第一篇：2013考研英语写作高分相互信任
2013考研英语写作高分范文相互信任
摘要：2013考研英语(一)写作高分范文:相互信任，查看更多2013年考研英语作文优秀范文、热点话题及常用句型请登录新东方网！
人与人之间的相互帮助问题
图画描述: 在第一幅画中，一大群人围着一个躺在地上的人，七嘴八舌的猜测着。
在第二幅画中，警察问在场的人们为什么不把他送医院，人们以各种借口搪塞着。
Two pictures above describe a story which we would never wish to encounter.In the first one, a large crowd gathered around a man lying on the ground, gabbling the cause of the accident.In the second picture, a policeman was asking those who were present, “Why didn't you send him to hospital?” They faltered out various pretexts.It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to this most unfavorable social phenomenon.Many people are used to finding all kinds of excuses to shirk their responsibilities of helping those who are in need of help.In their eyes, their own daily businesses are always more important than those of the strangers.This phenomenon will bring a series of harmful consequences.First, when people refuse to take care of the strangers, the danger of accidents will be much higher, because you have only a small group of people to rely on whenever emergency arises.Second, the possibility of attaining a happy life will be much smaller.If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration, the society will be full of selfish people.The social cost of achieving success will remain high before cooperation becomes a habit.Helping others is equal to helping ourselves.Only by extending our helping hands to others when necessary can we enjoy a happy and secure life.
第二篇：考研英语写作怎么考高分
考研英语备考攻略：写作高分秘籍
考研英语写作怎么考高分?又是一个炎热的暑假，考研英语复习已经进入强化提高阶段。尽管天气炎热，容易浮躁，但为了实现自己的梦想，老师还是希望各位小伙伴可以沉下心来认真复习。在考研英语满分100分中，写作部分就占了30分，可见写作不容忽视。下面由太奇教育考研组老师将对试卷中的写作专项给大家从题型、复习方法等方面作出详细的讲解。
(一)题型介绍
写作是英语试卷中的第三部分，主要考查考生的书面表达能力，该部分由A、B30分。
A部分要求考生根据情景写出一篇约100分;B部分要求考生根据提示信息写出一篇160-200定情景、图、表等，满分20分。
鉴于B
(二)复习方法
1.精读提高实力
考研英语真题中的文章都是出题人从等杂志中选择的，文章地道，题材多样，2.3.默写
背完之后，不少小伙伴都反映记不住，老爱忘。根据艾宾浩斯的遗忘曲线来看，我们记住的事物具有容易遗忘的特点。因此必须调动多种感官同时记忆，并多次记忆，这样才能记的更长久。因此，太奇教育考研组老师建议小伙伴们在背诵完经典范文后再进行默写，并仔细对比原文，发现不足之处，包括在单词、标点等方面的不足，并在今后的背诵学习中多加注意。
4.仿写
有了前面的积累之后，相信你们肚子里已经有很多料了，太奇教育考研组老师希望此时小伙伴们能够模仿之前背诵的文章，写出新的文章。作文一定要多写多练，每次都找到自己的有点与不足，优点继续保持，不足之处要不断改进。
5.掌握技巧
有了前面的四步积累，太奇教育考研组老师相信小伙伴们已经掌握了写作技巧。但由于考场上时间有限，太奇教育考研组老师建议小伙伴们根据之前的积累形成自己的万能框架，运用于考场写作中，这可达到事半功倍的效果。但值得注意的是，框架最多只能占作文总字数的一半，剩下的一半要根据实际考题现场发挥。不然一味的死搬硬套，不灵活运用，会出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的结果。
考研英语写作怎么考高分?总的来说，写作方面的讲解多多练习，不断进步，最终实现自己的梦想，考入理想中的学校。
第三篇：2014考研英语写作高分句型汇总
体验式英语教育先锋美联英语
2014考研英语作文高分句型：
过渡句结构
1)This is not necessarily the case, however.2)We want to keep up with the times.3)Good intentions alone are not enough.4)It was indeed the case.5)But modern research has found that this is not so.6)But it is now thought that this in not so.7)What does this mean as far as our flying saucer program is concerned?
