生，凭一张试卷就评价了，那是公平吗？是不公平的。因此，高考制度必须要改革，千万不能把一次高考作为选拔学生、评价学生的唯一手段和标准，变一次性考试为过程考试，变一次性选拔考试为过程学业学评考试，变一张试卷评价为综合素质评价。
高考必须改革得轻松愉快。联合国上个世纪教育会议就留下了一句名言：“21世纪就要到来，全世界面临第一位的挑战，不是新技术革命，而是德育问题。”教育有这样一句名言：学习不好是次品，身体不好是废品;品德不好是劣品，心理不健康是易燃易爆的危险品。教育家尼尔也说过这样的话：“宁可培养一个快乐的清洁工，也不愿培养出一个心理不健康的学者，这样我们的孩子就多一份生存的保障。”试问，作为一个学生，最好的成绩应该是什么呢？最好的成绩单就是心理健康，快乐向上，终身学习!我们的教育只有走“教之道、德为先”才有希望。我们的教育只有走“成人必先立德，成才必先立志”才有希望。教育的对象只要有“快乐”高考、“淡化”分数的心态，“因性”发展，就一定能让我们的孩子有发展的空间，有时间寻觅、寻找撬动地球的支点。我们要优化高考、完善高考;不要取消高考、不要神化高考，要“快乐”高考、“淡化”分数。
高考是人生一个关键的选择机会，但不是唯一的机会；如今高考不再是战场，不再是你死我活，应该是“八仙过海，各显其能”的一个平台。人生的道路还很长，很宽广，选择的机会还很多，这次机遇没有青睐于你，我们不能悲观、沮丧，今后还有更多的机遇，只要好好把握，一定有好运垂青于你！
真希望等我家宝贝儿子高考的时候，国家已改革了我们教育、考试、评价的内容和方法，能减轻学生心理负担和压力，让学生顺其自然快乐学习。那时的高考是一场每位考生乐于迎接的挑战，是一场综合素质的考验，更是一场让人充满着向往的考试。
高考记叙文9
远远的街灯明了，仿佛闪着无数的明星。
——题记
天日渐黑了，星子在夜空的怀抱里安然入眠。微风轻轻拂过，引得翠绿的树叶簌簌地低吟。跑道上黑乎乎的一片，只有我一人在气喘吁吁地跑着。
哪个想大晚上出来跑步呢？可无法，初中首次的体育800米不合格的成绩深深地刺激了我。父母碰巧不在家，我只好一个人外出夜跑。耳畔的风呼呼作响，偶尔，远处还传来一阵阵犬吠。
跑了一圈又一圈，我渐渐有的缺氧，体力马上透支，便不禁放慢了脚步，却丝毫不敢停下。四周黑黢黢的一片，一点光都没。此时，树叶沙沙作响，听起来阴森森的。我下意识地加快了脚步，一直跑到了路的尽头。外面太黑了，还是早点回家吧。
走在回家的路上，昏暗的大街上闪烁着微弱的光，夜空上皎洁的月光映射着我。明明看到了那闪烁的灯光，我的心底却空空的，感到了几分茫然。在跑了那样多圈后，我也丝毫感受不到热感，只是喉咙有的干燥，“咳咳咳”，我不由轻咳了一声，又感到了一阵又一阵的不安。
拐到家楼下时，又是黑漆漆的一片。可抬头一看，我的家竟亮起了灯光，心里不禁“咯噔”了一下，难道是父母回来了？如何可能啊，不是还挺早的吗？我忐忑不安地上了楼，轻轻打开家门，家还真亮着一片昏黄的灯光。
“回来啦？跑得累吗？喝点水吧。”母亲转过身，把一杯热腾腾的水递给我，又拿毛巾为我擦了擦脸，“哎呀，如何流这么多汗？快点擦擦。”“妈，你不是要非常迟才回来吗？”我长舒了一口气。“啊？我担忧你一个人在家不安全，就先回来了，再说了，晚上你一个人不安全，比较容易让人贩子抓走的，这社会多么乱……”不知为什么，我的鼻子有的酸涩，只好端着水杯掩饰水润的眼眶。一咕咚喝下热水，我再抬起头来，客厅那有的昏暗的灯光打在我的身上，我忽然感觉温暖极了。
