第一篇:考研英语阅卷 高分策略
2005-2008年考研英语阅卷心得体会
阅卷心得体会(2005-2008)
(写作:2小题,A节10分,B节20分,共30分。)(一)评分原则和方法
1.虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同(如下文所述),但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的,所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点,评分时会有不同的侧重点。
A节:应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词,但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。
B节:评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内的1至3分间调节分数。
3.A节的字数要求是100词左右。B节的字数要求是160~200词。文章长度不符合要求的,酌情扣分。
4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5.如书写较差,影响交际,分数将降低一个档次。(二)一般评分标准
第五档A节(9-10分)B节(17-20分)很好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有的内容要点;使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;格式与语域恰当贴切。对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。
第四档A节(7-8分)B节(13-16分)较好地完成了试题规定的任务。包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉一两个次重点;使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;语言基本准确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密;格式与语域较恰当。对目标读者产生了预期的效果。第三档A节(5-6分)B节(9-12分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。包含多数内容要点;应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;格式和语域基本合理。对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。
第二档A节(3-4分)B节(5-8分)未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容;语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解;未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性;格式和语域不恰当。未能清楚地传达信息给读者。第一档A节(1-2分)B节(1-4分)未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容;语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;语言错误多,有碍读者对内容的理解,语言运用能力差;未使用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段;无格式与语域概念。未能传达信息给读者。零档(0分)所传达的信息或所用语言太少,无法评价;内容与要求无关或无法辨认。从上述我们可以看出以下规律:
对于A节和B节,评分标准只是在具体评分时侧重点会稍有不同,其涵盖了五个方面,依次为:a.信息点的覆盖;b.语法结构和词汇的多样性;c.语言的准确性;d.文章的组织连贯性;e.格式与语域的恰当。
仔细比较我们可以发现,A节强调a、c、d、e四点,而B节强调a、b、c、d四点。下面我们逐一来谈一下: a讲信息点的覆盖,即内容的完整性,这一点极其关键。对于B节的大作文来说,长期以来都将要点在提纲中列出来,大多数时候采用了标出1,2,3的方式,2005年虽然未标出1,2,3,采用了描述的方式,但仍然包含三个要点。A节的小作文也会给出具体要包含的要点。特定的信函所包含的要点是相对固定的,我们在书中已经告诉大家,万一以后这部分不给出具体提纲,我们也应该掌握正确的写法。
涵盖要点是阅卷老师首先注意的问题,如果不能做到,扣分是非常严厉的,所以大家一定要先仔细审题。b,c谈的都是语言,b说的是“得”,是语法结构和词汇的多样性,是闪光点;c说的是“失”,是语言的准确性,是避免犯错误。这里语言的得与失直接决定了我们的最终得分。由于A节的小作文篇幅短,所以不强调第二点。语言如果准确程度高,即使简单,也不会过多失分。在保证不多失分的前提下,我们应多多创造闪光点,以求获得高分。
d谈的是文章的结构。这一点对于小作文来说要求较低;而对于大作文来说,成功的文章组织不仅包含清晰的结构层次,还包含适当的衔接手法。
e说的是格式和语域,这是A节关注的内容。语域是指在书面和口语表达中根据不同的交际对象,所采用的话语方法,即正式、一般、非正式的话语。由于应用文篇幅短,强调实现一定的功能,在日常工作和生活中使用频率高,所以具有很强的规律性,特定的应用文包括特定的要点。由于应用文的性质和写作对象的不同,我们应注意使用正确的格式和不同的语域。例如,写信时不要把日期写在信的结尾处;同样是邀请信,邀请参加公司会议和家庭聚会所采用的语言的正式程度是不同的。评分标准既是考研英语大纲的一部分,又出现在考研英语试题参考答案和评分参考之中。该评分标准下发至各阅卷点之后,由各阅卷点进行进一步解释。让我们来看看考研英语写作的原则、方法和评分标准: 写作:2小题,A节10分,B节20分,共30分。(一)评分原则和方法
1.虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同(如下文所述),但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的,所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节不同的考查要点,评分时会有不同的侧重点。
A节:应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词,但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。
B节:B节作文的评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内的1~3分内调节分。
3.A节作文的字数要求是100词左右。B节作文的字数要求是160~200词。文章长度不符合要求的,酌情扣分。4.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
5.如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。(二)一般评分标准
第五档A节(9-10分)B节(17-20分)很好地完成了试题规定的任务。·包含所有的内容要点;
·使用丰富的语法结构和词汇; ·语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;
·有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰; ·格式与语域恰当贴切。
对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。第四档A节(7-8分)B节(13-16分)较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
·包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉1、2个次重点; ·使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;
·语言基本准确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误; ·采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密; ·格式与语域较恰当。
对目标读者产生了预期的效果。第三档A节(5-6分)B节(9-12分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。
·虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点; ·应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求; ·有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;
·采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰; ·格式和语域基本合理。
对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。第二档A节(3-4分)B节(5-8分)未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。
·漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点,写了一些无关内容; ·语法结构单调、词汇项目有限;
·有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解; ·未采用恰当的衔接手法,内容缺少连贯性; ·格式和语域不恰当。
未能清楚地传达信息给读者。第一档A节(1-2分)B节(1-4分)未完成试题规定的任务。
·明显遗漏主要内容,且有许多不相关的内容; ·语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复;
·语言错误多,有碍读者对内容的理解,语言运用能力差; ·未使用任何衔接手法,内容不连贯,缺少组织、分段; ·无格式与语域概念。未能传达信息给读者。零档(0分)所传达的信息或所用语言太少,无法评价;内容与要求无关或无法辨认。从上面的评分原则、方法和评分标准中,我们可以看出以下规律:
1.对于A节和B节的两篇作文来说,评分标准基本相同,只是在具体评分时侧重点会稍有不同。评分标准共涵盖了五个方面,依次为: a.信息点的覆盖
b.语法结构和词汇的多样性 c.语言的准确性 d.文章的组织连贯性 e.格式与语域的恰当
仔细比对,我们可以发现,A节强调的是a、c、d、e四点,而B节强调的是a、b、c、d四点。下面我们逐一来谈一下:
第一点是信息点的覆盖,即内容的完整性,这一点是极其关键的。对于B节的大作文来说,长期以来都将要点在提纲中列出来,大多数时候采用了标出1,2,3的方式,非常清晰。A节的小作文在至今均采用描述的方式,虽未标出1,2,3,但也多能立即确定类型与相应结构。
涵盖要点是阅卷老师首先注意的问题,如果不能做到,扣分是非常严厉的,所以大家一定要养成好的习惯,好好审题,仔细看清楚提纲再开始写作。
第二点和第三点谈的都是语言,第二点说的是得,是语法结构和词汇的多样性,是闪光点;第三点说的是失,是语言的准确性,是避免犯错误。这里语言的得与失直接决定了我们的最终得分。由于A节的小作文篇幅短,所以不强调第二点。语言如果准确程度高,即使语言简单,也不会过多失分。在保证不多失分的前提下,我们多多创造闪光点,以求获得高分。
第四点谈的是文章的结构。这一点对于小作文来说要求是较低的,而对于大作文来说,成功的文章组织不仅包含清晰的结构层次,还包含适当的衔接手法。
第五点说的是格式和语域,这是A节关注的内容。语域是指在书面和口语表达中根据不同的交际对象,所采用的话语方法,即正式、一般、非正式的话语。由于应用文篇幅短,强调实现一定的功能,在日常工作和生活中使用频率高,所以具有很强的规律性。这不仅体现在特定的应用文包括特定的要点,也体现在格式和语域上。由于应用文的性质和写作对象的不同,我们应注意使用正确的格式和不同的语域。例如,写信时不要把日期写在信的结尾处;同样是邀请信,邀请参加公司会议和家庭聚会所采用的语言的正式程度是不同的。上面我们谈论的评分标准是考研英语大纲的一部分,又出现在考研英语试题参考答案和评分参考之中。该评分标准下发至各阅卷点之后,由该阅卷点进行进一步解释。小作文评分指令
小作文的批改比较轻松。由于篇幅短,信函的性质与要点均非常清晰,所以写作相对比较容易。由于总分不高,所以如果出现格式错误,所扣的总分应不超过一分。格式包括右上角的日期,这个日期可以不写,但不能写在后面。抬头和最后的签名应该包含,Yours与下一行的署名如果紧靠左侧来写不扣分。一定要包含各个要点,如有遗漏,就一定会被扣分。
在试卷上的指令中,要求该文章不少于100词,而评分标准上则是100词左右。最终确定该部分低于90词要扣分。
该文章共分五个档次,实际操作中阅卷老师多将分数打在三档(5-6分)和四档(7-8分)。小作文采用总体评分的原则,今年6分最多,其次是7分与5分。大作文评分指令
大作文部分最重要的原则就是总体评分。大部分同学的分数在10-15分,属于三档(9-12)和四档(13-16)。05年上海市平均分较低,约在10分多一点。06年稍有提高。07年压分严重。08年要求教师放松标准,所以平均分又稍有提高。由于指令没有要求,所以不写英语标题也可以,不扣分。但是写错了要扣分,这就很可惜了。如果跑题,也就是对主题的把握完全错误,扣分是非常严厉的。越是抽象的考题越容易跑题,如2007年真题。大作文字数要求是160至200词,低于160词要扣分,具体做法是每少1-10词扣一分,以此类推。字数超出200词不扣分。