8)As for as I am concerned, some days are lucky while others seem marked by bad fortune.9)And that last ounce is what really counts.10)What is the point of being rich?(富有的意义何在呢?)
11)What other power matters? [其他的权力有什么重要的(要紧的)呢?
12)Yet there are advantages to underground life.2014考研英语作文高分句型：
主语从句结构
1)What makes it rather disturbing(令人烦恼)was the arbitrary circumstances both of my arrest and my subsequent fate in court.2)But what was most shocking at the time was the thins my release from the charge so clearly depended on.3)What I remember then is not her failure, but her courage, the courage to go ahead.2014考研英语作文高分句型：
递进式结构
1)Fresh vegetables are nutritious(有营养的);furthermore, they re cheaper than frozen ones.2)We will not only bring joy into other people’s lives, but also added happiness into our own.3)But teaching offers something beside money and power;it offers love.Not only the love of learning and go books and ideas, but also the love that a teacher feels for his students.4)Not only should you limber up(做准备活动)before exercising, but you must also be sure to cool down afterwards.5)They do not seem to like one anther very much.Neither are they too keen on conventional people(正统的人)
2014考研英语作文高分句型：
体验式英语教育先锋美联英语
动名词或分词结构
1)Improving your study habits will improve your grades.2)Teaching gives me pace, and variety, and challenge, and the opportunity to keep on learning.3)Being very short of money and wanting to do something useful, I applied.4)Having little in common is a frequent cause of divorce.5)Owing sets of books is useless unless you read them.6)Drinking, eating, and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young person’s health.7)The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience.
第四篇：考研英语写作高分攻略1
§考研英语写作高分攻略背诵版（1）
第一章 图 画 作 文§
第1节 人生价值
【要点提示】
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图画作文也叫漫画作文，出题方式一般是提供一幅图画，并且图上带有一点文字提示。然后题目要求考生对图画进行简单描述，并且说明其内在寓意和考生自己的看法。如此一来就需要考生对图画进行细致认真的观察，获取有效信息，这样才能正确把握图画的寓意。为了方便考生复习，我们海天英语教学团队总结出有关“考研英语图画作文十大经典话题”的重要图画启示以及相关的核心表达、句式和模版来供考生背诵。
首先，在第一节大家需要掌握的是关于人生价值的漫画给我们的启示，一般可分为以下几种：
1）人要有乐观的心态，树立自信，只有这样才能获得成功；2）逆境无处不在，人们应当积极面对，用坚强的意志去战胜它；3）寻找人生的真谛，取得事业成功，向社会贡献力量才是人生的奋斗目标；4）知足常乐；5）只有真正了解自己，才能克服人生道路中的困难；6）金钱不是万能的；7）人生就像一盘棋，要统筹安排，不能轻易放弃；8）人们要懂得化阻力为动力。
【核心表达】
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self-delusionn.自欺
self-assessmentn.自我评价
ridiculen.&vt.嘲笑，奚落
blessingn.祝福
perspectiven.看法，观点
optimistn.乐观主义者
arrangementn.整理，布置；约定
impulsivenessn.冲动
possessvt.拥有
ragevi.发怒，怒斥
appreciatevt.感谢，感激；欣赏，赏识
cultivatevt.培养；陶冶，建立，加强（友谊）
overestimatev.高估
underestimatev.低估
surmountv.战胜，克服
harborvt.心怀，怀有 n.港湾，海港
realistica.现实（主义）的narrow-mindeda.气量小的，小心眼的contenteda.心满意足的，满足的sobera.冷静的，清醒的；审慎的determinanta.决定的persistenta.坚持不懈的；持续的，持久的cynicala.愤世嫉俗的；悲观的harmoniousa.和睦的，友好的；和谐的，协调的triviala.琐细的；不重要的；无价值的despiteprep.不管，尽管
carry weight 对„„重要，有影响力
all walks of life 各行各业
take into account 考虑，注意，顾及，体谅
succumb to 屈服
more often than not 往往，多半
long for 渴望
take a second look at 重新观察
owe to 把„„归功于
can’t afford 承担不起，买不起
in addition 此外
as long as 只要
【黄金句式】
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1.We have to admit that…(我们不得不承认„„)
2.The aim of this picture can be interpreted as follows:…（这幅图的目的可以解释为如下意思：）
3.As is vividly depicted in the picture above…（正如上图形象描述地那样，„„）
4.Just as is revealed in the picture above,…（正如上图所揭示的那样，„„）
5.Looking at the drawing above, …（看上图，„„）
6.The implied meaning subtly conveyed in the picture should be taken into account in this way:…（图片所表达的内在含义应当可以解释为„„）
7.From my point of view,…（从我的观点来看，„„）
8.Only by means of doing…（只有通过做„„的方式）
9.Under such rough condition,…（在如此艰苦的条件下，„„）
10.Equip ourselves with…（用„„武装我们自己）
11.It is widely acknowledged that…（众所周知„„）
12.Most people are of the opinion that…（许多人认为„„）
13.When it comes to…（当谈到/涉及到„„）
14.…can’t help but leave one impressed with…（„„不得不对„„留下深刻印象）
15.A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…（越来越多的人开始意识到„„）