窗外，群星璀璨，月亮也探出了脑袋，散发出莹白的光，照亮了我回来时的那条路。
高考记叙文10
黄昏，太阳只是散着无尽的光芒。我竟有了儿时的一份勇气直视那穿过枝桠的满满一轮，阳光撒在桌子上积得不高的书本，金灿灿的浸透着一份高贵却不媚俗之感，多么干净的光，可以射透远处氤氲的雾气。这都让我想到孩提时期喜欢呆在屋子里看阳光照射进来，点点尘粒在光线下飞舞之景。此刻真的像是在心里掷了一块顽石，”咕咚”一声落入心中的那口井中，溅起圈圈涟漪，拨动心弦。 抬头远望，才觉今天的天空如此澄明爽朗，云朵虽是稀稀拉拉的，可仍然寄寓着一份关乎童年的美好情愫。窗外，风吹着五月渴睡人的脸，夹着一点微寒，让人又感到清醒，我是喜欢这种感觉的。鸟儿在不远处那棵不知名的树上嬉闹着。一派鲜有的祥和景致，昨晚我还在疾风呼号的夜中苦苦煎熬着二模失败的苦痛呢。也不曾想自己现在的忙里偷闲却是如此的煞有情趣。在安静的教室里神游真是罪过。
我却陷入了冥想的苦海，竟在脑海中找不到任何合适的语言来捕捉这种独特的感受，真是应了 那句”一切深刻的体会都拙于言辞“，看着闲置在旁的习题和挂在壁上的高考倒计时，又不得不揪着心趔趄前行。
其实，每天都应看到这样的景色啊，在有这样的景致之时，停下脚步静静驻足观赏；没有这样的景致时，就算风雨大作，雷鸣电闪，也要在内心持着一份宁静与美好，静观宇宙与人世的和谐。心常怀祝福之念，以一颗虔诚的心仔细体略这个还是存在美好的世界，这才是人生该有的生活姿态。只是看同坐在窗前的人懂不懂怎样去欣赏罢了.
高考记叙文11
母亲很少去看她的儿子，近些日子尤为如此。有时在校门口匆匆见一面，母亲塞给儿子零食和钱，表情局促不安。然后母亲说，该回去了。儿子说再聊一会儿吧，眼神却飘忽不定。母亲笑笑，转身，横穿了马路，走出不远，又躲在一棵树后面偷偷回头。她想再看一眼儿子，哪怕是背影。儿子却不见了。儿子像在逃离，逃离母亲的关切。
母亲很满足—一个读大学的儿子，高大英俊，学生会干部，有奖学金—还有什么不满足的呢？并且她知道，儿子正在偷偷恋爱。她曾远远地看过那姑娘一眼，瘦瘦高高，和儿子很是般配。她不知道儿子和姑娘在一起会聊些什么，但她想应该不会谈到自己。一个收废品的母亲，有什么好谈的呢？母亲想，既然她不能给儿子带来骄傲和荣耀，那么，就算儿子说她已经过世，她都不会计较。
可是今天她很想见儿子一面。其实每天她都想见儿子一面，今天，她有了充足的借口。老家人送她一小袋红薯，个儿大皮儿薄，脆生喜人。煮熟了，香甜的红瓤化成蜜，直接淌进咽喉里。母亲挑了几个大的，煮熟，装进保温桶，又在外面包了棉衣，然后骑上她的三轮车。儿子从小就爱吃红薯，一路上母亲偷偷地笑。
是冬天，街上的积雪未及清理，就被车轮和行人压实，变成光滑的冰面。家离学校约5公里。雪还在下，母亲头顶白花花一片，分不清是白发还是雪花。她把三轮车在街角停下，想到马上就能见到儿子，母亲再一次偷偷地笑了。
所以，她没有注意到开过来的一辆轿车。车子在冰面上滑行好几米才停下来。司机摁响了喇叭，母亲一惊，忙往旁边躲闪，却打一个趔趄，然后滑倒。她慌慌张张爬起，未及站稳，又一次摔倒。她的手里，仍然稳稳地抱着那个保温桶。她的脸被一块露出冰面的玻璃碴儿划开一条口子，现在，已经流出了血。
司机吓坏了。说，我得陪你去医院看看。
母亲笑笑说，没事。
司机说可是你的脸在流血……在流血吗？母亲变了表情。果然，汽车的反光镜里，她看到自己流血的脸。她想这样的脸，怎么去见我的儿子呢？
司机看着母亲，好像除了脸上的伤口，她真的没事。司机便掏出两百块钱和一张名片。这上面有我的电话，他说，随时可打电话给我。
