名师总结高考英语作文常用

第一篇：名师总结高考英语作文常用

名师总结高考英语作文模板-热门话题常用词汇

话题一：中学生的爱好与兴趣

Spare time(业余时间), favorite(最喜欢的), Interest(兴趣), hobby(爱好), appetite(嗜好),taste(口味), read novels(也小说), play football/basketball(打足球/篮球), surf the internet(上网), chat online(在线聊天), play games(玩游戏), collect stamps(集邮), make e-friends(交网友), climb mountains(爬山), watch TV(看电视), enjoy popular music(喜欢流行音乐),be interested in(对…感兴趣), develop an interest in(在…方面发展兴趣), be fond of(喜欢…),be keen on(喜欢…), have love for(喜爱…), have a taste in(对…有兴趣)等。

话题二：劳动与劳动观念

Work(工作), be at work(在工作), work hard(努力工作), produce(生产), worker(工人), labor force(劳动力), labor(劳动), voluntary labor(义务劳动)，serve the people(为人民服务)，heart and soul(全心全意)，physical labor(体力劳动), mental labor(脑力劳动), labor viewpoint(劳动观念), labor Day(劳动节), workday(工作日), means of labor(劳动方式), honorable(光荣的), be devoted to(奉献于..), value(价值), earn money(赚钱), personal interests(个人利益)等。

话题三：创建和谐社会

harmonious(和谐的), friendly(友好的), civilized(文明的), honest(真诚的), credible(诚信的), be public-spirited(有公德心的), balanced(平衡的), be in order(有序的), peaceful(和平的), live in harmony(生活和谐), sustainable development(可持续发展)等，help each ether(互助), care for each other(互相关心), have deep love for(热爱), be concerned with(关心), build(创建), cherish(珍惜), take an active part in(积极参与), pay attention to social moral(讲究社会公德), protect the environment(保护环境), save energy(节省能源)等。No pains, no gains.不劳无获。…can be achieved by hard wok.…可以通过劳动获得。It is difficult to find work in the present situation.在当前形势下，很难找到工作。It is honorable to …

…是光荣的。If everyone … for others and the society, our world will be …如果每个人为他人和社会做…，我们这个世界将会…。Every one should … and devotes himself to building our motherland into a strong country.每个人应该 …，为把我们祖国建设成为一个强壮的国家而奉献自己的力量。

话题四：招聘与求职

employ(雇佣), look for(寻找), take in(吸纳), full-time(全职的), part-time(兼职的), well-paid(薪水高的), be paid by the hour(按小时发工资), requirement(要求), résumé(个人履历),schooling(受教育情况), subjects(课程), working experience(工作经历), qualification(合格证明), trans cript(成绩单), health(健康状况), present address(现在通讯地址)等，apply for(申请…), graduate from(毕业于), major in(以…为专业), degree(学位), scholarship(奖学金), good grades(良好的成绩), hobby(爱好), favorite(最喜欢的), be skilled in(在…方面熟练), be good at(擅长…), experienced(有经验的), confident(自信的), English and computer ability(英语和计算机能力), healthy(健康的)等。

话题五：中学生的健康问题

Physical and mental condition(身体与精神状态), strong(强壮的), un/healthy(不健康/健康的), overweight/fat(肥胖的), thin(瘦的), near/short-sighted(近视的), mentally unhealthy(精神不健全的), normal(正常的), abnormal(不正常的), energetic(精力旺盛的), unhealthy eating habit(不健康的饮食习惯), eat much junk food(吃太多的垃圾食品)等，Stay/keep healthy/fit(保持健康), build up one’s body/ improve one’s’ health(强身健体), enough sleep(充足的睡眠), take regular exercise(进行有规律的运动), roper diet(合理的饮食), good living habits(良好的生活习惯), lose weight(减肥), remove heavy burdens(减轻负担), be good for/do good to(对…有益处), nutrition(营养), go on diet(节食), form.a … eating habit(养成一个…的饮食习惯)Breathe in as much fresh air等。

话题六：环境保护

Pollute（污染），Waste is scattering here and there.（到处撒满了废弃物），protect the environment(保护环境)，send out smoke and poisonous gases into the air（散发出烟和有毒气体），cut down trees(砍伐树木)，pour waste water into the rivers（把废水注入河流），It is a shame to throw rubbish around.（乱扔垃圾是可耻的），form.good habits to protect the surroundings（养成良好的习惯来保护环境），take active measures to protect rare animals(采取积极措施保护稀有动物)，take good care of our forests（关心我们的森林），plant more trees to improve the environment（多植来改善环境），The terrible pollution have done great harm to us as well as to the surroundings.(可怕的污染已经给我们自己还有我们的环境带来了很大的危害。)

话题七：校园文明与安全问题

School rules and regulations(学校规章制度),obey(遵守), observe(遵守), keep/observe discipline(遵守纪律), behave well(表现良好),be neatly dressed(穿戴整洁), respect one’s teachers and parents(尊敬师长), be on time(准时), keep the environment clean(保持环境干净), civilized(文明的)break the rules(违反规章制度), discipline(纪律), spit(吐痰), throw rubbish everywhere(乱扔垃圾), cheat in the exam(考试作弊), get in line(插队), fight with sb.(与…打架), punish sb.for(因…处罚某人)等。The students are told not to break any of the rules of the school.学校要求学生不要违反任何规章制度。The students are expected to …