16.If this is indeed the case, then…（如果事实确实如此，那么„„）
17.One of the most important traits of …is…, another is…, and still another is …(„„最重要的特征之一是„„，其次是„„，还有一个是„„)
18.We can deduce from this picture that…(从这幅图中我们可以推断„„)
19.The picture indicates/ conveys the meaning that…（这幅图指出/传达了„„）
【万能模版】
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模版一
________________.Actually, what the drawing reveals is thought-provoking.Needless to say, this picture aims at revealing a philosophy of human’s life: ________________________________.As a matter of fact, _________________.Many people believe that _______________.However, more often than not,_______________.There are many ways to _____________.First, _____________.Second, _________.Third,_______________.To sum up , _________________________________________________________.模版二
_________________________________________________________.__________________________________, ______________ happens to all of us, we should try to persist through the obstacle course of life with strong will._______________________________.There are many examples of men and women who achieved greatness in the end despite facing deep hurdles（困难）once in their lifetime.______________________________________________________.All these set us good examples.______________________________, we will surely be able to move ahead and grow in full bloom like the flowers in crevice(岩石、墙等的裂缝).模版三
According to the drawing above, ________________________.Although this is a very simple drawing, its intended meaning is meaningful and thought-provoking.It is wise to compare _______to______.As far as I’m concerned, there are______ reasons.To begin with, ___________________________________________________.Attitude decides everything.We should be an________, try to be_________.Furthermore, ___________________________.It is the same to life.We should be always clear about ________________.Eventually,______________________________________________.Similarly, life is not always smooth to each of us.Giving up in half way is irresponsible, we should _______ all the time.In conclusion, __________________not only_______, but also_________________.模版四
The first drawing presents us with a scene that_________________________.While in the second drawing,______________________.These two pictures set me thinking for a long time.Gradually, I find that the drawer may want to tell us a lesson:______________________________________________.We have to admit that many _____ are due to______.In my view, there are still some ways to overcome it.Firstly,_______________.Secondly, ___________.Thirdly,__________________.If we could do so, surely, the chances of being _______would be doubled.模版五
The drawing depicts ______________________________________________.The drawing intends to show us that__________________________________.In fact,_________________.The drawing reminds us that it is important to have a clear picture of the_________ we face in life.Examples of this phenomenon can be found in many other situations.For instance,_____________________________________________________________.模版六
It goes without saying that this
In picture this aims at revealing a current problem:_________________________._________in front of challenges.This kind of situation drawing, _______________.However, ___________________lack almost every aspect of our ______________________________________.Obviously, can be seen in
life._____________________.Sometimes,_________________________________.In a word,_______________________________________________________.模版七
As is shown in the above picture,_____________________________________.Take_________ for example.Though he/she is ___________（e.g.deaf/handicapped）, he/she never gave up.That’s why he/she became a successful__________ at last.We are well-being and much more fortunate than______, is there any excuse that we don’t work hard to pursuit our life goals?