母亲一只手抱着保温桶，一只手推搡著名片和钱。突然她停下来，认真地对司机说，你真的想帮我吗？如果你真的想帮我，那么，能不能请你，把这个保温桶转交给我的儿子……他在这个大学读书，他功课很好……
母亲指了指那座气派的教学楼，脸上露着骄傲的表情。
片刻之后司机在校门口见到母亲的儿子。说，你妈让我带给你的。
男孩说，哦。眼睛紧张地盯着校园里一条卵石小路。小路上站着一位高高瘦瘦的长发女孩。
司机提醒他说，是煮红薯。你妈让你先吃一个……她说，还热着。
男孩突然想起一个问题，他问司机，她人呢？
她摔倒了。她横穿公路，我的车开过来，她一紧张，滑倒了……脸被划破一条口子，流了血。她可能，怕你伤心……她任凭身体跌上冰面，却用双手保护着这个保温桶……她嘱咐你现在就吃一个……她说，现在还热着……
男孩愣愣地看着保温桶，慢慢将它打开。那里面，挤着四五个尚存温热的煮红薯。
司机拍拍男孩的肩膀，说，她还没走。顺着司机的手指，男孩看到了风雪中的母亲。她躲在一棵树的后面，偷偷往这边看。似乎儿子看到了母亲的笑容，似乎母亲发现了儿子的目光。母亲慌慌张张地上了三轮车，转一个弯，就不见了。母亲的头发，银白如雪。
男孩没有追上去。他知道母亲不会让他追上去，不想让他追上去。可是他已经决定，今晚，就回家看看母亲。他还会告诉女友，母亲并不是退休干部，她一直靠收废品供他读大学。她是一位伟大的母亲，她是他的骄傲。
高考记叙文12
普通的虫，只有独自承受过破茧的苦，才能幻化成美丽的蝶；沉香树，只有自己承受过愈合伤口的痛，才能产出弥足珍贵的沉香；一个人，也只有在自己站起来之后，这个世界才能属于他。
冰心说：“成功的花，人么只惊艳于她的美丽，却不知当初她的芽浸满了血和泪。”而如今成功的人，人们只惊羡于他们的成就，却不知当初他跌倒后站起来的痛苦。不经历命运的锤炼，不能锻造出强者；不独自克服命运的锤炼，也终不会成为强者。
那个在地坛中静静思考的人叫史铁生。一个在最狂妄的年纪失去了双腿的病人，一位在病房中无数次想到了死的年轻人，当他在地坛中独自思考生的意义、参悟了死的真谛时，他的灵魂再次站了起来，于是，他拥有了全世界。“死是一个必然会到来的节日。”“生不是为了写作，而写作是为了生。”这位身陷轮椅之中而灵魂屹立不倒的作家，不可不谓之强者。
那位在山坡山带领村民们默默植树的苍颜老人是褚时健。在经历过那个**的年代，饱尝了囹圄之苦与老年丧女之痛后，已经再无什么能惊起这位看似普通老者内心的波澜。在看清了名利，看透了生活，看淡了生死之后，这位老人有一次站在了众人面前，倔强地要在荒山上种出橙子。后来，这种带着褚时健坚强与倔强的橙子，拥有黄金比例的酸甜与口感，被冠以他的姓氏——褚橙。只有褚时健亲手种下的橙树所结出的果实才被称为褚橙，因为那里包含了一种在打击之后又爬起来、甚至站得更高的精神。
那个身躯瘦小面容慈祥的黑人老者是曼德拉。正如种族歧视的火不能将他烧成灰烬，反而让他浴火重生，铸就了和平统一的南非的伟业一样；几十年在监狱中的惨痛经历也不能磨损他坚定的意志，反而更加坚定了他消除种族歧视的决心。在被仇恨所击倒后，这位南非首任总统选择带着宽容重立，也只有这样的人才能带领南非前进。
曼德拉说“一个人的成功不在于永不坠落，而在于坠落后再升起的高度。”人的一生也难免被困难所击倒，而人，只有在自己站起来后，这个世界才能属于他。
高考记叙文13