在实际的批改过程中,是按照总体的印象评分,换句话说,凭的是感觉。评分标准中规定了内容、结构与语言诸方面,而实际批改中要将包含上述各方面的诸多因素综合考虑。阅卷是一个动态过程,阅卷老师会先挂档,再进行微调。
实际批改过程中的体会
从上海地区的阅卷情况来看,大家的写作水平有稳步提升,但是幅度并不明显。客观说来,考生的写作水平还是较低的。英语考试要人工批阅阅读C节,也就是翻译,以及两篇作文。在实际操作的过程中,为了节省时间,每个大组通常分为翻译小组和作文小组,而某一位同学的小作文和大作文很可能是同一个人批阅的。那么,阅卷老师很可能在两篇作文之间建立关联,请大家切记。
大作文的批改相对要难一些。可以看出,大部分同学对于图画作文比较熟悉,都能严格按照提纲的三点来写。比较可惜的是有的同学主题把握不准确,得分很低。
近年来的大作文非常玄妙,值得细品。首先,大作文可能正在经历由时事向哲理过渡的重大变革,这在2001年、2002年、2004年和2007年真题上表现得最为明显。其次,出题人尽量用图画来表达意图,而不借助或少借助图中或图旁的文字,这样意义表达得会更深刻,对考生的思考力和判断力的要求也就更高。第三,图画的含义深刻,可以接受的解释也较多,但要想取得高分,必须紧扣图画,把握住其中的精髓,最深刻地表达出最核心的意义,如2001年图画中的“越„„越„„”结构和2002年的“National and International(民族的才是世界的)”。最后,有的年度明确提出要举例,如2004年和2007年的大作文。
写大作文时切记要扣紧主题,切不可离题太远,导致最后回不来或写不完。各部分之间的比例应适当,第一段不要太长。与主题相关的关键词语一定要用对。
阅卷中一个很深的感受是,很多同学因为字数不够而被扣分,这非常可惜。有的同学写得非常不错,如果正常发挥,把文章写完,肯定能获得很好的成绩,可是由于时间安排不当等原因,只写了一点或两点,这就很吃亏了。原则上是少1-10字扣一分,但是字少就可能漏点,即三点只写两点或者一点。即使三部分都写了,字少也不可能充分展开。大家切记:来改写作的老师中有不少自己非常喜爱写作,越是这样的老师对字数少扣分就越狠。一般说来,不到16行肯定要扣分。
不仅字少会导致极其被动的局面,字写得差或写得模糊也是如此,有的同学长时间以来有不良的写作习惯。没有批改过作文的人可能永远也想象不出看到快没水的圆珠笔写成的作文时那种痛苦的感受,或者看到写一个词点一点的作文时那种几近疯狂的感受。
在实际批改过程中,真实批改的速度越快,批改的任务越重,对内容与结构的关注程度就越低,而对语言的关注程度越高。这也就是说,考生应围绕正确的主题来谈,结构上应包含各个要点,而对思想的深度与创新性不需着力太多。出色的衔接与连贯肯定是加分点,但一般考生难以做到。由于阅卷时间紧,任务重,所以不大可能做到双人批改或一个人看两遍,所以衡量考生水平的最重要尺度还是语言。
这里面首先是减少语言错误,提高语言的准确性。语言错误有许多种,有的是小错误,甚至可以忽略不计,而有些是大错误,是让老师看到后不得不扣分的错误。另一方面就是增加闪光点,除了结构清晰外,闪光点主要指好的词、词组或句型,一是使用恰当,二是要有变换。如果文章分为三段,那么起始段、结尾段和中间段落的开始部分都非常关键。对于背诵的好词好句,一定要和具体的行文联系起来,融入到文章中去,不仅要用对,还要用好,避免给人突兀的感觉。
除了文章内在的因素之外,外界的因素也对评分有影响。干净整洁、字迹漂亮的文章肯定会比同样内容的乱涂乱画的文章得分要高。大家在平时写作时就应养成良好的习惯,将字写清楚,写整洁。
近年的阅卷中发现有些考生有投机心理,结果却很惨烈。在大作文中,切记千万不要抄阅读理解。有的同学将自己写的部分与抄的阅读部分间隔起来,看来早就有准备的,但还是被发现了,得了很低的分数。
有的考生准备了万能模板,直接往上套,这样的效果并不好。有一篇文章共写了三段,只有第一段的第三句话是对图画的直接描述,是作者自己的。这样的文章在前几年还有可能被误判为甚至平均的分数,但这两年这种机率就小得多了。正如有的较为激进的阅卷老师所说,这些考生是想通过不诚实的手段得到不属于他的东西,这样的人应该得到惩罚。
根据答题卡安排写作内容
考研的答题卡是横向双面设计。近年来版式完全相同:正面为22行,上面10行是5道翻译题,每题2行,每道题前均有题号,从46一直到50。下面12行写小作文,前面有题号,为51。两种题目前留有间隔,这是2008年的新变化,很不错。反面也是22行,与正面不同,所有行之间的间距是相同的。正面的左侧约五分之一的地方自上而下分别是阅读理解C节、写作A节、写作B节评分的地方,所以除去这个区域之后,留给小作文的地方就很小了。建议大家将抬头的称呼语紧邻着51写,日期在右边稍微抬高就可以了。实际上不写日期也不会扣分,不过一定不要将日期写到信的最后去。信最后的落款要占两行,有一行写到十二行之外的页下空白处也无伤大雅,这样反而给人一种刚好写满的感觉。相反,如果连十二行都未占满,阅卷老师就有可能会考虑是否要扣分。请大家注意一个重要的细节,字一定不要写得太大。最好大家能够事先看一下答题纸的复印件,做到心中有数。答题纸每年变化不大,这样的准备很有必要。现在的格子对于想写长文章的同学来说,是相当有限的。大家的字一定要写得中等或偏小才能写下并看上去舒服。由于加页是几乎不可能的,所以大家在一开始写的时候就要计划好。
阅卷中一直有个感受,就是小作文的分数拉不开,想得高分必须多写,把落款写到下面。我跟老师们开玩笑说,这叫 “兵触底成后”。
大作文被安排在背面,共22行。要求大家写160词到200词,实际上,我们强烈建议大家的作文写到200词左右,正好写到将一页基本占满的感觉是最好的,字大小适中即可。当然也不必再添行,将下面的一点空白挤得满满的,完全没有必要。一些具体的建议
建议大家一定要给人留下很认真、很在乎作文考试的感觉——这一点很重要。
建议大家把作文写在规定的位置上,大作文不要反着写。答题纸二的背面写大作文,看到上面的题号52,就不会搞反了。
建议大家在两篇作文中均不要以标1、2、3的方式分点,而是借助连接词或其它的手段。
建议大家使用水笔,不要使用铅笔,最好不用圆珠笔,使用钢笔是很好的,但要避免墨迹。字要写得尽量干净整齐。
建议大家不要空行、隔行写字,一定要按格子来写。不会写的词应该换个同义或近义词,一定要避免空着或写汉语。
阅卷的指导原则
近年来高分的文章很少。2007年第一次提出了14分以上谨慎的指导原则,这也是导致整体分数下降的一个原因,以前的原则均为16分以上要保持谨慎。我个人感觉,去年上海这边的大作文平均分首次略低于10分。这可能还与去年题目抽象度较高有较大的关系——虽然主题的界定比较宽,但要深入浅出,颇为不易。高速批改下的阅卷者的心态变得更加微妙,可能变得更激进,更易由较少甚至单独的例证来作出判断。他们很可能转而考虑如果复审老师找到某篇文章来询问时,说出怎样的给低分的理由(被判高的情形相对较少),所以还是希望大家减少无法容忍的错误。
令人非常高兴的是,2008年又恢复了16分以上谨慎的原则,并得到了建议大家放松1分左右的指令,所以估计今年的平均分会达到近年来的高点,即逼近11分。但是个别老师仍旧坚持去年的办法,就导致了教师间的差异,而这种大规模的“小”失误多是无法更正的。
只有实现“扫描+双判”才能完全解决。现在四六级是扫描后人工在机器上阅卷,但基本是单判(组长与专家组在线抽察,多是看高分或低分);国内最先进的、实现双判的是某些省市的高考语文作文,操作方法与美国的主流高考SAT类似,当达到一定差距时第三人(一般为专家)就上阵了。美国的SAT直到2005年3月12日大规模改革后才第一次考英语写作,但是一开始就实行双判。
-=================================== 起床问题,毋庸置疑,必须制定一个较早的时间起床(应该在6点左右,当然还可以更早,但不能太早,你会困的),无论是周末还是什么假期,阴天还是下雨,请坚持住你定的那个时间,强制自己听到闹铃之后必须起来,做到1分钟都不差。
2当你在图书馆自习时,如果你旁边过来一个同学和你拼桌时,如果没事的话,请不要抬头,更不要和他说第一句话,如果开口了,那么就很难停下来,一旦聊出了兴趣,就至少会花费一段自习时间。请不要责怪对方先和你说话,这是自制力的问题,当然如果你摆出一副认真学习的样子的话,对方九成不好意思打扰。
3学习时切勿东张西望,好奇心强,即使你听到什么声音,知道发生了什么有意思的事,但是朋友,顶住,千万别抬头看,一直保持你看书的姿势,如果由于好奇心抬了头,打自己一下,长个教训,好奇害死猫。
4学习是不需要休息的,当然这是因为我们必须选择不一样的休息方式,最好的休息方式是闭目一会,什么都别想。千万别这样休息~就是用休息的时间和朋友唠嗑,打电话发短信或者是出去走走。试想一下,本以为出去走走可以换换空气,但你想你还能回来么,就算是回来了,心又在哪呢?当然不唠嗑,不打电话不发短信和上面的是同一个道理,你是会停不住的。
5决不能心浮气燥,你不可能都会的,你都会了还用老师干吗?当你看一本书的时候,你会觉得书上写的很乱,很枯燥,进而很厌学。没事朋友,静下心来,用3分钟捂住耳朵,闭上眼睛,心惊心静,顶住,从第一个字开始看,慢慢看,10分钟之内我保证你能钻进去。
6决不能骄傲,这是大忌,骄兵必败,总以为自己会的人最虚伪,我们不用理他,他对我们的心情有百害而无一利。我相信大家都不爱听这样的话:“XX科我挺会的,这样的题我都会做,思路都一样„„”我呸!做数学类型的题请拿起笔,从第一步“写”到最后一步,直到得出结果,最忌讳只用眼睛看而不用笔做,尤其是数学。例题,就算是不会也请用笔抄。如果你的MP3/MP4里装的都是音乐而不是英语对话的话,请放进柜子里,因为你一带在身上,你一定想听,极其反对一边听歌一边学习,即使是那国歌。不要认为你听歌才能学习,那是骗自己的。补充一点,当你学累了休息一会的时候,请不要听歌,因为歌曲太美妙了,实在不忍心摘下耳机。如果你非要带,如果是为了听英语的话,我建议删掉歌曲。请把手机放在你伸手摸不到也看不到的地方,没事千万不要碰它。学习最主要的就是效率,其实很简单,只要把心思放到书本上,千万别陷入到胡思乱想中,这绝对是毒药。我相信我们所胡思乱想的东西一定都是美好的,比如说你最可能的是幻想爱情和一些很XX的事,我相信每个人都有这样的经历,当你很疲惫时,当你很无助时,当你学到最空虚的时候,你一定会想和学习无关的事,心情久久不能平静,我相信这至少会持续半个小时,而且这半个小时你什么都没动,眼睛,手,当然也包括书的页数。长久下去这是一个很长很长的时间,这个毒药足以扼杀我们的梦想。当然办法还是有的,当你不小心胡思乱想了,当你意识到的一刹那,请把你全身的意志力和定力都用过来,请立即停止你的思想,晃晃头,把它扼杀在摇篮里,心里默念一句,不能想不能想,努力学习。当然,如果你能克服掉这一点,你离成功就已经很近了。你必须克服环境,无论周围多吵,无论你做在哪,无论周围怎么乱,请不要抱怨,因为当你真正的学进去书的时候,你就会有那种感觉,就像是这世界只有你一个人,这才是学习的最高境界。11 关于男女朋友的问题,留到后面在说。请不要自卑,也请不要过分的相信自己,这似是很矛盾的话,可有其中的道理,看看你属于哪一种。首先说一个和这个话题无关的事,请不要自欺欺人,决不能有这样的话:“明天开始学XX,今天太累了,先不学了,等到XX的时候,我再学,先休息一会,一会再学„„”。考研是现在已经开始的事,今日复明日,明日何其多。而且考研必须每分每秒都要坚持,死也要死在板凳上。如果你还是将学习一拖再拖的话,如果你总是以逸待劳的话,如果你相信考研是3天2天的事的话,如果你总是把太累,想休息等词语放在嘴边的话,请放弃考研。。即使你没发现,即使你还不知道,但我告诉你,你已经在自欺欺人了。
其次说12的话题,当你努力学习遇到困难的时候,你还不放弃,即使你不会,请不要自卑,继续努力,给自己一些自信。而过分的自信是自己并不努力,并以为自己这会那会的,整天东有西逛,以为自己多厉害,认为怎么都能考上。呸!.请相信,考研的朋友,我们其实没有假期,我们必须放弃我们向往的旅游,游山玩水固然能放松心情,但你想,出游之前,你必须设计好你的计划,回来之后是不是还得回味几天。这至少是一个礼拜的时间。如果你再遇到了什么帅哥美女以及其他的东西改变了你的想法的话。请相信,我们的努力都将前功尽弃。当然我们也不能每时每刻都学习,总要给自己一点时间,洗洗衣服,洗洗澡,这个 自己定,时间不宜太长。一日3餐请按时吃饭,保持身体健康,你可以玩了命的学,但请不要以牺牲自己的健康为代价,健康第一。如果你家离学校很近,如果你想考研,请将你回家的频率降到最小,最多每个月回一次,一次最多2天,因为我们绝大多数人都曾把书带回家去,可是效果想必大家心里都有数。请尽量少参加“娱乐”活动,少一些“聚会”。人们都说考研的人是疯子,没错,我们承认,我们的目的就是考研。请相信任何人对考研人都是有优待的,他们不但不会疏远你,还会更靠近你。因为他们知道,你,可能,会,有出息„„
接下来说说空着的第11点,男女朋友问题。这个至关重要,大多数考研的朋友现在都是大三,已经有女朋友的感情都非常好,没有女朋友的心情有的非常急躁,总想找对象,但我希望这决不要出现在考研的朋友中,听我分析: 大学恋爱其实是很假的,这个由不得你不信,有数据证明很少有夫妻在大学中就是男女朋友关系,也就是说很少有大学情侣最后能够结婚,如果是这样的话,你还记得他(她)曾经对你说的海誓山盟,天长地久么,这不就是很假么。当然你可以查任何资料来看看我说的到底对不对。什么原因导致了上述一点,是因为梦想和现实有很大的差距。大学恋爱讲究浪漫,男朋友给女朋友买这个那个那个这个的,但你一定能发现,百分之一亿的人用的是他们老子的钱。大学里我们都很有钱,我们花钱如麻,我们最常说的就是:“妈,给点钱”。而且我们的父母太溺爱,就拿我来说,每次往家里打电话,父母都问我,还有钱没有,没钱给你汇点。考研班里一位政治老师这样说:“一个男生跪倒在地,手捧玫瑰向女孩大喊,我一定给你幸福,女孩感动流泪,大喊,我好幸福”但幸福在哪呢??我们用政治理论说什么是幸福,物质决定意识,幸福是建立在物质基础上的。不是我说的,马克思说的。再想想我们,有什么物质基础,如果父母什么都不给我们,我们是不是就赤身**的站在外面„„ 90%的人恋爱耽误学业,不要感觉你就是那10%,大学时我们很有钱,但大学之后呢,没有好工作,没有可以正常生活的收入,难道还向父母要钱,无耻啊,不孝啊。如果你这样的话,有谁心甘情愿的和你在一起吃苦呢,当然我们也并不能否认。这是现实,现在的人都现实,这就是很少有大学情侣最后能走在一起的原因。请不要太容易被感动,路遥知马力,日久见人心。请相信真正爱你的人不一定每天都在你周围,请相信真正爱你的人正在努力的为你做着什么,请相信那些努力为你做出成就的人,为了你正进行着汗水和泪水洗礼的人。请不要相信那些整太在你周围,整天甜言蜜语而不努力付出的人。请相信这世上只有一个人是真正的最爱你的人,他正在默默的为你努力的创造生活,他会一直等你。