Meanwhile,_____________________ is also necessary.Never lose heart, you will make it.In short, we should take efforts just because we are living on this planet.It is then our value will be realized and __________________________.模版八
This cartoon humorously presents a scene of _____________________________.However, at the critical moment,_______________________.Likewise,_________.Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the importance of _________.On account of the quickening pace of life,______________________.Suppose ________________.Therefore,_________________________________.Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive attitude.A case in point is ___________________________________________________.As for me,____________.As the saying goes,______________.Only by building strong ______________ can we demonstrate__________ and turn our dreams into reality.
第五篇：2011考研英语写作高分秘籍 应用文
2011考研英语写作高分秘籍 应用文
2011年考研临近，考研教育专家根据2011年考研写作的命题要求，特别整理了写作高分秘籍与大家分享，希望能在最后的时间里帮助大家最大限度的提高写作能力！
第四篇 应用文
满分策略：
4.1信函写作：个人书信
语域使用：正式—使用礼貌表达，不用缩略语（对公）
半正式—可以使用缩略和口语表达（对私）
非正式（一般不考）——It depends
组成部分：称呼、正文、落款
4.1.1格式：称呼、落款、正文
4.1.2内容
三段（8句）：写作目的段、细化段、感谢或者期待。
4.1.3各种信函内容安排
建议信：2007年及2009年PartA真题及解析：
基本结构和常用句型：
Dear„
自我介绍，赞扬在先，仍需改进，提出建议。
建议细节
期望改进，表示感谢。
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
与投诉信比较：仍然以提建议为主：无需赞扬，直接表明写信目的—即提建议：最后无需感谢，只需表示期待改进。
常用句型：
I am writing with my suggestion about„„„
I would like to suggest that„
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful
I would like to extend my appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration
We would like to draw your attention to something you have obviously failed to notice（投诉信）
I am writing to express my concern|dissatisfaction|disappointment about„（投诉信）
To improve the situation，it is advisable for you to take the following measures（投诉信）
We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind（投诉信）
致歉信：2008PartA真题及解析
基本结构和常用句型：
Dear„
表明写信目的：道歉
阐述道歉原因，并提出解决方法。
再次道歉。
常用句型：
I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to „
Here is my deepest apology for „„
I would like to express my apologies for not being able to„
I am writing to you with some embarrassment and many apologies.Excuse me for my carelessness in making such a mess
I am really sorry for the trouble.Would you mind if I „。？
Would it be convenient for you „？
To make up for the inconvenience caused，I would like to „„
Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.申请信：2006年PartA 真题及解析（申请信）
基本结构和常用句型：
Dear„
告知信息来源及写信目的突出重点的自我介绍，附简历
表示感谢。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
I learnt from the newspaper that you are wanting an accountant and I would like to apply for the job
Sb，suggested me to write to you about the medical physicist position at ABC Med-Instrument Corporation
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information about my undergraduate work.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss further how my qualifications meet the needs of your organization.Thank you for your time and consideration.辞职信：2005年PartA真题及解析（辞职信）：
基本结构和常用句型：
Dear„，写信目的表明要辞职。
给出辞职原因。
感谢栽培并表示抱歉。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
I am sorry to tell you that I decided to quit the job of being a „职业。
I am writing to inform you of my decision： I am going to quit my present job.Please accept my apology.I have been trying in vain to convince myself that the job is interesting.I highly appreciate the invaluable experience and happy days working here.Thank you for your patience，understanding，and trust.询问信：考研英语大纲样题应用文部分（询问信）：
基本结构和常用句型：
Dear „，自我介绍，表明写信目的是咨询某事。
询问细节。
感谢及相关信息。
Your sincerely
Li Ming
常用句型：
27.I am writing this letter to inquire about „
28.I want to/would like to know „
29.I wonder if „
30.Would it be possible for you to „？
31.How should I pay for these books ？—by cash or by other means ？
32.Finally，if I order these books now，when can I get them ？ How will these books be delivered to my house？
33.I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply.邀请信：
基本结构：
Dear„，发出邀请。
为何邀请细节。
期望参加。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
We are having a farewell party/a gather together/meeting/seminar in（place）on（date）at（time）。Would you like to come？（不太正式）
It is my honor to inform you that there is an academic meeting in（place）on（date）at（time）。（正式）
We would be too glad to invite you as an expert to our school for the inquiry of studying abroad.If you have no other plans for this weekend night，will you do us a favor of going to our party？
接收邀请与谢绝邀请的表达法：都要表示感谢。
Accept the invitation：
Success is the last persistence at the toughest moment.成功是最艰难时刻的坚持。
Thank you very much for your invitation.It‘s our great pleasure to accept your invitation.Nothing would give us greater pleasure than accepting your kind invitation.Refuse the invitation：
Thank you so much for your invitation，but I have had plans at the time.If you don‘t mind，let’s make an appointment next time when you are available.I regret that I can‘t make it because of a sudden illness/full schedule/business trip.范文解析：