雨，来得突然，来得猛烈，方才还是晴朗的天，霎时暗了下来，雨水肆无忌惮地泼洒。我强撑着伞，在小路上疾走，噼啪的雨声和着我屈辱的泪水。想起学生会主席竞选失利，“淘汰，淘汰”，这两个字像恶魔一样纠缠着我，狞笑，怪舞，“淘汰，淘汰”……雨还在下，哗哗，哗哗，水珠四溅……
忽然，我的脚步慢下来，一组青铜雕像吸引住了我。这是一组雕塑小品：两位下棋老人，四目注视着膝下的棋局。雨线在铜像上迸溅嬉戏，那般顽皮恣肆。我不由停下脚步，细看那两位老人。右边这一位，长袍马褂，一种学究模样，彬彬有礼地徐伸右手，请对方出着；对面那一位，短衣宽裤，劳动者打扮，眉飞目炯，动作张扬，正高举一枚棋子，敲向棋局。整个雕塑，呈现出苍凉的青铜本色，只是膝头臂肘，被人们长期摩挲，变得光亮。雨水是如此放纵，向老人的头顶项背泼洒，形成一股股湍流飞瀑，在棋局上漫流。而这两位老人，仿佛跨越了一个世界，享受着只有自己才能感受到的那份愉悦，任凭风雨喧嚣，毫不在乎。“好一份豁达！”我感慨，油然生出一丝歆羡，从心底涌出深长的喟叹……
路上跑过几个年轻人，有的裹着雨衣有的压低雨伞，东一句西一句地咒骂着天气。两位青铜老人则稳坐棋局，分明超脱了世界的嘈杂，那恣肆的风，那喧嚣的雨，那些零落的残叶和败花，那些仓皇失措的人……一切的一切都与他们无关。他们享受着另一片属于自己的天地，他们品味着另一种非同寻常的充实，喧闹的风雨和风雨带来的喧闹在他们那里，不复存在！
我怔怔地站在小路上，暴雨如注，小小的雨伞显得孱弱无力。雨水已经打湿衣裤，我爽性把雨伞抛开，痛快淋漓地，任凭豪雨捶击我的身躯，涤洗我的胸怀。
“必须跨过这道坎！”——我咬紧嘴唇，扬起衣袖擦擦眼睛，这一刻，我的脸上只有雨水，没有泪水。
远离家乡，跟随父母，来沪求学，经历了多少风雨，我不是都挺过来了么？眼前这一点失败打不倒我，我突破重围的心此刻分外轻松。不觉间，雨小了，西天层云间，太阳急不可待地露出艳红的脸庞。
雨后空气格外清新，夕阳将金色铺在天地间，棋局中的两位老人也披上了绝美的暖色。在我眼里，在我心中，这夕阳余晖中的一幕定格了，它诠释着跨过坎坷之后那金光熠熠的画面。
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本文亮点：真情实感，表达多样。
本文围绕跨越竞选失利的心理阴影这道“坎”展开，写青铜雕像中两位下棋老人跨越坎坷，享受着只有自己才能感受到的那份愉悦给了作者必须跨越“坎”的启示，淋漓尽致地展现了作者的心路历程，内容厚实，情感真挚，感悟深刻。表达方式也多种多样，除了叙事之外，还有很多描写、议论。如结尾生动形象的环境描写，烘托了“我”必须跨越坎坷的勇气与信念；议论画龙点睛，升华了文章主题。
高考记叙文14
春光穿过玻璃窗，折射到我的桌子上，一缕阳光照在笔的夹子处，反射出让人心烦的光芒。
“唉，这作业，还要写到什么时间啊？”我烦躁的哀怨道。
我两手夹起笔，晃了几圈后，狠狠地丢下了笔。走出房间，缓缓向阳台移步。一抹鲜亮的绿色映入我的眼帘，春风佛过我的脸颊，吹动着我的头发。
定睛细看，哦，这是一株绿萝！
只见一条条丝丝缕缕的垂挂着，仿佛南山仙翁飘逸的长须，在春风中轻轻摇曳。走近细细端详起来，她的根茎上缀满了嫩绿的新芽，有些才刚探出脑袋，甚是惹人喜欢；有些小芽苞已渐渐舒展成叶片，在翠绿的根茎上你推我挤，像是要伸开胳膊去拥抱灿烂的生活。
再凑近一瞧，老根上道道褐色的浅痕，原来她受过伤，呀—她不正是去年母亲筹备扔掉的那盆绿萝吗？
犹记得去年冬季，她的叶子都耷拉着，有些蜷缩，有些枯黄，瘦弱的根茎毫无生机。眼瞅着她会就此一蹶不振，不曾想伴随春季的到来，竟又焕发出这样勃勃生机……