第二篇:考研英语作文高分必备
考研英语作文高分必备
1. 开头超强公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型:
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”(适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that„ 2. 开头超强公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?:根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that „ 结尾超强公式
1. 结尾超强公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that„, Therefore, we can find that„ 2. 结尾超强公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recoMMend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.写作的“七项基本原则”
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点„ 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!
四、短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其
一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!
六、多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友„可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go, Why he goes away„
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.(气势恢宏)
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪!文章主体段落三大杀手锏
一、举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.更多句型:
To take „ as an example, One example is„, Another example is„, for example
二、做比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
相似的比较:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with „, „
三、换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子:
I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语:
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
领航名师墨东博:考研英语作文模板--国有企业
As is vividly depicted in the picture , with a clear cracking sound , two bowls clashed into each other , in which the shinning one keeps its integrity , whereas the shabby one breaks into pieces.Just like being symbolically revealed in the set of drawing, the fact that the intact bowl, as a symbol of soly-invested companies , overwhelms the broken bowl representing the state-owned companies, with collision standing for fierce companies, profoundly indicates that it is time that our state-owned companies entailed reform especially after china’s entry into WTO when facing soly-invested companies abroad.To the popular mind , it is immediately assumed that when reform in state-owned companies is argued,it is car industry that is meant.To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon , several points should be figured out.For one thing, some of car industries once enjoyed the glorious past , They have ,however, gradually lost their market shares when soly ?invested companies were sweeping into domestic market.For another , in order to turn the corner ,the leaders of them should adopt the policy of reform such as acquisition, re-engineering and introduction of advanced technology and concepts of management.No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below, No 1 Motor Vehicle Plant has witnessed from predicament to rejuvenation through none other than effective steps mentioned above.Therefore ,no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as reform in state-owned companies.Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive some positive meanings from this thought-provoking picture.It is ,hence, necessary that efforts be made to follow the spirit of reform concerning state-owned companies.On one hand, the government should make law to perfect irrational rules and regulations being visible in reform process.On the other hand, the leaders of state-owned companies should enhance the awareness of reform.Only by undergoing these steps ,can our more state-owned companies become members of Top 500 in the world, which, indeed, has gone to the heart of maintaining good momentum of national economy growth.一、要求:考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等。考生在答题卡2上作答。满分10分。
注意事项:
1)格式:称呼,结尾,署名
2)简明扼要,清楚明确。
3)遵照要求,内容齐全。
4)言语得体,真心诚意。
二、备忘录
备忘录是一种录以备忘的公文。在公文函件中,它的等级是比较低的,主要用来提醒、督促对方,或就某个问题提出自己的意见或看法。在业务上,它一般用来补充正式文件的不足。它的内容可以分为以下几项:
书端(Heading)
收文人的姓名、头衔、地址(Addressee's Name, Title, Address)
称呼(Salutation)
事因(Subject)
正文(Body)
结束语(Complimentary Close)
署名(Signature)
写作注意事项
1、书端部分包括发文机关的名称、地址、发文日期,有的还包括电报挂号、电传号、电话号码等。许多机关有自己特制的信笺,在写书端时,其格式和标点符号的使用与一般信件的相同。
2、称呼从左边顶格写起,对一般机关、团体的负责人一般用 Dear Sir,对政府官员可用Sir。
3、正文、结束语和署名等项与一般信件的格式相同。“事因”一项目前采用得较少。
范文
Directions: Write a memorandum of about 100 words to the student service department and ask them to fix a telephone for each dormitory.MEMO
August 16, 2005
To: The leader of student service department
From: Li Ming
Subject: Telephone
Dear Sir,I would like to remind you that we are in want of a telephone for each dormitory.As a university student, we need to cope with the daily increasing communications with teachers, friends and people outside the campus.We need a telephone to get and send message, which is important for us.Though most of us have mobile phones and e-mail address, a telephone in the dormitory is after all the most convenient and cheapest tool of communication.I hope that you will pay attention to this problem and solve it as soon as possible.Regards.Yours,Li Ming
三、摘要
文章摘要是对所写文章主要内容的精炼概括。美国人称摘要为“Abstract”,而英国人则喜欢称其为“Summary”。
通常国际刊物要求所要刊登的文章字数,包括摘要部分不超过1万字。而对文章摘要部分的字数要求则更少。因此写摘要时,应用最为简练的语言来表达论文之精华。论文摘要的重点应放在所研究的成果和结论上。
国际会议要求的论文摘要的字数不等,一般为200字-500字。而国际刊物要求所刊登的论文摘要的字数通常是100字-200字。摘要的位置一般放在一篇文章的最前面,内容上涵盖全文,并直接点明全旨。语言上要求尽量简炼。摘要通常多采用第三人称撰写。
科学书籍、论文和学术报告一般都附有内容摘要,这样可以节省读者的时间,使他们不必读完整个文章就能够了解它的主要内容。书籍摘要,一般放在封二或封三;论文和学术报告的摘要,一般放在正文前面。摘要应做到简明扼要,切题,能独立成文,使读者能准确地了解书籍的要义。写摘要时,最好用第三人称的完整的陈述句,文长一般不超过200个词。
英文摘要分类
摘要分陈述性的(Descriptive)和资料性的(Informational)两类。陈述性摘要只陈述书籍或文章的主题,不介绍内容。资料性的摘要除了介绍主题外,还应介绍文章的要点和各个要点的主要内容。它可以包括三个组成部分:
①点明主题,解析文章或书籍的目的或意图;
②介绍主要内容,使读者迅速了解文章或书籍的概貌;
③提出结论或建议,以供读者参考。
英文摘要常见句型