Dear Professor Wang，It is my honor to inform you that there is a “Culture Festival” held in mu school.Would you like to give us an excellent lecture on Phychology in the auditorium of our campus on sept.13th at 6：30 P.M.？
Since phychology has caused more and more concerns among the students，and you are an expert in the area，we all expect your acceptance and your wonderful lecture.I very much hope than you will be able to attend and give us a talk in your branch.If you have any question.Please contact me.Look forward to hearing your lecture.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
感谢信：
基本结构
Dear„，表示感谢。
感谢缘由及内心感受。
再次感谢，寄予希望。
常用句型：
I sincerely appreciate your kindness and generosity.Thank you ever much for the latest information.Please accept out sincerest thanks for what you have done for us.（heartfelt gratitude）
I don‘t know how to thank you for such generous behavior.It is something that I will cherish for a long time to come.I am now writing to express my great appreciation for the timely help you offered.It was considerate of you to do me a great favor.I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation.Many thanks again for your generous hospitality.Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you.范文解析：
Dear Jim，I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day，when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid，I fear that the Consequences might have been much more serious.Everynoe agrees that it was your quick-witted 9 response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome„„
Although nowdays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish，we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you，this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
祝贺信：
基本结构：
Dear„。，表示祝贺，为之高兴。
祝贺缘由，劳有所获。
寄予期望，取得更大成就。
再次祝贺。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
Congratulations to you no getting the scholarship.I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations no your achievement/success/graduation.10
What wonderful news！I know how happy you must be at the news of your promotion/election.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on your graduation/getting such a good job.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.范文解析：
Dear Mr.Smith，I was very happy to learn that you have been elected President of the Seotland-China Associatioin and Iwould like，on behalf of the Chinese People‘s Association for Friendship with Foreign Countries and in my own name，to express to you our warmest congratulations.I hope that during your tenore of office the relations of friendship and cooperation that already exist between our two organizations will be further developed.Let us join our efforts to make greater contributions to the promotion of mutual understanding and friendship between the people‘s of China and Scotland.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
慰问信：
基本结构：
Dear„，表示同情，进行安慰，11
鼓励其努力，在此表示同情，并希望其早日复原。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
I just can not tell you how sorry I was to learn of your unhappy experience/injury/accident/divorce.I felt very sorry indeed when I was informed of your sickness.I wish there were something I could say or do to ease your sense of loss/to soften your grief.I know there were no words that can be a comfort to you now.I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health/get well again.Please don‘t hesitate to call on me if there is anything I can do now and always.范文解析：
Dear Li Gang，I was really shocked andsaddened to hear of your unhappy experience in the earthquake.There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief，but I would express my deepest sympathy.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it，and that it 12 will be useful ai your present moment.What‘s more，please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back to school.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
4.2 备忘录/告示类应用文写作（Memorandum/Notice）
基本结构：
TO：
FROM：
SUBJECT：
DATE：（month day，year）
正文
签名
模拟题及范文：
Directions：
You are an active member of the student newspaper.The newspaper is currently looking for journalists for the summer semester.Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.Date： August 10，2005
To： All students
From： Li Ming
4.3 摘要写作（Abstract）
This article focuses on the „。
This thesis discuss/analyzes„。
This paper provides an overview of „
This paper presents up-to-date information on „
1、简单概括
2、描写画面内容，两句话描写一幅图。
3、点明中心：重点又是新起点。
This is a very interesting and though-provoking picture.1 as is vividly depicted in the picture，the goal keeper thought he was too small for the gate and was afraid that he could not keep the ball from entering the gate.But what the player，who was ready to shoot，thought about the goal keeper could not help us thinking the truth of the picture it conveys.In his eyes，the goal keeper was so strong that he had almost covered the whole gate.And little did he have the chance to win.2 obviously，the two players looked at the same thing in a different angle.3（in different angles）
简单概括
描写画面内容，每幅图分开描述，并递进关系。
点明中心，从不同视角看待同一问题。
2.现象简介