学校期望学生…。It must be made clear that the students should …

必须明确的一点是，学生应该…。

… is of no good to a friendly and harmonious society.…对创建友好和谐的社会是毫无益处的。It is honorable to obey the principles and rules of our school.遵守学校的规章制度是光荣的。It is worthy of praise to...…是值得表扬的。It is shameful to …

…是可耻的。What we should do is that …

我们应该做的事情是…

话题八：友谊

get to know sb.(认识某人), know sb.really well(熟知某人), make friends with sb.(和某人交朋友), a strong personality(一个很强的个性), personal matters(隐私), friendship(友谊), friendly(友好的), a close friend(一个亲密的朋友), trust each other(相互信任), precious(珍贵的), worthy(有价值的), understanding(通情达理的), share …with sb.(与…分享…), be loyal to(对…忠诚), keep in touch with sb.(与…保持联系), keep company with sb.(和…结交), stay best friends with sb.(和…保持很好的友谊)等。在描述此话题时常用的句型有：

1.Friends give us …

朋友给予我们…。

2.A good friend is someone you can …

一位好朋友就是一个我们能够…的人。

3.The first time I met …, he was …

当我第一次遇到…的时候，他…。

4.Friendship plays an important part in …

友谊在…中扮演一个重要角色。

5.You can … to be a good friend.你可以…来成为别人的好朋友。

6.We can turn to...when we feel down.当我们心情糟糕时，可以求助于…。

7.… makes a good friend.…成就好朋友。

8.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真知。

9....is one of the things people value most in a friend.… 是人们在朋友身上最重视的东西。

10.… have a friend of … years with sb.… 与… 有着…年的友情

第二篇：2011年高考英语满分作文及名师评析文档

作文题目

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：

1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese

School.It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob,How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you’ll like it.If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。Dear Bob,I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here.I’ve already found you a house near our school.I’d like to tell you something about it.You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School.The house is near the school.It is about 25 square metres.In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window.You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it.There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom.The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen.So you may cook by yourself.The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

Yours,Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。

Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.I’ve found a suitable house for you.The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School.If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms, a

living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair.The desk is next to the

window.It will be good for study.The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua

第三篇：2007年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

2007年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

2007高考英语满分作文

【全国卷II】

【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放;5.欢迎预定。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

...好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【安徽卷】

【试题回放】

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。

l 提出你喜欢的栏目。

l 简要说明理由。

注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4.参考栏目：栏目column

Dear Mr.Green，I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it's necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can't miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things....Well, I can't list more.I really can't wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully，Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。

比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect!况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

【江苏卷】

【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program;

教育部the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone，...The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

积累卡片

好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn't be able to get good study records.如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

【重庆卷】

【试题回放】

...据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1.信的格式已为你写好

2.信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3.词数100左右。

4.请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy，I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I'm sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I'm sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours，Li Hua

[名师点评]

...本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

积累卡片

好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1.I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

...

第四篇：2007年高考英语满分作文及名师评析文档

【全国卷II】

【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放;5.欢迎预定。注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day.It also provides hot water bath service.You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the

restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe.The swimming pool is open for free the whole day.All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.provide v.提供2.convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

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假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。l 提出你喜欢的栏目。l 简要说明理由。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.新的开头和结尾已为你写好。3.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.参考栏目：栏目—column

Dear Mr.Green,I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.That sounds great!And I definitely agree with you on that.Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea.Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world.Since

people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other.This will offer a wonderful chance.Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English.Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool!The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.Well, I can’t list more.I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,Li Hua

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这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。

比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect!况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

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2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

每天锻炼一小时

健康工作五十年

幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China.Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.Our whole life will be very enjoyable.In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited.Health is a basic condition for our study.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

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本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发

表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

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好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3.advocate v.提倡

好句1.The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

2.If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

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据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1.信的格式已为你写好

2.信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3.词数100左右。

4.请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy,I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future.So, stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer

association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can be well soon.Yours,Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如Im sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

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好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1.I am sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2.So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

第五篇：2006年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

2006年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

2006高考英语满分作文

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假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务

注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请apply(v.), application(n.)，志愿者volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.My name is Li Hua.I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school.And I want to be a volunteer for the games.I like English and sports very much.I like making friends and I am ready to help others.I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time.Hope the games will be a great success.Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully，Li Hua

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这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

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假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

注意：

1、字数100左右

2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯

3、开头语已为你写好

Dear Bob，Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden.The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students.it's open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m.to 7:00p.m.There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject.Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here.You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can.If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I'll show you around.Yours sincerely，Li hua

[名师点评]

本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢?

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假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

一本英语词典忘记带回

词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵

词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

邮资自己付

注意：

1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

2、参考词汇：邮资-postage

Dear Mr.Brown，I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks.As the exchange student, you make me feel warm.Welcome to my country ,I'll show you around in turn.However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home.I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S.I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom.Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I'll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.I'm eager to receive your reply.Yours，Li hua

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本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

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加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言，文化culture。

假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

你怎样得知David的愿望

你愿意成为他的朋友

你打算如何帮助他

你盼望他的回复

注意：

1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好

2、字数：100词左右

3、在答题卡上作答

Dear David，I'm a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line.You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture.Maybe I'm your good choice.China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years.Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested.I'll be looking forward to your reply.I'll show you around our great China if you come to China.Yours sincerely ，Li hua

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本文的语言非常流畅，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。