1)This paper deals with...2)This article focuses on the topics of(that, having, etc)...3)This eassy presents knowledge that...4)This thesis discusses...5)This thesis analyzes...6)This paper provides an overview of...7)This paper elaborates on...8)This article gives an overview of...9)This article compares...and summarizes key findings.10)This paper includes discussions concerning...11)This paper presents up to date information on...12)This article covers the role of chemicals in...13)This paper addresses important topics including...14)This paper touches upon...15)This paper strongly emphasizes...16)This eassy represents the preceedings of...17)This article not only describes...but also suggests...18)This paper considers...19)This paper provides a method of...20)This paper introduces an applicable procedure to analyze...摘要题型写作要点:
① 动笔之前,考生一定要认真仔细地阅读所给原文,弄懂原文大意,掌握原文要点。
② 摘要的长度一般是原文的四分之一或五分之一,考试时应遵守规定的字数限制。
③ 在做摘要时考生切忌照搬原文。
④ 摘要应与原文的观点保持一致,并且仍按原文的逻辑顺序排列。
⑤ 重点反映主要观点,删除细节。
⑥ 简化从句,用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。
⑦ 检查与修改时,考生应重点检查是否遗漏了原文的要点或包含了细节。
摘要题型写作实例
① 试题题目
Directions: Study the following essay carefully and write a summary in about 80 words.We continue to share with our remotest ancestors the most tangled and evasive attitudes about death, despite the great distance we have come in understanding some of the profound aspects of biology.We have as much distaste for talking about personal death as for thinking about it;it is an indelicacy, like talking in mixed company about venereal disease or abortion in the old days.Death on a grand scale does not bother us in the same special way: we can sit around a dinner table and discuss war, involving 60 billion volatilized human deaths, as though we were talking about bad weather;we can watch abrupt bloody death every day, in color, on films and television, without blinking back a tear.It is when the numbers of dead are very small, and very close, that we begin to think in scurrying circles.At the very center of the problem is the naked cold deadness of one’s own self, the only reality in nature of which we can have absolute certainty, and it is unmentionable, unthinkable.We may be even less willing to face the issue at first hand than our predecessors because of a secret new hope that maybe it will go away.We like to think, hiding the thought, that with all the marvelous ways in which we seem now to lead nature around by the nose, perhaps we can avoid the central problem if we just become, next year, say, a bit smarter.② 原文要点:
1.continue to have the most confused ideas of death like predecessors
2.avoid talking about death
③ 参考摘要:
People dislike talking about death because they just like their predecessors still have the vaguest ideas of the issue.They talk about death only when million upon millions of people are killed in war.When they find only very few people die each time and the death rates are almost equal, they become very anxious, thinking that next time they themselves will meet their doom.Therefore, they fear very much.However, they have a hope that when they control nature, they can avoid death.(84 words)
开头与结尾用语
开头:Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear sir or Madam, Dear President, Dear Sales Manager, Dear Dean, Dear Professor, To whom it may concern, Dear Mr.Smith,结尾:Yours faithfully, Yours truly, Yours, Yours sincerely, Best regards, Best wishes, lovingly yours, sincerely yours,l 正文第一句
朋友:Hi!How are you?
Hello!I hope everything is fine.Hi!How is everything going?
如不认识:I was a guest at your hotel from June 25 to 28.I am a student at your college, enrolled in the computer course.致谢:Thank you for your invitation to the international medical conference on October 11.Thank you for your letter dated October 11.解释写信原因:I am writing to advise you for the loss of my credit card.I’d like to inquire about course details.I am writing to complain about/of the poor service at your restaurant.l 结尾段
发出请求:I am looking forward to your prompt reply.Please reply to us at your earliest convenience.表达歉意:once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please accept my apologies once again.提出投诉:I expect to hear from you very soon.Please give this matter your immediate attention.常用信件写作介绍
1. 投诉信
开头:自我介绍,交代投诉内容,表明本信的目的和要求
正文:说明情况,讲清利害,分析利弊。告诉对方你因此受到的伤害或不便,提出解决问题的建议,表明希望如何处理。
结尾:表达希望问题得到迅速恰当解决的强烈愿望。希望尽快得到满意的答复。
常用句型:
I am writing to you to complain about….I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at…
I beg to call your attention to the fact that…
I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred…, calling for some remedial action.I very much regret to have to inform you that…
I am totally/completely disappointed/upset to find…
I find it awful/quite distressing that…
My experience in…on…(date)shocked me.I can hardly put up with it.There are some problems with the … that I wish to bring to attention.For one thing, there is….For another, …..I can hardly stand/bear/tolerate/put up with it any more.To improve the situation/solve the above problem, it is advisable for you to take the following measures:…
I look forward to a day when we could really enjoy a more efficient service.I hope that the above situation will be improved as soon as possible.If it is not properly settled, I would ask you to give my money back, or I would complain to the Consumer’s Association.I request you to be kind enough to solve the problem as soon as possible.应注意:
1)礼貌用词,不能过激。
2)提出希望/要求,句型要多样化。
3)反映问题集中,不要联想其他。
Ex.1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem.2. 咨询信、请求信、说明信
开头:简要告知身份,表明写信原因或请求
正文:详细阐明询问、请求的具体内容、希望获得的信息。说明信应写明原因、实情及希望对方做些什么。强调所需信息/帮助的重要性。(按要求)
结尾:表达谢意,希望得到对方回复、帮助或合作。
常用句型:
I would like to inquire about some information concerning/regarding….I am writing in the hope that you can…
I am writing because I would like to…
Needless to say, your approval of my request will be beneficial not only to myself but to the company.Could you tell me what I have to do to…
It is sincerely requested that you…
My first question is that …
Should I need to send further materials, please let me know.If additional information is required, please advise me at your early convenience.Should I send you copies of my qualification in advance?