Today，advertisements is mounting numbers are appearing on the TV screen.1 they are not only shown before and after all kinds of programs —— news，weather forecasts and quiz shows，etc.—— but even interrupt dramas and movies，2 and annoy the viewers.3
1、概括介绍
2、细节介绍：怎么个多法儿——是节目前后和中间都有
3、带来的后果就是激怒观众。
3.寓意象征
What a vivid and accrate picture it is when describing the meaning of love in the dark.1 As is shown in the picture，the love is just like the light in the picture，which seems insignificant in the sun，but it certainly shines brighter in the dark.2 in other words，the darker the place is，the more precious the light will be.3 love is somewhat the same.It surely means much moer to the man who is in great difficulty than to the one who is in comforts.4
简要评价
对画面的简单描述。（结合love对画面进行分析）
寓意说明，符合题目要求
结论：灯光在越微弱的地方越明亮，爱心在越需要的地方越有价值
Species‘extinction in America.Facing the figures，we can only admit that America’s population growth has had undesirable effect on its wildlife and will still pose a formidable threat to its wildlife resources if sufficient care is not given.3
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1、总括介绍了图画内容（运用对比，强调后者）
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2、特别好的过渡方式：不是描述胜过描述
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3、结论：如果不足以重视，结果不堪设想
4、原因分析
（As far as I am concerned，there are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon.）1 First and foremost，the reasons for this phenomenon are that TV is the most efficient and rapid way of dissemination（传播）information.2 As China develops its highly competitive market economy，manufacturers and sales people（salespersons）need to inform the general public of the latest commodities that are available.3 Furthermore，TV stations use the money that they earn from showing the advertisements to produce more programs.Last but not least，it is necessary to keep consumers informed of the range of（the）products that they may choose from.（原文的过渡出现在下一段）
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1、阐述中心，或者引导本段。
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2、例举原因
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3、对已经提出原因的拓展
However，the tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease，1 According to the given figures，the tobacco production in 1994 was 14.364 billion pounds while in 1995 it reduced to 14.2 billion pounds.This is mainly because 2 more and more people have become aware of the harm of smoking to human brings.Many of them resist the addiction to tobacco and advise people around not to smoke.Furthermore，governments of many countries realizing the serious effects of tobacco have taken effective measures to call on people to give up smoking.So I believe a healthy tomorrow of less tobacco will be achieved through efforts of every person.3
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1、阐述中心
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2、列举原因，this 作过渡词
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3、如果减少吸烟人群，可能产生的结果（注意命题的积极倾向，展望未来式很合命题者口味）
5、利弊分析
In the country，on the other hand，one can enjoy the advantages of fresh air and food，and a more relaxed（relaxing）life style.Housing is usually spacious and inexpensive in the country.I and，as for recreation，what could be more relaxing than a stroll down a country lane amid beautiful scenery？ 2 However，there are disadvantages of living in either the city or the country.3 City air tends to be polluted，and the streets are always crowded and noisy.In the country，on the other hand，the lack of stimulating activities can make a person feel bored and isolated.4
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1、列举乡村居住的优势
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2、对优势的拓展说明
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3、过渡说明：劣势开始
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4、列举无论城乡居住皆有劣势
6、举例说明
It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon，but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily life.1 Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society.From departments of government to common shopping centers，many businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers.2 They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent service.3 As a matter of fact，many of these businesses claim in the same way that（比较）the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay eggs.4
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1、过渡：第一段说到可笑，下面就谈不可笑——连接
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2、例子：商场、政府的承诺行为
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3、拓展：深化承诺行为的细节
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4、结论：同母鸡下蛋的承诺一样虚无没有价值
※表示性质，代替adj.=of +n.（小作文高分必杀）
e.g.helpful=of any help assistant=of any assistance good=of any good harmful=of any harm
The following examples will support this point.1 In schools，a unit-exam not only declares the end of the former unit，but also acts as a reminder of the preview work for the next unit.In the business field，what a CEO needs to do at the end of a year is more than review and summarize（review and summarizing）。It is the time to formulate and effective and efficient development plan for next year.2 Just turn back to the sports ground.（句号结束）although in front of the end there isn‘t a real start——arrowhead，there surely exists an invisible one sprouting（appearing）in every athlete’s mind，blooming（being）the training strategy of the preparation for next competition.3