我没办法想象她是靠着什么样的毅力，不抛弃不放弃自己，亦没办法想象她是怎么样艰难地从次次甘霖中去汲取水分和养料。她不考虑所有，付出所有，换来了目前的一身翠绿。而我呢，不想忍耐夏的炎热，秋的萧瑟，冬的凛冽，又怎会有春的风光？不勤学，勤思，勤问，苦钻，又怎会获得好的成绩，考上好的学校，从而去拥抱灿烂生活呢？
想到这里，低下眸子，第三把目光投向那盆绿萝，不禁轻轻吟上一句“不经一番寒彻骨，哪得梅花扑鼻香。”
我重新走回房间，阳光仍照射着书桌，作业本闪闪发亮。空气中弥漫着春的气息，抬起脸，阳光照在我的脸上，闭上眼，所有都是春的模样。小小绿萝让我感悟到：必须要维持奋斗的豪迈，让我们的学业的道路、生活的道路闪烁着坚韧之美、拼搏之美，没什么理由可以使我懈怠，也没什么理由可以使我退却。
行走在春风里，我心澎湃，让失意褪色，让斗志重现。
高考记叙文15
人活世上，总有自己的追求。总有自己的理想，想做大事业，想登上顶峰。然而，人性的深处，总有那么一丝慵懒。明知守株待不来兔，却总想天上掉馅饼。
于是，长辈怜悯后辈奋斗不易者，总是千方百计给自己的后辈开辟前路，寻求捷径，殊不知，捷径尽头，总有一头猛虎，要你付出更大的代价。
捷径易走，人生难求，滚滚红尘之间。许多人摆脱了对上辈的依赖，不懈地摸爬打滚，努力接近人生的巅峰。他们花费了更多的时间和汗水，却阅尽了世间沧桑，收获了宝贵的经验。他们走过了崎岖艰险的人生之路，却览遍了大好河山，鸟语花香。一路的美好，皆尽收眼底。
古语云，授人以鱼，不如授人以渔。意在告诫为师者，引导学生前行时，要点到即止，指示一条明路，却要学生独自前行和摸索，最后得到属于自己的成果。为师者如此，为人父母者又何尝不是此道?母鹰总是毫不留情地将小鹰抛出巢外，老虎在年幼时便要惨遭父母遗弃，引到适宜处即放手。这是大爱，是情至深处似无情的大智慧。
倘若为人父母者毫无原则的溺爱，为子女亲手铺平开道。规划人生，子女一直活在父母的庇佑之下。又怎能一展翅膀，搏击社会的风风雨雨，领略世道的苦辣酸甜?倘若为师者一路带领学生前行，帮助学生解决他们所遇到的每一个困难，学生又怎能独立思考，独立去解决困难，并从中找到自己的创新之路?更甚者，就如那古代故事所说的饭来张口的儿子，母亲出远门前做一张饼挂在儿子的脖子上，儿子不会做饭，甚至不会用手举起饼来吃，只会啃到嘴边的食物，最后落得了个凄惨死去的下场。
活在父母庇佑下的子女，倘若有一天，父母离去，无非就是坐吃山空，败光家业，落了个穷困潦倒干干净净。这并非耸人听闻，而确确实实是许多富二代的最终结局。一直走在老师的老路上的学生，最终不过是师长的一个复制品。没有自己的成就，那就只能活在老师的阴影下碌碌无为了。
捷径易走，而代价如此惨重，不如自己动手，求一场丰衣足食的人生。与其将后辈护在身后，亲历亲为地为他们开辟前路，不如放手，远观他们披荆斩棘，并在山穷水尽时给予明示。与其守着父母的丰厚家产，不如自己另立门户，享受一场属于自己的成功。比尔盖茨早早就散了自己的万贯家财，而儿女们无一垂涎这唾手可得的财富，都已经寻到了自己的路途，找到了自己的事业，前辈不留财富，因为授之以渔。他们不接受前辈的馈赠，因为这是属于他们的人生
授之以渔，为后辈指示一条明路。放手任其经受风雨的洗礼，摆脱依赖，独自行走，让一路的经验累积成看破红尘的睿智。一路艰辛铸就了风雨不惊的平稳。最后，站在路的尽头，即使没有轰轰烈烈。也能笑对命运，不留遗憾。
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