I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Please render me some valuable advice which is conducive to my final decision.I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.应注意:
1)请求内容/信息一定要详尽,具体。
2)语气要客气,委婉。
3)语言直接,具体,简明。
Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to
1)describe the book you want to borrow,2)specify by when the book will be returned, and
3)express your gratitude.3. 道歉信。
开头:简单交代对何事进行道歉。
正文:解释事情发生的原因,消除误会或矛盾。
结尾:再次表示遗憾何歉意,表明愿意补救的愿望,提出建议或安排。
常用句型:
I must apologize to you for…
I am very sorry that..I regret to inform you that I will not be able to…
I am afraid what I have done has caused many inconveniences to you.I sincerely hope you understand that I offended you quite unintentionally.I believe you can understand that I have not intended to hurt you.I owe you an apology.It is my fault.I am to blame for this unpleasant thing.Please pardon/excuse/forgive me.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.I will try my utmost not to make such a stupid mistake again.I trust the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.I hope you will kindly forgive my lapse of attention.I am so sorry to have put you to/into so much trouble.应注意:
1)事情原委要解释清楚。
2)说明情况与理由,实事求是,简明扼要。
3)态度诚恳。
4)用词委婉,语气温和,得体。
Ex.You have invited a friend over to have dinner with you one night, but just before the dinner you received an urgent phone call from your office and you had to leave immediately.Write a letter of apology to your friend.4. 感谢信
开头:表达谢意,提及受到的帮助。
正文:回忆该帮助,高度评价/赞扬对方,表达当时的心情感受。
结尾:再次表达谢意,提出回报希望。
常用句型:
I am grateful/thankful to you for…
I am much obliged to you for your help.I shall always appreciate the assistance you have given me.I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.It was most thoughtful and generous of you to send me such a beautiful and fancy gift.Thoughtful considerate considerable
It’s very kind of you to help us.I hope you can know how much I appreciate your hospitality and your many kindnesses to me.Hostility
But for your help, I would not..If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that..Thanks from the bottom of my heart for…
With thanks from every one of us and best wishes to you.Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.应注意:
1)开头要直截了当。
2)表明诚意,避免空洞。
3)态度热情
Ex.You got sick just a week before the final examinations and were sent to a hospital.One nurse treated you very well and you recovered soon.Write a letter of appreciation to the nurse(Miss Smith).Dear Miss Smith,I was just at your hospital when I got sick before the final examinations.First, I thanks for you could treat me very well and let me recovered soon.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I’m afraid that I couldn’t pass the exam.Thank you for the bottom of my heart for your help and service.Dear Miss Smith,I hope you can know how much I appreciate your kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.I got sick just a week before the final examination.I was so worried that I couldn’t take part in the examination.It was just you that encouraged me to face the illness bravely.So I recovered soon, and I got good results in my final examination.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid I can’t have recovered so soon and achieved such good results.Again, I would like to express my thanks to you.Sincerely yours,Dear Miss Smith,I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that I would be still in hospital now.I got sick just a week before the exam.You treated me well and I recovered soon.Now I pass the exam.But for your kindness help, I would not have passed the exam.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.Yours sincerely,Dear Miss Smith,I was a patient of yours one week ago, and I write the letter to you to show my appreciation for your help.It was near the final exam then, and without your hospitable and generous help, I couldn’t have recovered so soon, let alone to get a high mark on the exam.I shall always appreciate the help you’d offered me and I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when opportunity arises.Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.Best wishes,Sincerely yours,邀请信
开头:开门见山,说明目的。
正文:邀请内容(活动性质,地点,时间,日期),有关要求与希望。
结尾:重申对方参加的重要性,希望尽快回复。
常用句型:
I should be much pleased if you would come to our party on Friday the 15th at 6.I am pleased to invite you to participate in …to be held from…to….in..I feel it a great honor if you could..It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…
We would be greatly honored if you could come…
I am writing to invite you to…
I am particularly anxious to have you join us.It’s a long time since I have had the pleasure of seeing you and I do hope you can come.We hope that you can come and look forward to seeing you.I will cover all the expenses involved.应注意:
1)用词清晰,简明。
2)邀请内容清楚。
5. 求职信
开头:说明信息来源,表明写信目的 正文:提供个人资料,询问相关问题。
结尾:表达愿望,提供联系方式,表示感谢。
常用句型:
I have read your advertisement in…for a(position/post), and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position.I wish to apply for the post mentioned in your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper.I wish to apply for a position with your company.I myself like the job very much and I think my personality is well suited to working as a ….Honest, trust-worthy, reliable, enthusiastic, diligent, bright, smart, careful, patient, responsible, efficient, productive, versatile, open-minded, optimistic,I am confident that my experience and ability will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirement of your position.Born in…in.., I graduated from….University majoring in …..I have been working in…since my graduation, and I have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was ….And currently I am working for…
I intend to give up my present post in order to get a more challenging opportunity.With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than 4,000.I shall be very much obliged if you will offer me an opportunity for an interview.I am looking forward with great interest to hearing from you soon regarding my application.应注意:
1)适当展示自己(经历,才能)
2)不要言他
3)语言明确清楚,流露自信。
6. 推荐信
开头:开门见山,表明关系。
正文:称赞被推荐人(举例说明),客观介绍其相关能力,突出表现、性格与人品
结尾:作出保证,提出希望,表示感谢。
常用句型:
I am very glad to recommend you a former student of mine, Mr./Miss… to be a candidate for…
I am writing to recommend…
I have great pleasure to provide a letter for recommendation for Mr./Miss…
With reference to your advertised position, I have the pleasure to say that he is the just person you are looking for.He has proved to be industrious, responsible and skillful in carrying out his assignment.Besides being thoroughly honest and reliable he showed an unusual quickness and ability in…
I hope the above information will help you to know…
If you need any further information about his qualification, please do not hesitate to contact me.If further information about him/her is required, please do not hesitate to let me know/contact me
In view of his/her previous achievements in…, I am firmly convinced that Mr./Miss.., will make a successful graduate student/staff member.I would be most grateful if you would consider my recommendation and kindly offer him a…
应注意:
1)开门见山,简明扼要。
2)举例说明,客观叙述。
7. 表扬信
开头:身份简介,提及感谢的人,事。
正文:叙述经过,详细介绍值得表扬之处,表达感受
结尾:提出祝愿与希望
常用句型:
I am writing to tell you how highly I think of…
I am writing because I appreciate very much what Mr./Miss…from your company has done.I am greatly impressed by….What he has done shows that…
He deserves praise for what he has done.I am greatly inspired by…
It is your good service as well as excellent food that help you set up a world reputation.For this reason, I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks and hope that your company will have a brighter future.应注意:
1)叙述经过,明确具体。
2)上升到一个高度。
3)语言诚恳。
8. 祝贺信
开头:开门见山,说明消息来源
正文:回忆过去,表明感受,展望未来,提出建议。
结尾:表达祝愿
常用句型:
What exciting/thrilling news!
It’s good/sensational news.I was delighted/thrilled to hear/to receive the news that ….It’s the most joyful news I have heard for a long time.I congratulate you on/upon your success.Congratulations and all good/best wishes.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on…
Permit me to congratulate you…
We want you to know how happy we were when…
It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…
Wish you all the happiness in the world.I hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life/career.All the luck in the world to you!
Best of luck to you!
范文:
Ex.1
Last Saturday, you ate at a restaurant and found a fly in one of the dishes you ordered.Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the restaurant and offer your suggestions on this problem
Dear manager,I was a guest/customer at your restaurant last Saturday.I wish to refer you to the incident that happened that day, calling for your immediate attention to the matter.It shocked me when I found a fly in a dish in the middle of our meal.I could hardly bear it.I felt sick.If it happens again, I am convinced that no one will come to eat here any more.It is advisable for you to tidy up/ clean up your kitchen as soon as possible.Please give me your immediate attention to this matter.Sincerely yours,***
Ex2.For some reason, you need to borrow a book from a classmate.Write a letter to him or her to
1)describe the book you want to borrow,2)specify by when the book will be returned, and
3)express your gratitude.Dear Jones,I am writing to ask for your help in lending me a book.Recently I’ve been busy preparing my graduate thesis, and therefore have been reading and researching numerous books and references.One of the books that my advisor believes to be particularly relevant to my thesis is called The Legal System in Society.Unfortunately I have been unable to find it at the library or in any bookstores.Do you happen to have this book? If so, may I borrow it? I promise to take good care of it and will return it to you within three days.Thank you very much.I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely yours,Li Ming
练习题:
Ex.1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has friends visiting.They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You should prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Ex.2
Your classmate and close friend, Jack, has just passed the graduate entrance examination and is going to study at a famous university in another city.Write a letter of congratulation to him.Ex.3
You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in UK.You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop in the family.Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality.Describe the computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you.Ex.4
You are a college student who applies for a part-time job in a shop during the summer vacation.Write a letter to the shop owner explaining why you are a suitable person for the job.Remember to ask him or her about the rate of payment.Ex.5
You are a college student who applies to a university for an MA degree program of the major “Life Science”.Introduce yourself and state out the reasons.Ask them to send the necessary information concerning the course.1.审题要认真
短文的标题是对全文的高度概括。通过认真审题来确定标题的核心词或者说关键词,依此来整理思路。因此,考生看到试题后绝对不能提笔就写,而是应该认真审题,看清题目的要求和提示,充分利用题目所提供的信息、关键词所圈定的范围,在确立主题后再动笔。
如 从标题 The Misery of Shyness 中得知,考生不但要解释说明 Shyness ,更重要的是要突出由 Shyness 带来的Misery。至此,短文要重点阐述带来了什么Misery。
2.文体要统一
正式文体的文章不宜用非正式的语句。有些考生在一篇很正式的议论文中用以下的句子做结语 OK, this is what I want to say.或是That’s my opinion.Do you agree with me?等等,使文章显得不伦不类。
3.主题要突出
标题如果是 Pollution from Cars 或 Air Pollution ,以下段落的阐述显得有些赘述 1 Part of this problem is the world’s exploding population.2 A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.3 Besides, land and water pollution has also increased.4 Pollution is, in fact, threatening our health, our happiness, and our civilization.尤其是第三句,还有点跑题。
4.文字要连贯