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1、承上启下
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2、举例论证
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3、举例的同时说明结论：终点又是新起点，正是这种心态成为下次比赛成功的技巧或策略。
7、判断评论
It is clear that promise is what you claim you can do or you will do，not what you really are or you are expected to be.1 Generally speaking，it is good and sometimes necessary to make commitment to people，but promising what you must or should do can be considered a kind of cheating.2 What the cartoon really aims at is not the funny picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our society.3
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1、既点名了本段主题：谈承诺，又是一个定义，起承上启下作用。
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2、自己的建议。
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3、再次强调“承诺”这一社会现象。
8、问题建议
Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts，but also by people in all walks（职业、行业）of life.1 The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves.Thus，it‘s high time that parents，educators and the government made concerted（共同努力的，同心协力的，conert得来）efforts to put an end to this situation.2（家长，老师和政府应该怎么做）
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1、引出本段主题，儿童教育的现状，用婉转的方式表达。
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2、本段结论：三方行动
In our life，what we need most is self-insurance and a proper view of challenges before us.1 Therefore，we should bear in mind that our competitors may not be as terrible（frightening）as expected，and our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and confidence.2 Only in this way can we overcome any difficulties and challenges.3
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1、从自己角度提出意见
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2、具体行动的方法
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3、only 表示强调，以及建议的价值。
9、个人选择
All in all，I would say that living in the city is best（better），1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work（job opportunities）；2 after all，one can always spend 19 vacations in the country——and get the best of both.3
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1、选择结果
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2、选择原因
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3、总结
As for me，I have always led a regular life.1 By everyday exercises，I build up a strong body，2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life.3
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1、个人选择或实践
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2、选择带来的好的后果
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3、拓展
10、现实运用
As we all know，children are the future of our country，Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people.1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love.The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future.When faced with difficulties，they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties.When faced with fierce competition，they can employ their knowledge，skills and experience to confront with their rival.2 This is the younger generation we can expect.3
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1、价值体现：孩子关乎祖国的未来。
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2、启示：重要的原因
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3、寄予希望
2007年范文写作
首段：图画描述：
This is a series of interesting and thought-provoking pictures.A goalkeeper，who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal，sees himself as a dwarf.What‘s funnier is that the football-player，preparing to kick the ball，regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal.The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound.Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges.中间段：寓意象征+举例说明
The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her mind.What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence.（We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings.）We，undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM（the Examination for postgraduate candidates），provide a good illustration.Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well，so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination.In fact，the exam is not as difficult as they suppose，and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs.尾段：建议+展望
Accordingly，it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence.What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence.（In other words，We should be honest about the challenges we face.）only in this wa we can se a right goal.challenge it，and achieve it.Tips：
1.稳重下体的部分是精彩的语言，即文章的高分点，希望同学们学习。
2.文中有下划线的部分是范文的错误，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在写作时犯这样的错误。
3.再次强调，希望大家不要背范文，学习精彩的句式表达，背会，通过多练习掌握这些 21 句型。
小作文范文及解析
2007年Part A 真题及解析（投诉信
Directions：