一篇好文章要注重连贯性。连贯性主要体现在句子与句子、段落与段落的衔接上,这种衔接要通过过渡词语来实现,以达到文章通顺,语言流畅。例如 It is clear that television news can vividly bring into us dramatic events of importance, such as wars, games and soon, but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation.On the contrary, print news excels in its ability to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit, though it can not compete with television visually.Besides, television is essentially a passive medium.Such as, but, because of, on the contrary, though, besides 这些过渡词把句子从语义上连接起来,形成一个有机的整体,读起来犹如行云流水,自然酣畅。
5.内容要一致
要删除多余的词语,否则, 一是破坏了文章的一致性, 二是有凑字数之嫌。如 Scientists fear that nuclear energy will one day destroyus.2 They say that the explosion of a nuclear bomb can kill millions of people and cause disease and deformity in later generation.3 Because of limited energy resources, scientists are studying the possibilities of nuclear power.4 And any failure from a nuclear plant may cause enormous damage to the affected area5 What’s more, up to now people have not discovered a safe way to dispose of radioactive wastes.本段中的第三句与主题不符, 也与第二和第四句不连贯, 应删除。
6.表达方式要多样化
词、句型使用的多样化不仅给文章增加了色彩和可读性,与此同时也可反映考生的词汇量和语言掌握的程度等。为避免文章平淡、呆板, 可使用不同的句式 强调句、倒装句、否定句等等。长短句使用合理相间,用短句表达有力的结论,用长句体现严密的逻辑关系。考生在举例说明的段落中尤其要注意词语的多样性。
7.考点要覆盖全
无论是什么形式的写作都有写作内容上的要求,一般为三个方面。考生在动笔前一定要看清写作内容上的要求,以确保文章覆盖所有考点。
8.语言要流畅
评分标准已清楚地告诉考生 文章要语言流畅、字句通顺、表达准确, 这是得高分的基础。
Last year the public spent two hundred million pounds on pet food alone, to say nothing of animal care bills and furniture.1 It is difficult not to feel resentful about this when one considers what the same amount could do for victims of starvation and poverty,2 and it is not unusual for me to get hot under the collar when I read about another old person who has left all his /her money to a dog or cat home.这两句在表达意义上用词十分到位,随着两个 when 引导的状语从句内容的递进,主句对表现气愤程度的加强通过用词的不同而表达得淋漓尽致;排比结构的运用使观点更加明确 在1 中 It is difficult not 和 to feel resentful about this 与2 中的 it is not unusual 和 to get hot under the collar 词语表达极其准确。这需要考生在平时大量阅读文章时多注意积累好的语言表达。
9.首尾要呼应
上述几项被阅卷者称为闪光点 ,即加分的因素。除此而外, 更重要的一点是要注意文章的完整性,即首尾要呼应。
10.检查要到位
这个重要环节往往被考生忽略不计,而因为少了这个环节所造成的后果真可谓是功亏一篑。在阅卷过程中,时不时会发现 ourself、thinked、the person who are… ,而这些会酿成不良后果的错误完全可在一两分钟的时间内检查、修改完成。所以, 在写完短文后, 要耐心地再读一遍。
第三篇:考研英语作文高分
小作文模板
1.建议信
Dear ________,As ________, I’m writing to express my views concerning ________.Although ________, there is still much room for improvement.Forinstance, ________.In view of these facts, I would like to make the following suggestions.First, ________.Second,________.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.Yours sincerely,________
2.辞职信模板
Dear ________,I am writing to inform you of my resignation from the current position.I can/will ________ for the transition process.Although I really appreciate the invaluable experience working here, I gradually find_______.In addition , ________.Therefore,________.I would like to thank you for ________.Should there be any inconvenience and trouble caused by my resignation, I am sorry indeed.Yours faithfully,________
3.致歉信模板
Dear ________,I am excessively sorry that I must apologize for ________.I’m afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.In order to ________, I will ________.Please accept my most cordial and humblest apology.I do hope you ________ and excuse me for ________.Cordially yours
________
4.求职信模板
Dear ________,I have become aware ________ that you are seeking people qualified to fill the vacancy for ________.I am convinced that ________.I major in ________.Furthermore, ________.My resume and list of references are available upon request.I appreciate your time and consideration, and look forward to meeting you in the near future.Faithfully yours,________
5.感谢信模板 Dear ________,I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for ________.Without your help, ________.________.Many thanks again for ________.I hope I will have a chance to ________.Sincerely yours, ________
6.申请信模板 Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to you in the hope of ________.I would like to know more details about ________.If ________, I will/can ________.I am eagerly looking forward to your reply.And your kind help would be greatly appreciated.Yours respectfully,________
7.投诉信模板 Dear ________,This letter is to notify you about a problem I am having with ________.I am dissatisfied with ________ because ________.I have already attempt to ________.Unfortunately, it seemed that ________.I am sure you will agree that ________.I look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,________
8.询问信模板 Dear ________,I am writing to ask if ________.Since ________, I would be most grateful if ________.Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated.I am expecting your early reply.Yours faithfully,________
9.邀请信模板 Dear ________,Please allow me to have the honor of inviting you ________.The occasion will start at/in ________.Following that, ________.We would be particularly honored by your distinguished presence at ________.Please inform me of ________.Yours sincerely,________
10.祝贺信模板 Dear ________,I am thrilled to know that ________.Please allow me to give my most sincere congratulations on this exciting occasion.As your ________, I _______.It means ________.And it is ________.I take this opportunity to express my best wishes to you.Wish you ________.Yours sincerely,________
11.推荐信模板 Dear ________,This letter is in reference to ________, who ________.He/She is applying for ________.With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend ________.During ________, I spent considerable time with him/her.He/She ________.I believe he/she will ________.I hope the above information will help you ________.If you ________, please do not hesitate to contact me.Yours faithfully, ________
12.介绍信 Dear ________,It gives me much pleasure to introduce ________ to you.He/She ________.Because ________, I hope ________, which I shall ________.I hope it won’t cause you much trouble.Your kindness will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,________
13.便签模板 Dear ________,This note is to ________.I will ________.I am sorry that I can’t pass on the message to you in your presence because ________.Yours, ________
14.通知模板
ANNOUNCEMENT 通知主题
Speaker: ________ Time: ________ Place: ________ 正文
单位/个人
15.备忘录模板
Memorandum
To: ________ From: ________ Date: ________ Subject: ________ 正文内容
16.简历模板
RESUME
Name: ________
Date of Birth: ________ Marital Status: ________ Address: ________ Telephone: ________ Education: ________
Work Experience: ________ Languages: ________
Awards and Scholarships: ________ Interests: ________ Reference: ________
17.摘要模板
Abstract
In order to ________, the paper takes ________ into consideration.It first ________, and further explores ________.Based upon the above, the author concludes that ________.大作文模板
1.价值观类
一、As is symbolically depicted in the cartoon, ________(图片内容).The caption indicates, ________(说明文字).Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to
attract our attention to the issue of ________(图片的主题).Why________(主题的重要性)? The answer seems selfevident.On the one hand, ________(重要性体现或变现1).On the other hand, ________(2).It is my view that, we can frequently use such drawings to enlighten the juvenile as to the importance of ________(主题).All in all, ________(深化主题).二、I was really fascinated by the above intriguing cartoon.As is vividly portrayed, ________(图画内容).Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to direct our attention to ________(图画内涵), which is ________ to/in our life.For one thing, ________(内涵重要意义 1).For another, ________(2).Therefore, it is essential for us to ________(针对图画内涵的态度).First of all, ________(具体措施1).In addition, ________(2).With correct understanding and practical acts, we will ________(出现的结果).三、As is shown in the picture, ________(图片内容).The drawing vividly illustrates ________(表达的主题).Obviously the drawing conveys the meaning that ________(图片内涵).As an old saying goes, ________(应用相关谚语).This also applies to ________(扩展论证).Examples to prove the idea are abundant, and the most persuasive is ________ 举例说明).In conclusion, ________(总结深化主题).2.教育类
一、As is vividly portrayed in the first cartoon, ________(第一幅图片的内容).In contrast, ________(第二幅图片的内容)as shown in the second cartoon.The fact that ________(图片体现的问题).For one thing, ________(问题的表现或原因1).For another, ________(2).Therefore, ________(问题的结果).In fact, ________(对待问题的正确态度).Accordingly, ________(应该采取的 措施及意义).二、As is vividly depicted in the above picture, ________(图片内容).The caption informs us that ________(说明文字内容).Undoubtedly, what the picture conveys is ________(图片主题).In fact, ________(论证支持主题).As a college student, I firmly believe that ________(自己的观点).Admittedly,________(公认的做法).At the same time, ________(进一步的做法).It is believed that ________(总结).三、________(话题)plays a very important role in ________(起作用的方面).Without ________(话题带来的好处), ________(结果).However, ________(现状及问题).Therefore, ________(提出措施).Undoubtedly, ________(解决问题的方法)is of great necessity.On the one hand, ________(必要性体现1).On the other hand, ________(2).As a result, ________(总结).From my point of view, ________(个人观点).The final way to improve the situation is ________(建议).3.社会热点类
一、As can be seen in the above picture, ________(图画的内容).Apparently, ________(图画象征的含义).The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to ________(图画的主题).On the one hand, ________(主题的一个方面).For
instance, ________(举例说明).On the other hand, ________(主题的另一个方面).A good case in point is that ________(举例说明).Personally, ________(我的观点).After all, ________(问题的根本).二、The set of drawings above vividly depict a common phenomenon that________(图片揭示的现象).As is portrayed in the first picture, ________(第一幅图片的内容).In the second one, ________(第二幅图片的内容).Obviously, ________(图片的相同点/不同点).It goes without saying that ________(现象积极的一面).First, ________(原因1).Second, ________(原因 2).However, we have to admit that ________(现象的弊端).In my view, ________(对待这一现象的正确态度).三、As is vividly depicted in the above drawing, ________(图片内容).Undoubtedly, ________(图片反映的事实).The drawer highlights the longstanding issue of ________(图片揭示的深层问题).Nowadays, ________(对问题深入分析).Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to solve the problem of ________(正在讨论的问题).To begin with, ________(措施 1).In addition, ________(措施2).In fact, ________(用一个基本事实来支持论点).4.人口环境类
一、The above pictures present us with two situations with sharp contrast.In the first picture, we learn that ________(第一幅图片的内容).On the contrary, ________(第二幅图片的内容).It is apparent that ________(图片的主题).The purpose of the pictures is to tell us that due attention has to be paid to ________(图片揭示的现象).For example, ________(举例说明).Consequently, ________(现象造成的结果).Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to deal with the urgent problem.First and foremost, ________(措施1).Furthermore, ________(措施2).二、As can be seen from the graphs, ________(图表内容).Apparently, ________(图表说明的问题).There are numerous reasons for this effect, and I would explore only two of the most important ones here.First, ________(原因 1).For example, ________(举例说明).Second, ________(原因2).For instance, ________(举例说明).Personally, it is imperative to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the graphs.One measure is ________(措施 1).More importantly, ________(措施 2).5.健康类
一、________(提出引出主题的问题).Of all the complaints I have heard, this is the one most frequently uttered.As is shown in the charts above, ________(图表内容 1).Accordingly, ________(结果).We can see from the charts that________(图表内容2).However, ________(讨论对象的变化).According to the given figures,________(变化趋势).There are probably several reasons responsible for the trend.In the first place, ________(变化原因1).In the second place, ________(变化原因 2).Hence, ________(结论).二、The desire for ________(美好的目标)is universal.________(正面论证支持).On the contrary, ________(反面论证支持).There are numerous ways to ________(达到目标).First and foremost, ________(方法 1).Moreover, ________(方法2).Finally,(方法 3).As for me, ________(我的做法 1).In addition, ________(我的做法2).Therefore, ________(总结).
第四篇:2012考研英语高分作文
小作文复习指导
考研英语小作文考察的多是辞职信、感谢信、道歉信等20多种类型的应用文文体,着重考察考生的逻辑思维能力和语言应用能力。万学海文提示2012年的广大考生小作文具有如下特点:重格式,不轻内容;轻思想,重交际;字数少,易得分;重套路,难发挥。2012年的考生应着重依照这四个特点来进行复习。
背格式:
小作文重格式的特点要求考生们在格式上不能犯错,必须注意熟悉一些应用文的格式和英文中应用文的表达习惯。万学海文提示考生:格式无误是小作文得高分的第一步。
举2011年小作文题目为例:
Write a letter to a friend of yours to
1)recommend one of your favorite movies and
2)give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.(10points)
参考范文:(万学海文:《2012考研英语历年真题权威解析》)
Dear Tom,I am writing, without hesitation, to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you, which is not only conducive to your study, but also beneficial to your life.For one thing, the beautiful language in this original English movie may contribute to your study of English in listening, speaking, reading and writing.For another thing, the profound cultural elements implicit in the scene will equip you with foreign cultural background and, above all, enrich your daily life.Would you like to see this movie after my recommendation? Remember to tell me your opinion about the movie.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Ming
一、称呼格式 1.用于对陌生的组织或团体负责人的称谓:Dear Madam or Dear Sir
2.用于对认识但是关系很正式的个人、组织或团体负责人的称谓:Dear Ms....or Dear Mr....3.用于对关系亲密的人的称谓:Dear Tom/Lucy(or any other name)
二、正文格式
缩进式: 段落之间无空行,每段开头空四个字母。
三、落款格式
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“...”instead.落款时可以使用下列万能格式:
Yours, Li Ming
背范文:
背诵是考生积极备战、快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径。考生应严格按照真题的要求独立写作,对比真题解析中的范文,发掘范文中的亮点和得分点,找出自己文章中格式、语法和逻辑上的错误。背诵一些历年真题解析中的优秀范文和优秀的小作文写作模板来提高小作文得分。
技巧锦囊:掌握固定格式,准确用词,注意不同类型的要点。
布局:
小作文的布局上一般可以分为三段展开。第一段:开门见山,直接点明主题。第二段:摆出内容,陈述原因,罗列建议。第三段:回应首段,再次感谢,期待回复。
语言:
用词准确:用词准确是最基础的要求之一。
语法正确:语法错误是考试的失分点所在,在小作文的写作中应尽量少用缩略语和口语。
句型多变:例如既有并列句,也有复合句,还有从句。
小作文的考查要求中会体现出文章的背景场合和写作目的,考生应针对不同情境选择不同表达。不同的应用文有不同的用语,万学海文英语辅导老师们建议2012年的考生对某些应用文的格式和习惯用语加以熟悉和背诵,以便运用自如。
注意: 虽说小作文的字数不多,但考生们最好还是不要忙于动笔,仔细审题后,先理清思路,认真列个提纲再下笔。写作时,万学海文英语考研辅导专家们建议2012年的考生们应注意下几个方面的问题:第一,交代清楚目的;第二,注意关联词或衔接词的运用,以便阅卷老师明了篇章结构;第三,有必要时对个人观点进行适当阐述;第四,用简短的语句代替冗长的语句,行文切忌复杂。最后,完成作文以后,应该检查、修改,以免需要表达清楚的细节和要点被遗漏。
2012年考研英语图画作文备考建议
一、图画作文概括
图画作文不仅需要考生描述图画中所给出的基本信息,更要求考生对图画进行更深层次的理解,即要求考生能够读出图画中所隐含的深层含义,即寓意。即文章所给出的主题是什么?这需要我们认真研读图画给我们提供的信息。
首先,我们来看看这几年考研图画作文考查的主题:
年份 主题 捕鱼 爱心是一美国女孩
温室的花朵
终点也是
父母赡养
偶像
自信
取长
网络
文化
“旅2000 2001 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 2007 2008 2009 2010 2011
崇拜 的重补短,的远
与近
火锅 程”之
余 盏灯 与中国文化
起点 问题 要性 合作
互助
从以上表格的我们可以看出,考研英语图画作文所考到的主旨一般跟当今世界上热门的话题有联系,比如:赡养老人,环境保护等。因此,万学海文英语考研辅导专家建议2012年的考生在复习的时候,也可以多阅读英文文章或报刊书籍,积累素材,这样可以使自己对话题更熟悉,做到有话可说。
二、图画作文备考建议
1、审题。
审题很重要,包括题目中的direction部分,比如作文类型,写作篇幅结构,篇幅长短等;审图画,在这方面,考生要仔细审查图画,认真揣摩,从而更加准确把握图画所传递的信息;提示语,一般的图画作文都附有提示语,提示语有两个作用:限定和启发,考生应该注意,利用这些信息,这些信息在很大程度上影响到审题主旨的确立,有些考生由于没有看到或忽视了图画下面给出的提示语而对作文要深挖的主旨不能很好地理解,比如2010年的图画作文:文化火锅(附加信息:文化“火锅”,既美味又营养),它的寓意是:文化揭示出文章的话题,火锅在这里是喻体,它的显著特点是可以将多种材料混合,糅合,比喻多种文化的交融,美味是指各种各样的文化丰富了人们的精神生活,营养指的是文化交融能给人类带来很多好处。而当年由于很多考生在审题上忽视了附加信息而失去了好多的分数,比如,把文化放在火锅里乱七八糟地煮,说明文化遭受污染,说明人们不重视文化,呼吁文化保护,文化全球化的利弊分析等。以上所列举出的对作文主旨的分析都是断章取义,凭空臆造,想当然。所以万学海文建议2012年的考生在写这类作文的时候,一定不要忘记要好好瞅瞅图画下面的附加信息,有时字体很小,我们更需要留心。
词汇。
词汇是英语的基础,是备考各类型题目的基础,写作也不例外,如果词汇不够丰富,不会灵活运用,特别是在考研英语写作中,如果不掌握一些增分的亮点词汇,是写不出一篇优美的200个单词左右的图画作文的。所以万学海文提醒2012年的考生在平时备考的时候,一定要积累相关的词汇,以便在考场上得心应手。
3,内容的完整性。
文章的组织是否连贯,词的衔接是否到位等。因此,在此提醒考生应该熟记一些表示衔接的词或短语,兹列举一些如下:
转折关系:but, however, yet, on the contrary, contrary to, in contrast to, whereas, rather than, instead of, conversely
让步关系:although, even, despite, nevertheless, as, still, much as, anyhow, in any case, whatever
总分关系:for example(分), such as(分), including(分), in sum(总), in general(总), on the whole(总)
因果关系:because, due to, in that, owing to, since, now that, lead to, contribute to, result in, in view of, so, hence, therefore, consequently
递进关系:still, indeed, furthermore, besides, in addition, what is more
条件关系:if, in the event of, so long as, unless, only if ,in case, provided that,并列关系:and, as well as, likewise, not...only...but also...时间关系:when, while, as, after, before, since, until, as soon as, once, simultaneously, at the same time, whenever
目的关系:so that, in order that, lest, for fear that,经典句型:this is an interesting and thought—provoking picture.As is depicted(conveyed, illustrated)in the picture, we can deduce that„
The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound The two pictures reveal a not uncommon social phenomenon that„
考生在备考图画作文的时候,万学海文考研辅导老师温馨小提示:一定要认真审题,揣摩作者的意图,以便在文章主旨的理解和结构的搭建上做到心中有数,考生还要特别注意图画下面附加信息的作用,它的作用千万不能小觑,除此外,相关词汇的积累,衔接词、短语的积累也是十分重要的。
2012考研英语大作文写作模式指导
考研作文分为Part A、Part B两部分,也就是我们通常所说的大作文、小作文,考生在短期内通过努力可以快速提高。一般以漫画为主是大作文的考试风格,题材多选择议论文。一般漫画都直观、简单,考生的写作重点着重于下:
一、描写漫画:50个单词左右。该部分写作要求语言简练、无语病。
二、110-150个单词左右,按照题目要求的步骤分段写作,题目可能是要求考生解释图片隐含的深意表明立场并举例(如2007年),也有可能是反省图片反映现象产生的后果并表述自己观点(2006年),等。我们选取万学海文《2012考研英语历年真题权威解析(2002-2011)》中的部分优秀例句为考生复习大作文进行参考。
大作文的构造一般包括开头段、扩展段(可以有多个)和结尾段。开头段和结尾段通常短于扩展段。
一、开头段
简要描述图片:
As is vividly depicted in the picture...As is portrayed in the enlightening picture,...As is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that...As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relationship between...and...In the picture presented to us, we can see...The picture symbolically depicts that...The terrible scene depicted in the cartoon shows that...The picture vividly shows...The above two pictures have shaped contrast to each other.As is shown in the first drawing,...In contrast,...The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other.In one picture,....But in the other,...The most striking feature of the drawing is...The purpose of the picture is to show us that...We can deduce form this picture that...二、扩展段
基本要求:
1.篇幅长于开头段、结尾段;
2.每段都有相应的主题句;
3.包含论证、解释、评论等;
常用句型:
On the one hand, many people hold a view that...On the other hand, others argue that...This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that...The picture conveys a deep and soul-stirring meaning.Though this picture only describes..., yet it demonstrates a universal law that...The drawing sets us thinking too much due to...It is most likely that the drawer means to compare...to...in the drawing and reflect a problem in...For one thing,...For another,...It can be easily spotted that...It goes without saying that the picture indicates that...Obviously, the picture indicates that...Undoubtedly, the picture arouses deep concern over the issue of...Sample as it is, the meaning conveyed by the picture is clear and profound.三、结尾段 提出看法,常用句型:
What it comes to...This picture does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that....In sum, it is essential for us to...Therefore, it is imperative that we should take some effective measures.Only in this way can the tragedy described above be avoided and only in this way can the society become more harmonious to live.The answer seems self-evident: what we should learn...Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive attitude.Only by..., can we demonstrate grace under pressure and turn our dreams into reality.We can frequently use the drawings to enlighten people to...It is, therefore, necessary that some effective steps be made to...All things considered, I hold that...常用词语:
1、总结关系过渡词语
generally, in general, generally speaking, as a general rule, to take the above opinion to an extreme, to take the idea further, to some extent;as for me, as far as I am concerned, in my opinion, on a larger scale, in one sense, in a way,undoubtedly, obviously, in terms of, in conclusion, in a word, in summary,in brief, to sum up, on the whole, to conclude...2、比较对比关系过渡词语
in common, in the same way, the same as, like, likewise, similarly, equally important, whereas, yet, but, however, nevertheless, otherwise, on the contrary, on the one hand, on the other hand, rather than, conversely, instead, in/by contrast...3、列举关系过渡词语
such as, as an example, for example, for instance, as a case in point, thus, first and foremost, last but not least, first of all, in the first place, to start with, to begin with, also, next, besides, moreover, furthermore, what is more, in addition(to that), for one thing, for another thing, eventually, finally, initially...4、因果关系过渡词语
as, for, since, hence, therefore, accordingly, consequently, due to, owing to, thanks to, because(of), on account of, result in(from),as a result of, as a consequence, for the reason that...5、让步关系过渡词语
Although, despite, after all, granted that, even though, in spite of...6、强调关系过渡词语
especially, particularly, above all, most important of all, surely, certainly, obviously, no doubt, to be sure, in deed, in fact, even worse, needless to say, anyway...大作文五大命题规律
历年的考研作文都是与当下结合非常紧密的题材,考生也都会按照相应的方法进行复习。那么,作为考研英语的最后一道题目,大作文也有自己的命题规律。万学海文英语考研辅导专家们根据多年的辅导经验总结出了以下五大规律,以供2012年的考研同学们进行参考。
1.关注热点。
2006年关注偶像崇拜现象,2009年关注网络问题,2011年的考察环保问题,都是大众或者是青年人关注的热点。在年底时可以从网络上搜集到本年份大事记,从而有侧重的准备相关词汇和句型。万学海文提醒2012年的考生注意:出题者为避免作文题目被猜中,往往可能会将热点延迟进行命题。所以考生在准备大作文的时候可以参考本年和前一年所发生的大事进行预测。
2.与大学英语四、六级考试有关联。
2008年6月的CET6作文题目:《电子书是否可以替代传统书籍?》,2009年考研英语作文的题目是《网络的近与远》;2009年12月的CET6作文关注“参加各种艺术培训班”,2009年6月的CET4作文围绕着“博物馆”,2010年考研英语大作文题目是《文化火锅》,可见,考研大作文题目偶尔与四级考试的作文题目相关,常常与六级考试的作文题目相关,近期CET考试的作文题目为考生们提供了练笔、积累素材的好资源。
3.考题倾向于大型宏观话题。
2001年爱心,2003年成长,2005年家庭,2010年文化,2011年环保。试卷中给出的图片、图表只是表达局部或单个情况,入口小,话题大,命题从来不在细枝末节具体环节、或个别事件上做文章。社会积极面是命题主旨的趋向,考生需要以成熟主流的心态来思考问题的积极解决方案、在图画寓意中发现哲理。
4.避开政治和敏感话题
为避免过多的争议,政治话题因其观点难以达成普遍共识,是非曲直难以一时断定,不适合成为考题。敏感性话题同样也不适合成为考研英语的作文题目。
5.命题中的“和谐社会”倾向
围绕主流思想和时代背景,考研作文命题团队已经逐渐形成了以“和谐社会”为核心的命题思路和模式。可以用和谐的三个不同层次对“和谐社会”倾向下的作文话题进行划分:和谐发展之——个体,和谐发展之——个人、他人与社会,和谐发展之——人与自然。密切关注此类话题,掌握与“和谐”相关语词备考,是考生备考的当务之急。
第五篇:考研英语高分经验
过来人分享:考研英语80分高分经验分享
来源:万学海文【考试大:考试专家,成就梦想!】2010年11月24日
把考英语的体会当作重点介绍给大家,一方面是因为我考的比较理想,但更重要的一点是复习英语我确实有很多的感触至今仍记忆尤新,我从心底愿与你们分享我备考英语的酸甜苦辣。
在2010年的考研考试中,我意料之中的考上了报考的学校,可也意料之外的英语得了80分的高分。在专业课和公共课的所有科目里,我在英语上下的功夫最大,格外用心,也确实总结了一些实际可用的经验。
之所以要把考英语的体会当作重点介绍给大家,一方面是因为我考的比较理想,但更重要的一点是复习英语我确实有很多的感触至今仍记忆尤新,我从心底愿与你们分享我备考英语的酸甜苦辣。
从心底接受学习:“心勤”
“书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟”,学习任何知识尤其是语言都是没有捷径可寻的,如果说“书山”真的有路的话,那只有“勤”,但这个“勤”还必须遵循学习的规律方能攀上“书山”见到一些风景得到一些体会。“勤”的具体形式因人而异,因为每个人都有自己的学习方法,但无论形式如何不同,在本质上都是一样的,就是 “心勤”,只有用心才能得到最好的学习花朵。所以我学习英语的最大的体会就是:遵循学习规律,用心做好每一步。用心记单词:联想法
大家知道,单词是学习英语的基础。单词记不住,一切都是空话,想最对试题更是痴人说梦。所以要学好和考好英语我们必须把单词放在第一位,花费大量的时间去记和背它们。但是记忆单词的方法因人而异,有的同学喜欢默读,有的同学习惯通过上下文情景记忆单词。而我记单词的唯一方法就是先读再出声的背,同时拿笔写下我学的单词以及我学这个或这些单词时的灵感或者体悟。
大学四年,我的英语一直都是系里比较优秀的,我觉得这样的背单词的方式对我帮助很大。具体到考研词汇,我同样是那样背的,只是我背的更加用心,而且需要强调的是我不只用心背更要反复背,我背了两种类型的考研词汇,一种是分课带有文章的,一种是纯单词的,这两种词汇我背了五六遍!当然我背的时间是随着我对单词的熟悉和理解的加深而逐渐变少的,所以大家千万不要怕多背几遍单词,熟能生巧!但是记住无论你什么时候背单词,都要专心都要用心,只有那样你才能巩固已学的发现未知的,在熟悉和联想中达到温故而知新的效果。
读不懂也能做对:语感的功劳
很多考生都有共同的感受就是有时候读懂了但是做不对题目,有时候读不懂反而能做对题。尤其是对于语言的学习,语感是非常重要的。我培养和增强语感的办法就是每天都做到听说读写英语。
关于听,我当时是听英语真题和一些英文电影歌曲之类的,现在听力放在复试当中了,所以没有必要专门听做测试型的那种听力了,但听力还是以稍难度清晰些为好,这有利于培
养你对英语的认知与热爱。
关于说,我是有空就跟我的学习伙伴说两句英语的,感觉比较有意思吧。
关于读,我认为是最重要的了,可以说每天早上我都花费大量的时间读英语,最初是对21世纪或者英语世界等报刊杂志上的英语短篇什么的,后来快考试了我就读我作过的真题,读真题上面的文章尤其我做错的题和作文范文。这个方法我自己的感受就是通过读真题,不但培养了我对考研试题的语感,有加深了对真题理解,是一个知道错在哪里又对在哪里的过程,而这我觉得最重要不过了。
关于写,我是经常写英语日记或者感想什么的,后来做真题时我是每做一套题都把作文也按规定时间和要求写下来的了,做完题后我还要对照和抄下范文,总之,从开始做真题,我每天至少写一篇英语短文,我觉得这也很有用的,它可以在提高你的写作能力的同时给你放松和自信,使你有良好的应试心态。
滚瓜烂熟于心:真题
首先,一定要认真对待真题,可以说,你把历年真题做熟了理解透了,即使你其他任何英语资料都不看你也能取得高分;其次,要制定明确的做题计划,比如每周做几次还有什么时间做等;再次,要完整地做真题,就是说,要在规定的时间内把整套题包括作文都做完,因为做真题就应该在考试一样,这样可以不断增强你应试的能力和轻松自如的心态;最后,要反复做真题,在反复做的过程中对做过的尤其是做错的题要多问为什么,只有这样你才能达到使真题和真正的考试融为一体的境界!
我当时做真题大概做了五六遍吧,后来考试时我觉得自己都“麻木”了,没有觉得考试题和真题有什么不同,我认为这很好的。
轻松备战:不畏挫折的心态
关于心态,我想说的是,一定要学会和保持放松,只要你努力了,任何时候都不要放弃,即使偶尔遇到了挫折。记得考试前两天我还做了一套卷,结果算下来,我恐怕只能得60多分,当时我真是有些崩溃了------但我不想放弃,我想什么都不管了,只管考试就可以了,反正我一直都在努力了,结果我把握不住也没什么遗憾的!事实证明我的所想所做都是正确的,在上了考场后,我依然按照自己复习时的套路答题,很从容的提前5分钟就把题做完了,考下来感觉很好,最后结果证明也比较理想!
记住只要你努力了就不要考虑后果,人生总有适合你去的地方的,即使失败了又何妨!但是,放松决不意味着你不认真,考试那两天无论如何你要保持紧张而清醒的头脑,记住什么事情都不能打扰你做完做好你应该做的事,“行百里者半九十”,最后是关键这句话一定要记在心中。