Write a letter to your university library，making suggestions for improveing its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Ues “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern，I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend ma spare time.Generally speaking，the services you offer here are quite good； however，I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with，will you please prolong the time for reading？ In the daytime，most of the students are having classes，so they can‘t come to the library.Moreover，some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines，we will be very pleased.I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
2008 Part A 真题及解析（致歉信）：
Directions：
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob，your landlord there.Write him a letter to
make an apology，and
suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Ues “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.解析
Dear Bob，I am writing to express my apology to you.Several days ago，I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house.Unfortunately，after I came back from Canada，I found it in my luggage.Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you.I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible.If necessary，I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.Once again，I feel so sorry for any inconvenrence caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours，Li Ming
2006年Part A真题及解析（申请信
Directions：
You want to contribute to project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned，asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter in no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.（10points）
解析：
To Whom It May Concern，I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation.I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area.I would like to help two kinds of children：first，those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees，and second，those whose academic performance in school is excellent.I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary
financial aid required to accomplish my goal.I would also like to be kept informed as to the academic progress of each student every term.I have not doubt（There is not doubt）that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you.Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
推荐信：
Dear，写作意图：简单介绍，自己与被推荐人关系，推荐他做什么。
推荐原因：被推荐人的相关工作经历或个性特点，应当突出与写信人的相关性。
感谢与期待。
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
解析：
Dear Sir，It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you Mr.Li Lei，an outstanding accountant，for working in your firm.Mr.Li graduated from China Financial University in 1991，majoring in accountancy，After graduation，he came to our firm to be an accountant.In 1996 he obtained the certificate of a certified accountant，and in 2001 he was promoted to the one of the chief accountants of our firm because of his excellent work.In association with me，mr.li impressed me that he was a friendly and pleasant gentleman，devoted to his firm and profession.it is surely a huge loss for our firm that he has to leave us for some personal reasons.I recommend mr.li without reservation and believe you will find him a real treasure very soon„„
Yours sincerely，Li ming
2005年part a 真题及解析（辞职信）：
Directions：
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion.but now you find that the work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss，mr.wang，Telling him your decision，stating your reason（s），and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words.Wrte it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter； use “li ming”instead.You do not need to write the adress.解析：
Dear mr.wang，I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editior for you are your magazine for the reason of myself.Two months ago，I was accepted by the design and fashions，as a member of it.I was deeply impressed by the kindness，diligence of all staff members around me.But during the span of working here，I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more pesceful life，such as a teacher.And you know that I am not an outgoing girl.I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not reslly like.So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.please accept my apology.Yours sincerely，26
Li ming
2009年考研英语大纲样题应用文部分（询问信）
Directions：
You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to
the sales department of bookstore to ask for：
detailed information about the books you want，methods of payment，time and way of delivery.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end
Of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.解析：
Dear Sir/Madam，As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May，I am writing to ask if you have
Appoches to TOEFL complied by professor Wamg Sming and published by University College
Press in 2006（注意次序）
If you have the book for sale，I‘d like to mail order it.Pleasel let me know if I can pay for it.by money order or do you accept the credit card？
I‘d appreciate it if you could send me the book at your earliest convenience by EMS to the following address：
Li Ming
Room 158，student dormitory no.8
West campus，Beijing university
Beijing，100081
Sincerely yours
Li Ming
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